This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年12月11日 at 22:56:14

Artist: Tomato n' Pine
Title: Nanairo*Namida (TV size)
Source: Beelzebub
Tags: ed tui hina wada hiruda azusa
BPM: 127
Filesize: 13632kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.85 stars, 81 notes)
2. Hard (4.63 stars, 199 notes)
3. Insane (4.97 stars, 242 notes)
4. Normal (2.95 stars, 107 notes)

Download: Tomato n' Pine - Nanairo*Namida (TV size)
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4th map
[Beelzebub] ED Tomato n' Pine - Nanairo*Namida (TV size)

Easy:Done
Normal:Done
Hard:Done
Insane:Done

Update Newest: 12/11

I download this beatmap.


VERY NICE!

star~





------my pendding map------

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/34219

thanks Star~


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My Pending Map
Tomatsu Haruka & Horie Yui - Kami-sama to Issho (TV Size)
Hatsune Miku - oshiete!! mahou no Lyric
Tomato n' Pine - Nanairo*Namida (TV size)

気づくことが少なかったのでちょっとですがＭＯＤです

・Easy,NomalともにAR+1
～Easy～
・01:07:318(1)スライダーの始めと終わりが重なっているとどっちに行くのか分かりません！( ﾟ∀｡ )
　コレじゃトラップです！せめてサークル半分くらいずらしてください。
～Nomal～
・01:23:145(4)これを01:22:436のスライダーの終点に重ね、01:23:618にサークルを追加（01:23:854のスライダーの始点に重ねる）は、どうでしょう？
・最後のスピナーの開始を01:25:271に
～Haed～
・01:14:051(4)これを消して、01:14:169にNew Combo、01:14:287にサークル追加、01:14:405をサークルから01:14:641までのスライダーに変更。（モチロンNew Comboははずしてくださいね）の方が曲に合っている気がします。
　（これをやる場合は、KIAI TIMEの終わりは01:14:051がいいと思いますよ）
・最後のスピナーの開始を01;25;035に
～Insane～
・00:16:649サークルを追加してみては？（これは人によって好みがあるかも？）
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hit soundに関しては僕は苦手なので何とも・・・・(´・ω・｀)ｺﾞﾒﾝﾈ

star~~~★
と、言いたいんだけど、なぜかstarシステムが無くなっている！Σ(°Д°；)

keimntn wrote:

:) 気づくことが少なかったのでちょっとですがＭＯＤです

・Easy,NomalともにAR+1
～Easy～
・01:07:318(1)スライダーの始めと終わりが重なっているとどっちに行くのか分かりません！( ﾟ∀｡ )
　コレじゃトラップです！せめてサークル半分くらいずらしてください。
～Nomal～
・01:23:145(4)これを01:22:436のスライダーの終点に重ね、01:23:618にサークルを追加（01:23:854のスライダーの始点に重ねる）は、どうでしょう？
・最後のスピナーの開始を01:25:271に
～Haed～
・01:14:051(4)これを消して、01:14:169にNew Combo、01:14:287にサークル追加、01:14:405をサークルから01:14:641までのスライダーに変更。（モチロンNew Comboははずしてくださいね）の方が曲に合っている気がします。
　（これをやる場合は、KIAI TIMEの終わりは01:14:051がいいと思いますよ）
・最後のスピナーの開始を01;25;035に
～Insane～
・00:16:649サークルを追加してみては？（これは人によって好みがあるかも？）
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hit soundに関しては僕は苦手なので何とも・・・・(´・ω・｀)ｺﾞﾒﾝﾈ

star~~~★
と、言いたいんだけど、なぜかstarシステムが無くなっている！Σ(°Д°；)

All Done

thanks mod keimntn
一昨日くらいからStarできないですね

言い忘れ発見！
[Hard]
00:59:287(3)スライダーに変更(end00:59:523)

ごめんねー

じゃあ、ガンバ！

keimntn wrote:

言い忘れ発見！
[Hard]
00:59:287(3)スライダーに変更(end00:59:523)

ごめんねー

じゃあ、ガンバ！

Done

thanks～

[General]
i really dislike the hitsounds on this map its just dont fit at all that the first thing

[Easy]
put your grip on and move this 00:26:688 (3) - 1 grip down~
00:35:665 (3) - Distance snap to 0 and off you're grip and better now ~
00:37:555 (5) - ^
00:47:003 (1) - (nazi)
01:05:901 (1,1) - do you really like this i don't >.<
01:12:988 (5) - new combo
01:21:019 (5) - ^
01:21:492 (1) - remove the new combo

[Normal]
CZ +1 because it's Normal
00:05:901 (3,4) - remove the note 4 and make this slider end at 00:07:318
00:38:972 (1,2,3) - why whistle in all three less the whistle here
many nazi mod needs here >x<

[Hard]
00:51:492 (7) - new combo

i cant mod anything anymore fix the hitsound and then tell me to re-check if you want >~<

-Sekai- wrote:

[General]
i really dislike the hitsounds on this map its just dont fit at all that the first thing

Sorry

Use the default hitsound only?

i think its better and it's fit the map better so yes
and kudosu for my other post :3

-Sekai- wrote:

i think its better and it's fit the map better so yes
and kudosu for my other post :3

A reply is surprised to be fast

I repair it now

thank you

So,I am poor at English ><;

あなたは私の改造で、電子kudosuを与えなければならない :3

-Sekai- wrote:

[General]
i really dislike the hitsounds on this map its just dont fit at all that the first thing

[Easy]
put your grip on and move this 00:26:688 (3) - 1 grip down~
Is this all right?

SPOILER

00:35:665 (3) - Distance snap to 0 and off you're grip and better now ~
00:37:555 (5) - ^
00:34:247(2),00:35:665(3) 00:36:137(4),00:37:555(5) - slider end　gap?

SPOILER

00:47:003 (1) - (nazi)
off slider? or 　change the direction of the slider?

SPOILER

01:05:901 (1,1) - do you really like this i don't >.<

SPOILER

01:12:988 (5) - new combo
01:21:019 (5) - ^
01:21:492 (1) - remove the new combo

[Normal]
CZ +1 because it's Normal
00:05:901 (3,4) - remove the note 4 and make this slider end at 00:07:318
00:38:972 (1,2,3) - why whistle in all three less the whistle here
many nazi mod needs here >x<

[Hard]
00:51:492 (7) - new combo

i cant mod anything anymore fix the hitsound and then tell me to re-check if you want >~<

Sorry, I am poor at English

others 　during a correction

-Sekai- wrote:

[General]
i really dislike the hitsounds on this map its just dont fit at all that the first thing　　All diff change

[Easy]
put your grip on and move this 00:26:688 (3) - 1 grip down~ Done?
00:35:665 (3) - Distance snap to 0 and off you're grip and better now ~ Done?
00:37:555 (5) - ^ Done?
00:47:003 (1) - (nazi) Done?
01:05:901 (1,1) - do you really like this i don't >.< Done

SPOILER

01:12:988 (5) - new combo Done
01:21:019 (5) - ^ Done
01:21:492 (1) - remove the new combo Done

[Normal]
CZ +1 because it's Normal Done
00:05:901 (3,4) - remove the note 4 and make this slider end at 00:07:318 Done
00:38:972 (1,2,3) - why whistle in all three less the whistle here 00:39:208(2)remove the whistle
many nazi mod needs here >x< Done?

[Hard]
00:51:492 (7) - new combo Done

i cant mod anything anymore fix the hitsound and then tell me to re-check if you want >~<

thank you mod -Sekai-

So, all diff hitaound changed.
Please re-check >w<

Heya

[Easy]
00:05:901 (3,4) - Do this two better, like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/140481
00:13:460 (4,5) - And this two.
00:32:830 (1,2,4,6) - And this too.
00:43:460 (3,4) - 1/4s are theorically too difficult for an Easy, but it isn't really a matter.
00:57:870 (5) - This slider too.
01:00:704 (3) - Only two grids to the right, in the middlepoint.
01:04:484 (1) - ^, obviously, the entire slider, not the points.
... And the sliders like the first ones.

[Normal]
00:05:901 (3) - Just a bit higher ^^
00:13:460 (5,6) - ... Also, New Combo on (5)
00:45:586 (8) - ...
And the uglier sliders as well.

Even for the other two difficulties. Over this, it's a pretty well-made map

wow nice i never thought it will be that much better then before
and in Insane i love this

nice map gogo ranked and here +1 kudosu star >3<

Mok wrote:

Heya

[Easy]
00:05:901 (3,4) - Do this two better, like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/140481　　Done
00:13:460 (4,5) - And this two. Done
00:32:830 (1,2,4,6) - And this too. Done
00:43:460 (3,4) - 1/4s are theorically too difficult for an Easy, but it isn't really a matter. not change
00:57:870 (5) - This slider too. Done
01:00:704 (3) - Only two grids to the right, in the middlepoint. Done?
01:04:484 (1) - ^, obviously, the entire slider, not the points. Done?
... And the sliders like the first ones.

[Normal]
00:05:901 (3) - Just a bit higher ^^ Done
00:13:460 (5,6) - ... Also, New Combo on (5) Done
00:45:586 (8) - ...
And the uglier sliders as well. Done

Even for the other two difficulties. Over this, it's a pretty well-made map

Thanks mod Mok

-Sekai- wrote:

wow nice i never thought it will be that much better then before
and in Insane i love this

nice map gogo ranked and here +1 kudosu star >3<

Thanks -Sekai- ~ >3<

Easy:

00:17:240 - imo, kiai toggle should be here
00:25:271 (2) - new combo
00:26:688 (3) - (nazi) align with (2)?
00:32:830 (1) - (nazi) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/143491 (then, for the others, use the same slider and flip it)
00:35:665 (3) - stack under (2)
00:36:137 (4) - new combo?
00:37:555 (5) -
00:28:578 (4,1) - switch NCs
00:32:358 (4,1) - ^
00:55:507 (2) - clap on start
00:58:814 (6,1) - switch NCs
01:00:704 (3) - remove the 1st and 3rd claps
01:03:066 (1) - this slider is really off into the edge of the screen, perhaps move it further in? also, add a clap on both ends
01:04:484 (1,1,1) - remove NCs?
01:05:901 (1) - clap on both ends
01:15:822 (4) - clap on repeat
01:15:822 (4) - add clap
01:19:129 (3) - ^
01:21:019 (1,3,4,6) - add claps on (1,3), add clap on both ends of (4), and add clap on end of (6)
01:23:854 (6) - (nazi) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/143490

Normal:

00:17:712 (2,3,4) - claps on start
00:23:854 (4) - too close to (3)
00:24:799 ~ 00:39:917 - I think it would sound better if you put a clap on every 2nd and 4th white line instead of where they are now, it's your decision though
00:36:610 (6) - new combo
00:39:917 (4) - new combo
00:45:586 (8) - new combo, also (nazi) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/143494
00:50:547 (2) - sounds better if you remove the 1st clap and add a clap on the end
00:51:255 (3) - new combo
00:55:035 ~ 01:25:271 - again, I think it would sound better if you put a clap on every 2nd and 4th white line
01:02:594 (10,1) - switch NCs
01:04:956 (1,1,1) - remove NCs

Hard:

-again, in the parts where you use claps, I recommend putting claps on every 2nd and 4th white line . I think it would sound better

00:15:350 (8) - new combo
00:17:240 ~ 00:24:799 - maybe, for this part, instead of claps, you could use whistles? just place them where you think they would fit...I think it would sound better
00:19:129 (1) - remove NC
00:21:019 (5) - new combo
00:24:562 (1) - jump seems out of place for a hard
00:25:271 (4) - ^
00:44:877 (6) - new combo
00:55:035 (6) - ^
00:58:814 (7,1) - switch NCs
01:02:122 (1,2) - switch NCs
01:12:043 (1,2,3,4) - this is a bit hard to follow for a hard, perhaps move it? (Also, I recommend removing the jump here...)
01:14:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - uneven spacing, perhaps make it even?
01:18:894 (2) - too far from (1)
01:23:381 (3) - be careful, spirals are hard to make... perhaps try something like this?

280,264,83381,2,0,B|388:272|444:176|404:96|320:80|256:96|224:152|244:204|288:216|321:186,1,420

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/143531

Insane:

-same thing @ claps

00:17:122 (11,12,1) - switch NCs
00:18:184 (2) - stack under (12)
00:18:421 (3) - jump seems really out of place
00:47:003 ~ 00:51:019 - this slowdown doesn't really fit, perhaps change to 1.0x?
00:55:035 (4) - new combo
00:59:051 (8) - new combo
01:03:775 (1,1,1) - remove NCs
01:05:901 (1,2,3) - given the song these notes seem too close, perhaps space them farther out?
01:07:082 (4) - too close to (5), perhaps move it up?
01:08:027 (1) - too close to (5)
01:09:444 (1,2,3,4) - too close
01:12:043 (8) - new combo
01:21:373 (5,6,7,8) - given the pace of the song/map 1/4 jumps don't really fit, perhaps remove (5) and (7)?
01:23:381 (7) - with this slider, move the bottom-left point up 2 level 4 grids and right 1 level 4 grid: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/143533

Nice so far, a few things could probably be changed to make it better though. Good luck!

pieguy1372 wrote:

Easy:

00:17:240 - imo, kiai toggle should be here
00:25:271 (2) - new combo
00:26:688 (3) - (nazi) align with (2)?
00:32:830 (1) - (nazi) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/143491 (then, for the others, use the same slider and flip it)
00:35:665 (3) - stack under (2)
00:36:137 (4) - new combo?
00:37:555 (5) -
00:28:578 (4,1) - switch NCs
00:32:358 (4,1) - ^
00:55:507 (2) - clap on start
00:58:814 (6,1) - switch NCs
01:00:704 (3) - remove the 1st and 3rd claps
01:03:066 (1) - this slider is really off into the edge of the screen, perhaps move it further in? also, add a clap on both ends
01:04:484 (1,1,1) - remove NCs?
01:05:901 (1) - clap on both ends
01:15:822 (4) - clap on repeat
01:15:822 (4) - add clap
01:19:129 (3) - ^
01:21:019 (1,3,4,6) - add claps on (1,3), add clap on both ends of (4), and add clap on end of (6) only add clap on end of (6) no clap
01:23:854 (6) - (nazi) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/143490

Normal:

00:17:712 (2,3,4) - claps on start
00:23:854 (4) - too close to (3)
00:24:799 ~ 00:39:917 - I think it would sound better if you put a clap on every 2nd and 4th white line instead of where they are now, it's your decision though
00:36:610 (6) - new combo
00:39:917 (4) - new combo
00:45:586 (8) - new combo, also (nazi) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/143494
00:50:547 (2) - sounds better if you remove the 1st clap and add a clap on the end
00:51:255 (3) - new combo
00:55:035 ~ 01:25:271 - again, I think it would sound better if you put a clap on every 2nd and 4th white line 01:23:854 only no clap
01:02:594 (10,1) - switch NCs
01:04:956 (1,1,1) - remove NCs

Hard:

-again, in the parts where you use claps, I recommend putting claps on every 2nd and 4th white line . I think it would sound better ok

00:15:350 (8) - new combo
00:17:240 ~ 00:24:799 - maybe, for this part, instead of claps, you could use whistles? just place them where you think they would fit...I think it would sound better 　　　changed the sound that I think of
00:19:129 (1) - remove NC
00:21:019 (5) - new combo
00:24:562 (1) - jump seems out of place for a hard
00:25:271 (4) - ^
00:44:877 (6) - new combo
00:55:035 (6) - ^
00:58:814 (7,1) - switch NCs
01:02:122 (1,2) - switch NCs
01:12:043 (1,2,3,4) - this is a bit hard to follow for a hard, perhaps move it? (Also, I recommend removing the jump here...)
01:14:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - uneven spacing, perhaps make it even?
01:18:894 (2) - too far from (1)
01:23:381 (3) - be careful, spirals are hard to make... perhaps try something like this?

280,264,83381,2,0,B|388:272|444:176|404:96|320:80|256:96|224:152|244:204|288:216|321:186,1,420

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/143531

Insane:

-same thing @ claps ok

00:17:122 (11,12,1) - switch NCs Sense of incongruity sorry no change
00:18:184 (2) - stack under (12)
00:18:421 (3) - jump seems really out of place
00:47:003 ~ 00:51:019 - this slowdown doesn't really fit, perhaps change to 1.0x?　　00:47:948(1,2,3,4,5)1.0x 00:49:129(6,7,8)2.0x umm･･･　no change(what can I do? )
00:55:035 (4) - new combo
00:59:051 (8) - new combo
01:03:775 (1,1,1) - remove NCs
01:05:901 (1,2,3) - given the song these notes seem too close, perhaps space them farther out?
01:07:082 (4) - too close to (5), perhaps move it up?
01:08:027 (1) - too close to (5)
01:09:444 (1,2,3,4) - too close
01:12:043 (8) - new combo
01:21:373 (5,6,7,8) - given the pace of the song/map 1/4 jumps don't really fit, perhaps remove (5) and (7)?
01:23:381 (7) - with this slider, move the bottom-left point up 2 level 4 grids and right 1 level 4 grid: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/143533

Nice so far, a few things could probably be changed to make it better though. Good luck!

Others all fixed
thanks mod pieguy1372

ello~ :3

Easy
00:18:657 (3) - up 1 grid? x:280 y:128
00:26:688 (2) - this slider grid is x:254 y:27 ?
00:28:578 (3) - why dont start the New Combo at here??
00:39:917 (1,2) - change to a slider? 00:39:917 - to 00:40:862 - ? and make a two return
00:43:696 (3) - change to a slider? 00:43:696 - to 00:44:641 - ?
01:25:271 (1) - i suggest. try to make the sound like Gradually low~

Normal
00:16:767 - remove this KIAI time. here is no need add KIAI time~
00:27:633 (6) - make this slider second point at x:256 y:144
00:35:429 (5) - move out to other place. because this style will make NORMAL players confusion~
00:39:917 (1) - same as EASY?
00:43:696 (4) - ^
01:00:704 (5) - move out to other place. this will make NORMAL players confusion~
01:04:956 (4) - down + right 2 grid x:224 y:192
01:05:901 (5) - add a New combo
01:06:846 (6) - up+ left 2 grid x:184 y:152
01:12:043 (5) - add a New Combo
01:15:822 (4) - ^
01:25:271 (1) - same as EASY

Hard
00:19:129 (5) - add a New Combo
00:24:562 (1) - remove this New combo
00:25:271 (4) - add a New Combo
00:43:460 (4) - right 1 grid x:160y:192
00:48:421 (2) - change to a slider, to 00:48:775 - and make a repeating?
01:00:232 (6) - add a New Combo
01:09:444 (5) - ^
01:25:035 (1) - same as EASY.

Insane
00:03:539 (6) - add a New Combo
00:07:791 (5) - ^
00:11:098 (6) - ^
00:14:169 (7) - ^
00:15:114 (1) - remove this New Combo
00:15:586 (3) - add a New Combo
00:18:893 (5) - ^
00:24:326 (7) - ^
00:24:799 (11) - down + right 3 grid? x:436 y:144
01:14:641 (4) - add a New Combo
01:25:271 (1) - same as EASY?

----
Good Luck~

Hi~
First
song need 192K

Easy
00:02:122 (1) - add finish
00:04:011 (2) - add 40% whistle
00:05:901 (3) - add finish and this slider need end to 00:06:846
00:07:791 (4) - ^also add finish
00:09:681 (1) - add finish
00:11:570 (2) - ^
00:16:767 (1) - use this↓

384,288,16767,6,0,B|448:264|456:184,1,120,0|4
360,192,17712,2,0,B|384:136|360:64,1,120,0|2
280,128,18657,2,0,B|264:64|200:40,1,120,0|4
184,136,19602,2,0,B|123:94|47:122,1,120,0|2
120,200,20547,2,0,B|48:200|8:272,1,120,0|4

00:24:799 (X) - add one circle and add finish
00:25:271 (1) - 00:28:578 (3) add some whistle or clap
00:38:972 (X) - change to whistle
00:39:917 (1) - add finish
00:41:807 (2) - ^
00:43:460 (3,4) - change to slider and then 00:43:696 add finish
00:45:586 (5) - add finish
00:46:531 (X) - add finish
00:47:476 (X) - add finish
00:49:366 (X) - add finish
00:50:783 (4) - change to whistle
00:51:255 (5) - add finish
00:52:673 (X) - add one circle and add whistle
00:53:145 (7) - add finish
00:54:090 (X) - change to whistle
00:54:562 (x) - add one circle and add whistle
00:55:035 (1) - add finish
00:57:870 (5) - move to the Middle
01:02:122 (X) - change to clap
01:02:594 (6) - add one circle and add finish
01:07:318 (X) - add one circle on there and add one circle on 01:07:791
then move slider on the 01:08:263 and the end on 01:09:681 and add clap on there
01:10:153 (1) - add finish
01:12:988 (1,2,3) - don't add whistle on the slider, add whistle on one note
01:13:933 (2) - change to finish
01:15:822 (4) - change to whistle
01:16:767 (X) - Delete Clap
01:17:712 (2) - add finish
01:18:657 (X) - add whistle
01:23:854 (6) - add clap
01:24:799 (X) - add whistle

Hard
same the easy one，hitsounds

Insane
more space and hitsounds Problem
if I do this song's Insane，I hope like to do this↓ hitsound and Rhythm

Download: Tomato n' Pine - NanairoNamida (TV size) (kosiga) [xx].osu

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

ello~ :3

Easy
00:18:657 (3) - up 1 grid? x:280 y:128
00:26:688 (2) - this slider grid is x:254 y:27 ?
00:28:578 (3) - why dont start the New Combo at here??
00:39:917 (1,2) - change to a slider? 00:39:917 - to 00:40:862 - ? and make a two return no change
00:43:696 (3) - change to a slider? 00:43:696 - to 00:44:641 - ? no change
01:25:271 (1) - i suggest. try to make the sound like Gradually low~

Normal
00:16:767 - remove this KIAI time. here is no need add KIAI time~ KIAI time move to 00:17:240
00:27:633 (6) - make this slider second point at x:256 y:144
00:35:429 (5) - move out to other place. because this style will make NORMAL players confusion~
00:39:917 (1) - same as EASY? no change
00:43:696 (4) - ^ no change
01:00:704 (5) - move out to other place. this will make NORMAL players confusion~
01:04:956 (4) - down + right 2 grid x:224 y:192
01:05:901 (5) - add a New combo
01:06:846 (6) - up+ left 2 grid x:184 y:152
01:12:043 (5) - add a New Combo
01:15:822 (4) - ^
01:25:271 (1) - same as EASY

Hard
00:19:129 (5) - add a New Combo
00:24:562 (1) - remove this New combo
00:25:271 (4) - add a New Combo
00:43:460 (4) - right 1 grid x:160y:192
00:48:421 (2) - change to a slider, to 00:48:775 - and make a repeating?
01:00:232 (6) - add a New Combo
01:09:444 (5) - ^
01:25:035 (1) - same as EASY.

Insane
00:03:539 (6) - add a New Combo
00:07:791 (5) - ^
00:11:098 (6) - ^
00:14:169 (7) - ^
00:15:114 (1) - remove this New Combo
00:15:586 (3) - add a New Combo
00:18:893 (5) - ^
00:24:326 (7) - ^
00:24:799 (11) - down + right 3 grid? x:436 y:144
01:14:641 (4) - add a New Combo
01:25:271 (1) - same as EASY?

----
Good Luck~

Orhers all fixed
Thanks mod&star Bourdon

tutuhaha wrote:

Hi~
First
song need 192K Sorry not change because I don't have 192↑kbps this song

Easy
00:02:122 (1) - add finish
00:04:011 (2) - add 40% whistle
00:05:901 (3) - add finish and this slider need end to 00:06:846
00:07:791 (4) - ^also add finish
00:09:681 (1) - add finish
00:11:570 (2) - ^
00:16:767 (1) - use this↓

384,288,16767,6,0,B|448:264|456:184,1,120,0|4
360,192,17712,2,0,B|384:136|360:64,1,120,0|2
280,128,18657,2,0,B|264:64|200:40,1,120,0|4
184,136,19602,2,0,B|123:94|47:122,1,120,0|2
120,200,20547,2,0,B|48:200|8:272,1,120,0|4

00:24:799 (X) - add one circle and add finish
00:25:271 (1) - 00:28:578 (3) add some whistle or clap
00:38:972 (X) - change to whistle
00:39:917 (1) - add finish
00:41:807 (2) - ^
00:43:460 (3,4) - change to slider and then 00:43:696 add finish
00:45:586 (5) - add finish
00:46:531 (X) - add finish
00:47:476 (X) - add finish
00:49:366 (X) - add finish
00:50:783 (4) - change to whistle
00:51:255 (5) - add finish
00:52:673 (X) - add one circle and add whistle
00:53:145 (7) - add finish
00:54:090 (X) - change to whistle
00:54:562 (x) - add one circle and add whistle
00:55:035 (1) - add finish
00:57:870 (5) - move to the Middle what?
01:02:122 (X) - change to clap
01:02:594 (6) - add one circle and add finish
01:07:318 (X) - add one circle on there and add one circle on 01:07:791
then move slider on the 01:08:263 and the end on 01:09:681 and add clap on there only clap to no change
01:10:153 (1) - add finish
01:12:988 (1,2,3) - don't add whistle on the slider, add whistle on one note
01:13:933 (2) - change to finish
01:15:822 (4) - change to whistle
01:16:767 (X) - Delete Clap
01:17:712 (2) - add finish
01:18:657 (X) - add whistle
01:23:854 (6) - add clap
01:24:799 (X) - add whistle

Hard
same the easy one，hitsounds

Insane
more space and hitsounds Problem I thnk Remaping! but I think distance snap is very far
if I do this song's Insane，I hope like to do this↓ hitsound and Rhythm　

Others All fixed (Easy,Normal,Hard,Insane hitsound) But Insane map not changed
Thanks mod tutuhaha

hi-

全て提案です

[General]

●Song Setup > Audio > Music Track > Lead-in 0.5→1に変更
●音量がちょっと低めだと感じました　最低で４０%くらいで最高９０％でいいと思います（個人的に）
あ、最後のスピン終了のときは音小さくていいです（５％くらい）

[Easy]

●AR-1

[Normal]

●00:11:570 (1) - new combo remove
●00:12:751 (1) - ^
●00:41:807 (2) - 1 grid down
●00:43:460 (3,4) - ^

[Hard]

●00:25:980 (3) - ずれてます、うまく重ねてください（gird snapとdistance snapをはずしたら出ると思います）
●00:26:925 (6) - ^
●00:41:807 (3) - ずれてます
●00:42:751 (1,2,3,4) - このほうがきれいに見えます！

●00:43:696 (5) - ずれてます
●00:54:326 (3,4,5,1) - spacingがせまいです。広くした方がやリスクなると思います
●01:07:555 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Insane]

●AR+1
●00:06:137 (5) - 00:05:192 (3) - に重ねたほうがいいかも
●00:16:295 (6) - new combo add
●01:14:641 (1) - ずれてます


Good map!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-Gamu- wrote:

hi-

全て提案です

[General]

●Song Setup > Audio > Music Track > Lead-in 0.5→1に変更 Insaneだけ0.5設定なためInsaneだけ変更
●音量がちょっと低めだと感じました　最低で４０%くらいで最高９０％でいいと思います（個人的に）　このままいかせてください><
あ、最後のスピン終了のときは音小さくていいです（５％くらい）

[Easy]

●AR-1

[Normal]

●00:11:570 (1) - new combo remove
●00:12:751 (1) - ^
●00:41:807 (2) - 1 grid down
●00:43:460 (3,4) - ^

[Hard]

●00:25:980 (3) - ずれてます、うまく重ねてください（gird snapとdistance snapをはずしたら出ると思います）
●00:26:925 (6) - ^
●00:41:807 (3) - ずれてます
●00:42:751 (1,2,3,4) - このほうがきれいに見えます！

●00:43:696 (5) - ずれてます
●00:54:326 (3,4,5,1) - spacingがせまいです。広くした方がやリスクなると思います　少し広げました0.7x
●01:07:555 (1,2,3,4) - ^ 少し広げました0.7x

[Insane]

●AR+1
●00:06:137 (5) - 00:05:192 (3) - に重ねたほうがいいかも
●00:16:295 (6) - new combo add 00:16:531にNC入れました
●01:14:641 (1) - ずれてます


Good map!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Others all fixed
mod ありがとうございました！

Hi~

Easy
02:26:216 (1) - Add clap and remove the clap on (2) and add a whistle to (2)

Normal
01:00:074 (4) - Move this away from (3). It's confusing.
01:02:594 (1) - Make this look nicer

Hard
00:02:830 (2,3) - One grid up to make it balance with (1)
00:38:027 (4,5,6) - These notes are too close to each other.
01:07:555 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Insane
01:17:948 (1,2,3,4) - Make the spacing equal?
_____________________________________________-
That's all~

DragonSparta wrote:

Hi~

Easy
02:26:216 (1) - Add clap and remove the clap on (2) and add a whistle to (2)

Normal
01:00:074 (4) - Move this away from (3). It's confusing.
01:02:594 (1) - Make this look nicer

Hard
00:02:830 (2,3) - One grid up to make it balance with (1)
00:38:027 (4,5,6) - These notes are too close to each other.
01:07:555 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Insane
01:17:948 (1,2,3,4) - Make the spacing equal?　　Sorry、no change
_____________________________________________-
That's all~

Others all fixed
thanks mod Uncle Tails DragonSparta

遅くなってすみません！

m i z u k i wrote:

遅くなってすみません！>w<b

SPOILER

[General]
offset+10　今のままで＞＜
New Comboがあまりあっていない気がします　全diff見直しました。　↓いいこと聞きました
長い白線からNew Combo入れると大体あってるので少し直してみて下さい

[Easy]
NormalとSVが一緒なのはあんまり良くないと思います　snap0.8xと1.2xで変えてるのでこのまま><;
01:25:035 - ここからspin

[Normal]
01:07:791 - と 01:08:027 - に単発置いて 01:08:263 - ここからスライダー

[Hard]
AR6のほうが叩きやすいと思います
00:52:673 (1) - にゅーこんぼけして00:53:145 (2) - ここからにゅーこんぼ
01:22:909 (7) - が01:23:381 (3) - のスライダーが重なって見にくいです http://gyazo.com/711c160414b2e3d56db334509d7aa412

[Insane]
00:55:035 - ここから最後まで気合タイムあってもいいと思います　このまま><;
01:25:153 - spinはここから
01:27:161 - spinおわり
他の難易度も同じように直してみてください

Others All Fixed

m i z u k iさん　ありがとうございました～

As requested.

[General]

- Same slider velocity for Easy and Normal not recommended. Lower for Easy, shouldn't be hard to adjust it to 1.00 slider velocity.
- Disable letterbox during breaks since you have video (Song Setup > Storyboard > Misc Toggles). Not really needed through since you don't have a break.
- Keep hitsound volume lower than 80%. 90%-100% is too loud for this song.

[Easy]

00:29:523 (3,4,5) Box pattern is boring. Try this, but adjust it so it look better since this is something i made real quick http://puu.sh/5N13.
00:45:586 (1,2) http://puu.sh/5N1E better for me.

Seems fine.

[Normal]

00:26:452 (4,5) Add a point and curve the sliders.
00:29:523 (2,3) ^ same, more interesting than straight sliders.
01:01:649 (3,4,5) Repeating slider instead, since this is an Easy. Ignore, is a mistake.
01:14:877 (3) Curve it

Look solid.

[Hard]

00:25:271 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Could you make this a little more interesting?
01:05:901 (6) Move down, boring for them to be all straight.

Again solid.

[Insane]

01:09:444 (1,2,3) Would be more interesting if you space this out properly.
01:17:003 (1,2,3,4,5 1,2,3,4,5) Adjust the pattern so that it look curvy. Boring when they are put in a straight 90 degree shape.

Look fine.

Map didn't really impress me, it might be because of the song so no star. Just because i didn't star doesn't mean your map is bad. I say this is definitely rankable quality so good luck with rank.

merchat7 wrote:

As requested.

[General]

- Same slider velocity for Easy and Normal not recommended. Lower for Easy, shouldn't be hard to adjust it to 1.00 slider velocity.　this song is slowly. and Use the Easy snap 0.8x ,Normal snap 1.2x. Both are completely different
- Disable letterbox during breaks since you have video (Song Setup > Storyboard > Misc Toggles). Not really needed through since you don't have a break.
- Keep hitsound volume lower than 80%. 90%-100% is too loud for this song. Sorry,I don't think so

[Easy]

00:29:523 (3,4,5) Box pattern is boring. Try this, but adjust it so it look better since this is something i made real quick http://puu.sh/5N13. no change because it is easy
00:45:586 (1,2) http://puu.sh/5N1E better for me.

Seems fine.

[Normal]

00:26:452 (4,5) Add a point and curve the sliders.　no change
00:29:523 (2,3) ^ same, more interesting than straight sliders.
01:01:649 (3,4,5) Repeating slider instead, since this is an Easy. Ignore, is a mistake.
01:14:877 (3) Curve it

Look solid.

[Hard]

00:25:271 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Could you make this a little more interesting? ok I make it again!
01:05:901 (6) Move down, boring for them to be all straight. ok 01:05:665~01:08:027 I make it again!

Again solid.

[Insane]

01:09:444 (1,2,3) Would be more interesting if you space this out properly. 　Sorry, not change because same the 00:54:326(1,2,3)
01:17:003 (1,2,3,4,5 1,2,3,4,5) Adjust the pattern so that it look curvy. Boring when they are put in a straight 90 degree shape. ok 01:17:003~01:25:035 I make it again!!!!!!!!

Look fine.

Map didn't really impress me, it might be because of the song so no star. Just because i didn't star doesn't mean your map is bad. I say this is definitely rankable quality so good luck with rank.

Others all fixed
thanks mod merchat7
Please check it again if possible

hi~ my some tips~

[General]

Overall doing well.
If you do not use SB, please delete the OSB file.


[Insane]

00:26:688 (5) - add NC.
00:45:586 (1,2) - There is no symmetry.
00:47:712 - add note.
00:49:129 (6,7,8) - I think there are not good, there is no rhythm arrangement.
00:51:728 (3,4,5,6) - Using the same distance.
00:53:145 (1) - You can pull it more perfect.


[Hard]

AR+1
00:15:350 (1,3) - With the (1) symmetry.
00:40:153 - add note.


[Normal]

HP+1,OD+1
00:50:310 - add note.
00:52:200 (2) - The use of (1) with the same shape.


[Easy]

00:25:271 (2,3) - Here the separation distance, novice easy confusion.


nice job~

good luck~

General:
Lead in time is different in insane. 993ms. Perhaps make all audio lead in 1 second instead?
Why are kiai time inconsistent? o.o

Easy:
00:02:122 (1,2) - Perhaps add extra 10% to volume? Kinda hard to hear these sounds at all.
01:08:263 (1) - Remove finish at the end
01:10:153 (1) - Add finish here instead.
Don't really like the stacked notes but low BPM seems like it would be enough to read it.

Normal:
00:02:122 (1,2) - Same as easy.
00:08:499 (3,1,2) - These notes are really hard to hear. I suggest raising 10% also.
00:39:208 (2,3) - Move these two notes to the right to make it flow better? Something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151261
00:48:893 (4) - NC?
00:51:255 (1,2) - I see you try to make them symmetrical, but you created two different slider. Just copy one slider instead then paste it to make a second slider.
00:57:633 (6,7) - I think this might be nice http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151264
01:17:240 (3) - Clap?
01:19:129 (2) - ^

Hard:
00:55:035 (1) - Make kiai start here, not blue tick. Also maybe add finish instead?

Insane:
I really love it if you used 50% in the beginning like hard did. It sounds much better that you can hear something.
00:55:035 (1) - Start kiai here.
01:10:153 (1) - Start kiai here.

Only thing bugging me is really low hitsound in the beginning. I like hard because it was 50% in the beginning and you can hear stuff. I hope you fix that part at least :v Good luck!

Kawayi Rika wrote:

hi~ my some tips~

[General]

Overall doing well.
If you do not use SB, please delete the OSB file.


[Insane]

00:26:688 (5) - add NC.
00:45:586 (1,2) - There is no symmetry.
00:47:712 - add note. Sorry, no change

00:49:129 (6,7,8) - I think there are not good, there is no rhythm arrangement. Sorry, I don't think so
00:51:728 (3,4,5,6) - Using the same distance.
00:53:145 (1) - You can pull it more perfect.


[Hard]

AR+1 Sorry, no change
00:15:350 (1,3) - With the (1) symmetry.
00:40:153 - add note. Sorry, no change


[Normal]

HP+1,OD+1 Sorry, no change
00:50:310 - add note. Sorry, no change
00:52:200 (2) - The use of (1) with the same shape.


[Easy]

00:25:271 (2,3) - Here the separation distance, novice easy confusion. Sorry, I don't think so


nice job~

good luck~

Others all fixed
thanks mod Kawayi Rika

Raging Bull wrote:

General:
Lead in time is different in insane. 993ms. Perhaps make all audio lead in 1 second instead?
Why are kiai time inconsistent? o.o

Easy:
00:02:122 (1,2) - Perhaps add extra 10% to volume? Kinda hard to hear these sounds at all.
01:08:263 (1) - Remove finish at the end
01:10:153 (1) - Add finish here instead.
Don't really like the stacked notes but low BPM seems like it would be enough to read it.

Normal:
00:02:122 (1,2) - Same as easy.
00:08:499 (3,1,2) - These notes are really hard to hear. I suggest raising 10% also.
00:39:208 (2,3) - Move these two notes to the right to make it flow better? Something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151261
00:48:893 (4) - NC?
00:51:255 (1,2) - I see you try to make them symmetrical, but you created two different slider. Just copy one slider instead then paste it to make a second slider.
00:57:633 (6,7) - I think this might be nice http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151264
01:17:240 (3) - Clap?
01:19:129 (2) - ^

Hard:
00:55:035 (1) - Make kiai start here, not blue tick. Also maybe add finish instead?

Insane:
I really love it if you used 50% in the beginning like hard did. It sounds much better that you can hear something.
00:55:035 (1) - Start kiai here.
01:10:153 (1) - Start kiai here.

Only thing bugging me is really low hitsound in the beginning. I like hard because it was 50% in the beginning and you can hear stuff. I hope you fix that part at least :v Good luck!

ALL fixed!
thanks mod Raging Bull

hi
Random modding~

[overall]:

1. Offset 1427 Resnap All notes忘れないでください

[Insane]:

1. 00:17:003 - Kiai一瞬だけ入れるのなら00:17:240 (3) - ここの始めに入れた方がいいと思います
2. 00:39:799 ~ 00:51:019 - ホイッスル使わない方が好きです
3. 01:02:122 - Kiai end?
4. 01:20:547 (1) - Delete note?
5. 01:29:523 - Spun end?

[Hard]:

1. 00:16:767 (4) - Delete finish
2. 00:17:240 (1) - 始めにfinish

[Normal]:

1. 00:53:145 (3) - 終わりのfinishは必要ないと思います

[Easy]:

1. fine

nice map!

S o r d a wrote:

hi
Random modding~

[overall]:

1. Offset 1427 Resnap All notes忘れないでください no change><

　


[Insane]:

1. 00:17:003 - Kiai一瞬だけ入れるのなら00:17:240 (3) - ここの始めに入れた方がいいと思います
2. 00:39:799 ~ 00:51:019 - ホイッスル使わない方が好きです 少し減らしました
3. 01:02:122 - Kiai end?　他の難易度と合わせてるのでとりあえずこのままで><
4. 01:20:547 (1) - Delete note?　no change><
5. 01:29:523 - Spun end?　no change><

[Hard]:

1. 00:16:767 (4) - Delete finish
2. 00:17:240 (1) - 始めにfinish

[Normal]:

1. 00:53:145 (3) - 終わりのfinishは必要ないと思います

[Easy]:

1. fine

nice map!

Others　All fixed!
S o r d aさん　mod ありがとうございました～

Insane:

00:16:059 (5,6,1,2,3) - Make something like this and a new combo in 00:16:531 (1) -
00:17:948 (1) - ^
00:23:854 (5,6) - Make something like this
00:47:003 (3) - New combo, also why do you put a slowdown here? it's not necessary
00:51:492 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make something like this.
01:23:381 (9) - New combo
Please check the spacing
Hard:

AR +1
The kiai is not the same in the others diffs, please check this, and check your spacing (turn on the distance snap)
00:06:373 (2) - Spacing
00:08:499 (5) - ^
00:39:444 (1) - Remove new combo
00:55:035 (1,2,3,4) - Confusing


Normal:
Check the spacing
00:02:122 (1,2) - Can you put some sliders or something? this is very boring
00:17:712 (2,3,4) - Spacing
00:39:917 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:02:122 -

Fine I guess, but check the spacing please

Easy:

00:14:877 (2,3) - Spacing

Verdisphena wrote:

Insane:

00:16:059 (5,6,1,2,3) - Make something like this and a new combo in 00:16:531 (1) - what?
00:17:948 (1) - ^ what?
00:23:854 (5,6) - Make something like this

SPOILER

00:47:003 (3) - New combo, also why do you put a slowdown here? it's not necessary change slowdown start 00:49:129
00:51:492 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make something like this.

SPOILER

01:23:381 (9) - New combo
Please check the spacing
Hard:

AR +1 no change
The kiai is not the same in the others diffs, please check this, and check your spacing (turn on the distance snap)
00:06:373 (2) - Spacing　mistake is not found
00:08:499 (5) - ^　mistake is not found
00:39:444 (1) - Remove new combo
00:55:035 (1,2,3,4) - Confusing I don't think so


Normal:
Check the spacing
00:02:122 (1,2) - Can you put some sliders or something? this is very boring　　no change
00:17:712 (2,3,4) - Spacing
00:39:917 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:02:122 - no change

Fine I guess, but check the spacing please

Easy:

00:14:877 (2,3) - Spacing

Others All fixed
thanks mod Verdisphena

Hmm. No one starring D: Have one. (ノ^_^)ノ 彡☆



My message is too short.

Raging Bull wrote:

Hmm. No one starring D: Have one. (ノ^_^)ノ 彡☆

Thanks Raging Bull!!

thx reqs~

[Insane]
0.43.933(x) - add object
0.47.715(x) - ^

frost-b-spec wrote:

thx reqs~

[Insane]
0.43.933(x) - add object
0.47.715(x) - ^

2つともわざとなので申し訳ないですが変更無しで
frost-b-specさん　mod ありがとうございました～

Hi~ time to mod your map ^w^/

Easy
00:05:783 (inheritin section) vol 70 %?
00:05:901 (1,2,1,2) add clap in the end?
01:04:484 (1) del NC?
01:05:901 (4) NC?
01:08:263 (1) del NC

Normal
00:20:547 (5) NC?
00:31:413 (4) ^
00:36:137 (1) add clap?
00:36:610 (2) ^
00:36:846 (3) add clap in the end?
00:53:145 (3) add finish in the beginning?

Hard
00:26:216 (4) add clap in the beginning?
00:26:688 (5) NC?
00:27:161 (3 [if you add NC]) add clap?
00:28:578 (1) add clap in the end?
00:29:523 (3) add clap?
00:29:759 (4) NC?
00:29:996 (1) del NC?
00:52:673 (5) add clap?
01:05:665 (5) NC?
01:05:901 (2[if you add NC]) add clap?
01:06:373 (1) add clap in the beginning and the end?
01:07:791 (3) del whistle, add clap?
01:08:263 (5) add clap in the beginning?

Insane
00:43:460 (5) NC?

hope you can helped with my mod~ <:3

Yasora-chan wrote:

Hi~ time to mod your map ^w^/

Easy
00:05:783 (inheritin section) vol 70 %? vol change to 50%!
00:05:901 (1,2,1,2) add clap in the end?
01:04:484 (1) del NC?
01:05:901 (4) NC?
01:08:263 (1) del NC sorry, no change

Normal
00:20:547 (5) NC? sorry, no change
00:31:413 (4) ^
00:36:137 (1) add clap?
00:36:610 (2) ^ sorry, no change
00:36:846 (3) add clap in the end?
00:53:145 (3) add finish in the beginning?

Hard
00:26:216 (4) add clap in the beginning?
00:26:688 (5) NC?
00:27:161 (3 [if you add NC]) add clap?
00:28:578 (1) add clap in the end?
00:29:523 (3) add clap?
00:29:759 (4) NC? sorry, no change
00:29:996 (1) del NC? sorry, no change
00:52:673 (5) add clap?
01:05:665 (5) NC?
01:05:901 (2[if you add NC]) add clap?
01:06:373 (1) add clap in the beginning and the end? add clap only beginning
01:07:791 (3) del whistle, add clap?
01:08:263 (5) add clap in the beginning? sorry, no change

Insane
00:43:460 (5) NC?

hope you can helped with my mod~ <:3

Others all fixed!

thanks mod Yasora-chan

Yo~
[Easy]
• 00:21:492 (1) - I dunno about this spinner here. I say you map through it. I find it lazy and awkward to play.

• 00:23:854 (1) - You can combo break on this pretty easily. It hardly matches the song and people would hit this too early. Consider revising this. Mapping through the spinner would make it easier to fix this.

• 00:47:003 (2) - I'd remove the repeat on this slider if I were you. Only to stay consistent with what you're doing before, match the music and also, it sounds 10x better IMO. Don't forget to fix the spacing problems when you do that.

• 01:00:704 (5) - Kick slider on an easy isn't the greatest idea. Since the players on easy probably won't catch it before it's too late. Also, it's the only one you use in the map. Consider revising this.

• 01:12:988 (1,2) - Remove new combo on (1) and add the new combo to (2). It matches the vocals much better that way~

[Normal]
• 00:47:003 (3) - Same problem with easy here. I'd say you change this up to make it play better.

• 00:55:035 - The claps and whistles at the same time throughout this section sounds really bad. I would consider fixing that and only using the claps OR whistles.

• 01:12:043 (1) - Add a new combo onto this to match 00:56:925 (5). It also matches the vocals better~

[Hard]
• 00:50:783 (4) - In my opinion, the finish would sounds much better at the end of this slider. Sounds much better and fits the song too.

• 01:02:830 (1,2,3,4) - I found this pattern had a really awkward flow. Perhaps re-design the sliders? Nothing big.

• 01:19:366 (4) - This finish sounds out of place IMO. I suggest removing it or adding a whistle instead.

[Insane]
• 00:44:169 (1) - This confusing spacing would throw people off. Consider changing that up.

• 00:47:003 (1) - A finish would fit nice here at the end of the slider. Matches the song~

• 00:49:129 (7) - Eekk, this random slow down really screwed me over. It barley matches the song and comes without a warning. Fix it please~

All I could find. Insane is pretty fun~
You deserve a star IMO ♪

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Yo~
[Easy]
• 00:21:492 (1) - I dunno about this spinner here. I say you map through it. I find it lazy and awkward to play. slider change it

• 00:23:854 (1) - You can combo break on this pretty easily. It hardly matches the song and people would hit this too early. Consider revising this. Mapping through the spinner would make it easier to fix this. spinner change it

• 00:47:003 (2) - I'd remove the repeat on this slider if I were you. Only to stay consistent with what you're doing before, match the music and also, it sounds 10x better IMO. Don't forget to fix the spacing problems when you do that. yeah. but sorry,no change

• 01:00:704 (5) - Kick slider on an easy isn't the greatest idea. Since the players on easy probably won't catch it before it's too late. Also, it's the only one you use in the map. Consider revising this. ok. change it

• 01:12:988 (1,2) - Remove new combo on (1) and add the new combo to (2). It matches the vocals much better that way~

[Normal]
• 00:47:003 (3) - Same problem with easy here. I'd say you change this up to make it play better. sorry no change

• 00:55:035 - The claps and whistles at the same time throughout this section sounds really bad. I would consider fixing that and only using the claps OR whistles.

• 01:12:043 (1) - Add a new combo onto this to match 00:56:925 (5). It also matches the vocals better~

[Hard]
• 00:50:783 (4) - In my opinion, the finish would sounds much better at the end of this slider. Sounds much better and fits the song too.

• 01:02:830 (1,2,3,4) - I found this pattern had a really awkward flow. Perhaps re-design the sliders? Nothing big. remake it!

• 01:19:366 (4) - This finish sounds out of place IMO. I suggest removing it or adding a whistle instead.

[Insane]
• 00:44:169 (1) - This confusing spacing would throw people off. Consider changing that up.

• 00:47:003 (1) - A finish would fit nice here at the end of the slider. Matches the song~

• 00:49:129 (7) - Eekk, this random slow down really screwed me over. It barley matches the song and comes without a warning. Fix it please~ ok change it!

All I could find. Insane is pretty fun~
You deserve a star IMO ♪

Others all fixed
Thanks mod & star Kiddo-Kun

hi there~
your map has no problem at all, so only suggestion (mostly)
insane
00:05:429 (1) - make a slow one? if so , dont need repeat
00:06:137 (2) - follow the lyrics? shorten it and end at 00:06:373, then add a note next beat
00:08:027 - add notes, one here, one next tick and delay the slider to 00:08:263, dont need to cancer the repeat, but still add a note at 00:08:972 (sorry puush isnt working now...) http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/2739/osu1q.jpg
00:20:429 - add note?
00:47:712 (2) - add note ><
01:16:295 (6) - add clap

hard
00:50:310 (3) - make it like 00:48:421 (2), more consistent rhythm, add note at next beat also
00:53:145 (1) - slow one?
01:17:003 (3) - dont make this first. make a slider with one repeat at "daijoubu" , next beat a note, then again with the repeated slider http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/2853/osu1r.jpg i randomly place the slider, dont need to follow it.

normal:
00:21:964 (2) - dont need finish XXX
00:30:468 (3) - place at 00:30:232 ? and add a repeat?
00:53:145 (3) - slow one XD?
01:01:177 (2,5) - add claps

nice map! star~~~

L_P wrote:

hi there~
your map has no problem at all, so only suggestion (mostly)
insane
00:05:429 (1) - make a slow one? if so , dont need repeat no slow XD but remake this
00:06:137 (2) - follow the lyrics? shorten it and end at 00:06:373, then add a note next beat sorry, no change
00:08:027 - add notes, one here, one next tick and delay the slider to 00:08:263, dont need to cancer the repeat, but still add a note at 00:08:972 (sorry puush isnt working now...) http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/2739/osu1q.jpg Thank you for thinking but no change
00:20:429 - add note? sorry, no change
00:47:712 (2) - add note >< sorry >< no change
01:16:295 (6) - add clap

hard
00:50:310 (3) - make it like 00:48:421 (2), more consistent rhythm, add note at next beat also sorry, no change
00:53:145 (1) - slow one? ok
01:17:003 (3) - dont make this first. make a slider with one repeat at "daijoubu" , next beat a note, then again with the repeated slider http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/2853/osu1r.jpg i randomly place the slider, dont need to follow it. nice idea. change it

normal:
00:21:964 (2) - dont need finish XXX
00:30:468 (3) - place at 00:30:232 ? and add a repeat? nice idea!! but little difficult for beginner
00:53:145 (3) - slow one XD? I do not use BPM change at Normal,Easy diff　XD
01:01:177 (2,5) - add claps

nice map! star~~~

Others All fixed!!
Thanks mod & Star☆ L_P

Hi.






And that's it. Good luck!

Roddie wrote:

Hi.

General

1. Try an offset of 2,146. This could be the right timing. If you do put in the new timing, don't forget to resnap all the notes and the timing points (green lines).　　sorry,no change

Easy

1. 00:48:893-Perhaps put a new combo here??
2. 01:07:791 (3)-I think you forgot to put a clap here. :p

Normal

1. 00:57:870 (3)-On the end of that slider, a clap sounds better than a whistle.
2. 00:58:814 (1)-It sounds like there should be a finish here.
3. 01:07:791 (4)-Forgot to add a clap?　　On purpose

Hard

1. 00:37:909 (x)-Add a note here so it can setup to be a 1/4 triplet? :3 nice idea
2. 01:07:791 (3)-A clap sounds better than a whistle.
3. 01:21:019 (3)-Add a clap? sorry,no clap

Insane

1. 00:34:720 (8)-Forgot to add a clap?
2. 00:49:602-Maybe put a new combo here?

And that's it. Good luck!

Others all fixed

Thanks Roddie