This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年12月11日 at 22:56:14

Artist: Tomato n' Pine
Title: Nanairo*Namida (TV size)
Source: Beelzebub
Tags: ed tui hina wada hiruda azusa
BPM: 127
Filesize: 13632kb
Play Time: 01:25
Difficulties Available:

1. Easy (1.85 stars, 81 notes)
2. Hard (4.63 stars, 199 notes)
3. Insane (4.97 stars, 242 notes)
4. Normal (2.95 stars, 107 notes)

Download: Tomato n' Pine - Nanairo*Namida (TV size)
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4th map
[Beelzebub] ED Tomato n' Pine - Nanairo*Namida (TV size)

Easy:Done
Normal:Done
Hard:Done
Insane:Done

Update Newest: 12/11

I download this beatmap.


VERY NICE!

star~





------my pendding map------

http://osu.ppy.sh/s/34219

thanks Star~


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My Pending Map
Tomatsu Haruka & Horie Yui - Kami-sama to Issho (TV Size)
Hatsune Miku - oshiete!! mahou no Lyric
Tomato n' Pine - Nanairo*Namida (TV size)

気づくことが少なかったのでちょっとですがＭＯＤです

・Easy,NomalともにAR+1
～Easy～
・01:07:318(1)スライダーの始めと終わりが重なっているとどっちに行くのか分かりません！( ﾟ∀｡ )
　コレじゃトラップです！せめてサークル半分くらいずらしてください。
～Nomal～
・01:23:145(4)これを01:22:436のスライダーの終点に重ね、01:23:618にサークルを追加（01:23:854のスライダーの始点に重ねる）は、どうでしょう？
・最後のスピナーの開始を01:25:271に
～Haed～
・01:14:051(4)これを消して、01:14:169にNew Combo、01:14:287にサークル追加、01:14:405をサークルから01:14:641までのスライダーに変更。（モチロンNew Comboははずしてくださいね）の方が曲に合っている気がします。
　（これをやる場合は、KIAI TIMEの終わりは01:14:051がいいと思いますよ）
・最後のスピナーの開始を01;25;035に
～Insane～
・00:16:649サークルを追加してみては？（これは人によって好みがあるかも？）
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hit soundに関しては僕は苦手なので何とも・・・・(´・ω・｀)ｺﾞﾒﾝﾈ

star~~~★
と、言いたいんだけど、なぜかstarシステムが無くなっている！Σ(°Д°；)

keimntn wrote:

:) 気づくことが少なかったのでちょっとですがＭＯＤです

・Easy,NomalともにAR+1
～Easy～
・01:07:318(1)スライダーの始めと終わりが重なっているとどっちに行くのか分かりません！( ﾟ∀｡ )
　コレじゃトラップです！せめてサークル半分くらいずらしてください。
～Nomal～
・01:23:145(4)これを01:22:436のスライダーの終点に重ね、01:23:618にサークルを追加（01:23:854のスライダーの始点に重ねる）は、どうでしょう？
・最後のスピナーの開始を01:25:271に
～Haed～
・01:14:051(4)これを消して、01:14:169にNew Combo、01:14:287にサークル追加、01:14:405をサークルから01:14:641までのスライダーに変更。（モチロンNew Comboははずしてくださいね）の方が曲に合っている気がします。
　（これをやる場合は、KIAI TIMEの終わりは01:14:051がいいと思いますよ）
・最後のスピナーの開始を01;25;035に
～Insane～
・00:16:649サークルを追加してみては？（これは人によって好みがあるかも？）
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hit soundに関しては僕は苦手なので何とも・・・・(´・ω・｀)ｺﾞﾒﾝﾈ

star~~~★
と、言いたいんだけど、なぜかstarシステムが無くなっている！Σ(°Д°；)

All Done

thanks mod keimntn
一昨日くらいからStarできないですね

言い忘れ発見！
[Hard]
00:59:287(3)スライダーに変更(end00:59:523)

ごめんねー

じゃあ、ガンバ！

keimntn wrote:

言い忘れ発見！
[Hard]
00:59:287(3)スライダーに変更(end00:59:523)

ごめんねー

じゃあ、ガンバ！

Done

thanks～

[General]
i really dislike the hitsounds on this map its just dont fit at all that the first thing

[Easy]
put your grip on and move this 00:26:688 (3) - 1 grip down~
00:35:665 (3) - Distance snap to 0 and off you're grip and better now ~
00:37:555 (5) - ^
00:47:003 (1) - (nazi)
01:05:901 (1,1) - do you really like this i don't >.<
01:12:988 (5) - new combo
01:21:019 (5) - ^
01:21:492 (1) - remove the new combo

[Normal]
CZ +1 because it's Normal
00:05:901 (3,4) - remove the note 4 and make this slider end at 00:07:318
00:38:972 (1,2,3) - why whistle in all three less the whistle here
many nazi mod needs here >x<

[Hard]
00:51:492 (7) - new combo

i cant mod anything anymore fix the hitsound and then tell me to re-check if you want >~<

-Sekai- wrote:

[General]
i really dislike the hitsounds on this map its just dont fit at all that the first thing

Sorry

Use the default hitsound only?

i think its better and it's fit the map better so yes
and kudosu for my other post :3

-Sekai- wrote:

i think its better and it's fit the map better so yes
and kudosu for my other post :3

A reply is surprised to be fast

I repair it now

thank you

So,I am poor at English ><;

あなたは私の改造で、電子kudosuを与えなければならない :3

-Sekai- wrote:

[General]
i really dislike the hitsounds on this map its just dont fit at all that the first thing

[Easy]
put your grip on and move this 00:26:688 (3) - 1 grip down~
Is this all right?

SPOILER

00:35:665 (3) - Distance snap to 0 and off you're grip and better now ~
00:37:555 (5) - ^
00:34:247(2),00:35:665(3) 00:36:137(4),00:37:555(5) - slider end　gap?

SPOILER

00:47:003 (1) - (nazi)
off slider? or 　change the direction of the slider?

SPOILER

01:05:901 (1,1) - do you really like this i don't >.<

SPOILER

01:12:988 (5) - new combo
01:21:019 (5) - ^
01:21:492 (1) - remove the new combo

[Normal]
CZ +1 because it's Normal
00:05:901 (3,4) - remove the note 4 and make this slider end at 00:07:318
00:38:972 (1,2,3) - why whistle in all three less the whistle here
many nazi mod needs here >x<

[Hard]
00:51:492 (7) - new combo

i cant mod anything anymore fix the hitsound and then tell me to re-check if you want >~<

Sorry, I am poor at English

others 　during a correction

-Sekai- wrote:

[General]
i really dislike the hitsounds on this map its just dont fit at all that the first thing　　All diff change

[Easy]
put your grip on and move this 00:26:688 (3) - 1 grip down~ Done?
00:35:665 (3) - Distance snap to 0 and off you're grip and better now ~ Done?
00:37:555 (5) - ^ Done?
00:47:003 (1) - (nazi) Done?
01:05:901 (1,1) - do you really like this i don't >.< Done

SPOILER

01:12:988 (5) - new combo Done
01:21:019 (5) - ^ Done
01:21:492 (1) - remove the new combo Done

[Normal]
CZ +1 because it's Normal Done
00:05:901 (3,4) - remove the note 4 and make this slider end at 00:07:318 Done
00:38:972 (1,2,3) - why whistle in all three less the whistle here 00:39:208(2)remove the whistle
many nazi mod needs here >x< Done?

[Hard]
00:51:492 (7) - new combo Done

i cant mod anything anymore fix the hitsound and then tell me to re-check if you want >~<

thank you mod -Sekai-

So, all diff hitaound changed.
Please re-check >w<

Heya

[Easy]
00:05:901 (3,4) - Do this two better, like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/140481
00:13:460 (4,5) - And this two.
00:32:830 (1,2,4,6) - And this too.
00:43:460 (3,4) - 1/4s are theorically too difficult for an Easy, but it isn't really a matter.
00:57:870 (5) - This slider too.
01:00:704 (3) - Only two grids to the right, in the middlepoint.
01:04:484 (1) - ^, obviously, the entire slider, not the points.
... And the sliders like the first ones.

[Normal]
00:05:901 (3) - Just a bit higher ^^
00:13:460 (5,6) - ... Also, New Combo on (5)
00:45:586 (8) - ...
And the uglier sliders as well.

Even for the other two difficulties. Over this, it's a pretty well-made map

wow nice i never thought it will be that much better then before
and in Insane i love this

nice map gogo ranked and here +1 kudosu star >3<

Mok wrote:

Heya

[Easy]
00:05:901 (3,4) - Do this two better, like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/140481　　Done
00:13:460 (4,5) - And this two. Done
00:32:830 (1,2,4,6) - And this too. Done
00:43:460 (3,4) - 1/4s are theorically too difficult for an Easy, but it isn't really a matter. not change
00:57:870 (5) - This slider too. Done
01:00:704 (3) - Only two grids to the right, in the middlepoint. Done?
01:04:484 (1) - ^, obviously, the entire slider, not the points. Done?
... And the sliders like the first ones.

[Normal]
00:05:901 (3) - Just a bit higher ^^ Done
00:13:460 (5,6) - ... Also, New Combo on (5) Done
00:45:586 (8) - ...
And the uglier sliders as well. Done

Even for the other two difficulties. Over this, it's a pretty well-made map

Thanks mod Mok

-Sekai- wrote:

wow nice i never thought it will be that much better then before
and in Insane i love this

nice map gogo ranked and here +1 kudosu star >3<

Thanks -Sekai- ~ >3<

Easy:

00:17:240 - imo, kiai toggle should be here
00:25:271 (2) - new combo
00:26:688 (3) - (nazi) align with (2)?
00:32:830 (1) - (nazi) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/143491 (then, for the others, use the same slider and flip it)
00:35:665 (3) - stack under (2)
00:36:137 (4) - new combo?
00:37:555 (5) -
00:28:578 (4,1) - switch NCs
00:32:358 (4,1) - ^
00:55:507 (2) - clap on start
00:58:814 (6,1) - switch NCs
01:00:704 (3) - remove the 1st and 3rd claps
01:03:066 (1) - this slider is really off into the edge of the screen, perhaps move it further in? also, add a clap on both ends
01:04:484 (1,1,1) - remove NCs?
01:05:901 (1) - clap on both ends
01:15:822 (4) - clap on repeat
01:15:822 (4) - add clap
01:19:129 (3) - ^
01:21:019 (1,3,4,6) - add claps on (1,3), add clap on both ends of (4), and add clap on end of (6)
01:23:854 (6) - (nazi) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/143490

Normal:

00:17:712 (2,3,4) - claps on start
00:23:854 (4) - too close to (3)
00:24:799 ~ 00:39:917 - I think it would sound better if you put a clap on every 2nd and 4th white line instead of where they are now, it's your decision though
00:36:610 (6) - new combo
00:39:917 (4) - new combo
00:45:586 (8) - new combo, also (nazi) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/143494
00:50:547 (2) - sounds better if you remove the 1st clap and add a clap on the end
00:51:255 (3) - new combo
00:55:035 ~ 01:25:271 - again, I think it would sound better if you put a clap on every 2nd and 4th white line
01:02:594 (10,1) - switch NCs
01:04:956 (1,1,1) - remove NCs

Hard:

-again, in the parts where you use claps, I recommend putting claps on every 2nd and 4th white line . I think it would sound better

00:15:350 (8) - new combo
00:17:240 ~ 00:24:799 - maybe, for this part, instead of claps, you could use whistles? just place them where you think they would fit...I think it would sound better
00:19:129 (1) - remove NC
00:21:019 (5) - new combo
00:24:562 (1) - jump seems out of place for a hard
00:25:271 (4) - ^
00:44:877 (6) - new combo
00:55:035 (6) - ^
00:58:814 (7,1) - switch NCs
01:02:122 (1,2) - switch NCs
01:12:043 (1,2,3,4) - this is a bit hard to follow for a hard, perhaps move it? (Also, I recommend removing the jump here...)
01:14:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - uneven spacing, perhaps make it even?
01:18:894 (2) - too far from (1)
01:23:381 (3) - be careful, spirals are hard to make... perhaps try something like this?

280,264,83381,2,0,B|388:272|444:176|404:96|320:80|256:96|224:152|244:204|288:216|321:186,1,420

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/143531

Insane:

-same thing @ claps

00:17:122 (11,12,1) - switch NCs
00:18:184 (2) - stack under (12)
00:18:421 (3) - jump seems really out of place
00:47:003 ~ 00:51:019 - this slowdown doesn't really fit, perhaps change to 1.0x?
00:55:035 (4) - new combo
00:59:051 (8) - new combo
01:03:775 (1,1,1) - remove NCs
01:05:901 (1,2,3) - given the song these notes seem too close, perhaps space them farther out?
01:07:082 (4) - too close to (5), perhaps move it up?
01:08:027 (1) - too close to (5)
01:09:444 (1,2,3,4) - too close
01:12:043 (8) - new combo
01:21:373 (5,6,7,8) - given the pace of the song/map 1/4 jumps don't really fit, perhaps remove (5) and (7)?
01:23:381 (7) - with this slider, move the bottom-left point up 2 level 4 grids and right 1 level 4 grid: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/143533

Nice so far, a few things could probably be changed to make it better though. Good luck!

pieguy1372 wrote:

Easy:

00:17:240 - imo, kiai toggle should be here
00:25:271 (2) - new combo
00:26:688 (3) - (nazi) align with (2)?
00:32:830 (1) - (nazi) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/143491 (then, for the others, use the same slider and flip it)
00:35:665 (3) - stack under (2)
00:36:137 (4) - new combo?
00:37:555 (5) -
00:28:578 (4,1) - switch NCs
00:32:358 (4,1) - ^
00:55:507 (2) - clap on start
00:58:814 (6,1) - switch NCs
01:00:704 (3) - remove the 1st and 3rd claps
01:03:066 (1) - this slider is really off into the edge of the screen, perhaps move it further in? also, add a clap on both ends
01:04:484 (1,1,1) - remove NCs?
01:05:901 (1) - clap on both ends
01:15:822 (4) - clap on repeat
01:15:822 (4) - add clap
01:19:129 (3) - ^
01:21:019 (1,3,4,6) - add claps on (1,3), add clap on both ends of (4), and add clap on end of (6) only add clap on end of (6) no clap
01:23:854 (6) - (nazi) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/143490

Normal:

00:17:712 (2,3,4) - claps on start
00:23:854 (4) - too close to (3)
00:24:799 ~ 00:39:917 - I think it would sound better if you put a clap on every 2nd and 4th white line instead of where they are now, it's your decision though
00:36:610 (6) - new combo
00:39:917 (4) - new combo
00:45:586 (8) - new combo, also (nazi) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/143494
00:50:547 (2) - sounds better if you remove the 1st clap and add a clap on the end
00:51:255 (3) - new combo
00:55:035 ~ 01:25:271 - again, I think it would sound better if you put a clap on every 2nd and 4th white line 01:23:854 only no clap
01:02:594 (10,1) - switch NCs
01:04:956 (1,1,1) - remove NCs

Hard:

-again, in the parts where you use claps, I recommend putting claps on every 2nd and 4th white line . I think it would sound better ok

00:15:350 (8) - new combo
00:17:240 ~ 00:24:799 - maybe, for this part, instead of claps, you could use whistles? just place them where you think they would fit...I think it would sound better 　　　changed the sound that I think of
00:19:129 (1) - remove NC
00:21:019 (5) - new combo
00:24:562 (1) - jump seems out of place for a hard
00:25:271 (4) - ^
00:44:877 (6) - new combo
00:55:035 (6) - ^
00:58:814 (7,1) - switch NCs
01:02:122 (1,2) - switch NCs
01:12:043 (1,2,3,4) - this is a bit hard to follow for a hard, perhaps move it? (Also, I recommend removing the jump here...)
01:14:169 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - uneven spacing, perhaps make it even?
01:18:894 (2) - too far from (1)
01:23:381 (3) - be careful, spirals are hard to make... perhaps try something like this?

280,264,83381,2,0,B|388:272|444:176|404:96|320:80|256:96|224:152|244:204|288:216|321:186,1,420

http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/143531

Insane:

-same thing @ claps ok

00:17:122 (11,12,1) - switch NCs Sense of incongruity sorry no change
00:18:184 (2) - stack under (12)
00:18:421 (3) - jump seems really out of place
00:47:003 ~ 00:51:019 - this slowdown doesn't really fit, perhaps change to 1.0x?　　00:47:948(1,2,3,4,5)1.0x 00:49:129(6,7,8)2.0x umm･･･　no change(what can I do? )
00:55:035 (4) - new combo
00:59:051 (8) - new combo
01:03:775 (1,1,1) - remove NCs
01:05:901 (1,2,3) - given the song these notes seem too close, perhaps space them farther out?
01:07:082 (4) - too close to (5), perhaps move it up?
01:08:027 (1) - too close to (5)
01:09:444 (1,2,3,4) - too close
01:12:043 (8) - new combo
01:21:373 (5,6,7,8) - given the pace of the song/map 1/4 jumps don't really fit, perhaps remove (5) and (7)?
01:23:381 (7) - with this slider, move the bottom-left point up 2 level 4 grids and right 1 level 4 grid: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/143533

Nice so far, a few things could probably be changed to make it better though. Good luck!

Others all fixed
thanks mod pieguy1372

ello~ :3

Easy
00:18:657 (3) - up 1 grid? x:280 y:128
00:26:688 (2) - this slider grid is x:254 y:27 ?
00:28:578 (3) - why dont start the New Combo at here??
00:39:917 (1,2) - change to a slider? 00:39:917 - to 00:40:862 - ? and make a two return
00:43:696 (3) - change to a slider? 00:43:696 - to 00:44:641 - ?
01:25:271 (1) - i suggest. try to make the sound like Gradually low~

Normal
00:16:767 - remove this KIAI time. here is no need add KIAI time~
00:27:633 (6) - make this slider second point at x:256 y:144
00:35:429 (5) - move out to other place. because this style will make NORMAL players confusion~
00:39:917 (1) - same as EASY?
00:43:696 (4) - ^
01:00:704 (5) - move out to other place. this will make NORMAL players confusion~
01:04:956 (4) - down + right 2 grid x:224 y:192
01:05:901 (5) - add a New combo
01:06:846 (6) - up+ left 2 grid x:184 y:152
01:12:043 (5) - add a New Combo
01:15:822 (4) - ^
01:25:271 (1) - same as EASY

Hard
00:19:129 (5) - add a New Combo
00:24:562 (1) - remove this New combo
00:25:271 (4) - add a New Combo
00:43:460 (4) - right 1 grid x:160y:192
00:48:421 (2) - change to a slider, to 00:48:775 - and make a repeating?
01:00:232 (6) - add a New Combo
01:09:444 (5) - ^
01:25:035 (1) - same as EASY.

Insane
00:03:539 (6) - add a New Combo
00:07:791 (5) - ^
00:11:098 (6) - ^
00:14:169 (7) - ^
00:15:114 (1) - remove this New Combo
00:15:586 (3) - add a New Combo
00:18:893 (5) - ^
00:24:326 (7) - ^
00:24:799 (11) - down + right 3 grid? x:436 y:144
01:14:641 (4) - add a New Combo
01:25:271 (1) - same as EASY?

----
Good Luck~

Hi~
First
song need 192K

Easy
00:02:122 (1) - add finish
00:04:011 (2) - add 40% whistle
00:05:901 (3) - add finish and this slider need end to 00:06:846
00:07:791 (4) - ^also add finish
00:09:681 (1) - add finish
00:11:570 (2) - ^
00:16:767 (1) - use this↓

384,288,16767,6,0,B|448:264|456:184,1,120,0|4
360,192,17712,2,0,B|384:136|360:64,1,120,0|2
280,128,18657,2,0,B|264:64|200:40,1,120,0|4
184,136,19602,2,0,B|123:94|47:122,1,120,0|2
120,200,20547,2,0,B|48:200|8:272,1,120,0|4

00:24:799 (X) - add one circle and add finish
00:25:271 (1) - 00:28:578 (3) add some whistle or clap
00:38:972 (X) - change to whistle
00:39:917 (1) - add finish
00:41:807 (2) - ^
00:43:460 (3,4) - change to slider and then 00:43:696 add finish
00:45:586 (5) - add finish
00:46:531 (X) - add finish
00:47:476 (X) - add finish
00:49:366 (X) - add finish
00:50:783 (4) - change to whistle
00:51:255 (5) - add finish
00:52:673 (X) - add one circle and add whistle
00:53:145 (7) - add finish
00:54:090 (X) - change to whistle
00:54:562 (x) - add one circle and add whistle
00:55:035 (1) - add finish
00:57:870 (5) - move to the Middle
01:02:122 (X) - change to clap
01:02:594 (6) - add one circle and add finish
01:07:318 (X) - add one circle on there and add one circle on 01:07:791
then move slider on the 01:08:263 and the end on 01:09:681 and add clap on there
01:10:153 (1) - add finish
01:12:988 (1,2,3) - don't add whistle on the slider, add whistle on one note
01:13:933 (2) - change to finish
01:15:822 (4) - change to whistle
01:16:767 (X) - Delete Clap
01:17:712 (2) - add finish
01:18:657 (X) - add whistle
01:23:854 (6) - add clap
01:24:799 (X) - add whistle

Hard
same the easy one，hitsounds

Insane
more space and hitsounds Problem
if I do this song's Insane，I hope like to do this↓ hitsound and Rhythm

Download: Tomato n' Pine - NanairoNamida (TV size) (kosiga) [xx].osu

The 08 team_Bourdon wrote:

ello~ :3

Easy
00:18:657 (3) - up 1 grid? x:280 y:128
00:26:688 (2) - this slider grid is x:254 y:27 ?
00:28:578 (3) - why dont start the New Combo at here??
00:39:917 (1,2) - change to a slider? 00:39:917 - to 00:40:862 - ? and make a two return no change
00:43:696 (3) - change to a slider? 00:43:696 - to 00:44:641 - ? no change
01:25:271 (1) - i suggest. try to make the sound like Gradually low~

Normal
00:16:767 - remove this KIAI time. here is no need add KIAI time~ KIAI time move to 00:17:240
00:27:633 (6) - make this slider second point at x:256 y:144
00:35:429 (5) - move out to other place. because this style will make NORMAL players confusion~
00:39:917 (1) - same as EASY? no change
00:43:696 (4) - ^ no change
01:00:704 (5) - move out to other place. this will make NORMAL players confusion~
01:04:956 (4) - down + right 2 grid x:224 y:192
01:05:901 (5) - add a New combo
01:06:846 (6) - up+ left 2 grid x:184 y:152
01:12:043 (5) - add a New Combo
01:15:822 (4) - ^
01:25:271 (1) - same as EASY

Hard
00:19:129 (5) - add a New Combo
00:24:562 (1) - remove this New combo
00:25:271 (4) - add a New Combo
00:43:460 (4) - right 1 grid x:160y:192
00:48:421 (2) - change to a slider, to 00:48:775 - and make a repeating?
01:00:232 (6) - add a New Combo
01:09:444 (5) - ^
01:25:035 (1) - same as EASY.

Insane
00:03:539 (6) - add a New Combo
00:07:791 (5) - ^
00:11:098 (6) - ^
00:14:169 (7) - ^
00:15:114 (1) - remove this New Combo
00:15:586 (3) - add a New Combo
00:18:893 (5) - ^
00:24:326 (7) - ^
00:24:799 (11) - down + right 3 grid? x:436 y:144
01:14:641 (4) - add a New Combo
01:25:271 (1) - same as EASY?

----
Good Luck~

Orhers all fixed
Thanks mod&star Bourdon

tutuhaha wrote:

Hi~
First
song need 192K Sorry not change because I don't have 192↑kbps this song

Easy
00:02:122 (1) - add finish
00:04:011 (2) - add 40% whistle
00:05:901 (3) - add finish and this slider need end to 00:06:846
00:07:791 (4) - ^also add finish
00:09:681 (1) - add finish
00:11:570 (2) - ^
00:16:767 (1) - use this↓

384,288,16767,6,0,B|448:264|456:184,1,120,0|4
360,192,17712,2,0,B|384:136|360:64,1,120,0|2
280,128,18657,2,0,B|264:64|200:40,1,120,0|4
184,136,19602,2,0,B|123:94|47:122,1,120,0|2
120,200,20547,2,0,B|48:200|8:272,1,120,0|4

00:24:799 (X) - add one circle and add finish
00:25:271 (1) - 00:28:578 (3) add some whistle or clap
00:38:972 (X) - change to whistle
00:39:917 (1) - add finish
00:41:807 (2) - ^
00:43:460 (3,4) - change to slider and then 00:43:696 add finish
00:45:586 (5) - add finish
00:46:531 (X) - add finish
00:47:476 (X) - add finish
00:49:366 (X) - add finish
00:50:783 (4) - change to whistle
00:51:255 (5) - add finish
00:52:673 (X) - add one circle and add whistle
00:53:145 (7) - add finish
00:54:090 (X) - change to whistle
00:54:562 (x) - add one circle and add whistle
00:55:035 (1) - add finish
00:57:870 (5) - move to the Middle what?
01:02:122 (X) - change to clap
01:02:594 (6) - add one circle and add finish
01:07:318 (X) - add one circle on there and add one circle on 01:07:791
then move slider on the 01:08:263 and the end on 01:09:681 and add clap on there only clap to no change
01:10:153 (1) - add finish
01:12:988 (1,2,3) - don't add whistle on the slider, add whistle on one note
01:13:933 (2) - change to finish
01:15:822 (4) - change to whistle
01:16:767 (X) - Delete Clap
01:17:712 (2) - add finish
01:18:657 (X) - add whistle
01:23:854 (6) - add clap
01:24:799 (X) - add whistle

Hard
same the easy one，hitsounds

Insane
more space and hitsounds Problem I thnk Remaping! but I think distance snap is very far
if I do this song's Insane，I hope like to do this↓ hitsound and Rhythm　

Others All fixed (Easy,Normal,Hard,Insane hitsound) But Insane map not changed
Thanks mod tutuhaha

hi-

全て提案です

[General]

●Song Setup > Audio > Music Track > Lead-in 0.5→1に変更
●音量がちょっと低めだと感じました　最低で４０%くらいで最高９０％でいいと思います（個人的に）
あ、最後のスピン終了のときは音小さくていいです（５％くらい）

[Easy]

●AR-1

[Normal]

●00:11:570 (1) - new combo remove
●00:12:751 (1) - ^
●00:41:807 (2) - 1 grid down
●00:43:460 (3,4) - ^

[Hard]

●00:25:980 (3) - ずれてます、うまく重ねてください（gird snapとdistance snapをはずしたら出ると思います）
●00:26:925 (6) - ^
●00:41:807 (3) - ずれてます
●00:42:751 (1,2,3,4) - このほうがきれいに見えます！

●00:43:696 (5) - ずれてます
●00:54:326 (3,4,5,1) - spacingがせまいです。広くした方がやリスクなると思います
●01:07:555 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Insane]

●AR+1
●00:06:137 (5) - 00:05:192 (3) - に重ねたほうがいいかも
●00:16:295 (6) - new combo add
●01:14:641 (1) - ずれてます


Good map!!!!!!!!!!!!!

-Gamu- wrote:

hi-

全て提案です

[General]

●Song Setup > Audio > Music Track > Lead-in 0.5→1に変更 Insaneだけ0.5設定なためInsaneだけ変更
●音量がちょっと低めだと感じました　最低で４０%くらいで最高９０％でいいと思います（個人的に）　このままいかせてください><
あ、最後のスピン終了のときは音小さくていいです（５％くらい）

[Easy]

●AR-1

[Normal]

●00:11:570 (1) - new combo remove
●00:12:751 (1) - ^
●00:41:807 (2) - 1 grid down
●00:43:460 (3,4) - ^

[Hard]

●00:25:980 (3) - ずれてます、うまく重ねてください（gird snapとdistance snapをはずしたら出ると思います）
●00:26:925 (6) - ^
●00:41:807 (3) - ずれてます
●00:42:751 (1,2,3,4) - このほうがきれいに見えます！

●00:43:696 (5) - ずれてます
●00:54:326 (3,4,5,1) - spacingがせまいです。広くした方がやリスクなると思います　少し広げました0.7x
●01:07:555 (1,2,3,4) - ^ 少し広げました0.7x

[Insane]

●AR+1
●00:06:137 (5) - 00:05:192 (3) - に重ねたほうがいいかも
●00:16:295 (6) - new combo add 00:16:531にNC入れました
●01:14:641 (1) - ずれてます


Good map!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Others all fixed
mod ありがとうございました！

Hi~

Easy
02:26:216 (1) - Add clap and remove the clap on (2) and add a whistle to (2)

Normal
01:00:074 (4) - Move this away from (3). It's confusing.
01:02:594 (1) - Make this look nicer

Hard
00:02:830 (2,3) - One grid up to make it balance with (1)
00:38:027 (4,5,6) - These notes are too close to each other.
01:07:555 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Insane
01:17:948 (1,2,3,4) - Make the spacing equal?
_____________________________________________-
That's all~

DragonSparta wrote:

Hi~

Easy
02:26:216 (1) - Add clap and remove the clap on (2) and add a whistle to (2)

Normal
01:00:074 (4) - Move this away from (3). It's confusing.
01:02:594 (1) - Make this look nicer

Hard
00:02:830 (2,3) - One grid up to make it balance with (1)
00:38:027 (4,5,6) - These notes are too close to each other.
01:07:555 (1,2,3,4) - ^

Insane
01:17:948 (1,2,3,4) - Make the spacing equal?　　Sorry、no change
_____________________________________________-
That's all~

Others all fixed
thanks mod Uncle Tails DragonSparta

遅くなってすみません！

m i z u k i wrote:

遅くなってすみません！>w<b

SPOILER

[General]
offset+10　今のままで＞＜
New Comboがあまりあっていない気がします　全diff見直しました。　↓いいこと聞きました
長い白線からNew Combo入れると大体あってるので少し直してみて下さい

[Easy]
NormalとSVが一緒なのはあんまり良くないと思います　snap0.8xと1.2xで変えてるのでこのまま><;
01:25:035 - ここからspin

[Normal]
01:07:791 - と 01:08:027 - に単発置いて 01:08:263 - ここからスライダー

[Hard]
AR6のほうが叩きやすいと思います
00:52:673 (1) - にゅーこんぼけして00:53:145 (2) - ここからにゅーこんぼ
01:22:909 (7) - が01:23:381 (3) - のスライダーが重なって見にくいです http://gyazo.com/711c160414b2e3d56db334509d7aa412

[Insane]
00:55:035 - ここから最後まで気合タイムあってもいいと思います　このまま><;
01:25:153 - spinはここから
01:27:161 - spinおわり
他の難易度も同じように直してみてください

Others All Fixed

m i z u k iさん　ありがとうございました～

As requested.

[General]

- Same slider velocity for Easy and Normal not recommended. Lower for Easy, shouldn't be hard to adjust it to 1.00 slider velocity.
- Disable letterbox during breaks since you have video (Song Setup > Storyboard > Misc Toggles). Not really needed through since you don't have a break.
- Keep hitsound volume lower than 80%. 90%-100% is too loud for this song.

[Easy]

00:29:523 (3,4,5) Box pattern is boring. Try this, but adjust it so it look better since this is something i made real quick http://puu.sh/5N13.
00:45:586 (1,2) http://puu.sh/5N1E better for me.

Seems fine.

[Normal]

00:26:452 (4,5) Add a point and curve the sliders.
00:29:523 (2,3) ^ same, more interesting than straight sliders.
01:01:649 (3,4,5) Repeating slider instead, since this is an Easy. Ignore, is a mistake.
01:14:877 (3) Curve it

Look solid.

[Hard]

00:25:271 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Could you make this a little more interesting?
01:05:901 (6) Move down, boring for them to be all straight.

Again solid.

[Insane]

01:09:444 (1,2,3) Would be more interesting if you space this out properly.
01:17:003 (1,2,3,4,5 1,2,3,4,5) Adjust the pattern so that it look curvy. Boring when they are put in a straight 90 degree shape.

Look fine.

Map didn't really impress me, it might be because of the song so no star. Just because i didn't star doesn't mean your map is bad. I say this is definitely rankable quality so good luck with rank.

merchat7 wrote:

As requested.

[General]

- Same slider velocity for Easy and Normal not recommended. Lower for Easy, shouldn't be hard to adjust it to 1.00 slider velocity.　this song is slowly. and Use the Easy snap 0.8x ,Normal snap 1.2x. Both are completely different
- Disable letterbox during breaks since you have video (Song Setup > Storyboard > Misc Toggles). Not really needed through since you don't have a break.
- Keep hitsound volume lower than 80%. 90%-100% is too loud for this song. Sorry,I don't think so

[Easy]

00:29:523 (3,4,5) Box pattern is boring. Try this, but adjust it so it look better since this is something i made real quick http://puu.sh/5N13. no change because it is easy
00:45:586 (1,2) http://puu.sh/5N1E better for me.

Seems fine.

[Normal]

00:26:452 (4,5) Add a point and curve the sliders.　no change
00:29:523 (2,3) ^ same, more interesting than straight sliders.
01:01:649 (3,4,5) Repeating slider instead, since this is an Easy. Ignore, is a mistake.
01:14:877 (3) Curve it

Look solid.

[Hard]

00:25:271 (1,2,3,4,5,6) Could you make this a little more interesting? ok I make it again!
01:05:901 (6) Move down, boring for them to be all straight. ok 01:05:665~01:08:027 I make it again!

Again solid.

[Insane]

01:09:444 (1,2,3) Would be more interesting if you space this out properly. 　Sorry, not change because same the 00:54:326(1,2,3)
01:17:003 (1,2,3,4,5 1,2,3,4,5) Adjust the pattern so that it look curvy. Boring when they are put in a straight 90 degree shape. ok 01:17:003~01:25:035 I make it again!!!!!!!!

Look fine.

Map didn't really impress me, it might be because of the song so no star. Just because i didn't star doesn't mean your map is bad. I say this is definitely rankable quality so good luck with rank.

Others all fixed
thanks mod merchat7
Please check it again if possible

hi~ my some tips~

[General]

Overall doing well.
If you do not use SB, please delete the OSB file.


[Insane]

00:26:688 (5) - add NC.
00:45:586 (1,2) - There is no symmetry.
00:47:712 - add note.
00:49:129 (6,7,8) - I think there are not good, there is no rhythm arrangement.
00:51:728 (3,4,5,6) - Using the same distance.
00:53:145 (1) - You can pull it more perfect.


[Hard]

AR+1
00:15:350 (1,3) - With the (1) symmetry.
00:40:153 - add note.


[Normal]

HP+1,OD+1
00:50:310 - add note.
00:52:200 (2) - The use of (1) with the same shape.


[Easy]

00:25:271 (2,3) - Here the separation distance, novice easy confusion.


nice job~

good luck~

General:
Lead in time is different in insane. 993ms. Perhaps make all audio lead in 1 second instead?
Why are kiai time inconsistent? o.o

Easy:
00:02:122 (1,2) - Perhaps add extra 10% to volume? Kinda hard to hear these sounds at all.
01:08:263 (1) - Remove finish at the end
01:10:153 (1) - Add finish here instead.
Don't really like the stacked notes but low BPM seems like it would be enough to read it.

Normal:
00:02:122 (1,2) - Same as easy.
00:08:499 (3,1,2) - These notes are really hard to hear. I suggest raising 10% also.
00:39:208 (2,3) - Move these two notes to the right to make it flow better? Something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151261
00:48:893 (4) - NC?
00:51:255 (1,2) - I see you try to make them symmetrical, but you created two different slider. Just copy one slider instead then paste it to make a second slider.
00:57:633 (6,7) - I think this might be nice http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151264
01:17:240 (3) - Clap?
01:19:129 (2) - ^

Hard:
00:55:035 (1) - Make kiai start here, not blue tick. Also maybe add finish instead?

Insane:
I really love it if you used 50% in the beginning like hard did. It sounds much better that you can hear something.
00:55:035 (1) - Start kiai here.
01:10:153 (1) - Start kiai here.

Only thing bugging me is really low hitsound in the beginning. I like hard because it was 50% in the beginning and you can hear stuff. I hope you fix that part at least :v Good luck!

Kawayi Rika wrote:

hi~ my some tips~

[General]

Overall doing well.
If you do not use SB, please delete the OSB file.


[Insane]

00:26:688 (5) - add NC.
00:45:586 (1,2) - There is no symmetry.
00:47:712 - add note. Sorry, no change

00:49:129 (6,7,8) - I think there are not good, there is no rhythm arrangement. Sorry, I don't think so
00:51:728 (3,4,5,6) - Using the same distance.
00:53:145 (1) - You can pull it more perfect.


[Hard]

AR+1 Sorry, no change
00:15:350 (1,3) - With the (1) symmetry.
00:40:153 - add note. Sorry, no change


[Normal]

HP+1,OD+1 Sorry, no change
00:50:310 - add note. Sorry, no change
00:52:200 (2) - The use of (1) with the same shape.


[Easy]

00:25:271 (2,3) - Here the separation distance, novice easy confusion. Sorry, I don't think so


nice job~

good luck~

Others all fixed
thanks mod Kawayi Rika

Raging Bull wrote:

General:
Lead in time is different in insane. 993ms. Perhaps make all audio lead in 1 second instead?
Why are kiai time inconsistent? o.o

Easy:
00:02:122 (1,2) - Perhaps add extra 10% to volume? Kinda hard to hear these sounds at all.
01:08:263 (1) - Remove finish at the end
01:10:153 (1) - Add finish here instead.
Don't really like the stacked notes but low BPM seems like it would be enough to read it.

Normal:
00:02:122 (1,2) - Same as easy.
00:08:499 (3,1,2) - These notes are really hard to hear. I suggest raising 10% also.
00:39:208 (2,3) - Move these two notes to the right to make it flow better? Something like this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151261
00:48:893 (4) - NC?
00:51:255 (1,2) - I see you try to make them symmetrical, but you created two different slider. Just copy one slider instead then paste it to make a second slider.
00:57:633 (6,7) - I think this might be nice http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/151264
01:17:240 (3) - Clap?
01:19:129 (2) - ^

Hard:
00:55:035 (1) - Make kiai start here, not blue tick. Also maybe add finish instead?

Insane:
I really love it if you used 50% in the beginning like hard did. It sounds much better that you can hear something.
00:55:035 (1) - Start kiai here.
01:10:153 (1) - Start kiai here.

Only thing bugging me is really low hitsound in the beginning. I like hard because it was 50% in the beginning and you can hear stuff. I hope you fix that part at least :v Good luck!

ALL fixed!
thanks mod Raging Bull

hi
Random modding~

[overall]:

1. Offset 1427 Resnap All notes忘れないでください

[Insane]:

1. 00:17:003 - Kiai一瞬だけ入れるのなら00:17:240 (3) - ここの始めに入れた方がいいと思います
2. 00:39:799 ~ 00:51:019 - ホイッスル使わない方が好きです
3. 01:02:122 - Kiai end?
4. 01:20:547 (1) - Delete note?
5. 01:29:523 - Spun end?

[Hard]:

1. 00:16:767 (4) - Delete finish
2. 00:17:240 (1) - 始めにfinish

[Normal]:

1. 00:53:145 (3) - 終わりのfinishは必要ないと思います

[Easy]:

1. fine

nice map!

S o r d a wrote:

hi
Random modding~

[overall]:

1. Offset 1427 Resnap All notes忘れないでください no change><

　


[Insane]:

1. 00:17:003 - Kiai一瞬だけ入れるのなら00:17:240 (3) - ここの始めに入れた方がいいと思います
2. 00:39:799 ~ 00:51:019 - ホイッスル使わない方が好きです 少し減らしました
3. 01:02:122 - Kiai end?　他の難易度と合わせてるのでとりあえずこのままで><
4. 01:20:547 (1) - Delete note?　no change><
5. 01:29:523 - Spun end?　no change><

[Hard]:

1. 00:16:767 (4) - Delete finish
2. 00:17:240 (1) - 始めにfinish

[Normal]:

1. 00:53:145 (3) - 終わりのfinishは必要ないと思います

[Easy]:

1. fine

nice map!

Others　All fixed!
S o r d aさん　mod ありがとうございました～

Insane:

00:16:059 (5,6,1,2,3) - Make something like this and a new combo in 00:16:531 (1) -
00:17:948 (1) - ^
00:23:854 (5,6) - Make something like this
00:47:003 (3) - New combo, also why do you put a slowdown here? it's not necessary
00:51:492 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make something like this.
01:23:381 (9) - New combo
Please check the spacing
Hard:

AR +1
The kiai is not the same in the others diffs, please check this, and check your spacing (turn on the distance snap)
00:06:373 (2) - Spacing
00:08:499 (5) - ^
00:39:444 (1) - Remove new combo
00:55:035 (1,2,3,4) - Confusing


Normal:
Check the spacing
00:02:122 (1,2) - Can you put some sliders or something? this is very boring
00:17:712 (2,3,4) - Spacing
00:39:917 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:02:122 -

Fine I guess, but check the spacing please

Easy:

00:14:877 (2,3) - Spacing

Verdisphena wrote:

Insane:

00:16:059 (5,6,1,2,3) - Make something like this and a new combo in 00:16:531 (1) - what?
00:17:948 (1) - ^ what?
00:23:854 (5,6) - Make something like this

SPOILER

00:47:003 (3) - New combo, also why do you put a slowdown here? it's not necessary change slowdown start 00:49:129
00:51:492 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Make something like this.

SPOILER

01:23:381 (9) - New combo
Please check the spacing
Hard:

AR +1 no change
The kiai is not the same in the others diffs, please check this, and check your spacing (turn on the distance snap)
00:06:373 (2) - Spacing　mistake is not found
00:08:499 (5) - ^　mistake is not found
00:39:444 (1) - Remove new combo
00:55:035 (1,2,3,4) - Confusing I don't think so


Normal:
Check the spacing
00:02:122 (1,2) - Can you put some sliders or something? this is very boring　　no change
00:17:712 (2,3,4) - Spacing
00:39:917 (1,2,3,4) - Same as 00:02:122 - no change

Fine I guess, but check the spacing please

Easy:

00:14:877 (2,3) - Spacing

Others All fixed
thanks mod Verdisphena

Hmm. No one starring D: Have one. (ノ^_^)ノ 彡☆



My message is too short.

Raging Bull wrote:

Hmm. No one starring D: Have one. (ノ^_^)ノ 彡☆

Thanks Raging Bull!!

thx reqs~

[Insane]
0.43.933(x) - add object
0.47.715(x) - ^

frost-b-spec wrote:

thx reqs~

[Insane]
0.43.933(x) - add object
0.47.715(x) - ^

2つともわざとなので申し訳ないですが変更無しで
frost-b-specさん　mod ありがとうございました～

Hi~ time to mod your map ^w^/

Easy
00:05:783 (inheritin section) vol 70 %?
00:05:901 (1,2,1,2) add clap in the end?
01:04:484 (1) del NC?
01:05:901 (4) NC?
01:08:263 (1) del NC

Normal
00:20:547 (5) NC?
00:31:413 (4) ^
00:36:137 (1) add clap?
00:36:610 (2) ^
00:36:846 (3) add clap in the end?
00:53:145 (3) add finish in the beginning?

Hard
00:26:216 (4) add clap in the beginning?
00:26:688 (5) NC?
00:27:161 (3 [if you add NC]) add clap?
00:28:578 (1) add clap in the end?
00:29:523 (3) add clap?
00:29:759 (4) NC?
00:29:996 (1) del NC?
00:52:673 (5) add clap?
01:05:665 (5) NC?
01:05:901 (2[if you add NC]) add clap?
01:06:373 (1) add clap in the beginning and the end?
01:07:791 (3) del whistle, add clap?
01:08:263 (5) add clap in the beginning?

Insane
00:43:460 (5) NC?

hope you can helped with my mod~ <:3

Yasora-chan wrote:

Hi~ time to mod your map ^w^/

Easy
00:05:783 (inheritin section) vol 70 %? vol change to 50%!
00:05:901 (1,2,1,2) add clap in the end?
01:04:484 (1) del NC?
01:05:901 (4) NC?
01:08:263 (1) del NC sorry, no change

Normal
00:20:547 (5) NC? sorry, no change
00:31:413 (4) ^
00:36:137 (1) add clap?
00:36:610 (2) ^ sorry, no change
00:36:846 (3) add clap in the end?
00:53:145 (3) add finish in the beginning?

Hard
00:26:216 (4) add clap in the beginning?
00:26:688 (5) NC?
00:27:161 (3 [if you add NC]) add clap?
00:28:578 (1) add clap in the end?
00:29:523 (3) add clap?
00:29:759 (4) NC? sorry, no change
00:29:996 (1) del NC? sorry, no change
00:52:673 (5) add clap?
01:05:665 (5) NC?
01:05:901 (2[if you add NC]) add clap?
01:06:373 (1) add clap in the beginning and the end? add clap only beginning
01:07:791 (3) del whistle, add clap?
01:08:263 (5) add clap in the beginning? sorry, no change

Insane
00:43:460 (5) NC?

hope you can helped with my mod~ <:3

Others all fixed!

thanks mod Yasora-chan

Yo~
[Easy]
• 00:21:492 (1) - I dunno about this spinner here. I say you map through it. I find it lazy and awkward to play.

• 00:23:854 (1) - You can combo break on this pretty easily. It hardly matches the song and people would hit this too early. Consider revising this. Mapping through the spinner would make it easier to fix this.

• 00:47:003 (2) - I'd remove the repeat on this slider if I were you. Only to stay consistent with what you're doing before, match the music and also, it sounds 10x better IMO. Don't forget to fix the spacing problems when you do that.

• 01:00:704 (5) - Kick slider on an easy isn't the greatest idea. Since the players on easy probably won't catch it before it's too late. Also, it's the only one you use in the map. Consider revising this.

• 01:12:988 (1,2) - Remove new combo on (1) and add the new combo to (2). It matches the vocals much better that way~

[Normal]
• 00:47:003 (3) - Same problem with easy here. I'd say you change this up to make it play better.

• 00:55:035 - The claps and whistles at the same time throughout this section sounds really bad. I would consider fixing that and only using the claps OR whistles.

• 01:12:043 (1) - Add a new combo onto this to match 00:56:925 (5). It also matches the vocals better~

[Hard]
• 00:50:783 (4) - In my opinion, the finish would sounds much better at the end of this slider. Sounds much better and fits the song too.

• 01:02:830 (1,2,3,4) - I found this pattern had a really awkward flow. Perhaps re-design the sliders? Nothing big.

• 01:19:366 (4) - This finish sounds out of place IMO. I suggest removing it or adding a whistle instead.

[Insane]
• 00:44:169 (1) - This confusing spacing would throw people off. Consider changing that up.

• 00:47:003 (1) - A finish would fit nice here at the end of the slider. Matches the song~

• 00:49:129 (7) - Eekk, this random slow down really screwed me over. It barley matches the song and comes without a warning. Fix it please~

All I could find. Insane is pretty fun~
You deserve a star IMO ♪

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

Yo~
[Easy]
• 00:21:492 (1) - I dunno about this spinner here. I say you map through it. I find it lazy and awkward to play. slider change it

• 00:23:854 (1) - You can combo break on this pretty easily. It hardly matches the song and people would hit this too early. Consider revising this. Mapping through the spinner would make it easier to fix this. spinner change it

• 00:47:003 (2) - I'd remove the repeat on this slider if I were you. Only to stay consistent with what you're doing before, match the music and also, it sounds 10x better IMO. Don't forget to fix the spacing problems when you do that. yeah. but sorry,no change

• 01:00:704 (5) - Kick slider on an easy isn't the greatest idea. Since the players on easy probably won't catch it before it's too late. Also, it's the only one you use in the map. Consider revising this. ok. change it

• 01:12:988 (1,2) - Remove new combo on (1) and add the new combo to (2). It matches the vocals much better that way~

[Normal]
• 00:47:003 (3) - Same problem with easy here. I'd say you change this up to make it play better. sorry no change

• 00:55:035 - The claps and whistles at the same time throughout this section sounds really bad. I would consider fixing that and only using the claps OR whistles.

• 01:12:043 (1) - Add a new combo onto this to match 00:56:925 (5). It also matches the vocals better~

[Hard]
• 00:50:783 (4) - In my opinion, the finish would sounds much better at the end of this slider. Sounds much better and fits the song too.

• 01:02:830 (1,2,3,4) - I found this pattern had a really awkward flow. Perhaps re-design the sliders? Nothing big. remake it!

• 01:19:366 (4) - This finish sounds out of place IMO. I suggest removing it or adding a whistle instead.

[Insane]
• 00:44:169 (1) - This confusing spacing would throw people off. Consider changing that up.

• 00:47:003 (1) - A finish would fit nice here at the end of the slider. Matches the song~

• 00:49:129 (7) - Eekk, this random slow down really screwed me over. It barley matches the song and comes without a warning. Fix it please~ ok change it!

All I could find. Insane is pretty fun~
You deserve a star IMO ♪

Others all fixed
Thanks mod & star Kiddo-Kun

hi there~
your map has no problem at all, so only suggestion (mostly)
insane
00:05:429 (1) - make a slow one? if so , dont need repeat
00:06:137 (2) - follow the lyrics? shorten it and end at 00:06:373, then add a note next beat
00:08:027 - add notes, one here, one next tick and delay the slider to 00:08:263, dont need to cancer the repeat, but still add a note at 00:08:972 (sorry puush isnt working now...) http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/2739/osu1q.jpg
00:20:429 - add note?
00:47:712 (2) - add note ><
01:16:295 (6) - add clap

hard
00:50:310 (3) - make it like 00:48:421 (2), more consistent rhythm, add note at next beat also
00:53:145 (1) - slow one?
01:17:003 (3) - dont make this first. make a slider with one repeat at "daijoubu" , next beat a note, then again with the repeated slider http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/2853/osu1r.jpg i randomly place the slider, dont need to follow it.

normal:
00:21:964 (2) - dont need finish XXX
00:30:468 (3) - place at 00:30:232 ? and add a repeat?
00:53:145 (3) - slow one XD?
01:01:177 (2,5) - add claps

nice map! star~~~

L_P wrote:

hi there~
your map has no problem at all, so only suggestion (mostly)
insane
00:05:429 (1) - make a slow one? if so , dont need repeat no slow XD but remake this
00:06:137 (2) - follow the lyrics? shorten it and end at 00:06:373, then add a note next beat sorry, no change
00:08:027 - add notes, one here, one next tick and delay the slider to 00:08:263, dont need to cancer the repeat, but still add a note at 00:08:972 (sorry puush isnt working now...) http://img192.imageshack.us/img192/2739/osu1q.jpg Thank you for thinking but no change
00:20:429 - add note? sorry, no change
00:47:712 (2) - add note >< sorry >< no change
01:16:295 (6) - add clap

hard
00:50:310 (3) - make it like 00:48:421 (2), more consistent rhythm, add note at next beat also sorry, no change
00:53:145 (1) - slow one? ok
01:17:003 (3) - dont make this first. make a slider with one repeat at "daijoubu" , next beat a note, then again with the repeated slider http://img64.imageshack.us/img64/2853/osu1r.jpg i randomly place the slider, dont need to follow it. nice idea. change it

normal:
00:21:964 (2) - dont need finish XXX
00:30:468 (3) - place at 00:30:232 ? and add a repeat? nice idea!! but little difficult for beginner
00:53:145 (3) - slow one XD? I do not use BPM change at Normal,Easy diff　XD
01:01:177 (2,5) - add claps

nice map! star~~~

Others All fixed!!
Thanks mod & Star☆ L_P

Hi.






And that's it. Good luck!

Roddie wrote:

Hi.

General

1. Try an offset of 2,146. This could be the right timing. If you do put in the new timing, don't forget to resnap all the notes and the timing points (green lines).　　sorry,no change

Easy

1. 00:48:893-Perhaps put a new combo here??
2. 01:07:791 (3)-I think you forgot to put a clap here. :p

Normal

1. 00:57:870 (3)-On the end of that slider, a clap sounds better than a whistle.
2. 00:58:814 (1)-It sounds like there should be a finish here.
3. 01:07:791 (4)-Forgot to add a clap?　　On purpose

Hard

1. 00:37:909 (x)-Add a note here so it can setup to be a 1/4 triplet? :3 nice idea
2. 01:07:791 (3)-A clap sounds better than a whistle.
3. 01:21:019 (3)-Add a clap? sorry,no clap

Insane

1. 00:34:720 (8)-Forgot to add a clap?
2. 00:49:602-Maybe put a new combo here?

And that's it. Good luck!

Others all fixed

Thanks Roddie

Hello~~

I sooooo sorry later because i very busy my school -_-

anyawy

IMO -> My opinions

Some Suggestions
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[easy]

AR +1 they will be more readable IMO

00:13:460 (1) - add finish only start slider if you feel listen strong drums that should add finish
00:28:578 (1) - ^
00:36:137 (1) - Same above 00:13:460
00:45:586 (1) - the end slider finish is not i suggest change whistle IMO
00:48:893 (1) - Remove this new combo and 00:50:310 (2) - put new combo will be better IMO
01:08:263 (1) - add finish the only slider start
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Normal]

00:13:460 (1) - add finis only start slider
00:23:854 (4) - this slider middle clap is not fit IMO so remove this
00:27:633 (7) - the end slider whistle not good change finish? IMO
00:38:027 (4) - remove clap and add finish also put this new combo and 00:38:972 (1) - remove this new combo like this http://puu.sh/6EJg is most better
00:45:586 (1) - remove the end finish and change whistle
00:48:893 (1) - remove clap the middle slider and add clap the start slider
00:50:547 (2) - remove clap the end slider and add clap the middle slider remove finish
01:00:704 (1) - remove whistle and add finish?
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[hard]

AR +1 ? IMO

00:15:350 (1) - remove whistle and add finish?
00:18:657 (4) - i guess this finish is not fit remove finish
00:19:129 (1) - that i listen strong should add finish
00:20:547 (4) - Same above 00:18:657
00:21:019 (1) - same above 00:19:129
00:29:759 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - i guess this combo not good try 00:29:996 (1) - remove new combo and 00:30:704 (6) - put new combo and 00:32:122 (1) - remove new combo like this http://puu.sh/6ELM this is fit IMO
00:37:791 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - again try this http://puu.sh/6EM3 fit combo IMO
00:39:917 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - again try this http://puu.sh/6EMj this is good IMO and if you play flashlight this will be easy IMO
00:53:145 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I so sorry this i did play this is very confused and lot overlaps i suggest you remap this
00:57:870 (3,1) - http://puu.sh/6EMG overlaps i suggest the end slider pont move up or change it

this is fine play but you combo is weird sorry
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Insane]

00:01:413 (1,2) - no no no no mapper before BPM ?! PLEASSE REMOVE THIS

i did SS this orz
play is fine and good but combo are still inscosiente and hitsound are random
but this is insane
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
That all i think
I wish good luck
sorry my poor eng

Pereira006 wrote:

Hello~~

I sooooo sorry later because i very busy my school -_- no problem　

anyawy

IMO -> My opinions

Some Suggestions
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[easy]

AR +1 they will be more readable IMO

00:13:460 (1) - add finish only start slider if you feel listen strong drums that should add finish
00:28:578 (1) - ^
00:36:137 (1) - Same above 00:13:460
00:45:586 (1) - the end slider finish is not i suggest change whistle IMO
00:48:893 (1) - Remove this new combo and 00:50:310 (2) - put new combo will be better IMO
01:08:263 (1) - add finish the only slider start
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Normal]

00:13:460 (1) - add finis only start slider
00:23:854 (4) - this slider middle clap is not fit IMO so remove this
00:27:633 (7) - the end slider whistle not good change finish? IMO sorry,no change
00:38:027 (4) - remove clap and add finish also put this new combo and 00:38:972 (1) - remove this new combo like this http://puu.sh/6EJg is most better
00:45:586 (1) - remove the end finish and change whistle remove finish only
00:48:893 (1) - remove clap the middle slider and add clap the start slider
00:50:547 (2) - remove clap the end slider and add clap the middle slider remove finish
01:00:704 (1) - remove whistle and add finish? sorry,no change
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[hard]

AR +1 ? IMO sorry,no change

00:15:350 (1) - remove whistle and add finish? sorry,no change
00:18:657 (4) - i guess this finish is not fit remove finish
00:19:129 (1) - that i listen strong should add finish
00:20:547 (4) - Same above 00:18:657
00:21:019 (1) - same above 00:19:129
00:29:759 (4,1,2,3,1,2,3) - i guess this combo not good try 00:29:996 (1) - remove new combo and 00:30:704 (6) - put new combo and 00:32:122 (1) - remove new combo like this http://puu.sh/6ELM this is fit IMO
00:37:791 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - again try this http://puu.sh/6EM3 fit combo IMO
00:39:917 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - again try this http://puu.sh/6EMj this is good IMO and if you play flashlight this will be easy IMO
00:53:145 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - I so sorry this i did play this is very confused and lot overlaps i suggest you remap this ok change it!
00:57:870 (3,1) - http://puu.sh/6EMG overlaps i suggest the end slider pont move up or change it ok change it!

this is fine play but you combo is weird sorry
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
[Insane]

00:01:413 (1,2) - no no no no mapper before BPM ?! PLEASSE REMOVE THIS >w< ok!

i did SS this orz
play is fine and good but combo are still inscosiente and hitsound are random
but this is insane
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
That all i think
I wish good luck
sorry my poor eng

Others all fixed and all diff hitsound&combo remake it!!!
Thanks mod Pereira006

Insane

00:16:531 (1) - remove combo
00:17:948 (1) - ^
00:47:712 (x) - add note
00:47:948 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the spacing change doesn't make all that much sense to me since nothing in the music really changes.
01:23:381 (1) - i like it better if you added a whistle or something to the end or a finish idk. Also this slider just doesn't fit imo. It feels a little awkward to play and a little forced. But you can keep it if you want.

Hard

00:15:114 (1) - try this :
01:09:444 (2,3,4) - for consistency purposes you could anti-space these if you want. And for other consistency purposes you could end this slider 01:08:263 (1) at 01:09:208. That's up to you tho.
01:23:381 (1) - same two things as insane.

Normal

00:50:547 (2) - I would take one repeat off and then start this slider at 00:50:783 -
01:15:822 (1) - remove combo and add new combo to next note

Easy

00:26:688 (2) - slider feels a little awkward to play for me. idk, maybe it's just off with vocals or something
00:28:106 (x) - add note?
00:53:145 (1) - remove combo

sorry for late and lazy mod ;_;

Hi, kosiga~
As per your request!

Just a suggestion: maybe you can try to use "CircleSize:2" in easy, and you can change it in .osu - [Difficulty]
(It is not very necessary, but I think it can make your map more beautiful~)

At the first sight, the map-set looks fine, but in some places, the patterns are not so good. Sry, I'm so busy these days, and I will mod it further this weekend.

No kds.

cmn_891127 wrote:

Hi, kosiga~
As per your request!

Just a suggestion: maybe you can try to use "CircleSize:2" in easy, and you can change it in .osu - [Difficulty]
(It is not very necessary, but I think it can make your map more beautiful~) CircleSize:2 Minimum circle size is 3!! 4 and a mistake?
but sorry,let me go as this circle size

At the first sight, the map-set looks fine, but in some places, the patterns are not so good. Sry, I'm so busy these days, and I will mod it further this weekend. yeah. I am busy, too, and a correction in front is not over

No kds.

Thanks cmn_891127

winber1 wrote:

Insane

00:16:531 (1) - remove combo remove it
00:17:948 (1) - ^ remove it
00:47:712 (x) - add note change it
00:47:948 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - the spacing change doesn't make all that much sense to me since nothing in the music really changes. ok. change it
01:23:381 (1) - i like it better if you added a whistle or something to the end or a finish idk. Also this slider just doesn't fit imo. It feels a little awkward to play and a little forced. But you can keep it if you want. add whistle. slider will keep

Hard

00:15:114 (1) - try this : change it

SPOILER

[attachment=0:3d108]screenshot132.jpg[/attachment:3d108]

01:09:444 (2,3,4) - for consistency purposes you could anti-space these if you want. And for other consistency purposes you could end this slider 01:08:263 (1) at 01:09:208. That's up to you tho. change it
01:23:381 (1) - same two things as insane. sorry, no change

Normal

00:50:547 (2) - I would take one repeat off and then start this slider at 00:50:783 - sorry, no change
01:15:822 (1) - remove combo and add new combo to next note change it

Easy

00:26:688 (2) - slider feels a little awkward to play for me. idk, maybe it's just off with vocals or something change it
00:28:106 (x) - add note? change it
00:53:145 (1) - remove combo remove it

sorry for late and lazy mod ;_; No problem

winber1 Thanks for mod & star~

始めまして:3

Modding始めます

Easy-

特に問題はありません！いいPatternです’w’)b

Normal-

00:13:460 (1) - Rotateを使って（Ctrl+Shift+R)Anti-Clockwise３にしてください
00:14:877 (2) - ＾
00:27:633 (7) - ＾
01:07:555 (3) - NC

Hard-

Grid Level 4なのですこしSpacingの問題を心配しましたが問題ありませんでした！いいですね:D
ほかにPatternにも問題ありません

Insane-

00:03:539 (4) - Spacing問題ーDistance Spacingを1.7と設定して直すと良くなります
00:15:350 (1,2,3,4) - すこし変に見えますもっと一定なPatternに直すのがいいと思います
00:38:499 (2) - 00:38:027 (1) ＜－－このノートをコピーするのがいいと思います（Ctrl+C,Ctrl＋V)


全体的にいいMapですね！:3
星！

Himekaido Hatate wrote:

始めまして:3　はじめまして>w<

Modding始めます

Easy-

特に問題はありません！いいPatternです’w’)b ありがとです ’w’)b

Normal-

00:13:460 (1) - Rotateを使って（Ctrl+Shift+R)Anti-Clockwise３にしてください 角ばってたので作り直しました。
00:14:877 (2) - ＾ ^
00:27:633 (7) - ＾ ^
01:07:555 (3) - NC fixed

Hard-

Grid Level 4なのですこしSpacingの問題を心配しましたが問題ありませんでした！いいですね:D
ほかにPatternにも問題ありません 　

Insane-

00:03:539 (4) - Spacing問題ーDistance Spacingを1.7と設定して直すと良くなります fixed
00:15:350 (1,2,3,4) - すこし変に見えますもっと一定なPatternに直すのがいいと思います fixed その後も少し修正しました
00:38:499 (2) - 00:38:027 (1) ＜－－このノートをコピーするのがいいと思います（Ctrl+C,Ctrl＋V) fixed


全体的にいいMapですね！:3
星！

Himekaido Hatateさん　mod & Star☆ ありがとうございました。（日本語お上手です )

• 
  Easy
  fine
  
  SPOILER

  but Circle 2 like
  ,
  and you now is like
  
  Circle 2 is still rankable, but you cannot change it in edit, it can only be changed in .osu
  
  Normal

1. 00:56:925(1,2,3) set like
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Hard
2. 00:14:169(4,5,6) it is a little difficult for me to hit, set like
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:30:704(5,1,2) the jump (2,3) is just a little strange, so I think it is better to jump like
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Insane
   fine

I really like this song~
Good luck!!!

cmn_891127 wrote:

• 
  Easy
  fine
  
  SPOILER

  but Circle 2 like
  [attachment=0:51a3f]5.jpg[/attachment:51a3f],
  and you now is like
  [attachment=1:51a3f]4.jpg[/attachment:51a3f]
  Circle 2 is still rankable, but you cannot change it in edit, it can only be changed in .osu I understand. ok. circle2 change it!!
  
  Normal

1. 00:56:925(1,2,3) set like this DS1.3x?? I tailor it for 1.2x and remake it
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Hard
2. 00:14:169(4,5,6) it is a little difficult for me to hit, set like change it
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 00:30:704(5,1,2) the jump (2,3) is just a little strange, so I think it is better to jump like nice idea change it
   
   SPOILER

   
   
   Insane
   fine

I really like this song~
Good luck!!!

cmn_891127　Thanks for mod

I think more beautiful

yo modding ur song because of ur request

Easy:
00:02:122(1) - replace this for a straight slider and end it at 00:03:066
00:04:011(2) - same as above but end it at 00:04:956 the next suggestions r where the notes r gonna be placed if u follow these 2 suggestions
00:05:901(1) - x:368 y:220
00:07:791(2) - x:320 y:96
00:09:681(1) - Stack it on the beginning of (2) at 00:07:791
00:11:570(2) - x:76 y:288
00:12:988(3) - x:364 y:204
00:13:406(1) - x:400 y:116
00:14:877(2) - same spot as (3)
00:16:295(3,1) - x:404 y:292
00:17:292(2) - x:390 y:192(all suggestions from 00:02:122-00:17:292 r together)
00:53:145(3) - 2 grids down

Normal:
00:02:122-00:04:011 - same as easy but this time make it a curve slider
00:26:925(5) - NC
00:56:925(1,2,3) - try to make it like this
01:18:893(1,2,3) - Aline them all to the end of the slider at 01:18:421

Hard:
No problems here

Insane:
00:34:247(5) - NC
00:49:602(8) - ^

This is the best i can do. Star and GL

Byakugan249 wrote:

yo modding ur song because of ur request

Easy:
00:02:122(1) - replace this for a straight slider and end it at 00:03:066
00:04:011(2) - same as above but end it at 00:04:956 the next suggestions r where the notes r gonna be placed if u follow these 2 suggestions
00:05:901(1) - x:368 y:220
00:07:791(2) - x:320 y:96
00:09:681(1) - Stack it on the beginning of (2) at 00:07:791
00:11:570(2) - x:76 y:288
00:12:988(3) - x:364 y:204
00:13:406(1) - x:400 y:116
00:14:877(2) - same spot as (3)
00:16:295(3,1) - x:404 y:292
00:17:292(2) - x:390 y:192(all suggestions from 00:02:122-00:17:292 r together)
00:53:145(3) - 2 grids down fixed

00:02:122~00:17:292 sorry, no change but thank you very much for thinking about an idea

Normal:
00:02:122-00:04:011 - same as easy but this time make it a curve slider sorry, no change
00:26:925(5) - NC fixed
00:56:925(1,2,3) - try to make it like this I want to make so it, too. but it becomes the spacing error
01:18:893(1,2,3) - Aline them all to the end of the slider at 01:18:421 ok. change it


Hard:
No problems here

Insane:
00:34:247(5) - NC fixed
00:49:602(8) - ^ ^

This is the best i can do. Star and GL

Byakugan249 Thanks for mod and Star

[General]

1. Offset : 2130 (+8ms from current)
2. Tick rate 2 is sound much better. You can listen hi-hat sound at every red tick.

[Insane]
01:17:476 (3) - Add finish to reverse arrow
01:20:547 (1,4) - Put whistle instead of finish
01:21:492 (1) - Put finish instead of whistle
01:23:381 (1) - Add finish to end of slider


[Hard]
01:17:712 (1) - Add finish
01:21:492 (1) - ^


[Normal]
00:13:460 (1,2) - Their shape can be improved. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/169259
00:27:633 (3) - ^


[Easy]
00:22:909 (1) - This spinner is really loud. Try audio volume 60.
00:25:271 (1) - (Bug) Add new combo


I like this song. Good luck

ykcarrot wrote:

[General]

1. Offset : 2130 (+8ms from current) ok. change it
2. Tick rate 2 is sound much better. You can listen hi-hat sound at every red tick. ok Tick rate 2 change

[Insane]
01:17:476 (3) - Add finish to reverse arrow fixed
01:20:547 (1,4) - Put whistle instead of finish 4 only fixed (1 keep finish)
01:21:492 (1) - Put finish instead of whistle fixed
01:23:381 (1) - Add finish to end of slider fixed


[Hard]
01:17:712 (1) - Add finish fixed
01:21:492 (1) - ^ ^


[Normal]
00:13:460 (1,2) - Their shape can be improved. http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/169259 fixed (It is really difficult to make a beautiful slider )
00:27:633 (3) - ^ ^


[Easy]
00:22:909 (1) - This spinner is really loud. Try audio volume 60. ok. but slider end point volume 90%
00:25:271 (1) - (Bug) Add new combo Was it strange? recovered now?


I like this song. yeah. me too Good luck

ykcarrot Thanks for mod & star

Mod form Thai mapper team.
こばんは　こしがさん。
これは私のモッド。
それじゃ始めましょう。

General
- Can resize belze1440_900c to 800x600 for space save.
set audio lead In 1004 > 1000 (edit in .osu file)
Insane
00:39:925 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is confuse newcombo at 4 , 7 'll fix.
00:39:452 (5,6) - space
00:50:555 (3) - use 1/2 return slider instead.
00:52:681 (7) - volume 90 %+ whistle at start of slider(head of slider)
01:02:130 (5) - clap head
01:16:775 why stop clap afther this ? it sound good.
01:25:161 (1) - start here 01:25:161

hard
+ 1AR ? your note have alot of cluster.
00:18:665 (4) - whistle at head like insane ?
00:20:555 (4) - ^
01:02:838 (1) - change to 1/2 return slider
01:03:547 (2) - change to 3 circles
01:20:082 add circle note instead of slider
01:20:318 ^
Normal
00:36:145 (1) - remove clap
00:36:618 (2) - add clap
01:07:563 (3,4,5) - delete and make 01:06:854 (2) - return instead.
01:15:594 add circle
Easy
00:32:130 why stop clap after this it's sound good.
00:48:429 add note
01:23:862 (2) - have at least 1 full beat ( 1 white line ) before spinner is good for easy diff.

Plz vote me if my mod useful http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=60&t=63069&start=30&st=0&sk=t&sd=a

終わりました
頑張ってください。
Ps. ごめん、私の日本語は良くない。　

regenz wrote:

Mod form Thai mapper team.
こばんは　こしがさん。 こんばんは
これは私のモッド。
それじゃ始めましょう。

General
- Can resize belze1440_900c to 800x600 for space save. name is belze1440_900. but size is 1024x768
set audio lead In 1004 > 1000 (edit in .osu file) fixed
Insane
00:39:925 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this is confuse newcombo at 4 , 7 'll fix. ok. change it
00:39:452 (5,6) - space space1.0x fixed
00:50:555 (3) - use 1/2 return slider instead. ok. change it
00:52:681 (7) - volume 90 %+ whistle at start of slider(head of slider) volume 70% . and add whistle
01:02:130 (5) - clap head sorry, no change
01:16:775 why stop clap afther this ? it sound good. no clap
01:25:161 (1) - start here 01:25:161 what? If 01:25:279 wrong sorry, no change.

hard
+ 1AR ? your note have alot of cluster. sorry, no change XD
00:18:665 (4) - whistle at head like insane ? sorry, no change.
00:20:555 (4) - ^ added
01:02:838 (1) - change to 1/2 return slider ok. change it
01:03:547 (2) - change to 3 circles ok. change it
01:20:082 add circle note instead of slider ok. change it
01:20:318 ^ change it. and add note 01:20:555
Normal
00:36:145 (1) - remove clap fixed
00:36:618 (2) - add clap fixed
01:07:563 (3,4,5) - delete and make 01:06:854 (2) - return instead. ok. change it
01:15:594 add circle sorry,no change
Easy
00:32:130 why stop clap after this it's sound good. yeah. no clap
00:48:429 add note sorry, no change
01:23:862 (2) - have at least 1 full beat ( 1 white line ) before spinner is good for easy diff. sorry, no change

Plz vote me if my mod useful http://osu.ppy.sh/forum/viewtopic.php?f=60&t=63069&start=30&st=0&sk=t&sd=a yeah.

終わりました
頑張ってください。
Ps. ごめん、私の日本語は良くない。　 うまいです

regenz Thanks for mod

ohai.

General
What is the 0 byte soft-hitnormal.wav for? Silencing the beats in any way is unrankable.
Your hitsound volume manipulation sucks. At times, I can't hear the hitsounds at all, and then sometimes they're too loud.

Insane
00:30:712 (1,2) - those jumps feel unnatural, therefore I suggest to use normal spacing instead.

Hard
01:10:870 (3) - repeat arrow is partially covered by a hitburst.

Don't wanna Nazi stuff, though there is a lot which CAN be Nazi'd. Please do that yourself.

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

ohai.

General
What is the 0 byte soft-hitnormal.wav for? Silencing the beats in any way is unrankable. remove it
Your hitsound volume manipulation sucks. At times, I can't hear the hitsounds at all, and then sometimes they're too loud. I regret it. but I can hear all sounds

Insane
00:30:712 (1,2) - those jumps feel unnatural, therefore I suggest to use normal spacing instead. change it

Hard
01:10:870 (3) - repeat arrow is partially covered by a hitburst. change it

Don't wanna Nazi stuff, though there is a lot which CAN be Nazi'd. Please do that yourself.

Tenshi-nyan Thanks for mod

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Don't wanna Nazi stuff, though there is a lot which CAN be Nazi'd. Please do that yourself.

I will do (some of) it

[Easy]
Hitsounds (here and for all other diffs):
00:17:720 (2,3,4,5,6) - whistle is REALLY loud...annoys me maybe turn down the whistle volume a bit (use ~75% max and for the crescendo 75%->60%->45%->30%)
01:10:633 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ^same

Object Placement:
01:03:074 (2) - move the sharp turn (red dot) exactly to 01:03:547 http://puu.sh/869a to support the downbeat with this turn (like you did this @00:25:279 (1) before)
01:05:909 (1) - ^same: move the sharp turn (red dot) exactly to 01:06:381 http://puu.sh/8692

[Normal]
Maybe you can un-stack some notes as it is easier for beginners to read unstacked notes: easiest to read: 00:38:980 (2,3,4); easy to read: 00:31:421 (1,2,3), hard to read: 00:14:885 (2,3,4)
00:08:507 (3) - definetely dont' stack this, correct timing is very hard to read without the beat going in the song

[Hard]
The beginning is really strange and feels out of beat (mostly because beatplacement of 00:04:019 (2) is just wrong)
Maybe try something like this: http://puu.sh/86ca
At least fix 00:04:019 (2) and move it to 00:03:783 or 00:03:547
00:44:649 (X) - do NOT leave out this downbeat (just stack a circle or something)

[Insane]
Not bad. Some strange jumps that don't really fit but nothing gamebreaking. If you like how this map flows, just keep it as it is I say.



If you can fix the hitsounds and polish this mapset a bit it will be pretty good. The weird crescendos and the annoyingly loud whistles during KIAI should be fixed though. Use the hitsounds to support what is actually in the song and keep it simple would be my suggestion here.

keep it up and good luck

p3n wrote:

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Don't wanna Nazi stuff, though there is a lot which CAN be Nazi'd. Please do that yourself.

I will do (some of) it

[Easy]
Hitsounds (here and for all other diffs):
00:17:720 (2,3,4,5,6) - whistle is REALLY loud...annoys me maybe turn down the whistle volume a bit (use ~75% max and for the crescendo 75%->60%->45%->30%) ok. fixed (all diff)
01:10:633 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - ^same ok. fixed(all diff)

Object Placement:
01:03:074 (2) - move the sharp turn (red dot) exactly to 01:03:547 http://puu.sh/869a to support the downbeat with this turn (like you did this @00:25:279 (1) before) fixed
01:05:909 (1) - ^same: move the sharp turn (red dot) exactly to 01:06:381 http://puu.sh/8692 fixed

[Normal]
Maybe you can un-stack some notes as it is easier for beginners to read unstacked notes: easiest to read: 00:38:980 (2,3,4); easy to read: 00:31:421 (1,2,3), hard to read: 00:14:885 (2,3,4) 00:14:885(2,3,4) only fixed
00:08:507 (3) - definetely dont' stack this, correct timing is very hard to read without the beat going in the song change. remove circle. and slider end 00:08:507

[Hard]
The beginning is really strange and feels out of beat (mostly because beatplacement of 00:04:019 (2) is just wrong)
Maybe try something like this: http://puu.sh/86ca nice idea. ok .change it
At least fix 00:04:019 (2) and move it to 00:03:783 or 00:03:547
00:44:649 (X) - do NOT leave out this downbeat (just stack a circle or something) ok. add circle

[Insane]
Not bad. Some strange jumps that don't really fit but nothing gamebreaking. If you like how this map flows, just keep it as it is I say.



If you can fix the hitsounds and polish this mapset a bit it will be pretty good. The weird crescendos and the annoyingly loud whistles during KIAI should be fixed though. Use the hitsounds to support what is actually in the song and keep it simple would be my suggestion here.

keep it up and good luck

p3n Thank you for looking at all difficulty and star~☆

[Easy]
- 00:26:696 (2) - Previous 1.62x, confusing for beginning players.
- 00:39:925 (1) - move down 2
- 00:41:815 (2) - move up 2, little nicer distance snapping
- 01:21:027 (1,2,3) - move 2 to left <
- 01:23:389 (1,2) - move 2 to left < to match ^

[Normal]
- 00:23:862 (4) - move left 1 <
- 00:30:476 (3) - move left 1 <
- 00:36:145 (1) - move down 1 v
- 00:38:980 (2,3) - left 1 <
- 00:39:452 (4) - left 1 < up 1 ^

[Hard]
- Nothing

[Insane]
- 00:16:303 (5,6,7,8) - I found this to be the most confusing part of the whole map, 5 (pause) 678 triplet. It's by preference, but as an insane player, I say you could've done something creative instead of a pause part.

Star for good map o/

I wonder what's the difference between normal and this custom soft hitsound ._.

[Insane]
00:24:334 (1) - we can add whistle here to emphasize the gradually decreasing sound effect
00:45:594 (1) - [Nazi] up 1 grid lv4

[Hard]
00:15:594 (2,3) - right 1 grid lv4
00:18:665 (4) - whistle here to keep the "x whistle whistle whistle" flow
00:29:295 (2,3) - spacing of (1,2) is wrong, (2) left 2 grids lv4, (3)left 1 grid
01:11:815 (5) - right 2 grids to maintain spacing

For normal and easy, I suppose the previous mods has finished the spacing mod while the sounding and arrangement sounds good.

Impressive sounding : D

aston wrote:

[Easy]
- 00:26:696 (2) - Previous 1.62x, confusing for beginning players. what? I think Previous 0.81x
- 00:39:925 (1) - move down 2 fixed
- 00:41:815 (2) - move up 2, little nicer distance snapping ^
- 01:21:027 (1,2,3) - move 2 to left < ^
- 01:23:389 (1,2) - move 2 to left < to match ^ ^

[Normal]
- 00:23:862 (4) - move left 1 <
- 00:30:476 (3) - move left 1 <
- 00:36:145 (1) - move down 1 v
- 00:38:980 (2,3) - left 1 <
- 00:39:452 (4) - left 1 < up 1 ^

all fixed

[Hard]
- Nothing

[Insane]
- 00:16:303 (5,6,7,8) - I found this to be the most confusing part of the whole map, 5 (pause) 678 triplet. It's by preference, but as an insane player, I say you could've done something creative instead of a pause part. ok. remake it

Star for good map o/

aston Thanks for mod and Star~☆

wmfchris wrote:

I wonder what's the difference between normal and this custom soft hitsound ._. I got a wrong custom hitsound. I correct all my maps

[Insane]
00:24:334 (1) - we can add whistle here to emphasize the gradually decreasing sound effect ok. fixed
00:45:594 (1) - [Nazi] up 1 grid lv4 fixed

[Hard]
00:15:594 (2,3) - right 1 grid lv4 sorry, no change. because different from 00:16:775 (5,6)
00:18:665 (4) - whistle here to keep the "x whistle whistle whistle" flow ok. fixed
00:29:295 (2,3) - spacing of (1,2) is wrong, (2) left 2 grids lv4, (3)left 1 grid ^
01:11:815 (5) - right 2 grids to maintain spacing ^

For normal and easy, I suppose the previous mods has finished the spacing mod while the sounding and arrangement sounds good.

Impressive sounding : D

wmfchris Thanks for mod~

hi-

mod初心者なので全て提案で気に入ったのがあれば使ってくださいー
[Easy]
00:12:996 (3) - easyであまりスタックは使わないほうがいいと思います
00:35:673 (4) - ＾
01:08:271 (1) - 終点にclap？
[normal]
01:02:130 (5) - clap追加
01:06:854 (2) - 提案です　http://puu.sh/8ov6
[insane]
00:52:681 (7) - 少し音が急に下がりすぎて驚きます
01:02:130 (5) - スライダーの始点にclap
01:17:248 (2) - clap追加

下手modですみませんー；；がんばってください！

SakiK wrote:

hi-

mod初心者なので全て提案で気に入ったのがあれば使ってくださいー
[Easy]
00:12:996 (3) - easyであまりスタックは使わないほうがいいと思います fixed~
00:35:673 (4) - ＾ ^
01:08:271 (1) - 終点にclap？ no clap ><
[normal]
01:02:130 (5) - clap追加 fixed
01:06:854 (2) - 提案です　http://puu.sh/8ov6 キックスライダーはちょっと難しくなってしまいますので変更無しで><
[insane]
00:52:681 (7) - 少し音が急に下がりすぎて驚きます　一応わざとなんですが、10%ボリューム上げました。その後のボリュームも調整しました。
01:02:130 (5) - スライダーの始点にclap ごめんなさい、no change
01:17:248 (2) - clap追加　^

下手modですみませんー；；がんばってください！

SakiKさん mod&Star~☆ ありがとうございました～ がんばります

Hello. Mod this beatmap. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/36687

• ~Insane~
  
  00:29:531 (7) - Move this one grid up. After that, fix the spacing.

That's the best I can do.
Thank you and good luck.

kokoroanime wrote:

Hello. Mod this beatmap. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/36687 yes. i do mod.

• ~Insane~
  
  00:29:531 (7) - Move this one grid up. After that, fix the spacing. fixed

That's the best I can do.
Thank you and good luck.

kokoroanime Thanks for mod

request from my queue

[easy]
00:19:610 (4) - NC
01:12:996 (5) - remove whistle at the end

[nomal]
00:31:893 (3) - add clap at the end
01:23:626 (1) - remove NC?

[hard]
00:29:767 (4,5) - looks not good
01:17:011 (4) - clap instead of whistle

[insane]
00:38:507 (2) - clap at the beginning
00:45:594 (1) - touch HP Bar
01:02:130 (5) - clap
01:23:389 (1) - looks not good

No_Gu wrote:

request from my queue

[easy]
00:19:610 (4) - NC fixed
01:12:996 (5) - remove whistle at the end no change

[nomal]
00:31:893 (3) - add clap at the end no change
01:23:626 (1) - remove NC? ^

[hard]
00:29:767 (4,5) - looks not good I don't think so. no change
01:17:011 (4) - clap instead of whistle change it

[insane]
00:38:507 (2) - clap at the beginning no change
00:45:594 (1) - touch HP Bar change it
01:02:130 (5) - clap no change
01:23:389 (1) - looks not good i don't think so

No_Gu Thanks for mod

Beelzebub song~x3

[Easy]

Nice diff~

[Normal]

00:28:114 (3) - Don't mix clap and whistle. Seems weird.
01:20:791 (4) - NC? (if you accept this,RNC at 01:21:500)
Overall nice~

[Hard]

01:21:027 (7,1) - Suddenly volume decrease from 90% -> 40%... I think its a bit strange.
Overall nice~

[Insane]

00:21:736 (4) - Stack it properly
Overall nice~

Your map is really good~
Take my star please >w<~
Good luck~

M a n a wrote:

Beelzebub song~x3 yeah~ :3

[Easy]

Nice diff~ thanks~

[Normal]

00:28:114 (3) - Don't mix clap and whistle. Seems weird. remove clap. fixed
01:20:791 (4) - NC? (if you accept this,RNC at 01:21:500) sorry, no change
Overall nice~

[Hard]

01:21:027 (7,1) - Suddenly volume decrease from 90% -> 40%... I think its a bit strange. ok. fixed
Overall nice~

[Insane]

00:21:736 (4) - Stack it properly fixed
Overall nice~

Your map is really good~
Take my star please >w<~
Good luck~

M a n a Thanks for mod and star >w<

new modder I'll be rooting for you.

>keimntn

Thanks Star~　☆

Hello!~
Here's some of my suggestions (mods inside the spoilerbox)

Good map!~

M4M~
[General]

1. offset 2140
   Fix it after you look through my modding, because I use 2130 to mod your map, and when you fix the offset, resnap the note and the essential timing like "kiai time"
2. The beginning of the song obatin enough time for player to prepare, so the 1s lead-in is useless IMO
3. The whistle song's effect makes it a little uncomfortable, anyway, it's not a big issue.......Orz

[Easy]

1. 00:14:885 (2) - Doesn't make sense, you can reverse 00:16:303 (3) and 00:14:885 (2)
   

[Normal]

1. Nothing QAQ

[Hard]

1. 00:09:925 (4) - make a jump here
2. 00:11:815 (4) - ^
3. 00:40:161 - add note and cover the 00:39:925 (1)
4. 00:40:397 (2) - remove it
5. 00:42:051 - add note and overlap the 00:41:815 (3)
6. 01:15:830 (1) - shoter this slider, and end at 01:16:185, then add a note at 01:16:303, just my opinion, it will play more authentic

[Insane]

1. Smooth playing in your insane! I like it and find nothing

Good luck~ and I'll give you a star when I get a KD

Kirino Kousaka wrote:

Hello!~
Here's some of my suggestions (mods inside the spoilerbox)

SPOILER

[Easy]
Looks Good~ ^.^

[Normal]
00:24:098 (4) - Put a "clap" on the reverse arrow and end of this slider. sorry, no clap. I actually put that first, but I remove it
01:20:791 - Replace all "whistle" 's into "clap" 's form this point until "01:24:807" sorry, no change. but I think that the hearing improved because I changed sound

That's all for this diff :3

[Hard]
00:21:736 - Add a hitcircle here? (as shown on the following pic.) sorry, >< no change.

00:22:681 - ^


That's all for this diff :3


[Insane]
Looks Good~ ^.^

Good map!~

Kirino Kousaka Thanks for mod~

LoliSora wrote:

M4M~
[General]

1. offset 2140
   Fix it after you look through my modding, because I use 2130 to mod your map, and when you fix the offset, resnap the note and the essential timing like "kiai time" sorry, no change ><
2. The beginning of the song obatin enough time for player to prepare, so the 1s lead-in is useless IMO I think that I am necessary
3. The whistle song's effect makes it a little uncomfortable, anyway, it's not a big issue.......Orz ok! I changed a whistle into a gentle sound Please tell me if there is other good sound

[Easy]

1. 00:14:885 (2) - Doesn't make sense, you can reverse 00:16:303 (3) and 00:14:885 (2) ok. change it
   

[Normal]

1. Nothing QAQ

[Hard]

1. 00:09:925 (4) - make a jump here ok. fixed
2. 00:11:815 (4) - ^ ^
3. 00:40:161 - add note and cover the 00:39:925 (1) sorry, no change><
4. 00:40:397 (2) - remove it ^
5. 00:42:051 - add note and overlap the 00:41:815 (3) ^
6. 01:15:830 (1) - shoter this slider, and end at 01:16:185, then add a note at 01:16:303, just my opinion, it will play more authentic sorry, good idea but It is not preferable for only this part to change rhythm ><

[Insane]

1. Smooth playing in your insane! I like it and find nothing

Good luck~ and I'll give you a star when I get a KD

LoliSora Thanks for mod & Star~ ☆

Hi. Kosiga

Request from my modding (Quite sorry for one week's delay...)


Easy moe


Normal

1. 00:38:035 (1,2,3,4) - I will be scary of this little 1/2 stream in an Normal
2. 01:23:862 (2) - Try to put tail near to the center due to the spinner followed

Hard

1. 00:45:122 (3,4,5) - Making Vol. up doesn't sound well imo,especially (5) has a normalfinish.
2. 01:19:138 (5) - Clap.
3. 01:20:082 (2) - ^

Insane

1. 00:24:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - Curve ?
2. 00:26:696 (1) - Ctrl + R ?
3. 00:53:153 (1) - Too noisy here. Vocal is so soft T.T
4. 01:17:248 (2,4) - Clap
6. 01:19:138 (2,4) - ^

Sorry for lazy mod because I am so upset now ...

S h i o n wrote:

:) Hi. Kosiga

Request from my modding (Quite sorry for one week's delay...)


Easy moe moe? lol


Normal

1. 00:38:035 (1,2,3,4) - I will be scary of this little 1/2 stream in an Normal sorry, no change ><
2. 01:23:862 (2) - Try to put tail near to the center due to the spinner followed ok. fixed

Hard

1. 00:45:122 (3,4,5) - Making Vol. up doesn't sound well imo,especially (5) has a normalfinish. volume down. and remove (5) finish
2. 01:19:138 (5) - Clap. fixed
3. 01:20:082 (2) - ^ ^

Insane

1. 00:24:334 (1,2,3,4,5) - Curve ? more curve ? ok.. fixed!
2. 00:26:696 (1) - Ctrl + R ? sorry, no change
3. 00:53:153 (1) - Too noisy here. Vocal is so soft T.T change soft hitsound.(same hard)
4. 01:17:248 (2,4) - Clap fixed
6. 01:19:138 (2,4) - ^ ^

Sorry for lazy mod because I am so upset now ...

S h i o n Thanks for mod & star ~ ☆

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions




It's really a nice map, just call me back when you done changes and I could bubble it

Breeze wrote:

Red : Unrankable/error staff
Blue : Important things that I think you'd better fix
Black : Just suggestions

General

1. 0 byte custom hitsound is unrankable, if you want a blank sliderslide sound, use this one thank you >w<
   [attachment=1:293b6]soft-sliderslide.rar[/attachment:293b6]

Timing

1. I've got a offset : 2142 (+12), yours are early. After timing change, remebered to resnap all notes and move timing sections

ok~ fixed

Hard

1. 01:00:724 (1) - Slider path would be hidden when you get 300 while playing, it's better to move the slider's path out of that area
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oh... Pattern change it

It's really a nice map, just call me back when you done changes and I could bubble it

Breeze Thanks you for mod ~

OK, bubbled

Breeze wrote:

OK, bubbled

Thank you ><

Looks pretty good to me.

Ranked~

1st ranked map~

good job~

ＲＡＮＫおめでとう：Ｄ

おめでとう~ nice song!

Congratulations!

osuplayer111 wrote:

Looks pretty good to me.

Ranked~

Thank you >< !!!

and Thank you everyone

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