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Spiritsoulxx - Bad Apple!!

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Topic Starter
Tony
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 10 decembrie 2011 at 20:35:47

Artist: Spiritsoulxx
Title: Bad Apple!!
Source: Touhou
Tags: IceBeam wmfchris aabc271
BPM: 138
Filesize: 6305kb
Play Time: 03:29
Difficulties Available:
  1. Beamsy (1,75 stars, 164 notes)
  2. Hard (4,83 stars, 437 notes)
  3. Normal (3,42 stars, 257 notes)
  4. Taiko Collab (4,89 stars, 1047 notes)
Download: Spiritsoulxx - Bad Apple!!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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my 4th map..even though it was submitted first :p
I decided to make this map without an Insane diff
Thank you IceBeam, wmfchriss and aabc271 for the awesome guest diffs
Thank you TristanShi and Vass_Bass for the awesome background images :3
Redownload if downloaded before 10.12.2011

Mapset:
IceBeam's Easy: 100%
Normal : 100%
Hard: 100%
Taiko Collab : 100%
djyellow22
Hi hi, this is really good I'll say ;3 Don't notice anything wrong!

Star! ^^
threenash
star~
Puskin
Star :D
florianu
Very good beatmap
Nactra
I loooooove that spinner.
[Light]
Cosmetic
Try ending 1:04 kiai section @ 1:17:360 for full effect.

Playability
(1:19:860) to (1:33) - this break is too long given the size of the map. this is mad boring.
you might want to map from 1:28:110.

[Heavy]
Cosmetic
1:35 - 1:59
'sup 42-combo pattern ? you have to split it.
you could add new combos on:
(13) (01:43:361)
(24) (01:52:361)
(34) (01:56:111)

Awesome overall. Star
Topic Starter
Tony
merci beaucoup for the advice!
Andrea
Revived.
vladutz65
star
warwolf
star
LimeGreenTeknii
Great work!
Sekai
nice map
star~
:D
Raimon
STAR!! Like the skin :D
the beatmap will be better if it had a normal or insane :)
ReVeNg3r
STAR! ;) xd
Giolink
Very nice!Star!
HellDawn
N1. :D
Numbers 596108
hi~hi~ :D

May i have a taiko difficulty?
peppercatastrop
gogogo
Shiki
star~ :)

Puskin's hard
03:23:292 (11) - new combo?
OzzyOzrock

Numbers 596108 wrote:

hi~hi~ :D

May i have a taiko difficulty?
ASDFDSADFASDFADFASDF Ninja'd by so much time lolol
ouranhshc
i don't think the artist is masayoshi minoshima, the one that he/she did is this one: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=kxZsc_uO ... re=related
Topic Starter
Tony
changed~
Aoitenshi
Somehow i can't download this map =(
Anonymus_old
Like it.
Song's good and well mapped.
Would've loved if there'd be a sb.

But anyway, you have one star more. :)
Mik-ey
*Star*
Piotrekol
omg star ofc.
Hinanawi-sama
i cannot believe someone is doing the orchestra edition, IT KICKS ASS!


star :D
Vass_Bass
+ Diff
and starr
aabc271
Taiko collab has finished :)
Please check, thanks ~

Download: SpiritSoulxx - Bad Apple (Orchestra Edition) (Tonoicutzu) [Taiko Collab].osu
Topic Starter
Tony
yuhuu
TristanShi
I think the song name should be "Bad Apple!!"
TS@Taiko Background Rescue Team

Topic Starter
Tony
thanks alot :D
Hellzero
Easy
01:53:726 - 02:20:248 really too many finish -_-
02:28:944 (2) - spacing
02:46:770 (2) - ^
00:43:292 - 01:24:161 kiai
02:06:770 - 02:47:639 kiai

Normal
00:15:466 (1) - add finish?
00:18:074 (4) - add clap?
00:21:552 (4,4) - ^
00:17:205 (3,4) - (nazi) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/87715
00:38:074 (3) - (nazi) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/87712


Vass
00:26:226 (2) - snap with 0.0x spacing (without grid snap)
00:27:096 (4) - ^
02:35:466 (6) - look better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/87710
02:37:217 (10) - ^
03:16:130 (1) - snap with 0.0x spacing (without grid snap)
03:21:782 (2) - ^
03:27:434 (3) - 1 grid up
03:26:564 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -correct spacing
Nice hitsounds~

Expert
02:05:900 (4) - (nazi) move to centre? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/87706
03:03:726 (1) - snap with 0.0x spacing (without grid snap)
Topic Starter
Tony

Hellzero wrote:

Easy
01:53:726 - 02:20:248 really too many finish -_-
02:28:944 (2) - spacing
02:46:770 (2) - ^
00:43:292 - 01:24:161 kiai
02:06:770 - 02:47:639 kiai
//diff deleted :(

Normal
00:15:466 (1) - add finish? added
00:18:074 (4) - add clap? no
00:21:552 (4,4) - ^no
00:17:205 (3,4) - (nazi) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/87715 no
00:38:074 (3) - (nazi) http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/87712 no


Vass
00:26:226 (2) - snap with 0.0x spacing (without grid snap)
00:27:096 (4) - ^
02:35:466 (6) - look better http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/87710
02:37:217 (10) - ^
03:16:130 (1) - snap with 0.0x spacing (without grid snap)
03:21:782 (2) - ^
03:27:434 (3) - 1 grid up
03:26:564 (1,2,3,1,2,3) -correct spacing
Nice hitsounds~

Expert
02:05:900 (4) - (nazi) move to centre? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/87706 fixed
03:03:726 (1) - snap with 0.0x spacing (without grid snap) fixed
thanks <3
IceBeam
Armin
[General]

*If I were you, I'd add another Background D: What about this or this?. If you don't want to change anything, at least convert .png to .jpeg in order to reduce its weight (converted for you: http://www.uptiki.com/images/lo6l5fxug15hzqx3e8ux.jpg)
*There are two osb, remove one of them (or both XD) [Yeah I know about the history of .osb files, but please check this topic and read the bold line!

[Beamsy]
long time no see

01:12:857 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I'd make something else for this pattern, it's very boring ;; for example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/99205 etc etc
01:38:944 (1) - remove this new combo; I usually don't reccomend in easier difficulties new combos on stacks

[Normal]

02:24:596 (3) - I didn't expect a 1/1 long slider here but something like this 02:22:422 (1)

Clean difficulty

[Taiko Collab]

This difficulty starts at the same time of [Vass]'s difficulty. Fix it please ><

[Vass]

00:51:770 (4,5) - Oh no, please. Don't use this anti-jump.
00:25:683 (4,5) - Quite unexpected stack; make something like this: it would compensate the little jump on (4) too.
03:08:956 (6) - New combo here instead of here 03:09:390 (1), maybe

[Expert]

Recalculate Sliders' Lenghts, some of them are not snapped correctly with ticks (due to an old BPM change or slidertick rate, etc) [To make it automatically: Timing > Recalculate Slider Lenghts]
03:22:857 (1,1) - Uh..I can understand what are you trying to do. But this actually kill map's flow in my opinion. Can you add a hitcircle here 03:23:074 (x) and here 03:23:292 (x) (by moving the next spinner 03:23:400 (1) 1/4 forward and making it 1/4 BPM shorter)

That's all.
Topic Starter
Tony

Armin wrote:

[General]

*If I were you, I'd add another Background D: What about this or this?. If you don't want to change anything, at least convert .png to .jpeg in order to reduce its weight (converted for you: http://www.uptiki.com/images/lo6l5fxug15hzqx3e8ux.jpg) thanks for converting. i don't like those black and white images :(
*There are two osb, remove one of them (or both XD) [Yeah I know about the history of .osb files, but please check this topic and read the bold line! lol'd :O


[Normal]

02:24:596 (3) - I didn't expect a 1/1 long slider here but something like this 02:22:422 (1)

Clean difficulty

[Expert]

Recalculate Sliders' Lenghts, some of them are not snapped correctly with ticks (due to an old BPM change or slidertick rate, etc) [To make it automatically: Timing > Recalculate Slider Lenghts]
03:22:857 (1,1) - Uh..I can understand what are you trying to do. But this actually kill map's flow in my opinion. Can you add a hitcircle here 03:23:074 (x) and here 03:23:292 (x) (by moving the next spinner 03:23:400 (1) 1/4 forward and making it 1/4 BPM shorter)
//all fixed ~
That's all.
thank you :)
IceBeam

Armin wrote:

[Beamsy]
long time no see lol :p

01:12:857 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - I'd make something else for this pattern, it's very boring ;; for example: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/99205 etc etc Okay
01:38:944 (1) - remove this new combo; I usually don't reccomend in easier difficulties new combos on stacks Okay
ty ;)

Download: SpiritSoulxx - Bad Apple!! (Orchestra Edition) (Tonoicutzu) [Beamsy].osu
Kitsuneko
hi Tonoicutzu ;)
as your request from queue


[General]
found not error
Good hitsounds yeah!


[Beamsy]
has so long combo as "Easy" diff.
I feel good half length.
However, your combos length is beautiful also.
You can choose the best way.


[Normal]
found not error in my opinion.


[Vass]
00:51:770 (4) - confusing place. move to x:256 y:68 ?


[Expert]
01:10:683 (1) - Insufficient length.
01:18:074 (2) - ^
01:38:944 (1) - ^


nice mapset!
good luck :oops:
star here ☆
Topic Starter
Tony

Kitsuneko wrote:

hi Tonoicutzu ;)
as your request from queue


[General]
found not error
Good hitsounds yeah!

[Normal]
found not error in my opinion.

[Expert]
01:10:683 (1) - Insufficient length.
01:18:074 (2) - ^
01:38:944 (1) - ^
all fixed

nice mapset!
good luck :oops:
star here ☆
thanks :)
Athyrionjh
I like it - very nice :D
Daiguren
TOO MANY apples here :p

General
offset 1551

Beamsy
00:18:944 (3) - new combo
00:23:292 (X) - add a circle here
00:25:900 (4) - new combo
00:27:639 (x) - add a circle here
00:39:813 (4) - new combo
00:46:770 (4) - ^
00:53:726 (4) - ^
00:59:813 (4) - ^
01:05:900 (3) - ^
01:07:639 (5) - ^
01:09:379 (7) - ^
01:14:596 (6) - ^
01:16:335 (9) - ^
01:42:422 (5) - ^
01:56:335 (4) - ^
02:03:292 (5) - ^

Normal
fine

Vass
00:16:335 (2) - make every hit with normal-hitwhistle
00:19:811 (2) - ^
02:31:986 (3) - Scraping the HP bar
02:35:464 (6,7) - what's this?! It's a big bug , you must fix it up
03:09:390 (1) - remove whistle, it sounds really strange

Expert
fine

unh...maybe there are too many Bad apple ,I feel very same there maps :p
anyway , It's a good map ,
star~ :)
Vass_Bass
fixed some

Vass
00:16:335 (2) - make every hit with normal-hitwhistle
00:19:811 (2) - ^
02:31:986 (3) - Scraping the HP bar
02:35:464 (6,7) - what's this?! It's a big bug , you must fix it up
03:09:390 (1) - remove whistle, it sounds really strange
stupid mod -_-

Download: SpiritSoulxx - Bad Apple!! (Orchestra Edition) (Tonoicutzu) [Vass].osu
Neko_Lover
Great map :)
PsychoSkill
star ^^
Ishmon
Very nice map heres a Star ^_^
Raging Bull
Hi.

General:
Maybe at Touhou to tags? I think you should make a hard. Vass' map plays like an insane.

Beamsy:
00:57:205 - Start kiai here?
01:14:596 (6) - New combo?
01:16:335 (9) - ^?
02:20:683 - Start kiai here?
Map to 03:29:379?

Normal:
00:57:205 - Start kiai here?
02:20:683 - Start kiai here?
Map to 03:29:379?

Vass:
-1 AR? Big jump from normal to this.
00:09:052 - You can't silence notes. Only spinner ends. Raise the volume more.
00:10:792 - ^
00:39:813 (1,2,3) - Reverse selection?
02:37:217 - Do you need that uninherited timing section? Seems unnecessary. Please remove it.
02:46:782 (3) - Unsnapped note.

Expert:
01:02:531 (2) - One grid down, two grid right? (Nazi)
01:38:944 - 01:51:770 - Since this is an expert, I think you should remap this part. It seems way too easy. You can map it similar to the beginning. Up to you.

Yay bad apple!! Good luck!
wcx19911123
sorry for the delay

[Beamsy]
00:15:466 (1) - symmetrical
01:38:074 (1,2,3) - unnecessary , just stack is ok

[Normal]
02:06:770 (1,2) - to slider

[Vass]
00:36:335 (1,2) - stack
01:53:726 (4,5) - ^
03:17:869 (1,2) - not a line

[Expert]
00:24:922 - circle
01:38:509 (2) - suggest put it x:256 y:346

nice song ~
Topic Starter
Tony
normal and expert fixed.
waiting for others to fix. thanks
pekos
:)
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