Nobunaga - Sweet Devil · forum

Kochiya Sanae

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Kochiya Sanae 2010-11-10T04:40:36+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年12月6日 at 14:59:25

Artist: Nobunaga
Title: Sweet Devil
Source: Nico Nico Douga
Tags: Hatsune Miku Verdisphena HachioujiP wakamura
BPM: 132
Filesize: 14520kb
Play Time: 02:38
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.55 stars, 111 notes)
Hard (4.88 stars, 432 notes)
Insane (5 stars, 491 notes)
Verdi's Normal (2.78 stars, 167 notes)

Download: Nobunaga - Sweet Devil
Download: Nobunaga - Sweet Devil (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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thanks enoch imouto help me finish hard diff lol
plz redownload after 6th November

Last edited by Kochiya Sanae 2010-12-06T07:29:09+00:00, edited 11 times in total.

Kami

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Kami 2010-11-10T13:29:43+00:00

>.<

Verdisphena

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Verdisphena 2010-11-10T20:21:15+00:00

Can make a normal? *-*
Edit: Are you sure this vercion is of Hatsune Miku? ;_;

Kochiya Sanae

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Kochiya Sanae 2010-11-11T01:36:00+00:00

sure.

I think this is miku's song o.o

Kochiya Sanae

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Kochiya Sanae 2010-11-11T16:48:13+00:00

OMG..i will change the mp3 , this singer is not miku

miku

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miku 2010-11-11T17:01:14+00:00

不是原版..
残念..

图还不错~
star~

Verdisphena

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Verdisphena 2010-11-11T21:20:35+00:00

Kochiya Sanae wrote:
OMG..i will change the mp3 , this singer is not miku

I knew it

Edit: Miku Ver D:

Kochiya Sanae

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Kochiya Sanae 2010-11-12T09:49:19+00:00

I perfer this version
and miku version's BPM is 181.85 . It's awesome

so i think i neednt change the mp3

Verdisphena

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Verdisphena 2010-11-12T19:38:10+00:00

Kochiya Sanae wrote:
I perfer this version
and miku version's BPM is 181.85 . It's awesome
so i think i neednt change the mp3

Ok :3 ~

Verdisphena

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Verdisphena 2010-11-13T21:02:17+00:00

Take ~

Download: Nobunaga - Sweet Devil (Kochiya Sanae) [Verdi's Normal].osu

Download: hitsounds.rar

Kochiya Sanae

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Kochiya Sanae 2010-11-14T05:00:04+00:00

thanks:3

DarkRingSystem

DarkRingSystem 2010-11-15T06:16:32+00:00

nice map
I think you should increase OD

+2 in hard and +1 in Insane .

star.

Kochiya Sanae

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Kochiya Sanae 2010-11-15T06:36:32+00:00

ok:3

CSY the corrupt

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CSY the corrupt 2010-11-16T16:19:50+00:00

Pokie

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Pokie 2010-11-18T06:03:59+00:00

lepidopodus

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lepidopodus 2010-11-18T16:21:53+00:00

Easy
00:12:840 (3) - How about moving 2nd middle point of the slider 2 gird up?
00:46:476 (2) - Clap in return point?
00:47:840 (3) - Clap in the end of the slider?
00:50:567 (5) - Clap?
00:56:476 (1) - Too close to the next note? This is 'Easy' anyway.
01:55:112 (1) - ^
02:02:385 (1) - How about moving this one grid right?
02:38:294 (1) - Remove finish and decrease the volume here?

Verdi's Normal
01:01:931 (4) - How about moving this one grid left?
01:31:022 (4) - How about moving 1st middle point of the slider 1 gird down?
01:38:749 (5) - How about moving this one grid right & one gird down?
02:11:022 (4,5) - Add finish in the starting point of the slier? (02:11:022 & 02:11:931)

Hard
00:05:113 (6) - Add clap like 00:03:294 (6)?
00:43:181 (4) - Clap in the starting point of the slier?
00:45:567 ~ 00:57:840 - Add some hitsound (maybe claps?) as previous part?
01:00:113 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - O O O OOO O?
01:58:294 (1) - How about moving this one grid left & one grid up?
02:38:294 (1) - Remove finish and decrease the volume here?

Insane
00:21:135 (6) - I think keeping distance would be better for these? (It's slighty longer.)
00:46:931 (9) - Clap in the starting point of the slier?
00:50:567 (8) - ^
00:55:794 (6) - How about circle here, and slider from 00:55:908 to 00:56:249?
01:49:658 (1,2,3,4,5) - I just felt that this is kinda disorganized?
01:50:794 (1) - Remove new combo here and set it in 01:51:022 (2)? And I think it's better to keep jump between 01:50:567 (5) and this.
01:53:976 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:00:567 (1) - Remove new combo here and set it in 02:00:340 (6)?
02:35:567 (4) - Remove whistle from the start of the slider...
02:36:022 (5) - ...and put whistle in the start of this slider?
02:41:022 (1) - Remove finish and decrease the volume here?

Ok I admit. I think I made so many unneeded suggestions. (...and unfortunatly I'm not good at modding jump maps.)

Kochiya Sanae

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Kochiya Sanae 2010-11-18T16:41:40+00:00

thanks your modding ,i ll fix it

Mianki

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Mianki 2010-11-18T18:53:05+00:00

Easy:

01:41:931 (4) This would look better if it'd point straight down (or up)

Normal:

00:03:749 (3.4) Place these right under 1 and 2 notes
00:50:567 (2.3.4.5) Distance snap these evenly

Hard:

00:05:113 (4) Clap to the first hit of the slider?
00:52:385 Add slider which ends at 00:52:613?
01:14:203 (2) Change this slider so that it points straight to right and make there a jump. The sound in song comes first at left and then right, so the sliders would copy that (use headphones so you'll understand

)

SPOILER

01:57:385 (6.7.8.9.10) This stream looks a bit ugly, try to make it look better?

Insane:

00:43:181 (6.7) Move these both 1 grid down, so the stream is symmetrical
02:21:363 (10) 1 grid down, ^

Nice map ^^
Star~

Kochiya Sanae

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Kochiya Sanae 2010-11-19T05:15:28+00:00

@lepidopodus: insane- 01:50:794 (1) i changed but not ur suggestion

@Mianki: hard 01:14:203 (2) idont think so ,buz it will make hard diff very haaaaaaaaaaaard

all fixed thanks

Licnect

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Licnect 2010-11-19T09:46:47+00:00

HI ~英文有點差用中文ok吧?><
poor modding~

[Overall]
offset 1948
remove .osb
Enable countdown 勾掉因為你有影片不需要 3.2.1 GO
建議:
音效有點太大聲尤其是Normal的clap

像是Hard diff的一開始的音效就蠻剛好的 (滿格在扣4格的音量
或是你可以參考看看我的test音效 (soft配基本鼓聲

[Easy]
02:41:817 spinner 結束點在這邊感覺比較合

[Verdi's Normal]
looks good

[Hard]
02:41:817 spinner 結束點在這邊感覺比較合

[Insane]
00:03:200 add note?
00:08:976 [4.5] 往下一格
00:22:158 [2.3] 往右+上一格
02:41:817 spinner 結束點在這邊感覺比較合

Good map and song
star~

Download: test.rar

Kochiya Sanae

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Kochiya Sanae 2010-11-19T10:28:58+00:00

fixed

Kotone

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Kotone 2010-11-19T11:21:42+00:00

General
add 'Verdisphena' to tag
'sweet devil.flv'這個壓一下？
'background.jpg' 的大小是960*768,把這個弄成1024*768
刪掉.osb 然後 full sub.

Easy
02:35:113(1) - slider最後那改成finish 調低音量到75%

Normal
remove countdown
00:24:203(1) - change clap to finish
00:47:385(3,4) - ugly
01:03:749(1) - ^
01:54:658(1,2,3,4) - Hard to read for Normal
02:11:022(1) - add finish
02:35:113(1) - change clap to finish,maybe volume75%

Hard

remove countdown
02:41:931(1) - 縮短到上一條藍線

Insane

remove countdown
02:35:113(1) - slider最後那改成finish 調低音量

Kochiya Sanae

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Kochiya Sanae 2010-11-19T12:05:08+00:00

fixed

wmfchris

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wmfchris 2010-11-19T14:27:31+00:00

[Insane]
-0:14:668, 0:58:304 off vocal+strange pattern + spacing
0:31:486 (3) left 1 grid
1:02:282 (7,1) right 1 grid

[hard]
0:58:759 (3,4) down 1 grid
2:13:532 (3) right+down 1 grid?

[Normal]
0:26:032 (4) stack this on ending of (2)

nice, star~

Kochiya Sanae

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Kochiya Sanae 2010-11-19T14:51:03+00:00

fixed

Verdisphena

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Verdisphena 2010-11-19T15:51:22+00:00

All fixed

Download: Nobunaga - Sweet Devil (Kochiya Sanae) [Verdi's Normal].osu

Kochiya Sanae

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Kochiya Sanae 2010-11-20T02:03:46+00:00

Licnect wrote:
或是你可以參考看看我的test音效 (soft配基本鼓聲

i perfer normal hitsounds orz

Last edited by Kochiya Sanae 2010-11-21T14:25:24+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

macttt

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macttt 2010-11-20T13:27:11+00:00

。

Sanzenin Nagi

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Sanzenin Nagi 2010-11-20T13:28:50+00:00

star!

Hakurei Reimu

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Hakurei Reimu 2010-11-20T13:29:52+00:00

Nozomi Kiriya

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Nozomi Kiriya 2010-11-20T13:32:48+00:00

o.o

Selee

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Selee 2010-11-23T16:52:05+00:00

[General]

Source: 8#Prince or HachioujiP (the one you don't use goes into tags. Personally, I prefer using HachioujiP )

Tags: add wakamura (for the video making)? (not sure if Nico Nico Douga should even be in tags..)

Remove countdown in hard?

Same stack leniency?

Kiai end at 02:23:986 in all diff?

[Easy]

01:30:122 (T) - Unused timeline, delete?
01:30:577 (T) -^
02:11:032 (6) - Add greenlines to increase the volume gradually?
02:38:304 (1) - Reduce 10%~20% volume? Or add few more greenline to fade this?

[Verdi's Normal]

00:12:850 (1) - Use N2clap or N-finish rather than silence it?
02:40:122 (3) - I prefer remove 1 reverse here.

[Hard]

00:46:032 (2,3) - Increase spacing?
00:41:032 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Rhythm like this to follow vocal&music?

[Insane]

01:51:259 (4,5) - Spacing or just stack 4?

Awesome, really well-done map

Last edited by Selee 2010-11-23T20:47:07+00:00, edited 2 times in total.

Verdisphena

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Verdisphena 2010-11-23T19:20:28+00:00

Selee wrote:
[Verdi's Normal]

00:12:850 (1) - Use N2clap or N-finish rather than silence it? No
02:40:122 (3) - I prefer remove 1 reverse here. No

Kochiya Sanae

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Kochiya Sanae 2010-11-24T02:09:02+00:00

fixed sth

kanpakyin

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kanpakyin 2010-11-28T14:35:17+00:00

Here my mod
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Red=I think you should fix this
BluE=suggestion only
The major issue are in Bold
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[Easy]
The spacing of this diff is too squeeze.Probably use DS x1.0~1.2 is Better?
00:56:486(x)map something here to instead this spinner?

[Verdi's Normal]
00:56:486(x)map something to substitite this spinner or start the spinner at 00:58:304
01:11:032(1)Remove new combo?
01:12:963(x)start the spinner at 01:13:007
01:31:032(4)Draw this slider more beautiful?
01:40:136(x)This spinner should start at 01:40:577
01:51:032(x)add a note here?
02:40:123(3)Delete 1 reverse?

[Hard]
00:33:532(4-8)Change to stream until 00:32:213
00:44:895(5)Horizontally with (2)?
00:46:941(6)spacing
01:06:342(7)New combo
02:20:804(1-3)random jump
02:29:213(1)spacing

Insane
HP-1
01:02:395(1)remove new combo
01:02:850(2)New combo here
01:38:007(7)^
01:42:850(7)^
01:58:304(1)Don't sudden change the speed if you are not mention it.So,use BPMx1 here
02:18:304(1-6)Random Jump!!
02:23:986(x)the sound is too soft.volume at lease +1

Kochiya Sanae

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Kochiya Sanae 2010-11-28T16:23:17+00:00

fix sth

Verdisphena

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Verdisphena 2010-11-28T18:24:22+00:00

kanpakyin wrote:
[Verdi's Normal]
00:56:486(x)map something to substitite this spinner or start the spinner at 00:58:304 No
01:11:032(1)Remove new combo? No
01:12:963(x)start the spinner at 01:13:007 No
01:31:032(4)Draw this slider more beautiful?No
01:40:136(x)This spinner should start at 01:40:577 No
01:51:032(x)add a note here? No
02:40:123(3)Delete 1 reverse? No >w<

Ksaice

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Ksaice 2010-12-02T14:20:12+00:00

the video too attractive,

everytime fail orz

James2250

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James2250 2010-12-06T05:50:16+00:00

You have a 320kbps mp3, you need to find one between 128-192kbps to be ranked (you might need to adjust timing after)
Try and keep the kiai time the same on all of your difficulties

Easy:
HP is much too high for an Easy, I suggest -2 (at least -1)
00:54:668 (2,1) - would look better if they didn't overlap
01:00:123 (1) - odd not to have a note on the start of kiai
01:58:304 - You don't really need 2 kiai fountains here
02:09:668 (5) - new combo

Verdi's Normal:
You don't really need tick rate 2?
00:23:759 (1) - I wouldn't silence this, it sounds odd
Make last timing section soft so it is almost silent

Hard:
Make HP drain higher? (higher than Easy and Normal)
00:14:668 (1) - could be more interesting for a Hard
00:36:713 (1,2,3,4) - tone jumps down slightly? The song doesn't change dramatically so might surprise people
01:14:668 (3) - add note
01:30:122 (1) - remove new combo
02:27:168 (10) - add note?

Insane:
00:15:274 (3) - add 2 repeats?
00:51:941 (4) - ^
00:58:873 (3) - ^
01:39:441 (1,2,3,4) - odd spacing
01:49:668 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ^ (make the spacing on 1 like the others)
01:50:804 (1,2) - switch new combo
02:41:032 (1) - kind of short for the very end of the map, try and map it a different way?

Pretty nicely done maps
Have a star~

Kochiya Sanae

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Kochiya Sanae 2010-12-06T06:34:54+00:00

full submit new mp3

Kochiya Sanae

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Kochiya Sanae 2010-12-06T11:41:11+00:00

fixed

Verdisphena

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Verdisphena 2010-12-06T13:22:47+00:00

James2250 wrote:
Verdi's Normal:
You don't really need tick rate 2? Tick rate is fine
00:23:759 (1) - I wouldn't silence this, it sounds odd Ok
Make last timing section soft so it is almost silent Ok

Pretty nicely done maps
Have a star~

Download: Nobunaga - Sweet Devil (Kochiya Sanae) [Verdi's Normal].osu

Curisu

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Curisu 2010-12-06T14:28:45+00:00

触姐我爱死你了~~~~~~Nyan和Sweet Devil我一直就想要这两张map

速度star

Aria

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Aria 2010-12-07T20:31:45+00:00