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Verdisphena
Topic Starter
Kochiya Sanae
thanks:3
DarkRingSystem
:) nice map
I think you should increase OD

+2 in hard and +1 in Insane .

star.
Topic Starter
Kochiya Sanae
ok:3
CSY the corrupt
8-)
Pokie
:o
lepidopodus
Easy
00:12:840 (3) - How about moving 2nd middle point of the slider 2 gird up?
00:46:476 (2) - Clap in return point?
00:47:840 (3) - Clap in the end of the slider?
00:50:567 (5) - Clap?
00:56:476 (1) - Too close to the next note? This is 'Easy' anyway.
01:55:112 (1) - ^
02:02:385 (1) - How about moving this one grid right?
02:38:294 (1) - Remove finish and decrease the volume here?

Verdi's Normal
01:01:931 (4) - How about moving this one grid left?
01:31:022 (4) - How about moving 1st middle point of the slider 1 gird down?
01:38:749 (5) - How about moving this one grid right & one gird down?
02:11:022 (4,5) - Add finish in the starting point of the slier? (02:11:022 & 02:11:931)

Hard
00:05:113 (6) - Add clap like 00:03:294 (6)?
00:43:181 (4) - Clap in the starting point of the slier?
00:45:567 ~ 00:57:840 - Add some hitsound (maybe claps?) as previous part?
01:00:113 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - O O O OOO O?
01:58:294 (1) - How about moving this one grid left & one grid up?
02:38:294 (1) - Remove finish and decrease the volume here?

Insane
00:21:135 (6) - I think keeping distance would be better for these? (It's slighty longer.)
00:46:931 (9) - Clap in the starting point of the slier?
00:50:567 (8) - ^
00:55:794 (6) - How about circle here, and slider from 00:55:908 to 00:56:249?
01:49:658 (1,2,3,4,5) - I just felt that this is kinda disorganized?
01:50:794 (1) - Remove new combo here and set it in 01:51:022 (2)? And I think it's better to keep jump between 01:50:567 (5) and this.
01:53:976 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:00:567 (1) - Remove new combo here and set it in 02:00:340 (6)?
02:35:567 (4) - Remove whistle from the start of the slider...
02:36:022 (5) - ...and put whistle in the start of this slider?
02:41:022 (1) - Remove finish and decrease the volume here?

Ok I admit. I think I made so many unneeded suggestions. (...and unfortunatly I'm not good at modding jump maps.)
Topic Starter
Kochiya Sanae
thanks your modding ,i ll fix it ;)
Mianki
Easy:

01:41:931 (4) This would look better if it'd point straight down (or up)


Normal:

00:03:749 (3.4) Place these right under 1 and 2 notes
00:50:567 (2.3.4.5) Distance snap these evenly


Hard:

00:05:113 (4) Clap to the first hit of the slider?
00:52:385 Add slider which ends at 00:52:613?
01:14:203 (2) Change this slider so that it points straight to right and make there a jump. The sound in song comes first at left and then right, so the sliders would copy that (use headphones so you'll understand :D)01:57:385 (6.7.8.9.10) This stream looks a bit ugly, try to make it look better?


Insane:

00:43:181 (6.7) Move these both 1 grid down, so the stream is symmetrical
02:21:363 (10) 1 grid down, ^

Nice map ^^
Star~
Topic Starter
Kochiya Sanae
@lepidopodus: insane- 01:50:794 (1) i changed but not ur suggestion :P
@Mianki: hard 01:14:203 (2) idont think so ,buz it will make hard diff very haaaaaaaaaaaard :o
all fixed thanks :D
Licnect
HI ~英文有點差 用中文ok吧?><
poor modding~

[Overall]
offset 1948
remove .osb
Enable countdown 勾掉 因為你有影片 不需要 3.2.1 GO
建議:
音效有點太大聲 尤其是Normal的clap :o
像是Hard diff的一開始的音效 就蠻剛好的 (滿格在扣4格的音量
或是你可以參考看看 我的test音效 (soft配基本鼓聲

[Easy]
02:41:817 spinner 結束點在這邊感覺比較合

[Verdi's Normal]
looks good

[Hard]
02:41:817 spinner 結束點在這邊感覺比較合

[Insane]
00:03:200 add note?
00:08:976 [4.5] 往下一格
00:22:158 [2.3] 往右+上一格
02:41:817 spinner 結束點在這邊感覺比較合

Good map and song
star~ :D

Download: test.rar
Topic Starter
Kochiya Sanae
fixed ;)
Kotone
General
add 'Verdisphena' to tag
'sweet devil.flv'這個壓一下?
'background.jpg' 的大小是960*768,把這個弄成1024*768
刪掉.osb 然後 full sub.

Easy
02:35:113(1) - slider最後那改成finish 調低音量到75%

Normal
remove countdown

00:24:203(1) - change clap to finish
00:47:385(3,4) - ugly
01:03:749(1) - ^
01:54:658(1,2,3,4) - Hard to read for Normal
02:11:022(1) - add finish
02:35:113(1) - change clap to finish,maybe volume75%

Hard

remove countdown

02:41:931(1) - 縮短到上一條藍線

Insane

remove countdown

02:35:113(1) - slider最後那改成finish 調低音量
Topic Starter
Kochiya Sanae
fixed :)
wmfchris
[Insane]
-0:14:668, 0:58:304 off vocal+strange pattern + spacing
0:31:486 (3) left 1 grid
1:02:282 (7,1) right 1 grid

[hard]
0:58:759 (3,4) down 1 grid
2:13:532 (3) right+down 1 grid?

[Normal]
0:26:032 (4) stack this on ending of (2)

nice, star~
Topic Starter
Kochiya Sanae
fixed :)
Verdisphena
Topic Starter
Kochiya Sanae

Licnect wrote:

或是你可以參考看看 我的test音效 (soft配基本鼓聲
i perfer normal hitsounds orz
macttt
Sanzenin Nagi
star! :P
Hakurei Reimu
:roll:
Nozomi Kiriya
o.o :?:
Selee
[General]

  • Source: 8#Prince or HachioujiP (the one you don't use goes into tags. Personally, I prefer using HachioujiP )

    Tags: add wakamura (for the video making)? (not sure if Nico Nico Douga should even be in tags..)

    Remove countdown in hard?

    Same stack leniency?

    Kiai end at 02:23:986 in all diff?

[Easy]

  • 01:30:122 (T) - Unused timeline, delete?
    01:30:577 (T) -^
    02:11:032 (6) - Add greenlines to increase the volume gradually?
    02:38:304 (1) - Reduce 10%~20% volume? Or add few more greenline to fade this?

[Verdi's Normal]

  • 00:12:850 (1) - Use N2clap or N-finish rather than silence it?
    02:40:122 (3) - I prefer remove 1 reverse here. :P

[Hard]

  • 00:46:032 (2,3) - Increase spacing?
    00:41:032 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Rhythm like this to follow vocal&music?

[Insane]

  • 01:51:259 (4,5) - Spacing or just stack 4?
Awesome, really well-done map :P
Verdisphena

Selee wrote:

[Verdi's Normal]

  • 00:12:850 (1) - Use N2clap or N-finish rather than silence it? No
    02:40:122 (3) - I prefer remove 1 reverse here. :P No
Topic Starter
Kochiya Sanae
fixed sth :)
kanpakyin
Here my mod
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Red=I think you should fix this
BluE=suggestion only
The major issue are in Bold
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[Easy]
The spacing of this diff is too squeeze.Probably use DS x1.0~1.2 is Better?
00:56:486(x)map something here to instead this spinner?


[Verdi's Normal]
00:56:486(x)map something to substitite this spinner or start the spinner at 00:58:304
01:11:032(1)Remove new combo?
01:12:963(x)start the spinner at 01:13:007
01:31:032(4)Draw this slider more beautiful?
01:40:136(x)This spinner should start at 01:40:577
01:51:032(x)add a note here?
02:40:123(3)Delete 1 reverse?

[Hard]
00:33:532(4-8)Change to stream until 00:32:213
00:44:895(5)Horizontally with (2)?
00:46:941(6)spacing
01:06:342(7)New combo
02:20:804(1-3)random jump
02:29:213(1)spacing

Insane
HP-1
01:02:395(1)remove new combo
01:02:850(2)New combo here
01:38:007(7)^
01:42:850(7)^
01:58:304(1)Don't sudden change the speed if you are not mention it.So,use BPMx1 here
02:18:304(1-6)Random Jump!!
02:23:986(x)the sound is too soft.volume at lease +1
Topic Starter
Kochiya Sanae
fix sth :o
Verdisphena

kanpakyin wrote:

[Verdi's Normal]
00:56:486(x)map something to substitite this spinner or start the spinner at 00:58:304 No
01:11:032(1)Remove new combo? No
01:12:963(x)start the spinner at 01:13:007 No
01:31:032(4)Draw this slider more beautiful?No
01:40:136(x)This spinner should start at 01:40:577 No
01:51:032(x)add a note here? No
02:40:123(3)Delete 1 reverse? No >w<
Ksaice
the video too attractive, :arrow: everytime fail orz :o
James2250
You have a 320kbps mp3, you need to find one between 128-192kbps to be ranked (you might need to adjust timing after)
Try and keep the kiai time the same on all of your difficulties

Easy:
HP is much too high for an Easy, I suggest -2 (at least -1)
00:54:668 (2,1) - would look better if they didn't overlap
01:00:123 (1) - odd not to have a note on the start of kiai
01:58:304 - You don't really need 2 kiai fountains here
02:09:668 (5) - new combo

Verdi's Normal:
You don't really need tick rate 2?
00:23:759 (1) - I wouldn't silence this, it sounds odd
Make last timing section soft so it is almost silent

Hard:
Make HP drain higher? (higher than Easy and Normal)
00:14:668 (1) - could be more interesting for a Hard
00:36:713 (1,2,3,4) - tone jumps down slightly? The song doesn't change dramatically so might surprise people
01:14:668 (3) - add note
01:30:122 (1) - remove new combo
02:27:168 (10) - add note?

Insane:
00:15:274 (3) - add 2 repeats?
00:51:941 (4) - ^
00:58:873 (3) - ^
01:39:441 (1,2,3,4) - odd spacing
01:49:668 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - ^ (make the spacing on 1 like the others)
01:50:804 (1,2) - switch new combo
02:41:032 (1) - kind of short for the very end of the map, try and map it a different way?

Pretty nicely done maps
Have a star~
Topic Starter
Kochiya Sanae
full submit new mp3 :o
Topic Starter
Kochiya Sanae
fixed
Verdisphena

James2250 wrote:

Verdi's Normal:
You don't really need tick rate 2? Tick rate is fine
00:23:759 (1) - I wouldn't silence this, it sounds odd Ok
Make last timing section soft so it is almost silent Ok

Pretty nicely done maps
Have a star~
Download: Nobunaga - Sweet Devil (Kochiya Sanae) [Verdi's Normal].osu
Curisu
触姐我爱死你了~~~~~~Nyan和Sweet Devil我一直就想要这两张map :D

速度star
Aria

yangzd88 wrote:

触姐我爱死你了~~~~~~Nyan和Sweet Devil我一直就想要这两张map :D

速度star
这只能证明你邪恶啊╮(╯_╰)╭
哥哥加油O.O/
kioukiou
Nice map.

Bubbled.
Topic Starter
Kochiya Sanae
thanks kiou :)
Larto
Yeah that's okay
Krisom
Source "Nico Nico Douga" ? Is this really an accurate source :-/?
Topic Starter
Kochiya Sanae
i dont know :o
Aria
Congratulations :)
Krisom

Kochiya Sanae wrote:

i dont know :o
...then next time don't add sources if you're not completely sure it should be there x_x, ask around a bit before doing so.
Meh, it's close to being a nico nico chorus so I guess this one can pass as a source though....
Verdisphena
Congratz? :D
eveless
8-) Congarts
Topic Starter
Kochiya Sanae

eveless wrote:

8-) Congarts
happy birthday ;)
Selee

Selee wrote:

Source: 8#Prince or HachioujiP
I said so ._.
Topic Starter
Kochiya Sanae

Selee wrote:

Selee wrote:

Source: 8#Prince or HachioujiP
I said so ._.
pokie cheat me ._.
Selee
Anyway, fantastic map~
Congrat ^^ :)
Mary-chan
One of my favorite beatmaps :D

btw, I found a hot pic of this song in facebook xD
I set it for my osu, looks good,
u may like it


Topic Starter
Kochiya Sanae
yes<3
Kuuhaku722
>,< kawaii. please make same bm like this.
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