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Buono! - My Boy (TV Size)

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JhnySmthApl
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JhnySmthApl
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on June-15-11 at 10:33:00 PM

Artist: Buono!
Title: MY BOY (TV Size)
Source: Shugo Chara Doki
Tags: Yoru Ran Miki Su animask arken1015
BPM: 206
Filesize: 10740kb
Play Time: 01:24
Difficulties Available:
  1. animask's Boi (4.99 stars, 253 notes)
  2. aru's My Don (4.97 stars, 313 notes)
  3. My Adult (4.75 stars, 207 notes)
  4. My Baby (1.66 stars, 74 notes)
  5. My Kid (4.11 stars, 123 notes)
Download: Buono! - MY BOY (TV Size)
Download: Buono! - MY BOY (TV Size) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Hey~ 1st beatmap made. Song My Boy from Shugo Chara. Feel free to comment or help mod this map

Edit: Specials Thanks to:

animask for his Guest Difficulty
arken1015 (arien666) for the Taiko Difficulty, mp3 and video files
EvianBubble for the new BG image
Everyone helping to get this song ranked
Last edited by JhnySmthApl , edited 137 times in total.
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
roflninja
[normal]
00:12:405 (4) - move forward 1/6 tick
00:20:966 (1) - move forward 3/6 tick
00:26:137 (3) - move forward 1/6 tick
00:29:161 (10) - move forward 2/6 tick
00:36:332 (4) - move forward 1/6 tick
00:38:332 (3) - move back 1/6 tick
00:38:624 (4) - ^
00:42:771 (2) - move forward 2/6 tick
00:46:917 (4) - move back 1/6 tick
00:48:820 (7) - ^
00:56:088 (2) - ^
00:58:772 (3) - move forward 2/6 tick
00:59:893 (1) - move back 1/6 tick
01:01:943 (6) - ^
01:03:112 (1,2,3,4) - ^
01:05:454 (5) - move back 2/6 tick
01:07:503 (1,2) - move back 1/6 tick
01:09:259 (4) - new combo, move back 2/6 tick
01:09:503 (5,6,7) - move back 1/6 tick
01:13:746 (3) - move forward 2/6 tick
01:17:015 (4) - shorten my 1/6 tick

check you spacing, a few parts seem wierd
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
roflninja
all just suggestions

[normal]

00:13:722 (6) - move forward 2/6 ticks (00:13:795
00:14:088 (7) - new combo?
00:14:332 (8) - extend 1/6 tick
00:14:746 (9) - move forward 2/6 to white tick (00:14:820)
00:18:088 (5) - move back 1/6 tick
00:24:185 (9) - ^ and end at 00:24:576
00:27:356 (5) - move forward 2/6 tick to 00:27:454
00:27:746 (6,7) - new combo on one of these?
00:39:795 (5) - move back 1/6 tick
01:00:771 (4) - ^
01:13:210 (2) - spacing/line up with (1)
01:17:503 (5) - move back 1/6 tick
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl
I think I'm going to pass on those ones RN.
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras
Can I nazi? :>
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl
Nazi away mon ami~
Teras
902 posts
Joined October 2009
Teras
Before I even start to mod change BPM and offset to:

BPM: 206,00
Offset:121

And add roflninja to tags on both diffs.

Do these changes in both diffs. And then go to Timing - > Resnap all notes - Yes.
Remember to check through the mao after the resnap so notes won't get placed at wrong tick.

Also. I highly recommend that you map in 1/4 or 1/2 as you should never map in 1/6.

1/2 -> Good for Easy/Normal diffs. 1/4 works too though. But 1/2 makes it easier as a new mapper to "map" it.
1/4 -> Good for Hard/Insane maps. 1/8 works too but it's not recommended unless you're really good and experienced as a mapper.
TsukiAnimeGirl
44 posts
Joined February 2010
TsukiAnimeGirl
I can understand it's your first beatmap so I'll putting some parts that I thought odd.

Normal

0:14:722 between circles 9 and 10 - they aren't in a good distance the player will think that these circles are in the same velocity of circles 6 and 7.
Put circle 10 as new combo a little distant of 9.

0:38:039 I think if you move the circles 2 and 3 just 1 of that snap divisors to left. (If your snap divisor is 1/6, if not put like this) they could be more sincronized to the lyrics.

0:42:868 slider number 2 take the claps of this slider they give an impression of desynchronization.

0:53:746 slider#1 try to stop the slider after she says "omedeto" (about 0:55:063: at the nante put 2 circles behind this slider the (new) #2 will be at 0:55:307 and the (new) #3 at 0:55:649 both with the finish sound (I think it will be cool)

0:59:844 circles 1,2,3 and 4 I saw that you put the circles to syncronize with the lyrics try to do this:
Select both #2 and #3 and put them at the time: 1:00:137 (this will make the #2 be at 1:00:137 and #3 at 1:00:429.
About number 4 put this one at this time --> 1:00:722 and reorganize these circles in line, this'll give an impression on the player they're at the same time.You'll see that the circles will be more synchronized with the lyrics.

1:03:063 again the sliders aren't synchronized just put these slider at the time: #2 - 1:03:600; #3 - 1:04:137; #4 - 1:04:673

I also love this song, so try to do it and you'll see the result, if you don't like it okay I'm sorry, if you like the result I can send some advices about the other difficulty. Nya! ^^
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl
All done Teras and thnx for the tip. next time I'll map in 1 of those divisors
And thanks Tsuki. I've made those changes and I agree they do sound better to the lyrics.
TsukiAnimeGirl
44 posts
Joined February 2010
TsukiAnimeGirl
now I'm goin to show some part that you could fix at Insane

etto... about the spinner that starts at 10:970, take it, then put a circle as New Combo at this time
Pick both circles 1 and 2 and put them at these times: #1 - 11:480, #2 - 11:771. Then add #3 at 12:062 and #4 at 12:354. Arrange them in line in a way that makes #4 be near to slider #5.

this one is optional, but I think is useful the circle #3 of 21:820. put it at 21:747 and reorganize #4 to give an impression on the player that the numbers 3, 4 and 5 are at the same rhythm

slider #4 time: 55:460 just move this slider to 55:387 and extend it until it arrives 55:679
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
roflninja

TsukiAnimeGirl wrote:

now I'm goin to show some part that you could fix at Insane

etto... about the spinner that starts at 10:970, take it, then put a circle as New Combo at this time
Pick both circles 1 and 2 and put them at these times: #1 - 11:480, #2 - 11:771. Then add #3 at 12:062 and #4 at 12:354. Arrange them in line in a way that makes #4 be near to slider #5.

this one is optional, but I think is useful the circle #3 of 21:820. put it at 21:747 and reorganize #4 to give an impression on the player that the numbers 3, 4 and 5 are at the same rhythm - this one seemed wierd so i havent done yet

slider #4 time: 55:460 just move this slider to 55:387 and extend it until it arrives 55:679
Thanks for the mod
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl
Hard is now ready for modding so continue doing what you guys do best ^-^ Although there a few changes that I still need to make the notes are mostly there so have at 'er
TsukiAnimeGirl
44 posts
Joined February 2010
TsukiAnimeGirl

johnsage92 wrote:

Hard is now ready for modding so continue doing what you guys do best ^-^ Although there a few changes that I still need to make the notes are mostly there so have at 'er
don't worry when I finish my homeworks I'll help you at Hard difficulty.
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl
Easy is also complete so I'll continue to rely on your efforts and make this a ranked map.
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
roflninja
all suggestions again

[easy]

00:12:208 (2-3) - spacing?
00:26:334 (2) - move back 1/2 tick
00:35:800 (2) - move forward 1/2 tick
if you do ^ line it up with (3,4)
01:18:033 (3) - move back 1/2 tick
01:21:674 - replace break with a spinner?

[hard]

00:26:820 (5) + 00:27:185 (1) - jump feels wierd imo
00:44:088 (1,2,3) - space a bit further apart?
00:47:161 (3,4) - jump feels wierd imo
00:58:810 (3,4) - make these a repeater?
01:00:921 (5) - move forward 1/4 tick
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
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Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl
Done and Done! Thnx again RN
banvi
1,793 posts
Joined June 2009
banvi
Hello. :)

my mod
SPOILER
I often do nazi's mod. It is to adjust spacing. If you don't like nazi's mod , I'm sorry. :cry:
General
Spacing is important. It is difficult for easy(and normal) to jump.
And Volume of this song is big. I think , you had better turn down.
Easy
00:18:761 (3) 2 grid down?(Grid LV3)
00:19:344 (4,5) 1 grid down?
00:29:829 (6) ^
00:58:955 (2,3) 1 grid left?
01:00:703 (2) 1 grid up?
01:01:286 (3,4) 2 grid up?
01:04:781 (4,5) spacing too far
01:07:693 (1) 7 grid left?(because spacing too far)
01:08:276 (2) 10 grid left?(^)
Normal
You should use Beat Snap Divisor 1/4(or 1/8).
Because of 1/6 , rhythm is bad.
Hard
Look Normal please.
Sorry,because of bad rhythm , I can't mod. :(
But I often see these problem someone's first map. Don't worry , Experience is important.

star & gl ;)
fight!
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl

banvi wrote:

my mod
I often do nazi's mod. It is to adjust spacing. If you don't like nazi's mod , I'm sorry. :cry:
General
Spacing is important. It is difficult for easy(and normal) to jump.
And Volume of this song is big. I think , you had better turn down. What do you mean?
Easy
00:18:761 (3) 2 grid down?(Grid LV3)
00:19:344 (4,5) 1 grid down?
00:29:829 (6) ^
00:58:955 (2,3) 1 grid left?
01:00:703 (2) 1 grid up?
01:01:286 (3,4) 2 grid up?
01:04:781 (4,5) spacing too far
01:07:693 (1) 7 grid left?(because spacing too far)
01:08:276 (2) 10 grid left?(^)
Normal
You should use Beat Snap Divisor 1/4(or 1/8).
Because of 1/6 , rhythm is bad.
Hard
Look Normal please.
Sorry,because of bad rhythm , I can't mod. :(
But I often see these problem someone's first map. Don't worry , Experience is important.

star & gl ;)
fight!
Done and thanks for the helpful tips ^-^
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
[My Baby]

00:11:625 (1,2) - Move both to next white tick
00:16:140 (1) - End on white tick? (later)
00:20:800 (1) - ^ (earlier)
00:25:460 (1) - Place on next white tick
00:26:043 (2) - ^
00:45:703 (3) - Place slider on next white tick and shorten by 1 beat (white tick)
01:15:121 (5) - Spacing too far. Move it closer.
01:15:557 (6) - Spacing is too close. Move it farther
01:18:470 (4) - Extend to next white tick. Remove clap?

[My Kid]

Notes - Recheck Timing/Spacing (Timing is off) [ I'll obviously need to come back later to mod this better ]

[My Adult]

Notes - Same as above. Did you change the slider velocity or something recently? You have to change spacing and re-lengthen sliders when you do that. [ I seriously hope your not fixing this up as I'm modding this P= ]

[roflninja's My Elder]

00:02:451 (1) - Add Finish?
00:04:781 (1) - ^
00:07:111 (1) - ^

Notes - Recheck Timing/Spacing on this one too...

The BPM and offset seems fine but you need to re-apply all/most of the notes in your beatmaps.
Resnap the notes on 1/4 beat divisor. That's the highest divisor you should need.
I honestly can't star this until you fix it. =(

EDIT: also wheres the "Mah Boi" difficutly? lol
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
roflninja

animask wrote:

[roflninja's My Elder]

00:02:451 (1) - Add Finish? done
00:04:781 (1) - ^ ^
00:07:111 (1) - ^^

Notes - Recheck Timing/Spacing on this one too... should be fine...

The BPM and offset seems fine but you need to re-apply all/most of the notes in your beatmaps.
Resnap the notes on 1/4 beat divisor. That's the highest divisor you should need.
I honestly can't star this until you fix it. =(

EDIT: also wheres the "Mah Boi" difficutly? lol
Thanks for the mod
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl

animask wrote:

[My Baby]

00:11:625 (1,2) - Move both to next white tick
00:16:140 (1) - End on white tick? (later)
00:20:800 (1) - ^ (earlier)
00:25:460 (1) - Place on next white tick
00:26:043 (2) - ^
00:45:703 (3) - Place slider on next white tick and shorten by 1 beat (white tick)
01:15:121 (5) - Spacing too far. Move it closer.
01:15:557 (6) - Spacing is too close. Move it farther
01:18:470 (4) - Extend to next white tick. Remove clap?

[My Kid]

Notes - Recheck Timing/Spacing (Timing is off) [ I'll obviously need to come back later to mod this better ]

[My Adult]

Notes - Same as above. Did you change the slider velocity or something recently? You have to change spacing and re-lengthen sliders when you do that. [ I seriously hope your not fixing this up as I'm modding this P= ]

Notes - Recheck Timing/Spacing on this one too...

The BPM and offset seems fine but you need to re-apply all/most of the notes in your beatmaps.
Resnap the notes on 1/4 beat divisor. That's the highest divisor you should need.
I honestly can't star this until you fix it. =(

EDIT: also wheres the "Mah Boi" difficutly? lol
Done. Sorry about the timing and beat snapping im getting the hang of using it but now it should be all redone.

Also. Feel free to make a "Mah Boi" Map :P
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
[My Baby]

Notes- Use Grid Snap AND level 3 grid to correct spacing

00:12:354 (2) - Too close to 1. Move closer to (3) [ Between 1 and 3 ]
00:22:256 (3,4,5) - Use distance snap to correct incorrect spacing of these
00:26:043 (2) - Too far from (1)
00:58:373 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Incorrect Spacing [Circles are too close to each other]
01:07:693 (1) - Too close to (7)

Also the timing doesn't seem to be fixed for the others yet...

1/4 Beat Divisor/ Distance Snap / Most notes shouldn't be on blue ticks unless its a stream/triple

Sure I'll make a difficulty~
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl

animask wrote:

[My Baby]

Notes- Use Grid Snap AND level 3 grid to correct spacing

00:12:354 (2) - Too close to 1. Move closer to (3) [ Between 1 and 3 ]
00:22:256 (3,4,5) - Use distance snap to correct incorrect spacing of these
00:26:043 (2) - Too far from (1)
00:58:373 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - Incorrect Spacing [Circles are too close to each other]
01:07:693 (1) - Too close to (7)

Also the timing doesn't seem to be fixed for the others yet...

1/4 Beat Divisor/ Distance Snap / Most notes shouldn't be on blue ticks unless its a stream/triple

Sure I'll make a difficulty~
OK! I think i got it this time! I've gone through all 3 of my difficulties and used the AiMod to help fix the spacing. I've gone through and made sure none of the beats were off (blue marks on 1/4). I'm leaving my co-partner to do his difficulty cause he's constantly complaining he's bored. Thnx again animask I hope you can NOW mod Normal and Hard
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
roflninja

johnsage92 wrote:

OK! I think i got it this time! I've gone through all 3 of my difficulties and used the AiMod to help fix the spacing. I've gone through and made sure none of the beats were off (blue marks on 1/4). I'm leaving my co-partner to do his difficulty cause he's constantly complaining he's bored. Thnx again animask I hope you can NOW mod Normal and Hard
I said i was bored once and I'm never gonna hear the end of it now right :(

Oh well, should be fine now
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl

roflninja wrote:

johnsage92 wrote:

OK! I think i got it this time! I've gone through all 3 of my difficulties and used the AiMod to help fix the spacing. I've gone through and made sure none of the beats were off (blue marks on 1/4). I'm leaving my co-partner to do his difficulty cause he's constantly complaining he's bored. Thnx again animask I hope you can NOW mod Normal and Hard
I said i was bored once and I'm never gonna hear the end of it now right :(

Oh well, should be fine now
Yes! and u ALWAYS say ur bored. Uploaded~
Lemon-Chan
5 posts
Joined March 2010
Lemon-Chan
As thanks for helping me with my map. :) These are just suggestions that I have, you don't have to follow them, because I'm by no means a good osu player.. XD I'm also not too experienced at modding, so excuse the long commentaries...

My Baby (Can't seem to get 100% on this one. The spacing always throws me off near the middle-end)
00:35:946 - I suggest repositioning 2, 3, 4 using the .7 distance snap, because these notes always throw me off. I hit them faster than I should because they are so close to each other, when the beats are actually not.
00:44:392 - Same here. The spacing between the 1 and 2 are too close so I have to stare at the approach circle. One suggestion I have is moving the 1 to the middle or something, and make 2 a new combo, and you can keep the spacing.
01:05:946 - I don't know why the 6 and 7 are farther away from the rest of the combo when the beat is all the same. o_o You should reposition that combo with the .6 distance snap.
01:07:693 - I suggest moving the 1 to the left to match the position of the 3 below it in the combo because they are all the same beat, just the 1 is far away for some reason. o.o

My Kid (The theme for this section is keeping the spacing of each combo consistent. When I say that you should use the distance snap to fix a number, it should go without saying that the rest of the combo should also use that distance snap)
00:12:208 - The 3 should definitely be farther away from the 2. If you want to keep the spacing of the 1 and the 2, use the .3 distance snap to move the 3, and the rest of the combo too.
00:13:028 - I suggest changing the 5 here to fit the song a bit better. What I did was shorten the 5 by one 1/4 tick and move it a 1/4 tick back.
00:14:829 - You can change the 9 to a slider the same size as 8 if you want. I think it makes the beat map cuter. 8D
00:17:159 - Another personal preference: I extended the repeater by 2, but you don't have to. But, if you don't I suggest moving the 1 after it farther away.
00:21:528 - I think you should use the 0.4 distance snap to fix the 2 and 3 a tiny bit, as well as the rest of the combo.
00:34:781 - I shortened the 1 by 2 1/4 ticks, but it's up to you how you want the sliders to match the song. Another personal thing.
00:37:548 - You should move this entire combo to the right to line up with the end of the 4 in the previous combo. Again, use the .4 distance snap to fix the 2, 3, 4, 5, 6.
00:45:266 - The distance between the 5 and the next combo's 1 should be greater, but I see you're sorta running out of space there... do your best. D: Same with the 1 and the 2. They should definitely be farther apart. I suggest the .4 spacing, but use .3 if you need space. And of course, do the same to the rest of the combo. If you need space, you can make the 4 a repeater, instead of one long slider.
00:47:887 - Same comment as previous. Fix the spacing of the 4 and 5 with whatever spacing you used because they are too close.
00:49:053 - I shortened the series of 1s here by 2 1/4 ticks each to better fit the song. Personal preference, so your choice.
00:53:713 - This combo looked kinda weird so I did something to it... I moved the 1 4 gridlines over so it'd be in the middle. Keeping the 2 and 3 stacked, I moved them to the left of 1 with .4 distance spacing, and used the .4 distance spacing to place the 4 in the middle. Less confusing this way. :)
00:58:810 - Use the .3 distance spacing to fix the position of the 3 because it is too close to the 2.
00:59:829 - I would use the .4 spacing to fix this entire combo to make it look neater. The 5 is too far from the 4, for one. Also, I took one repeater out of the 5 and moved the 6 up 2 1/4 ticks to match the song better.
01:04:053 - I made the 3 a repeater of the same length, rather than one one slider. But you'd have to distance snap the position of the rest of the combo to match the length.
01:05:363 - The 5 should be farther awaaay.
01:07:548 - I moved this entire combo up one 1/4 tick to match the song better.
01:14:392 - The 5 and 6 are too far from the 3 and 4 even though they are the same beat away.

Phew, that's it. I don't have time right now to fix the other difficulties, but I'll get to them tomorrow or the day after. I hope this helps. :) I can't star until I finish looking over the other beatmap, so wait a bit. XD

Edit (weeks later lol): I haven't had time recently, but I see you made some changes, which are good! Star. :3
Last edited by Lemon-Chan , edited 1 time in total.
IceBeam
osu! Alumni
1,957 posts
Joined December 2009
IceBeam
Hello.

[General]
00:53:713 - Kiai starts here.
01:24:004 - Kiai ends here.

Use distance snap,please.Because snapping it's out of bounds.You need to fix everything.Well then I won't suggest about spacing.


[My baby]
Add more hitsounds.I've used clap,but well,use whatever you want.
00:12:354 (2) - Clap.
00:13:519 (4) - Clap.
00:14:684 (6) - Clap and counts.

Well,I think you've got it.

00:30:412 - Add a note and put finish here then.
00:34:781 - Add a note.
00:35:072 (1) - Remove.
00:35:363 - Add a note.

Oh well,I even cannot suggest for now,it's too wet.You need more work on it.[My Kid] is completely unrankable for now.You must use distance snap properly.

But,well,good luck with it,have a star,I hope you'll do some fixes,then ask for another modding,if you want.
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl
OK rather than using the seemingly unreliable AiMod, I've gone with (for the most part) a .8x Distance Snap. If there are some distance errors they should be rather minor now. I hope :o
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
omg @ Lemon-Chan's mod post

looks HUGE!

*checking spacing/timing*

Also nvm about the difficulty theres 4 beatmaps already.

I'm gonna help you big time on this P=

[My Adult]

SPOILER
Reduce slider tick rate to 2

(Fixed sliders/timing/spacing)

You don't need to keep it like that you can change it.

ATTACH[Buono! - My Boy (TV Size) (johnsage92) [My Adult].osu]

[My Kid]

Use distance snap? Also the note timing is still a bit off

[My Baby]

00:35:946 (3) - Move farther from (2)
00:36:383 (4,5) - Spacing is off/incorrect

Download: Buono! - My Boy (TV Size) (johnsage92) [My Adult].osu
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl

animask wrote:

omg @ Lemon-Chan's mod post

looks HUGE!

*checking spacing/timing*

Also nvm about the difficulty theres 4 beatmaps already.

I'm gonna help you big time on this P=

[My Adult]

SPOILER
Reduce slider tick rate to 2

(Fixed sliders/timing/spacing)

You don't need to keep it like that you can change it.

[attachment=0:6aab0]Buono! - My Boy (TV Size) (johnsage92) [My Adult].osu[/attachment:6aab0]

[My Kid]

Use distance snap? Also the note timing is still a bit off

[My Baby]

00:35:946 (3) - Move farther from (2)
00:36:383 (4,5) - Spacing is off/incorrect
Ur right it was long but not painful so it was done. And I thank you graciously for [My Adult]. I was wondering if you had the latest since I think I was working on it at the time but it seemed u did.

Again I apologize for the spacing and i think I've got most of the timing down. Yes I've been using distance snap so if you have suggestions to what snap i should use then tell me please. The constant "spacing is wrong" is going to drive me insane and im sure you dont want to be constantly saying it.
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Hi~

[General]
Set preview time 00:53:713 ?
Disable countdown.
Delete .osb file then full submit?
You have 3 different AudioLeadIn,fixed them.

[My Baby]
00:11:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing?
00:26:043 (2,3) - ^
00:35:946 (3,4,5) - Replace as slider?
00:44:392 (1,2,3) - Spacing?
01:12:790 (2) - 1 grid left for spacing?
01:22:548 - Break too short,remove?

[My Kid]
Well ,this diff.
Slider velocity too high(for the 206 BPM,you could try 103 as well),but rhe spacing rate too low,make them balance plz.And plz keep the spacing same except some jumps.
00:17:159 (4) - Add 1 repeat?
01:21:674 - Add note in this break plz.
01:23:421 (1) - Too short.

[My Adult]
Slider velocity lower plz.
OD+1
00:09:441 (1) - Move ahead to white tick?
00:23:494 (2) - Red tick.

[roflninja's My Elder]
OD+2
00:12:208 (4) - Red tick?
00:12:645 (6) - Slider's end unsnaped.
00:13:519 (8) - End with red tick?
00:14:902 (4) - Slider's end unsnaped.
OK,stop here.plz use 1/2 beat snap divisor and make sure all note is snaped(on white or red tick,no blue).

Work on roflninja's diff hard plz.
No star for now,fixed then call me back~ ;)
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Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hi

[General]
The black combo color is hard to read, remove or change?

[File]
Your bg size to too large, the maximum is 1024x768 (current 1228x767)

[My Baby]
00:14:101 (5) - New combo, it's long for easy diff
00:19:926 (5) - Allign with 3?
00:28:664 (4) - New combo, it's long for easy diff
01:01:868 (4) - Cut short this slider to red tick?
01:05:363 (5) - New combo, it's long for easy diff
01:21:674 (B) - Break are too short, remove it?

[My Kid]
The distance spacing is not fit here. The slider velocity is high, but why Distance spacing is low? Please increase the distance spacing, if the distance spacing is correct, please double-check the spacing

00:12:936 (5) - Overlapped by previous object are not good, IMO
00:49:053 (1) - Stack with 4 at the end?
01:04:198 (3) - Overlapped by previous object are not good, IMO
01:23:421 (1) - Unrankable spinner LOL (AutoPlay must have a bonus score at least 2000, current 1000)

[My Adult]
Lots of finish hitsound! Remove that

00:08:276 (3) - Unrankable slider LOL (Don't let endpoint overlap startpoint, it could be confusing)

[roflninja's My Elder]
Why this diff has no video, but the rest are on? Add please. The circle size is small? Decrease the Circle Size only 1 tick. Also, please recalculate the slider (Timing -> Recalculate the slider -> Yes)

00:10:897 (6) - Extend to white tick
00:12:135 (4) - Remove this, that's awful
00:13:519 (8) - Extend to white tick
00:13:810 (9) - Remove this, that's awful
00:36:892 (2) - ^
00:49:053 (7) - Is not stack with 6 at the end

This map needs mnore work, follow all mod post right now, especially for roflninja
Good song
(((((っ´Θ｀)っ <- STAR
GabrielRKF
992 posts
Joined September 2008
GabrielRKF
All
BG and Video suck D:
Find better ones, please!!

My Baby
00:16:140(1) - Doesn't sound cool... Make a hitcircle here (with New Combo), and add a slider (with no New Combo) that start at 00:16:431 and ends at 00:17:596~
00:35:946(3,1,2,3,4) - Hum... sounds weird. Make the (3) end at 00:36:528. Add a note at 00:37:111. Move the (1),the (2), the (3), and the (4) 1/1 later [select the four of them and make the one at 00:37:693. Extend the (3) to 00:39:878 (red tick). Finally, delet the (4)~
00:44:392(1) - Move it 1/1 earlier on the timeline (00:44:101)
00:44:684(x) - Add a note here~
00:47:305(1,2,3,spinner) - Move everything 1/1 earlier on the timeline, including the spinner
01:01:868(4) - Reduce by 1/2 the slider time (01:02:305)
01:17:451(2,3) - Fix the spacing~

My Kid
00:11:48(1,2,3,4) - Hum... A bit confusing and hard to read, I gotta say.
00:17:159(4) - Make it pointed to another direction. the way that is now, looks like that the slider gotta one extra return~
00:39:732(5,6) - Fix the spacing~
00:52:548(x) - Add a note here
01:03:033(1) - Bad jump. Use normal spacing here

I'll mod the rest later :/
A star for incentivation :]
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl

kino77 wrote:

Hi~

[General]
Set preview time 00:53:713 ?
Disable countdown.
Delete .osb file then full submit?
You have 3 different AudioLeadIn,fixed them.

[My Baby]
00:11:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Spacing?
00:26:043 (2,3) - ^
00:35:946 (3,4,5) - Replace as slider?
00:44:392 (1,2,3) - Spacing?
01:12:790 (2) - 1 grid left for spacing?
01:22:548 - Break too short,remove?

[My Kid]
Well ,this diff.
Slider velocity too high(for the 206 BPM,you could try 103 as well),but rhe spacing rate too low,make them balance plz.And plz keep the spacing same except some jumps.
00:17:159 (4) - Add 1 repeat?
01:21:674 - Add note in this break plz.
01:23:421 (1) - Too short. I can pass it easy and I've seen plenty that length b4

[My Adult]
Slider velocity lower plz.
OD+1
00:09:441 (1) - Move ahead to white tick?
00:23:494 (2) - Red tick.
Done and RN is taking care of his difficulty. (Says he doesn't need to so talk to him)

Leorda wrote:

Hi

[General]
The black combo color is hard to read, remove or change? (Then get some glasses :P )

[File]
Your bg size to too large, the maximum is 1024x768 (current 1228x767) (Does it really matter? If so where does it say?)

[My Baby]
00:14:101 (5) - New combo, it's long for easy diff
00:19:926 (5) - Allign with 3?
00:28:664 (4) - New combo, it's long for easy diff
01:01:868 (4) - Cut short this slider to red tick?
01:05:363 (5) - New combo, it's long for easy diff
01:21:674 (B) - Break are too short, remove it?

[My Kid]
The distance spacing is not fit here. The slider velocity is high, but why Distance spacing is low? Please increase the distance spacing, if the distance spacing is correct, please double-check the spacing

00:12:936 (5) - Overlapped by previous object are not good, IMO
00:49:053 (1) - Stack with 4 at the end?
01:04:198 (3) - Overlapped by previous object are not good, IMO
01:23:421 (1) - Unrankable spinner LOL (AutoPlay must have a bonus score at least 2000, current 1000) (Passable spinner LOL)

[My Adult]
Lots of finish hitsound! Remove that I don't use hitsounds so suggest where

00:08:276 (3) - Unrankable slider LOL (Don't let endpoint overlap startpoint, it could be confusing)


This map needs mnore work, follow all mod post right now, especially for roflninja
Good song
(((((っ´Θ｀)っ <- STAR
Done, But im sorry coming here in all n mighty "LOL"ing at my mistakes is just unacceptable. Plz be more considerate in your mods
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl

roxkyuubiforever wrote:

All
BG and Video suck D:
Find better ones, please!!

My Baby
00:16:140(1) - Doesn't sound cool... Make a hitcircle here (with New Combo), and add a slider (with no New Combo) that start at 00:16:431 and ends at 00:17:596~
00:35:946(3,1,2,3,4) - Hum... sounds weird. Make the (3) end at 00:36:528. Add a note at 00:37:111. Move the (1),the (2), the (3), and the (4) 1/1 later [select the four of them and make the one at 00:37:693. Extend the (3) to 00:39:878 (red tick). Finally, delet the (4)~
00:44:392(1) - Move it 1/1 earlier on the timeline (00:44:101)
00:44:684(x) - Add a note here~
00:47:305(1,2,3,spinner) - Move everything 1/1 earlier on the timeline, including the spinner
01:01:868(4) - Reduce by 1/2 the slider time (01:02:305)
01:17:451(2,3) - Fix the spacing~
My Kid has gotten a face lift so please check again. As for the baby it's genetics have been changed so that both you and I are happy
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
Hi

[General]
-Unable count down in all diff.
-Consider change combo colours them overlap with video colours.

[My Baby]
-Finish kiai time here 01:24:004

[My Kid]
-01:23:421 (1) too short

[rolfninja's My Elder]
-00:57:135 (1) this spinner is just wrong, this spinner finish in 00:57:790 and makes 00:58:082 (1) hard of catch because this slider is not centered, plus the spinner is too short, consider delete it.

Star~
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl

Astom wrote:

Hi

[General]
-Unable count down in all diff. (Suicide on Adult and Elder)
-Consider change combo colours them overlap with video colours. (What colors to change to?)

[My Baby]
-Finish kiai time here 01:24:004

[My Kid]
-01:23:421 (1) too short (reason y? cause it's passable)

[rolfninja's My Elder]
-00:57:135 (1) this spinner is just wrong, this spinner finish in 00:57:790 and makes 00:58:082 (1) hard of catch because this slider is not centered, plus the spinner is too short, consider delete it.

Star~
Thnx
ryuzza_old
2 posts
Joined September 2009
ryuzza_old
Cool song... i'll mod later
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
roflninja

Astom wrote:

Hi

[rolfninja's My Elder]
-00:57:135 (1) this spinner is just wrong, this spinner finish in 00:57:790 and makes 00:58:082 (1) hard of catch because this slider is not centered, plus the spinner is too short, consider delete it. fair enough, just deleted it

Leorda wrote:

Hi

[roflninja's My Elder]
Why this diff has no video, but the rest are on? Add please. The circle size is small? Decrease the Circle Size only 1 tick. Also, please recalculate the slider (Timing -> Recalculate the slider -> Yes) cricle size is fine imo
00:10:897 (6) - Extend to white tick its already there
00:12:135 (4) - Remove this, that's awful "thats awful" isnt a valid reason
00:13:519 (8) - Extend to white tick ok
00:13:810 (9) - Remove this, that's awful if im extending ^ i kinda have to
00:36:892 (2) - ^[/color]done
00:49:053 (7) - Is not stack with 6 at the end doesnt have to be but ok

kino77 wrote:

Hi~

[roflninja's My Elder]
OD+2 hmm, alright
00:12:208 (4) - Red tick? it is
00:12:645 (6) - Slider's end unsnaped. its not anymore
00:13:519 (8) - End with red tick?hmm, ok
00:14:902 (4) - Slider's end unsnaped. its not anymore
OK,stop here.plz use 1/2 beat snap divisor and make sure all note is snaped(on white or red tick,no blue).there shouldn't be ive checked already :?
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Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
If u don't want change combo colours maybe a better video fix the problem =/

About the slider in "My Kid", if I'm not wrong, the minimun amount for a spinner in a normal diff is 4000 points with autoplay, confirm it with a MAT because I don't remember if that rule is in easy-normal diff's or only easy.

Cya
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl

Astom wrote:

If u don't want change combo colours maybe a better video fix the problem =/

About the slider in "My Kid", if I'm not wrong, the minimun amount for a spinner in a normal diff is 4000 points with autoplay, confirm it with a MAT because I don't remember if that rule is in easy-normal diff's or only easy.

Cya
Ok I've changed the collours so they're brighter and don't blend in so much with the video/BG
arien666
6,290 posts
Joined May 2009
arien666
[General]
Delete osb file please.
If possible, please delete audio from flv file please :3

[My Baby]
Fine to me :3

[My Kid]
1/2 quick note seems little hard imo...
01:07:402 (1,2,3) - Little confusing stacks ;_;
01:23:421 (1) - WUT this spin...? Bonus is only 1000... How about change to slider?

[My Adult]
00:28:810 (3,4) - How about move 1 grid right?
00:30:412 (1,1,1,1) - Seems not good... Why don't you change pattern :3?
00:40:169 - Delete break.
00:55:315 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - Seems little insane combos ;_;
01:22:402 (4) - How about move 1 grid left?
01:23:421 (1,2) - ^

[roflninja's My Elder]
OD -1 or -2 please ;_;
Err... Seems not good imo ;_;



Err...
;_; I can't star this song yet :3...
Sorry :3...
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl

arken1015 wrote:

[General]
Delete osb file please.
If possible, please delete audio from flv file please :3 (Done but may have lowered video quality (still have original file if there's another way other than converting))

[My Baby]
Fine to me :3

[My Kid]
1/2 quick note seems little hard imo...
01:07:402 (1,2,3) - Little confusing stacks ;_; (Moved off to the left)
01:23:421 (1) - WUT this spin...? Bonus is only 1000... How about change to slider?

[My Adult]
00:28:810 (3,4) - How about move 1 grid right?
00:30:412 (1,1,1,1) - Seems not good... Why don't you change pattern :3?
00:40:169 - Delete break.
00:55:315 (4,1,2,3,4,5) - Seems little insane combos ;_; (Replaced with sliders)
01:22:402 (4) - How about move 1 grid left?
01:23:421 (1,2) - ^

[roflninja's My Elder]
OD -1 or -2 please ;_;
Err... Seems not good imo ;_; (Elaborate please :? )



Err...
;_; I can't star this song yet :3...
Sorry :3...
I've tried my best and hope it works.

P.S. I've gone through the FAQ and other beat mapping help and yes i've found out the truth that my spinner was to short and apologize to all those that i've turned down
Garven
osu! Alumni
5,857 posts
Joined January 2010
Garven
[General]
The video looks really bad. Maybe try to get a little higher quality out of it?
The black combo color is hard to see against the video. Try a lighter color/shade. Actually, most of the colors are kind of bad in that regard.

[babby]
Uh, up OD by 2 or 3 please. HP drain by at least one.
I wouldn't recommend you start notes on red ticks on a song like this, and the style of difficulty you have set up. It's hard to feel when they're going to be - especially with such a low OD.
00:45:266 (3,4) - Spacing
00:49:053 (1) - End this spinner at 00:52:839.
00:53:713 - Add a note.
01:12:354 (1,2) - Turn these into a slider.
01:14:684 (4,5) - ^
01:17:014 (1,2,3) - A repeating slider. Also, try not to overlap with that giant slider right afterward, if possible.

[Kiddo]
The hit sounds aren't very good at all. :/
00:12:499 (4,5) - Try positioning these so they don't overlap each other as much.
00:36:383 (4) - End this slider at 00:37:111.
00:39:732 (5) - Spacing
00:45:266 (5) - Position this so it's not covering up the slider after it.
00:49:053 (1,1,1) - These need to end on the white tick, not the red tick.
01:10:897 (1) - This spinner is kind of short, and doesn't really fit the music well. I'd map through it.
01:14:684 (6) - Horizontal flip this.
01:23:421 (1) - Make this symmetrical, please.

[Adult]
Add 2-3 seconds of lead in time.
00:19:053 (2) - Extend this slider to the red tick, then move the next slider over one tick. Sounds much better.
00:22:256 (7,1) - Spacing.
00:44:684 (3) - Extend the end of this slider to the white tick.
00:46:868 (1) - Spacing, though not that important on this one.
00:53:713 (1,2,3) - Keep the spacing the same amongst these three.
01:09:150 (1) - Make this go with the lyrics instead. It feels much better that way.

[Elder]
Add 2-3 seconds of lead in time.
OD 10? Are you serious? Bring that down at least 2.
The hit sounds are really quiet compared to the song. It's hard to hear when your beats are not on the right spot. Turn them up and give your difficulty a listen to see if you have things placed on the right beat. There are a lot of these problems in this difficulty.
Give it a good combing over. It's too difficult to play this diff and give good feedback about the design with the rhythm problems. Sorry.

Give me a call back for a re-mod after a few other mods.
roflninja
348 posts
Joined October 2009
roflninja
You know what, johnsage, just remove my difficulty

I'm tiered, sick, got a exam, and can't deal with this

Garven wrote:

[General]
[Elder]
Add 2-3 seconds of lead in time.
OD 10? Are you serious? Bring that down at least 2.
The hit sounds are really quiet compared to the song. It's hard to hear when your beats are not on the right spot. Turn them up and give your difficulty a listen to see if you have things placed on the right beat. There are a lot of these problems in this difficulty.
Give it a good combing over. It's too difficult to play this diff and give good feedback about the design with the rhythm problems. Sorry.

Give me a call back for a re-mod after a few other mods.
someone asked me to move the OD up
I don't play with hisounds - ruins the song/game imo
timing should be fine anyway

I give up. Thanks
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl

Garven wrote:

[General]
The video looks really bad. Maybe try to get a little higher quality out of it?
The black combo color is hard to see against the video. Try a lighter color/shade. Actually, most of the colors are kind of bad in that regard. (workin on it)

[babby]
Uh, up OD by 2 or 3 please. HP drain by at least one.(Stays, so that beginners can play)
I wouldn't recommend you start notes on red ticks on a song like this, and the style of difficulty you have set up. It's hard to feel when they're going to be - especially with such a low OD.
00:45:266 (3,4) - Spacing
00:49:053 (1) - End this spinner at 00:52:839.
00:53:713 - Add a note.
01:12:354 (1,2) - Turn these into a slider.
01:14:684 (4,5) - ^
01:17:014 (1,2,3) - A repeating slider. Also, try not to overlap with that giant slider right afterward, if possible.(Stays)

[Kiddo]
The hit sounds aren't very good at all. :/ (I don't use em please specify where)
00:12:499 (4,5) - Try positioning these so they don't overlap each other as much.
00:36:383 (4) - End this slider at 00:37:111.
00:39:732 (5) - Spacing
00:45:266 (5) - Position this so it's not covering up the slider after it.
00:49:053 (1,1,1) - These need to end on the white tick, not the red tick.
01:10:897 (1) - This spinner is kind of short, and doesn't really fit the music well. I'd map through it. (Stays)
01:14:684 (6) - Horizontal flip this.
01:23:421 (1) - Make this symmetrical, please.

[Adult]
Add 2-3 seconds of lead in time. (Stays)
00:19:053 (2) - Extend this slider to the red tick, then move the next slider over one tick. Sounds much better.
00:22:256 (7,1) - Spacing.
00:44:684 (3) - Extend the end of this slider to the white tick.
00:46:868 (1) - Spacing, though not that important on this one.
00:53:713 (1,2,3) - Keep the spacing the same amongst these three. (It...is? :? )
01:09:150 (1) - Make this go with the lyrics instead. It feels much better that way. (It...is? :? )

[Elder]
Add 2-3 seconds of lead in time.
OD 10? Are you serious? Bring that down at least 2.
The hit sounds are really quiet compared to the song. It's hard to hear when your beats are not on the right spot. Turn them up and give your difficulty a listen to see if you have things placed on the right beat. There are a lot of these problems in this difficulty.
Give it a good combing over. It's too difficult to play this diff and give good feedback about the design with the rhythm problems. Sorry.

Give me a call back for a re-mod after a few other mods.
Done except for some compromises.

roflninja wrote:

You know what, johnsage, just remove my difficulty

I'm tiered, sick, got a exam, and can't deal with this

I give up. Thanks
Sad to hear it :( And i'll heed ur request.

[roflninja's My Elder] will be removed henceforth
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
I finished my difficulty but I'm going to fix the hitsounds on it a bit more before uploading here~

Hitsounds are tough!
JhnySmthApl
96 posts
Joined October 2008
Topic Starter
JhnySmthApl
i wouldn't know.... i dun use em =P
--K--
37 posts
Joined December 2009
--K--
[General]
I noticed that different difficulties have slightly different combo colors. You might want to fix this.
[My Baby] has no countdown, while [My Kid] and [My Adult] have a countdown. Either add a countdown to [My Baby] or remove it from the other two difficulties.
Also, as others have mentioned, the video is a bit of an issue, but you said you're working on that, so I'll let that be.

[My Baby]
00:20:800 (1) - Spacing.
00:25:752 (1) - Spacing. Also, the timing of this beat threw me off a bit. I'd suggest moving this back a beat and turning it into a slider. The slider should last 1 beat, starting at at 00:25:460 and ending at 00:25:752.
01:18:470 (4) - Kiai makes sense for this section of the song, but it looks absolutely terrible with this pink slider. Don't worry, it's just a slightly annoying side effect of using certain combo colors during kiai time on a fast song. Under kiai, black circles flash brightly, black sliders don't flash that much (it's kinda nice to look at, actually), pink circles flash nicely, but pink sliders flash obnoxiously brightly.
01:23:421 (1,2) - I'd strongly suggest turning this into a slider, similar to the one at the end of [My Kid].

[My Kid]
00:34:781 (1) - Shorten this by half a beat so it ends on 00:35:072. It'll flow better.
00:41:771 (1,2) - Remap this section something like the following image, with all clap hitsounds:
SPOILER
00:50:218 (1,1) - Forgive the nazimod, but if you move these sliders up 1 lv3 grid each, it'll mirror a lot more nicely with 00:49:053 (1).

[My Adult]
00:30:412 (1,1,1,1) - Not really feeling these sliders. If you use repeat-sliders to follow the guitar, you could do something like this:
SPOILER
Hitsound however you like.
00:49:053 (1) - I understand that you want a break section somewhere, but why not map the little buildup hit rhythm here?

Overall, pretty solid stuff. However, if you want to make it even better, adding a tiny bit of polish certainly wouldn't be a bad idea. Be it slider shapes or nice little patterns you can form with beats, it'll look pretty pretty. Sections such as 00:49:053 (1,1,1) in [My Kid] were nice to look at. This is not to say what you have already is bad, though.
Sleep Powder
1,540 posts
Joined October 2008
Sleep Powder
Here it is~

Download: Buono! - My Boy (TV Size) (johnsage92) [animask's Boi].osu
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