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Girls Dead Monster - Alchemy

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Vikon
343 posts
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Topic Starter
Vikon
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Friday, 28 May, 2010 at 21:55:37

Artist: Girls Dead Monster
Title: Alchemy
Source: Angel Beats!
Tags: iwasawa marina climbb65588
BPM: 165
Filesize: 6231kb
Play Time: 01:49
Difficulties Available:
  1. Climbb's Insane (5 stars, 371 notes)
  2. Hard (4.89 stars, 240 notes)
  3. Normal (2.92 stars, 106 notes)
Download: Girls Dead Monster - Alchemy
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 3rd Beatmap,
a Song from KSLA 0051, sang by Iwasawa
12 / 5 mp3 changed
15 / 5 [Normal], [Hard], [Climbb's insane] Finished !
27 / 5 Added skin~

[Hard] is not insanely hard, right? So [Hard] is really a [Hard] !
Last edited by Vikon , edited 32 times in total.
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
哦有人开动了啊。。。= =
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Vikon
因為看到有3首Crow Song，但一首Alchemy和My Song也沒有，所以就打算做前者了(新mapper,不擅長做慢歌)
才剛upload完，圖也還沒決定-_- 找到timing再算~
Rin, 你也想做這圖?
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
如果一直没人动的话，LBEX rank了我做。
有人动了的话我回去继续动SR。
Pokie
osu! Alumni
2,630 posts
Joined December 2009
Pokie
... ._.

BPM: 165
Offset: 3475~7
climbb65588
435 posts
Joined August 2008
climbb65588
可惡，我也想幫手做難度 (?) star ~
owl13
151 posts
Joined December 2009
owl13
喔,原來你做這曲了-V-
vincerio
687 posts
Joined April 2009
vincerio
Hiya~

[Normal]
[General]
It's look like easy diff Owo
try to use some slider...(there is no slider...) it will be better!
you need to rearrange notes(playing at the same point too much is not good)
you need to put more note it's feel empty!
don't follow vocal too much...

00:43:111 - add note
00:43:292(6,7,8,9) - snap 1/2 right
01:06:202 - red tick sound bad
01:24:747~01:34:202(1,2,3,4) - sound bad , try slider or spinner

[Hard]
Your distance spacing is set to 1.6x but i don't see where you use it.
[General] need to remeber a notes before play it (so bad!)
00:09:656~00:15:475 - Distance snap pls , confuse!
etc...
00:41:475(1) why sound dropped here...

[climbb's insane]
Your distance spacing is set to 0.7x but i don't see where you use it(don't do that if you won't use) + your way of jumping is not good

ืnice~*
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Vikon
@ Vincerio,
Thx for concerning the map!
But I'm still working on the map, it is unfinished .~ (sorry for my slow pace :o )
masuo_old
179 posts
Joined July 2009
masuo_old
Hard
00:11:293 (7) - 00:11:474 (8) - Down
01:18:202 (5) - 1grid right
01:34:021 (4) - 1grid Left
01:34:202 (5) - ＾
01:28:566 (6) - remove new combo?
01:28:747 (1) - new combo?

star~
Colin Hou
osu! Alumni
4,456 posts
Joined November 2009
Colin Hou
[General]:
  1. marina（岩沢的歌姬）加入tags
  2. climbb65588 加入所有难度的tags
  3. 貌似你把modding queue版刷版了>_> 注意下置顶贴的警告
[Normal]:
  1. 01:06:565 (5,1,2) - 这个很混淆...
  2. 01:09:111 (2,3) - 这个压人声不如继续压鼓声.当然只是个人观点
[Hard]:
  1. 01:02:929 (3) - 让这个更弯一点 然后边缘和2的距离均匀点
  2. 00:37:111 (T) - 加一个NOTE
  3. 没有人声的地方也尽量不要留空吧, 有的地方很奇怪
[Climbb's Insane]:
  1. Cool~!
难度分数分布很不均匀...[N][I][I]的话Rank是没问题,不过我这样的沙包就只能开MOD打打Normal拿20W了 -ω-

总之...Star~
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Vikon
thx Colin!!!

Colin Hou wrote:

[General]:
  1. marina（岩沢的歌姬）加入tags 加了
  2. climbb65588 加入所有难度的tags 加了
  3. 貌似你把modding queue版刷版了>_> 注意下置顶贴的警告
sorry that i dunno this rule before....i swear i won't do that anymore

[Normal]:
  1. 01:06:565 (5,1,2) - 这个很混淆... 改了
  2. 01:09:111 (2,3) - 这个压人声不如继续压鼓声.当然只是个人观点
改了

[Hard]:
  1. 01:02:929 (3) - 让这个更弯一点 然后边缘和2的距离均匀点 改了
  2. 00:37:111 (T) - 加一个NOTE 改了
  3. 没有人声的地方也尽量不要留空吧, 有的地方很奇怪
改了

[Climbb's Insane]:
  1. Cool~!
难度分数分布很不均匀...[N][I][I]的话Rank是没问题,不过我这样的沙包就只能开MOD打打Normal拿20W了 -ω-
囧,在我透過加notes和加break(!?)之下，把[E]變為[N]了 (每個Break +0.03star rating 囧)
那個Hard是Hard吧,囧?????我真的做難了!??!?囧囧囧, 可能最後的1.5x jump太頻密了...

总之...Star~
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
粗略看了一下，我觉得应该先再追加颗粉星= =
晚上回来再细看，现在要出门~
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

  • • Your difficulties are N I I (see beatmap listening): you must make them at least E I I
    • Add a red timing section here 01:24:625 (Offset 84625 // BPM: 165,00) (resnap all notes)

[Climbb's Insane]

  • • 01:51:929 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 01:52:625
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Vikon
THX xxheroxx !

xxheroxx wrote:

[Mod Infos]

Azure: Suggestions.
Blue: You should fix this.
______________________________________________
______________________________________________
______________________________________________

[General]

  • • Your difficulties are N I I (see beatmap listening): you must make them at least E I I
    I feel confused, other modder told me N I I is better than E I I, as it can shorten the range of difficulty. and my [N]'s osu rating is 2.87, less then 3, so it is acceptable?
    • Add a red timing section here 01:24:625 (Offset 84625 // BPM: 165,00) (resnap all notes)[/color]
fixed

[Climbb's Insane]

  • • 01:51:929 (green timing section) - Move this timing section here 01:52:625
:o It's my fault, I changed it in order to test the soft-hitwhistle file ( a slience audio), but i dunno why the file failed.
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
某些mod比mod上面的字体标注写的还少而且还基本全是废话的人就别找了，不然我觉得自己的kud挣的憋屈。

[Normal]
几个短break有点不舒服，虽然没大碍，但我个人观点是没vocal也可以填的= =
00:36:202 - add a note?
00:38:565 (1,2) - 说实话不喜欢，觉得无整体感。
00:42:565 (4,5) - 5的位置右拉一点和之前34在一竖线上可能好些。
最后的几个转盘可否有其他方法替代呢。。。另外就是转盘尾音用normal的finish可能好于目前。
01:36:625 (1) - 换成normal-finish吧

[Hard]
00:37:111 (4,5,6) - 感觉单纯造成误解，没必要。
00:41:475 (1,2,3,4,5) - 同
00:56:384 (3,1) - 不是很主张四分音后接小跳，稍微改小spacing？
slidertick用的替换音比正常音量略大了，建议调小。
01:30:534 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这五边有点不够正= =看下13和25的位置感觉。
whistle感觉可以再听听看，我听着不能算非常好。

[Climbb's Insane]
00:17:656 (5,6,7) - 建议67间也保持和56同间距
00:19:475 (5) - 左一格，大概，没看错。。。
00:48:020 (2) - 右一格感觉更好（在中间位）
01:01:656 (1) - remove new combo
第二阶段offset听起来有大问题，。。。我强烈建议找人复查。
Vikon
343 posts
Joined December 2008
Topic Starter
Vikon
鈴，感謝~!

NatsumeRin wrote:

Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
某些mod比mod上面的字体标注写的还少而且还基本全是废话的人就别找了，不然我觉得自己的kud挣的憋屈。 囧...我會汲取教訓的了

[Normal]
几个短break有点不舒服，虽然没大碍，但我个人观点是没vocal也可以填的= = 在normal裏加沒vocal的不會太難嗎?
00:36:202 - add a note?
00:38:565 (1,2) - 说实话不喜欢，觉得无整体感。 改了
00:42:565 (4,5) - 5的位置右拉一点和之前34在一竖线上可能好些。 [/color] 囧，你的眼力真好
最后的几个转盘可否有其他方法替代呢。。。另外就是转盘尾音用normal的finish可能好于目前。 我再研究一下...因為那段變成notes的話好像有點off
01:36:625 (1) - 换成normal-finish吧 [/color] 改了

[Hard]
00:37:111 (4,5,6) - 感觉单纯造成误解，没必要。 [/color] 改了
00:41:475 (1,2,3,4,5) - 同 [/color] 改了
00:56:384 (3,1) - 不是很主张四分音后接小跳，稍微改小spacing？ [/color] 改了
slidertick用的替换音比正常音量略大了，建议调小。 [/color] 改了
01:30:534 (1,2,3,4,5) - 这五边有点不够正= =看下13和25的位置感觉。 眼力好x2
whistle感觉可以再听听看，我听着不能算非常好。 另行再研究，給我點時間.

[Climbb's Insane]
00:17:656 (5,6,7) - 建议67间也保持和56同间距
00:19:475 (5) - 左一格，大概，没看错。。。
00:48:020 (2) - 右一格感觉更好（在中间位）
01:01:656 (1) - remove new combo
等待Climbb~
第二阶段offset听起来有大问题，。。。我强烈建议找人复查。

這是我的錯-_-，總覺得原本的offset有點偏離，而加了紅色線後偏離更大... 所以，我用回以前的單一offset
Sallad4ever
2,917 posts
Joined October 2009
Sallad4ever
[General]
- Put the kiai fountain on this note 00:47:656 (1) and the second kiai fountain in this note 01:02:384 (1) make sure to end it after the note
- Offset should be on the downbeat, by that the offset will be 15838, but hard and insane start early so I'm not sure :(

[Normal]
00:38:747 (2,3) - spacing check
00:40:565 (4,5) - if you following the lyric move these two backward to 00:40:384 so that both of them land on red tick
00:48:384 (3) - move these so that it won't cover 00:49:111 (5,6) or just move 00:49:111 (5,6) instead?
01:24:747 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1) - change one of this spinner into slider it repeat 4 time it's too repetitive

[Hard]
Because this is Hard it's better to mapped it until the end
00:22:384 (2) - 5 repeat is too many, maybe make it into 3 and add a circle/slider
00:47:111 (3) - confusing because of the 1 repeat slider before this, my suggestion is to make it into 1 repeat like the other and then add a circle in 00:47:475

[Climbb's Insane]
00:36:747 (2,3) - this jump is too sudden IMO

I guess Angel Beats is on the fad now :D
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Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
Hi~
Only 1 suggestion x3
[Hard]
- +1 Circle Size (more small), it's more easy of follow and play =P

Star~ nice map.
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
Normal

slider速度略快

[00:29:656] 去音效
[01:02:202] 适当提高一下音量来突出一下高潮
[01:24:626] 绿线往前点
[01:36:565] 不用finish吧

Hard

[00:14:565] 这里就变N音效比较好
[01:01:838] 还能这样用啊。。。受教了

Climbb's Insane

[00:03:929] 绿线可删，用红线也能这样

怎么感觉最近音效感觉都很相近。。这一系列的歌

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