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Fool's Garden - Lemon Tree

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RE1359EBA
313 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
RE1359EBA
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011년 7월 30일 토요일 at 오전 10:47:34

Artist: Fool's Garden
Title: Lemon Tree
Tags: POP song
BPM: 143.06
Filesize: 6360kb
Play Time: 03:02
Difficulties Available:
  1. Extremity (3.5 stars, 238 notes)
  2. Generally (1.02 stars, 144 notes)
  3. Resolutely (1.89 stars, 190 notes)
  4. Severity (2.96 stars, 219 notes)
Download: Fool's Garden - Lemon Tree
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 1st map.
-This map is not Ouendan style and not EBA Style, either.
This is just makeMy creative.
Last edited by RE1359EBA , edited 148 times in total.
orioncomet
osu! Alumni
2,684 posts
Joined May 2009
orioncomet
~[Overall]~
- set PreviewTime in all diffs (Menu- Timing--->>Set Current Position as Preview)
- try to Resnap all note on all difficulty
- TAG: fool's garden

~[Entrance]~
this diff have too big spacing, IMO
00:29:221 (5) - spacing
00:31:737 (4) - ^
01:49:735 (5) - ^
01:52:251 (4) - ^
02:14:582 (2) - ^
03:02:166 (1) - try sound Finish replace Clap?

~[Standard]~
this diff have too big spacing, IMO ;_;
00:31:738 (4) - spacing
01:52:254 (4) - ^
02:14:583 (2) - ^
03:02:166 (1) - try sound Finish replace Clap?

~[Hard core]~
00:15:803 (2) - spacing
00:19:158 (2) - ^
00:27:754 (3) - ^
00:31:004 (4) - ^
00:35:932 (2) - ^
00:39:286 (2) - ^
01:34:640 (1) - new combo?
01:36:318 (3) - spacing
01:39:672 (2) - ^
01:44:495 (2,3) - ^
01:51:519 (4) - ^
02:03:577 (4,5) - ^
03:02:166 (1) - try sound Finish replace Clap?

~[Extreme]~
00:27:754 (3) - spacing?
00:31:004 (4) - ^
00:59:836 (6,7) - ^
01:13:255 (6,7) - ^
01:19:545 (8,9) - ^
01:34:640 (2) - new combo?
01:48:269 (3) - spacing?
01:51:519 (4) - ^
02:27:058 (6,7) - ^
02:40:477 (6,7) - ^
02:46:139 (7,8) - ^
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Sonnyc
7,754 posts
Joined June 2008
Sonnyc
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
[DBF]
1,827 posts
Joined January 2009
[DBF]
[Overall]
I think offset 700, BPM 143.
Your map have very bad spacing and very strange rhythm in some moments, use "distance snap" for make!


[Entrance]
00:30:689 (2,3) - strange rhythm for easy.
00:58:157 (2,3,4) - spacing.
01:11:577 (2,3,4) - ^
02:24:930 (2,3,4) - ^
02:38:798 (2,3,4) - ^
02:56:833 (1) - hard read for easy i think.
[Standart]
all sounds put on random..?
02:07:349 (3,4,1) - spacing.
02:13:849 (4,1,2) - wha..? spacing.
02:48:445 (1,1) - use ALL sounds, its really not good idea, fix it.
[Hard core]
00:26:916 (1,2,3) - spacing.
01:04:658 - add bit.
01:07:383 (4,1) - spacing.
02:07:980 (3,4) - far < bad english, i hope you understand it.
02:34:608 (4,1) - spacing.
02:48:447 (1,1) - nooo!! put off some sounds!
[Extreme]
its copy hard? oh, really, its not a good idea dude, remake it.

uh-uh, i hope you fix it, and really, remake all sounds, sounds - improvement song, but not random, good luck, star~
Sushi
osu! Alumni
2,989 posts
Joined October 2008
Sushi
CopyPasta powaaa~


[Entrance]
Check AIMod for unsnapped notes
00:31:003 (3) - I know this is based on the lyrics, but it sounds odd.
00:43:898 (1) - too early imo. it is based on nothing. 1beat later seems better
01:51:518 (3) - same tthing as before
02:14:582 (2) - 1/4 beat later
02:50:123 (2,1) - hmm... that's a big jump for an Easy, I think

[Standard]
Check AIMod for unsnapped notes
00:31:004 (3) - as in [entrance]
01:51:520 (3) - ^
02:08:188 (1) - finish is timed wrong
02:14:583 (2) - 1/4 baet later
02:48:445 (1,1) - why are the arrows pointed to the down? fix the end of the sliders
03:02:166 (1) - put this on a real beat, please

[HardCore]
00:31:004 (4) - sames as other diffs
01:51:519 (4) - ^
02:14:584 (6) - 1/4 beat later
03:02:166 (1) - put this on a real beat, please
03:02:166 (1) - not snapped

[Extreme]
Copypasta mirror from Hardcore
RE1359EBA
313 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
RE1359EBA

[DBF] wrote:

[Extreme]
its copy hard? oh, really, its not a good idea dude, remake it.
This map is EBA Style.
After all Thanks.
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mm201
osu! Alumni
4,495 posts
Joined August 2008
mm201
Hard Rock difficulties will usually have extra little bits added to them.

Also, consider using the difficulty names, Breezin', Cruisin', Sweatin', and Hard ROCK! if you want to specifically identify this map as authentic.
La Valse
501 posts
Joined February 2009
La Valse
실력이 부족해서 별만 ..
no kudosu..
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RE1359EBA
313 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
RE1359EBA

MetalMario201 wrote:

Also, consider using the difficulty names, Breezin', Cruisin', Sweatin', and Hard ROCK! if you want to specifically identify this map as authentic.
Umm...
This is a little think to consider....
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RE1359EBA
313 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
RE1359EBA

hutka wrote:

no kudosu..
훗카님 죄송.
Sorry hutka.

no kudosu가 눈에 안띄어서,
Can't see no kudosu,

실수로 쿠도스를 줘 버렸습니다. :oops:
gave is kudosu by mistake :oops:
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
Delete the .osb files in song folder, then "full submission"
RE1359EBA
313 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
RE1359EBA

xxheroxx wrote:

Delete the .osb files in song folder, then "full submission"
That is Removed.
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Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Annyeonghaesyo!

[General]
1) Source?
2) Remove "Lemon" and "Tree", since that word in Title

[Entrance]
There's some unsnapped notes in timing LOL. Please resnap all note (Timing -> Resnap All Notes -> Yes)
00:29:221 (4) - Make curve?
01:33:802 (1) - Add a whistle hitsound
01:34:639 (2) - New combo
02:14:269 (1) - No new combo

[Standard]
01:06:126 (1) - Offscreen
01:33:803 (1) - Add a whistle hitsound
01:34:641 (2) - New combo
02:33:349 (1) - Offscreen

[Hard core]
01:07:802 (1,2) - Too far between these two
01:33:801 (1) - Add a whistle hitsound
01:34:640 (2) - New combo
01:44:075 (1,2) - Too far between these two
01:51:204 (3,4) - ^
02:35:028 (1,2) - ^

[Extreme]
01:07:802 (1,2) - Too far between these two
01:33:801 (1) - Add a whistle hitsound
01:34:640 (2) - New combo

Bad song.......
STAR
Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
1,893 posts
Joined March 2009
Nakagawa-Kanon
[인센]
00:16:432 (4,1) - 이런부분이 스페이싱이 문제군요
이런거랑 똑같은거 전부 스페이싱 조절해주세요
00:31:005 (4) - 빨간칸으로

그외에는 트집이 없어보입니다

트집없는이유는 inis 스타일이라서
트집잡기 애매함
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request.

Read this first for the icon explanation.
- [?] Asking for a second thought.
- [!] Fatal error. You have to fix this for sure.
- [No icon] Only a suggestion.

[General]
1. Remove "Fool's" and "Garden" from tags since they have been covered with the artist name. Add other tags and remember to lowercase all tags.
2. Add "Dish of the Day" to the source. It's the album of the song.
3. The background is too small.
4. Delete all .osb file in the map's folder. [!]
5. The BPM is 143.17 or 143.20, perhaps. Ask the other to confirm the timing for you, perhaps.
6. You're really insipred with the EBA-style map. No offense but this map doesn't really like EBA-style map. Okay, maybe it does on [Hard core] and [Extreme] diff. But, just forget it.
7. I hate copy-paste design. It's boring. No no no.
8. Do not force yourself to make an EBA-style map. Make an RE1359EBA-style map instead.

[Entrance]
-- Could you silence the sliderslide, please?
-- Resnap all objects. Go to Timing > Resnap all notes. [!]
-- No high jump for easy diff. Always use distance snap.
00:24:194 (1) - No high jump. [!]
00:28:382 (2) - Don't do this jump please. [!]
00:30:271 (1,2,3) - Use distance snap. [!]
00:31:737 (4) - No high jump. [!]
00:44:319 (1) - This is a jump. But I think it's okay, perhaps.
00:45:995 (2,1,2,3) - Use distance snap. [!]
00:48:932 - Map this berak. It's odd if you place a break for only one sentence of lyrics.
00:56:061 (3) - This is a jump. Idk if it's okay.
00:57:736 (1,2,3,4,5) - Use distance snap.. [!]
Well, okay. Even I just modded 30% of the diff, I know that the major problem is distance. Fix them and mod your map by yourself. Use distance snap for the easiest diff. No jump allowed. I will not mod the distance error anymore. Fix them yourself.
02:56:831 (1) - Kind of overlapping slider. [!]
02:15:108 - Map this berak. It's odd if you place a break for only one sentence of lyrics.

[Standard]
-- The same problem as [Entrance]. Distance error. But, since this is a normal diff, I will not put my [!] icon here.
00:48:932 - Map this berak. It's odd if you place a break for only one sentence of lyrics.
02:15:108 - ^
02:56:831 (1) - Kind of overlapping slider. [!]

[Hard core]
-- Weird diff name. It must be [Hardcore], right?
02:58:205 (2) - It doesn't fit to the song. Make it shorter (use 1/8), then add one more repeat.
00:48:932 - Map this berak. It's odd if you place a break for only one sentence of lyrics.
02:15:108 - ^
02:56:831 (1) - Kind of overlapping slider. [!]

[Extreme]
- Delete this diff or re-map this diff with brand new pattern. [!]
02:56:831 (1) - Kind of overlapping slider. [!]
No. I won't star. Fix them all first, then ask more people to mod this map. I believe this map will be good one day. You may ask me to re-mod after it.
RE1359EBA
313 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
RE1359EBA

Leorda wrote:

[Entrance]
01:33:802 (1) - Add a whistle hitsound
01:34:639 (2) - New combo
02:14:269 (1) - No new combo

[Standard]
01:33:803 (1) - Add a whistle hitsound
01:34:641 (2) - New combo

[Hard core]
01:07:802 (1,2) - Too far between these two :arrow: Easily tell is spacing. isn't he?
01:33:801 (1) - Add a whistle hitsound
01:34:640 (2) - New combo[/color]
01:44:075 (1,2) - Too far between these two
02:35:028 (1,2) - ^

[Extreme] :arrow: [Hard core] And equally
RE1359EBA
313 posts
Joined February 2009
Topic Starter
RE1359EBA

dksslqj wrote:

[인센]
00:16:432 (4,1) - 이런부분이 스페이싱이 문제군요
이런거랑 똑같은거 전부 스페이싱 조절해주세요
00:31:005 (4) - 빨간칸으로

그외에는 트집이 없어보입니다

트집없는이유는 inis 스타일이라서
트집잡기 애매함
완벽하게 수정 했습니다.

P.S 난데없어 트집은 도대체...
Astom
1,588 posts
Joined October 2008
Astom
In red maybe important, In blue suggestions

[General]
-LEMON TREE.png, search for a better BG and resize to 1024x768, and try to use a .jpeg img
-Add some tag

[Entrance]
-Acc 100% nice

[Standard]
-Acc 100%
-Don't copy and paste D:

[Hardcore]
-Acc 100% this is not hardcore, pretty easy i think
-Don't copy and paste D:

[Extreme]
-Acc 95% this is not Extreme, pretty easy, I don't get more acc because the overall is high nothing more.

Post again in my queue when your map is already more fun D:
Kecco
908 posts
Joined September 2009
Kecco
Hi.
Nothing has to be modded here, for me~
Star~
Lizbeth
osu! Alumni
1,731 posts
Joined August 2008
Lizbeth
I think you miss the rhythm of the song while mapping this... is important to follow the beats of the song so the map turn comfortable to play.

Here's an example I made based on part of the Extreme diff, following the rhythm as I thought is better. Hope it can be useful. Plz don't look at the chart, only the time line xD

Download: Fool's Garden - Lemon Tree (RE1359EBA) [EXAMPLE].osu
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