1. Hard (4,83 stars, 392 notes)
2. Insane (4,98 stars, 593 notes)
3. Normal (1,94 stars, 176 notes)

• 1. BPM 132 , Offset 1060

1. Remove !! from Hard diff. and remove ~ from Easy diff. Doesn't look nice.
2. Offset 1055.
3. Background is a bit 'blurry'. Maybe change (?)

1. 00:57:064 (1) - Remove new combo (?)
2. 01:00:037 (4,1) - Spacing.
3. 01:04:069 (6,1) - Spacing.
4. (nazi) 01:15:060 (11) - Move one grid level to the right and down.
5. 01:19:023 (2) - Move 3 grid levels to the right.
6. 01:29:069 (1,2) - Spacing.
7. (nazi) 01:32:064 (4) - Move one grid level up.
8. 01:37:019 (8) - Move 2 grid levels up.
9. 01:37:064 (9) - New combo (?)
10. (nazi) 01:54:046 (6) - Move one grid level to the left.
11. (nazi) 01:56:028 (5) - Move one grid level to the right.
12. (nazi) 01:56:085 (8) - Move one grid level to the left.
13. 02:08:010 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2) - Wow, weird new combo's, please fix.
14. 02:20:014 (5,6) - Spacing.
15. 02:27:087 (4) - Spacing.
16. (nazi) 02:35:014 (6) - Move one grid level to the left and down.
17. 02:38:078 (2) - Spacing.
18. (nazi) 02:45:014 (6) - Move this 2 grid levels up.
19. 02:47:087 (1) - Spacing.
20. 02:50:014 (11) - New combo (?)
21. 02:58:055 (4,1) - Spacing.
22. 03:04:069 (12) - New combo (?)
23. 03:06:050 (12) - New combo (?)
24. 03:07:019 (1) - Remove new combo (?)
25. 03:08:078 (14) - ^ If you did that one, then make this a New combo.

1. This is SO MUCH BETTER than the insane diff. I actually <3 this one.
2. 01:08:033 (6) - New combo (?)
3. 01:19:092 (11) - New combo (?)
4. (nazi) 01:36:006 (3) - Move one grid level to the right.

1. All fine~

Gladi wrote:

- General / All diff's.

1. Remove !! from Hard diff. and remove ~ from Easy diff. Doesn't look nice. OK
2. Offset 1055. OK
3. Background is a bit 'blurry'. Maybe change (?)Searching

- Insane.

1. 00:57:064 (1) - Remove new combo Ok
2. 01:00:037 (4,1) - Spacing.Ok
3. 01:04:069 (6,1) - Spacing.Ok
4. (nazi) 01:15:060 (11) - Move one grid level to the right and down.Ok
5. 01:19:023 (2) - Move 3 grid levels to the right.Ok
6. 01:29:069 (1,2) - Spacing. Ok
7. (nazi) 01:32:064 (4) - Move one grid level up. Ok
8. 01:37:019 (8) - Move 2 grid levels up. Ok
9. 01:37:064 (9) - New combo Ok xD
10. (nazi) 01:54:046 (6) - Move one grid level to the left.Ok
11. (nazi) 01:56:028 (5) - Move one grid level to the right.Ok
12. (nazi) 01:56:085 (8) - Move one grid level to the left. Ok
13. 02:08:010 (1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2) - Wow, weird new combo's, please fix. Ok
14. 02:20:014 (5,6) - Spacing. Ok
15. 02:27:087 (4) - Spacing. Oku
16. (nazi) 02:35:014 (6) - Move one grid level to the left and down. Ok?
17. 02:38:078 (2) - Spacing. Ok
18. (nazi) 02:45:014 (6) - Move this 2 grid levels up. Ok
19. 02:47:087 (1) - Spacing. ok
20. 02:50:014 (11) - New combo Ok
21. 02:58:055 (4,1) - Spacing.Ok
22. 03:04:069 (12) - New combo Ok
23. 03:06:050 (12) - New combo Ok
24. 03:07:019 (1) - Remove new combo Ok
25. 03:08:078 (14) - ^ If you did that one, then make this a New combo. Ok

- Hard.

1. This is SO MUCH BETTER than the insane diff. I actually <3 this one.
2. 01:08:033 (6) - New combo (Ok)
3. 01:19:092 (11) - New combo (Hai)
4. (nazi) 01:36:006 (3) - Move one grid level to the right.Ok

- Easy.

1. All fine~

Starred~

James2250 wrote:

easy:
01:13:078 (1) - 1 grid right Ok
01:27:019 (3,4) - separate slightly more Ok
01:39:024 (1,2) - ^ Ok
02:54:046 (3,4) - ^ Ok
02:55:045 (1) - start/end on white ticks? Yep ^^
03:06:051 (1,2) - separate slightly more oke

Hard:
00:24:001 (1) - new combo doesn't match with others..remove? oke
00:26:051 (3) - new combo ok
01:27:019 (2) - 1 grid up? Ok
02:46:006 (5,6,7,8) - mirror 1,2,3,4? Okes, complete
03:03:056 (4) - down 1 grid Ok
03:03:056 (4,5) - spacing Ok

Insane:
00:52:019 (3,4) - down 1 grid Ok
01:07:087 (3) - ^ Ok
01:11:006 (3) - ^ to mirror 1 (then fix rest of combo) Uff, ok xD
01:51:006 (6,3,4,5) - spacing makes no sense Hmmm, Ok? xP
01:53:078 (1) - up 1 grid ok
02:08:010 (1,2,3,4) - keep spacing equal Ok
02:40:037 (4) - 1 grid down Ok
02:57:019 (1,2) - align? Oki ?? x3
03:05:060 (7,8,9) - spacing ...eh? XD
03:17:042 (1) - 1 grid up ok
03:24:069 (1) - add note here with finish? wow, ok ^^

I would go through insane again and make sure spacing makes sense following the timeline
*star*

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Modding time~

~All Diffs~
- Cambia el Source a: Naruto Shippuden: Kizuna Listo x3
- Añade un Preview Point en las tres dificultades (señala el punto donde quieres que empiece la muestra y ve a Timing - Set Current Position As Preview) Listo ;D

~Easy~
01:39:696 (2,1) - Spacing :S En una Easy los saltos estan casi prohibidos xDD Pecado! XD
02:41:059 (1,2,3,4,5) - Arregla el spacing aqui (Desactiva el Grid Snap, hay veces que hay notas que se quedan raras con el puesto xD) okis ^^
03:06:969 (2,1) - Lo mismo que en 1:39 >.< Listo n-n

~Hard~
- Baja el volumen de los hitsounds y dejalo como en el de la Easy Ok
- Haz un resnap de nuevo, AIMod dice que ninguna nota esta bien colocada en el snap xD listo XD
00:44:009 (5) - Quedaria mejor si superpones el final del slider anterior con el principio de este. Para eso manten pulsado Alt y veras que donde antes ponia Beat Snap Divisor ahora pondrá Distance Spacing, bajalo a 0 y coge el slider, voila! :3 que crack tu :O
01:18:782 (6,7,8,9,10) - Haz que sea simetrico a (1,2,3,4,5). oke~~
01:37:645 (8) - New Combo. ok
02:21:055 (9) - ^ ok
03:03:782 (5) - Superpon este con el (4), queda raro como esta :S Listo

~Insane~
- Vuelve a hacer resnap aqui tambien xD. Oki
- Baja los hitsounds y ponlos como la Easy Oki
00:15:946 (2,3,4) - Spacing ok
00:17:764 (2,3,4) - ^ ok
00:19:582 (2,3,4) - ^ ok
00:21:400 (2,3,4) - ^ ok
00:24:014 (4) - ^ ok...
00:25:832 (4) - ^ ok >_>...
00:27:650 (4) - ^ ...ok...
00:29:469 (4,5,6) - ^ ya te vale XD...
00:42:878 (1,3) - Colocalos como en esta imagen: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/1363 creo que ya XD
00:46:287 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Por dios como me mola esto >o<
00:55:946 (2) - Spacing oke
01:00:378 (4) - Superponlo con el (3)? hmm, oke
01:13:332 (11) - Superponlo con (7) listo
01:14:696 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - Spacing okie
01:26:514 (5) - New Combo
01:28:332 (1) - Superponlo con (5) oki, pero deja de ser 5 si le doy a new combo >:D!
03:14:009 - Añade un Break. y listo *-*

Para ser tu primer map no esta nada nada mal xD Sigue asi bichito! >w< *star*

1. Las tags que estás utilizando no me parecen muy buenas... es que ya son usadas en otros lugares. Para qué ponerte a ti mismo ahí si osu! ya sabe que lo creaste?
2. La "source" debe ser la misma entre todas las dificultades.
3. Tal vez deberías de cortar el mp3 si puedes. Si no puedes, pídemelo a mí.
4. En mi opinión, la cuenta regresiva no queda muy bien...

1. Te recomiendo que hagas el Kiai time el mismo entre todas las dificultades.

1. Al principio hay muchos saltos... esos no deberían de existir en un fácil.
2. El offset es diferente que las demás dificultades... todos deben ser los mismos.
3. Esta dificultad no tiene colores de combo customizados.

1. Ve a "Timing -> Recalculate slider lengths", y arregla los sliders que se cambiaron.

1. Woah, está un poco sobremappeado, si entiendes a lo que me refiero.

Gens wrote:

[General]

1. Las tags que estás utilizando no me parecen muy buenas... es que ya son usadas en otros lugares. Para qué ponerte a ti mismo ahí si osu! ya sabe que lo creaste? (we, vi a algunos hacerlos asi que, pero ya esta corregido)
2. La "source" debe ser la misma entre todas las dificultades. (Listo~~)
3. Tal vez deberías de cortar el mp3 si puedes. Si no puedes, pídemelo a mí. (hmm, no xD, mas que nada por que hay veces que me apetece escuchar musica, y escuchar canciones cortadas, no me haria mucha gracia xP...espero no ser el unico XD)
4. En mi opinión, la cuenta regresiva no queda muy bien...

(sep, queda mejor sin ella ^^ quitada)

[Todas las Dificultades]

1. Te recomiendo que hagas el Kiai time el mismo entre todas las dificultades.(listo, las puse igual en hard y easy, la insane no em gusto como quedo)

[Easy]

1. Al principio hay muchos saltos... esos no deberían de existir en un fácil. (no veo gran dificultad en ellos, ademas de ser lentos, no tienen tanta separacion)
2. El offset es diferente que las demás dificultades... todos deben ser los mismos. (arreglado ^^)
3. Esta dificultad no tiene colores de combo customizados.(listo y cambiado todos los colores a unos nuevos en todas las difficultades :3)

01:28:332 (1) - El spinner está muy corto para un fácil... al menos es lo que yo digo. Lo mismo aplica para los otros spinners. (con dos vueltas se llena XD...ademas al alargarlo queda muy raro S:)

[Hard]

1. Ve a "Timing -> Recalculate slider lengths", y arregla los sliders que se cambiaron.(listo n0n)

01:54:009 (2) - Porqué hiciste este slider así...? No se ve nada bien. O_o (puse otras notas ahi, espero te gusten owo)

[Insane]

1. Woah, está un poco sobremappeado, si entiendes a lo que me refiero.(es para darle carga psicologica al player +_+ y mas emocion xD...nah, simplemente me agradan las insanes medias raras en ese sentido)

00:37:418 - Que el break no estaba supuesto a terminar aquí? (sep, lo hice a posta...puede que sea...un estilo de capricho mio xD)

~ ~ ~

Hmmhmm, creo que eso es todo. Sólo asegúrate de arreglar estas cosas, y estarás listo.

1. 00:21:056 (1,2,3) - Shift these over to the left a bit so 3 stacks on the fading 3.
2. 01:01:055 (1) - Remove new combo.
3. 01:02:874 (3) - New combo.
4. 02:21:056 (1) - Remove new combo.
5. 02:22:874 (2) - New combo.
6. 03:06:965 (2) - Sorry, but this slider doesn't look good under the fading slider. Try moving it somewhere else.
7. 03:21:055 (1) - Lengthen this to the finish sound in the song. (03:24:691) Also add a finish sound.

1. 01:36:964 (7) - Move this farther away from 6.
2. 02:18:782 (7) - Move closer to 6.
3. 02:36:736 (9) - Move closer to 10.

1. 00:29:805 (5,6) - Move closer to 4's endpoint so it's evenly spaced.
2. 01:17:873 (4) - Move closer to 3.
3. 01:18:782 (10) - Move closer to 9.
4. 01:21:282 (2) - Move closer to 3.
5. 01:21:964 (6,7,8,9,10) - Even these out.
6. 01:26:054 (4) - Align with 1 vertically and 3 horizontally.
7. 01:54:009 (2) - Move closer to 3.
8. 02:06:509 (2) - Move closer to 3.
9. 02:16:282 (4) - Move closer to 5.
10. 02:36:736 (9) - Move closer to 10.
11. 02:44:464 (3) - Remove Kiai Time here, it doesn't fit.
12. 02:52:645 (5,6,7,8,9) - Evenly space these out.
13. 03:03:327 (4) - Move closer to 3.
14. 03:03:782 (6) - Move closer to 7.
15. 03:09:009 (3) - Move closer to 2.
16. 03:09:236 (4) - Move closer to 5.
17. 03:23:782 (7,8,9,10,11) - Kiai Time doesn't fit around here. Either remove them both or keep 1 only.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Easy~

1. 00:21:056 (1,2,3) - Shift these over to the left a bit so 3 stacks on the fading 3. Ok
2. 01:01:055 (1) - Remove new combo. Ok
3. 01:02:874 (3) - New combo. Ok
4. 02:21:056 (1) - Remove new combo. Ok
5. 02:22:874 (2) - New combo. Ok
6. 03:06:965 (2) - Sorry, but this slider doesn't look good under the fading slider. Try moving it somewhere else. Ok.
7. 03:21:055 (1) - Lengthen this to the finish sound in the song. (03:24:691) Also add a finish sound.Ok

Hard~

1. 01:36:964 (7) - Move this farther away from 6. Ok
2. 02:18:782 (7) - Move closer to 6. Ok
3. 02:36:736 (9) - Move closer to 10. Ok

Insane~

1. 00:29:805 (5,6) - Move closer to 4's endpoint so it's evenly spaced. Ok
2. 01:17:873 (4) - Move closer to 3. Ok
3. 01:18:782 (10) - Move closer to 9. Ok
4. 01:21:282 (2) - Move closer to 3. Ok
5. 01:21:964 (6,7,8,9,10) - Even these out. hmm Ok? xD
6. 01:26:054 (4) - Align with 1 vertically and 3 horizontally. Ok
7. 01:54:009 (2) - Move closer to 3. Ok
8. 02:06:509 (2) - Move closer to 3.Ok
9. 02:16:282 (4) - Move closer to 5. Ok
10. 02:36:736 (9) - Move closer to 10. Ok
11. 02:44:464 (3) - Remove Kiai Time here, it doesn't fit. Ok
12. 02:52:645 (5,6,7,8,9) - Evenly space these out. Oke
13. 03:03:327 (4) - Move closer to 3. Ok
14. 03:03:782 (6) - Move closer to 7. Ok
15. 03:09:009 (3) - Move closer to 2. Ok
16. 03:09:236 (4) - Move closer to 5. Ok
17. 03:23:782 (7,8,9,10,11) - Kiai Time doesn't fit around here. Either remove them both or keep 1 only.Ok, all remove xP

blissfulyoshi wrote:

I noticed that you forgot to give Mafiamaster a kds. xDD my fail x3 thanks

Tags: Remove all your current tags since Naruto is already in the source and the other 3 words are the artist. Instead, I would add Sasuke, since he is in the picture, and a few other appropriate words that are not already there Ok. Thanks

Easy:
Normal mod:
03:10:033 (1) - start a quarter note later but end it where it currently ends
The spinner spam at the end is quite boring IMO Ok ^^

Combo mod:
01:40:601 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Personally I saw no purpose for a new combo spam like this and would remove them, but this is your map with its own style. Do whatever you feel is best for these combos Ok o3o

Hard:
Why is the slider tick rate 0.5 in this difficulty? Unless there is a special reason, make it 1 like like the other diffs okes, 1 is good ^^

Combo mod:
00:39:236 (3) - new combo to follow the lyrics Ok
01:22:418 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 01:18:782 (6) Ok
01:37:645 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with 01:34:009 (4) Ok
02:46:054 (5) - new combo to be consistent with 02:42:418 (1) Ok
02:47:191 (9) - new combo to be consistent with 02:43:554 (1) Oki
02:49:691 (4) - new combo to be consistent with 02:42:418 (1) Oke :3
03:04:236 (1) - for consistency remove this new combo, but if this combo was used for the change in spacing, it is fine Ok ^-^

Insane:
Combo mod:
01:15:373 (10,1) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 10 to be consistent with 01:19:009 (1) Hmm, ok?
01:30:373 (2) - new combo to be consistent with 01:34:009 (1) Ok
01:36:964 (7) - new combo to be consistent with 01:33:327 (1) Ok
02:21:282 (8) - new combo to follow the lyrics? Oki n-n

Timing section mod:
02:47:42 - unneeded timing section Yep, ok ^^

=============
Nice map. Star.

xxheroxx wrote:

Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

Spacing is a bit weird. Use always Distance Snap. yeah, but...and the jumps? ._.?
Cut the mp3

[Easy] (this diff. seems a Normal)

03:08:101 (1,1,1,1,1) - Remove New combos Hmm, oke
03:13:327 (break) - Delete it Ok

[Hard]

It's ok Yays

[Insane]

Spacing!!!! Use always Distance Snap (example: 00:45:600 (7,8) or 00:49:236 (7,8)) I used it already, but if I use it in every circle the jumps will dissapear D:

Starred~

sesito71 wrote:

wow está genial el mapa Zakiu ^_^

[Easy]

00:22:192 (3) - Hmm, creo que deberías poner finish y quitar clap al final de este slider, para que no sea tan repetitivo todo Ok
00:29:692 (3) - Aquí lo mismo, quitas el clap y pones finish. Para evitar repeticiones =D Ok
01:19:237 (5) - Esta nota se te movió un poco, alinéala con 3 y 1 ^^ Ok
01:39:692 (2) - Siendo una easy quizás deberías colocar este slider según el distance snap Listo
03:07:874 (1) - Pero que salto más grandeeee ! xD Creo que ahora esta mejor ^^
03:08:101 (1) - Hmm, deberías quitar el new combo Sep
03:09:010 (1) - ^ Sep
03:09:692 (1) - ^ y Sep XD

[Hard]

01:00:145 (3) - Alinea esto con 1 y 2 Oke
01:54:123 (2) - Pon un clap al final del slider Ok
01:54:464 (3) - Clap Ok
01:55:600 (1,2) - Prueba clap al final de los slider. Me encanta como queda todo lo que hay dentro de los breaks Ok xD
02:19:918 (4,6) - Alinealos bien Oke
02:20:145 (5) - Muevelo un poco a la derecha hmm, creo que esta bien hubicado S:
02:30:145 (1) - Aquí debería empezar el spinner en mi opinión, podrías hacer algo antes de que empiece (un slider quizás) Oke
02:33:782 (3) - New combo (?) yep

[Insane]

00:18:100 (4) - Prueba clap aquí Ok
00:21:736 (4) - ^ Ok
00:28:782 (3) - Clap al final del slider Ok
01:39:691 (2,3) - Hmm, no veo sentido a este salto. Listo, un pequeño cambio xP
01:56:395 (6,7,8) - Los hitsounds de estos sliders no suenan demasiado bien en mi opinión D: Suena raro XD...a ver ahora
02:57:191 (1,2,3,4) - Si querías hacer la forma de un cuadrado deberías alinearlos mejor xD Listo
03:04:691 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) - Esto no me gusta demasiado D: owo...pos como mucho le pongo un new combo, por que lo demas, es capricho mio xD

Bueno, para ser un primer map esta muy muy bien

Star*

Zekira wrote:

[General]
Offset: 1050 (-5 from current). Don't forget to move the other offsets too.
Uh... cut the MP3 or something? Not only is the song longer than what's mapped, the MP3 is even considerably large for its length of 4 minutes (11.4MB). Maybe get someone who can reduce the filesize after it's been cropped or something, I really think 11.4MB is too high for a 4 minute song. EDIT: Wait, 5 minutes huh. Still, it's a bit big... o_o Many recommend non-video'd songs to be not more than 10MB I have changed mp3, now it weighs considerably less
The offset is different now, because of it yours will not use ^^

[Easy]
00:16:732 (3) - remove clap from head Oki
00:18:551 (3) - ^ Oki
00:20:369 (3) - ^ Oki
00:20:369 (3) - remove finish from head, add finish to tail, remove clap from tail Oki
00:24:005 (2) - remove clap Oki
00:25:823 (2) - ^
00:27:641 (2) - remove clap
00:38:322 (2) - clap?
00:44:687 (1) - clap on tail
00:48:323 (1) - ^
00:53:777 (2) - remove whistle on head, put clap on tail
00:55:596 (1) - remove clap on head
00:57:414 (2) - clap on tail? ^All Oki XD
(I'm sorry, but claps really sound really good to my ears on this song...) jajaja np x3
00:59:232 (1) - remove clap on first head and tail?
01:01:050 (2) - I don't think whistle fits?
01:04:687 (3) - clap on last tail?
01:08:323 (3) - ^
01:11:960 (3) - clap or finish on last tail? ^All oki
01:29:687 (1) - note seems so soon after a spinner for an Easy...
01:33:323 (1) - ^
01:39:232 (1) - jump a bit too enormous for an Easy ^ change a Normal ^^
02:04:687 (1) - clap on tail?
02:06:505 (2,3) - clap on 3, remove on 2
02:11:960 (1) - remove clap on head
02:13:778 (2) - clap on tail?
02:15:596 (1) - remove clap on head?
02:17:414 (2) - clap on tail?
02:19:232 (1) - remove clap on first head and tail?
02:21:051 (2) - clap on last tail? ^Oki
02:56:960 (1) - note seems so soon after a spinner for an Easy...
03:00:596 (1) - ^
IMO feels fitting for a normal if it had a higher spacing lol (well that's just me -- I look more at the note-heaviness than the spacing heh)

[Hard]
00:15:600 (1) - clap on tail?
00:16:736 (2) - remove clap?
00:18:782 (2) - clap?
00:19:236 (1) - clap on tail?
00:20:373 (2) - remove clap?
00:22:418 (2) - clap?
(insert reptition of the above for the other parts of the first part lol, I realize they sound alike) ^Oki
00:37:418 (1,2) - claps on their tails?Ok
01:19:918 (1) - whistle on last tail?
01:52:418 (2) - remove clap on tail?
01:53:100 (3) - remove clap on head?
01:54:464 (3) - remove clap?
01:56:055 (2) - clap on head?
01:56:736 (3) - remove clap?all Ok
02:41:054 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think these two combos should sound alike? Me too XD
03:09:464 (1) - I dunno, but this suddenly mislead me as if it was too close to the previous one... but that's just me. xD sorry

[Insane]
Remember how I wanted the first part of Hard to sound? Well I'm too tired now to point out how the first part of this should sound too lol... XDD ok
01:29:691 (1) - what the, anti-jump? o_o I deliberately started missing so much after this one. Hmmm...Look now ^^
01:55:600 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - hitsounds are kinda messy to the ears... Fix :3
02:21:395 (1) - what's with the New Combo? Ok, ;3 my fail xD

Insane is so awesome I just have to give it a star lol.

thepianist wrote:

ninjamod heh

My suggestions! (And suggestions only (: )

Easy
40 secondish, 2 min ish, etc. - Sometimes a beat between what you have breaks the almost monotony (ie 00:46:055)
01:03:782 (2) - Move back a beat to match vocals.
01:04:692 (3) - Extend for one more repeat
01:08:328 (3) - ^
01:11:964 (3) - ^

But I am creating a rythm separately, not following the vocal rythm S:

Hard
00:44:464 (1) - Ahaha miss. Check spacing for this one? (:

Insane
00:19:691 (3) - A little too close (see 00:21:509 (3)) Ok ^^
00:26:850 (2,3), 00:28:668 (2,3) - Personally I don't think this jump fits, unless you repeat it in the first two as well for consistency.
00:49:236 (7) - Doesn't "flow" well. Seems to jut out awkwardly instead of following a continuous path.
00:51:964 (2,3,4,5) / 00:53:782 (1,2,3,4,5) - Pick one kind of spacing and stick with it.
01:16:509 (1,2,3) - Bleh I missed. lol. xD jumps man, jumps XD

Very nice job on the mapping, complete with hitsounds and all

Star

Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

Delete the .osb and full submit.
Combobursts are too wide; they must be under 500px width.
Take Naruto and Shippuden out of the tags; they're already found in the source.
Is there a cool reason why combo colours are different across the difficulties? Just curious, although it's better if they're consistent.
Your MP3 is far longer than it needs to be; please cut it and make a new offset.

You seem to have made timing adjustments after mapping; adjust your offsets so that kiai starts right on the beat and not 20-30 ms late. For example: 01:13:775.

[Normal]

Looks okay.

[Hard]

00:18:548 (1,2) - I don't really understand why these two notes are spaced more than normal. Oki
00:22:184 (1,2) - ^ Too xD
01:08:320 (1,1,1) - Unpredictable number of repeats is kinda bleh. now? x-x?
01:37:638 (8,9,10) - Could be lined up better; turn off grid snap but keep distance snap on, and hold Ctrl while dragging.
02:19:457 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Not symmetrical; 4, 5, 6 need to be moved a grid left. Ok
02:30:138 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - Man, the fact that the delays after the spinners are different really will trip players up. Ok
02:50:820 (1,2,3,4) - Watch your alignment. Ok

[Insane]

Man, that max score is pretty high. This better be difficult...

00:39:911 (4,5,6,8) - Move a grid up for symmetry. Oke
01:04:684 (6,1,2) - Fix spacing. Oke
01:12:638 (9,10) - ^ Oki
01:15:366 (1,2) - A grid up for consistency. Oke
01:16:957 (3,1) - Eh, don't like this spacing. Distance snap mode: ON O.o
01:18:093 (5,6) - Fix spacing.Ok
01:24:684 (1,2,3,4) - Symmetry is off; use horizontal and vertical flip to correct. Oki
01:26:502 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Oki
01:32:184 (2,3,4,5) - Not square. ??? D:
01:34:002 (1,2) - Spacing. Ok
01:35:593 (1,2,3,4,5) - Not really lined up. o-o!
01:38:548 (5,6) - Down a grid? oks
02:08:093 (1,2,3,4) - Inconsistent spacing. Ok
02:30:138 (1,1,2,1,1,2) - Same as Hard. Ok
02:34:684 (3,4,5) - Symmetry is off. Ok
02:39:684 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Ok
02:42:866 (2,3,4) - ^ Ok
02:44:457 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Very messy shape. Ok
02:47:866 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - Symmetry is off. Ok
02:52:979 (8) - Left a grid for a smoother curve? Ok ^^

So many spacing changes; I don't think they're very good.

Lots of issues, sorry. I can't pubble this until a few more MATs' opinions are posted.

Lokamp wrote:

Normal
00:51:957 (1) - clap this slider's end Ok
03:10:138 (spinner) - silence its end! Ok

Hard
[General] Refine spacing, please... it changes quite often, creating both good jumps and horrible ones [like on 01:54:116 (2,3)] Ok.^^U

Insane
00:29:457 (4,5,6) - fix spacing Ok
01:12:866 (10) - new combo Ok

Except some spacing problems, you had better to fix overall hitsound-placing along the song (all modes) : try to insert some whistles and maybe some soft sounds where there isn't kiai time! yep yep X3!
Anyway, let's star this good map!

Lissette wrote:

Quita Naruto shippuden el los Tags porque ya esta en el Source ^^
puedes agregar a los tags si es un ending o un opening
comboburst no debe exceder 500px de ancho

Normal
por que tienes el Beat Snap Divisor en 1/6 y en las otras dificultades en 1/4?? o.O (ni idea XD...lo abre cambiado sin querer xP)
00:17:411 (1) - no saltos en normal
00:19:229 (1) - ^
00:21:048 (1) - ^
00:22:866 (1) - separa este un poco, podría resultar confuso
00:24:684 (1) - no saltos en normal
00:26:502 (1) - ^
00:28:320 (1) - ^
00:41:048 (1) - ^
01:13:775 (1) - ^
01:40:593 (1) - ^
02:48:320 (1) - ^
03:07:866 (1) - ^
Listo ^^
Hard
00:57:638 (8) - agrega dos repeticiones (ok..supongo O.o)
01:09:002 (1) - pon una sola nota aquí, y el slider siguiente muevelo hacia 01:09:229 - y agrega dos repeticiones (sinceramente no entendi muy bien esto S:)
01:09:911 (1) - quita esta nota (ok)
01:13:093 (3) - ^ (ok)
01:18:775 (6) - new combo? (oke)
02:21:048 (1,2,3,4) - el espacio en este combo esta inconsistente (listo)
02:29:684 (8) - cambia este el slider por una sola nota (okep)

Insane
00:15:593 - 00:30:138 - los dobles en esta parte sonarían mejor como triples, agregando notas en estos puntos: 00:15:820 - 00:17:638 - 00:19:457 - 00:21:275 - 00:23:093 - 00:24:911 - 00:26:729 - 00:28:548 - pero es solo una sugerencia
00:57:638 (7) - agrega dos repeticiones
01:05:820 (1) - separalo un poco del combo anterior
01:19:457 (3) - muevelo hasta 01:19:911 - y quitale dos repeticiones, y agrega una nota aqui 01:19:457 -
01:23:320 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - empieza el stream aquí 01:23:548 -
01:41:729 (4,5,6) - esta mal el spacing, (5,6) deberían estar mas cerca, o ponle un new combo para que sea un salto
01:54:343 (5) - quita esta nota
02:07:866 (11) - quita esta nota
02:11:502 (6) - muevelo hacia el tick azul anterior
02:20:934 - agrega una nota
02:24:684 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - no me gustan los zig-zag streams >.<
02:27:866 (4,5,6) - quita el (4) y mueve el (6) medio beat después
02:35:138 (5) - mirror con (3) jeje, no suelo ser nazi, pero se ve rarito
02:39:457 - agrega una nota
02:40:366 (4) - quita esta nota
y ok, algunas cosas no las hice por que me parecian raras S: asi que bue, pero la mayoria esta arreglado ^^
se me termino el tiempo por ahora, pero mas tarde continuo u.u
te dejo una estrella

EDIT: moderación completa ^^