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=NeutraL= - Saotome no Yuugi Soshite Ryuugi

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Ex Boy
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010年7月11日 at 20:52:53

Artist: =NeutraL=
Title: Saotome no Yuugi Soshite Ryuugi
Source: Touhou
Tags: Kotsuki Miya SENTIVE
BPM: 130
Filesize: 7269kb
Play Time: 01:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.75 stars, 83 notes)
  2. Hard (4.78 stars, 558 notes)
  3. Normal (4.09 stars, 209 notes)
Download: =NeutraL= - Saotome no Yuugi Soshite Ryuugi
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0 0 good song,right?
sunny day
:) ~~~
yaya
OFFSET: 1914
以后记得测Offset的时候要对鼓声,要不你的重音note全都去了红线。然后在看一下alace在中文论坛post的

Hard
00:29:14 (9) - i know you do this on purpose , but no
00:39:76 (5) - 像这种hitsound,只是在拉的时候有whistle声,两头都没有,最好不要。
01:28:68 - 这一段很明显是1/6拍啊。为什么还用1/4连打?看图 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/932
01:42:06 (2) - new combo
02:08:83 (6) - 删掉 , 02:08:37 (5) - 延长到 02:08:83
02:57:29 (1) - 1/6拍

总体来说hard排列蛮不错,但是还是hitsound问题,给人感觉就是,想起来了就加一个whistle,没有任何规律,相同音乐的情况下,你前面加了哨音,后面却没加,这种情况很常见,所以加hitsound的时候要用心,首先要让他好听,适合音乐,第二,前后一致。

normal
00:37:01 (1,3) - 喂,这样好难看。
1/6那一段再修一下。

摆脱,你做太少了吧。不要像我一样~我以前的谱normal从来只做几十秒,但是这样很不好。
要清楚,是为了做一张好map还是为了迅速rank一张map ;)
Normal 40万分,Hard 1000万分,会有一大群人没的玩。 :o
Topic Starter
Ex Boy
m(_ _)m 多谢yaya殿指点迷津,我会改进的~
JamesLeao
我、tsuka、jr合作过此曲>_>
Topic Starter
Ex Boy
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Evangeline AK
突然来一段三分之一可真是……………………
2929298a
这是你最简单的一张了吧?
tsuka

jamesleao wrote:

我、tsuka、jr合作过此曲>_>
是的所以我在蛋疼
xierbaliti
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Topic Starter
Ex Boy
感谢各位的支持~~
tsuka……我真的不知道这歌被上过了……
lxy
好歌好图 :)
LKs
LK MOD
normal
[01:43:68] spinner开始在[01:43:45] 更好吧
[02:25:91] 这个也是,spinner在这里开始更好
hard
[01:43:56] 与其放在这里不如和norma里我的建议l一样处理
[03:02:18] 在之前的note那里开始
[02:21:29] 没有和1对齐
[03:52:68] 对齐
[03:55:68] 12~16 ^

除了黑体字之外看你喜好吧
EXBOY的图简洁干净,这点我很喜欢 :)
STAR FOR YOU
Topic Starter
Ex Boy
感謝LKs君的mod和star~
關於spinner:唔,spinner通常是用在比較長的音上對吧,長音開始的第一瞬間是比較重的,而spinner開始的時候偏偏又是沒聲音的,所以,我喜歡在開頭加上一個circle,按下去之後不用鬆手直接轉,就會有一種大長音的感覺了(旋轉slider?)。算是個人風格(?愛好?)吧。 XD
AngelHoney
:) :) fight ~
Cyril Scarlet
fight ^^
_lolipop
GJ! XD~
Andrea
[Overall]

Use Offset 1.920 on all the difficulties and resnap all notes.

Why there are 3 files .osb on the folder? 2 of them are wrong, please remove and full submit.

[Difficulties]

[Easy]

This difficulty is missing a preview point. Make sure to add a preview.

Stack leniency all to the left is unrankable. Increase it at least by 1 or 2 ticks.

Remove the unused timing sections and the bookmarks.


[Normal]

This difficulty is missing a preview point. Make sure to add a preview.

Stack leniency all to the left is unrankable. Increase it at least by 1 or 2 ticks.

Remove the unused timing sections and the bookmarks.


00:33:990 (2) - Slider repeat is totally hidden. Try to do something.

[Hard]

This difficulty is missing a preview point. Make sure to add a preview.

Stack leniency all to the left is unrankable. Increase it at least by 1 or 2 ticks.


00:36:990 (1,2) - This is a bit tricky, but I think it's acceptable. See if you want to change it.
01:13:221 (10) - New combo.
01:29:606 (7) - ^
01:30:529 (13) - ^
01:33:298 (7) - ^
01:34:221 (13) - ^
01:36:990 (7) - ^
01:37:913 (13) - ^
02:55:452 (8) - ^
02:58:221 (7) - ^
02:59:144 (13) - ^
03:01:914 (7) - ^
03:02:837 (13) - ^
03:05:606 (7) - ^
03:06:529 (13) - ^
03:54:529 (10) - ^


Please make sure to re-check all the new combos on Hard difficulty, some of them are way TOO LONG...
Andrea
Okay, you forget to fix only 2 things.

- Why stack leniency on Easy is increased by 2 ticks and on Normal and Hard by 1? Use the same stack leniency on all the difficulties please.

- And... You forget to remove unused timing sections on Easy.


Sorry for being nazi, after you fix this I'll give you a bubble.

EDIT: Bubbled~
Shinxyn
Oh boy, bubbled...

My thoughts are quite different from osuplayer's... eh...
Cuz Insane's 00:36:996 (1,2) - imo, is kinda unrankable as it is right now... D:

And since I'm popping anyways...
Source: "Touhou" >.> and maybe add more tags... but no big deal...

Easy- I don't think stack should be the same in all diffs! mainly for this, since the note are completely on top of each other... not really "Easy"
00:29:612 (1,2) - align? since rest of combo is
00:35:150 (3) - I think the repeats should be reduced by two :<
01:28:689 - please shift timing panel before note
01:39:766 - ^ and delete the extra one here

Normal- don't think such a low stack should be used on this diff either
01:30:535 (5) - the 1/2 slider in the 1/3 section sounds odd.... same goes for the others just like this
>_< please shift the timing panels before notes for the sake of hitting the hitsound sample right

Hard-
00:36:996 (1,2) - now then, this... I wouldn't mind if the (2) was a new combo (or maybe even slightly stacking these), then the slider colours would change and you could tell... but I wouldn't allow this.. even though its easier after the second time x-x;
02:14:843 (3) - sure you can hold the mouse... but still.. I don't want more people getting the idea they can keep these for ranked maps
Shift timing panels, again :< and 01:45:304 - 01:53:381 - are unrequired since they're the same hitsound volume and sample as the one before
I heard whistles slider slides... were they all on purpose? o.o?
I didn't even see the first Hold warning,it's too small imo, and they have a fair amount of unused transparency >_>

T__T I'm sorry I'm not the right BAT for bubbled maps...
Lybydose
You should use the group/circle name instead of the vocalist name as the artist. In this case it would be =NeutraL=

Then put Kotsuki Miya in the tags
Shinxyn
>_> I would still say add Touhou to Source... ... I won't enforce it, but it's preferred (imo)

And the BATs all have different opinions as well as rules... >_< sorry about that

Rebubbled~
Faust
Excuse me. =NeutraL= is definitely not the artist. As stated here: http://vgmdb.net/album/11551 and here: http://touhou.wikia.com/wiki/%E6%A1%9C%E8%8F%AF%E7%B5%90%E7%95%8C_-Perfect_Cherry_Blossom-

It should be "SENTIVE feat. Miya Kotuki". =NeutraL= is just the publisher, not the actual composer/arranger for the song. The same applies to all the other =NeutraL= maps. VGMDB is a highly reliable and trusted database if you want to map VGM in the future, please use it. You can list =NeutraL= as a tag or something though.

@Lybydose: http://vgmdb.net/org/191 "Publisher"*
Gabi
Touhou wiki says =NeutraL= is the group
Arrangement by SENTIVE
Vocals by Miya Kotuki


so "feat. [Name here]" isn't really needed. But =NeutraL= has been used here alot before so for the sake of keeping it consistant imo it's fine. i guess SENTIVE and Miya Kotuki can go in the tags

also why isn't source JUST Touhou? all you need is a quick fix to do that.

anyways star
Faust

Gabi wrote:

Touhou wiki says =NeutraL= is the group
Arrangement by SENTIVE
Vocals by Miya Kotuki


so "feat. [Name here]" isn't really needed. But =NeutraL= has been used here alot before so for the sake of keeping it consistant imo it's fine. i guess SENTIVE and Miya Kotuki can go in the tags

also why isn't source JUST Touhou? all you need is a quick fix to do that.

anyways star
Hmm. I think keeping consistency is a good idea since we have such a huge community, also for the sake of recognizabilty and easy searching, etc. It will be fine as long as SENTIVE and Miya Kotuki are mentioned.
Topic Starter
Ex Boy
Eh...guys...anyway,it has been bubbled,I can't change it now.
As you can see,I added the "Kotsuki Miya" in the tag.Whatever the artist is "Kotsuki Miya" or "=NeutraL=",others can find it by searching.
Gabi
Yes you can change it even if it is bubbled. The only thing that will happen is your bubble will be popped, but your map will have correct information so i suggest you remove touhou from tags and put it in source, also put SENTIVE in the tags.

when you are done with that, call shinxyn and ask him to rebubble your map.
Alace
<Easy>
i find slidertick 2 sound bad in 1/3 part
maybe slidertick 1 ?
Topic Starter
Ex Boy
fixed~~~
Alace
OK ranked
Zekira
...so why isn't Touhou in source again :(
Cyril Scarlet
finally ~

.☆.+:^ヽ(∇ ̄*)o♪Congratulations♪o(* ̄∇)ノ^;+.☆.
Alace
fixed tag and source
lxy
半年……不容易啊!
lz加油!
很喜欢玩你的图 ~ :)
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