1. Beginner (2.27 stars, 113 notes)
2. Breeze (4.82 stars, 434 notes)
3. v2b (5 stars, 633 notes)

BananasGoMoo wrote:

ok mod time

[Beginner]
00:50:171 (6) - move back two ticks and extend by two ticks
00:51:412 (7) - extend my two ticks or do a reverse Fixed


[Breeze]
01:47:481 (4) - i think this should be cut in half and place a hitcircle at 01:47:895 I think it's OK, thanks to your advice
+Star

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO! 你好~XD

[General]
Source? added

[Begginer]
00:33:206 (1) - Should end in previous red tick
00:36:516 (4) - ^ Just let they more easy to handle for beginner, I mean, same distance
01:04:240 (x) - Place note here
01:05:895 (x) - ^
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[Brezze]
00:16:654 (5) - New combo
00:19:550 (9) - ^ Both OK, but allow me to keep it for now, sorry
00:48:102 (4,5,6,7) - Allign with 3 (end of slider)
01:17:068 (10) - Move backward to red tick I used to apply what you said, it looks...you know, stange...
01:46:240 (1) - No new combo[/color] Both OK, but allow me to keep it for now, sorry


NICE MAP
STAR

alvisto wrote:

Offset : 13380 ms (+36ms to all timing sections and maybe SB too. ;_; )

Hopefully my triple-checked offset is correct ;_; 我先不变offset了,毕竟offset一变需要一起变的就很多了,看看其他的人mod后我再决定吧XD

BREEZE
Map is very good ! I finally see your transition of style ! Pretty~~
Hitsounds suggestions:

SPOILER

00:27:448 (5,6,7) - Remove clap at the start of each slider. Sound better imho. xD
00:30:723 (5,6,7) - ^
00:34:033 (2) - Remove clap.
My suggestion is that put claps at every 2 white tick (or even 4 tick if you like), which is the heavy "drum" part, for example, 00:32:828, 00:33:655 (since there are no note here, you can just ignore it), 00:34:483, 00:35:311, 00:36:138. It sounds very rhythmic and "oh yeah" in this way imho.
This apply to here too -> 00:40:276, 00:41:104, 00:41:931 (no note here, so can just ignore it, 00:42:759)
Try this pattern for the whole song? Find the heavy drum pattern and put drum onto it. xD Because this is usually how I hitsound. It seems easy and cheap but it is rhythmic and awesome. xD

确实...受教了m(_ _)m
Also, HP Drain is too average, overall difficulty ought to be raised 1/2 tick, cause at some part (example : 03:17:517 (2,3,4,5,6) - ) , low overall difficulty make playing them harder. xD 好的...其实当初是想这个是normal的...

NAZI spacing mod (use a higher level grid or turn off DS) :
03:10:069 (6) - xD
03:19:586 (5,7,9) - Move these a bit away from the centre. By the way, I LOVE this design.
03:22:897 (5,7,9) - ^ 好的

Other than that, no complain, very well done.

BEGINNER
01:18:309 (6) - - new combo ?
Pretty.

Star and kudosu star for ya. Nice SB too. ^.^

osu_CN_yaya wrote:

offset错太大
我测得13383
SB之类的我不太在意，不过offset差太大，必须要改。

abalee wrote:

offset已经修好了啊 @_@ o_Ooffset绝对要优先fix嘛

Beginner:
well...算了不挑SB音效了

Breeze:
01:24:141 (x) -这里什么东西也没有却有SB音效会比较不协调，建议去掉。
03:12:141 (1) - test play就知道了，这个会重叠到上一个Note那里。 建议在song setup 的 stacking里面设成rare stack。 all fixed

v2b:
I pass.他在挑战人类极限。 XD

blissfulyoshi wrote:

T_T Needed a translator to read the previous few mod post and replies Maybe you need a Chinese teacher XD

Beginner:
Combo mod:
00:49:796 (6) - new combo to be consistent with 01:03:038 (1) fixed

Timing section mod:
00:19:589 - add a timing section a quarter note before this note with the same hitsound settings but without kiai in case of early hit result in soft sound, right? ok, added

Breeze:
Timing section mod:
same as Beginner

v2b:
Add the source
Why is this the only diff with v2b as a tag? Since v2b is a difficulty name, you can remove his name from the tags, or add his name to all of the tags. all added

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Nice map and great SB. Star.

VanMoNky wrote:

As your request.

[General]
The mp3 you used is a lot longer than you mapped. Try to cut it down. I can help if you want to. Send me a PM.

[v2b]
No comment for the distance.

Seems no mistake for me. Nice SB! Star.

NoHItter wrote:

Remove Perfume Night Flight from your tags.

Tags are additional search terms, so you don't need to put those terms sine they are covered by the Artist and Title.

Other than that, good.

DJPop wrote:

Claps in sliderticks and SB are too loud. yea,fixed~

~Beginner~
Fine.

~Breeze~
00:38:003 (1) - overlapped fixed
01:03:038 (1,2,3,4) - not aligned yes, they are, and I put them like this deliberately= =


+Star

Armin wrote:

[Beginner]

00:38:003 Finish added
01:31:176 Finish added
01:31:383 Finish added

[Breeze]

00:13:382 (1,3) Whistles
00:16:693 (5,7) As above not added
00:30:348 Add a clap
00:33:245 Add a clap here: 00:33:658 Use a custom hitsounds. not added
00:36:969 (3,5) Clap at the start
00:38:107 Finish added
00:40:279 Clap added
01:31:176 Finish added
01:33:245 Clap not added
01:32:831 Finish not added
01:43:589 Replace this hitobject better fixed
03:19:176 Clap not added
03:31:176 Finish at the end fixed

Good SB, starred!

1. Why is the SB so sexy ;__; <3
2. Ewww, spinner is really ugly. You can see the rough edges everywhere! :'(

1. 00:39:038 (11) - Add new combo (?)
2. 03:04:898 (x) - Add an extra note here.

1. Seems fine~

1. Seems fine~

Gladi wrote:

[General]

1. Why is the SB so sexy ;__; <3 Because a sexy heart of loving Perfume :3
2. Ewww, spinner is really ugly. You can see the rough edges everywhere! :'( Yea, you're right, then I will make another "perfect star" XD

[v2b]

1. 00:39:038 (11) - Add new combo (?)
2. 03:04:898 (x) - Add an extra note here.

[Breeze]

1. Seems fine~

[Beginner]

1. Seems fine~

Star plus extra Kudosu Star

Derekku Chan wrote:

[General]
*Add a short audio lead-in, please. added
*"Perfume" and "Night Flight" aren't needed as tags since they're already searched in artist/title. Maybe add "Triangle" as a tag, though? Fixed
*Coool SB/skin, although some of the skin elements could really be touched up. The big star on 50/100s/300s is blurry, and the numbers themselves are. hit100 looks nice, if you could just do that for the rest of them... spinner-circle is also kinda bluhhhh D: spinner-circle remade
*The snap to the diff's bg at the end is kinda weird, so could you maybe do some fade outs or something? :X well...done
*SB seems to be a little bit mistimed for me, but I'm not comfortable modding it, so I'll leave it for someone else. ._.;
*Turn up stack leniency on all diffs. The lowest setting is unrankable as one can't see that notes are stacked in gameplay. turn on 1 grid

[Beginner]
*Sounds better with slider tick 1 imo. If you decide to change it, make sure that no sliders get messed up. I noticed that (2) in the beginning messed up for some reason... fixed, and (2) works well
00:18:348 - Unneeded timing section. It's needed, if someone hit the last circle early, hitsound would be different
01:58:072 (3) - Would sound better with one more repeat with a finish and a kiai fountain to end this diff. added

[Breeze]
00:18:348 - Unneeded timing section. sakme to beginner
03:32:003 (1) - Maybe add a fountain on this note? added

[v2b]
03:05:002 (9) - Maybe add a beat on the red tick before this?
03:05:105 (10) - Remove a repeat. fixed
Fountain at the end? added

I think that's it. Nice job~

Lissette wrote:

Consider cropping the mp3

Beginner
00:49:796 (1) - repeat two times and.....
00:51:038 (2) - move one beat later and repeat repeat two times, if you do.....
00:52:279 (3) - remove repeat (1,2) and make (3) close to (2), thanks, it sounds better

Breeze
no problems

v2b
no problems

Nice SB
Star!

xxheroxx wrote:

Cut the mp3
Spinner graphic spins slightly off centre, is that on purpose? Not a huge deal, though. I didn't notced that,but you know... it's not a circle, hard to fixed accurately, thanks

[Breeze]

00:14:210 (x) - Add a break HP drain rate is low, I think it's unnecessary
00:16:693 (5) - New combo Fixed
00:17:250 (x) - Add a break
00:19:589 (9) - New combo fixed

Starred~

ouranhshc wrote:

Beginner
nothing.


Breeze
00:16:693(5) - new combo?
00:19:589(x) - new combo? all fixed

V2b
nothing

Overall - nice map
i love the storyboard
One thing - its hard sometimes to see the circles when the combo fire turns blue. You can't see the white, orange, or blue hitcircles Maybe SB is too dazzling My fault, that's my first time try making a SB like this

~star

Skyripper wrote:

here to star!

Takuma wrote:

v2b:
01:53:520 (5) - new combo perhaps? fixed

err, Breeze difficulty does not appear. resubmit. lol resubmitted
starred.

Mafiamaster wrote:

Me like.
Bubbled!