Metro Station - After the Fall · forum

Yumiko

Joined September 2008

Topic Starter

Yumiko 2009-07-27T12:44:42+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on venerdì 16 ottobre 2009 at 20.51.22

Artist: Metro Station
Title: After the Fall
BPM: 145
Filesize: 2985kb
Play Time: 02:45
Difficulties Available:

EEeee's Easy (2,45 stars, 180 notes)
EEeee's Hard (4,91 stars, 459 notes)
Hard (4,89 stars, 385 notes)
Normal (3,8 stars, 231 notes)

Download: Metro Station - After the Fall
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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My 4th beatmap

. Hard difficulty completed, with hitsounds
. Normal difficulty completed, with hitsounds
. Added Kiai time to normal and hard difficulties
. Added EEeee's difficulty, thanks ^^
~ Thanks for modding fuffolo, Lokamp, osuplayer111, animask, tieff, Breeze, Mafiamaster, minyeob, Symbolic, fartownik, mrtn, kino77, EEeee and xxheroxx ~
. Moved to Pending
.Added EEeee's easy, thanks so much °A°

Last edited by Yumiko 2009-10-16T18:51:28+00:00, edited 36 times in total.

fuffolo

139 posts

Joined January 2009

fuffolo 2009-07-31T12:22:34+00:00

Normal:

00:38:30 (1) - Riduci lo slider e inserisci un nuovo circles

01:56:72 (5) - Muovilo una linea dopo e inserisci un beat tra 4;5
02:26:72 (4) - Piazzala due Linee sopra
02:27:13 (5) - Crea questo Beat

Hard:

00:36:44 (1) - Do Something different.
00:37:27 (3) - ^
02:28:99 (1) - Put Clap!
02:30:65 (6) - ^

Comunque sia, starred

niedz

719 posts

Joined May 2008

niedz 2009-07-31T15:33:43+00:00

orz

Lokamp

2,530 posts

Joined January 2009

Lokamp 2009-07-31T19:40:12+00:00

Arrivano i rinforzi!

[General] ok, i clap s'intonano con molte canzoni, ma prova ad alternarli ad altri suoni...

Normal

[00:18:440] (6) prova un finish invece di un clap
[01:11:410] (5) ... come sopra!
[01:18:030] (6)

immaginati la freccia a 90° in senso antiorario...
[01:38:720] (1, 2, 3) spostali verso li centro (centro = 3rzo beat rosso)
[01:45:950] prova ad aggiungere un beat qui...
[01:46:990] (2) perchè un clap qui? a mio avviso, appesantisce il ritmo...
[01:50:300] (2, 3) togli i clap dallo slider e metti whistle sul beat
[02:06:030] (2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7 ) termina gli slider con whistles, clap sui beat
[02:12:030] (7) terminalo con un clap
[02:45:540] (2) prova a far "suonare" l'ultimo beat qui!

Hard

[00:18:860] (5) trasforma il 5° beat in uno slider e fallo finire qui
[00:44:100] (5, 2-3) togli i suoni dal 3° slider grigio e aggiungine uno a tua scelta sul 5° blu (fine) e sul 3° grigio (inizio)
[00:45:960] (1, 5) usa altri suoni x questi due beat, a scelta

[01:16:990] (1, 2) 2 finish soft all'inizio di questi slider? non ne sono sicuro...
[01:21:340] (2) clap qui
[01:28:580] (7, 8) clap sul 7°, finish sull' 8°
[01:51:130] (3) aggiungi un clap qui (e toglilo dal beat precedente...)

... e questo è tutto!

Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

16,650 posts

Joined August 2008

Andrea 2009-07-31T23:37:37+00:00

[Timing]

Seems fine.

[Normal]

00:23:41 (2) - E' voluto il suono di questo slider?
00:38:30 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:41:61 (1) - Spinner too hard for normal... imo
01:09:54 (1,2) - Hard to read for a normal... maybe
01:24:23 (1,1,1) - Why these all new combo?
02:18:03 (1,1,1) - ^

[Hard]

00:17:41 (2,3) - Align properly.
01:21:96 (4,5) - ^
02:28:37 (8,9) - ^

Sleep Powder

1,540 posts

Joined October 2008

Sleep Powder 2009-08-02T02:57:19+00:00

[Normal]
01:00:65 (4) - Remove clap?
01:04:79 (6) - Finish maybe?
01:07:89 (5) - Clap?
01:18:03 (6) - Finish?
01:19:68 (3) - End on Red Tick? and remove clap?
01:29:82 (2) - Remove Clap
01:30:44 (3) - Clap the beginning of this slider
01:31:48 (5) - Remove Clap
01:34:37 (1) - Clap
01:37:89 (5) - Clap
02:08:30 (7) - Add Clap?
02:18:03 (1) - Feels a bit mistimed
02:26:10 (2) - Clap?
02:26:51 (3) - Remove Clap

[Hard]
00:25:48 (7) - Remove Clap
00:26:51 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:26:72 (6) - Add New Combo
00:27:96 (1) - Remove New Combo
00:28:37 (8) - Add New Combo
00:50:10 (3) - Clap beginning of slider
01:26:10 (1) - Remove New Combo
01:26:30 (6) - Add New Combo
01:30:65 (6,7,8,9) - Weird Spacing...
01:34:37 (3) - Clap on beginning of slider

tieff

Featured Artist

2,254 posts

Joined March 2009

tieff 2009-08-02T15:56:29+00:00

Wow, very good map!

[Normal]
00:44:71 (4) - Clap.
00:59:19 (2,3) - Spacing.
01:16:57 (3,4) - ^
01:27:33 (3) - Clap.
02:32:50 (5,1) - Spacing.
02:37:26 (4) - Clap.

[Hard]
00:33:33 (3,4,5) - Spacing.

Star!

Yumiko

505 posts

Joined September 2008

Topic Starter

Yumiko 2009-08-02T19:05:36+00:00

Thanks to all ^^

kamme_chan

2 posts

Joined September 2008

kamme_chan 2009-08-02T23:05:38+00:00

I like this map (and the song too *-*), starred ~

dark_bahamut

2 posts

Joined September 2008

dark_bahamut 2009-08-02T23:09:47+00:00

Very nice

Armin

osu! Alumni

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Joined May 2009

Armin 2009-08-03T21:29:11+00:00

STAR *_*

Breeze

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Joined March 2009

Breeze 2009-08-05T04:59:02+00:00

hi Yumiko :3
nice song, I like it

random mod:
I can't understand why are you set so many timing secions, some of them unwanted

[normal]
01:57:750 (7,8) - a slider instead could be better
02:46:784 Timing section - make sound moe lower or just no sound

[hard]
00:39:957 (1) - wrong spacing, although timing section changed BPM, this spacing change is too sudden, at least please use the same spcing at (1)
01:07:681 (4,5) - delete clap on (4), add clap to (5)
01:30:440 (5,6,7,8,9) - please rearray them, make them more regular
~~01:36:026 (1,2,3,4) - this patten seem to be a little confused, they match nothing,it's just my complain~~
01:46:991 (1) - it covered by front note which didn't disappeared, it's vertiginous
02:46:784 Timing section - make sound moe lower or just no sound

nice map
star for you

EEeee

1,026 posts

Joined July 2008

EEeee 2009-08-08T21:20:41+00:00

Lets just see if I can still map some Metro Station!!!
GOGO DL this NOW!!!

Hope u like it ^__^

Download: Metro Station - After the Fall (Yumiko) [EEeee].osu

Yumiko

505 posts

Joined September 2008

Topic Starter

Yumiko 2009-08-08T21:47:35+00:00

Thanks soooo much, i love your difficulty ^^

Mafiamaster

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Joined July 2008

Mafiamaster 2009-08-14T01:05:55+00:00

Normal~

01:38:81 (1) - Lol, Move back 1/4 of a tick.
And redo all breaks. They'll shorten a lot.

eeEEE's Hard~

Redo the break. It'll lengthen.
01:22:78 (8) - Suggestion: New combo.
01:56:30 (7) - ^
02:07:47 (8,9,10,11) - This is probably unrankable. Don't hurt me!
02:10:78 (3,4,5,6) - ^
I like the ending~

Hard~

Imo, 00:23:40 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Would maybe sound better as soft hits. Just a suggestion~ ^^
01:36:23 (3,4) - Can you move closer to 2 for me? ;_;
01:37:68 (6,7) - Move closer to 8 please? ;_;
02:26:50 (4) - Add a clap at the end of this slider.
It would probably be best to change some of the difficulty settings to make it where it has less difficulty stars than EEeee's. One tick away from the Overall Difficulty or HP Drain will work just fine.

minyeob

osu! Alumni

2,540 posts

Joined May 2008

minyeob 2009-08-14T03:02:15+00:00

[Your difficulties]
Kiai time is overused. You can use it 1 time per 1 minute
Please use kiai time on chorus part only.

[Normal]
01:38:81 (1,2) - Not good(Especially spacing)

[EEeee]
02:18:85 (8~13) - Don't stack perfectly with 02:19:47 (1). Spacing is weird.

[Hard]
00:33:33 (3,4,5) - You changed the spacing suddenly:; Also, this is not a jump / 0.5x BPM.

HarryOrunitia

289 posts

Joined August 2008

HarryOrunitia 2009-08-14T04:35:13+00:00

I couldn't find anything wrong at a first glance. I'll check it again when I can, but for now, you have my star :3

Armin

osu! Alumni

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Armin 2009-08-14T08:57:27+00:00

..the same of HarryOrunitia. I don't see nothing of unrankable D:
Good beatmap, really DDD:

Yumiko

505 posts

Joined September 2008

Topic Starter

Yumiko 2009-08-14T11:20:17+00:00

Thanks for modding Mafiamaster and minyeob ^^ And thanks for the star Oru, Armin :3 I fixed my diffs, i'll ask to EEeee to fix his one asap

EEeee

1,026 posts

Joined July 2008

EEeee 2009-08-14T12:48:56+00:00

well I'm not gonna fix anything, cause yumiko can just do it for me, anyways, on that unrankable part, lets see, I really try my best to stay with the rules, and as I see it, it's really seeable on both ends, start of slider is seeable cause the close in on the circles, and the endpoints are . . . well seeable
anyways, ooops on the non-fixed break

Symbolic

519 posts

Joined June 2008

Symbolic 2009-08-14T13:25:13+00:00

[Normal]

01:24:64 (1) - Remove new combo.
01:25:06 (1) - ^
01:51:33 (4) - Shorten 1/4 to let it end on the last word of the sentence.
02:18:44 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:18:85 (1) - ^

[Hard]

00:16:99 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:37:26 (1) - ^
00:38:09 (1) - ^
01:16:99 (1) - ^
01:59:19 (1,2,3) - This is really confusing because of the 1/2 jump and the 1/1 note with way smaller spacing in between it, change it.
02:31:88 (1) - Remove new combo.
02:32:09 (1) - ^
02:32:30 (1) - ^
02:32:508 (x) - Add a note here.

[EEeee's Hard]

Nothing here.

Nice song, is it a new Metro Station song?
Also, nice map.
Starred *

Yumiko

505 posts

Joined September 2008

Topic Starter

Yumiko 2009-08-16T00:32:50+00:00

This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.

fartownik

2,189 posts

Joined December 2008

fartownik 2009-08-18T18:31:02+00:00

[Normal]

SPOILER

00:25:474 (6) - Move a tick to left.
00:41:612 - Clap.

[Hard]

SPOILER

00:30:853 (6) - Clap on the beggining instead of ending of the slider.
00:41:405 (3) - Clap.
00:45:750 (5) - ^
00:47:198 (6) - ^
00:48:026 (1) - ^
01:39:543 - Add a note (I prefer on the center of this square).
01:45:129 (4) - Clap.
01:45:957 (5) - ^

[EEeee's Hard]

SPOILER

01:37:681 - Delete new combo.
01:38:508 - Add new combo.

~Starry

mrtn

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mrtn 2009-08-20T09:01:14+00:00

[normal]
there are many useless timing sections in this difficulty, remove them please.
01:24:97 - what's the point of this slowdown?

[hard]
the chorus notes sound really bad imo. It's like a bad 1/2 beat spam to me. Not matching the rhythm or vocals...
most 1/4s feel really out of place. Like you made them up yourself in really bad places...
most slowdowns feel really out of place...
01:52:57 (1,2,3) - really weird jump, definitely not allowed.
01:59:19 (1,2,3) - ^

[EEeee's hard]
01:22:78 (8) - new combo

starred

kino77

909 posts

Joined March 2009

kino77 2009-08-24T03:37:43+00:00

Sorry for the late mod...

Nice song and map~ n__n
I like hitsound as EEeee's Hard~

[normal]
00:26:51(1)-end here 00:27:54?
00:30:85(2)-clap?
00:33:96(3)-^
00:39:54(2)-remove clap?
00:39:75(3)-clap?
00:39:96(4)-^
00:47:20(1)-^
00:50:51(2)-^

[Hard]
Maybe coz the too many spin,I feel it more difficult than EEeee's hard...
Same hitsound issues~
01:52:57(1,1,2)-confusing...I missed here...
01:59:19(1,1,2)-^

[EEeee's hard]
I like this diff~
01:54:44(5)-spacing?
Great~Nothing else~

Star~

Card N'FoRcE

osu! Alumni

4,058 posts

Here since the beginning

Card N'FoRcE 2009-08-26T12:52:54+00:00

- Normal:
02:42:64 (2,3) - ho da ridire solo per lo spacing tra queste due.
Cmq, questa sarebbe più una "hard" che una normal D:

- Hard:
00:20:50 (4) - nuova combo?
02:04:78 (6) - nazi scemo, un quadretto più in alto (lo ho notato non so come xD)
Potresti tranquillamente chiamarla "Insane" D:

- EEeee's Hard:
~0:54:00 - Please disable Kiai here. It's ugly to see it disappear when the break ends.
01:54:23 (4,5) - why the sudden change? O.o
More like "Insane" than hard D:

Cool maps, i enjoyed them ^^

Star'd

EEeee

1,026 posts

Joined July 2008

EEeee 2009-08-29T18:20:53+00:00

Offset = 434

Normal
looks normal enough, except look at Hards comment on kiai times

02:33:020 kiai time starts bad T_T

hard
00:17:61 (8,9,10) - new combo all of these
00:20:50 (4) - New combo this one
01:19:46 (2,3,4) - New combo to each on of these

ur Kiai times seems a bit off, maybe adjust ur green lines, they all look a bit off, also I think u have kiai times when the guy Screams "AFTER THE FALL!!" move the kiai time to start when the guys says After, not Fall, idk place it on a right note T_T
this one starts really bad 02:35:721

kk here's my diff again, it's not as good as urs T_T

Download: Metro Station - After the Fall (Yumiko) [EEeee's Hard].osu

Diasios

3,966 posts

Joined August 2008

Diasios 2009-09-23T13:52:13+00:00

Normal:

it's ok

Hard:

nice D:

EEeee:

00:26:916 (6) = new combo
00:30:227 (12) = ^
00:40:158 (9) = ^
01:39:744 (9) = ^
01:57:537 (10) = ^
02:01:261 (8) = ^
02:06:640 (6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11) = nooo D:
02:09:951 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) = oh nooooo D:

starred

EEeee

1,026 posts

Joined July 2008

EEeee 2009-09-28T13:06:59+00:00

did some new combos

but 02:06:640 (6, 7, 8, 9, 10, 11) = nooo D:
02:09:951 (1, 2, 3, 4, 5) = oh nooooo D:

uh uh those are allowed and stays :3

Download: Metro Station - After the Fall (Yumiko) [EEeee's Hard].osu

EEeee

1,026 posts

Joined July 2008

EEeee 2009-10-12T21:01:15+00:00

First of all, yumiko plz move this to pending ^^ i'm gonna try and ask around, i want this ranked

Overall
Fix breaks in all diffs, except mine ^^, they are slightly off

ztrot

osu! Alumni

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Joined February 2008

ztrot 2009-10-15T18:45:25+00:00

I'd love to mod this but the link to the map is broken plz resubmit the map

ztrot

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ztrot 2009-10-15T19:04:24+00:00

add an easy plz