well I'm not gonna fix anything, cause yumiko can just do it for me, anyways, on that unrankable part, lets see, I really try my best to stay with the rules, and as I see it, it's really seeable on both ends, start of slider is seeable cause the close in on the circles, and the endpoints are . . . well seeable anyways, ooops on the non-fixed break
01:24:64 (1) - Remove new combo. 01:25:06 (1) - ^ 01:51:33 (4) - Shorten 1/4 to let it end on the last word of the sentence. 02:18:44 (1) - Remove new combo. 02:18:85 (1) - ^
[Hard]
00:16:99 (1) - Remove new combo. 00:37:26 (1) - ^ 00:38:09 (1) - ^ 01:16:99 (1) - ^ 01:59:19 (1,2,3) - This is really confusing because of the 1/2 jump and the 1/1 note with way smaller spacing in between it, change it. 02:31:88 (1) - Remove new combo. 02:32:09 (1) - ^ 02:32:30 (1) - ^ 02:32:508 (x) - Add a note here.
[EEeee's Hard]
Nothing here.
Nice song, is it a new Metro Station song? Also, nice map. Starred *
00:30:853 (6) - Clap on the beggining instead of ending of the slider. 00:41:405 (3) - Clap. 00:45:750 (5) - ^ 00:47:198 (6) - ^ 00:48:026 (1) - ^ 01:39:543 - Add a note (I prefer on the center of this square). 01:45:129 (4) - Clap. 01:45:957 (5) - ^
[normal] there are many useless timing sections in this difficulty, remove them please. 01:24:97 - what's the point of this slowdown?
[hard] the chorus notes sound really bad imo. It's like a bad 1/2 beat spam to me. Not matching the rhythm or vocals... most 1/4s feel really out of place. Like you made them up yourself in really bad places... most slowdowns feel really out of place... 01:52:57 (1,2,3) - really weird jump, definitely not allowed. 01:59:19 (1,2,3) - ^
[Hard] Maybe coz the too many spin,I feel it more difficult than EEeee's hard... Same hitsound issues~ 01:52:57(1,1,2)-confusing...I missed here... 01:59:19(1,1,2)-^
[EEeee's hard] I like this diff~ 01:54:44(5)-spacing? Great~Nothing else~
- Normal: 02:42:64 (2,3) - ho da ridire solo per lo spacing tra queste due. Cmq, questa sarebbe più una "hard" che una normal D:
- Hard: 00:20:50 (4) - nuova combo? 02:04:78 (6) - nazi scemo, un quadretto più in alto (lo ho notato non so come xD) Potresti tranquillamente chiamarla "Insane" D:
- EEeee's Hard: ~0:54:00 - Please disable Kiai here. It's ugly to see it disappear when the break ends. 01:54:23 (4,5) - why the sudden change? O.o More like "Insane" than hard D:
Normal looks normal enough, except look at Hards comment on kiai times 02:33:020 kiai time starts bad T_T
hard 00:17:61 (8,9,10) - new combo all of these 00:20:50 (4) - New combo this one 01:19:46 (2,3,4) - New combo to each on of these
ur Kiai times seems a bit off, maybe adjust ur green lines, they all look a bit off, also I think u have kiai times when the guy Screams "AFTER THE FALL!!" move the kiai time to start when the guys says After, not Fall, idk place it on a right note T_T this one starts really bad 02:35:721
kk here's my diff again, it's not as good as urs T_T