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minyeob
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2010년 6월 3일 목요일 at 오전 2:09:46

Artist: fripSide
Title: Flower of Bravery
Source: Koihime Musou
Tags: yongtw123 hutka
BPM: 152
Filesize: 4886kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (2.8 stars, 113 notes)
  2. hutka's Diff (5 stars, 524 notes)
  3. Insane (4.89 stars, 600 notes)
  4. Normal+ (4.29 stars, 388 notes)
  5. yongtw123's Hard (4.45 stars, 387 notes)
Download: fripSide - Flower of Bravery
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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From Koihime Musou~

Need to download again if you downloaded this before April 3rd, 2010
XepherX3
cant wait for the next diff :lol:

give star when thats done
XepherX3
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Sleep Powder
The Normal beatmap seems too hard to be called Normal.
Normal and Hard are worth about the same amount of points as well.
That's no good...
Star for luck xP
Topic Starter
minyeob
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
GabrielRKF
Nice insane gameplay ^^
i really liked it
a star for u ^^

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my pending beatmaps:
Miku Hatsune and Megurine Luka - Prism Door
Witches - There She is (step 1)
La Valse
카악퉷
bmin11
I don't think I have to explain why I'm starring this map or other maps every single time.

Starred~ :)



P.S hutka, where is your star? :(
훗카님 별주고 가셔야죠 ㅡㅜ
DeathxShinigami
Korean ATM Machine here.
tieff
[Normal]
00:10:73 (1,2) - Jump on normal?
01:54:94 (1,2,3,4) - ^

[Hard]
00:04:81 (7) - New combo.
00:24:94 (4) - End slider here 00:25:14.
01:56:72 (1,1) - Spacing.

[Insane]
All cool.

It's creative, so... Star+kudosu star.
Topic Starter
minyeob

tieff wrote:

[Normal]
00:10:73 (1,2) - Jump on normal? Fixed.
01:54:94 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Considering lol

[Hard]
00:04:81 (7) - New combo. Fixed.
00:24:94 (4) - End slider here 00:25:14. Fixed.
01:56:72 (1,1) - Spacing. Considering lol

[Insane]
All cool.

It's creative, so... Star+kudosu star.
<3 Thanks for using kudo star

NOTE: Do not mod easy.
v2b
sorry I'm kinda nazi ;..;
Normal:
Circle Size -1
It will make it easier

reduce tick rate
It is strange that Normal's tick rate is higher than other diffs

00:06:19 (5) move it to 00:06:292
00:07:57 (1) too far with the previous slider
00:50:00 (x) I'd like to add a circle here
00:50:30 (1) make it start at 00:50:404
00:58:59 (1) It should start at 00:58:496
01:27:01 (1) make it start at 01:27:115
01:29:87 (x) redo break
02:02:93 (1) same with the above-mentioned spinners
02:21:39 (1) maybe remove new combo?
02:22:97 (4) move it to 02:22:871
02:26:62 (1) start it at 02:26:325
02:36:98 (1) - 02:38:36 (5) jump in normal :(
02:38:46 (1) - 02:39:64 (1) make the both spinner start at the red tick
02:42:50 (x) redo break
03:07:37 (x) redo break
03:18:62 (1) - 03:19:41 (3) It should be 3/4 not 4/4 :(
03:26:52 (1) spacing wrong
03:39:54 (1) - 03:40:33 (3) no jump plz >:(

Hard:
00:04:81 (7) new combo?
00:14:38 (1) start at red tick
00:17:24 (x) redo break and redo all the other breaks plz
00:28:10 (3) wtf with this slider?_?
00:50:30 (1) red tick
00:58:59 (1) white tick
01:24:94 (1) - 01:25:33 (2) why turn down the volume?_?
01:27:01 (1) red tick ;..;
02:02:93 (1) ^
02:26:62 (1) ^
02:29:68 (1) start at 02:29:483
02:38:46 (1) - 02:39:64 (1) same with normal
02:57:51 (1) spacing wrong
02:59:77 (1) white tick
03:18:72 (1) red
03:28:10 (1) almost offscreen
03:45:96 (1) red

Insane:
00:14:38 (1) red
00:58:59 (1) white tick
01:24:94 (1) - 01:25:63 (8) no need with low volume
01:27:01 (1) red tick
02:02:93 (1) ^
02:18:62 (1) remove new combo for consistency?
02:26:62 (1) red tick
02:29:68 (1) start at 02:29:483
02:38:46 (1) red tick
02:38:46 (1) the spinner must get 2000 bonus now,set something else instead of it
02:39:64 (1) red
03:45:96 (1) red

I love Fripside too :)
star ;)
WyndII
wow didn't see anything wrong..
Lesjuh
Kakan Ni Ouen:
Nothing to say. Nice Ouendan styled beatmap!

Normal:
02:39:74 (1) - End this spinner on white tick and reinsert the break after it
03:34:41 (1,2,3,4,5) - A little too hard for normal :S

Hard:
00:28:10 (3) - End this slider on white tick
00:45:47 (2) - The reverse arrow of this slider must be on the blue tick
00:58:59 (1) - White tick for this spinner
01:24:94 (1,2) - Dunno about this. I guess it's fine. I suck at such kick sliders out of the blue :/
01:56:52 (1,1,1,1) - Make one combo of these 4 beats
02:37:57 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - I would be totally fine with it if it was in insane. It's too hard for [Hard] imo
03:28:10 (1) - Some players won't see the complete slider because some skins overlap half of it with their HP bar -_-

Insane :
03:04:41 (1) - For some reason I like this slider lol

That's about it! have a star
La Valse
그냥 리플달면 별주는줄알아서 카악퉷했는뎁
room6621
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korealien
hi minyeob!
wlsdbsdb
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Nakagawa-Kanon

minyeob wrote:

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009년 8월 4일 화요일 at 오후 1:28:17

Artist: Fripside
Title: Flower of Bravery
Tags: Anime minyeob Fripside flower of bravery
BPM: 152
Filesize: 1926kb
Play Time: 03:46
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4.83 stars, 488 notes)
  2. Insane (4.96 stars, 590 notes)
  3. Kakan Ni Ouen (3.97 stars, 260 notes)
  4. Normal (4.34 stars, 395 notes)
Download: Fripside - Flower of Bravery
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Koihime Mosou Single OP Full ver.

ALL FINISHED.

Map History
6/30-> Submitted
7/1-> Hard 1st part- Finished
7/3-> Hard 2nd part- Finished
7/4-> Hard Note-> All finished. (Hitsounds=WIP)
7/5-> Lowered HP drain rate.
7/7-> Difficulty Name has changed. Normal->Hard Hard->Insane
7/12-> Hard= Done
7/16-> Normal= Done
7/29-> Tieff's modding.
8/1-> Added Kakan ni Ouen(Used Ouendan patterns), v2b modding.
8/2-> lesjuh modding(He's so pro lol)

Genre: Anime
cocofou
리플만 달면돼는건가요?.
Topic Starter
minyeob
My SP is enough
Stop starring :P
Don't make me hard...... This is a retarded behavior :;
Symbolic
Hey, here's the other mod u asked for :D Oh and btw, thanks for changing some things while ur map was bubbled =].


[Kakan Ni Ouen]

Use Slider Tick Rate 1, sounds better imo.

00:35:79 (5,1) - This jump is weird, because it is a 1/2 but it has the same spacing as the 1/1s.
01:48:43 (6,1) - ^


[Normal]

01:42:31 (1) - Shorten this slider 1/2.


[Hard]

03:07:18 (1) - Put this note a bit up, so it will be a jump/bigger jump.
03:38:75 (5,1) - This one is confusing, even though there is a new combo, I don't except that there.


[Insane]

02:29:08 (1,2,3) - Put these 1 level 3 grid up so it's in the middle of the pattern.


Nice job, I liked the other Fripside song better, but this map better. I really like Insane here :D
Starred *
Topic Starter
minyeob

Symbolic wrote:

Hey, here's the other mod u asked for :D Oh and btw, thanks for changing some things while ur map was bubbled =].


[Kakan Ni Ouen]

Use Slider Tick Rate 1, sounds better imo.

00:35:79 (5,1) - This jump is weird, because it is a 1/2 but it has the same spacing as the 1/1s. It's Ouendan Style lol
01:48:43 (6,1) - ^


[Normal]

01:42:31 (1) - Shorten this slider 1/2. No :(


[Hard]

03:07:18 (1) - Put this note a bit up, so it will be a jump/bigger jump.Done.
03:38:75 (5,1) - This one is confusing, even though there is a new combo, I don't except that there.I don't know what I have to do


[Insane]

02:29:08 (1,2,3) - Put these 1 level 3 grid up so it's in the middle of the pattern. Noooo


Nice job, I liked the other Fripside song better, but this map better. I really like Insane here :D
Starred *
Thanks for modding :>
Mafiamaster
Kakan Ni Ouen~
  1. There seems to be gaps in between the note and where a break starts. Redo all of your breaks. The second break is in serious need of redoing.
Normal~
  1. 02:57:11 (3,4,5) - Can you move these a little up please? They are slightly cut off from the bottom.
  2. 03:34:41 (1,2,3,4,5) and 03:40:73 (1,2,3) - Suggestion: This is a normal? It's up to you if you want to make these notes closer. ^.^ No pressure~
  3. Redo last break. It'll shorten.

Insane~

  1. 01:56:32 (5) - Suggestion: New combo
Topic Starter
minyeob

Mafiamaster wrote:

Kakan Ni Ouen~
  1. There seems to be gaps in between the note and where a break starts. Redo all of your breaks. The second break is in serious need of redoing.
Redo'd 2nd break only. They are an Ouendan-Styled break setting

Normal~
  1. 02:57:11 (3,4,5) - Can you move these a little up please? They are slightly cut off from the bottom.Fixed
  2. 03:34:41 (1,2,3,4,5) and 03:40:73 (1,2,3) - Suggestion: This is a normal? It's up to you if you want to make these notes closer. ^.^ No pressure~ Fixed
  3. Redo last break. It'll shorten.
Done

Insane~

  1. 01:56:32 (5) - Suggestion: New combo
No

Thanks for modding~!
DaRRi
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GbL
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Mystearica
Just myself modding for this post.

Offset: I liked -12ms personally, test for yourself and see if you like it. You should get a timing check regardless.

[Kakan Ni Ouen]

I would suggest removing the whistles on the spinners before the breaks, or use a finish on them instead.

02:54:94 (1,1,1) - I would map this part instead of putting 3 three spinners.

Everything else was fine to me, SS'd easy here as a Normal should be.

[Normal]

I was going to point out specific parts but as I played through I was rather annoyed by the amount of whistles. I suggest changing these or add some volume control to them. Alternatively look for a nice custom hitsound for the whistle.

02:21:39 (1) - remove new combo and space together with 4

[Hard]

Artistic point of view: Add some curves/angles to your straight linear sliders, you've got quite a few of them so why not make them look nice?

I think Hard is fine as it was perfectly playable to me but I couldn't help but feel a little "plainness" (if that is a word) while I
played through it. I think it might be due to the fact that you arranged mostly in straight lines, Perhaps you can consider re-arranging your notes and adding some art to your sliders. (Circle patterns, curve patterns, other patterns, stuff like that)

This is just advice to improve what the map appears to the eyes, so it's not necessary that you do anything.

That's all for Hard.

[Insane]

Spaced stream pwned my face X_X

Didn't really find anything wrong as I played through though, I like this Insane.

Topic Starter
minyeob
I have to memo this: Offset -12ms.

I didn't touch Kakan ni ouen's spinner thing. It's ouendan style
Normal thing: Fixed. Hitsound=I have to think about it
Hard: I'm so lazy lol

I'm too lazy to fix that orz
Thanks for modding~ You spent a lot of time D:

GbL: Thanks~
Alace
Timing is good for me
-12 is a bit early

<Hard>
01:24:94 (1,2) - I think you can follow those 3/4 divisors (jumps or something)
01:52:77 (5) - ^

star
yongtw123
I am here to offer my difficulty for preview as minyeob consents.

The notes are snapped and timing is done.
Sounds are not added yet.
Because I was using mp3 encoded by myself when mapping, I manually shifted my map approximately 168ms forward to coincide with minyeob's.
BTW, it's 4.51 stars (minyeob requests 4.5+ lol)

Thanks.

Download: Fripside - Flower of Bravery (minyeob) [yongtw123's Hard].osu
Topic Starter
minyeob
Added >A<
yongtw123
I added in hitsounds. Hope they sound okay. (In fact I don't like whistling sliders very much...)

I also corrected some minor spacing problems.

Comments and suggestions welcome~

PS. sorry minyeob for taking so long :P

Download: Fripside - Flower of Bravery (minyeob) [yongtw123's Normal+].osu
Topic Starter
minyeob
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
yongtw123
The more the merrier~
My humble opinion:

[Easy]
01:07:575(1) this note is quite a jump from the previous note
01:10:733 - 01:13:102 I prefer the notes to be arranged as (1)(2)(3)( )(4)(5)(6) on the timeline

And would you like to change the mp3 to another one of better quality?
Breeze
sorry for my late mod
I'm moving into colledge grade 3 lol

now mod start go go!!

blue :arrow: it's just my personal opinion, fix it or not both OK, it depends on you
red :arrow: it's strongly recommened that you fix it

Overall

  1. all your own diff. - too much whistle, maybe that's your style, seemed OK, but sound bad to me
[Easy]

  1. 01:04:812 (2) - spacing wrong, it looks like 1/2 beat spacing
  2. 01:29:681 spinner - remove whistle would better
[Kakan ni Ouen]

  1. 00:23:365 (1) - this jump is unexpected IMO
  2. 00:35:996 (1) - terrible spacing
  3. 00:40:733 (3) - Offscreen note is bad, DO NOT forget there is a scorebar
  4. 01:21:786 (1) - this jump is unexpected IMO
  5. 01:29:286 spinner - add finish
  6. 01:48:628 (1) - terrible spacing
  7. 01:53:365 (3) - Offscreen note is bad, DO NOT forget there is a scorebar
  8. 03:32:444 (5) - spacing wrong
  9. 03:48:233 spinner - remove whistle
[Normal]

  1. 01:29:681 spinner - remove whistle
  2. 02:32:838 (1) - this jump is unexpected IMO
  3. 03:48:233 (4) - remove whistle
[yongtw123's Normal+]

  1. continuous 1/8 beat notes are terrible to a NORMAL diff. IMO, or it called HARD is better
  2. 00:12:320 (4) - makie it overlapping perfectly with the start of (2) is more beautiful
  3. 01:28:110 spinner - add fnish
  4. 02:19:820 (8) - overlaping with the end of (7) is better
  5. 03:18:241 KIAI timing section - as a rule, kiai time should start on the hit you intend the fountain to be on, obviously it isn't here
  6. 03:26:136 (7) - overlaping with the end of (6) is better
[Hard]

  1. 00:42:312 (1) - long linear slider looks bad IMO
  2. 01:03:233 (6) - a little confused, 1/4 length (5) and delete (6) or just delete (6)
  3. and some same problem as your other diff. : spinner add finish, it all depends on you
sorry I'm lazy at mod Insane
so, mod these for you
I'd like your diff.
nice map, star!
Topic Starter
minyeob
@yongtw123
Fixed.
I think mp3 flie is fine..... And I'm too lazy lol

@Breeze
lol Spacing thing on Kakan ni Ouen orz
That's an Ouendan Style! (Ready Steady go spacing)
Finally fixed that bad spacing. Most of modders hates that >_>

Also, I removed whistles on my spinner

Thanks for modding.
yongtw123
[Insane]
Compare the quick notes at 00:09:944, 00:44:681, 01:13:496. Maybe consider making them consistent. I like the spacing of the last one though.
01:24:944 move this stack a bit up

That's all I can find as of now.

And I updated my version with Breeze's advice. I'll leave it to you to decide whether or not to change the name to "Hard".
(Thanks Breeze!)

Download: Fripside - Flower of Bravery (minyeob) [yongtw123's Normal+].osu
dkey
nice song~
ztrot
Great map but plz use some more claps I'm not gonna make a list they should scream out to you Clap me!
I'll mod at some point no kds for this post plz
yongtw123
I'll attempt to mod [Easy] for now, especially on the hitsounds. Note that whatever below is just suggestion :D

[Easy]
00:03:233 (4)(5) - Add whistle
00:05:996 (4-) - Add whistle
00:07:575 (1->6) - Add clap (for the slider do it only for the right end)
00:12:312 (slider) - Add clap
00:14:286 (5) - Add clap + finish
00:20:207 (1) - Add finish
00:20:996 (2) - Add whitsle
00:23:365 (1) - Add finish
00:24:154 (2) - Add whistle
00:32:049 (4) - Add clap
00:33:628 (2->5) - Add clap
00:36:786 (2->3) - Change to clap
00:39:154 (1->5) - Add clap
00:42:312 (1) - Remove whistle
00:52:378 (3) - Add finish
00:53:957 (3) - Add finish
00:56:523 (4) - Remove whistle
01:02:44 (2) - Change to clap
01:04:802 (2) - Change to clap
01:05:602 (end of 3) - the only whistle in that slider
01:06:292 (end of 4) - Add clap
01:06:588 (5) - Remove hitsound
01:07:575 (1->2) - Change to clap only
01:09:549 (4) - Add clap
01:09:944 (5) - Start whistle middle none end clap
01:12:312 (4->6) - Change to clap
01:04:286 (2) - Remove whistle
01:07:049 (slider) - Remove whistle
01:08:233 (2) - Add clap
01:09:812 (4) - Add clap
01:21:786 (start of slider) - Whistle change to clap
01:24:549 (4) - Change to clap
01:24:994 (entire slider) - Apply all hitsounds
01:25:733 (1) - Add clap
01:26:917 (4) - Add clap + finish

I'll go ahead to mod the others if you think this sounds okay to you.
tsuka
I like Fripside XD
star
mtmcl
Why is this map in WIP and in my queue?
Topic Starter
minyeob
Oh, Mark
I moved this map to WIP cause of ztrot's post orz
Edit: Moved to pending again
Lissette
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Larto
Overall:
The mp3 quality makes me vomit. If you can find a better one, add it. if you can't, I'll search for one. If I can't either, I'll ask Ephemeral. If he can't, the universe explodes.

Insane:
03:45:76 (6) - This circle stacks with the spinner after it for some reason. Not sure what you can do about it, but if you can think of something,

Hard:
03:37:77 (2) - Offscreen argh.

Normal:
good

Easy:
^_^

Kakan ni Ouen:
This map isn't authentic REALLY. it has plenty overlapping notes and unauthentic sliders. Sliders should be perfectly symmetric or not even trying to be symmetric. Circle-like sliders should be as perfect as they can be. Also, NEVER EVER OVERLAP NOTES IN ANY WAY POSSIBLE.
Also, authentic breaks have become unrankable. Make em normal size.

Unpronouncable name's Hard:
00:39:06 (1,2,3) - make the spacing equal >:(
03:20:017 - Move that kiai start onto the next white tick <.<
03:37:58 (9) - hiding a slider like that is gay.
Cyril Scarlet
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
yongtw123

Larto wrote:

Unpronouncable name's Hard: I won't deny that my ID is unpronounceable...lol
00:39:06 (1,2,3) - make the spacing equal >:( I noticed that these were actually mistimed notes. Adjusted with 1/8 snapping, and it should feel better.
03:20:017 - Move that kiai start onto the next white tick <.< done
03:37:58 (9) - hiding a slider like that is gay. hiding it was my original intention but oh well it's ok. Changed.
Your modding is appreciated, Larto.

I also did minor adjustments to the map.
And minyeob, this beatmap pack IS getting better. Keep the spirits up!

Download: Fripside - Flower of Bravery (minyeob) [yongtw123's Hard].osu
La Valse
La Valse
AImod fixed version.. :)
- And diff fixed

Download: Fripside - Flower of Bravery (minyeob) [hutka's Hard+].osu
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