This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2011年10月2日 at 12:54:30

Artist: PSYCHIC LOVER
Title: Rewrite (Short Ver.)
Source: Rewrite
Tags: KEY kusano
BPM: 178
Filesize: 14051kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:

1. kusano's Terra (4.98 stars, 211 notes)
2. Moon (2.88 stars, 101 notes)
3. Rewrite (5 stars, 270 notes)

Download: PSYCHIC LOVER - Rewrite (Short Ver.)
Download: PSYCHIC LOVER - Rewrite (Short Ver.) (no video)
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Rewrite 2nd OP theme song

―書き換えることが出来るだろうか。
　 彼女の、その運命を。


Normal - 100%
Hard - 100% by kusano
Insane - 100%

My 15th beatmap.
Please advise me.

1st

osoku natta..

key信者がいるって聞いてとんできた

>kusano
アップして初めてフォーラムが開けた瞬間に書き込みってどういうことなの・・・

>S o r d a
いつもが早すぎるのだ・・・

>Reflain
我を呼んだかね

みんなありがと！

keyだってー

信者がここに

キリンさん

☆彡

Norn_NNN wrote:

キリンさん

キリンさんが好きです。でも、ゾウさんの方が、も～っと好きです。

Takos wrote:

keyだってー

FutakiKanata wrote:

信者がここに

lol
ありがとー！

yuineee wrote:

☆彡

Thanks☆

Norn_NNN wrote:

キリンさん

KSHR wrote:

Norn_NNN wrote:

キリンさん

キリンさんが好きです。でも、ゾウさんの方が、も～っと好きです。

ゾウの鼻をキリンの首にすればいいんじゃないかな。
星ありがとう！

I <3 Rewrite....I want it in English

._.

star~
is it still need a Hard diff?

@ALL
Thank you for star~

@Magicphoenix
One of my Indonesian friend said same thing as you lol

@mjw5150
Sorry, I had just asked other mapper today, and guest diff was completed
Normal(star rate < 3) has not been made however...

あれ、★まだだった！Rewriteおもしろかった！
star~

Rewrite実はやってないんだ……
こんなに熱い感じなのか……

ところどころスライダーの終点が隠れています
プレイには支障なかったけどmappingルールにあるので注意されるかも
このままでも大丈夫だと私は思いますが

nice map !

loli_milk wrote:

あれ、★まだだった！Rewriteおもしろかった！
star~

うむー面白かった！
星ありがとうー

PSPDS Eddie wrote:

Rewrite実はやってないんだ……
こんなに熱い感じなのか……

ところどころスライダーの終点が隠れています
プレイには支障なかったけどmappingルールにあるので注意されるかも
このままでも大丈夫だと私は思いますが

nice map !

実は熱い感じﾅﾉﾃﾞｽ。

いくつか直しました！
配置を変えづらいものはとりあえず保留にします。
星どうもですー！

= =+

消してええええええええええええええええええええええええ！！！
rewriteしてえええええええええええええええええええええええええ！！！

サイキックラバーかっこよすぎるだろおおおおお

star~ >w</

Hinacle wrote:

= =+

= =++

Holoaz wrote:

消してええええええええええええええええええええええええ！！！
rewriteしてえええええええええええええええええええええええええ！！！

なにがあった・・・

nimba wrote:

サイキックラバーかっこよすぎるだろおおおおお

やばいだろおおおおお

quintitem wrote:

star~ >w</

SPOILER

eh offset in Moon and Terra diff are different with rewrite diff D:
btw hmm I feel rewrite's offset maybe better...?xD decide on you lol

しまった・・・修正完了！

みんな星ありがとうー！

star~~

Your message is too short....Your message is too short.....

神曲！　ランク待ってます！　がんばってくだしあ！

I come to mod here, but nothing to mod for me.

Just get my star, and good luck.

Moon
01:28:582 (4) - add finish?

kusano's Terra
00:04:652 (1) - uh-oh, unsnapped slider
00:16:447 (7) - imo, end of slider must be here : 00:17:121 (1/2 later)
01:28:582 (1) - not sure in this nc, there are no nc in other diffs... and add finish here?

Rewrite
01:28:413 (4) - add finish to the end of slider?

sorry for this useless mod ><

Aleks719 wrote:

Moon
01:28:582 (4) - add finish? Added normal-finish.

Rewrite
01:28:413 (4) - add finish to the end of slider? Added normal-finish.

sorry for this useless mod ><

np~
Thank you for modding Aleks!

Aleks719 wrote:

kusano's Terra
00:04:652 (1) - uh-oh, unsnapped slider
00:16:447 (7) - imo, end of slider must be here : 00:17:121 (1/2 later) fixed.
01:28:582 (1) - not sure in this nc, there are no nc in other diffs... and add finish here? okay, remove nc. and added finish.

Thank you~

Download: PSYCHIC LOVER - Rewrite (Suzully) [kusano's Terra].osu

nice map
star~
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all suggestions

Rewrite

00:58:413 (1,2,3) - erm... not so sure about this... combo 2 doesn't follow the music and it's just hard to read. The drums start playing 1/3 tick notes at combo 3. perhaps you could add a note at 00:58:975 (x) - and change combo 1 and 2 into a slider or something.
01:24:200 (1) - start spinner here?

looks fine other than that

kusano's

00:38:694 (x) - add note
00:39:368 (x) - add note. it reallys flows a lot better imo if you add them...
00:40:885 (1,2) - yeah, idk if it's just me or what. these spaces are just awkward for me. you don't have to add them if you don't want to.
00:57:065 (1,2,3) - a little weird :/
01:03:638 (1) - The music doesn't really provoke a new combo here. you could remove this combo and move the note to match the previous pattern (so unstack 01:03:469 (5) - and continue the curve pattern you made, then stack 01:03:638 (1) - on top of it). Then add new combo to 01:03:806 (2) -
i guess that's not very important, but that new combo really shouldn't be there imo and well having that old combo color and that new combo color looks ugly imo lol.

you probably won't change anything lol

Moon

00:04:143 (6) - the repeat on this note sounds weird. i would take it off and rearrange spacing,.
00:54:368 (1,2,3) - ahhh, the triangle isn't equilateral, and well, it's kinda bothering me lol D:
01:24:200 (1) - start spinner here?
01:27:907 (2,3,4) - this stack just bothers me having it in the easiest diff. idk.

nothing important to say :3. oh well

Nice map! :3

Star~~

winber1 wrote:

all suggestions
kusano's

00:38:694 (x) - add note
00:39:368 (x) - add note. it reallys flows a lot better imo if you add them...
00:40:885 (1,2) - yeah, idk if it's just me or what. these spaces are just awkward for me. you don't have to add them if you don't want to.
00:57:065 (1,2,3) - a little weird :/
01:03:638 (1) - The music doesn't really provoke a new combo here. you could remove this combo and move the note to match the previous pattern (so unstack 01:03:469 (5) - and continue the curve pattern you made, then stack 01:03:638 (1) - on top of it). Then add new combo to 01:03:806 (2) -
i guess that's not very important, but that new combo really shouldn't be there imo and well having that old combo color and that new combo color looks ugly imo lol.

you probably won't change anything lol

Thank you for modding, winber~

Hello~

Folder and map settings are fine.

[Moon]
00:04:143 (6) - It doesn't perfectly match with rhytm or lyrics,cause last note isn't needed.Sooo,maybe remove a note at 00:04:480 by cutting repeat or changing this slider to 2 stacked circles?
01:03:806 (1) - Do you need this new combo mark? Maybe remove it as there's only 1 object within this combo?
01:07:851 (1) - Slider is a bit late,it should start from 01:07:683.
01:13:244 (3) - And this one ends too late.You should remove repeat and add a note to 01:14:424 instead of 01:14:593.
01:18:638 (5) - Again start it 1/2 earlier.
01:19:986 (7) - ^ ;__;
01:24:031 (1) - I feel like you should start this spinner with lyrics,at 01:24:200.

[kusano's Terra]
Is it some kind of Hard?
Cause AR feels way too high and Insane uses same settings for AR.
So,I'd suggest to use 7 here.

00:04:649 (1) - Not sure about such hold sliders.
00:57:065 (1,2,3) - Plays good,but it's kinda wrong..all these blue ticks doesn't follow any lyrcis or beats.I'd like you to re-arrange this part.
01:23:357 (4,5) - Plays bad..I wasn't expecting 3 repeats here and (5)-th circle is too far to read it well.

[Rewrite]
00:04:649 (1) - Same,not sure if such sliders are allowed now.
00:09:874 (2) - New combo here,and remove from 00:09:537 (1).Otherwise spacing will be inconsistent.
00:15:098 (2) - End this slider 1/2 earlier?
00:59:087 (4,1) - Reduce this jump,it's very hard to read here.

Nice solid mapset.
Good luck to you!
Star~

IceBeam wrote:

Hello~

[kusano's Terra]
Is it some kind of Hard?
Cause AR feels way too high and Insane uses same settings for AR.
So,I'd suggest to use 7 here. fixed.

00:04:649 (1) - Not sure about such hold sliders.
00:57:065 (1,2,3) - Plays good,but it's kinda wrong..all these blue ticks doesn't follow any lyrcis or beats.I'd like you to re-arrange this part. done.
01:23:357 (4,5) - Plays bad..I wasn't expecting 3 repeats here and (5)-th circle is too far to read it well. hmm... The fifth circle thinks that I do not have problem...

thank you~ ==+

Download: PSYCHIC LOVER - Rewrite (Suzully) [kusano's Terra].osu

winber1 wrote:

all suggestions

Rewrite

00:58:413 (1,2,3) - erm... not so sure about this... combo 2 doesn't follow the music and it's just hard to read. The drums start playing 1/3 tick notes at combo 3. perhaps you could add a note at 00:58:975 (x) - and change combo 1 and 2 into a slider or something. Nice suggestion! Fixed.
01:24:200 (1) - start spinner here? Fixed.

looks fine other than that

Moon

00:04:143 (6) - the repeat on this note sounds weird. i would take it off and rearrange spacing,. Fixed.
00:54:368 (1,2,3) - ahhh, the triangle isn't equilateral, and well, it's kinda bothering me lol D: Hehe I didn't put them like trigngle perfectly. Sorry no change.
01:24:200 (1) - start spinner here? Fixed.
01:27:907 (2,3,4) - this stack just bothers me having it in the easiest diff. idk. Removed (4) and extended (3).

nothing important to say :3. oh well

Nice map! :3

Star~~

Thanks winber1

IceBeam wrote:

Hello~

Folder and map settings are fine.

[Moon]
00:04:143 (6) - It doesn't perfectly match with rhytm or lyrics,cause last note isn't needed.Sooo,maybe remove a note at 00:04:480 by cutting repeat or changing this slider to 2 stacked circles? Fixed.
01:03:806 (1) - Do you need this new combo mark? Maybe remove it as there's only 1 object within this combo? Removed.
01:07:851 (1) - Slider is a bit late,it should start from 01:07:683. I see your point, but not changed cuz make it easy rhythm for newbie.
01:13:244 (3) - And this one ends too late.You should remove repeat and add a note to 01:14:424 instead of 01:14:593. ^
01:18:638 (5) - Again start it 1/2 earlier. ^
01:19:986 (7) - ^ ;__; ^
01:24:031 (1) - I feel like you should start this spinner with lyrics,at 01:24:200. Fixed.

[Rewrite]
00:04:649 (1) - Same,not sure if such sliders are allowed now. I think it's maybe rankable so I keep it for now.
00:09:874 (2) - New combo here,and remove from 00:09:537 (1).Otherwise spacing will be inconsistent. Just added new combo.
00:15:098 (2) - End this slider 1/2 earlier? Nah.
00:59:087 (4,1) - Reduce this jump,it's very hard to read here. Fixed.

Nice solid mapset.
Good luck to you!
Star~

Thank you IceBeam

[General]
It's a pretty big difficulty gap between Moon and kusano's diff.

[Moon]
00:00:267 (1) - I don't know...I think you should delete this note. I think it doesn't fit in an easier diff.
00:12:570 (2) - Add a finish to the start of this slider.
00:43:244 (8) - Add a finish to this note. (Or a whistle if you find 2 finishes in a row awkward)
00:55:716 (3) - Add a finish to the repeat. (^)
00:58:413 (1) - I don't agree with this new combo. But I see why it's there.
01:02:458 (1) - Add a finish to this note.
01:07:851 (1) - Remove new combo to match previous parts. (For example: 00:00:267 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - )
01:10:211 (4,1) - Remove new combo on (1) and add it on (4).

[kusano's Terra]
00:12:570 (2) - Finish to this slider start

[Rewrite]
00:09:537 (5) - Remove the new combo.
00:12:570 (2) - Add a finish to the start of the slider.
00:35:492 (6) - ^

STARED~

最近Pend漁ってなかったから見落としてた～┌(｡Ａ｡┌ )┐

Kiddo-Kun wrote:

[General]
It's a pretty big difficulty gap between Moon and kusano's diff.

[Moon]
00:00:267 (1) - I don't know...I think you should delete this note. I think it doesn't fit in an easier diff. Deleted.
00:12:570 (2) - Add a finish to the start of this slider. Nah.
00:43:244 (8) - Add a finish to this note. (Or a whistle if you find 2 finishes in a row awkward) Added whistle.
00:55:716 (3) - Add a finish to the repeat. (^) ^
00:58:413 (1) - I don't agree with this new combo. But I see why it's there. Removed.
01:02:458 (1) - Add a finish to this note. Fixed.
01:07:851 (1) - Remove new combo to match previous parts. (For example: 00:00:267 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ) I see your point, but sorry didn't fix.
01:10:211 (4,1) - Remove new combo on (1) and add it on (4). Nah.

[Rewrite]
00:09:537 (5) - Remove the new combo. Fixed.
00:12:570 (2) - Add a finish to the start of the slider. Nah.
00:35:492 (6) - ^ Fixed.

STARED~

Thank you for mod Kiddo-kun!

Mercurius wrote:

最近Pend漁ってなかったから見落としてた～┌(｡Ａ｡┌ )┐

星ありがとうー

Moon: Fine

kusano's Terra:

-AR 7?

01:28:244 (5) - This got completely covered up by the hitbursts from (1) and (2). Perhaps move it?

Rewrite:

00:04:649 (1) - I think it would be better if the start and end were "bunched up" instead of straight
00:42:065 (6,7) - (nazi) 1 level 3 grid right?
00:58:413 (1,2,3) - Given this spacing, this seems like it's 1/2 apart. Perhaps space it closer?

nice map~

pieguy1372 wrote:

Moon: Fine

Rewrite:

00:04:649 (1) - I think it would be better if the start and end were "bunched up" instead of straight I see your point, but I like current one, sorry.
00:42:065 (6,7) - (nazi) 1 level 3 grid right? Fixed.
00:58:413 (1,2,3) - Given this spacing, this seems like it's 1/2 apart. Perhaps space it closer? Yup, you're right. Fixed.

nice map~

Thank you for modding pieguy1372~

I love Psychic Lover! Anyways...

General:

While your timing's correct, the BPM should actually be halved in the beginning; this is why the ticks sound so weird ATM; it sounds like "2" during the first 20 seconds but "1" for the rest of the map. So, the "correct" red timing sections are:

Offset: 436 BPM: 89
Offset:22,009 BPM: 178

(though either way works, both this and what you currently have are correct, it's up to you which one sounds better)

Rewrite:

I think tick rate 2 sounds better; this is a very, very energetic song, so 1 sounds a bit... slow. Anyways...

00:00:267 (1) - There is no music, countdown, or anything to get into the rhythm with. So, this is hard to get a 300 on. I would delete (2) and make this a 1/2 slider for that reason.
00:43:919 (5) - This feels like it should be further away from (4). The music has a strong emphasis here, so it feels kinda jumpy.
00:49:818 (1,2,3) - I... don't feel a jump here. :/
01:03:806 (2,3,4) - These notes are really emphasized. I would make these jumps to go with the music better. Right now it just feels weird.
01:26:728 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This combo ends weird. The final note to end the song is a... slider end? Can you please change this so that the last note is a hit circle? It would feel better.

Terra:

I also think this should have a tick rate of 2. Anyways...

00:00:267 (1) - See: What I said in Rewrite. What I would do here is make (2) start here, and have it end where it currently ends.
00:02:795 (1) - This part of the song is very slow. So, this jump doesn't really fit.
00:12:233 (1,2) - ^
00:13:582 (3,4) - ^
00:17:458 (1) - Yet another weird jump.

Also, the entire first 20 seconds of this map has spacing that's significantly faster than the slider speed. This feels really, really awkward. Anyways, let's continue on...

00:40:042 (6) - Nitpicking, but... the slider end's a bit off. *cough*
01:23:862 (5) - This jump's really hard to read, and I just don't feel this jump. I would nerf it.
01:28:582 (6) - Make this louder. A lot louder. The "whoo!" isn't exactly subtle. :P Or you could change it to "Normal"; that would also work.

Moon:

00:17:627 (1,2,3) - Two sliders, far apart. There are so many patterns you can make... Make a real pattern with this please. Maybe the classic "circle"?
00:45:604 (2,3) - This motion isn't smooth. Maybe have (2) lead into (3)? Because right now it's going away from (3), and it feels awkward.
00:47:289 - Consider putting a hit circle here; it might feel better.
01:28:076 (3) - Again, ending with a slider end... it feels weird. I would fix this.

Overall, great map. Giving you a few kudosu stars for this one! ^_^

Mod from "The Challenge Queue":

General:

1. Slider Tick 2 for all diffs.

Moon:

1. Nice job.

kusano's Terra:

1. The 0,5x part of this song (until 00:20:829) feels wierd while playing. You have 2 options: Increasing that speed from 0,5x to 1,0x OR Spacing all those notes according to the speed you put (and not with such high distance around 2,0x)
2. 00:04:649 (1) - Quite odd slider. Consider making a curve instead of that.
3. 01:03:469 (5) - De-stack it from (4), as it doesn't feel like making a jump with the next note.

Rewrite:

1. 00:04:649 (1) - See: Hard.
2. 00:11:222 (3) - It's easier to follow the lyrics, so place it in 00:11:053.
3. 00:33:132 (1,2,3,4,5) - The melody doesn't really suggest that jumps.
4. 01:03:806 (2,3,4) - On the other hand, the melody DOES suggest jumps here.

Overall, it's really nice. There are not many things I can say :p

Hi request from the challenge queue.

Sorry but I think your map is good enough that I can't find out anything wrong to nazi.

Wish you early Ranked

My English is very poor. I hope you can understand.

good luck~

Ekaru wrote:

I love Psychic Lover! Anyways...

General:

While your timing's correct, the BPM should actually be halved in the beginning; this is why the ticks sound so weird ATM; it sounds like "2" during the first 20 seconds but "1" for the rest of the map. So, the "correct" red timing sections are:

Offset: 436 BPM: 89
Offset:22,009 BPM: 178

(though either way works, both this and what you currently have are correct, it's up to you which one sounds better)
I see your point, but it's not big issue imo. So no change, sorry.


Rewrite:

I think tick rate 2 sounds better; this is a very, very energetic song, so 1 sounds a bit... slow. Fixed
Anyways...

00:00:267 (1) - There is no music, countdown, or anything to get into the rhythm with. So, this is hard to get a 300 on. I would delete (2) and make this a 1/2 slider for that reason. Hmm...it's no hard imo. And there is a vocal sound here.
00:43:919 (5) - This feels like it should be further away from (4). The music has a strong emphasis here, so it feels kinda jumpy. Nice suggestion! Moved it further.
00:49:818 (1,2,3) - I... don't feel a jump here. :/ Sorry I like current formation.
01:03:806 (2,3,4) - These notes are really emphasized. I would make these jumps to go with the music better. Right now it just feels weird. Changed pattern~
01:26:728 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - This combo ends weird. The final note to end the song is a... slider end? Can you please change this so that the last note is a hit circle? It would feel better. ^

Moon:

00:17:627 (1,2,3) - Two sliders, far apart. There are so many patterns you can make... Make a real pattern with this please. Maybe the classic "circle"? Added a circle.
00:45:604 (2,3) - This motion isn't smooth. Maybe have (2) lead into (3)? Because right now it's going away from (3), and it feels awkward. Fixed.
00:47:289 - Consider putting a hit circle here; it might feel better. Hmm...sorry no change.
01:28:076 (3) - Again, ending with a slider end... it feels weird. I would fix this. If end with a circle, it become hard pattern for newbie. No change for now.

Overall, great map. Giving you a few kudosu stars for this one! ^_^

Thank you for mod and many stars Ekaru~

Deif wrote:

Mod from "The Challenge Queue":

General:

1. Slider Tick 2 for all diffs. Changed.

Moon:

1. Nice job.

Rewrite:

1. 00:04:649 (1) - See: Hard. Nah.
2. 00:11:222 (3) - It's easier to follow the lyrics, so place it in 00:11:053. What you mean is actually right, but I put it to follow the music.
3. 00:33:132 (1,2,3,4,5) - The melody doesn't really suggest that jumps. Changed pattern~
4. 01:03:806 (2,3,4) - On the other hand, the melody DOES suggest jumps here. ^

Overall, it's really nice. There are not many things I can say :p

Thank you for mod Deif~


@Kawayi Rika
No problem.
Good luck with us.


kusano'diff was also updated.

Rewriteが大好きぃ！
☆~
Your message is too short

challenge queue mod here

Emm, this song has no obviously climax IMO, so KIAI looks kinda odd, not a big problem, though

[Moon]

1. 00:58:413 (3,5) - As your previous finish partten, shouldn't this 2 add soft finish sound? Why suddenly use normal hitsound

[kusano's Terra]

1. 00:04:652 (1) - Unsnapped note
2. 00:58:413 (3,4) - Same suggestion to Moon

[Rewrite]

1. 00:53:020 (2) - I thinks this jump is too far to make me read it to a 1 beat interval note, maybe just for me. Ask for some player to test, if most say it's easy to tell, then it's fine enough

Rest are fine
nice song and map
When you done changes, let me know

@LaceWingfield
Thanks star~

Breeze wrote:

challenge queue mod here

Emm, this song has no obviously climax IMO, so KIAI looks kinda odd, not a big problem, though
I see your point, but imo KIAI is needed here.

[Moon]

1. 00:58:413 (3,5) - As your previous finish partten, shouldn't this 2 add soft finish sound? Why suddenly use normal hitsound
   Though its hitsound follows drum's sound. Yes, your opinion is actually right. But soft finish doesn't fit imo. So I replaced it with soft one, and add clap on (4,5).

[Rewrite]

1. 00:53:020 (2) - I thinks this jump is too far to make me read it to a 1 beat interval note, maybe just for me. Ask for some player to test, if most say it's easy to tell, then it's fine enough I asked my friends(various ranking, 400-3000), then it's fine and not difficult in their opinions. So I didn't change it, sorry.

Rest are fine
nice song and map
When you done changes, let me know

Thank you for mod Breeze-sensei!
Waiting for kusano's fix.

Edit:Updated kusano's diff.

Breeze wrote:

[kusano's Terra]

1. 00:04:652 (1) - Unsnapped note Fixed.
2. 00:58:413 (3,4) - Same suggestion to Moon Fixed.

OK, it's fine enough for a bubble
heya, I know my message is too short
well, type more

Thank you very much Breeze-sensei!! >w<
My message is too short, too lol

I think bpm 178.02

Too short ololololo lololoololololololololololollol

Kuma-san wrote:

I think bpm 178.02

Too short ololololo lololoololololololololololollol

Nah, 178 flat is correct.

I wish the difficulty names gave a better idea of how hard each diff is.

Moon: fine

kusano's Terra: This diff is a little hard to read at times.
Kiai time is not snapped to the beat (well at least should be snapped to a downbeat since you can see kiai time start there)
00:15:941 (4,5,6,7) - flip horizontally to avoid overlap with 00:13:919 (4)
00:58:413 (3) - this is too much of an antijump for me (I pressed this note too early the first time I played this map)
01:03:806 (1,2,3) - try to clean up the sliders so that they end exactly on each other likes so: (not perfect, but I think you get the point
01:18:975 (2) - like 01:03:806 (1,2,3), please make the overlap between sliders nicer
01:23:357 (3) - I doubt you will change it, but I tend to not realize that this slider repeats so many times.

Rewrite:
00:17:964 (4) - move left a bit to avoid overlapping with 00:16:447 (5)?
01:28:582 (6) - place this exactly inbetween 1 and 2 to avoid overlap

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Mostly a bunch of aesthetic stuff that can be used to improve your map a bit. I want to recheck it a bit before I consider ranking it (there have been talks about not being able to rank if there are any changes at all, so I might not be able to), so I will least recheck for at least a bubble if you make any changes.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

I wish the difficulty names gave a better idea of how hard each diff is. I see your point, but I picked out these name from the story of Rewrite. So I want to keep them.

Moon: fine

Rewrite:
00:17:964 (4) - move left a bit to avoid overlapping with 00:16:447 (5)? Changed pattern.
01:28:582 (6) - place this exactly inbetween 1 and 2 to avoid overlap Fixed.

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Mostly a bunch of aesthetic stuff that can be used to improve your map a bit. I want to recheck it a bit before I consider ranking it (there have been talks about not being able to rank if there are any changes at all, so I might not be able to), so I will least recheck for at least a bubble if you make any changes.

Thank you for mod, blissfulyoshi
I'll let you know when kusano's diff is fixed.

EDIT:

blissfulyoshi wrote:

kusano's Terra: This diff is a little hard to read at times.
Kiai time is not snapped to the beat (well at least should be snapped to a downbeat since you can see kiai time start there) Oops, fixed.
00:15:941 (4,5,6,7) - flip horizontally to avoid overlap with 00:13:919 (4) Fixed.
00:58:413 (3) - this is too much of an antijump for me (I pressed this note too early the first time I played this map) Moved it further from (2).
01:03:806 (1,2,3) - try to clean up the sliders so that they end exactly on each other likes so: (not perfect, but I think you get the point Fixed.

SPOILER

01:18:975 (2) - like 01:03:806 (1,2,3), please make the overlap between sliders nicer Fixed.
01:23:357 (3) - I doubt you will change it, but I tend to not realize that this slider repeats so many times. Fixed.

I just want to cry. T^T
I don't want to waste my Skin,so just use it if you like them.
http://puu.sh/5XgO

xykbear wrote:

I just want to cry. T^T
I don't want to waste my Skin,so just use it if you like them.
http://puu.sh/5XgO

What a great skin it is!
However...hmm...sorry but I don't like to use custom skin in my beatmap...

Sorry for taking so long to get back to you.

Tick rate 2 sounds a little better in the faster sections of the map, but does a little worse in the slow sections. I'll leave it up to you if you want to use it.
It also came to my attention that the difficulty spread is fairly bad with a large jump inbetween "Moon" and "kusano's Terra," so it would be nice if you included a difficulty to fill in that gap. Still, I won't enforce its need.

Rewrite:
00:17:458 (1,2,3,4) - When I was talking about this area, I was thinking of moving 4 outward to form a smoother curve. Beyond that, I was also thinking about moving the entire combo to avoid 4's overlap with 00:16:447 (4) and the 300 that comes from it.

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There are a few things that I mentioned that could improve your mapset, but they are optional. If you add a new diff, I would be happy to mod it and bring it up to standards quickly. If you want to keep the current amount of diffs, I guess I am fine with rebubbling, so contact me when you are ready.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

Sorry for taking so long to get back to you. No problem.

Tick rate 2 sounds a little better in the faster sections of the map, but does a little worse in the slow sections. I'll leave it up to you if you want to use it.
inb4, some modders said so too, but others disagree with it. So I decided to use tick rate 1.
It also came to my attention that the difficulty spread is fairly bad with a large jump inbetween "Moon" and "kusano's Terra," so it would be nice if you included a difficulty to fill in that gap. Still, I won't enforce its need.
Hmm...I see your point, but I picked out these diff names from the story of Rewrite. Then I can use only 3 names because there is no more suitable name. Therefore I want to keep current diffs...sorry.

Rewrite:
00:17:458 (1,2,3,4) - When I was talking about this area, I was thinking of moving 4 outward to form a smoother curve. Beyond that, I was also thinking about moving the entire combo to avoid 4's overlap with 00:16:447 (4) and the 300 that comes from it.
Oh yes, you are right. Nice suggestion! Fixed~

SPOILER

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There are a few things that I mentioned that could improve your mapset, but they are optional. If you add a new diff, I would be happy to mod it and bring it up to standards quickly. If you want to keep the current amount of diffs, I guess I am fine with rebubbling, so contact me when you are ready.

Thank you for recheck, blissfulyoshi

With that, I guess I can rebubble.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

With that, I guess I can rebubble.

Thanks a lot!

[General]
Title should be Rewrite (Short Ver.) since this isnt the Full version.

[kusano's Terra]
01:28:244 (5) - This slider is hard to see i'd suggest moving 01:26:728 (1,2) Somewhere else.

Should be fine for rank after fixes, popping over hidden slider and wrong title

Sakura Hana wrote:

[General]
Title should be Rewrite (Short Ver.) since this isnt the Full version. Added (Short Ver.) because this is not anime, PC game.

[kusano's Terra]
01:28:244 (5) - This slider is hard to see i'd suggest moving 01:26:728 (1,2) Somewhere else. Changed formation~

Should be fine for rank after fixes, popping over hidden slider and wrong title

Thank you for mod, Sakura Hana-sensei!

Ok, i dont know but im addicted to this map now xD (didnt that also happen with a certain map of yours months ago)

Ranked!

Congratulations ^_^

Congrat!!

Congratulations~

おめでとー！！

Sakura Hana wrote:

Ok, i dont know but im addicted to this map now xD (didnt that also happen with a certain map of yours months ago)

Ranked!

Congratulations ^_^

Thank you very much! >w<
I'm happy you enjoy it~

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Thanks!

おめでとうございますＳｕｚｕｌｌｙさん

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Ranked omedeto

Oh I'm late TwT

Omedetou !! >w<//

omedetou!

Good

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