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Witches - There She Is (step 1)

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Topic Starter
GabrielRKF
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on terça-feira, 23 de março de 2010 at 20:18:56

Artist: Witches
Title: There She is (step 1)
Tags: GbL
BPM: 166,01
Filesize: 10810kb
Play Time: 01:40
Difficulties Available:
  1. Attraction (0,93 stars, 86 notes)
  2. Forbidden Passion (4,95 stars, 468 notes)
  3. GbL's Love (3,82 stars, 246 notes)
Download: Witches - There She is (step 1)
Download: Witches - There She is (step 1) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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First part from There She Is Series.

Remaped~ :D

Last Bump[16/02/10]:
  • Fixed Gbl's Love preview point
Special thanks to:
-Shiro- for showing me this song :D
Breeze for awesome hit0.png skin :]
Amodeus
Easy
01:31:984 I think that you should finish this slider on 01:32:990 It sounds better
01:33:813 Put the slider on 01:33:447
01:35:094 may be circle with finish sound


Normal
00:50:762 stats when there is no music. move it to 00:50:945
GbL
Nice map, star. xD

Só cuidado com os spinners, ouvi dizer que os BATs pedem pra alterar se houver spins que não dê no mínimo 2000 bonus.
Topic Starter
GabrielRKF

Amodeus wrote:

Easy
01:31:984 I think that you should finish this slider on 01:32:990 It sounds better [It really sounds better ^^]
01:33:813 Put the slider on 01:33:447[ ok :) ]
01:35:094 may be circle with finish sound [done =)]


Normal
00:50:762 stats when there is no music. move it to 00:50:945[ok]
-Shiro-
Thanks for special thanks :)
u did a great job on this music, a star for u =]
Topic Starter
GabrielRKF

-Shiro- wrote:

Thanks for special thanks =D :)
U'R WELCOME XD
XepherX3
absolutely nothing weird bout this
star for fast ranking
Skyripper
I don't really have a big problem with much in this. BUT

your timing is really off.

BPM: 166.19
Offset: 11,001

You're going to have to resnap everything and stuff. Shoot me a forum PM when you do that stuff.
DeathxShinigami
Needs priority. Nothing to odd about this map~

Starred.
Yes_old
n_n Here's some things I thought would be nice to add~ [Just suggestions!!!]

[Hard]

00:13:53 (11) - Finish (or another hitsound?)
00:16:42 (11) - ^
00:26:90 (5) - Too close
01:12:37 (3) - Start slider at 01:12:33 instead
01:31:56 (6) - Whistle
01:33:01 (6) - ^
01:40:59 (1) - End Spinner at 01:41:138 and finish
01:55:22 () - Add note here
02:32:07 - Maybe insert break here
02:41:28 (1) - Clap (I think)
02:41:64 (3) - ^
02:42:00 (5) - ^
02:42:36 (7) - ^
02:42:72 (9) - ^
02:43:08 (11) - ^
02:47:06 (1) - ^
02:47:42 (3) - ^
02:47:78 (5) - ^ etc, etc.
02:50:67 (5) - Clap? I don't know xD
02:52:12 (5) - ^
03:21:01 (1) - Finish?


STAR! Cute hit circles, hehe.
Topic Starter
GabrielRKF

Yes wrote:

n_n Here's some things I thought would be nice to add~ [Just suggestions!!!]

[Hard]

00:13:53 (11) - Finish (or another hitsound?) Clap :D
00:16:42 (11) - ^ ^ XD
00:26:90 (5) - Too close Fixed
01:12:37 (3) - Start slider at 01:12:33 instead Ok
01:31:56 (6) - Whistle Interesting. Ok, I did that
01:33:01 (6) - ^ ^
01:40:59 (1) - End Spinner at 01:41:138 and finish I think it's better not use this one .__.
01:55:22 () - Add note here Ok :D
02:32:07 - Maybe insert break here I don't think so .__.
02:41:28 (1) - Clap (I think)
02:41:64 (3) - ^
02:42:00 (5) - ^
02:42:36 (7) - ^
02:42:72 (9) - ^
02:43:08 (11) - ^
02:47:06 (1) - ^
02:47:42 (3) - ^
02:47:78 (5) - ^ etc, etc.
02:50:67 (5) - Clap? I don't know xD
02:52:12 (5) - ^
03:21:01 (1) - Finish?
Used the half of these guys up here ;)


STAR! Cute hit circles, hehe.
Thanks a lot for your modding Yes :)
Wojjan
Who wants a difficulty?~

I've got nothing to do, and I have a ranked map. So you know it'll be nice.
Also, star. Get this ranked quickly
whymeman
Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Detailed Modding Go!

Osz. File Check (Done)

SPOILER
Video: Yes
Custom Skin: Yes (Please fix the spinner art. It doesn't look right.)
[Current] Size: 10.60 MB / 20.00 MB
Source: No (Please add in the Source.)
Tags: No (Please add in the Tags.)

[Easy] (Done)

SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 166.098 / 11,011 ms (The timing feels wrong and rough. Try 166.006 BPM with an 10,973ms offset.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.40 (Looks a bit too fast for an easy difficulty...)
Distance Snap Average: N/A (Manually snapped?)
[Current] Objects: 236 ( 174 Circles / 56 Sliders / 6 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 420
[Current] Max Score: 1,741,876
[Current] Star Rating: 2.96 (Quite high for an "easy" difficulty...)
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv. 4
[Current] Circle Size: Lv. 1
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv. 4

Here are the options.... either tone down the difficulty of the map or just change it to [Normal]. This map is NOT easy. Also, get the spacing checked through the whole map.

00:32:65 (1,1,1) - Try to avoid using single note combos where it is not needed.
00:33:56 (B) - Delete and replace break.
01:10:97 (1,2) - Its kinda hard to see yellow notes with a spinner that has a yellow background...
01:41:51 (B) - Delete and replace break.
02:25:60 (B) - ^
02:31:20 (1) - Not mathcing with the lyrics...
03:00:84 (B) - Delete and replace break.
03:20:36 (1,1,1) - Single note combos....


Notes: This map is going to need some work. Check into the timing, the spacing, and the slider velocity. Also, i'd rather call this "normal' than "easy" to make things easier, but you need to make an easier difficulty.

[Hard] (Done)

SPOILER
Timing (BPM / Offset): 166.098 / 11,011 ms (The timing feels wrong and rough. Try 166.006 BPM with an 10,973ms offset.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: N/A (Manually snapped?)
[Current] Objects: 429 ( 370 Circles / 54 Sliders / 5 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 576
[Current] Max Score: 5,892,882
[Current] Star Rating: 4.64
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv. 5
[Current] Circle Size: Lv. 2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv. 7

Double check the spacing in the map. Its not distance snapped.

00:32:65 (1,1,1) - Single note combos...
00:33:65 (B) - Delete and replace break.
01:40:68 (1) - Does not start or end properly. Move the starting point of the spinner to 01:40:59 then extend to 01:41:68. Don't forget to replace the break in the process.
02:28:27 (1) - Doesn't sound right...
02:31:16 (1) - ^
02:33:51 (1,2,3,4) - Looks really odd having the notes over the slider like that...
03:00:79 (B) - Delete and replace break.

Notes: This difficulty is going to need some work as well. Make sure to go through the whole map using the distance snap.Also, check into the timing as well.

Overall: The map is okay, but still needs more work before pushing to be ranked. First off, the difficuly list gap isn't too reasonable. Have a [Easy] then a [Hard] is a bit intimidating for newer players. Also, [Easy] looks more like a normal-hard to me. Its better to concider turning it into [Normal] instead and make an easier difficulty. Make sure to have the spinner art check since it doesn't look neat. Make sure to add in the Source and Tags for all difficulties. I'll drop my star in then.
ElfoVampiro
ta quase pronto, falta pouco eaohaeoheaohe -q
ElfoVampiro
agora ta bom
Topic Starter
GabrielRKF

whymeman wrote:

Remember, some of the errors posted are suggestions, not directions. Edit to what you see fit.

Detailed Modding Go!

Osz. File Check (Done)

Video: Yes
Custom Skin: Yes (Please fix the spinner art. It doesn't look right.) I'll fix it later ^^
[Current] Size: 10.60 MB / 20.00 MB
Source: No (Please add in the Source.)
Tags: No (Please add in the Tags.)

[Easy] (Done)

Timing (BPM / Offset): 166.098 / 11,011 ms (The timing feels wrong and rough. Try 166.006 BPM with an 10,973ms offset.) Fixed =] Fixed
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.40 (Looks a bit too fast for an easy difficulty...) Well, now it's Normal, right? ^^
Distance Snap Average: N/A (Manually snapped?) It's not that, i used Distance Snap, but i used to the Medium Grid. But don't worry, fixed the Distance using the Small Grid now ^^
[Current] Objects: 236 ( 174 Circles / 56 Sliders / 6 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 420
[Current] Max Score: 1,741,876
[Current] Star Rating: 2.96 (Quite high for an "easy" difficulty...)
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv. 4
[Current] Circle Size: Lv. 1
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv. 4

Here are the options.... either tone down the difficulty of the map or just change it to [Normal]. This map is NOT easy. Also, get the spacing checked through the whole map.

00:32:65 (1,1,1) - Try to avoid using single note combos where it is not needed. Ok :D
00:33:56 (B) - Delete and replace break. Done
01:10:97 (1,2) - Its kinda hard to see yellow notes with a spinner that has a yellow background... Took off a New Combo back there =]
01:41:51 (B) - Delete and replace break. ok
02:25:60 (B) - ^ Ok
02:31:20 (1) - Not mathcing with the lyrics... u think? õ.o
03:00:84 (B) - Delete and replace break.
03:20:36 (1,1,1) - Single note combos.... ok =/


Notes: This map is going to need some work. Check into the timing, the spacing, and the slider velocity. Also, i'd rather call this "normal' than "easy" to make things easier, but you need to make an easier difficulty.


[Hard] (Done)

Timing (BPM / Offset): 166.098 / 11,011 ms (The timing feels wrong and rough. Try 166.006 BPM with an 10,973ms offset.)
[Currently] with double BPM: No
[Currently] with altered timing sections: Yes
[Current] Slider Tick Rate / Velocity: 2 / 1.40
Distance Snap Average: N/A (Manually snapped?) It's not that, i used Distance Snap, but i used to the Medium Grid. But don't worry, fixed the Distance using the Small Grid now ^^
[Current] Objects: 429 ( 370 Circles / 54 Sliders / 5 Spinners )
[Current] Max Combo: 576
[Current] Max Score: 5,892,882
[Current] Star Rating: 4.64
[Current] HP Drain Rate: Lv. 5
[Current] Circle Size: Lv. 2
[Current] Overall Difficulty: Lv. 7

Double check the spacing in the map. Its not distance snapped.

00:32:65 (1,1,1) - Single note combos... Fixed :D
00:33:65 (B) - Delete and replace break. ok õ.o
01:40:68 (1) - Does not start or end properly. Move the starting point of the spinner to 01:40:59 then extend to 01:41:68. Don't forget to replace the break in the process. Thanks, way better ^^
02:28:27 (1) - Doesn't sound right... I changed it but i cant find a good timing .__.
02:31:16 (1) - ^
02:33:51 (1,2,3,4) - Looks really odd having the notes over the slider like that... Ok ^^
03:00:79 (B) - Delete and replace break. ok =]

Notes: This difficulty is going to need some work as well. Make sure to go through the whole map using the distance snap.Also, check into the timing as well.

Overall: The map is okay, but still needs more work before pushing to be ranked. First off, the difficuly list gap isn't too reasonable. Have a [Easy] then a [Hard] is a bit intimidating for newer players. Also, [Easy] looks more like a normal-hard to me. Its better to concider turning it into [Normal] instead and make an easier difficulty. Make sure to have the spinner art check since it doesn't look neat. Make sure to add in the Source and Tags for all difficulties. I'll drop my star in then.
Thanks for your mod :D
Wojjan
Grah. I went mapping berserk on this one, and didn't really follow distance snap to the dot. Please don't nazimod for spacing, I wanna retain my style. Thankyuu!

Download: Witches - There She is (step 1) (roxkyuubiforever) [Wojjan's Insane].osu
Topic Starter
GabrielRKF
This map has been deleted on the request of its creator. It is no longer available.
Wojjan
Ok, but run the changes by me once, mkay? I wouldn't want my style to disappear.
Topic Starter
GabrielRKF

Wojjan wrote:

Ok, but run the changes by me once, mkay? I wouldn't want my style to disappear.
Sorry Wojjan, but i think i'm not gonna use your diff. Sorry.
I think that it's a little too confusing u know?

Sorry if i gave you unecessary work
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