1. Easy (2.2 stars, 169 notes)
2. Insane (4.86 stars, 639 notes)
3. JauiPlaY's Hard (4.6 stars, 374 notes)
4. yznoob's Normal (4.16 stars, 270 notes)

JauiPlaY wrote:

卡密sama打DotA?

eveless wrote:

[General]
Title:Kamikyoku - x
Shinkyoku - O
D: 貌似歌词里唱的是Kamikyoku啊...
Source:PinokioP feat. OniyuuP
Tags:删了PinokioP OniyuuP 加上vocaloid
all fixed

[Insane]
00:21:175 (5) - 往后移1/4 ok
01:03:690 (1) - 从01:03:782这里开始 结束的地方不变 fixed
01:34:334 (x) -add a note I guess not = =
02:03:230 (4,5) - 两个位置换一下 ok

Cirno wrote:

eveless wrote:

[General]
Title:Kamikyoku - x
Shinkyoku - O
D: 貌似歌词里唱的是Kamikyoku啊...

mycyber wrote:

[easy]
02:18:322 (3) - remove this
02:18:322 (x)- replace by add note here &
02:18:506 (x)- slider here until 02:18:874
this sound better(i think)
Sorry but I can't agree with you = = (I have no idea about how you did came up with this x.x

love the song..
star~~

Mystica wrote:

kamisama打dota lol 我也觉得这神空耳lol 加到Creator's Words里好了 o.o
Here is my mod.
[Easy]
这奇葩的难度设置是什么。。至少也要HPD2 OD2吧lol 然后ar-2~3左右
HPD2 OD2又不加分还拉新手仇恨o.o 和主要展现map的H/I不同,Easy做来几乎完全是照顾新手,大家高高兴兴pass轻轻松松打SS多好 well.. reduced AR 5->4, others unchanged
00:58:997 这连续两个slider好奇葩lol = = 我弱 想不出更好的放法...sry
是我错觉么 insane是Normal 用的灰色三种。。这个diff相反。
My bad. 改了Insane的combo color后忘了统一到所有难度 fixed.
02:21:819 breaktime？ added breaktime
02:33:230 同00:58:997
other is fine

不愧是神曲。。hitsound做的很棒 要是声音在大点就好了。 thanks~ tuned up the volumes in [Easy] & [Insane] a bit
Star.

yangzd88 wrote:

[琪露诺]
01:34:334 (8,1) - 这里略微有点初见杀 要不把8调到7/1中点 ok
01:35:070 (2,3,4,5) - 音量渐大 ok
01:38:935 - whistle
01:39:304 - ^
01:39:672 - ^
01:41:880 - ^
01:42:248 - ^
01:42:616 - ^
02:07:279 - ^
applied all the hitsounds
02:36:359 (1,2,3) - reverse no 0.0
02:49:426 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 这个三角形排的扭曲 fixed
03:04:886 (1,2,3,4) - 至少和前面的1234一样方向吧 违反人体工学233 >_> 人体工学是什么 maybe not

神曲神谱 液
另外可以领走一个NM吗(打飞 Name it [yangzd88's moe] plz I'm serious 愿意的话可以做 不过别拖稿太长就好...

yangzd88 wrote:

attachment here

Miu Matsuoka wrote:

Hi baka~ Hi Miu~

[Easy]
00:51:635 (1) - Finish on slider head? nice
00:54:580 (4) - Clap on slider end fixed
01:18:138 (1) - Delete Whistle on slider head? deleted Whistle and added whistle on head of (2)
02:08:199 (1) - 2nd point: x:336 y:128 3rd point: x:384 y:200 4th point: x:448 y:168 nice, fixed
02:14:089 (1) - Too soon after a spinner I don't think it's too soon...
02:37:463 (2) - x:180 y:120 fixed
02:37:647 (3) - Finish at slider head? ok
02:38:384 (4) - ^
02:39:120 (5) - Finish at slider head and end
02:40:592 (1) - Finish
no for these three.. sorry

[Insane]
01:35:807 (1) - 2nd point: x:360 y:184
01:36:543 (2) - 2nd point: x:152 y:204
01:37:095 (3) - 2nd point: x:204 y:332
all fixed
02:05:439 (2) - Delete New Combo
02:06:176 (2) - ^
new combo makes it more readable imo

EDIT: Use this hitsound for slider tick?I don't see why...

wmfchris wrote:

[General]
tag moemoeyz in normal yeah best tag ever

[Insane]
00:05:070 (1,3,5) - left 1 grid lv4
00:07:095 (3) - right 1 grid lv4
all fixed.
00:53:107 (1,2,3) - [nazi] stack stacked and made some changes to (3)

other diffs will be changed by guest mapper themselves.

yangzd88 wrote:

(墙角哭

nicktoons wrote:

General:
strange fillings... like the offset is a little bit fast (not sure just.... nah...) I think it's fine, might be my Global Offset though.
I was told, that grey and white are not available colours =/ (maybe it's ok but you should ask for some mat's about this(as soon as it's miku maybe it's ok i dunno >.<))
I wondered if anyone responsible of the bubble/rank process ever said grey & white can't be used :/ I think it's ok since it doesn't blend with the background.
Easy:
overall it's fine, only some places are not following rhythm and then next time they follow =/ like here:
01:15:193 (1,2) - this and 01:18:138 (1,2) - this don't follow while this 01:21:083 (1,2) - follows =/ dunno if that is a mistake just... nah....
I don't feel like following the vocal all the time. Note that rhythm != vocal, they're not equivalent.
Insane;
the beat map seems. only 1 thing, add kiai time in chorus. i got them ^ in previous diffs. I guess not... I don't like kiai that much and most players don't.
overall nice. star for interresting idea

wmfchris wrote:

P.S. yangzd88 is a moe girl

JauiPlaY wrote:

[Insane]
01:03:782(1) - 这个spinner感觉出来得慢了一截,最好前提至01:03:506 在这个时间放spinner的话和bgv转地球配合最好...
02:21:451-02:24:764 - 考虑到掉血,加break time或者加note? :/ HPD5能掉到哪去 加note也不合适啊 >.>
02:51:635(9) - new combo. 改为(14)和后面灰色串的(9)加nc了
一点建议

akrolsmir wrote:

Easy:
02:15:193 (2,4) - These are noticeably closer to the previous note than the next one. Very minor, though.
02:30:285 (1) - ^
all fixed

Insane:
00:58:629 (3) - Jump here is quite large and is also hidden by (1), move away? The hiding is intentional
01:32:862 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I played this like five times, and watched it in editor and still couldn't get the pattern. Also, add a note at 01:33:046?
pattern: (2,3,4) is a spacing x2 jump and then back to regular spacing. add note: I guess not...
02:11:144 (1,2,1,2) - Are these supposed to be gray? It doesn't seem to fit. changed to colored combos
02:32:862 (3) - See 00:58:629 (3) same, intentional

Nice video and song, and mapped quite well! I especially liked the use of combo colors. Star + Kudostar!

1. 00:53:659 (1) - new combo
2. 00:57:156 (9) - ^
3. 00:57:524 (1,2) - 交换new combo
4. 01:06:359 (2) - 能不能换其他的, 这个实在太堵了..
5. 02:05:991 (1) - 这个和02:06:176 (1) 重合? 现在的spacing读起来压力很大..
6. 02:06:176 (1,2,3) - 全选ctrl+r一下 注意音效顺序也会变掉
7. 02:06:543 (1,2,3,4) - 顺序改成上中下中... 这条和上面两个是配套的
8. 02:19:978 (5) - 这个很不错 :3
9. 02:27:340 (1) - 取消new combo
10. 02:27:892 (3) - new combo
11. 02:31:757 (1,2) - 交换new combo
12. 打起来不错 但是缺少工整感

1. 为什么是超大圈... OD+1 这个难度打起来不像Hard

• 02:36:175 (4,5) - spacing按x0.75的时候来

Colin Hou wrote:

[Insane]:

1. 00:53:659 (1) - new combo
2. 00:57:156 (9) - ^
3. 00:57:524 (1,2) - 交换new combo
   all fixed
4. 01:06:359 (2) - 能不能换其他的, 这个实在太堵了.. I'm unable to come up with a better one, sorry...
5. 02:05:991 (1) - 这个和02:06:176 (1) 重合? 现在的spacing读起来压力很大..
6. 02:06:176 (1,2,3) - 全选ctrl+r一下 注意音效顺序也会变掉
7. 02:06:543 (1,2,3,4) - 顺序改成上中下中... 这条和上面两个是配套的
   ..oh well. ok for these
8. 02:19:978 (5) - 这个很不错 :3 thanks
9. 02:27:340 (1) - 取消new combo
10. 02:27:892 (3) - new combo
11. 02:31:757 (1,2) - 交换new combo
    all fixed. also removed new combo on 00:53:107 (1) for consistency
12. 打起来不错 但是缺少工整感 thanks for advice. I'll try to improve..

1. You need to add the tags for the mapper of yznoob's difficulty.
2. Add a 1.5 second lead-in.

1. Way too many repeats sliders with more than 1 repeat and 1/2 to my taste. I tend to think that such sliders are confusing because the number of repeats isn't easy to foresee, and new players don't always think of checking the presence or absence of a repeat arrow.
2. 00:53:107 (2,3) - For consistency with the slider before and the one after, I think it'd be better to remove (3) and extend the slider to where it was. The pattern will be imo a lot better and more consistent !
3. 01:03:506 (1) - Avoid placing spinners so soon after notes in an Easy - it's surprising.
4. 01:18:138 (1,2) - I don't see what they match in the song. So I think it'd be better to just make them 1/1 sliders, it will be a lot less difficult to play.
5. 01:38:751 (1,2,3,4,1) - Replace with the same kind of sliders as in the first chorus ? This will help keep some consistency in the map. Changing the patterns is fine (and recommended - ,-) but I think that using the same rhythms is better for an Easy, for it is easier to play.
6. 02:05:254 (3,5) - Add new combos ? That way you'll have a new combo after each clap-clap, which will be more consistent.
7. 02:12:616 (1) - Very short spinner for an Easy, and it is rather unexpected. Besides, the note after it comes too soon.
8. 02:19:794 (5,6,7) - I find this kind of placement confusing: there are two stacks close in time, but they have different rhythms, and that might be confusing. Unstack (7) ?
   02:27:340 (2,3) - Same as 00:53:107 -
9. 02:28:813 (4) - Forgot a clap on the end ?
10. 02:36:543 (3,4,5,1,2,3) - I find this to be really too hard for an Easy. Especialy the stack. ><
11. 02:46:481 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Too hard. The rhythm is rather complicated, and the pattern itself is rather hard for an Easy.
    03:10:040 (2,3,4) - bit hard too

1. Why doesn't this start at the same time as the other diffs ?
2. Make it end at the same place as Insane and Easy ?
3. Too much 1/2 to my taste, but that's just a personal opinion.
4. 00:26:604 (4,5) - I find this to sound very weird - on top of being rather confusing for a Normal. Maybe extend (4) to the red tick ?
5. 01:41:512 (6) - I expected this to be 1/2 earlier to match the lyrics
6. 01:44:457 (5) - same
7. 02:13:353 (5,1) - The spacing change here is misleading: (1) might be considered to be 1/2 after (5). Spacing (1) further will help make the slow down easy to see since the slider will be slowed down, while having the slow down here through spacing is confusing.
8. 02:19:978 (1) - Huh, if possible, avoid silence beats like that, it's really confusing. Besides, I don't see why you silenced the first one ? o.o
9. 02:36:911 (5) - It's just an opinion, but I avoid using such sliders in Normal/Easy diffs, because their shape makes them shorter than they should be, and it might be misleading for a player.
10. 02:59:733 (1) - Hm... It's too close to the previous slider. Also, I find 1/4 kick sliders to be extremely confusing for Normal diffs, because there's no way to tell when they end, and new players don't always have the habit of holding sliders. Were this slider alone without anything after it, it would have been fine, but there's a note 1/1 after it. New players tend to rush on notes to place their cursor before clicking, and kick sliders makes them combobreak because they don't expect the slider to keep going.

1. Make it end at the same place as Insane and Easy ?
2. I find the 1/4 not to fit at all. It makes the rhythm used confusing.
3. 00:26:604 (1) - Really too soon after the spinner. Also, the rhythm after felt weird. Probably because it starts on a red tick.

1. 01:10:316 (5,6,7,1) - Confusing. At least add a note on the white tick so that the stack doesn't start on a blue tick. ;~; also these kind of stacks are usually started with triples ><

Shiirn wrote:

yznoob
i suggest tick rate 1
I'll leave this to be decided by the guest mapper.
00:46:481 (2) - ubernazi - not aligned with previous slider
01:10:776 (2) - this extends way off the grid and goes through the hp bad and is a few pixels off the playing field
Fixed this two myself since the changes are not significant, @yangzd88 hope you don't mind me doing this for you

insane
this is a nightmare to sightread
00:46:481 (1) - very close to being hidden, but it's not so ok
I don't think it's hidden in play mode, so left unchanged

very fucking nice map

SapphireGhost wrote:

Not sure why I'm modding this but ok.

[General]
- Set the offset to 101 if you'd like. What's the difference? It snaps at the same time anyway
- Please don't use 0% hitsound volume at parts, it's not good. If you're talking about the new 5% minimum stuff, k changed 0%s to 5% on Soft default.

[Easy]
00:54:580 (3,1) - Blanket could be a lot better. k
01:03:506 (1,1) - Lots of spinner time for [Easy], you might want to make the second one into a break. One can always spin a few rounds and just stop after that if he don't want to spin. This is OD0 okay? It don't require newbies to spin like crazy to get 300.
02:28:813 (3,1) - Here's the blanket thing again! k
02:37:279 (1,2,3) - You should probably remove (2) for consistency, seeing how this is the only time in the map you have to do three 1/2s in a row. This map is 'consistent' enough imo, too much consistency only makes it boring. Hey, 02:58:261 (1) - is the only time you have to spin after 1/1, 03:11:696 (1) - is the only time you have to spin after 1/2, and 01:03:506 (1, 1) - is the only time you have to do 2 spinners! does that mean I should remove all spinners in this map for consistency?
02:58:261 (1) - This spinner is short enough that I believe it could be replaced by a long slider or something. Auto 8000 spinners are not short enough I guess?

Cirno wrote:

I'd say this is quite an easy 2kd for you (lol you didn't even touch insane), go and have a party for your luck.

1. Combo Colours: The "ColorHax" seems really nice but I think you should use the "Black" and "Grey" colours for this part: 02:02:310 - too. Also, perhaps make "Grey" a bit brighter? It looks really similar to "Black" while playing.
2. Tick Rate: '2' would fit perfectly the song, consider using it.

1. The settings are definitely not the appropriate ones. Try this: OD: '+2' ~ HP Drain: '+1' ~ AR: '-1' (Remember that it's not good at all to keep the settings at '0')
2. 02:37:279 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure if it's a good idea to place these 1/2 circles here. I think that a circle here: 02:37:279 - should be enough but if you want to keep the other beat too you should use a slider instead.
3. 02:48:874 (5) - Definitely not a good idea to place a Kick-Slider here, most of the rookies will expect 1 repeat only. Perhaps, remove 1 repeat and then move the slider 1/2 later? (e.g)
4. 03:11:696 (1) - I don't find this 5% section at the end of the slider really necessary, you should try with 20~30% and a soft-whistle.
5. I didn't see major problems here, good job!

1. Tick Rate: 0.5 is no longer allowed, thus you will need to use either '1' or '2'.
2. 00:01:574 - You should start the diff here to match the other diffs.
3. N-no Kiai?
4. 00:17:034 (2,3,4) - Due to the stack effect these objects are overlapping too much with the HP Bar. This can be easily fixed by moving the whole stack a few grids down, I strongly suggest to do it.
5. 01:16:481 (3) - ^
6. 01:41:144 (5,6,1) - I find this part a bit hard to follow, I think (6) would be way more intuitive if you move it to: 01:41:328- where the vocals are pretty clear.
7. 02:19:610 (9,1) - This pattern seemed a bit odd, it looked like 3 circles at first glance. Unstacking (1) would improve the readability a lot. Actually, it would be MUCH better if you replace those objects with a single slider.
8. 02:36:911 (5) - I found the "bulges" of the slider a bit hard to see, perhaps try something like this instead?
9. 02:42:064 (4) - Uhh fix this spacing, please?

1. I found the "ColourHax" in this diff a bit "random" like you were not following any pattern. I strongly suggest to either try to create a pattern or follow Cirno's/yznoob's one.
2. 00:22:187 (1) - I'd suggest making this spinner end 1/2 earlies, it would make the next circle easier to read and it sounds way better too~
3. 00:26:604 (1) - Move this slider some grids down so the last spinner hit-burst don't cover the repeat-arrows.
4. 01:13:905 - This break is way too short and unnecessary, remove it please.
5. 02:02:310 ~ 02:17:034 - Those claps on the "Blue Ticks" (1/4 divisor) do not sound good at all imo. I strongly suggest to remove them.
6. 02:22:739 - This one is not as bad as the last one but you should remove it anyways...
7. 03:11:512 (1) - I don't find this 5% section at the end of the slider really necessary, you should try with 20~30% and a soft-whistle.
8. I really liked most of the rhythms you used, keep it up!

1. I'd like to re-mark Tick Rate: '2' for this diff, it would make the slider-speed changes a bit easier to read.
2. 00:53:659 (1,2,3) - I wouldn't suggest using this kind of patterns, it seems really hard to read and it kinda kills the flow imo. You should try to re-arrange it.
3. 01:06:359 (2) - If you're going to use a slow-down for this "Ahhhhhh" you should use another one for the next one too, otherwise the pattern becomes quite disorienting.
4. 02:03:782 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as before.
5. 02:05:254 - These NC arrangements look really odd and confusing while playing, a simple pattern should be way better.
6. 02:14:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't like how the spacing changes a lot from circle to circle while all of them are 1/2 apart, I strongly suggest to try to make this spacing a bit easier to read.
7. I found many of the patterns here really nice while I found others rather confusing and hard to read. You should go through the diff and play-test the map many times to make sure that everything is readable and enjoyable for the players~

Gonzvlo wrote:

Hey, sorry for the delay... Never mind

[General]

1. Combo Colours: The "ColorHax" seems really nice but I think you should use the "Black" and "Grey" colours for this part: 02:02:310 - too. Also, perhaps make "Grey" a bit brighter? It looks really similar to "Black" while playing. used the monochrome colors for 02:02:310 -. The darker Grey has a Brightness of 102 and the lighter one has 200, which was almost twice as the darker one and was really close to 240, which is totally white. So I don't think the lighter one should be made any brighter.
2. Tick Rate: '2' would fit perfectly the song, consider using it.
   Hmm.. I don't really think so. A slider longer than 1/2 is used when 1/2 don't fit the song or the rhythm being followed/created. A tick rate of 2 nullifies all the efforts of plotting the rhythm, as it made anything equivalent to an endless stream of 1/2 circles. Besides, the tick hitsounds are a total horrid not only to me, but to many others as well. So, I'm not changing this at the moment..Thanks for understanding.

[Easy]

1. The settings are definitely not the appropriate ones. Try this: OD: '+2' ~ HP Drain: '+1' ~ AR: '-1' (Remember that it's not good at all to keep the settings at '0') ok
2. 02:37:279 (1,2,3) - I'm not sure if it's a good idea to place these 1/2 circles here. I think that a circle here: 02:37:279 - should be enough but if you want to keep the other beat too you should use a slider instead. I still think I should keep the other beat, so made a slider.
3. 02:48:874 (5) - Definitely not a good idea to place a Kick-Slider here, most of the rookies will expect 1 repeat only. Perhaps, remove 1 repeat and then move the slider 1/2 later? (e.g) I still wanted the clap hitsound, so I placed a circle at 02:48:874, and made the slider behave as you say.
4. 03:11:696 (1) - I don't find this 5% section at the end of the slider really necessary, you should try with 20~30% and a soft-whistle. I want the spinner to silent out because the song itself is "fading" (through the uses of Delay) out, and don't really have a emphasized finish sound. I tried a soft-whistle and it sounded a bit too much.
5. I didn't see major problems here, good job!

[Insane]

1. I'd like to re-mark Tick Rate: '2' for this diff, it would make the slider-speed changes a bit easier to read. The latter part is true for a small chunk of players in osu!. I would be more than glad to do this small favor if sliderticks only indicate speed and do not produce sounds. However as I said before, the tick sounds annoyed me, so I'm not sure about making it 2. Do you have a good solution to the hitsound problem?
2. 00:53:659 (1,2,3) - I wouldn't suggest using this kind of patterns, it seems really hard to read and it kinda kills the flow imo. You should try to re-arrange it. Hmm.. The 'back-and-forth' motion I used here can make the player go like 'bouncing back', releasing the energy stored from the previous pause and slow-down, thus enhancing the following flowing formation (2,3,1). This is repeatedly used in this map as you have already seen (the 'constant speed changes' as you mentioned), and is actually a design intended to express the 'feel' or 'emotions' of the music, not a way to frustrate players.
3. 01:06:359 (2) - If you're going to use a slow-down for this "Ahhhhhh" you should use another one for the next one too, otherwise the pattern becomes quite disorienting. As many already have mentioned before, I think making this 1.0x +1repeat instead of 0.5x would be much less disorienting for players.
4. 02:03:782 (1,2,3,4,5) - Same as before. I spread (2,4) out in a fan-like fashion so it should be easier to read now.
5. 02:05:254 - These NC arrangements look really odd and confusing while playing, a simple pattern should be way better. ok
6. 02:14:825 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I don't like how the spacing changes a lot from circle to circle while all of them are 1/2 apart, I strongly suggest to try to make this spacing a bit easier to read. Made (1,2,3) DS and only one jump exists on (3,4) now. I hope this is easier to read.
7. I found many of the patterns here really nice while I found others rather confusing and hard to read. You should go through the diff and play-test the map many times to make sure that everything is readable and enjoyable for the players~
   Well I think I have played this diff for at least, if not more than, 80PC during all the process. I constantly play-test when mapping, and I play-test for several times every time I'm checking a mod post, to catch the reasons behind mods and find out if I should change or not. I think the majority of this map is enjoyable as least for me and many modders/testplayers I found...

Okay, I find many thing in this mapset really enjoyable while there are others that I really dislike (like the constant slider-speed changes in [Insane]). Thus, I'll not mark this map with a star yet, I'll probably re-check this map eventually tho.

Good luck!

Leorda wrote:

NI HAO

Easy
00:16:297 (1) - Add finish at head slider?
00:24:764 (x) - Add note here for following instruments?
01:01:942 (x) - ^
ok, fixed those
01:02:310 (2) - Remove 1 repeating slider? maybe not
01:03:506 (1,1) - Is that necessary for having 2 spinner? guidelines say spinners can't be too long ._.
01:44:641 (3) - New combo for stanza? ok
02:06:359 (2) - Don't stack at tail slider, it could be confusing for beginners ok
02:48:874 (5) - Remove this, it's too difficult for beginners ok

yznoob's Normal
* AR +1? Your current approach rate is kinda slow +1
* Set the Audio-LeadIn to "1000" for make consistent on each diff done
* In Kiai #1, set the end kiai to 03:11:512 for make consistent on each diff ok

00:04:518 (7) - New combo?
00:05:991 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:07:463 (1) - This slider is touch the HP Bar
00:08:199 (2) - ^
00:20:715 (3) - ^
all fixed
00:22:923 (2) - Shorten to 00:23:291 for good rhythm? I think it's good as it is.
00:46:113 (1) - This object is touch the HP Bar
00:56:052 (4) - Same issue as 00:07:463 (1)
fixed the two
01:33:782 (2) - Replace this into one slider? And end at 01:33:966? ...maybe not
02:06:175 (2) - Same issue as 00:46:113 (1) fixed
02:59:733 (1) - 1/4 repeating slider confusing for beginners about when the slider is going to end why not just map with all 1/1s at the playfield center to please beginners

Insane
00:54:396 (3) - Not stack correctly with tail slider (look at gameplay) somehow tricked the system into displaying it correctly
01:05:623 ~ 01:12:248 - This part seems needs a clap hitsound.... maybe not... I guess
01:15:193 ~ 01:26:972 - Use a monochrome combo color for fit the song colored for verse seems sensible for me though
01:32:862 (1,2) - This stuff is makes players go confusing. Because this snap at white tick and 01:33:414 (3,4,5,6,7,8) is a 1/2 jump stream. I think the jump should be balanced made a less confusing variation
02:28:629 (3) - Not stack correctly with tail slider (look at gameplay) somehow tricked the system into displaying it correctly
02:52:187 (1) - Why new combo?
02:54:580 (1) - ^ Combo color showcase (in the combo color sequence shown before: (green -> grey -> light grey) -> (red -> grey -> light grey) -> (yellow -> grey -> light grey) )


Ok, sorry for long mod D:

Jacob wrote:

Random bubble mod

[General]

Good.

[Easy]

00:07:095 - Try a pattern like this: (flows better)
imo it flows fine as it is.

[yznoob's Normal]

yznoob? I think that a more appropriate title for this difficulty would be yangzd88's Normal.
yangzd88 credit all her guest diffs as yznoob except in http://osu.ppy.sh/s/19733 , and I respect how the guest name her diff.
00:28:077 - Because of the fact that all notes (previously) that had been under a slider were 1/2 beat apart, I also thought that this was 1/2 beat apart from the slider before it. Please fix this! I have provided a suggestion on what you could do.
00:40:592 - ^
I don't find problems with these sorry. Watch approach circles could you? If you don't know what approach circles are for go play tutorial and learn to play plz.

[JauiPlaY's Hard]

Good.

[Insane]

00:17:586 (2,3) - I see what you're getting at here, but I think stacking these would look much better. not better for me. If you are really for this, then go map your own version. Oh and I don't like plain nazi mods, just fyi.
1:10:316 - While playing this, I couldn't read and click the notes in time due to the fact that the approach circles somewhat blended in with the background. I'm not sure if this is the case for all people, but I'm just letting you know that this could be done better. Try re-arranging the combos a bit to make it that only ONE combo is used in this pattern. (I use no-video).
All maps that have video are supposed to be played with video. End of story.

Jacob wrote:

...you didn't have to be so rude. >_>

00:28:077 - Because of the fact that all notes (previously) that had been under a slider were 1/2 beat apart, I also thought that this was 1/2 beat apart from the slider before it. Please fix this! I have provided a suggestion on what you could do.
00:40:592 - ^
I don't find problems with these sorry. Watch approach circles could you? If you don't know what approach circles are for go play tutorial and learn to play plz.

Jacob wrote:

Look at it from an intermediate player's point of view. They may get confused by this. My suggestion was just a small change, and it wouldn't hurt anyone. It would most likely benefit the map. If you really don't want your bubble to be popped or you really don't agree with me, then that's okay.

Shiirn wrote:

The issues shouldn't cause too much grief since this will be looked at by a BAT tomorrow.

Beuchi-chan wrote:

Hi old bubble!

[General]
- I wonder why are you using grey/white, the video is very colorful 0.0 (and this doesn't seem to be like those wowaka songs?) The contrast in the video & music between sections made me do this. EDIT: I can change this if you insist, don't care anymore.

[Easy]
03:11:696 (1) - I think this spinner is a bit too short for an Easy >.< ok

[yznoob's Normal]
02:59:733 (1) - This slider is too short. Besides being under the end of the previous slider, the reverse arrow gets covered by the hitburst. http://ha.ppy.sh/ss/193 If you really want to have this slider here, consider adding a speedup just for this slider to make it longer. ok

[Insane]
- The slowdowns bother me a lot. Some of them are predictable but some of them aren't, you should increase the tickrate to 2. I've read what you've written in other posts asking for solutions, maybe look for custom hitsounds for ticks? I'm sure you'll find a fitting one! Maybe even the hitsounds you have right now may work. oh well I just set all diffs to 2 if that's what I have to do. Don't care about how it sounds anymore.

01:33:782 (5) - Add a New Combo here to mark the spacing/pattern change. It'll also make it more readable. ok
02:05:254 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - This is way too messy and VERY hard to read http://ha.ppy.sh/ss/194, try to rearrange this pattern please >.< ok

Pretty nice and fun map, popping for now though :c

Cirno wrote:

[General]
- I wonder why are you using grey/white, the video is very colorful 0.0 (and this doesn't seem to be like those wowaka songs?) The contrast in the video & music between sections made me do this. EDIT: I can change this if you insist, don't care anymore.

G V N 先 輩 大 勝 利
J C B 兄 貴 歓 喜
今 夜 は 最 高
墓 場 不 可 避

Garven wrote:

If you don't plan on doing anything, please don't waste the time of those that want to help you with your maps.

Garven wrote:

Where did I say to remap the entire map? You're blowing misinterpretations out of proportion.

Garven wrote:

What bugged me most was that those speed changes were used inconsistently. You slowed down during one part of a song and when that part of the song repeated, you didn't use it there. You used it in a different place.

Garven wrote:

The only purpose I see this giving is to confuse the player, not represent something from the music. THAT is why I don't like them and wouldn't put my name behind this map set for ranking.