Actually i checked it, its fine
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Fukuyama Yoshiki - Makka na Chikai
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Topic Starter
Timing and placement and just getting started, so I can make suggestions 
But the chorus of the song and I'd better put KIAITIME
I had better Distancesnap Soreto constant spacing with
Please luck
But the chorus of the song and I'd better put KIAITIME
I had better Distancesnap Soreto constant spacing with
Please luck
Topic Starter
Well i edited some more of it since I finally got some time!
I basically fixed some timing problems that I had noticed, and fixed some spacing issues as well. (For some of the spacing I had to rearrage the hit combos)... And then I added in some claps, whistles and finish's to various parts...
As for the Kiai...I have got to that part yet... but if someone could help me on that, thats would be great!
I basically fixed some timing problems that I had noticed, and fixed some spacing issues as well. (For some of the spacing I had to rearrage the hit combos)... And then I added in some claps, whistles and finish's to various parts...
As for the Kiai...I have got to that part yet... but if someone could help me on that, thats would be great!
Someone needs a new mp3? this mp3 looks like bad quality (and im not an audiophile to notice that)
Timing seems really off, however it's hard to time when i can barely hear the beat due to the mp3 itself... i recommend you get a better one.
orz ok i give up trying to time
Also source should be: Busou Renkin
Timing seems really off, however it's hard to time when i can barely hear the beat due to the mp3 itself... i recommend you get a better one.
orz ok i give up trying to time
Also source should be: Busou Renkin
Topic Starter
Thanks for the help...yea going over it again and again, i noticed my timing problems....but the mp3 that your talking about....sorry but no clue...the quality sounds fine on my computer....well thanks againSakura301 wrote:
Someone needs a new mp3? this mp3 looks like bad quality (and im not an audiophile to notice that)
Timing seems really off, however it's hard to time when i can barely hear the beat due to the mp3 itself... i recommend you get a better one.
orz ok i give up trying to time
Also source should be: Busou Renkin
(also i check out...and i did source it as Busou Renkin...donno what the problem is then)
I've been disappointed with other attempts at mapping this song, but from the difficulties I have tried so far (normal and easy), this one seems promising. The timing from what I could tell was pretty good. I am also not having any problems with the mp3's quality, it seems fine to me.
Prepare for a wall of all walls.
SPOILER
In General
Timing is different in all modes. Fix that before you try to fix the spacing. You don’t want to remap fixes because your BPM is wrong.
Also there are considerable amounts of unsnapped notes in your maps. Go through your maps and snap them to a set tick or they will wreak havoc on your map when you change the timing.
Tip: Check the aimod. File/Open aimod to see what is generally wrong with your map such as unsnapped notes and distance spacing issues. Use it. It is your friend.
Easy
00:29:439 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) – Distance snap these. There is no reason why they aren’t snapped. (Inconsistent spacing as well)
00:58:438 (3) – New Combo (The spacing changes)
01:00:022 (5) – New combo (For conformity)
01:03:272 (4,5,6) – Improper spacing. All the spacing needs to be consistent in a map, especially an easy mode. I’m not going to mention all the small snap infringement you have done, but I bet further modders will take note of it. However this one is more serious than the other minor ones. A newbie might miss this one because of the spacing.
This might be an alternative to it.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9532
01:06:355 (1) – Spinner should end at the following white tick. (01:07:658 -)
01:14:689 (5) – Easy fix. Move up one unit to conform with distance snap.
01:19:716 (5,6) – Move down 1 unit.
01:25:522 (1) – Spinner should end at the following white tick. (01:27:658 -)
Normal
00:01:161 (1) – Move to the following red tick. (00:01:186 -)
00:04:716 (4) – Move forward to the next tick. (00:04:734 -)
00:05:057 (1) – Move right and down 1 unit.
00:05:809 (2,1,2) – Move down 1 unit.
00:13:982 (1) – Move down 6 units.
00:20:433 (1,2,3) – Move these away from the previous combo. Do not put notes to close to each other. Use distance snap to make the maps. Make sure that the notes don’t protrude off the grid when you respace these notes.
00:27:637 (1) – Does this really have to be spaced farther than the snap? I feel it lines up better when you distance snap it correctly.
00:29:465 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Please move these away from the aforementioned note. Also consider making 2 a new combo if you don’t want to distance snap the notes fully when you respace them.
00:36:992 (1,2,3,4) – Spacing is inconsistent. You have two different timed note pairs sharing the same spacing. Come on this is basic spacing. It needs to be proportional.
00:48:068 (2) – Don’t hide this note under 1. Normally this would be fine to do, but when you put it so close to the top of the screen the approach circles are largely obscured making it like a ninja note. Space it out. There’s lots of room for it.
00:49:573 (1,2,3) – Spacing.
00:51:939 (1,2,3) - ^
Okay there are so many spacing inconsistencies that from here on out if you see notes consider them inconsistent and snap them.
00:57:100 (2,3) - Especially these. 1/6th notes shouldn’t be spaced so far apart. Also you shouldn’t be using 1/6th notes in a normal anyways. I suggest remapping with a repeat slider. You’ll figure something out.
01:06:670 (2) – Start this on the previous white tick. (01:06:638 -)
01:07:422 (4,5) – Horrible spacing. >.<
01:28:390 (1,2) – This is a boring way to end the map. Maybe you should try to curve the slider in an interesting pattern.
Hard
Choose one distance snap for most of the map. The intro is much widely spaced than the rest of the map. My suggestion is that you use this higher snap for the whole map and get rid of the 0.8 snap that you used for Easy and Normal.
Lower the drain on hard. The spacing between the notes just kills anyone who isn’t hitting the notes perfect.
It would be ideal if you centered the entire intro, but that would require moving a lot of notes down 1 unit.
00:01:200 (1) – Move left 1 unit.
00:05:520 (5,6) – Spacing is too short.
00:10:720 (5,6,1) – Inconsistent spacing
00:14:560 (5,1,2,3,4) - ^ Choose one way to space most of the map and only deviate from it for jumps. Keep the notes consistent so that people will know how to hit the note.
00:16:720 (4,1,2,3) – Turn 4 into part of the purple combo.
00:20:480 (1,2,3,4) –I don’t know about this. It doesn’t look pretty. Maybe 3 and 4 can be moved 1 unit to the left so that it looks more symmetrical.
00:32:240 (1,2,3,4) – Horrid spacing. The spacing should not deviate when the pattern of notes does not change.
00:36:320 (4,1,2) – Suggestion: Do not map multiple combos in a single stack. It gets confusing when people want to tag team or coop play the map. A map should convenience all forms of play. If you have to separate these beats from the rest, remove them from the stack. (Make sure it plays well if you do this.)
00:37:680 (3) – I’m not sure this fits the songs design. It’s not a wrong choice, but it’s still adding three noise points for 2 sounds. The third sound actually appears in the tick following the reverse slider. You don’t have to fix it unless someone else mentions it.
00:39:760 (2) – Move up 1 unit
00:41:840 (3,4,5,1,2) – Move these away from the previous notes. It’s awkward to have such a spacing. Also there’s no reason to wildly change the combo like that. I suggest that you conform it to the individual patterns or make them all the same combo. (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) include 00:42:800 (3) – as well for the eighth note in the combo.
00:43:600 (2,3,4,5) – Distance snap these.
00:46:720 (1,2,3,4) – Ugly placement of the notes. Distance them properly so they look nice.
00:47:520 (1,2,3) – Move these down and right 1 unit.
00:51:840 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) – Move these away from the previous combo. Maybe you could rotate these notes on their side.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9598
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9599
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9600
Other things to note in this part of the map
00:52:880 (1,2,3) – These need to be spaced the same.
00:57:120 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) – Rotate these as well to position them in the right place for the previous set of notes.
00:58:720 (3,4) – These can’t be spaced like this. Try stacking them. The overall appearance of the notes should look something like this.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9605
00:59:200 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) – Take these notes and rotate them a couple times and then flip them vertically to get this.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9603
01:02:400 (1,2,3,4) – Move these around 16 units to the right.
01:02:720 (2,3) – Should be farther apart.
01:03:760 (4,1,2,3,4) – Remap in such a way that it doesn’t affect the spacing of the notes after it.
01:06:640 (2,3,4,1,2,3) – Minor snap adjustments. It’s better to fix these.
01:18:640 (1) – Down 2 units.
01:27:520 (4,1) – I have two problems with this. 4 should be a new combo and 1 starts in the same spot on the timeline as the end of 4.
Insane
00:14:240 (4,5,6) – Bad spacing. 4 and 5 should not be spaced the same as 5 and 6.
00:15:280 (1,2,3) – More bad spacing.
00:19:200 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Same
00:21:280 (3) – Awkward spacing. Will throw people off at those speeds.
00:21:920 (1,2,3,4) – Unequal spacing. (I think by now you have noticed a pattern)
00:26:080 (1,2,3) – Spacing. 2 and 3 are timed further apart than 1 and 2 so why is the gap smaller?
00:31:280 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – Better to just distance space these. It is awful spacing. A remap will probably be required.
00:36:560 (1,2,3,4) – Make these jumps equal? It might be alright.
00:38:960 (3,4,5,6) – Make these notes straighter.
They should look like this.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9612
00:46:720 (1,2,3,4,5) – Move down 1 unit.
00:48:000 (8,1,2) – Distance snap these properly.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9613
00:48:960 (3) – Try putting 3 here so that 3,4,5 make a triangle.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9614
00:54:960 (2) – Move left 2 units and down 1 unit.
00:58:800 (1,2,3) – Spacing. 1 and 2 should not be closer together than 2 and 3.
01:18:720 (1,2) – Distance space them.
Timing is different in all modes. Fix that before you try to fix the spacing. You don’t want to remap fixes because your BPM is wrong.
Also there are considerable amounts of unsnapped notes in your maps. Go through your maps and snap them to a set tick or they will wreak havoc on your map when you change the timing.
Tip: Check the aimod. File/Open aimod to see what is generally wrong with your map such as unsnapped notes and distance spacing issues. Use it. It is your friend.
Easy
00:29:439 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) – Distance snap these. There is no reason why they aren’t snapped. (Inconsistent spacing as well)
00:58:438 (3) – New Combo (The spacing changes)
01:00:022 (5) – New combo (For conformity)
01:03:272 (4,5,6) – Improper spacing. All the spacing needs to be consistent in a map, especially an easy mode. I’m not going to mention all the small snap infringement you have done, but I bet further modders will take note of it. However this one is more serious than the other minor ones. A newbie might miss this one because of the spacing.
This might be an alternative to it.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9532
01:06:355 (1) – Spinner should end at the following white tick. (01:07:658 -)
01:14:689 (5) – Easy fix. Move up one unit to conform with distance snap.
01:19:716 (5,6) – Move down 1 unit.
01:25:522 (1) – Spinner should end at the following white tick. (01:27:658 -)
Normal
00:01:161 (1) – Move to the following red tick. (00:01:186 -)
00:04:716 (4) – Move forward to the next tick. (00:04:734 -)
00:05:057 (1) – Move right and down 1 unit.
00:05:809 (2,1,2) – Move down 1 unit.
00:13:982 (1) – Move down 6 units.
00:20:433 (1,2,3) – Move these away from the previous combo. Do not put notes to close to each other. Use distance snap to make the maps. Make sure that the notes don’t protrude off the grid when you respace these notes.
00:27:637 (1) – Does this really have to be spaced farther than the snap? I feel it lines up better when you distance snap it correctly.
00:29:465 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Please move these away from the aforementioned note. Also consider making 2 a new combo if you don’t want to distance snap the notes fully when you respace them.
00:36:992 (1,2,3,4) – Spacing is inconsistent. You have two different timed note pairs sharing the same spacing. Come on this is basic spacing. It needs to be proportional.
00:48:068 (2) – Don’t hide this note under 1. Normally this would be fine to do, but when you put it so close to the top of the screen the approach circles are largely obscured making it like a ninja note. Space it out. There’s lots of room for it.
00:49:573 (1,2,3) – Spacing.
00:51:939 (1,2,3) - ^
Okay there are so many spacing inconsistencies that from here on out if you see notes consider them inconsistent and snap them.
00:57:100 (2,3) - Especially these. 1/6th notes shouldn’t be spaced so far apart. Also you shouldn’t be using 1/6th notes in a normal anyways. I suggest remapping with a repeat slider. You’ll figure something out.
01:06:670 (2) – Start this on the previous white tick. (01:06:638 -)
01:07:422 (4,5) – Horrible spacing. >.<
01:28:390 (1,2) – This is a boring way to end the map. Maybe you should try to curve the slider in an interesting pattern.
Hard
Choose one distance snap for most of the map. The intro is much widely spaced than the rest of the map. My suggestion is that you use this higher snap for the whole map and get rid of the 0.8 snap that you used for Easy and Normal.
Lower the drain on hard. The spacing between the notes just kills anyone who isn’t hitting the notes perfect.
It would be ideal if you centered the entire intro, but that would require moving a lot of notes down 1 unit.
00:01:200 (1) – Move left 1 unit.
00:05:520 (5,6) – Spacing is too short.
00:10:720 (5,6,1) – Inconsistent spacing
00:14:560 (5,1,2,3,4) - ^ Choose one way to space most of the map and only deviate from it for jumps. Keep the notes consistent so that people will know how to hit the note.
00:16:720 (4,1,2,3) – Turn 4 into part of the purple combo.
00:20:480 (1,2,3,4) –I don’t know about this. It doesn’t look pretty. Maybe 3 and 4 can be moved 1 unit to the left so that it looks more symmetrical.
00:32:240 (1,2,3,4) – Horrid spacing. The spacing should not deviate when the pattern of notes does not change.
00:36:320 (4,1,2) – Suggestion: Do not map multiple combos in a single stack. It gets confusing when people want to tag team or coop play the map. A map should convenience all forms of play. If you have to separate these beats from the rest, remove them from the stack. (Make sure it plays well if you do this.)
00:37:680 (3) – I’m not sure this fits the songs design. It’s not a wrong choice, but it’s still adding three noise points for 2 sounds. The third sound actually appears in the tick following the reverse slider. You don’t have to fix it unless someone else mentions it.
00:39:760 (2) – Move up 1 unit
00:41:840 (3,4,5,1,2) – Move these away from the previous notes. It’s awkward to have such a spacing. Also there’s no reason to wildly change the combo like that. I suggest that you conform it to the individual patterns or make them all the same combo. (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) include 00:42:800 (3) – as well for the eighth note in the combo.
00:43:600 (2,3,4,5) – Distance snap these.
00:46:720 (1,2,3,4) – Ugly placement of the notes. Distance them properly so they look nice.
00:47:520 (1,2,3) – Move these down and right 1 unit.
00:51:840 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) – Move these away from the previous combo. Maybe you could rotate these notes on their side.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9598
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9599
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9600
Other things to note in this part of the map
00:52:880 (1,2,3) – These need to be spaced the same.
00:57:120 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) – Rotate these as well to position them in the right place for the previous set of notes.
00:58:720 (3,4) – These can’t be spaced like this. Try stacking them. The overall appearance of the notes should look something like this.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9605
00:59:200 (5,1,2,3,4,5,6) – Take these notes and rotate them a couple times and then flip them vertically to get this.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9603
01:02:400 (1,2,3,4) – Move these around 16 units to the right.
01:02:720 (2,3) – Should be farther apart.
01:03:760 (4,1,2,3,4) – Remap in such a way that it doesn’t affect the spacing of the notes after it.
01:06:640 (2,3,4,1,2,3) – Minor snap adjustments. It’s better to fix these.
01:18:640 (1) – Down 2 units.
01:27:520 (4,1) – I have two problems with this. 4 should be a new combo and 1 starts in the same spot on the timeline as the end of 4.
Insane
00:14:240 (4,5,6) – Bad spacing. 4 and 5 should not be spaced the same as 5 and 6.
00:15:280 (1,2,3) – More bad spacing.
00:19:200 (1,2,3,4) - ^ Same
00:21:280 (3) – Awkward spacing. Will throw people off at those speeds.
00:21:920 (1,2,3,4) – Unequal spacing. (I think by now you have noticed a pattern)
00:26:080 (1,2,3) – Spacing. 2 and 3 are timed further apart than 1 and 2 so why is the gap smaller?
00:31:280 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) – Better to just distance space these. It is awful spacing. A remap will probably be required.
00:36:560 (1,2,3,4) – Make these jumps equal? It might be alright.
00:38:960 (3,4,5,6) – Make these notes straighter.
They should look like this.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9612
00:46:720 (1,2,3,4,5) – Move down 1 unit.
00:48:000 (8,1,2) – Distance snap these properly.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9613
00:48:960 (3) – Try putting 3 here so that 3,4,5 make a triangle.
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9614
00:54:960 (2) – Move left 2 units and down 1 unit.
00:58:800 (1,2,3) – Spacing. 1 and 2 should not be closer together than 2 and 3.
01:18:720 (1,2) – Distance space them.
Hey~
[General]
- Source should be "Busou Renkin"
- mp3 sounds slightly noisy
- I don't know much about timming, but bpm should be 118.07
[Easy]
No problem's found, but AIMod detects many errors
[Normal]
01:04:949 (4) - Move to 01:04:979
[Hard]
00:49:040 (3) - Move that slider to 00:48:960
[Insane]
No problem's found, but AIMod detects many errors
That's it, I like the map... I give you an star
[General]
- Source should be "Busou Renkin"
- mp3 sounds slightly noisy
- I don't know much about timming, but bpm should be 118.07
[Easy]
No problem's found, but AIMod detects many errors
[Normal]
01:04:949 (4) - Move to 01:04:979
[Hard]
00:49:040 (3) - Move that slider to 00:48:960
[Insane]
No problem's found, but AIMod detects many errors
That's it, I like the map... I give you an star
maybe you should try using bpm 92.51 or185.02 if you want it faster. Most notes would end up on blue ticks but they'll sound better
btw
Hard
spacing 00:20:640
spacing 00:24:960
spacing 00:25:520
spacing 00:26:080
spacing 00:31:280
extend to other red tick 00:37:680
I'll let this one slide just for symmetry 01:12:080
This one too 01:17:360
ok what? spacing 01:22:560
spacing 01:25:680
other that spacing, most beats are kinda on time star
just make those changes for now
btw
Hard
spacing 00:20:640
spacing 00:24:960
spacing 00:25:520
spacing 00:26:080
spacing 00:31:280
extend to other red tick 00:37:680
I'll let this one slide just for symmetry 01:12:080
This one too 01:17:360
ok what? spacing 01:22:560
spacing 01:25:680
other that spacing, most beats are kinda on time star
just make those changes for nowSigh ok Insane now
wth NOTES
i think ill leave that mess alone
anyway
00:05:120 delete this note
00:08:560 delete this note
00:17:040 spacing
00:18:640 extend to other red tick in 1/6, change spacing from this
00:20:800 change to a hit not a slide
00:24:240 extend to other red tick in 1/6, change spacing from this
00:34:080 add a note here (as if this map needs any more)
00:41:360 - 00:44:400 SPACING
00:47:680 spacing
00:51:120 add a note
00:51:600 add a note
00:56:320 '' '' ''
00:56:800 '' '' ''
01:02:000 '' '' ''
01:06:560 move forward 1/6
01:06:880 move forward 1/6
01:07:040 move forward 1/6
01:08:480 add a note
01:08:800 add a note
01:09:120 add a note
01:27:440 - 01:28:560 highlight group and press new combo(just for the effect~ you don't have to)
Overall
spacing needs to be fixed,
but it is insane...
so ill allow the few demon jumps I left
otherwise take out notes you see as
wth NOTES
i think ill leave that mess alone
anyway
00:05:120 delete this note
00:08:560 delete this note
00:17:040 spacing
00:18:640 extend to other red tick in 1/6, change spacing from this
00:20:800 change to a hit not a slide
00:24:240 extend to other red tick in 1/6, change spacing from this
00:34:080 add a note here (as if this map needs any more)
00:41:360 - 00:44:400 SPACING
00:47:680 spacing
00:51:120 add a note
00:51:600 add a note
00:56:320 '' '' ''
00:56:800 '' '' ''
01:02:000 '' '' ''
01:06:560 move forward 1/6
01:06:880 move forward 1/6
01:07:040 move forward 1/6
01:08:480 add a note
01:08:800 add a note
01:09:120 add a note
01:27:440 - 01:28:560 highlight group and press new combo(just for the effect~ you don't have to)
Overall
spacing needs to be fixed,
but it is insane...
so ill allow the few demon jumps I left
otherwise take out notes you see as
unnecessary
hey xD
nice map, but some mod:
Offset=1.869
BPM=118,05 I think
And is better if you use 1/2 beat divisor for the easy diffs and 1/4 or 1/8 for the most difficult ones
;D
And don't forget selecting a preview point for all the diffs
Star+
nice map, but some mod:
Offset=1.869
BPM=118,05 I think
And is better if you use 1/2 beat divisor for the easy diffs and 1/4 or 1/8 for the most difficult ones
;D
And don't forget selecting a preview point for all the diffs
Star+
I clicked a random map in #modreqs. Congratulations, you've been selected!
I'm going to say something up front. This map needs a lot of work. Most of my comments are going to be more generalized in nature since you're the mapper here, not me.
General
Timing is definitely off. Do this for all difficulties:
BPM: 185.00
Offset: 837
Adjust slider speed downard some since the BPM just got a big boost. Change to 1/4 and resnap everything, then go manually redo things that broke because of this resnap (there will be a lot of them). You shouldn't need to use 1/6 divisor anymore with this new BPM. In fact, you can do most editing in 1/2.
Add hitsounds where appropriate. I don't remember hearing many, if any, while playing. You won't get this map ranked without them.
Use inherited timing when setting up the kiai section. Hell, use inherited timing in general. The only times you shouldn't use it are when the BPM is changing by some factor that isn't 0.5 or 2.
Easy
Waaaaaay too many of those little sliders that bounce back and forth. Especially for an easy map. It feels like you took a higher difficulty and replaced streams with sliders of equal length. I'd do away with most of these and replace them with simple beat patterns. You can use a slider tick rate of 2 to get a similar effect.
More slider talk: use some sliders that aren't just straight lines. Maps with tons of straight lines, especially ones that only go straight up/down or left/right along the grid, are pretty boring to look at.
Use distance snap. It's okay to have a few jumps here and there if the map really calls for it, but generally, easy maps should have really simple and consistent spacing.
The overall difficulty could stand to be kicked up a notch. It's too low for your beat density. It makes the map hard to read.
I would start the ending slider at 01:27:432 to catch that sick guitar riff.
Other Difficulties
Same stuff as easy about the sliders. Vary it up some. The diagonal lines and that wavy slider on Normal are a good start. Refine the difficulty settings once you're done mapping. Overall Difficulty is a tool to make a map playable first and a tool to make it difficult second.
Conclusion
In the future, don't get started mapping until you have the timing correct. Otherwise you set yourself up a bunch of lame resnap work.
After you give the map a thorough layer of polish, feel free to PM me for a remod. I'll star the map then, too.
also let me know if you want a guest difficulty
(edit: comment about kiai section)
I'm going to say something up front. This map needs a lot of work. Most of my comments are going to be more generalized in nature since you're the mapper here, not me.
General
Timing is definitely off. Do this for all difficulties:
BPM: 185.00
Offset: 837
Adjust slider speed downard some since the BPM just got a big boost. Change to 1/4 and resnap everything, then go manually redo things that broke because of this resnap (there will be a lot of them). You shouldn't need to use 1/6 divisor anymore with this new BPM. In fact, you can do most editing in 1/2.
Add hitsounds where appropriate. I don't remember hearing many, if any, while playing. You won't get this map ranked without them.
Use inherited timing when setting up the kiai section. Hell, use inherited timing in general. The only times you shouldn't use it are when the BPM is changing by some factor that isn't 0.5 or 2.
Easy
Waaaaaay too many of those little sliders that bounce back and forth. Especially for an easy map. It feels like you took a higher difficulty and replaced streams with sliders of equal length. I'd do away with most of these and replace them with simple beat patterns. You can use a slider tick rate of 2 to get a similar effect.
More slider talk: use some sliders that aren't just straight lines. Maps with tons of straight lines, especially ones that only go straight up/down or left/right along the grid, are pretty boring to look at.
Use distance snap. It's okay to have a few jumps here and there if the map really calls for it, but generally, easy maps should have really simple and consistent spacing.
The overall difficulty could stand to be kicked up a notch. It's too low for your beat density. It makes the map hard to read.
I would start the ending slider at 01:27:432 to catch that sick guitar riff.
Other Difficulties
Same stuff as easy about the sliders. Vary it up some. The diagonal lines and that wavy slider on Normal are a good start. Refine the difficulty settings once you're done mapping. Overall Difficulty is a tool to make a map playable first and a tool to make it difficult second.
Conclusion
In the future, don't get started mapping until you have the timing correct. Otherwise you set yourself up a bunch of lame resnap work.
After you give the map a thorough layer of polish, feel free to PM me for a remod. I'll star the map then, too.
also let me know if you want a guest difficulty
(edit: comment about kiai section)
And I'm back.
All Difficulties
Set divisor to 1/4, then timing > resnap all notes. You have a few that are slightly unsnapped here and there and this would be the best way to fix them all. Double-check to make sure nothing sounds off after doing this.
A few sliders end earlier than they maybe should but it's not a big deal. Comb through and change them or don't. It's up to you.
You'll notice in the following comments that I sometimes mention moving things 1/2 beat over or something. There are probably a few of these I missed. I don't comb through things through the editor that much when I mod. If I missed any, I'm sure you can find them easily by playing the map a few more times.
01:30:026 (x) - A little odd that the little 4-hit drumroll here isn't mapped. Maybe continue the ending slider or add a bouncing slider or a stack or something.
Easy
00:44:272 (1) - move a beat later, then end 1/2 beat sooner.
00:49:809 (1,2,3) - might trip new players up? Moving 3 left of 2 would be enough.
00:55:439 (2,3) - move these slightly right on the timeline so they land on the red lines.
01:06:674 (1) - move 1 beat later, then move the endpoint slightly left to the white line.
Normal
00:44:272 (1) - move a beat later, then end 1/2 beat sooner. Just like on Easy.
Hard
00:05:864 (6) - move 1/4 beat earlier.
00:26:053 (1,2) - move these two right on the timeline to the next white lines.
00:37:647 (3) - sounds a little out of place, I dunno.
Insane
Some might complain that this is overmapped. I like it though. "Your Mileage May Vary"
00:14:051 (2) - This stack (and others like it) seem a little out of place. They're not really problems but I can't say they won't be brought up in any future mod posts you might receive.
00:20:864 (8) - move 1/4 beat later.
00:21:269 (9) - end 1/4 beat later.
^ there are quite a few more like these. I'm not going to go find every one of them for you, though.
01:27:433 (1) - consider removing some of the new combo markers from this stack. that thing will be a little annoying to play in tag coop. not that anyone has to map with coop in mind, but...
Conclusion
What you have now is an ENORMOUS improvement over what you had just a couple days ago when I last modded this. Well done. You'll only get better from here.
Here's a star. You earned it.
All Difficulties
Set divisor to 1/4, then timing > resnap all notes. You have a few that are slightly unsnapped here and there and this would be the best way to fix them all. Double-check to make sure nothing sounds off after doing this.
A few sliders end earlier than they maybe should but it's not a big deal. Comb through and change them or don't. It's up to you.
You'll notice in the following comments that I sometimes mention moving things 1/2 beat over or something. There are probably a few of these I missed. I don't comb through things through the editor that much when I mod. If I missed any, I'm sure you can find them easily by playing the map a few more times.
01:30:026 (x) - A little odd that the little 4-hit drumroll here isn't mapped. Maybe continue the ending slider or add a bouncing slider or a stack or something.
Easy
00:44:272 (1) - move a beat later, then end 1/2 beat sooner.
00:49:809 (1,2,3) - might trip new players up? Moving 3 left of 2 would be enough.
00:55:439 (2,3) - move these slightly right on the timeline so they land on the red lines.
01:06:674 (1) - move 1 beat later, then move the endpoint slightly left to the white line.
Normal
00:44:272 (1) - move a beat later, then end 1/2 beat sooner. Just like on Easy.
Hard
00:05:864 (6) - move 1/4 beat earlier.
00:26:053 (1,2) - move these two right on the timeline to the next white lines.
00:37:647 (3) - sounds a little out of place, I dunno.
Insane
Some might complain that this is overmapped. I like it though. "Your Mileage May Vary"
00:14:051 (2) - This stack (and others like it) seem a little out of place. They're not really problems but I can't say they won't be brought up in any future mod posts you might receive.
00:20:864 (8) - move 1/4 beat later.
00:21:269 (9) - end 1/4 beat later.
^ there are quite a few more like these. I'm not going to go find every one of them for you, though.
01:27:433 (1) - consider removing some of the new combo markers from this stack. that thing will be a little annoying to play in tag coop. not that anyone has to map with coop in mind, but...
Conclusion
What you have now is an ENORMOUS improvement over what you had just a couple days ago when I last modded this. Well done. You'll only get better from here.
Here's a star. You earned it.
to change absolutely
not great, to change if possible
suggestions
Title should be Makka na Chikai (TV size).
Easy :
Resnap all notes.
Normal :
00:01:161 (1) - Remove the Whistle hitsound.
00:19:647 - Add a note.
00:46:728 (1) - Remove the Finish hitsound.
00:47:539 (1,2) - Remove the Finish hitsound.
00:48:999 (4) - Remove the Finish hitsound.
00:54:674 (2) - Second note should be here : 00:54:593 -
Hard :
There are too many stacked notes, you should consider finding patterns.
00:01:161 (1) - Remove the Whistle hitsound.
00:35:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Remove one of the two hitsounds, this is way too noisy.
00:37:647 (3) - This one is too fast. Should be two ticks separating the beats.
00:41:864 (1,2,3,4,5) - Remove one of the hitsounds, this is way too noisy.
Insane :
Notes everywhere ._. I suck at insane maps, so I'll just say nothing. Though, there are a lot of streams, remove the hitsounds on them and try adding some whistles/claps for taiko players :p
not great, to change if possible
suggestions
Title should be Makka na Chikai (TV size).
Easy :
Resnap all notes.
Normal :
00:01:161 (1) - Remove the Whistle hitsound.
00:19:647 - Add a note.
00:46:728 (1) - Remove the Finish hitsound.
00:47:539 (1,2) - Remove the Finish hitsound.
00:48:999 (4) - Remove the Finish hitsound.
00:54:674 (2) - Second note should be here : 00:54:593 -
Hard :
There are too many stacked notes, you should consider finding patterns.
00:01:161 (1) - Remove the Whistle hitsound.
00:35:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Remove one of the two hitsounds, this is way too noisy.
00:37:647 (3) - This one is too fast. Should be two ticks separating the beats.
00:41:864 (1,2,3,4,5) - Remove one of the hitsounds, this is way too noisy.
Insane :
Notes everywhere ._. I suck at insane maps, so I'll just say nothing. Though, there are a lot of streams, remove the hitsounds on them and try adding some whistles/claps for taiko players :p
Topic Starter
Done, Thanks Odaril
(although chaning the title caused a little problem... but it was fixed )
(although chaning the title caused a little problem...
but it was fixed )In-game Modding @ modReqs.
Fixed the miscellaneous problems with difficulties Normal to Insane.
Good song, simple but fun map.
Fixed the miscellaneous problems with difficulties Normal to Insane.
Good song, simple but fun map.
Before I start, I'd like to give you a star ~ This is one of my favorite anime openings and you handled it very well!
Easy:
Just a preference but I like the circles to be large for this one.
The slider speed is far too fast, especially for easy. Try lowering it down to 0.80 and resnap the notes.
I think the spinner beginning at 00:44:215 should last until 00:45:916.
The spinner beginning at 01:06:350 should last until 01:08:721.
Normal:
Watch the spacing on this one. The notes are too far apart, especially at the beginning.
The slider speed is way too fast.
The slider beginning at 00:10:242 should last until 00:10:983.
The note right after that at 00:11:053 needs to be moved closer to the slider.
I don't like that cluster of single notes beginning at 00:16:728... it doesn't seem fitting for a normal level.
Easy:
Just a preference but I like the circles to be large for this one.
The slider speed is far too fast, especially for easy. Try lowering it down to 0.80 and resnap the notes.
I think the spinner beginning at 00:44:215 should last until 00:45:916.
The spinner beginning at 01:06:350 should last until 01:08:721.
Normal:
Watch the spacing on this one. The notes are too far apart, especially at the beginning.
The slider speed is way too fast.
The slider beginning at 00:10:242 should last until 00:10:983.
The note right after that at 00:11:053 needs to be moved closer to the slider.
I don't like that cluster of single notes beginning at 00:16:728... it doesn't seem fitting for a normal level.
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.
Easy:
That's a Normal diff. It has too many notes on half ticks and too many non-simple rythms, even if you follow the vocals.
I think you should re-map it with simple rythms.
Normal:
This feels like a Hard for me... ._.
00:01:161 (1) - Now that's a retarded beginning for a Normal diff. Sliders are too fast.
01:00:593 (2) - UNSNAPPED !
00:05:053 (1) - Don't use such weird-shaped sliders in a Normal diff... Plus they're really ugly.
00:13:972 (1) - This one makes no sense. You've been following the vocals so far, why would add notes here when it's not needed ?
00:20:458 (1) - ^
00:54:350 (1,2,3) - Turn them into one repeat slider.
01:10:891 (1,2) - hitsounds ç_ç also make them one repeat slider. Same for the next ones.
01:30:026 (3) - For a retarded beginning, a retarded end, that's some form of logic.
Hard:
Doesn't have a background.
00:15:760 (2) - UNSNAPPED !
00:22:238 (3) - ^
00:22:398 (4) - ^
Insane:
> 1/6 snap divisor with BPM 185 and three other diffs mapped with 1/4
> slider velocity 2,60
> 83 unspanned objects
ç_ç...
Also, it has no background.
Resnap all notes and reduce slider velocity, and re-map with 1/4 snap divisor (unless the 1/6 was an error when you saved)
Overall, this map still needs a lot of work, especially with the hitsounds that are way too noisy... But some patterns are nice to play and you have some good ideas. Keep trying and think of every mistake as a lesson =o
Tell me when you have fixed all that, I want to recheck this.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.
Easy:
That's a Normal diff. It has too many notes on half ticks and too many non-simple rythms, even if you follow the vocals.
I think you should re-map it with simple rythms.
Normal:
This feels like a Hard for me... ._.
00:01:161 (1) - Now that's a retarded beginning for a Normal diff. Sliders are too fast.
01:00:593 (2) - UNSNAPPED !
00:05:053 (1) - Don't use such weird-shaped sliders in a Normal diff... Plus they're really ugly.
00:13:972 (1) - This one makes no sense. You've been following the vocals so far, why would add notes here when it's not needed ?
00:20:458 (1) - ^
00:54:350 (1,2,3) - Turn them into one repeat slider.
01:10:891 (1,2) - hitsounds ç_ç also make them one repeat slider. Same for the next ones.
01:30:026 (3) - For a retarded beginning, a retarded end, that's some form of logic.
Hard:
Doesn't have a background.
00:15:760 (2) - UNSNAPPED !
00:22:238 (3) - ^
00:22:398 (4) - ^
Insane:
> 1/6 snap divisor with BPM 185 and three other diffs mapped with 1/4
> slider velocity 2,60
> 83 unspanned objects
ç_ç...
Also, it has no background.
Resnap all notes and reduce slider velocity, and re-map with 1/4 snap divisor (unless the 1/6 was an error when you saved)
Overall, this map still needs a lot of work, especially with the hitsounds that are way too noisy... But some patterns are nice to play and you have some good ideas. Keep trying and think of every mistake as a lesson =o
Tell me when you have fixed all that, I want to recheck this.
star~ :3
Topic Starter
Easy:
That's a Normal diff. It has too many notes on half ticks and too many non-simple rythms, even if you follow the vocals.
I think you should re-map it with simple rythms. Fixed the half note problems...and i changed some notes to make it easier...but i think that how it follows the vocals is fine.
Normal:
This feels like a Hard for me... ._.
00:01:161 (1) - Now that's a retarded beginning for a Normal diff. Sliders are too fast.
01:00:593 (2) - UNSNAPPED ! Fixed.
[/they're really ugly. There different...
00:13:972 (1) - This one makes no sense. You've been following the vocals so far, why would add notes here when it's not needed ?
00:20:458 (1) - ^[/color] This is fine. It does go with the vocals.
00:54:350 (1,2,3) - Turn them into one repeat slider.
01:10:891 (1,2) - hitsounds ç_ç also make them one repeat slider. Same for the next ones.
01:30:026 (3) - For a retarded beginning, a retarded end, that's some form of logic. It catches the ending drums...Its fine..
Hard:
Doesn't have a background. Yes it does...?
00:15:760 (2) - UNSNAPPED !
00:22:238 (3) - ^
00:22:398 (4) - ^
Fixed.
Insane:
> 1/6 snap divisor with BPM 185 and three other diffs mapped with 1/4
> slider velocity 2,60
> 83 unspanned objects Fixed.
ç_ç...
Also, it has no background.There should be... >.>
Resnap all notes and reduce slider velocity, and re-map with 1/4 snap divisor (unless the 1/6 was an error when you saved) I thought I did have it on 1/4 ...
Fixed.
[/quote]
Thanks.
That's a Normal diff. It has too many notes on half ticks and too many non-simple rythms, even if you follow the vocals.
I think you should re-map it with simple rythms. Fixed the half note problems...and i changed some notes to make it easier...but i think that how it follows the vocals is fine.
Normal:
This feels like a Hard for me... ._.
00:01:161 (1) - Now that's a retarded beginning for a Normal diff. Sliders are too fast.
01:00:593 (2) - UNSNAPPED ! Fixed.
[/they're really ugly. There different...
00:13:972 (1) - This one makes no sense. You've been following the vocals so far, why would add notes here when it's not needed ?
00:20:458 (1) - ^[/color] This is fine. It does go with the vocals.
00:54:350 (1,2,3) - Turn them into one repeat slider.
01:10:891 (1,2) - hitsounds ç_ç also make them one repeat slider. Same for the next ones.
01:30:026 (3) - For a retarded beginning, a retarded end, that's some form of logic. It catches the ending drums...Its fine..
Hard:
Doesn't have a background. Yes it does...?
00:15:760 (2) - UNSNAPPED !
00:22:238 (3) - ^
00:22:398 (4) - ^
Fixed.
Insane:
> 1/6 snap divisor with BPM 185 and three other diffs mapped with 1/4
> slider velocity 2,60
> 83 unspanned objects Fixed.
ç_ç...
Also, it has no background.There should be... >.>
Resnap all notes and reduce slider velocity, and re-map with 1/4 snap divisor (unless the 1/6 was an error when you saved) I thought I did have it on 1/4 ...
Fixed.
[/quote]
Thanks.
Hi,
[easy]
00:11:539 (1) - end at 00:13:323 or 00:13:485 ?
00:26:468 (2) - unsnapped
00:29:458 (1,2) - move forward 1/4 tick so there on red ticks
00:44:215 (1) - move forward 1/4 tick so it starts/ends on white ticks
01:12:107 (2) - ^
[normal]
00:44:215 (1) - start at 00:44:296 and end at 00:45:918 ?
[hard]
00:35:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe do something like this?
01:08:458 (x) - add something like this?
[insane]
00:18:674 (5) - new combo?
00:19:161 (1) - if you do ^ no new combo?
00:23:782 (5) - start at 00:23:864 and end at the same time, and new combo?
00:24:431 (1) - start at 00:24:350 and end at the same (and if you do the new combo on ^, no new combo?)
00:29:458 (1) - move to 00:29:539 ?
00:34:080 (1) - no new combo?
00:35:782 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - move forward 1/4 tick so (3) starts at 00:35:864 and (9) at 00:36:350 ?
00:43:242 (3,4,5) - move forward 1/4 tick
00:44:377 (6) - ^
00:57:836 (2) - ^
01:01:918 (5) - move to 01:01:972 ?
01:02:350 (1) - move to 01:02:458 ?
01:02:728 (2) - move to 01:02:782 ?
01:06:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move forward 1/4 tick?
01:14:620 (6) - end at 01:15:431 ?
looks good
[easy]
00:11:539 (1) - end at 00:13:323 or 00:13:485 ?
00:26:468 (2) - unsnapped
00:29:458 (1,2) - move forward 1/4 tick so there on red ticks
00:44:215 (1) - move forward 1/4 tick so it starts/ends on white ticks
01:12:107 (2) - ^
[normal]
00:44:215 (1) - start at 00:44:296 and end at 00:45:918 ?
[hard]
00:35:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe do something like this?
01:08:458 (x) - add something like this?
[insane]
00:18:674 (5) - new combo?
00:19:161 (1) - if you do ^ no new combo?
00:23:782 (5) - start at 00:23:864 and end at the same time, and new combo?
00:24:431 (1) - start at 00:24:350 and end at the same (and if you do the new combo on ^, no new combo?)
00:29:458 (1) - move to 00:29:539 ?
00:34:080 (1) - no new combo?
00:35:782 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - move forward 1/4 tick so (3) starts at 00:35:864 and (9) at 00:36:350 ?
00:43:242 (3,4,5) - move forward 1/4 tick
00:44:377 (6) - ^
00:57:836 (2) - ^
01:01:918 (5) - move to 01:01:972 ?
01:02:350 (1) - move to 01:02:458 ?
01:02:728 (2) - move to 01:02:782 ?
01:06:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move forward 1/4 tick?
01:14:620 (6) - end at 01:15:431 ?
looks good
Topic Starter
Thanks for the help.roflninja wrote:
Hi,
[easy]
00:11:539 (1) - end at 00:13:323 or 00:13:485 ? Fixed.
00:26:468 (2) - unsnapped Fixed.
00:29:458 (1,2) - move forward 1/4 tick so there on red ticks Fixed.
00:44:215 (1) - move forward 1/4 tick so it starts/ends on white ticks Fixed.
01:12:107 (2) - ^ Fixed.
[normal]
00:44:215 (1) - start at 00:44:296 and end at 00:45:918 ? It does sound alot better like that.
[hard]
00:35:864 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe do something like this? Fixed.
01:08:458 (x) - add something like this? Seems better.
[insane]
00:18:674 (5) - new combo? Sure, why not
00:19:161 (1) - if you do ^ no new combo?
00:23:782 (5) - start at 00:23:864 and end at the same time, and new combo? Fixed.
00:24:431 (1) - start at 00:24:350 and end at the same (and if you do the new combo on ^, no new combo?) Fixed.
00:29:458 (1) - move to 00:29:539 ? Sounds better.
00:34:080 (1) - no new combo? Fixed.
00:35:782 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - move forward 1/4 tick so (3) starts at 00:35:864 and (9) at 00:36:350 ? Fixed.
00:43:242 (3,4,5) - move forward 1/4 tick Fixed.
00:44:377 (6) - ^ Fixed.
00:57:836 (2) - ^ Fixed.
01:01:918 (5) - move to 01:01:972 ? Fixed.
01:02:350 (1) - move to 01:02:458 ? Fixed.
01:02:728 (2) - move to 01:02:782 ? Fixed.
01:06:593 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - move forward 1/4 tick? Fixed.
01:14:620 (6) - end at 01:15:431 ? Fixed.
Ohai
[General]
1) I think Audio Lead-in is 2, maybe? Please set the Lead-in 2, and make sure you set Lead-in 2 on each diff
2) All bg need to resize to 800x600
3) Please remove the useless whistle and finish hitsound, it can be hurt player's ear
[Easy]
00:36:999 (2) - The slider is too short for easy diff
00:39:755 (5) - ^
00:49:323 (4) - The slider is too short for easy diff
00:52:728 (2) - ^
01:02:782 (2,3) - Spacing error
01:30:026 (3) - The slider is too short for easy diff
[Normal]
Overall Difficulty +2
01:00:593 (2) - Move forward to red tick
01:16:080 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This sound is too loud
01:21:269 (3,4) - ^
[Hard]
00:04:080 (4) - Move 1 grid left?
01:27:431 (1,1) - Sound noisy to me
[Insane]
00:13:891 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move backward to white tick
00:21:918 (1,2,3,4) - Move forward to white tick
01:27:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This sound is too loud
Nice song
STAR
[General]
1) I think Audio Lead-in is 2, maybe? Please set the Lead-in 2, and make sure you set Lead-in 2 on each diff
2) All bg need to resize to 800x600
3) Please remove the useless whistle and finish hitsound, it can be hurt player's ear
[Easy]
00:36:999 (2) - The slider is too short for easy diff
00:39:755 (5) - ^
00:49:323 (4) - The slider is too short for easy diff
00:52:728 (2) - ^
01:02:782 (2,3) - Spacing error
01:30:026 (3) - The slider is too short for easy diff
[Normal]
Overall Difficulty +2
01:00:593 (2) - Move forward to red tick
01:16:080 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This sound is too loud
01:21:269 (3,4) - ^
[Hard]
00:04:080 (4) - Move 1 grid left?
01:27:431 (1,1) - Sound noisy to me
[Insane]
00:13:891 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move backward to white tick
00:21:918 (1,2,3,4) - Move forward to white tick
01:27:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This sound is too loud
Nice song
STAR
Topic Starter
ThanksLeorda wrote:
Ohai
[General]
1) I think Audio Lead-in is 2, maybe? Please set the Lead-in 2, and make sure you set Lead-in 2 on each diff Fixed.
2) All bg need to resize to 800x600 Fixed.
3) Please remove the useless whistle and finish hitsound, it can be hurt player's ear Fixed.
[Easy]
00:36:999 (2) - The slider is too short for easy diff
00:39:755 (5) - ^
00:49:323 (4) - The slider is too short for easy diff
00:52:728 (2) - ^
01:02:782 (2,3) - Spacing error
01:30:026 (3) - The slider is too short for easy diff
Fixed.
[Normal]
Overall Difficulty +2
01:00:593 (2) - Move forward to red tick
01:16:080 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - This sound is too loud
01:21:269 (3,4) - ^
Fixed.
[Hard]
00:04:080 (4) - Move 1 grid left?
01:27:431 (1,1) - Sound noisy to me
Fixed.
[Insane]
00:13:891 (1,2,3,4,5) - Move backward to white tick
00:21:918 (1,2,3,4) - Move forward to white tick
01:27:431 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This sound is too loud
Fixed.
Nice song
STAR
nice map!
Good Luck!
Good Luck!
Hai, sorry for the long wait. Here's my mod.
[Overall]
Delete the .osb from your songs folder and full submit.
[Easy]
01:10:891 - I suggest starting your Kiai time here, since you have a big gap where there are no notes.
[Normal]
00:05:053 (1) - Bleh, not too fond of the sliders that look like this. You have alot like these in this difficulty. It's fine though, It's just my personal nagging.
[Hard]
I understand for your easier difficulties to map to the lyrics, but for this difficulty, you map too much to them, I suggest you fill in those empty spots with notes following the background music.
Distance snap is a bit low in this difficulty.
[Insane]
This difficulty makes me go blah.
This difficulty is okay.
01:07:512 (4) - Unsnapped LOL
01:07:674 (5) - ^
Solid mapset. Star.
*star*
[Overall]
Delete the .osb from your songs folder and full submit.
[Easy]
01:10:891 - I suggest starting your Kiai time here, since you have a big gap where there are no notes.
[Normal]
00:05:053 (1) - Bleh, not too fond of the sliders that look like this. You have alot like these in this difficulty. It's fine though, It's just my personal nagging.
[Hard]
I understand for your easier difficulties to map to the lyrics, but for this difficulty, you map too much to them, I suggest you fill in those empty spots with notes following the background music.
Distance snap is a bit low in this difficulty.
[Insane]
This difficulty makes me go blah.
This difficulty is okay.
01:07:512 (4) - Unsnapped LOL
01:07:674 (5) - ^
Solid mapset. Star.
*star*
Topic Starter
Thanks!I_Tatsuo_I wrote:
Hai, sorry for the long wait. Here's my mod.
[Overall]
Delete the .osb from your songs folder and full submit. Fixed.
[Hard]
I understand for your easier difficulties to map to the lyrics, but for this difficulty, you map too much to them, I suggest you fill in those empty spots with notes following the background music.
Distance snap is a bit low in this difficulty.
Fixed.
[Insane]
This difficulty makes me go blah.
This difficulty is okay.
01:07:512 (4) - Unsnapped LOL
01:07:674 (5) - ^
Fixed.
Solid mapset. Star.
*star*
Hai there :O The song ... is awesome, BTW XD
Easy
This is pretty hard for an easy ... maybe rename it Easy+?
I think slider velocity is pretty fast. I know it's slower than normal but it's because of your BPM. Lower it even more?
I also think you should lower HP drain ... HP -1
Fix your green timing lines (inherited sections) - they're not on the beat
Kiai time felt really long to me ... but during all of it the music felt right since it was obviously the chorus ... yea, just saying :S
00:05:053 (4) - Move two grids right - your spacing seems to change a bit, so I'm going to choose the one that's closer together since this is an "easy" after all
00:13:972 (1) - This might just be me sucking at spinners (read: it probably is), but I missed the beginning of this. Repeatedly. Maybe start this at 00:14:134 (the white tick) instead?
00:15:269 (2, 3) - Unstack these. I thought they were a beat apart, but they're a beat and a half. Move (2) down until there's 2 grids in between it and (3) (that is, outside the yellow outer circle) (I'm not too sure about the space in between, but I suggest 2 or 3 grids). The spacing SHOULD help figure out when to hit (3)
00:16:728 (5) - Move one grid left
00:20:458 (1, 2) - Move two grids up
00:21:918 (4) - Move one right
00:24:350 - (1, 2) - Ehrm, so about your spacing - do you want notes one beat apart to have their outer coloured circles touching, or one grid in between them? Whatever it is, pick one and stick to it. I'm assuming you want them touching. Move (2) up one and (1) up two
Uhm. I'm not going to point out every single spacing mistake here, so only the ones that are major will get attention now, so please check over your spacing (I hate it when people tell me this, too, but really, it's for the good of your map)
00:53:539 (3) - Make this slider curve more so it doesn't overlap with (1)
00:54:350 (1) - Move up one grid
00:59:377 (end of 1, 2) - Wow, what happened here? This slider ends at the TOP, right? The way you have it now makes me think like it'll end at the BOTTOM. Even though the spacing between the beginning of (1) and (2) are technically right (for your one grid in between, that is) it just looks really confusing. Can you re - design this bit? Maybe have the slider curve the other way and put (2) closer to the start of it?
01:08:296 - Break?
01:16:080 (1) - Isn't this a bit low? I know it's still on screen when playing, but still ... move up a bit?
... I feel like I'm writing a freaking wall of text >_<
Normal
This is pretty hard for a normal too ... I can usually pass them on the first go and I was like T_T (but I'm kind of a noob at Osu! so ... that might be it XD) Call it Normal+?
Oh god. The HP drain D: especially with the random breaks. HP -1
00:05:864 (2) - Move up one grid
00:16:728 (1 - 4) - I know these are only half beats, but with BPM this fast, it's like ... *clickclickclickclick* ... but it sounds good D: Uh ... yea, I wouldn't comment if I was pro player lol
00:17:701 and 00:18:350 - Add notes here, just to tide over the "break" you have
00:21:918 (3) - Move one grid down
00:20:458 (1) - This would sound better as one long slider, without repeats IMO
00:22:891 and 00:23:539 (maybe 00:23:864 as well?) - Add circles here
00:30:674 (1) - Move one down to align with (3)? Also un - new combo
00:31:323 (2) - New combo
00:32:296 (1) - Un - new combo? Unsure about this, your choice
00:33:918 - Break?
00:42:350 (4) - Too far from the end of (3), can you kind of make this curve less ish and move it down?
00:47:539 (1) - Move two grids right, also un - new combo?
00:48:512 (3) - New combo here instead?
00:57:918 (2) - What happened to the spacing here O_O Switch positions of (2) and (3) then re - position
01:06:674 - Please put Kiai time directly onto the beat here
01:08:945 - Break?
01:19:972 (2) - What is with the design of this slider? Why does it awkwardly go up before going down? Remove that slider point. Also, end this slider at 01:20:620 (white tick)
01:21:269 (3) - New combo
Ugh. I wrote so much. So yea, I only got through 2 difficulties today (not sure I'd be much help on the others actually, since I fail at insanes). I'll check them with my recheck (assuming you update this by tomorrow) XD
So yea, good luck with your map!
Easy
This is pretty hard for an easy ... maybe rename it Easy+?
I think slider velocity is pretty fast. I know it's slower than normal but it's because of your BPM. Lower it even more?
I also think you should lower HP drain ... HP -1
Fix your green timing lines (inherited sections) - they're not on the beat
Kiai time felt really long to me ... but during all of it the music felt right since it was obviously the chorus ... yea, just saying :S
00:05:053 (4) - Move two grids right - your spacing seems to change a bit, so I'm going to choose the one that's closer together since this is an "easy" after all
00:13:972 (1) - This might just be me sucking at spinners (read: it probably is), but I missed the beginning of this. Repeatedly. Maybe start this at 00:14:134 (the white tick) instead?
00:15:269 (2, 3) - Unstack these. I thought they were a beat apart, but they're a beat and a half. Move (2) down until there's 2 grids in between it and (3) (that is, outside the yellow outer circle) (I'm not too sure about the space in between, but I suggest 2 or 3 grids). The spacing SHOULD help figure out when to hit (3)
00:16:728 (5) - Move one grid left
00:20:458 (1, 2) - Move two grids up
00:21:918 (4) - Move one right
00:24:350 - (1, 2) - Ehrm, so about your spacing - do you want notes one beat apart to have their outer coloured circles touching, or one grid in between them? Whatever it is, pick one and stick to it. I'm assuming you want them touching. Move (2) up one and (1) up two
Uhm. I'm not going to point out every single spacing mistake here, so only the ones that are major will get attention now, so please check over your spacing (I hate it when people tell me this, too, but really, it's for the good of your map)
00:53:539 (3) - Make this slider curve more so it doesn't overlap with (1)
00:54:350 (1) - Move up one grid
00:59:377 (end of 1, 2) - Wow, what happened here? This slider ends at the TOP, right? The way you have it now makes me think like it'll end at the BOTTOM. Even though the spacing between the beginning of (1) and (2) are technically right (for your one grid in between, that is) it just looks really confusing. Can you re - design this bit? Maybe have the slider curve the other way and put (2) closer to the start of it?
01:08:296 - Break?
01:16:080 (1) - Isn't this a bit low? I know it's still on screen when playing, but still ... move up a bit?
... I feel like I'm writing a freaking wall of text >_<
Normal
This is pretty hard for a normal too ... I can usually pass them on the first go and I was like T_T (but I'm kind of a noob at Osu! so ... that might be it XD) Call it Normal+?
Oh god. The HP drain D: especially with the random breaks. HP -1
00:05:864 (2) - Move up one grid
00:16:728 (1 - 4) - I know these are only half beats, but with BPM this fast, it's like ... *clickclickclickclick* ... but it sounds good D: Uh ... yea, I wouldn't comment if I was pro player lol
00:17:701 and 00:18:350 - Add notes here, just to tide over the "break" you have
00:21:918 (3) - Move one grid down
00:20:458 (1) - This would sound better as one long slider, without repeats IMO
00:22:891 and 00:23:539 (maybe 00:23:864 as well?) - Add circles here
00:30:674 (1) - Move one down to align with (3)? Also un - new combo
00:31:323 (2) - New combo
00:32:296 (1) - Un - new combo? Unsure about this, your choice
00:33:918 - Break?
00:42:350 (4) - Too far from the end of (3), can you kind of make this curve less ish and move it down?
00:47:539 (1) - Move two grids right, also un - new combo?
00:48:512 (3) - New combo here instead?
00:57:918 (2) - What happened to the spacing here O_O Switch positions of (2) and (3) then re - position
01:06:674 - Please put Kiai time directly onto the beat here
01:08:945 - Break?
01:19:972 (2) - What is with the design of this slider? Why does it awkwardly go up before going down? Remove that slider point. Also, end this slider at 01:20:620 (white tick)
01:21:269 (3) - New combo
Ugh. I wrote so much. So yea, I only got through 2 difficulties today (not sure I'd be much help on the others actually, since I fail at insanes). I'll check them with my recheck (assuming you update this by tomorrow) XD
So yea, good luck with your map!
Topic Starter
[/quote]EvianBubble wrote:
Hai there :O The song ... is awesome, BTW XD
Easy
This is pretty hard for an easy ... maybe rename it Easy+? Fine to me.
I think slider velocity is pretty fast. I know it's slower than normal but it's because of your BPM. Lower it even more? Velocity seems fine to me.
I also think you should lower HP drain ... HP -1 Fixed.
Fix your green timing lines (inherited sections) - they're not on the beat Fixed.
Kiai time felt really long to me ... but during all of it the music felt right since it was obviously the chorus ... yea, just saying :S Kiai time is fine to me.
00:05:053 (4) - Move two grids right - your spacing seems to change a bit, so I'm going to choose the one that's closer together since this is an "easy" after all Seems fine the way it is.
00:13:972 (1) - This might just be me sucking at spinners (read: it probably is), but I missed the beginning of this. Repeatedly. Maybe start this at 00:14:134 (the white tick) instead? Its fine how it is.
00:15:269 (2, 3) - Unstack these. I thought they were a beat apart, but they're a beat and a half. Move (2) down until there's 2 grids in between it and (3) (that is, outside the yellow outer circle) (I'm not too sure about the space in between, but I suggest 2 or 3 grids). The spacing SHOULD help figure out when to hit (3) I believe that having these stacked is fine.
Normal
This is pretty hard for a normal too ... I can usually pass them on the first go and I was like T_T (but I'm kind of a noob at Osu! so ... that might be it XD) Call it Normal+? Its fine how it is...
Oh god. The HP drain D: especially with the random breaks. HP -1 Its fine...
01:06:674 - Please put Kiai time directly onto the beat here[Fixed.
01:19:972 (2) - What is with the design of this slider? Why does it awkwardly go up before going down? Remove that slider point. Also, end this slider at 01:20:620 (white tick)Fixed.
01:21:269 (3) - New comboFixed.
Ugh. I wrote so much. So yea, I only got through 2 difficulties today (not sure I'd be much help on the others actually, since I fail at insanes). I'll check them with my recheck (assuming you update this by tomorrow) XD
So yea, good luck with your map!
Thanks
[insane]
0:02:782 (1) The vocal lasts 1/2 beats but this is a 3/4 beat slider... strange. Same as 0:04:080
0:05:215 (3,4,1) uneven spacing between these 3 notes. (1) left 1 grid.
0:10:566 (x) Refer to vocal add one here?
0:38:945 (3,4,5,6) make a stright line. e.g., (5) left+down 1 grid, (6) left+down 2 grids
0:50:296 (3) minor spacing problem, right 1 grid
[hard]
0:23:864 (1) Adjust the ending point so that it ends on the y-axis.
(Maybe need some breaks like hard :109 2:69, and some other in insane?)
star.
0:02:782 (1) The vocal lasts 1/2 beats but this is a 3/4 beat slider... strange. Same as 0:04:080
0:05:215 (3,4,1) uneven spacing between these 3 notes. (1) left 1 grid.
0:10:566 (x) Refer to vocal add one here?
0:38:945 (3,4,5,6) make a stright line. e.g., (5) left+down 1 grid, (6) left+down 2 grids
0:50:296 (3) minor spacing problem, right 1 grid
[hard]
0:23:864 (1) Adjust the ending point so that it ends on the y-axis.
(Maybe need some breaks like hard :109 2:69, and some other in insane?)
star.
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.
Easy:
That's a lot better than the first time I played.
You shouldn't use 1/4 snapping for an Easy diff.
00:13:972 (1) - This note appears too early after the spinner.
00:41:053 (1,2) - Clap+Finish isn't a good thing.
00:48:512 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This might be too hard for an Easy diff. Turn (2,3) - and (2,3) in the other combo - into a slider.
00:49:485 (5) - Should be 1/2 tick later. (then turn (5,1) into a slider)
00:58:728 (1,2) - This is too hard for a new player. Consider replacing the repeat slider with 4 notes placed this way in the timeline: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18989
01:28:728 (2) - This one should end one beat later.
Normal:
00:01:161 (1) - I really HATE this slider but removing it or not is up to you.
00:41:053 (1,2) - Clap+Finish is not a good thing.
00:48:999 (4) - This slider makes no sense according to the vocals or the music. Replace it by 3 circles, and remove the second.
00:52:404 (2) - ^
01:30:026 (3) - I really HATE this slider, but removing it or not is up to you.
Hard:
Way better then previously.
Insane:
You don't need an Insane diff... Especially not one that is overmapped.
Overall, this was way better than when I first modded it, although some errors remain unfixed... You're on the right way, keep on working hard !
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.
Easy:
That's a lot better than the first time I played.
You shouldn't use 1/4 snapping for an Easy diff.
00:13:972 (1) - This note appears too early after the spinner.
00:41:053 (1,2) - Clap+Finish isn't a good thing.
00:48:512 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This might be too hard for an Easy diff. Turn (2,3) - and (2,3) in the other combo - into a slider.
00:49:485 (5) - Should be 1/2 tick later. (then turn (5,1) into a slider)
00:58:728 (1,2) - This is too hard for a new player. Consider replacing the repeat slider with 4 notes placed this way in the timeline: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18989
01:28:728 (2) - This one should end one beat later.
Normal:
00:01:161 (1) - I really HATE this slider but removing it or not is up to you.
00:41:053 (1,2) - Clap+Finish is not a good thing.
00:48:999 (4) - This slider makes no sense according to the vocals or the music. Replace it by 3 circles, and remove the second.
00:52:404 (2) - ^
01:30:026 (3) - I really HATE this slider, but removing it or not is up to you.
Hard:
Way better then previously.
Insane:
You don't need an Insane diff... Especially not one that is overmapped.
Overall, this was way better than when I first modded it, although some errors remain unfixed... You're on the right way, keep on working hard !
Topic Starter
Thanks~wmfchris wrote:
[insane]
0:02:782 (1) The vocal lasts 1/2 beats but this is a 3/4 beat slider... strange. Same as 0:04:080 Fixed.
0:05:215 (3,4,1) uneven spacing between these 3 notes. (1) left 1 grid.
0:10:566 (x) Refer to vocal add one here?
0:38:945 (3,4,5,6) make a stright line. e.g., (5) left+down 1 grid, (6) left+down 2 grids
0:50:296 (3) minor spacing problem, right 1 grid
.Fixed.
[hard]
0:23:864 (1) Adjust the ending point so that it ends on the y-axis.Fixed.
(Maybe need some breaks like hard :109 2:69, and some other in insane?)
star.
Topic Starter
Easy:
That's a lot better than the first time I played.
You shouldn't use 1/4 snapping for an Easy diff.
00:13:972 (1) - This note appears too early after the spinner.
00:41:053 (1,2) - Clap+Finish isn't a good thing.
00:48:512 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This might be too hard for an Easy diff. Turn (2,3) - and (2,3) in the other combo - into a slider.
00:49:485 (5) - Should be 1/2 tick later. (then turn (5,1) into a slider)
00:58:728 (1,2) - This is too hard for a new player. Consider replacing the repeat slider with 4 notes placed this way in the timeline: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18989
01:28:728 (2) - This one should end one beat later.
Fixed.
Normal:
00:01:161 (1) - I really HATE this slider but removing it or not is up to you.
00:41:053 (1,2) - Clap+Finish is not a good thing.
00:48:999 (4) - This slider makes no sense according to the vocals or the music. Replace it by 3 circles, and remove the second.
00:52:404 (2) - ^
Fixed.
Hard:
Way better then previously.
Thanks.
Insane:
You don't need an Insane diff... Especially not one that is overmapped.
If more people complain about it, I'll consider removing it.
Overall, this was way better than when I first modded it, although some errors remain unfixed... You're on the right way, keep on working hard ![/quote]
Thanks~
That's a lot better than the first time I played.
You shouldn't use 1/4 snapping for an Easy diff.
00:13:972 (1) - This note appears too early after the spinner.
00:41:053 (1,2) - Clap+Finish isn't a good thing.
00:48:512 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - This might be too hard for an Easy diff. Turn (2,3) - and (2,3) in the other combo - into a slider.
00:49:485 (5) - Should be 1/2 tick later. (then turn (5,1) into a slider)
00:58:728 (1,2) - This is too hard for a new player. Consider replacing the repeat slider with 4 notes placed this way in the timeline: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/18989
01:28:728 (2) - This one should end one beat later.
Fixed.
Normal:
00:01:161 (1) - I really HATE this slider but removing it or not is up to you.
00:41:053 (1,2) - Clap+Finish is not a good thing.
00:48:999 (4) - This slider makes no sense according to the vocals or the music. Replace it by 3 circles, and remove the second.
00:52:404 (2) - ^
Fixed.
Hard:
Way better then previously.
Thanks.
Insane:
You don't need an Insane diff... Especially not one that is overmapped.
If more people complain about it, I'll consider removing it.
Overall, this was way better than when I first modded it, although some errors remain unfixed... You're on the right way, keep on working hard ![/quote]
Thanks~
Normal;
01:30:026 (3) - I don't like 1/4 repeat sliders in a normal, make into a single 1/2 long slider.
Hard;
00:55:809 (3) - End on the white tick.
01:02:377 (1,2) - 1/4 forward.
01:04:972 (3) - ^
Insane;
This is stupid. None of the 1/4 notes fit or are needed. Personally, I'd delete this difficulty. Nonetheless...
00:07:728 (6) - Delete, and put the clap on the previous circle.
00:41:864 (3) - No repeat...
00:42:350 (X) - ...and put a circle here.
01:28:728 (1) - End on the red tick, like the other difficulties.
01:30:026 (3) - I don't like 1/4 repeat sliders in a normal, make into a single 1/2 long slider.
Hard;
00:55:809 (3) - End on the white tick.
01:02:377 (1,2) - 1/4 forward.
01:04:972 (3) - ^
Insane;
This is stupid. None of the 1/4 notes fit or are needed. Personally, I'd delete this difficulty. Nonetheless...
00:07:728 (6) - Delete, and put the clap on the previous circle.
00:41:864 (3) - No repeat...
00:42:350 (X) - ...and put a circle here.
01:28:728 (1) - End on the red tick, like the other difficulties.
Topic Starter
I will delete this difficulty!DiamondCrash wrote:
Normal;
01:30:026 (3) - I don't like 1/4 repeat sliders in a normal, make into a single 1/2 long slider.
Fixed.
Hard;
00:55:809 (3) - End on the white tick.
01:02:377 (1,2) - 1/4 forward.
01:04:972 (3) - ^
Fixed.
Insane;
This is stupid. None of the 1/4 notes fit or are needed. Personally, I'd delete this difficulty. Nonetheless...
00:07:728 (6) - Delete, and put the clap on the previous circle.
00:41:864 (3) - No repeat...
00:42:350 (X) - ...and put a circle here.
01:28:728 (1) - End on the red tick, like the other difficulties.
Thanks!
Major issues in the map: it is highly recommended to fix them.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.
General:
I don't know how I didn't notice that before, but offset of 1177ms sounds better to me.
Also you should find better combo colours.
Easy:
01:18:999 (4) - This slider is really loud with Finish, remove the hitsound.
Normal:
You removed the slider at the beginning ! thxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthx
00:15:269 (1,1) - No new combo ? They all belong to the same sentence in the lyrics, I think it's more logical to have them in the same combo.
00:20:458 (1) - ^
00:26:134 (1) - ^
00:30:674 (1,1) - ^
00:36:999 (1) - ^
00:37:647 (2) - New combo.
00:38:945 (1) - No new combo.
00:47:539 (1) - No new combo.
00:48:512 (3) - New combo.
00:49:647 (1) - No new combo.
00:53:539 (1,1) - ^
01:13:485 (3) - New combo.
01:13:809 (1) - No new combo.
01:14:620 (1) - ^
01:19:809 (1) - ^
You removed the slider at the end ! thxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthx
Hard:
Nothing to say.
You removed the Insane ! thxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthx
STAR~ you deserve it
And a kudostar (my first!) for your efforts.
Minor issue in the map: you don't have to follow them exactly, but I recommend you to.
Suggestions: those are personal opinions, feel free to follow them or not.
Comments.
If there's one red line in the whole mod post, or three blue lines, I won't star the map.
General:
I don't know how I didn't notice that before, but offset of 1177ms sounds better to me.
Also you should find better combo colours.
Easy:
01:18:999 (4) - This slider is really loud with Finish, remove the hitsound.
Normal:
You removed the slider at the beginning ! thxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthx
00:15:269 (1,1) - No new combo ? They all belong to the same sentence in the lyrics, I think it's more logical to have them in the same combo.
00:20:458 (1) - ^
00:26:134 (1) - ^
00:30:674 (1,1) - ^
00:36:999 (1) - ^
00:37:647 (2) - New combo.
00:38:945 (1) - No new combo.
00:47:539 (1) - No new combo.
00:48:512 (3) - New combo.
00:49:647 (1) - No new combo.
00:53:539 (1,1) - ^
01:13:485 (3) - New combo.
01:13:809 (1) - No new combo.
01:14:620 (1) - ^
01:19:809 (1) - ^
You removed the slider at the end ! thxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthx
Hard:
Nothing to say.
You removed the Insane ! thxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthx
STAR~ you deserve it
And a kudostar (my first!) for your efforts.
Topic Starter
Easy:
01:18:999 (4) - This slider is really loud with Finish, remove the hitsound.
Fixed.
Normal:
You removed the slider at the beginning ! thxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxNo problem...plus it seemed out of place for normal.
You removed the slider at the end ! thxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthx
Fixed up most of the colors.
Hard:
Nothing to say.
You removed the Insane ! thxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthx
It did kinda feel out there.... Hard seemed good enough, also I got another reccomendation bout it, so byebye!
STAR~ you deserve it
And a kudostar (my first!) for your efforts.[/quote]
:) YAY! Thanks for your help!
01:18:999 (4) - This slider is really loud with Finish, remove the hitsound.
Fixed.
Normal:
You removed the slider at the beginning ! thxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxNo problem...plus it seemed out of place for normal.
You removed the slider at the end ! thxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthx
Fixed up most of the colors.
Hard:
Nothing to say.
You removed the Insane ! thxthxthxthxthxthxthxthxthx
It did kinda feel out there....
Hard seemed good enough, also I got another reccomendation bout it, so byebye!STAR~ you deserve it
And a kudostar (my first!) for your efforts.[/quote]
:) YAY! Thanks for your help!
Offset should be 1,815. I think the difficulty names should all be shifted up.
The current combo colours look awkward against the backgrounds. Pick some more fitting ones.
Easy
Such a low res background here... could you use a higher quality one please?
01:08:296 - Stick some notes here, or a break? It's weird to have this empty space.
Normal
Feels reeeaaally similar to Easy. Change it up a bit to make it harder, or perhaps make the circles bigger on Easy.
00:33:918 - Break here, like on easy
01:08:620 - Empty space again :
Hard
00:01:161 (1) - Add another reverse
00:30:674 (1) - Remove new combo
00:32:296 (1) - ^
00:36:999 (1) - ^
00:37:647 (3) - Add new combo
00:38:134 (1) - Remove new combo
00:39:431 (1) - ^
00:44:377 (5) - Move 1/4 later
00:47:539 (1) - Remove new combo
00:51:188 (4) - Move 1/4 earlier and lengthen by 1/4
00:52:891 (1) - Remove new combo
00:53:701 (1) - ^
00:58:080 (1) - ^
00:59:377 (1) - ^
01:00:188 (12) - Add new combo
01:00:836 (14) - Shorten by 1/4
01:04:161 (1) - Remove new combo
01:07:485 (1) - ^
The current combo colours look awkward against the backgrounds. Pick some more fitting ones.
Easy
Such a low res background here... could you use a higher quality one please?
01:08:296 - Stick some notes here, or a break? It's weird to have this empty space.
Normal
Feels reeeaaally similar to Easy. Change it up a bit to make it harder, or perhaps make the circles bigger on Easy.
00:33:918 - Break here, like on easy
01:08:620 - Empty space again :
Hard
00:01:161 (1) - Add another reverse
00:30:674 (1) - Remove new combo
00:32:296 (1) - ^
00:36:999 (1) - ^
00:37:647 (3) - Add new combo
00:38:134 (1) - Remove new combo
00:39:431 (1) - ^
00:44:377 (5) - Move 1/4 later
00:47:539 (1) - Remove new combo
00:51:188 (4) - Move 1/4 earlier and lengthen by 1/4
00:52:891 (1) - Remove new combo
00:53:701 (1) - ^
00:58:080 (1) - ^
00:59:377 (1) - ^
01:00:188 (12) - Add new combo
01:00:836 (14) - Shorten by 1/4
01:04:161 (1) - Remove new combo
01:07:485 (1) - ^
Topic Starter
Fixed.Mashley wrote:
Offset should be 1,815. I think the difficulty names should all be shifted up.
The current combo colours look awkward against the backgrounds. Pick some more fitting ones.
Fixed.
Easy
Such a low res background here... could you use a higher quality one please?
01:08:296 - Stick some notes here, or a break? It's weird to have this empty space.
Fixed.
Normal
00:33:918 - Break here, like on easy
01:08:620 - Empty space again :
Fixed.
Hard
00:01:161 (1) - Add another reverse
00:30:674 (1) - Remove new combo
00:32:296 (1) - ^
00:36:999 (1) - ^
00:37:647 (3) - Add new combo
00:38:134 (1) - Remove new combo
00:39:431 (1) - ^
00:47:539 (1) - Remove new combo
00:51:188 (4) - Move 1/4 earlier and lengthen by 1/4
00:52:891 (1) - Remove new combo
00:53:701 (1) - ^
00:58:080 (1) - ^
00:59:377 (1) - ^
01:00:188 (12) - Add new combo
01:00:836 (14) - Shorten by 1/4
01:04:161 (1) - Remove new combo
01:07:485 (1) - ^
Thanks.
Easy
00:15:274 (2,3) - Stacked notes like this are pretty tricky for newbies since the hitcircle of the bottom one is obscured. I would recommend unstacking them.
00:16:733 (1) - Remove new combo
01:08:463 (1) - Recovering after spinners is one of the trickiest techniques to get down for new players. Personally I think it plays fine to remove this and make this into a little break.
01:25:490 (1,1,2,3) - Same as above. Although personally, I would map the spot where you have the spinner now, and have a spinner from 01:27:436 - 01:28:733 to finish the map. Makes a better ending imo.
Normal
00:02:139 (2,3) - Perhaps make these a vertical flip of each other? Also I would move 3 over to the right and up a little bit to line it up with 2 and to avoid the ugly overlap.
01:09:923 (1) - Hmm, this sounds better ending 1/2 later, but that would make it too long.. maybe make this into a 1/1 length repeat slider?
01:25:652 - Same advice as Easy
Hard
00:34:896 (1) - Extend by 1/2
00:48:517 (1,2,3) - Spacing ;_;
01:09:274 - Why the empty space?
^_^
*
00:15:274 (2,3) - Stacked notes like this are pretty tricky for newbies since the hitcircle of the bottom one is obscured. I would recommend unstacking them.
00:16:733 (1) - Remove new combo
01:08:463 (1) - Recovering after spinners is one of the trickiest techniques to get down for new players. Personally I think it plays fine to remove this and make this into a little break.
01:25:490 (1,1,2,3) - Same as above. Although personally, I would map the spot where you have the spinner now, and have a spinner from 01:27:436 - 01:28:733 to finish the map. Makes a better ending imo.
Normal
00:02:139 (2,3) - Perhaps make these a vertical flip of each other? Also I would move 3 over to the right and up a little bit to line it up with 2 and to avoid the ugly overlap.
01:09:923 (1) - Hmm, this sounds better ending 1/2 later, but that would make it too long.. maybe make this into a 1/1 length repeat slider?
01:25:652 - Same advice as Easy
Hard
00:34:896 (1) - Extend by 1/2
00:48:517 (1,2,3) - Spacing ;_;
01:09:274 - Why the empty space?
^_^
*
Topic Starter
Thanks~0_o wrote:
Easy
00:15:274 (2,3) - Stacked notes like this are pretty tricky for newbies since the hitcircle of the bottom one is obscured. I would recommend unstacking them.
00:16:733 (1) - Remove new combo
01:08:463 (1) - Recovering after spinners is one of the trickiest techniques to get down for new players. Personally I think it plays fine to remove this and make this into a little break.
01:25:490 (1,1,2,3) - Same as above. Although personally, I would map the spot where you have the spinner now, and have a spinner from 01:27:436 - 01:28:733 to finish the map. Makes a better ending imo.
Fixed.
Normal
00:02:139 (2,3) - Perhaps make these a vertical flip of each other? Also I would move 3 over to the right and up a little bit to line it up with 2 and to avoid the ugly overlap.
01:09:923 (1) - Hmm, this sounds better ending 1/2 later, but that would make it too long.. maybe make this into a 1/1 length repeat slider?
01:25:652 - Same advice as Easy
Fixed.
Hard
00:34:896 (1) - Extend by 1/2
00:48:517 (1,2,3) - Spacing ;_;
01:09:274 - Why the empty space?>_< Dammit I knew I was missing something there!
Fixed.
^_^
*
Like I said in IRC, your sliders will make or break it.
Lower slider tick on all diffs~ doesn't fit the music IMO
~
Good job, and good luck.
Have a star
Lower slider tick on all diffs~ doesn't fit the music IMO
~
Good job, and good luck.
Have a star
Topic Starter
Thanks Kaneko-chan
Made some major improvements.
Made some major improvements.
[Easy]
01:10:896 (1) - I suggest you to start Kiai from here.
[Normal]
00:11:058 (3) - 1 grid right?
00:33:112 (3) - End it at 00:33:436.
[Hard]
00:27:598 (6) - Something wrong with it.How about using these notes:(00:27:598,00:28:085,00:28:571)
Oh,and one more thing: Think of reducing hitsound volume a bit.
01:10:896 (1) - I suggest you to start Kiai from here.
[Normal]
00:11:058 (3) - 1 grid right?
00:33:112 (3) - End it at 00:33:436.
[Hard]
00:27:598 (6) - Something wrong with it.How about using these notes:(00:27:598,00:28:085,00:28:571)
Oh,and one more thing: Think of reducing hitsound volume a bit.
Anyways, seems way better than when I first modded, so ...
+1 star
Topic Starter
Thanks~SadKangaroo wrote:
[Easy]
01:10:896 (1) - I suggest you to start Kiai from here. Its fine where it starts now.
[Normal]
00:11:058 (3) - 1 grid right?
00:33:112 (3) - End it at 00:33:436.
Fixed.
[Hard]
00:27:598 (6) - Something wrong with it.How about using these notes:(00:27:598,00:28:085,00:28:571)
Fixed.
Oh,and one more thing: Think of reducing hitsound volume a bit.
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.
[General]
caption-111365-20090417091600.jpg is not used, remove it and re full-submit plz.
offset: -5
i didn't check the video since internet is slow... you should make sure it's fine.
maps that posted to your queue can't count for mod4mod next time.
[Easy]
00:16:733 (5) - make the end tick 1 grid left is better imo.
00:32:301 (4) - nazi. 1 grid up.
00:50:139 (2,3) - change to a slider or stack them...? don't like the shape.
00:57:274 (2) - strongly suggest you to remove this.
01:00:031 (5) - start 1/2 later (still end there.)
01:06:355 (1) - 01:10:896 (1) break in kiai is stupid.
01:27:436 (1) - end 1/2 earlier.
[Normal]
00:53:544 (1) - remove new combo
01:07:977 (4,1) - remove the break between these two notes. too short.
01:27:436 (1) - end 1/2 earlier.
[Hard]
nearly the same setting with Normal...emm.... Overall+1, HP+1, at least. same slider velocity and same distance spacing is not what i like, but it's too much to ask you to remap or blablabla.
you should ask for a combo mod since i think you're overusing it (Normal has sth too..). if you're not sure about where to start a new combo, add one every 2 long white lines is a not bad idea.
00:35:869 (1) - nazi. 1 grid left.
01:24:193 (2,3,4,5) - just get bored of these squares at last. there's many ways to place notes.
not much things to point out that's some thing seriously wrong, it's rankable, but, yeah, but distance snapping is not everything... try more ways to place notes and add hitsounds...?
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.
[General]
caption-111365-20090417091600.jpg is not used, remove it and re full-submit plz.
offset: -5
i didn't check the video since internet is slow... you should make sure it's fine.
maps that posted to your queue can't count for mod4mod next time.
[Easy]
00:16:733 (5) - make the end tick 1 grid left is better imo.
00:32:301 (4) - nazi. 1 grid up.
00:50:139 (2,3) - change to a slider or stack them...? don't like the shape.
00:57:274 (2) - strongly suggest you to remove this.
01:00:031 (5) - start 1/2 later (still end there.)
01:06:355 (1) - 01:10:896 (1) break in kiai is stupid.
01:27:436 (1) - end 1/2 earlier.
[Normal]
00:53:544 (1) - remove new combo
01:07:977 (4,1) - remove the break between these two notes. too short.
01:27:436 (1) - end 1/2 earlier.
[Hard]
nearly the same setting with Normal...emm.... Overall+1, HP+1, at least. same slider velocity and same distance spacing is not what i like, but it's too much to ask you to remap or blablabla.
you should ask for a combo mod since i think you're overusing it (Normal has sth too..). if you're not sure about where to start a new combo, add one every 2 long white lines is a not bad idea.
00:35:869 (1) - nazi. 1 grid left.
01:24:193 (2,3,4,5) - just get bored of these squares at last. there's many ways to place notes.
not much things to point out that's some thing seriously wrong, it's rankable, but, yeah, but distance snapping is not everything... try more ways to place notes and add hitsounds...?
Topic Starter
[General]
caption-111365-20090417091600.jpg is not used, remove it and re full-submit plz.
offset: -5
Fixed.
[Easy]
00:16:733 (5) - make the end tick 1 grid left is better imo.
00:50:139 (2,3) - change to a slider or stack them...? don't like the shape.
00:57:274 (2) - strongly suggest you to remove this.
01:00:031 (5) - start 1/2 later (still end there.)
01:06:355 (1) - 01:10:896 (1) break in kiai is stupid.
01:27:436 (1) - end 1/2 earlier.
Fixed.
[Normal]
00:53:544 (1) - remove new combo
01:07:977 (4,1) - remove the break between these two notes. too short.
01:27:436 (1) - end 1/2 earlier.
Fixed.
[Hard]
nearly the same setting with Normal...emm.... Overall+1, HP+1, at least. same slider velocity and same distance spacing is not what i like, but it's too much to ask you to remap or blablabla.
you should ask for a combo mod since i think you're overusing it (Normal has sth too..). if you're not sure about where to start a new combo, add one every 2 long white lines is a not bad idea.
00:35:869 (1) - nazi. 1 grid left.
Fixed.
Thanks~
caption-111365-20090417091600.jpg is not used, remove it and re full-submit plz.
offset: -5
Fixed.
[Easy]
00:16:733 (5) - make the end tick 1 grid left is better imo.
00:50:139 (2,3) - change to a slider or stack them...? don't like the shape.
00:57:274 (2) - strongly suggest you to remove this.
01:00:031 (5) - start 1/2 later (still end there.)
01:06:355 (1) - 01:10:896 (1) break in kiai is stupid.
01:27:436 (1) - end 1/2 earlier.
Fixed.
[Normal]
00:53:544 (1) - remove new combo
01:07:977 (4,1) - remove the break between these two notes. too short.
01:27:436 (1) - end 1/2 earlier.
Fixed.
[Hard]
nearly the same setting with Normal...emm.... Overall+1, HP+1, at least. same slider velocity and same distance spacing is not what i like, but it's too much to ask you to remap or blablabla.
you should ask for a combo mod since i think you're overusing it (Normal has sth too..). if you're not sure about where to start a new combo, add one every 2 long white lines is a not bad idea.
00:35:869 (1) - nazi. 1 grid left.
Fixed.
Thanks~
As per your request:
[General]
Remove audio from video.
[large][AnimePaper]scans_Buso-Renkin_Kleszczman_101672 and [large][AnimePaper]wallpapers_Buso-Renkin_robotpro(1_33)__THISRES__101932 are really low quality. Bad artefacting.. try to find some higher quality images.
MP3 quality is really low too - sounds like it had the volume artificially boosted way too much.
I dunno about rock being in tags.
[Easy]
00:16:729 (5) - Hrm, maybe smooth/even this out a bit? Looks odd compared to the pattern you set up underneath it.
You do a lot of tougher rhythms as single beats for an easy. Maybe try to use sliders more to establish that rhythms before you use them as single beats?
[Normal]
Wow, pretty fast slider speed on a Normal - especially compared to the easy slider speed (.8 vs 1.4?)
00:43:652 (2) - Why is this ending on a blue tick?
Other than the crazy slider speed, not bad.
[Hard]
Odd, same slider speed as Normal?
00:18:679 (1) - Another one ending on a blue tick? Sounds odd.
00:23:869 (1) - ^
00:50:301 (3) - ^
01:10:571 - I was kind of expecting a note Here.
A decent map set - just need to find a better mp3. :/
[General]
Remove audio from video.
[large][AnimePaper]scans_Buso-Renkin_Kleszczman_101672 and [large][AnimePaper]wallpapers_Buso-Renkin_robotpro(1_33)__THISRES__101932 are really low quality. Bad artefacting.. try to find some higher quality images.
MP3 quality is really low too - sounds like it had the volume artificially boosted way too much.
I dunno about rock being in tags.
[Easy]
00:16:729 (5) - Hrm, maybe smooth/even this out a bit? Looks odd compared to the pattern you set up underneath it.
You do a lot of tougher rhythms as single beats for an easy. Maybe try to use sliders more to establish that rhythms before you use them as single beats?
[Normal]
Wow, pretty fast slider speed on a Normal - especially compared to the easy slider speed (.8 vs 1.4?)
00:43:652 (2) - Why is this ending on a blue tick?
Other than the crazy slider speed, not bad.
[Hard]
Odd, same slider speed as Normal?
00:18:679 (1) - Another one ending on a blue tick? Sounds odd.
00:23:869 (1) - ^
00:50:301 (3) - ^
01:10:571 - I was kind of expecting a note Here.
A decent map set - just need to find a better mp3. :/
Topic Starter
Thanks~Garven wrote:
As per your request:
[Normal]
Wow, pretty fast slider speed on a Normal - especially compared to the easy slider speed (.8 vs 1.4?)
00:43:652 (2) - Why is this ending on a blue tick?
Other than the crazy slider speed, not bad.
I remapped this diff...lowered the slider velocity.
[Hard]
00:18:679 (1) - Another one ending on a blue tick? Sounds odd.
00:23:869 (1) - ^
00:50:301 (3) - ^
01:10:571 - I was kind of expecting a note Here.
Fixed.
All difficulties have different offsets, should be all the same, use the one you're using in normal diff. for all diffs ^^
Hard
00:54:355 (8,9,10) - space them evenly, is just a lil thing, but kinda confuse me, because 9 is in a blue tick ><
01:14:626 (6) - repeat until 01:15:761 because feels a bit empty there
01:19:977 (7) - repeat until 01:20:950 ^
01:27:436 (1,1) - how about this instead....
3 sliders, sounds better, imo
Star!
Hard
00:54:355 (8,9,10) - space them evenly, is just a lil thing, but kinda confuse me, because 9 is in a blue tick ><
01:14:626 (6) - repeat until 01:15:761 because feels a bit empty there
01:19:977 (7) - repeat until 01:20:950 ^
01:27:436 (1,1) - how about this instead....
Star!
Topic Starter
Thanks~Lissette wrote:
All difficulties have different offsets, should be all the same, use the one you're using in normal diff. for all diffs ^^
Fixed. >.< I knew something felt off xD
Hard
00:54:355 (8,9,10) - space them evenly, is just a lil thing, but kinda confuse me, because 9 is in a blue tick ><
01:14:626 (6) - repeat until 01:15:761 because feels a bit empty there
01:19:977 (7) - repeat until 01:20:950 ^
01:27:436 (1,1) - how about this instead....Changed it a bit.
Fixed.
Star!
Hard
00:05:863 (6) - end on next white tick
00:44:619 (6) - same
Normal
00:05:864 (2) - end on next white tick
00:20:458 (1) - end on previous white tick here: 00:20:945
00:21:269 (2) - end on next white tick
00:27:593 (4) - end this at: 00:28:728
00:57:674 (2) - move to previous white tick
Easy
Well I think is kind of hard for an Easy.. Maybe you should have follow the music, not the vocals in this diff
You could increase circle size too.
00:05:863 (6) - end on next white tick
00:44:619 (6) - same
Normal
00:05:864 (2) - end on next white tick
00:20:458 (1) - end on previous white tick here: 00:20:945
00:21:269 (2) - end on next white tick
00:27:593 (4) - end this at: 00:28:728
00:57:674 (2) - move to previous white tick
Easy
Well I think is kind of hard for an Easy.. Maybe you should have follow the music, not the vocals in this diff
You could increase circle size too.
Topic Starter
Thanks....Im fixing my computer right now and cant access osu atm...so updates my be held off.
Please don't give kudos unless the post is helpful (in response to people on the first page saying they found no problems yet you gave kudos =x).
[General]
*Unnecessary .osb in the folder.
*If you could remove the audio from the video, that would free up some space.
*Buso_Renkin_Wallpaper is a bit strange... (looks like three images pasted together...)
*Source can be romanized as either Buso or Busou, so... I can see why everyone is arguing. :p
*Remove countdown from each difficulty (since it doesn't appear anyway).
*Remove "rock" from tags in two of the difficulties (rock will be set as genre upon ranking).
*I suggest starting the kiai a white tick earlier at 01:10:566 and ending at 01:27:107.
*Expected kiai from 00:47:215 to 01:07:972 instead of the other spot, actually..
*Volume is WAY too loud on all sections of all difficulties. I could barely hear the hitsounds while listening/testing, and that's just unrankable. Please use 100% volume for everything in this song.
*Try offset 1,820 and resnap on all difficulties.
*Audio quality is questionable. Even with hitsound volume at 100%, the mp3 is still overpowering and meh.
[Easy]
*No yellow combo color?
00:15:270 (2,3) - try to avoid lots of offbeat notes (red/blue ticks) by themselves (at least early on) in easier diffs. Try making this a slider instead of just single beats. :p
00:24:351 (1,2) - ^ a slider, again
00:29:540 (1,2) - ^ although this time it's a bit more expected
00:38:459 (2,3) - stack these
00:55:486 (2,3) - slider
00:58:729 (1,2) - stack
01:02:783 (2,3,4) - make this a repeating slider or a single note and slider
01:04:081 (1,2,3) - ^
01:21:919 (2,3) - stack
01:23:216 (2,3) - ^
[Normal]
00:07:323 (1) - very strange slider shape... (try making this linear and see if that looks any better)
00:08:620 (2) - ^
00:16:728 (1,2,3,4) - A bit too hard for a Normal. Either put these in a straight line or stack them.
00:20:458 (1) - shorten to the white tick
00:21:269 (2) - extend to the white tick
00:27:593 (4) - either shorten or extend
01:25:972 (2) - making this linear instead of bezier would make the slider look less bumpy, but the slider ticks still make it look a bit ugly..
[Hard]
00:33:122 (7) - this sounds VERY awkward ending on the white tick. Either shorten to the previous red tick or extend to the next red tick.
00:44:392 (5) - I actually think this sounds better on the red tick (fix spacing as well afterwards)
00:44:635 (6) - extend to the white tick (also try making this linear and see if that looks any better)
01:00:852 (4) - extend to the red tick
01:14:635 (6) - add one more repeat (sounds a bit better)
01:19:987 (7) - ^
Not bad for one of your first maps, but try not to follow the lyrics 100% when mapping. This leaves for empty/awkward spaces if you just give a "literal" representation of the song. :p Good luck!
[General]
*Unnecessary .osb in the folder.
*If you could remove the audio from the video, that would free up some space.
*Buso_Renkin_Wallpaper is a bit strange... (looks like three images pasted together...)
*Source can be romanized as either Buso or Busou, so... I can see why everyone is arguing. :p
*Remove countdown from each difficulty (since it doesn't appear anyway).
*Remove "rock" from tags in two of the difficulties (rock will be set as genre upon ranking).
*I suggest starting the kiai a white tick earlier at 01:10:566 and ending at 01:27:107.
*Expected kiai from 00:47:215 to 01:07:972 instead of the other spot, actually..
*Volume is WAY too loud on all sections of all difficulties. I could barely hear the hitsounds while listening/testing, and that's just unrankable. Please use 100% volume for everything in this song.
*Try offset 1,820 and resnap on all difficulties.
*Audio quality is questionable. Even with hitsound volume at 100%, the mp3 is still overpowering and meh.
[Easy]
*No yellow combo color?
00:15:270 (2,3) - try to avoid lots of offbeat notes (red/blue ticks) by themselves (at least early on) in easier diffs. Try making this a slider instead of just single beats. :p
00:24:351 (1,2) - ^ a slider, again
00:29:540 (1,2) - ^ although this time it's a bit more expected
00:38:459 (2,3) - stack these
00:55:486 (2,3) - slider
00:58:729 (1,2) - stack
01:02:783 (2,3,4) - make this a repeating slider or a single note and slider
01:04:081 (1,2,3) - ^
01:21:919 (2,3) - stack
01:23:216 (2,3) - ^
[Normal]
00:07:323 (1) - very strange slider shape... (try making this linear and see if that looks any better)
00:08:620 (2) - ^
00:16:728 (1,2,3,4) - A bit too hard for a Normal. Either put these in a straight line or stack them.
00:20:458 (1) - shorten to the white tick
00:21:269 (2) - extend to the white tick
00:27:593 (4) - either shorten or extend
01:25:972 (2) - making this linear instead of bezier would make the slider look less bumpy, but the slider ticks still make it look a bit ugly..
[Hard]
00:33:122 (7) - this sounds VERY awkward ending on the white tick. Either shorten to the previous red tick or extend to the next red tick.
00:44:392 (5) - I actually think this sounds better on the red tick (fix spacing as well afterwards)
00:44:635 (6) - extend to the white tick (also try making this linear and see if that looks any better)
01:00:852 (4) - extend to the red tick
01:14:635 (6) - add one more repeat (sounds a bit better)
01:19:987 (7) - ^
Not bad for one of your first maps, but try not to follow the lyrics 100% when mapping. This leaves for empty/awkward spaces if you just give a "literal" representation of the song. :p Good luck!
Darn, you took about 1.3 of what I was going say.
Like Derekku said. Check some of the placements of beats. It does sound off in a few places as he described. That said,changing the offset would help.
Like Derekku said. Check some of the placements of beats. It does sound off in a few places as he described. That said,changing the offset would help.
Topic Starter
I will try to fix it ASAP...but i need to get a new graphics card for osu...so please hold on until then.
Thanks~
Thanks~
Topic Starter
Thanks~Derekku wrote:
Please don't give kudos unless the post is helpful (in response to people on the first page saying they found no problems yet you gave kudos =x).
[General]
*Unnecessary .osb in the folder.
*Remove countdown from each difficulty (since it doesn't appear anyway).
*Remove "rock" from tags in two of the difficulties (rock will be set as genre upon ranking).
*I suggest starting the kiai a white tick earlier at 01:10:566 and ending at 01:27:107.
*Volume is WAY too loud on all sections of all difficulties. I could barely hear the hitsounds while listening/testing, and that's just unrankable. Please use 100% volume for everything in this song.
*Try offset 1,820 and resnap on all difficulties.
Fixed.
[Easy]
*No yellow combo color?
00:38:459 (2,3) - stack these
00:55:486 (2,3) - slider
00:58:729 (1,2) - stack
01:02:783 (2,3,4) - make this a repeating slider or a single note and slider
01:04:081 (1,2,3) - ^
01:21:919 (2,3) - stack
01:23:216 (2,3) - ^
Fixed.
[Normal]
00:07:323 (1) - very strange slider shape... (try making this linear and see if that looks any better)
00:08:620 (2) - ^
00:16:728 (1,2,3,4) - A bit too hard for a Normal. Either put these in a straight line or stack them.
00:20:458 (1) - shorten to the white tick
00:21:269 (2) - extend to the white tick
00:27:593 (4) - either shorten or extend
01:25:972 (2) - making this linear instead of bezier would make the slider look less bumpy, but the slider ticks still make it look a bit ugly..
Fixed.
[Hard]
00:33:122 (7) - this sounds VERY awkward ending on the white tick. Either shorten to the previous red tick or extend to the next red tick.
00:44:392 (5) - I actually think this sounds better on the red tick (fix spacing as well afterwards)
00:44:635 (6) - extend to the white tick (also try making this linear and see if that looks any better)
01:00:852 (4) - extend to the red tick
01:14:635 (6) - add one more repeat (sounds a bit better)
01:19:987 (7) - ^
Fixed.
Easy-
This kind of easy diffs, that follow stictry the lyrics are really mean. They DO are easy, but if you know the song, as if you dont, many news can get confused with the 1/2 notes. My suggestion: Remap to the beats
Normal-
00:02:144 (2,3) - Make the start and the end of each slider be at the same height? like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22072
(code:)
00:18:036 (x) - ^?
00:18:360 (x) - ^?
(do something similar for each weird gap, and DO it for this break at 00:33:928 - and map it!)
01:10:576 (x) - ADD A NOTE HERE! This is the Kiai Time fountain! you want EMPHASIS here!!!
Hard-
00:17:549 (x) - Add a note?
00:17:711 (x) - ^?
00:17:874 (x) - ^?
00:18:198 (x) - ^?
00:18:360 (x) - ^?
00:18:522 (x) - ^?
The pattern I just mentioned above should help you fill those weird gaps, it follows the gutar nicely.
00:28:576 (x) - Note?
00:28:738 - ^?
00:28:901 - Slider from this place up to 00:29:225 ? (it follows the gutar)
00:34:090 - Slider from this place up to either 00:34:414 or 00:34:576.
...aaand you should know how to fill the akward gaps now.
01:10:575 (4) - THIS one should be the new combo, Kiai fountain, emphasis, you know the deal.
YOU! You lack hitsounds. I just hear finishes everywhere and some whistles. Add some claps following this pattern:
This goes with the drums
If you're not sure about the hitsound pattern I suggested you, or if youre not sure about how to place them, PM me for a rechek (I'll only come to recheck hitsounds, though, so dont do it expecting another mod)
Star
This kind of easy diffs, that follow stictry the lyrics are really mean. They DO are easy, but if you know the song, as if you dont, many news can get confused with the 1/2 notes. My suggestion: Remap to the beats
Normal-
00:02:144 (2,3) - Make the start and the end of each slider be at the same height? like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22072
(code:)
SPOILER
00:17:711 (x) - add a note?176,192,2144,2,0,B|208:80|320:88|352:192,1,250
176,272,3441,2,0,B|208:384|320:376|352:272,1,250
00:18:036 (x) - ^?
00:18:360 (x) - ^?
(do something similar for each weird gap, and DO it for this break at 00:33:928 - and map it!)
01:10:576 (x) - ADD A NOTE HERE! This is the Kiai Time fountain! you want EMPHASIS here!!!
Hard-
00:17:549 (x) - Add a note?
00:17:711 (x) - ^?
00:17:874 (x) - ^?
00:18:198 (x) - ^?
00:18:360 (x) - ^?
00:18:522 (x) - ^?
The pattern I just mentioned above should help you fill those weird gaps, it follows the gutar nicely.
00:28:576 (x) - Note?
00:28:738 - ^?
00:28:901 - Slider from this place up to 00:29:225 ? (it follows the gutar)
00:34:090 - Slider from this place up to either 00:34:414 or 00:34:576.
...aaand you should know how to fill the akward gaps now.
01:10:575 (4) - THIS one should be the new combo, Kiai fountain, emphasis, you know the deal.
YOU! You lack hitsounds. I just hear finishes everywhere and some whistles. Add some claps following this pattern:
This goes with the drums
If you're not sure about the hitsound pattern I suggested you, or if youre not sure about how to place them, PM me for a rechek (I'll only come to recheck hitsounds, though, so dont do it expecting another mod)
Star
Topic Starter
Thanks~Krisom wrote:
Normal-
00:02:144 (2,3) - Make the start and the end of each slider be at the same height? like this: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/22072
(code:)SPOILER00:17:711 (x) - add a note?176,192,2144,2,0,B|208:80|320:88|352:192,1,250
176,272,3441,2,0,B|208:384|320:376|352:272,1,250
00:18:036 (x) - ^?
00:18:360 (x) - ^?
(do something similar for each weird gap, and DO it for this break at 00:33:928 - and map it!)
01:10:576 (x) - ADD A NOTE HERE! This is the Kiai Time fountain! you want EMPHASIS here!!!
Fixed.
Hard-
00:17:549 (x) - Add a note?
00:17:711 (x) - ^?
00:17:874 (x) - ^?
00:18:198 (x) - ^?
00:18:360 (x) - ^?
00:18:522 (x) - ^?
The pattern I just mentioned above should help you fill those weird gaps, it follows the gutar nicely.
00:28:576 (x) - Note?
00:28:738 - ^?
00:28:901 - Slider from this place up to 00:29:225 ? (it follows the gutar)
00:34:090 - Slider from this place up to either 00:34:414 or 00:34:576.
...aaand you should know how to fill the akward gaps now.
01:10:575 (4) - THIS one should be the new combo, Kiai fountain, emphasis, you know the deal.
Fixd.
Star
[Easy]
the very first two sliders, make them the same
01:06:684 - spiner better to start here , and finish in the same.
[Normal]
00:13:982 - Add to the slider one more return
00:16:090 aligning the slider to the middle of the two previous Circle
00:44:630 - spiner better to start here, and finish in the same
[Hard]
00:01:171(1) - Finish slider sound finish
In general, I like ~STAR
the very first two sliders, make them the same
01:06:684 - spiner better to start here , and finish in the same.
[Normal]
00:13:982 - Add to the slider one more return
00:16:090 aligning the slider to the middle of the two previous Circle
00:44:630 - spiner better to start here, and finish in the same
[Hard]
00:01:171(1) - Finish slider sound finish
In general, I like ~STAR
Topic Starter
Thanks~ZLOdeuka wrote:
[Easy]
the very first two sliders, make them the same>0< what happend here! It was at first!...Fixed.
01:06:684 - spiner better to start here , and finish in the same.Hmm...Alright.
[Normal]
00:16:090 aligning the slider to the middle of the two previous Circle Fixed.
00:44:630 - spiner better to start here, and finish in the sameFixed.
[Hard]
00:01:171(1) - Finish slider sound finishOk, sure.
In general, I like ~STAR
My english is not good. I'm sorry about this but my contury is not english-speaking world. keep in mind please.
Poof! Summoned!
RED : IMPORTANT
ORANGE : I RECOMMEND IT STRONGLY
BLUE : SUGGESTION, PERSONAL DISCONTENT
GREEN : NAZI
PURPLE : JOKE, DO NOT TAKE IT SERIOUSLY
[General]
- Your all kiai timing sections are not snapped. set them again.
- Your preview points are not snapped. set them again.
- Your BG images are terrible. see their quality gap. especially, Buso_Renkin_Wallpaper.jpg file is looks like MSPAINT work. see caption-727637-20100723180722.jpg file. 512 x 384 is not good. change them.
- WTH is in your tags? 'rock'....? also, It is only in [Hard]...? oh, dude. All diff's artist, tags things are must be matched. It can be unrankable issue. make them all same. And, IMO, 'rock' is just... well... lol. Can't you find any more words what has relationship with this song? how about 'jam project'? oh, anyway, you can put 'rock' in your tags. because this map's genre will be 'Anime'.
- Artist 'Fukuyama Yoshiki' is correct, but there is another ranked map. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/5287 This one has 'Yoshiki Fukuyama' in artist. It's veeey old map, but anyway, I prefer sorted map list.
[Easy]
00:05:064 (4) - you need more smooth curve, and I want this one can makes smooth curve with 00:05:874 (5).
00:07:334 (1) - 1 grid down.
00:08:631 (2) - 2 grid left. Do not position note on out of board. especially, easy and normal diff. sometimes another game elements possibly cover it. (scoreboard, HP BG things). It is not good to noobs.
00:09:928 (3,4) - If you follow my suggstion, you should check these ones' distance as well.
00:10:253 (4) - I don't like its 90 degrees 'No curves'. use 'smooth curves' slider.
00:16:739 (5) - slider end point and start point. make them exact align. You can turn off grid snap. Don't afraid working without girdsnap. 1 gird is just 8x8. sometimes you need to do pixel level nazi works for more looks good.
00:19:172 (1,2,3,4) - 1 grid down.
00:23:874 (6) - 2 grid left, 2 grid up.
00:25:010 (3) - move slider end point slightly without grid snap. for perfect align with 00:26:145 (1). yeah, silly nazi work. You can ignore this kind of pixel level nazi work if you can't make it in short time.
00:26:956 (3) - more smoothly!
00:32:307 (4) - Distorted a little bit. move it left 1 grid.
00:49:820 (3,4,5) - without grid snap, move it down slightly. align.
00:54:361 (1,2) - You need pixel level nazi for this. This one is not perfect symmetry. also it is very easy to notice when play the map.
00:57:118 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Can you see this?01:00:198 (5) - move slider end point slightly without grid snap. for perfect align
01:04:090 (1,2) - move to left 1 grid.
01:12:198 (2) - Why didn't use copy paste? delete this. c&p previous (1). Use Flip horizonttaly and Reverse selection function. and position it. You can make it perfect align in just 5 seconds.
01:13:496 (3,4,5) - If you agree previous suggestion, 1 gird down, 1 grid left.
01:16:091 (1,2) - more smoothly!
01:24:199 (2) - straight line.
Don't follow all Nazi modding. Do it where if you agree. Nazi modding is silliest modding as well. Nazi mod's mean, "Oh, I can not found any crtical flaw so I focus on silly things to improve it.". Anyway you need to do something to improve the map till BAT arrived. If you can not find any major issues in your notes, This is time to be a paranoeac.
[Normal]
00:02:144 (2,3) - not perfect symmetry
00:27:603 (4) - ^
00:52:414 (2,3) - ^
00:55:495 (3) - more smoothly
00:56:306 (4) - can you make it stack with 00:57:603 (2) ?
01:14:630 (5) - end at 01:15:603, red tick.
01:16:090 (1,2,3) - move to right 1 grid.
01:19:982 (4) - end at 01:20:792, refer [Easy]'s slider at same timing.
01:24:198 (2,3) - move down 1 grid.
01:25:495 (1,2) - move down 1 grid if you follow previous NAZI.
not so bad.
[Hard]
- well, This not not a problem of 'there is an error or not'. I can't approved of this concept. you need to refer another famous 170 ~ 190 BPM maps' [H] or [I]. In this BPM, most of people want to RUN into the map. because, It is fast beat. You use quite close and constant distance in whole map, also your positioning is... quite bad. almost circle pattern's curve is 90 degrees angle. looks like chessboard. It makes your map narrow and stuffy. use more farther distance snap. put more various pattern in your map. don't afraid about difficulty so much. This is a hardest diff of your mapset. This one's actual difficulty should be [Hard+] or [Insane-].
You are the mapper, and this is your map. You have charge. I can not arguing about this with you. but If you want really want make a loved map, think about it carefully.
My real modding legend is 'You can keep your beats and sounds, but Repositioning all notes.'. I suggest 1.7 Slider Velocity and 1.0x distance snap. you can use 1.5~2.0 disntance snap when you want to make jumps. of course, I prepared an usual modding report If you want to keep everything of your map.
- Set Tick rate 2. I'm not sure about this.
00:07:332 (1,2,3,4,5) - Makes like this. and this make it align with 00:05:873 (6)'s end point.00:23:063 (3) - make it stack with 00:22:901 (2)
00:25:008 (3,4,5,6) - You can make these jumps. 00:30:197 (3,4,5,6) This one has same rhythm as well.
01:02:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ if you follow my suggestion about jumps, Don't forgot make it in intuition. If you need, you can use new combo for easy to read.
01:07:008 (2,3) - ^
01:07:494 (4,5) - ^
01:11:548 (4,5) - ^
01:16:737 (4,5) - ^
01:18:035 (4,5) - ^
01:21:927 (4,5) - ^
01:23:224 (4,5) - ^ These things all on same chorus. Also, This point has quite accent to me. Forever! Forever! (Well, IMO, Till the ends of the earth!! is more good translate.) To the ends of the earth!! isn'it? Make them highlighted. This is kiai time, and almost end part of the song. You need little difficult pattern for fun.
01:25:981 (3) - This slider's end point should be at 01:27:279 red tick. This one is start with vocal, then, make this end with vocal. you should modify your Kiai time for this if you follow this suggestion. yeah, That's it.
01:28:737 (2) - Is it jump? 1~2's distance and 2~3's distance are not matched. I couldn't find any valid reason for this. If it is not intentional, fix it.
Pretty looks good..... Chessboard map XD. Take my star, and good luck!
Poof! Summoned!
RED : IMPORTANT
ORANGE : I RECOMMEND IT STRONGLY
BLUE : SUGGESTION, PERSONAL DISCONTENT
GREEN : NAZI
PURPLE : JOKE, DO NOT TAKE IT SERIOUSLY
[General]
- Your all kiai timing sections are not snapped. set them again.
- Your preview points are not snapped. set them again.
- Your BG images are terrible. see their quality gap. especially, Buso_Renkin_Wallpaper.jpg file is looks like MSPAINT work. see caption-727637-20100723180722.jpg file. 512 x 384 is not good. change them.
- WTH is in your tags? 'rock'....? also, It is only in [Hard]...? oh, dude. All diff's artist, tags things are must be matched. It can be unrankable issue. make them all same. And, IMO, 'rock' is just... well... lol. Can't you find any more words what has relationship with this song? how about 'jam project'? oh, anyway, you can put 'rock' in your tags. because this map's genre will be 'Anime'.
- Artist 'Fukuyama Yoshiki' is correct, but there is another ranked map. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/5287 This one has 'Yoshiki Fukuyama' in artist. It's veeey old map, but anyway, I prefer sorted map list.
[Easy]
00:05:064 (4) - you need more smooth curve, and I want this one can makes smooth curve with 00:05:874 (5).
00:07:334 (1) - 1 grid down.
00:08:631 (2) - 2 grid left. Do not position note on out of board. especially, easy and normal diff. sometimes another game elements possibly cover it. (scoreboard, HP BG things). It is not good to noobs.
00:09:928 (3,4) - If you follow my suggstion, you should check these ones' distance as well.
00:10:253 (4) - I don't like its 90 degrees 'No curves'. use 'smooth curves' slider.
00:16:739 (5) - slider end point and start point. make them exact align. You can turn off grid snap. Don't afraid working without girdsnap. 1 gird is just 8x8. sometimes you need to do pixel level nazi works for more looks good.
00:19:172 (1,2,3,4) - 1 grid down.
00:23:874 (6) - 2 grid left, 2 grid up.
00:25:010 (3) - move slider end point slightly without grid snap. for perfect align with 00:26:145 (1). yeah, silly nazi work. You can ignore this kind of pixel level nazi work if you can't make it in short time.
00:26:956 (3) - more smoothly!
00:32:307 (4) - Distorted a little bit. move it left 1 grid.
00:49:820 (3,4,5) - without grid snap, move it down slightly. align.
00:54:361 (1,2) - You need pixel level nazi for this. This one is not perfect symmetry. also it is very easy to notice when play the map.
00:57:118 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - Can you see this?01:00:198 (5) - move slider end point slightly without grid snap. for perfect align
01:04:090 (1,2) - move to left 1 grid.
01:12:198 (2) - Why didn't use copy paste? delete this. c&p previous (1). Use Flip horizonttaly and Reverse selection function. and position it. You can make it perfect align in just 5 seconds.
01:13:496 (3,4,5) - If you agree previous suggestion, 1 gird down, 1 grid left.
01:16:091 (1,2) - more smoothly!
01:24:199 (2) - straight line.
Don't follow all Nazi modding. Do it where if you agree. Nazi modding is silliest modding as well. Nazi mod's mean, "Oh, I can not found any crtical flaw so I focus on silly things to improve it.". Anyway you need to do something to improve the map till BAT arrived. If you can not find any major issues in your notes, This is time to be a paranoeac.
[Normal]
00:02:144 (2,3) - not perfect symmetry
00:27:603 (4) - ^
00:52:414 (2,3) - ^
00:55:495 (3) - more smoothly
00:56:306 (4) - can you make it stack with 00:57:603 (2) ?
01:14:630 (5) - end at 01:15:603, red tick.
01:16:090 (1,2,3) - move to right 1 grid.
01:19:982 (4) - end at 01:20:792, refer [Easy]'s slider at same timing.
01:24:198 (2,3) - move down 1 grid.
01:25:495 (1,2) - move down 1 grid if you follow previous NAZI.
not so bad.
[Hard]
- well, This not not a problem of 'there is an error or not'. I can't approved of this concept. you need to refer another famous 170 ~ 190 BPM maps' [H] or [I]. In this BPM, most of people want to RUN into the map. because, It is fast beat. You use quite close and constant distance in whole map, also your positioning is... quite bad. almost circle pattern's curve is 90 degrees angle. looks like chessboard. It makes your map narrow and stuffy. use more farther distance snap. put more various pattern in your map. don't afraid about difficulty so much. This is a hardest diff of your mapset. This one's actual difficulty should be [Hard+] or [Insane-].
You are the mapper, and this is your map. You have charge. I can not arguing about this with you. but If you want really want make a loved map, think about it carefully.
My real modding legend is 'You can keep your beats and sounds, but Repositioning all notes.'. I suggest 1.7 Slider Velocity and 1.0x distance snap. you can use 1.5~2.0 disntance snap when you want to make jumps. of course, I prepared an usual modding report If you want to keep everything of your map.
- Set Tick rate 2. I'm not sure about this.
00:07:332 (1,2,3,4,5) - Makes like this. and this make it align with 00:05:873 (6)'s end point.00:23:063 (3) - make it stack with 00:22:901 (2)
00:25:008 (3,4,5,6) - You can make these jumps. 00:30:197 (3,4,5,6) This one has same rhythm as well.
01:02:467 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - ^ if you follow my suggestion about jumps, Don't forgot make it in intuition. If you need, you can use new combo for easy to read.
01:07:008 (2,3) - ^
01:07:494 (4,5) - ^
01:11:548 (4,5) - ^
01:16:737 (4,5) - ^
01:18:035 (4,5) - ^
01:21:927 (4,5) - ^
01:23:224 (4,5) - ^ These things all on same chorus. Also, This point has quite accent to me. Forever! Forever! (Well, IMO, Till the ends of the earth!! is more good translate.) To the ends of the earth!! isn'it? Make them highlighted. This is kiai time, and almost end part of the song. You need little difficult pattern for fun.
01:25:981 (3) - This slider's end point should be at 01:27:279 red tick. This one is start with vocal, then, make this end with vocal. you should modify your Kiai time for this if you follow this suggestion. yeah, That's it.
01:28:737 (2) - Is it jump? 1~2's distance and 2~3's distance are not matched. I couldn't find any valid reason for this. If it is not intentional, fix it.
Pretty looks good..... Chessboard map XD. Take my star, and good luck!
Topic Starter
Thanks....(not much help for my maps...cept the general part >.>) But thanks for your time anywayBikko wrote:
[b][General]
- Your all kiai timing sections are not snapped. set them again.
- Your preview points are not snapped. set them again.
- Your BG images are terrible. see their quality gap. especially, Buso_Renkin_Wallpaper.jpg file is looks like MSPAINT work. see caption-727637-20100723180722.jpg file. 512 x 384 is not good. change them....wtf? It was a 800x600 at first!...changed...
- WTH is in your tags? 'rock'....? also, It is only in [Hard]...? oh, dude. All diff's artist, tags things are must be matched. It can be unrankable issue. make them all same. And, IMO, 'rock' is just... well... lol. Can't you find any more words what has relationship with this song? how about 'jam project'? oh, anyway, you can put 'rock' in your tags. because this map's genre will be 'Anime'.[/color] Thought i fixed that...
- Artist 'Fukuyama Yoshiki' is correct, but there is another ranked map. http://osu.ppy.sh/s/5287 This one has 'Yoshiki Fukuyama' in artist. It's veeey old map, but anyway, I prefer sorted map list.Names can be either way...As long as the artist name is full who cares....
[Hard]
- well, This not not a problem of 'there is an error or not'. I can't approved of this concept. you need to refer another famous 170 ~ 190 BPM maps' [H] or [I]. In this BPM, most of people want to RUN into the map. because, It is fast beat. You use quite close and constant distance in whole map, also your positioning is... quite bad. almost circle pattern's curve is 90 degrees angle. looks like chessboard. It makes your map narrow and stuffy. use more farther distance snap. put more various pattern in your map. don't afraid about difficulty so much. This is a hardest diff of your mapset. This one's actual difficulty should be [Hard+] or [Insane-].
You are the mapper, and this is your map. You have charge. I can not arguing about this with you. but If you want really want make a loved map, think about it carefully.
[Take my star, and good luck!
Topic Starter
^ thanks for re-telling me (i was kinda in a rush... >.> had to go out)
Fixed it.
Fixed it.
[General]
01:30:033 (4) - Remove Finish Hitsound and Extend by 1/4.
[Normal]
01:27:441 (1) - Extend by 3/4 and Remove Finish Hitsound.
[Easy]
01:27:441 (1) - Extend by 3/4 and Remove Finish Hitsound.
Starred~
- Offset 1817
- You have no TAGs! Add some!
- Maybe add in a spinner somewhere ?
- Overall Difficulty +1
- Drain Rate +1
01:30:033 (4) - Remove Finish Hitsound and Extend by 1/4.
[Normal]
01:27:441 (1) - Extend by 3/4 and Remove Finish Hitsound.
[Easy]
01:27:441 (1) - Extend by 3/4 and Remove Finish Hitsound.
Starred~
Hiiiii~
[Normal]
00:13:982 (1) - Add 1 repeat?
00:17:387 - Add note here?
00:21:928 (3) - Add 1 repeat?
Nice map~star it~
[Normal]
00:13:982 (1) - Add 1 repeat?
00:17:387 - Add note here?
00:21:928 (3) - Add 1 repeat?
Nice map~star it~
Topic Starter
GladiOol wrote:
[General]Fixed.
- Offset 1817
- You have no TAGs! Add some!
[Hard]01:28:087 (1) - Remove New Combo.
- Maybe add in a spinner somewhere ?
- Overall Difficulty +1
- Drain Rate +1
01:30:033 (4) - Remove Finish Hitsound and Extend by 1/4.
Fixed.
[Normal]
01:27:441 (1) - Extend by 3/4 and Remove Finish Hitsound.
Fixed.
[Easy]
01:27:441 (1) - Extend by 3/4 and Remove Finish Hitsound.
Fixed.
Starred~
Topic Starter
~Thankskino77 wrote:
Hiiiii~
[Normal]
00:13:982 (1) - Add 1 repeat?
00:17:387 - Add note here?
00:21:928 (3) - Add 1 repeat?
Fixed.
Nice map~star it~
hi~
sorry for the delay,
here's my mod
[overall]
yep, this looks better than [easy]
sorry for the delay,
here's my mod
[overall]
- your bg sizes differ, SubakusWallpaper.jpg is 800x600 and others are 1024x768
- 00:04:735(3) 1 grid up?
01:27:438(1) this lacks finish, besides I would have ended it at a white tick, 01:30:033
yep, this looks better than [easy]
- 00:22:898(1-4) 1 grid left?
01:27:438(1) the same suggestion as in [easy]
- 00:54:357(8) new combo?
00:55:006(1) no new combo?
Topic Starter
Thanks for your help...Fixed up a little.
Why is stack leniency 1 tick higher on [Hard] while the others are default!
Topic Starter
0.0 Fixed.Mafiamaster wrote:
Why is stack leniency 1 tick higher on [Hard] while the others are default!
~Thanks
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00:16:73(1) ~ (5) Notes place like this is hmm not really beautiful.<_<
00:16:73(1) ~ (5) Notes place like this is hmm not really beautiful.<_<
Topic Starter
Fixed.deepsea wrote:
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00:16:73(1) ~ (5) Notes place like this is hmm not really beautiful.<_<
~Thanks
~Easy~
01:27:438 (1) - end on 01:30:276
~Normal~
00:02:141 (2,3) - not look so symmetry...
01:27:438 (1) - end on 01:30:276
~Hard~
01:10:573 (1) - remove new combo
01:28:087 (2) - move a bit left
01:28:735 (3,4) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
+Star
01:27:438 (1) - end on 01:30:276
~Normal~
00:02:141 (2,3) - not look so symmetry...
01:27:438 (1) - end on 01:30:276
~Hard~
01:10:573 (1) - remove new combo
01:28:087 (2) - move a bit left
01:28:735 (3,4) - move left 1 grid (Lv3)
+Star
Topic Starter
Thanks I fixed up some stuff...And Finally BACK ON!!!DJPop wrote:
+Star
~General~
2 second lead in is too long
Remove “anime” from tags since BAT will add that when they rank it.
Preview point here: 01:10:573 (although this is just my own preference, there’s nothing wrong with the current one )
~Easy~
00:19:168 (1) – shorten this note and make it end at 00:19:654
00:19:979 – add a note here
00:27:600 (4) - shorten and end at 00:28:411
Normal and Hard look good to me ^_^
~Twinkle twinkle little star~
2 second lead in is too long
Remove “anime” from tags since BAT will add that when they rank it.
Preview point here: 01:10:573 (although this is just my own preference, there’s nothing wrong with the current one
) ~Easy~
00:19:168 (1) – shorten this note and make it end at 00:19:654
00:19:979 – add a note here
00:27:600 (4) - shorten and end at 00:28:411
Normal and Hard look good to me ^_^
~Twinkle twinkle little star~
Topic Starter
Thanks for your mod =DHaneii wrote:
~General~
2 second lead in is too long
~Easy~
00:19:168 (1) – shorten this note and make it end at 00:19:654 Its fine where it is.
00:19:979 – add a note here No.
00:27:600 (4) - shorten and end at 00:28:411 No...But i did rearrange it to something alot better (that i should've noticed)
Normal and Hard look good to me ^_^
~Twinkle twinkle little star~
Hii Zetsubou
[Easy]:
00:19:168- spacing (1 grid)
00:27:600- This slider end here: 00:28:898
00:38:465 (2,3)- This is not very difficult to be Easy? o.O...recommend changing these circles by slider
00:50:141 (4,5)- ^
00:58:735 (1,2)- ^
01:21:925 (2,3)- ^
01:23:222 (2,3)- ^
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The other difficulties are well... +Star
PS: Thanks for your modding ^^'
[Easy]:
00:19:168- spacing (1 grid)
00:27:600- This slider end here: 00:28:898
00:38:465 (2,3)- This is not very difficult to be Easy? o.O...recommend changing these circles by slider
00:50:141 (4,5)- ^
00:58:735 (1,2)- ^
01:21:925 (2,3)- ^
01:23:222 (2,3)- ^
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The other difficulties are well... +Star
PS: Thanks for your modding ^^'
Topic Starter
vivere wrote:
Hii Zetsubou
[Easy]:
00:19:168- spacing (1 grid)
00:27:600- This slider end here: 00:28:898
00:38:465 (2,3)- This is not very difficult to be Easy? o.O...recommend changing these circles by slider
00:50:141 (4,5)- ^
00:58:735 (1,2)- ^
01:21:925 (2,3)- ^
01:23:222 (2,3)- ^
^ All these are fine...No Changes were required..
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The other difficulties are well... +Star
PS: Thanks for your modding ^^'
Thanks for your mod.
looks all fine~
star~
star~
Hi!~
Remember these are just suggestions you can always ignore
~All Diffs~
- It would be better if you delete the audio of the video...
~Easy~
- I don't really like those fast 1/2 notes like 00:38:465 (2,3), it makes the map harder than it should be, imo the beat changes are enough.
00:15:276 (2,3,4,5) - Uh... Call me a pervert but... wow, I lol'd xD
00:27:600 (4) - This slider sounds a lot better imo if you finish it 1/1 later (00:28:898).
01:00:196 (5) - Finish the slider 1/2 later? (01:01:979).
~Normal~
- Feels more like a Hard, specially on the end of the chorus and end of the song, so many 1/2 streams D:
00:05:871 (2) - Finish this slider 1/2 later? (00:07:006)
00:27:600 (4) - Finish this slider 1/2 later? (00:28:898)
~Hard~
- Holy crap that AR, I would decrease it, it doesn't fit at all imo, if not, at least decrease Overall Difficulty 1-2 ticks? Or just... rename to Insane? :U
00:05:871 (6) - The endpoint sounds kinda weird, it doesn't fall on any strong beat, I'd end it on 00:06:681, but it still feels a bit empty imo, maybe you can make 2 sliders or something else? :3
00:12:033 (3) - Replace this with a spinner? It sounds better imo oxo (and finish it at 00:13:492)
00:44:465 (5) - Move back to the blue tick.
01:09:925 (5) - Flip this slider horizontally to make the reverse arrow totally visible.
01:14:627 (6) - I don't think these repeated sliders fit the song >:
01:19:979 (7) - ^
Looks nice, maybe too much linear formations (I'm a symmetry lovah, y'know), but it does look well so I'm not complaining about it :3
Good Luck!!
Remember these are just suggestions you can always ignore
~All Diffs~
- It would be better if you delete the audio of the video...
~Easy~
- I don't really like those fast 1/2 notes like 00:38:465 (2,3), it makes the map harder than it should be, imo the beat changes are enough.
00:15:276 (2,3,4,5) - Uh... Call me a pervert but... wow, I lol'd xD
00:27:600 (4) - This slider sounds a lot better imo if you finish it 1/1 later (00:28:898).
01:00:196 (5) - Finish the slider 1/2 later? (01:01:979).
~Normal~
- Feels more like a Hard, specially on the end of the chorus and end of the song, so many 1/2 streams D:
00:05:871 (2) - Finish this slider 1/2 later? (00:07:006)
00:27:600 (4) - Finish this slider 1/2 later? (00:28:898)
~Hard~
- Holy crap that AR, I would decrease it, it doesn't fit at all imo, if not, at least decrease Overall Difficulty 1-2 ticks? Or just... rename to Insane? :U
00:05:871 (6) - The endpoint sounds kinda weird, it doesn't fall on any strong beat, I'd end it on 00:06:681, but it still feels a bit empty imo, maybe you can make 2 sliders or something else? :3
00:12:033 (3) - Replace this with a spinner? It sounds better imo oxo (and finish it at 00:13:492)
00:44:465 (5) - Move back to the blue tick.
01:09:925 (5) - Flip this slider horizontally to make the reverse arrow totally visible.
01:14:627 (6) - I don't think these repeated sliders fit the song >:
01:19:979 (7) - ^
Looks nice, maybe too much linear formations (I'm a symmetry lovah, y'know), but it does look well so I'm not complaining about it :3
Good Luck!!
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