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MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2009-11-01T10:17:35+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2009년 12월 23일 수요일 at 오후 3:49:29

Artist: Clazziquai
Title: Come to Me
Source: Clazziquai 1st Album [Instant Pig]
Tags: DJMAX Alex Horan DJ Clazzi DJClazzi Instant Pig
BPM: 125
Filesize: 17950kb
Play Time: 01:38
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.01 stars, 75 notes)
Hard (4.71 stars, 294 notes)
Normal (2.61 stars, 109 notes)

Download: Clazziquai - Come to Me
Download: Clazziquai - Come to Me (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Clazziquai's song in DJMAX Series >w<~

Composed by DJ Clazzi
Visualized by Sara, Z_B
Vocal by Horan, Alex

~ For the DJMAX Project ~

11 / 27 BG is changed better one. so please re-download this map :3

~~- Play skin is working in progress~~
my computer is broken, so i should give up play skin orz

Last edited by MoonFragrance 2009-12-23T06:49:43+00:00, edited 32 times in total.

Lokamp

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Lokamp 2009-11-02T12:16:50+00:00

Easy
00:28:036 (1,1) - break time between these sliders
01:02:068 (1,2) - move these sliders 5 squares left

Normal
00:13:000 (2,3,4) - check spacing...

Hard
00:13:000 (4,5,6) - like on normal...

Good job! Star'd :3

askerlate47

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askerlate47 2009-11-02T12:36:58+00:00

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MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2009-11-02T12:40:03+00:00

fixed >w<~

Tanmak

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Tanmak 2009-11-02T13:10:10+00:00

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Andrea

Beatmap Nominator

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Andrea 2009-11-03T14:26:47+00:00

Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

All seems fine.

[Easy]

00:13:096 (1) - This spinner is hard for an easy map.

[Normal]

00:13:096 (1) - Too hard for a normal, too.
00:16:036 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:16:084 (2) - New combo.
00:20:020 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:20:092 (2) - New combo.
00:24:004 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:24:052 (2) - New combo.

[Hard]

Lead-In : 2 seconds minimum.

01:25:024 (1) - End this 1/4 forward.

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2009-11-03T14:42:07+00:00

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Gothic_old

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Gothic_old 2009-11-04T13:31:53+00:00

☆

Ra-s

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Ra-s 2009-11-04T13:32:01+00:00

Star~~

Zekira

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Zekira 2009-11-07T11:38:25+00:00

Offset: 8449 (a bit uncertain though... I also get 8446 often)

Other than that, that's it for now.

anonymous_old

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Here since the beginning

anonymous_old 2009-11-08T02:27:41+00:00

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Armin

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Armin 2009-11-10T16:29:29+00:00

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Nakata Yuji

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Nakata Yuji 2009-11-10T22:43:58+00:00

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Nakagawa-Kanon

Featured Artist

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Joined March 2009

Nakagawa-Kanon 2009-11-13T12:59:12+00:00

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EEeee

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Joined July 2008

EEeee 2009-11-14T01:20:31+00:00

Wow, nice vid

Overall
make offset 769, it won't hurt anything

Easy
00:13:096 (1) - make this end on the next white tick

Normal
00:13:096 (1) - do the same thing like in Easy, imho it sounds really awesome making it end on the next white tick
01:25:024 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/264 fix these, it sounds better like in that link

Hard
01:27:064 (4) - fix this, make slider end on red tick, and add note (example:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/265)
wow, this did kicks ass

blissfulyoshi

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blissfulyoshi 2009-11-14T01:51:01+00:00

Y is your offset so negative?

Easy:
Normal mod:
00:59:089 (1) - too close to the previous note

Timing section mod:
01:10:12 - unneeded timing section
01:17:56 - ^
01:25:24 - make a quarter note earlier

Normal:
Combo mod:
00:35:449 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2
00:57:889 (6) - d a new combo to be consistent with 00:50:689 (1)

Timing section mod:
01:17:56 - ^
01:25:24 - make a quarter note earlier

Hard:
Combo mod:
00:13:009 (4) - add a new combado to be consistent with 00:08:689 (1)
00:33:649 (1) - remove new combo to follow your pattern for combos
00:37:249 (1) - ^
00:39:049 (10,1) - remove 1's new combo and a new combo to 10 to be consistent with 00:23:569 (1)
01:00:049 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with your previous combos

Timing section mod:
01:17:56 - make a quarter note earlier
01:17:32 - unneeded timing section

---
Nice map. Star.

DJPop

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Here since the beginning

DJPop 2009-11-15T02:21:38+00:00

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arien666

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arien666 2009-11-27T13:19:54+00:00

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Kytoxid

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Kytoxid 2009-11-27T19:11:40+00:00

[Easy]

00:28:036 (1) - Starting a note on the off-beat might be a little hard to hit for Easy.

Some parts of the song felt really empty, like the section just before Kiai. Maybe have some more notes in general.

[Normal]

00:12:028 (1,2,3,4) - The pattern on this combo is a bit hard to read.
01:35:092 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - Follows the music, but the music is quite unpredictable (although it's a nice solo)...

[Hard]

Very easy to lose track of the beat again in the jazz section. I also thought some beats were a bit hard to hit, such as 00:08:020 (2,1), as it's hard to predict when 2 will end.

Was nice overall though, star~

Mystearica

Mystearica 2009-11-28T00:06:44+00:00

I only played about 20 seconds of the hardest difficulty before I gave up, I honestly have no idea what your rhythm is about.

I'm sorry but I cannot mod this.

Leorda

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Joined June 2009

Leorda 2009-11-28T00:55:00+00:00

[Hard]
00:13:729 (6) - Delete this object

However, If I don't like this song, but is fun to play
STAR

al2e10

1,101 posts

Joined August 2008

al2e10 2009-11-28T05:48:43+00:00

By AL2e10's Mod queue

[Hard]
01:34:789 (6,7) Too far.

[Normal]
00:35:089 (2,3) Too far.
01:27:649 (2,3) Too close.

[Easy]
No problem !!

[All]
Good map !!
Star !!

Dusty

870 posts

Joined June 2009

Dusty 2009-11-28T06:41:01+00:00

Jazz. I like it.

Your hitsounds are a little too quiet, I think.

[Hard]
01:27:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1) - Too much Normal whistle in the solo section. (Also, it was a little confusing, maybe turn off distance snap and exaggerate the spacing a little bit?)
01:34:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Weird looking.
01:40:060 (1) - Silenced spinners... I don't like them, really.

Mashley

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Joined September 2008

Mashley 2009-11-30T17:55:08+00:00

Easy
Fine

Normal
00:59:008 (1,5) - Really not sure about this overlap. I suggest changing it somehow.
01:36:040 (1,2) - 1/4 earlier seems to work better for these notes.

Hard
00:24:052 (3) - Lengthen by 1/4
00:28:036 (2) - ^

Uh this map is okay...

Fuuko

486 posts

Joined June 2009

Fuuko 2009-12-01T09:05:26+00:00

Fuuko's mod dekimashita!~ <3'

Easy:

0:10:129 (2); Reduce this 1/2 beat.Everything else is okay. Star. :3

Diasios

3,966 posts

Joined August 2008

Diasios 2009-12-02T13:56:52+00:00

Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

Offset = 770 (resnap all notes)

[Easy]

It's ok

[Normal]

00:12:028 (1) - try this...

00:35:032 (3) - ^

[Hard]

00:04:060 (3) - Repeat this slider one more time
00:12:028 (3) - ^
01:16:036 (8) - New combo

Starred~

Vanmonky

986 posts

Joined June 2009

Vanmonky 2009-12-02T22:59:45+00:00

As your request.

[Hard]
01:28:096 (8) - Move forward one 1/4 tick.
01:29:008 - Add a note here.
01:29:020 (10) - Move backward one 1/4 tick. Make this shorter one 1/4 tick.

I don't see anymore mistake. Star.

arkiandruski

31 posts

Joined February 2009

arkiandruski 2009-12-04T21:42:26+00:00

Alright, it looks okay. Some things to consider

Easy:

I agree with the person that said it's a bit sparse. You may be able to fill those spaces more

00:59:008 (1) - prep this note.
01:09:088 (1) - Same here. Either turn the previous note into a 1/2 beat slider or add another note on the beat.

Normal:

00:11:080 (3) - Consider having this slider return. It ends rather abruptly.
00:39:004 (3) - This slider feels out of place. I'd lengthen it to 1/4 beat and put it on the downbeat before. Have it repeat so it lasts a measure, or the ball hits 5 times.
00:48:028 (1) - Consider filling the space before this note.

I'd rewrite the stuff after the break. It's awkward and doesn't follow the trumpet solo or the backbeat very well. Listen again and find the notes that feel the strongest. They may not always be the louder notes.

Hard

00:04:012 (2) - Same comment as normal.
00:22:096 (7) - Okay, I know this is a Hard map, but this note is messing with a pattern that's been established. It might be more annoying than clever.

Hope that helps. Have a star.

NoHitter

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NoHitter 2009-12-05T09:09:28+00:00

Overall
Delete the .osb file

Easy
Good

Normal
00:36:530 (2) - Slider doesn't look "clean".
01:25:250 (1,2,3,6) - ^

Hard
01:29:210 (9) - This slider breaks the pattern; all other sliders before it were either straight or curved.

And I'm not sure how you mapped the last part...1:36:410 ->

Leorda

4,416 posts

Joined June 2009

Leorda 2009-12-05T11:45:16+00:00

Hayonghaseyo!!

[Easy]
00:12:290 (1) - No new combo
01:02:210 (x) - Place note here with finish hitsound

[Normal]
00:23:810 (x) - Place note here
00:50:690 (1) - No new combo
00:54:530 (1) - ^
00:57:890 (1) - ^
01:26:210 (2) - Ugly slider..... Change it

[Hard]
00:44:450 (1) - Delete this object

jericho2442

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jericho2442 2009-12-06T01:41:58+00:00

[Normal]

01:35:093 (5,1,2) - feels out of time move 1 timing tick back on all these notes

everything else if fine, good job

have a star

kino77

909 posts

Joined March 2009

kino77 2009-12-08T08:06:52+00:00

Hihi~

[Easy]
Fine~

[Normal]
00:13:096 (1) - End here 00:15:65?
00:20:069 (x) - Add a note here?
00:44:045 (x) - Why not a note here?

[Hard]
Fine~

STAR~!

Yes_old

525 posts

Joined May 2009

Yes_old 2009-12-09T02:39:31+00:00

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Nharox

884 posts

Joined February 2008

Nharox 2009-12-12T19:22:39+00:00

Bright combo colours + Kiai time = bad, but it doesn't last that long and the map is easy to read so it's not a problem~

[Hard]

01:25:250 (1) - You should let the spinner end on the white tick 01:26:690.

[Easy] & [Normal] are fine. Great map overall.

MoonFragrance

1,929 posts

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Topic Starter

MoonFragrance 2009-12-14T01:26:30+00:00

Fixed :3

Leorda wrote:
[Hard]
00:44:450 (1) - Delete this object

why it's important? @_@

Mok

1,226 posts

Joined August 2009

Mok 2009-12-14T17:46:29+00:00

Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
I'll just mod the beats in your map, in all its forms, will not tell you to add or remove the beat <3
Remember to fix spacing after all modfiy :3

[General]
It's ok!

[Easy]
00:20:930 (1) 2/4 before.
00:24:770 (1) ^
00:28:370 (1) ^

[Normal]
Seems fine ^^

[Hard]
00:01:490 (3) 2/4 after.
00:18:290 (5) 2/4 before.

And that's all for your map! hope you will ask me agai for other maps-modding x3! Starred

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2009-12-15T01:44:39+00:00

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Luneko

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Luneko 2009-12-16T17:33:18+00:00

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MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2009-12-17T10:51:00+00:00

KillerRind wrote:
-Easy-
00:17:690 - Add note?

it will be hard for easy, so i reject it <_<
thank you to like my map, but no kudosu. sorry ;_;

Shulin

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Joined August 2009

Shulin 2009-12-17T13:51:05+00:00

Easy:

Perfect.

Normal:

01:02:068 (2) - New combo?
01:28:096 (5) - ^
01:30:076 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:33:040 (10) - New combo?

Hard:

Audio lead in 2 seconds. (Maybe 2.5?)

01:28:061 (7) - New combo?
01:36:065 (2) - Extend slider to 01:37:010
01:37:013 (3,4) - If you do ^ move forward one tick? [You did this in Normal and it sounds better]
01:38:009 (5) - Delete if you did ^

That's all, needs ranking

~ Star

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2009-12-18T05:56:02+00:00

fixed ;3

Lissette

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Lissette 2009-12-19T02:15:15+00:00

Hard
00:22:097 (7) - move to the prev white tick, and add note here 00:23:009
00:50:045 (1) - move to prev blue tick, and repeat one more

Star

GladiOol

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GladiOol 2009-12-19T12:11:55+00:00

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Gens

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Gens 2009-12-19T23:14:09+00:00

Very good job, couldn't find anything. The last trumpet part is kind of confusing, but I guess it isn't your fault.

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2009-12-20T09:15:13+00:00

Lissette wrote:
Hard
00:22:097 (7) - move to the prev white tick, and add note here 00:23:009
- fixed :3

00:50:045 (1) - move to prev blue tick, and repeat one more
- i know it's on melody, but it will be too complex if i fix it D:

thanks for modding Lissette

and thanks for star Gladi, Gens XD

Crazy Jay

482 posts

Joined October 2008

Crazy Jay 2009-12-20T09:40:29+00:00

[Hard]
00:30:290(6,7,8) - Too close between the notes,I know it's in distance spacing,but this arrangement seems that they're streams,may be you can change the slide into notes.
01:28:970(8) - distance snap

nice map
+star

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2009-12-20T10:08:35+00:00

Crazy Jay wrote:
[Hard]
00:30:290(6,7,8) - Too close between the notes,I know it's in distance spacing,but this arrangement seems that they're streams,may be you can change the slide into notes.
- rejected, i think sliders are more fitter on this part

01:28:970(8) - distance snap
- fixed :3

thank you for modding XD

Teara

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Teara 2009-12-22T11:25:42+00:00

[Easy]

No problems~!

[Normal]

I didnt like the spacing on the end~
01:37:729 (5) - <^ maybe place under (4) =p

Otherwise nice

[Hard]

Nice =p

~

Star

MoonFragrance

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MoonFragrance 2009-12-23T06:49:38+00:00

fixed

bmin11

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bmin11 2009-12-25T01:34:44+00:00

딱히 눈에 띄는건 없네요. 그런데 탄막님이 만드신 Here in the Moment에 쓰이는 노말 히트사운드가 들어가는게 어떨까요? 아님 소프트로 이름만 바꿔도 되구요. 듣기에 더 좋을것 같아서요.
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MoonFragrance