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Clazziquai - Come to Me

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Andrea
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Andrea
Mod Info's:

Green: Suggestions, you don't have to fix, your choice.
Orange: You don't have to fix too, but is better if you do it.
Red: You have to fix this for sure!

Starts Suggestions:

All seems fine.

[Easy]

00:13:096 (1) - This spinner is hard for an easy map.

[Normal]

00:13:096 (1) - Too hard for a normal, too.
00:16:036 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:16:084 (2) - New combo.
00:20:020 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:20:092 (2) - New combo.
00:24:004 (1) - Remove new combo.
00:24:052 (2) - New combo.

[Hard]

Lead-In : 2 seconds minimum.

01:25:024 (1) - End this 1/4 forward.
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
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Gothic_old
265 posts
Joined June 2009
Gothic_old
☆
Ra-s
1,289 posts
Joined May 2009
Ra-s
Star~~
Zekira
9,233 posts
Joined September 2008
Zekira
Offset: 8449 (a bit uncertain though... I also get 8446 often)

Other than that, that's it for now.
anonymous_old
0 posts
Here since the beginning
anonymous_old
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Armin
osu! Alumni
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Joined May 2009
Armin
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Nakata Yuji
471 posts
Joined April 2009
Nakata Yuji
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Nakagawa-Kanon
Featured Artist
1,893 posts
Joined March 2009
Nakagawa-Kanon
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EEeee
1,026 posts
Joined July 2008
EEeee
Wow, nice vid

Overall
make offset 769, it won't hurt anything

Easy
00:13:096 (1) - make this end on the next white tick

Normal
00:13:096 (1) - do the same thing like in Easy, imho it sounds really awesome making it end on the next white tick
01:25:024 (1,2) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/264 fix these, it sounds better like in that link :P

Hard
01:27:064 (4) - fix this, make slider end on red tick, and add note (example:http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/265)
wow, this did kicks ass
blissfulyoshi
osu! Alumni
4,755 posts
Joined July 2008
blissfulyoshi
Y is your offset so negative?

Easy:
Normal mod:
00:59:089 (1) - too close to the previous note

Timing section mod:
01:10:12 - unneeded timing section
01:17:56 - ^
01:25:24 - make a quarter note earlier

Normal:
Combo mod:
00:35:449 (1,2) - remove 1's new combo and add a new combo to 2
00:57:889 (6) - d a new combo to be consistent with 00:50:689 (1)

Timing section mod:
01:17:56 - ^
01:25:24 - make a quarter note earlier

Hard:
Combo mod:
00:13:009 (4) - add a new combado to be consistent with 00:08:689 (1)
00:33:649 (1) - remove new combo to follow your pattern for combos
00:37:249 (1) - ^
00:39:049 (10,1) - remove 1's new combo and a new combo to 10 to be consistent with 00:23:569 (1)
01:00:049 (1) - remove new combo to be consistent with your previous combos

Timing section mod:
01:17:56 - make a quarter note earlier
01:17:32 - unneeded timing section

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Nice map. Star.
DJPop
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3,549 posts
Here since the beginning
DJPop
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arien666
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Joined May 2009
arien666
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Kytoxid
osu! Alumni
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Joined April 2009
Kytoxid
[Easy]

00:28:036 (1) - Starting a note on the off-beat might be a little hard to hit for Easy.

Some parts of the song felt really empty, like the section just before Kiai. Maybe have some more notes in general.

[Normal]

00:12:028 (1,2,3,4) - The pattern on this combo is a bit hard to read.
01:35:092 (5,1,2,3,4,5) - Follows the music, but the music is quite unpredictable (although it's a nice solo)...

[Hard]

Very easy to lose track of the beat again in the jazz section. I also thought some beats were a bit hard to hit, such as 00:08:020 (2,1), as it's hard to predict when 2 will end.

Was nice overall though, star~
Mystearica
Mystearica
I only played about 20 seconds of the hardest difficulty before I gave up, I honestly have no idea what your rhythm is about.

I'm sorry but I cannot mod this.
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
[Hard]
00:13:729 (6) - Delete this object

However, If I don't like this song, but is fun to play
STAR
al2e10
1,101 posts
Joined August 2008
al2e10
By AL2e10's Mod queue

[Hard]
01:34:789 (6,7) Too far.

[Normal]
00:35:089 (2,3) Too far.
01:27:649 (2,3) Too close.

[Easy]
No problem !!

[All]
Good map !!
Star !!
Dusty
870 posts
Joined June 2009
Dusty
Jazz. I like it.

Your hitsounds are a little too quiet, I think.

[Hard]
01:27:016 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,1) - Too much Normal whistle in the solo section. (Also, it was a little confusing, maybe turn off distance snap and exaggerate the spacing a little bit?)
01:34:012 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - Weird looking.
01:40:060 (1) - Silenced spinners... I don't like them, really.
Mashley
2,042 posts
Joined September 2008
Mashley
Easy
Fine

Normal
00:59:008 (1,5) - Really not sure about this overlap. I suggest changing it somehow.
01:36:040 (1,2) - 1/4 earlier seems to work better for these notes.

Hard
00:24:052 (3) - Lengthen by 1/4
00:28:036 (2) - ^

Uh this map is okay...
Fuuko
486 posts
Joined June 2009
Fuuko
Fuuko's mod dekimashita!~ <3'

Easy:


0:10:129 (2); Reduce this 1/2 beat.Everything else is okay. Star. :3
Diasios
3,966 posts
Joined August 2008
Diasios
Mod Infos:

Green: Suggestions.
Orange: I think you should fix this.
Red: You must fix this.

Start Suggestions:

Offset = 770 (resnap all notes)

[Easy]

It's ok

[Normal]

00:12:028 (1) - try this...

00:35:032 (3) - ^

[Hard]

00:04:060 (3) - Repeat this slider one more time
00:12:028 (3) - ^
01:16:036 (8) - New combo

Starred~
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
As your request.

[Hard]
01:28:096 (8) - Move forward one 1/4 tick.
01:29:008 - Add a note here.
01:29:020 (10) - Move backward one 1/4 tick. Make this shorter one 1/4 tick.

I don't see anymore mistake. Star.
arkiandruski
31 posts
Joined February 2009
arkiandruski
Alright, it looks okay. Some things to consider

Easy:

I agree with the person that said it's a bit sparse. You may be able to fill those spaces more

00:59:008 (1) - prep this note.
01:09:088 (1) - Same here. Either turn the previous note into a 1/2 beat slider or add another note on the beat.

Normal:

00:11:080 (3) - Consider having this slider return. It ends rather abruptly.
00:39:004 (3) - This slider feels out of place. I'd lengthen it to 1/4 beat and put it on the downbeat before. Have it repeat so it lasts a measure, or the ball hits 5 times.
00:48:028 (1) - Consider filling the space before this note.

I'd rewrite the stuff after the break. It's awkward and doesn't follow the trumpet solo or the backbeat very well. Listen again and find the notes that feel the strongest. They may not always be the louder notes.

Hard

00:04:012 (2) - Same comment as normal.
00:22:096 (7) - Okay, I know this is a Hard map, but this note is messing with a pattern that's been established. It might be more annoying than clever.

Hope that helps. Have a star.
NoHitter
osu! Alumni
3,785 posts
Joined June 2009
NoHitter
Overall
Delete the .osb file

Easy
Good

Normal
00:36:530 (2) - Slider doesn't look "clean".
01:25:250 (1,2,3,6) - ^

Hard
01:29:210 (9) - This slider breaks the pattern; all other sliders before it were either straight or curved.

And I'm not sure how you mapped the last part...1:36:410 ->
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Leorda
Hayonghaseyo!!

[Easy]
00:12:290 (1) - No new combo
01:02:210 (x) - Place note here with finish hitsound

[Normal]
00:23:810 (x) - Place note here
00:50:690 (1) - No new combo
00:54:530 (1) - ^
00:57:890 (1) - ^
01:26:210 (2) - Ugly slider..... Change it

[Hard]
00:44:450 (1) - Delete this object
jericho2442
osu! Alumni
1,918 posts
Joined March 2009
jericho2442
[Normal]

01:35:093 (5,1,2) - feels out of time move 1 timing tick back on all these notes

everything else if fine, good job :)

have a star :)
kino77
909 posts
Joined March 2009
kino77
Hihi~

[Easy]
Fine~

[Normal]
00:13:096 (1) - End here 00:15:65?
00:20:069 (x) - Add a note here?
00:44:045 (x) - Why not a note here?

[Hard]
Fine~

STAR~!
Yes_old
525 posts
Joined May 2009
Yes_old
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Nharox
884 posts
Joined February 2008
Nharox
Bright combo colours + Kiai time = bad, but it doesn't last that long and the map is easy to read so it's not a problem~

[Hard]

01:25:250 (1) - You should let the spinner end on the white tick 01:26:690.

[Easy] & [Normal] are fine. Great map overall. :)
MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
Fixed :3

Leorda wrote:

[Hard]
00:44:450 (1) - Delete this object
why it's important? @_@
Mok
1,226 posts
Joined August 2009
Mok
Mod's Info:
Mine are all suggestions. You're free to follow or not this mod :3
I'll just mod the beats in your map, in all its forms, will not tell you to add or remove the beat <3
Remember to fix spacing after all modfiy :3

[General]
It's ok!

[Easy]
00:20:930 (1) 2/4 before.
00:24:770 (1) ^
00:28:370 (1) ^

[Normal]
Seems fine ^^

[Hard]
00:01:490 (3) 2/4 after.
00:18:290 (5) 2/4 before.

And that's all for your map! hope you will ask me agai for other maps-modding x3! Starred
MoonFragrance
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MoonFragrance
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Luneko
842 posts
Joined June 2009
Luneko
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MoonFragrance
1,929 posts
Joined April 2009
Topic Starter
MoonFragrance

KillerRind wrote:

-Easy-
00:17:690 - Add note?
it will be hard for easy, so i reject it <_<
thank you to like my map, but no kudosu. sorry ;_;
Shulin
1,333 posts
Joined August 2009
Shulin
Easy:

Perfect.

Normal:

01:02:068 (2) - New combo?
01:28:096 (5) - ^
01:30:076 (1) - Remove new combo?
01:33:040 (10) - New combo?

Hard:

Audio lead in 2 seconds. (Maybe 2.5?)

01:28:061 (7) - New combo?
01:36:065 (2) - Extend slider to 01:37:010
01:37:013 (3,4) - If you do ^ move forward one tick? [You did this in Normal and it sounds better]
01:38:009 (5) - Delete if you did ^

That's all, needs ranking :D

~ Star
MoonFragrance
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MoonFragrance
fixed ;3
Lissette
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Joined July 2008
Lissette
Hard
00:22:097 (7) - move to the prev white tick, and add note here 00:23:009
00:50:045 (1) - move to prev blue tick, and repeat one more

Star
GladiOol
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Joined August 2008
GladiOol
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Gens
osu! Alumni
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Joined August 2008
Gens
Very good job, couldn't find anything. The last trumpet part is kind of confusing, but I guess it isn't your fault. :)
MoonFragrance
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MoonFragrance

Lissette wrote:

Hard
00:22:097 (7) - move to the prev white tick, and add note here 00:23:009
- fixed :3

00:50:045 (1) - move to prev blue tick, and repeat one more
- i know it's on melody, but it will be too complex if i fix it D:
thanks for modding Lissette :)
and thanks for star Gladi, Gens XD
Crazy Jay
482 posts
Joined October 2008
Crazy Jay
[Hard]
00:30:290(6,7,8) - Too close between the notes,I know it's in distance spacing,but this arrangement seems that they're streams,may be you can change the slide into notes.
01:28:970(8) - distance snap

nice map
+star
MoonFragrance
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MoonFragrance

Crazy Jay wrote:

[Hard]
00:30:290(6,7,8) - Too close between the notes,I know it's in distance spacing,but this arrangement seems that they're streams,may be you can change the slide into notes.
- rejected, i think sliders are more fitter on this part :)

01:28:970(8) - distance snap
- fixed :3
thank you for modding XD
Teara
osu! Alumni
814 posts
Joined June 2009
Teara
[Easy]

No problems~!

[Normal]

I didnt like the spacing on the end~
01:37:729 (5) - <^ maybe place under (4) =p

Otherwise nice

[Hard]

Nice =p

~

Star
MoonFragrance
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MoonFragrance
fixed :)
bmin11
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Joined October 2008
bmin11
딱히 눈에 띄는건 없네요. 그런데 탄막님이 만드신 Here in the Moment에 쓰이는 노말 히트사운드가 들어가는게 어떨까요? 아님 소프트로 이름만 바꿔도 되구요. 듣기에 더 좋을것 같아서요.
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MoonFragrance
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Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
으음... 전 지금 이상태로도 괜찮은거 같네요. 게다가 뮤비 용량이 커서 히트 사운드까지 넣으면 감당이 안될듯 해서 ㄷㄷ
Ephemeral
Inland Empire
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Joined April 2009
Ephemeral
Everything looks in order.

Bubbled!
DeathxShinigami
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Joined November 2008
DeathxShinigami
And now...my blue star.
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
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Joined August 2008
Andrea
And now... Have a rank!
MoonFragrance
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Topic Starter
MoonFragrance
umm... i think this map should be categorized in Korean (Pop)
cuz this is not only in DJMAX but also Clazziquai's K-Pop
Vanmonky
986 posts
Joined June 2009
Vanmonky
Is this song in Clazziquai's K-Pop just the same (the length, lyrics, video, etc) with the DJMAX version?
K a Y e
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Joined September 2011
K a Y e
Great Map!~
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