1. Easy (1.58 stars, 77 notes)
2. Hard (4.83 stars, 227 notes)
3. Lunatic (4.99 stars, 317 notes)
4. Normal (3.19 stars, 124 notes)

1. 00:40:195 (4) - remove
2. 00:45:070 (3,4) - reverse the note and the slider
3. 00:49:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - like
   
   00:54:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

• 00:45:070 (3,4,5,6) - like
  
  

1. 01:25:580 (1,2,3,4) - the short slider is so close to the spinner before

1. 01:31:195 (5,1) - toooooo close
2. 01:34:757 (4) - the turn-back does not fit here

Melophobia wrote:

Hello, thank you for your request^^


General

Title:
Tsuki ni Murakumo Hana ni Kaze fixed

offset:
Lunatic has extra offset, its unrankable
just remove red line on 00:00:000 - fixed


Audio lead-in for Hard and Insane is too short.
because those diffs are stating earlier than the others diffs fixed

Easy

hmm? no hitsound for between 00:25:570 and 00:34:570 ?
try to put some whistle fixed

00:37:570 (1) - finish to the beginning fixed
00:45:445 (4) - clap to the beginning fixed
00:46:570 (1) - following note is too early for Easy diff.
how about ending the spinner at 00:48:445 ? No. I did however removed the finish
if you change it dont forget to remove finish
00:49:570 (1) - finish to the beginning instead of clap fixed
00:52:570 (5) - ^ fixed
00:55:570 (3) - ^ fixed
01:00:070 (3) - remove a repeat then add note
2 repeats is very confusing It's not that confusing
01:03:070 (1) - finish to the beginning fixed
01:08:695 (6) - missing clap here fixed
01:13:570 (3) - ><
01:24:070 (1) - same as before fixed
although i dont know where it should end.. how about 01:26:320? it would be better i think. okay

Normal

try to put some whistle where i mentioned on Easy

00:01:570 (1) - whistle to the beginning fixed
00:03:070 (3) - ^ fixed
00:04:570 (1) - ^ fixed
00:06:070 (3) - ^ fixed
00:07:570 (1) - ^ fixed
00:09:070 (3) - ^ fixed
00:25:570 (1) - finish to the beginning fixed
00:34:570 (1) - same as i mentioned on Easy fixed hopefully
00:34:570 (1) - this should end at 00:36:820 - fixed
00:43:570 (1) - ><
00:49:570 (1) - finish to the beginning instead of clap I decided to add both instead
00:52:570 (1) - ^ I decided to add both instead
00:55:570 (1) - ^ I decided to add both instead
01:00:070 (1) - remove clap fixed
01:19:570 (4) - missing clap on reverse of this slider fixed
01:21:070 (1) - remove clap fixed

Hard

add some whistle this difficulty as well

00:01:570 (3) - whistle fixed
00:03:070 (7) - whistle to the beginning fixed
00:04:570 (1) - ^ fixed
00:06:070 (4) - ^ fixed
00:07:570 (1) - ^ fixed
00:09:070 (5) - whistle fixed
00:10:569 (4) - ^ fixed
00:25:570 (1) - finish to the beginning fixed
00:27:070 (5,1) - spacing is too close fixed
00:28:382 (1) - remove newcombo nope
00:28:570 (2) - add newcombo nope
00:30:257 (7) - add newcombo fixed
00:31:195 (1) - remove newcombo nope
00:31:570 (3) - add newcombo nope
00:33:070 (7) - add newcombo fixed
00:37:570 (1) - finish to the beginning fixed
00:49:570 (1) - finish to the beginning instead of clap I decided to add both instead
00:52:570 (1) - ^ I decided to add both instead
00:55:570 (1) - ^ I decided to add both instead
00:57:257 (5) - add newcombo nope
01:01:569 (9) - remove clap fixed
01:06:070 (1) - finish to the beginning Nope
01:07:570 (5) - ^ and add newcombo here nope
01:09:070 (1) - finish to the beginning fixed
01:10:570 (5) - add newcombo nope
01:15:070 (1) - finish to the beginning fixed
01:16:382 (1) - remove newcombo fixed
01:16:570 (2) - add newcombo fixed
01:18:070 (1) - finish to the beginning Nope
01:22:570 (5) - add newcombo Nope

Insane
unfortunately, need to uniform the break time now..
so you should delete notes between 00:13:570 and 00:25:382 (8) - NEVER! bwahahahaha.

00:08:695 (6) - newcombo here? YES!
00:33:445 (8) - add newcombo fixed
00:37:570 (1) - finish to the beginning fixed
00:40:382 (8) - stack with (5) fixed
00:44:882 (3) - newcombo fixed
00:49:570 (1) - add finish to the beginning instead of clap I decided to add both instead
00:52:570 (1) - ^ I decided to add both instead
00:55:570 (1) - ^ I decided to add both instead
00:57:257 (5) - newcombo fixed
01:00:070 (3) - newcombo fixed
01:06:070 (1) - finish to the beginning nope
01:10:570 (7) - newcombo fixed
01:18:070 (1) - finish to the beginning nope
01:21:070 (1) - ^ fixed
01:22:195 (3) - finish to the end nope
01:31:195 (5,1) - spacing is too close and very confusing I agree. I decided to mirror the whole combo.

good luck!^^

kjwkjw wrote:

Requested a mod4mod so here you go! (PS hi, fellow FFRer xD)

*[?]'s are simply suggestions.

[Easy]
00:45:445 (4) - clap nope
01:03:070 (1) - finish [?] fixed

[Normal]
00:34:570 (1) - would be fine to end the spinner at 00:36:820 since the song picks its pace up there. Considering this is a Normal difficulty, it'd also give players time to get ready for the next note. fixed
01:09:070 (1,2) - I'd say keep the clapsounds the way you had them for the sections before; seems strange with all those claps all of a sudden. Nope, but I might change it. I'll wait till someone else notices.
01:27:070 - slider velocity 0.75x [?] (may need to change spacing as well) Agreed, but I'll change it later though.

[Hard]
00:51:632 (6) - space this away from the previous hitcircle (a suggestion since you stacked notes that are only half a beat apart right before this section) Nah
00:54:632 (6) - ^ same as above
01:07:570 (5) - slider seems slightly offscreen It's off grid doesn't means that it's off screen. Play test it.
01:15:820 (3) - ^ same as above
01:27:070 - slider velocity 0.75x [?] Agreed, but I'll change it later though.

[Lunatic]
00:55:570 (1) - finish sounds to the cymbal crash [?]
00:56:132 (2) - ^ [?]
00:56:882 (4) - ^ [?]
00:57:820 (7) - ^ [?]
00:58:195 (9) - ^ [?]
01:21:070 (1) - ^
01:22:570 (3) - ^
01:24:070 (8) - ^ (the first five are just suggestions, but the last three you should definitely consider adding) Nope
01:31:570 (1) - space this further away like you did for the previous comboes. Melophobia's mod said the same thing. I just mirrored the whole combo instead.

Looks like a pretty solid map overall; good luck!

cmn_891127 wrote:

offset +5~10

Easy

1. 00:40:195 (4) - remove Fixed. I also removed 00:43:195 (6)
2. 00:45:070 (3,4) - reverse the note and the slider NO!
3. 00:49:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - like Nope, but i might reconsider.
   
   00:54:820 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ^

same as above

Normal

• 00:45:070 (3,4,5,6) - I did something simliar instead but not exactly like you suggested in the picture.
  
  

Hard

1. 01:25:580 (1,2,3,4) - the short slider is so close to the spinner before

I'll leave it for now, until I have something to counter this.

Lunatic

1. 01:31:195 (5,1) - toooooo close IMAO everyone who mod my map noticed it. I decided to mirror it for now.
2. 01:34:757 (4) - the turn-back does not fit here

Fixed

I realllllly love this song and the video~

M4M, my map link is http://osu.ppy.sh/s/42844 (I put a wrong link in your queue...)

Shana Aisaka wrote:

Hi ~

Red - Fix it.
Pink - Suggestion.

[General]
Nothing..

[Easy]
HP Drain - 1
Overall Difficult - 1
00:04:570(1) = 1 grid left
01:05:695(4) = 1 grid right
01:08:695(6) = add clap
01:23:695(4) = 1 grid down

[Normal]
00:07195(4) = 1 grid up

[Hard]
HP Drain Rate + 1
Approach Rate - 1
Overall Difficult + 1
00:55:195(5,6) = 1 grid right

[Lunatic]
HP Drain + 2
Overall Difficult + 2
00:13:560(1) = add finish
01:31:570(1) = spacing. ( It's too close. )
01:36:070(4) = 1 grid down.

Okay ! That's all.
Good Luck! >w<"

S h i a wrote:

Mod request via my queue~

[Overall]
Audio lead-in were 1004 in Easy and Normal.
Fix them in txt editor to 1500.(same with hard and lunatic) fixed

[Easy]
Very nice and easy. sweet


[Normal]
Change Inherited Points 00:00:070 to 00:01:570. fixed
00:09:070 (3) - better like this? fixed

SPOILER

00:25:570 (1,2,3) - make them looks better (you can try grid level 4) fixed?

SPOILER

01:21:070 (1) - try a better sharp? fixed

[Hard]
Change Inherited Points 00:00:070 to 00:00:820 fixed
00:02:320 (1) - new combo? (make this slider easier to read. fixed
00:27:070 (5) - suggest fixed

SPOILER

01:23:507 (1) - new combo? fixed

[Lunatic]
Useless Inherited Points 00:00:070 fixed
00:14:882 (6) - cute <3
00:30:070 (8) - sudden slider speed change.should add new combo. Nah
00:40:007 (1) - a new combo here will save 1 play count for me. lol Nope sorry

great map set. go go rank it

S h i o n wrote:

Hello.

Easy
00:54:820 (1) - Vocal doesn't start from here. The pause is very confusing in an Easy. I could probably think of something

Normal
00:43:570 (1) - How this slider repeats is so funny... It doesn't fit the vocal at all. I won't point out the same thing. I agree. I might fix that some how.

Hard
- You have too many combos more than 9. They might be a bit ugly, so you'd better try avoiding that. I'll fix that somehow
00:25:570 ~ 00:34:570 - Whistle please, do the same as the other diffs. fixed?


Lunatic
00:51:632 (6) - NC, because it will help players to read the rhythm of this stacked note. And lyric is cut here too. fixed
00:54:632 (6) - ^ fixed
01:07:195 (3) - Be wary of this. It's hidden by the previous slider. It is an ugly overlap and increase the chance to misread. i might fix that
01:27:632 (2,4) ~ End - Ahh,no. 1/2 spoils everything. This is really overmapped. We need slowdown because it's an ending part. Why not just follow the piano? I think I was half asleep when I mapped this part XD. I'll fix this later.

Map is fine , though you seem to spam 1/2s through the mapset.

wantuole wrote:

last day I say your map is stiff
now I find the problem
for example
diff『lun』00:01:382~00:02:320
It's 5 star, this star kill you creativity,
try too broken and also use ,like this http://puu.sh/hhp2
I think it's not stiff ,and this is fun
a lot place like this,neat and tidy. try use more idea
( sorry my eng is bad ,I can't express more clear)
It's not my modding ,only my think
hope rank soon, I like this song

212,336,3070,2,0,B|256:360|300:336,2,89.9999973177911,2|0|0
212,336,3820,1,2
152,264,4195,1,0

Combo1 : 0,128,64
Combo2 : 235,57,48
Combo3 : 0,64,128
Combo4 : 184,113,255

giO- wrote:

Hello from my mod queue~

Easy

00:03:820 - add note Nah
00:06:820 - ^ Nah
00:37:570 (1) - fix slider shape following those points http://puu.sh/hksI x:432 y:296, x:392 y:328 fixed
00:39:070 (3) - ^ http://puu.sh/hktb x:120 y:328, x:80 y:296 fixed
01:00:070 (5) - new combo Nah
01:07:945 (4,5,6) - replace those notes with 1 slider and 1 beat http://puu.sh/hkv7 and add clap at the slider end http://puu.sh/hkvs maybe
01:18:070 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - replace some note with some slider like previous suggestion maybe
01:29:320 - add note Nah
01:32:320 - ^ Nah


Normal

AR -1 Nope
OD -1 Nope

01:04:570 (7) - new combo Nah
01:10:007 (2) - remove 2 repeat and add note here 01:10:945 - Nah
01:16:570 (5) - new combo Nah
01:22:007 (2) - remove 2 repeat and add note here 01:22:945 - Nah


Hard

AR +1 looks better YES! Thank you ^_^

00:39:632 - add note No
01:28:007 (3) - delete this note maybe
01:29:507 (3) - delete this note too and move 01:29:320 (2) - to 01:29:132 - http://puu.sh/hkCn No
01:31:007 (3) - move to 01:31:101 - and 01:31:195 (4) - move to 01:31:382 - http://puu.sh/hkDx to follow music No
01:32:320 (2) - move to 01:32:132 - No
01:32:507 (3,4) - delete those 2 notes and replace with slider http://puu.sh/hkEO , sounds better No

of course fix spacing


Insane

Good~


Good luck~

l1106188 wrote:

Here are just suggestion ~OAO
If you do not like , you can skip it .
[General]
A file in the folder as this http://puu.sh/hl51
If you dosen't have SB , please remove it ~ Fixed

[Normal]
00:45:070 (3) - add NC ?! Nah
[Hard]
00:03:070 (4,5,6) - like this ?! http://puu.sh/hkZV

212,336,3070,2,0,B|256:360|300:336,2,89.9999973177911,2|0|0
212,336,3820,1,2
152,264,4195,1,0

Fixed
01:04:007 (4) - 1 grid right ? Fixed
01:04:757 (1) - 1 grid right ? Fixed

[Lunatic]
00:21:632 (4,1) - get it cover (1) ?! Nah
Good song!!
sorry to my poor English
[Easy] I can't find any suggestion

BeatofIke wrote:

wantuole wrote:

last day I say your map is stiff
now I find the problem
for example
diff『lun』00:01:382~00:02:320
It's 5 star, this star kill you creativity,
try too broken and also use ,like this http://puu.sh/hhp2
I think it's not stiff ,and this is fun
a lot place like this,neat and tidy. try use more idea
( sorry my eng is bad ,I can't express more clear)
It's not my modding ,only my think
hope rank soon, I like this song

I tried to be creative with this map, but it did feel right when I played the map. Maybe when it is used right, it can be interesting, but thanks for your suggestion.


Also what skin was that in that picture? I want it XD.

http://puu.sh/hok1
:3 here

Teru21 wrote:

hi i want m4m with you.. as you said on your queue, i mod your map first

i highly recommended to use touhou skin. i guess you have? i forgot where have i DL it, but if you wanna add this, go to song setup>storyboarding>skinning. there you go.. or....... you can insert the skin to your beatmap folder :3 its fit perfectly~ I don't have it

[General]
delete osb file on the beatmap if you aren't making SB Oh wow, I was wondering what OSB file is there for. I didn't know that it was used for storybording. Thank you ^_^ Fixed
try this colors?

Combo1 : 0,128,64 
Combo2 : 235,57,48
Combo3 : 0,64,128
Combo4 : 184,113,255

the combo 4 is yours
fixed

[Easy]
00:51:070 - fill this with slider? then add finish Nah
00:54:070 - ^ Nah
00:57:070 - ^ Nah
01:01:757 - add spinner till 01:02:695 Nah
01:09:070 (1) - http://postimage.org/image/kkd5bajq7/ fixed

[Normal]
01:20:695 (5,1) - swap combo nope
01:28:570 (3) - ctrl+h Nah

[Hard]
00:27:070 (5) - remove 1 reverse and end the slider here 00:27:632. it means, it will ended 00:28:195
01:30:820 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - why u put them like that? it will more tidy if you put the at the x:256 y:160

okay.. thats all my beatmap on your queue
GL and have my star~

1. Remove anime, game and japanese from the tags. Touhou is a video game, not an anime from what I know of. When this map gets ranked, this map will be categorized based on the song's genre and language. So, game and Japanese are not needed in the tags.
2. I'm not so confident about the video here. There is one scene that is nsfw... I'm not going to show it but I'm sure you know what it is. Well... either remove the video or find a way to censor that scene.

1. Add 15 to the offset. Which should be 95. That could be the correct timing. If it is, don't forget to resnap all the notes and resnap all the timing sections.

1. 00:25:570 (1)-Good idea to add a finish here.
2. 00:46:570 (1)-Perhaps add a finish here?
3. 01:06:070 (1)-Didn't shape the curve properly on this slider?
4. 01:13:570 (1)-I wouldn't recommend using a 1/1 kick-back slider for this Easy difficulty. Instead, use two 1/1 sliders and a note on 01:15:070. Here's the diagram.
5. 01:16:570 (4)-Instead of a 1/1 kick back slider, use 1/1 sliders. Here is a diagram for this also.
6. 01:17:070 (1)-Add a new combo here. Reason being is that there is a new combo glitch because of the spinner. Don't know why it's happening but it's showing...

1. Perhaps it's best to decrease the HP Drain Rate, Approach Rate and Overall Difficulty by one. I'm sure this Normal would play better that way.
2. 01:27:070 (1)-Same reason. A new combo glitch. Add a new combo in.

1. It's a good idea to decrease the Approach Rate by one. It's also a good idea to increase the HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty by one. That way, this Hard should play fine. (:
2. 00:34:570 (1)-Add a finish or a whistle?
3. 00:46:757 (1)-Add a finish?

1. Approach Rate 9 is a bit much in my opinion. ): You can keep it but know you, I don't find it really fitting. ._. It would be best if you decrease it by one. Also, the Overall Difficulty and HP Drain Rate are a bit low for an insane. xD It's a good idea to increase them by one.
2. 00:46:757 (1)-Add a finish?

Roddie wrote:

Hello.

General

1. Remove anime, game and japanese from the tags. Touhou is a video game, not an anime from what I know of. When this map gets ranked, this map will be categorized based on the song's genre and language. So, game and Japanese are not needed in the tags. fixed
2. I'm not so confident about the video here. There is one scene that is nsfw... I'm not going to show it but I'm sure you know what it is. Well... either remove the video or find a way to censor that scene.

I could probably think of something to censor it, although I don't have a video editing software XD.
Timing

1. Add 15 to the offset. Which should be 95. That could be the correct timing. If it is, don't forget to resnap all the notes and resnap all the timing sections.

It felt late when I tried this lol, so I just kept it as it is.

Easy

1. 00:25:570 (1)-Good idea to add a finish here. fixed
2. 00:46:570 (1)-Perhaps add a finish here? Nah
3. 01:06:070 (1)-Didn't shape the curve properly on this slider? okay fixed
4. 01:13:570 (1)-I wouldn't recommend using a 1/1 kick-back slider for this Easy difficulty. Instead, use two 1/1 sliders and a note on 01:15:070. Here's the diagram. fixed
5. 01:16:570 (4)-Instead of a 1/1 kick back slider, use 1/1 sliders. Here is a diagram for this also. I decided to do something else.
6. 01:17:070 (1)-Add a new combo here. Reason being is that there is a new combo glitch because of the spinner. Don't know why it's happening but it's showing...

You mean at 01:27:070? fixed hopefully.

Normal

1. Perhaps it's best to decrease the HP Drain Rate, Approach Rate and Overall Difficulty by one. I'm sure this Normal would play better that way. fixed
2. 01:27:070 (1)-Same reason. A new combo glitch. Add a new combo in.

fixed hopefully

Hard

1. It's a good idea to decrease the Approach Rate by one. It's also a good idea to increase the HP Drain Rate and Overall Difficulty by one. That way, this Hard should play fine. (: fixed
2. 00:34:570 (1)-Add a finish or a whistle? i added the whistle
3. 00:46:757 (1)-Add a finish?

Nah

Insane

1. Approach Rate 9 is a bit much in my opinion. ): You can keep it but know you, I don't find it really fitting. ._. It would be best if you decrease it by one. Also, the Overall Difficulty and HP Drain Rate are a bit low for an insane. xD It's a good idea to increase them by one. lol okay, fixed
2. 00:46:757 (1)-Add a finish?

Nah

And that's about it.

Good luck to you, man!

BeatofIke wrote:

Roddie wrote:

Hello.

General

1. I'm not so confident about the video here. There is one scene that is nsfw... I'm not going to show it but I'm sure you know what it is. Well... either remove the video or find a way to censor that scene.

I could probably think of something to censor it, although I don't have a video editing software XD.

BeatofIke wrote:

Roddie wrote:

Easy

1. 01:17:070 (1)-Add a new combo here. Reason being is that there is a new combo glitch because of the spinner. Don't know why it's happening but it's showing...

You mean at 01:27:070? fixed hopefully.

Roddie wrote:

Find someone that does.

Easy

00:42:820 (5) - : change distance 0.80x

00:43:570 (1,2,3,4) - : change like this >> http://puu.sh/hSVf

00:45:445 (4,1) - : slider and spin distance is so far

00:49:570 (1,2) - : it is not easy

00:52:570 (3,4) - : ^

00:55:570 (3,4) - : ^

Normal

00:07:570 (1) - : change distance 1.00x +,- 0.1~0.2

(why change distance...? 1.00x>>0.80x)

(Normal is hard;;)

Hard

00:07:195 (5) - : so close

(why change distance...? 0.80x>>1.00x)

00:52:382 (4) - : move x:200 y:256

01:03:070 (3) - : move 360 144

Lunatic

00:24:820 (1,2,3,4) - : Maybe change another square like this >> http://puu.sh/hSZu

W h i t e wrote:

Hello

Easy

00:42:820 (5) - : change distance 0.80x Nah, for what reason.

00:43:570 (1,2,3,4) - : change like this >> http://puu.sh/hSVf That will make the spacing inconsistent.

00:45:445 (4,1) - : slider and spin distance is so far It's easy difficulty, New players tend to lose their cursor at spinners and need time to recover.

00:49:570 (1,2) - : it is not easy It's okay to have a few 1/2 notes on easy.

00:52:570 (3,4) - : ^ same as above

00:55:570 (3,4) - : ^ same as above

Normal

00:07:570 (1) - : change distance 1.00x +,- 0.1~0.2 Nope, but I can see why.

(why change distance...? 1.00x>>0.80x) I didn't want to for some reason.

(Normal is hard;;)

It only has 3 stars.

Hard

00:07:195 (5) - : so close You're right. Fixed

(why change distance...? 0.80x>>1.00x) Not sure why.

00:52:382 (4) - : move x:200 y:256 okay

01:03:070 (3) - : move 360 144

It's already at x:360 y:144

Lunatic

00:24:820 (1,2,3,4) - : Maybe change another square like this >> http://puu.sh/hSZu

Nah

good map! thx~

Black_Cherry_Ita wrote:

hi~ here's your m4m~

General
add "Hakurei" in tags because its a surname of Reimu okay, fixed
are you sure about 2 and 4 combocolours? they dont fit to the background, maybe change this? It looked good with the video, but the MAT suggested me to censor this one part of the video, but I have no a video editing software nor I have no experience whatoever in editing videos, so I decided to just remove it for now (I still have the video with me, just not on the map).One of the modders suggested these combo colors, so I decided to just leave it as it is.

Easy
00:50:882 (2) - remove, its very hard for beginners I'll be fine.
00:53:882 (4) - ^ This I removed
00:56:882 (4) - ^ Nope
01:07:570 (3) - 2 grid right and 1 up, if you do this, dont forget to replace a little after it It does looks weird, but I might change it to somethng else though.

Normal
00:43:570 (1) - http://puu.sh/hVGh ? LOL LMAO, almost every modder said this XD. I'll just change to something else then haha.
01:03:070 (3) - NC? Nah
01:10:007 (2) - http://puu.sh/hVGN ? finally fixed this
01:21:913 (2) - ^ finally fixed this

Hard
01:02:320 (1) - remove NC Nah
01:03:070 (3) - add NC and remove on the next one Nah

Lunatic looks good sweet

star, nice mapser GL :3

Jacob wrote:

From my queue.

[General]

• The offset is definitely late. I'm not audio savvy, so please get someone who is to help you on this one. It sounds fine to me.
[Easy]

00:37:570 - The clap pattern you have going on starting here is really inconsistent. I suggest placing the claps on the offbeat. Start the claps at 00:38:320, then the next one at 00:39:820. near fixed, but need to adjust some notes.
00:50:882 - Use distance snap instead of stacking this. It's much easier to read for newer players. Maybe
00:53:882 - ^ Maybe
00:56:882 - ^ Maybe

[Normal]

Looks good. Sweet

[Hard]

• +1 to OD and HP drain, please. It's too low as it currently is. HP drain rate and Overall difficulty of 7 is too high. It's only hard difficulty. 5 or 6 is good enough for a hard.

[Lunatic]

00:30:070 - Why would you lower the slider velocity here? The song doesn't really feel slower here, and you don't do it anywhere else, therefore making this inconsistent. I also broke combo here due to the fact that I wasn't expecting it.

I might fix this some how

nekonomitsu wrote:

Hey Ike~
I'll give you a star -w-

SPOILER

I wanted to see the video before you removed it though -3-
Edit: Do you remember where it i? 8D lol

MoonShade wrote:

Great map so far, so watch out for some nazi stuff.

General
- Delete .osb fixed

Easy
00:50:882 (2) - not sure if you should put this behind a slider on an easy diff, espacially because it's not 1/1 as the rest. Maybe http://puu.sh/hY4y Fine, i'll change it then.
00:53:882 - ^ well then put a circle here like above? Or leave it out in both cases. Nope
00:56:882 (4) - ^ fixed

Normal
00:40:945 (2,3,4) - move them 1 grid up for consistant spacing I thought of something better.
00:45:070 (3,4,5) - ^ same but 1 grid down ^
00:46:757 (1) - I would end the spinner at 00:48:820 (with a finish sound) so the player get's more time to hit the next slider fixed

Hard
00:37:570 (1) - 1 grid right fixed

Lunatic
00:16:382 (1) - I really expect this to start at 00:16:570, this gap is too big/the jump feels too sudden so maybe shorter the distance That's understandable, but that's insane for you. I decided to shorten it though, so fixed.
01:36:069 (4) - 1 grid down fixed
That's all. Very nice map which deserves my star :3

DJNightmare wrote:

Red = Recommended
Blue = Suggestions
Green = Comments

[Normal]

00:28:945 (2) - Move > 1 Grid Fixed
01:10:945 (3,4,5,1) - The Spacing here seems alittle awkward when going towards a new combo... Fixed

[Hard]
01:01:007 (3) - Move > 1 Grid Fixed
01:35:507 (1,2,3,4) - How about putting it vertically symmetrical? (Moving up until it suits the line) Fixed

[Insane]
00:17:320 (4) - Move Down 1 Grid Fixed
00:30:070 (8) - The spacing from the previous note to here is too short... I agree, but I decieded to leave it there for now until I can find an alternative pattern.

OVERALL: NICELY DONE!~ AWESOME!~

THANK YOU

Elly-chan wrote:

finished, beatofike, change whatever you'd like then call me back for a second round of modding

Okay. Thank you very much. Your mods are the best. It is really helping.

Elly-chan wrote:

Recheck. No kds, please.

Purple: Last Time i'm Suggesting This. I Highly Suggest You Do It.

[General]

1. The offset is off. Trust me. It's 94~96. Nope, still think it's right.
2. There are two .osb's in the folder. Remove both, or at least one, and full-submit. Okay, fixed
3. One scene of the video is nsfw. Discussed in IRC. He will add the video to the description and remove it from the mapset.

I'll do this later.

[Easy]

1. 00:34:570 (3) - New Combo. Fixed
2. 00:36:820 (x) - Empty space. Add a note here. Maybe later.
3. 00:53:882 (x) - Add a note here as you did at 00:50:882 and 00:56:882. Maybe later
4. 01:03:070 (1, 2, 3) - The pattern still flows a bit awkwardly. I suggest you rearrange it. Might do this later.
5. 01:11:320 (x) - How about add a note here and one on the downbeat after this one?

Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:30:070 (5) - New Combo.

Fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:27:070 (5) - PLEASE make this into a one-time-repeat slider and just add a note where the second repeat would have been. It sounds and plays much better. Okay fine -_-, fixed!
2. 00:27:070 (5) - Add a whistle here and one on it's second repeat.

Fixed

[Insane]

1. 01:06:094 (1) - Fugly slider. Make it different, please. Fixed
2. 01:07:594 (5) - New Combo. Fixed
3. 01:10:969 (5) - Fugly slider. Make it different, please.

1. Add the video to the description.
2. 00:53:882 (x) - Add a note here as you did at 00:50:882 and 00:56:882. Maybe later
3. 01:03:070 (1, 2, 3) - The pattern still flows a bit awkwardly. I suggest you rearrange it. Might do this later.

Elly-chan wrote:

Nice Doing Business With You. / Shoots a Kudosu Star /

I Wish You Good Luck.

Thanks for the star and thanks for the mod. Thanks for everything.

1. Fine, I suppose. Move on. (Oh, and the video's NSFW rating wasn't really so high.)

1. 01:36:070 - Why the time when this spinner starts is different to the other diffs?

1. Looks fine.

1. This one looks good too.

1. 00:40:007 (6,7,8) - ...This distance snapping makes me feel awkward. Swap "7" and "8"'s places?

Hinsvar wrote:

Hi.

LET'S BEGIN THE MOD.

(lol)

*Usual note: Gold ones are a must-do. Yes, I'm playing with my avatar. Everything in red are things that look awkward to me (subjective suggestions; you can follow my lead here or not); everything else are rants and minor suggestions to make things look cooler.

>General

1. Fine, I suppose. Move on. (Oh, and the video's NSFW rating wasn't really so high.)

>Easy

1. 01:36:070 - Why the time when this spinner starts is different to the other diffs?

>Normal

1. Looks fine.

>Hard

1. This one looks good too.

>Lunatic

1. 00:40:007 (6,7,8) - ...This distance snapping makes me feel awkward. Swap "7" and "8"'s places?

Guess just that. This beatmap can get bubbled (and ranked) shortly.

Good luck on the way