1. Boss Taiko Oni (4.83 stars, 1367 notes)
2. D.N.Angel's Hard (4.58 stars, 549 notes)
3. Lunatic (4.9 stars, 734 notes)
4. Normal (2.99 stars, 321 notes)

KRZY wrote:

[D.N.Angel's Hard]
00:01:036 (1) - End on 00:01:442 with the new timing. //waiting for creator's reply

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

[D.N.Angel's Hard]
00:45:530 (3) - Stack properly ~ //uh... I think it had been stacked properly
03:51:662 (1) - Silence the spinner ? //sure
04:49:581 (1) - Extend to 04:52:976 //k

xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx wrote:

Haii ~
You requested in game~

SPOILER

21:52 *xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx pokes
21:52 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : Haii ~
21:52 <l1106188> : Hi!!
21:52 *l1106188 pokes
21:52 <l1106188> : my new map have done >w<
21:52 <l1106188> : Can you mod it~ ? :3
21:53 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : okayy ~
21:53 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : ;D
21:54 *l1106188 is editing (Yellow Zebra - Prism Love)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/52591]
21:54 <l1106188> : Thank you >w<
21:55 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : ;D
21:55 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : irc mod? or thread ?
21:55 <l1106188> : irc >w<
21:56 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : okayy ~
22:00 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : for normal, i think approach rate it too high .-.
22:00 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : for normal diff, everything has to be under 5
22:00 <l1106188> : okay~
22:00 <l1106188> : fix >w<~
22:00 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : i think, set it to 4 ~
22:00 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : HP Drain Rate +1
22:01 <l1106188> : change :3
22:03 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : map is so pro ;o
22:04 <l1106188> : loool!
22:04 <l1106188> : Thanks Crystal :3
22:04 <l1106188> : But i think it yet need mod XD
22:05 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : xD
22:07 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : 03:10:494 (1) - new combo ?
22:08 <l1106188> : okay~
22:11 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : 03:54:289 (1) - this note makes me feel weird after the spinner
22:11 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : ._.
22:11 <l1106188> : remove ~
22:12 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : 03:51:662 (1) - maybe end this spinner at 03:53:851 - ?
22:13 <l1106188> : fix ~
22:15 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : 04:10:932 (5) - New combo ?
22:15 <l1106188> : okay~
22:15 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : 04:35:457 (5) - new combo as well xD
22:16 <l1106188> : okay >w<
22:17 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : 04:49:472 (1) - end this at 04:52:976
22:18 <l1106188> : okay~
22:19 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : ohh and check off enable countdown
22:20 <l1106188> : the GD diff ~ Crystal , can you post it mod in thread :3 ?
22:20 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : okayy ~
22:20 <l1106188> : Thank you , Crystal >w<
22:20 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : and dont forget to delete .osb if not in use ~
22:20 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : ^^
22:20 <l1106188> : oh ! i will make SB soon
22:22 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : 02:00:859 (4) - stack properly ~
22:23 <l1106188> : fix~
22:23 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : 02:19:472 (2) - slider end meet up with 02:17:720 (3) - ?
22:24 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : 02:34:362 (4) - move this note down a bit ~
22:25 <l1106188> : fix~ :3
22:26 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : 03:47:063 (3) - stack the end of the slider with 03:45:530 (4) -
22:27 <l1106188> : okay~
22:28 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : 04:11:589 (4) - slider end stack with 04:10:056 (5) -
22:30 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : 04:11:589 (5) - slider starts where another slider finishes o.o
22:30 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : remove it and put a circle on 04:11:698 - ~
22:31 <l1106188> : But , if change to circle , i think it hard to play ~ XD
22:33 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : but a slider is with another slider on the same tick o.o
22:34 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : maybe reverse then ?
22:34 <l1106188> : !
22:35 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : 04:49:581 (1) - end the spinner 04:52:976 - like normal diff xD
22:36 <l1106188> : i let 04:11:589- 's slider start stack with 04:10:056 start :3 ?
22:38 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : okay ~
22:38 <l1106188> : thank you for modding , Crystal >w<
22:38 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> :
22:39 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : also, you have to put DarknessAngel in the tags because the person make a guest diff for you
22:39 <l1106188> : !!
22:39 <l1106188> : I forget!!
22:39 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : xD
22:39 <l1106188> : Thanks :3
22:39 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : your welcome ~
22:40 <xXCrystalMoonAnimeXx> : i post this with the mod for the guest diff too? ;o
22:40 <l1106188> : okay ~

That's it ~
Good luck and star ! >w<

DarknessAngel wrote:

To l 1106188 :
有改的話就順便幫我改一下>< 改了 >w<

KRZY wrote:

[General]
First red line should be on 980.

[Normal]
00:01:036 (1) - End on 00:01:442 with the new timing. fix~
01:40:056 (5) - Remove, as it seems a bit too difficult to be in a Normal difficulty. ok~
01:54:070 (5) - ^ ok~
03:57:793 (4,1) - Use notes instead of repeating sliders, as the repeats are not mapped to anything.no~ because I map with music not singer

[D.N.Angel's Hard]
00:01:036 (1) - End on 00:01:442 with the new timing.

[Lunatic]
00:01:036 (1) - End on 00:01:442 with the new timing.fix~
00:36:333 (5) - NC since the spacing drastically changes.fix~
02:14:435 (3) - ^ fix~
03:49:910 (1,2,1,2) - Try this to better fit the music: changed~

SPOILER

Very solid mapset. Good luck!

Thank you for modding and star!!

pimpG wrote:

hi

offset 1010 bpm 100 (<<<not sure about this one, but should be)
offset 2262 bpm 100
offset 23180 bpm 137

KanpanRin wrote:

這段因為重複聽好幾次 有點怪怪的
所以改了這段的節奏
希望有幫助

DarknessAngel wrote:

request from in-game ~

Red words = Unrankable thing
Blue words = It is the best way that you fix it
Black words = If I were you,I would do that
Green words = some of my comment,or something I want you to notice

Lunatic

1. 00:12:762 (4) - 尾部whistle去掉。3個whistle聽起來不舒服啊 去掉了OAO
2. 00:17:262 (3) - 同上。不一定要刪這個，總之就是不要3個whistle在一起>< 同上
3. 00:36:318 (1,2,3,4) - 由於這1/4的間距很接近1/2的，容易誤導玩家。我打這難度有5次但(2)卻總打出100，這突然的變化讓人措手不及，也覺得沒必要。我覺得還是用1.0把它們連接起來就足夠了修改了~
4. 00:50:771 (4,5,1) - 雖然打起來沒問題但是我真不喜歡這個T.T，這種排列副歌出現就好了，統合整個diff區間的難度 也是修改了~
5. 00:52:961 (1) - 放到(200,272) ? 00:52:523 (4,1)之間的間距要給足啊><fix~
6. 01:06:099 (3) - ctrl + R 更刺激。而且這種flow我也偏愛了些 change~
7. 02:14:420 (1,2,3,4,1) - 同00:36:318 (1,2,3,4)的說恩~
8. 02:25:588 (5) - sudden jumpfix~
9. 02:26:902 (4,5) - 這跳也有些隨機了，好像能跳但不易掌握，要是我就不會在這邊做跳
   而且下個part是比較強一些的節奏和跳法，這邊不跳的話能映襯下一段更強的節奏 (我說得有些抽象了..)
   還有你注意一下02:27:121 (5,1)的間距，沒控制好啊，如果是我，我會這樣放fix~
10. 02:55:369 (4,5,1) - 這1/4 beats的間距變化感覺沒什麼必要，而且不大美觀，建議間距統一修改了~
    
    

D.N.Angel's Hard

1. seems fine,but really bored (我自重...)嘎~

Normal

1. 00:01:010 (1,2) - 如果是我，我會用3/4的slider + 1折返處理。畢竟這種節奏比較難掌握，還是用slider輕鬆解決修改了~
2. 00:46:391 - 仔細聽你會發現stick用的clap特別大聲，我認為每個都設定成50%音量更合適同上
3. 01:31:501 (1,1) - 雖然你這轉盤的掌聲很有梗，但這裡有些問題要解決我只修改轉盤後的note~
   首先，這轉盤對Normal來說太短，儘管auto能轉超過2000，但還是出局！
   然後，轉盤之後連接物件太急促 (對Normal來說)，如果真要在這裡放物件，必須放「靠近中心點的位置」，讓玩家有充裕一點的時間反應
   最輕鬆的解決方法就是把01:33:252 (1)刪掉，轉盤延長到01:33:252
   雖然轉盤的時間還是短了些(對Normal來說)，但至少比之前的好，而且之後連接物件的問題也解決，節奏也沒問題
   如果要保留那個個掌聲的梗的話，我想也只能刪掉轉盤map空白了吧..
4. 01:40:260 (1) - 這overlap後再出現01:42:012 (1)的overlap我覺得太殘酷了- -
   真心認為移開01:40:260 (1)會好很多 ... fix~
5. 01:54:274 (1) - 同上了。由於你的overlaps 1/2居多，還是把1/1的都改掉吧fix~
6. 04:09:165 (1) - 放中間，這樣玩家才有充分的時間反應okay!
7. 01:08:289 (5) - 1/1 overlap。分開fix~

general咱習慣不看lol
圖不錯 ~
加油rank它唄
/ˊAˋ/ ~ ★

forevehappy wrote:

Hi~

Open

normal
難度調整低了一些,感覺像是easy... 我OD調到4了~

Lunatic
要求HP 6 (;′ Д`) 總覺得難一點比較好玩 (被打
00:40:588 (5) - 這種距離用hard看超可怕的,近一些的話會更好,後面好像還有一些也是這樣的 應該是還好
01:31:939 (2) - 擋到太多了嘛...是擋到了 不過我應該暫時不改
02:49:895 (3,1) - 接的不怎麼好看,腰斬1滑條 lol 腰斬好阿! (大誤 其實在我眼裡看起來pretty的
04:30:187 (1,2) - ^噢 這邊其實連我都看不慣 ... (被打 我改了~

lunatic好觸,MOD都快哭哭了 乖~ 你這神觸 (摸頭
射星準備 哎?!

1. 感覺Touhou的歌tags不應該那麼少xD 看看這圖片 有什麼東西可以加的就加一加吧~
   
   萌圖 ( 诶 )

   
2. 有些Timing Section沒有Snap到 檢查一次吧! >w<

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. Nothing here
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggetion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:01:010 (1) - 其實跟著vocal會好些
   2. 00:16:662 (1) - 這flow我不太喜歡
   3. 01:31:501 (1,1) - 這太近了 而且spinner的300分圖片會檔到下個note
   4. 02:25:807 (1,1) - Same as above
   5. 02:55:588 (1,1) - Same as above
   6. 04:07:413 (1,1) - Same as above
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:49:895 (3,4) - 那麼多clap好吵啊 有點overmap了 我的話我會把00:49:895 (3) - 開頭和結尾的clap刪除 讓clap有漸層的感覺
   2. 01:29:092 (6) - 開頭的clap改成whistle sounds better IMO
   3. 02:53:179 (4) - Same as above
   4. 04:09:165 ~ 04:15:953 - 這段怎每個white tick上都有clap 音樂沒有改變啊~!

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. Nothing here
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggetion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 不愧是DNA Hard都能做的那麼鬼畜... 其實說實在的 Jump太多了啦 這真的已經不像Hard了
   2. 00:49:457 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - 這段在玩的時候用custom skin的話 還蠻亂的 改一下會比較好
   3. 00:55:807 (4,5,1) - 這Jump is too huge imo , 改一下吧
   4. 01:01:720 (5,1) - 這兩個New Combo位置交換 跟著最後的長音下New Combo感覺不錯
   5. 01:21:866 (3) - Delete this note? 因為這note前面那個slider's 結尾跟下一個slider's 開頭都是跟著vocal
   6. 02:45:515 (2,3) - Same as 00:55:807 (4,5,1) -
   7. 04:25:588 (4) - Add a note here sounds good?
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 其實kiai time的clap不需要加再每個white tick 這樣明顯的overmap 我說真的 加clap在每個2,4white tick就ok了
   2. 01:30:406 (2) - 開頭加個finish 然後reduce 一些音量 讓她跟下個hitsound有漸層 聽起來感覺頗好
   3. 03:49:238 (3) - 這finish聽起來很突兀...
   4. 03:51:428 (5) - 結尾的finish改成whistle 因為finish聲音仔細聽是在03:51:647 -

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. Nothing here
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggetion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. HP Drain -1 這已經夠坑了再減那麼快vote又會遭到多人!@#$#@導致悲劇發生 >_<
   2. 00:01:010 (1) - 這應該是對準紅線吧?
   3. 03:26:245 (3) - 你應該是故意Ctrl+R的吧? 但是Ctrl+R並沒有比較好 反而會得到一個比較差的flow Ctrl+R回來吧
   4. 03:49:895 (1,2,1,2) - 這感覺是跟這音樂下節奏的 但是這節奏如果hit的聲音大於music的聲音的話 聽起來非常的不順暢 我聽好幾次才聽出來 改成簡單一點吧 像這樣
      
      圖片

      
   5. 03:53:398 (1,2) - 感覺沒有跟到任何音樂
   6. 04:12:450 (7) - 這裡空著嘛... 不太好我覺得...
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:38:508 (5) - 結尾的clap改成whistle才合音樂
   2. 03:46:610 (2) - 這中間的finish我怎麼聽都是多餘的...
   3. 04:48:909 (4) - 這clap不合音樂 改成whistle

bossandy wrote:

Hi hi~ 從這一刻開始 使用新的mod style!! xD 所以咱是實驗白老鼠 QAQ?! 我不要試藥阿!!!
　　
[ General]
　

1. 感覺Touhou的歌tags不應該那麼少xD 看看這圖片 有什麼東西可以加的就加一加吧~ 加了~
   
   萌圖 ( 诶 )

   
2. 有些Timing Section沒有Snap到 檢查一次吧! >w<?!?!?!?!

　
[ Normal]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. Nothing here
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggetion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 00:01:010 (1) - 其實跟著vocal會好些 跟了~
   2. 00:16:662 (1) - 這flow我不太喜歡 改了~
   3. 01:31:501 (1,1) - 這太近了 而且spinner的300分圖片會檔到下個note[b] 移開的距離跟02:25:807 - 一樣
   4. 02:25:807 (1,1) - [b]Same as above 我覺得還好QAQ
   5. 02:55:588 (1,1) - Same as above 同上
   6. 04:07:413 (1,1) - Same as above 同上
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:49:895 (3,4) - 那麼多clap好吵啊 有點overmap了 我的話我會把00:49:895 (3) - 開頭和結尾的clap刪除 讓clap有漸層的感覺 改了~
   2. 01:29:092 (6) - 開頭的clap改成whistle sounds better IMO 改了~
   3. 02:53:179 (4) - Same as above 同上
   4. 04:09:165 ~ 04:15:953 - 這段怎每個white tick上都有clap 音樂沒有改變啊~! 感覺比較到了高潮 (哎?!

　　
[ Lunatic]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. Nothing here
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggetion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. HP Drain -1 這已經夠坑了再減那麼快vote又會遭到多人!@#$#@導致悲劇發生 >_< 會嘛QAQ .. 我曾經想過在降 可是在降就感覺不是lun了 ...
   2. 00:01:010 (1) - 這應該是對準紅線吧? 改了~
   3. 03:26:245 (3) - 你應該是故意Ctrl+R的吧? 但是Ctrl+R並沒有比較好 反而會得到一個比較差的flow Ctrl+R回來吧 果然逃不過神mapper的眼睛 lol! 改回來了
   4. 03:49:895 (1,2,1,2) - 這感覺是跟這音樂下節奏的 但是這節奏如果hit的聲音大於music的聲音的話 聽起來非常的不順暢 我聽好幾次才聽出來 改成簡單一點吧 像這樣 改了~的確是跟著音樂下 ...
      
      圖片

      
   5. 03:53:398 (1,2) - 感覺沒有跟到任何音樂 有阿!! 那個類似吉他的聲音(被打
   6. 04:12:450 (7) - 這裡空著嘛... 不太好我覺得... 加了個毫不起眼的circle了~
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 00:38:508 (5) - 結尾的clap改成whistle才合音樂 感覺改了之後 , 後面的都有改 所以暫時不改了QAQ
   2. 03:46:610 (2) - 這中間的finish我怎麼聽都是多餘的... 改了
   3. 04:48:909 (4) - 這clap不合音樂 改成whistle 改了

　
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好了 沒什麼好說的了~ 這首歌真的聽不膩xD
Good Luck :3

-Bakari- wrote:

hello!

as you requested :3 so fast!!!

[General]
unsnapped kiai fix~

[Normal]
i see some SV changes in this diff? Diffrent slider speeds on easiest (Normal) diff.. NO!
OD - 1 feels much better for EASIEST diff in mapset fix~
Easiest diff here? Make it under 3.00 star rating >3< not 3.24 ?!
some blanket sliders aren't looks good. re-check them? ok~
02:25:807 (1) - overlapped with spinner's hitburst >3< fix
04:17:267 (3,4,5,1) - kinda hard to read/feel/play for normal players. unstack (1) fix~
04:19:457 (5,1) - ^^

[Insane]
[Insane not lunatic because diff spread looks awkward now]
00:01:010 (1,2) - louder! i can't hear them fix~
01:33:581 (2,3) - avoid overlap? I can't..
01:49:457 (3,5) - overlap makes this pattern kinda messy fix~

~~~~~~~~

pretty nice. I like it. Thanks

S h i a wrote:

Nice overall. As L18's request here is the IRC mod LOG. QAQ

SPOILER

20:25 l1106188: : 早灣 s h i a >w< 請問...
20:25 S_h_i_a: : >3</
20:25 l1106188: : 可以問mod request嘛 QAQ (被打
20:26 S_h_i_a: : QAQ.. 可以 (被累死
20:26 l1106188: : lol!
20:26 S_h_i_a: : link?
20:27 l1106188: : 真的可以嘛 QAQ s h i a 會不會真的累死 (被打
20:27 S_h_i_a: : 開玩笑啦 www
20:27 S_h_i_a: : link
20:27 l1106188: : 恩 >w<
20:27 : *l1106188 is listening to (Yellow Zebra - Prism Love)[http://osu.ppy.sh/s/52591]
20:27 l1106188: : 不是short 或 tv size 所以真的會 ... (被打
20:28 S_h_i_a: : QAQ 沒關係
20:28 l1106188: : 謝謝你 s h i a >w<
20:28 l1106188: : 我該怎麼稱呼你 :3?! (中文暱稱或是其他之類的)
20:28 S_h_i_a: : 叫我小夏就可以了
20:29 l1106188: : 那~~
20:29 l1106188: : 謝謝你 小夏 >w<
20:29 S_h_i_a: : 不客氣
20:29 l1106188: : 我這張圖 做得有點爛 小夏請見諒 QAQ
20:30 S_h_i_a: : 大丈夫:D
20:30 l1106188: : 恩QAQ
20:43 S_h_i_a: : 感覺。。找不到問題QAQ
20:43 l1106188: : QAQ!
20:43 l1106188: : lun肯定會找到很多的 (被打
20:43 S_h_i_a: : 我再看看
20:44 S_h_i_a: : 就IRC mod可以嗎？ Normal和Hard都很好找不到問題QAQ
20:44 l1106188: : 恩~
20:45 l1106188: : 小夏 盡情的轟炸lun (被打
20:45 S_h_i_a: : 00:06:312 (4) - add whistle要好一些:D
20:46 l1106188: : +了 >w<
20:46 S_h_i_a: : 00:11:112 (4) - 這裡也是
20:46 l1106188: : +了 OwO
20:47 l1106188: : lol! 感覺這表情比較可怕
20:47 S_h_i_a: : wwww
20:47 l1106188: : 對了 >w<
20:48 l1106188: : 嘛!! 等晚點說好了 免得等下被savelog lol!
20:48 S_h_i_a: : 不用給KD啦
20:48 S_h_i_a: : 很好的圖了。
20:48 l1106188: : 要!!
20:49 S_h_i_a: : 01:12:231 (1) - 這個
20:49 S_h_i_a: : 前後換個位置？
20:49 l1106188: : ctrl+r嘛 OAO?!
20:49 S_h_i_a: : 好像是的 QAQ
20:49 l1106188: : P
20:49 l1106188: : 恩 >w< 改了
20:50 l1106188: : 小夏 看到副歌一定會昏倒 QAQ
20:51 S_h_i_a: : 01:48:471 (1) - 這裡NC一下吧
20:51 S_h_i_a: : 更好讀一些
20:52 l1106188: : nc了 >w<
20:53 S_h_i_a: : 02:59:092 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - wwwwww
20:53 S_h_i_a: : 這裡必須加一些NC才行不然真會昏倒
20:53 S_h_i_a: : 02:59:530 (1) -
20:53 l1106188: : lol!
20:53 S_h_i_a: : 這個一個
20:54 S_h_i_a: : 02:59:968 (1) - 這個一個
20:54 l1106188: : +了 >w<
20:54 S_h_i_a: : 然後建議03:00:406 (3) - 重疊在之前的NOTE上面
20:55 l1106188: : 之前的OAO?!
20:56 S_h_i_a: : http://puu.sh/HlN5
20:56 S_h_i_a: : 這樣
20:57 l1106188: : 恩~ 重疊了
20:59 S_h_i_a: : 哇～
20:59 S_h_i_a: : 就這些了
20:59 S_h_i_a: : 音效很不錯
20:59 l1106188: : lol!
20:59 S_h_i_a: : 排列也很順
20:59 l1106188: : 是過好幾個才選出這個的 (被打
20:59 l1106188: : lol! 真的嘛QAQ
20:59 l1106188: : 謝謝 小夏的 mod >w<
21:00 l1106188: : 小夏 savelog ~~ 咱要給KD !!!! 一定要給 QAQ!!

bossandy wrote:

　
[ D.N.Angel's Hard]
　

1. Unrankable stuff
   ( You must fix all of these , if I write something is not unrankable , please tell me in the reply )
   
   1. Nothing here
   　
2. Beatmap design/Suggestion
   ( Most of them are my suggetion , you can disagree if you want )
   
   1. 不愧是DNA Hard都能做的那麼鬼畜... 其實說實在的 Jump太多了啦 這真的已經不像Hard了
   2. 00:49:457 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1) - 這段在玩的時候用custom skin的話 還蠻亂的 改一下會比較好 //先保留，我test幾遍都是可讀的
   3. 00:55:807 (4,5,1) - 這Jump is too huge imo , 改一下吧 //BPM低所以還OK，而且若是少量的overjump，是可接受的
   4. 01:01:720 (5,1) - 這兩個New Combo位置交換 跟著最後的長音下New Combo感覺不錯 //你如果有留意的話，我這裡下的NC是跟著每段歌詞走的，而且若是照你說的做了，也會破壞一點對稱美感
   5. 01:21:866 (3) - Delete this note? 因為這note前面那個slider's 結尾跟下一個slider's 開頭都是跟著vocal //...這note也跟著vocals啊
   6. 02:45:515 (2,3) - Same as 00:55:807 (4,5,1) - //<
   7. 04:25:588 (4) - Add a note here sounds good? //我這裡就是打定主意要1/1 =A=
   　
3. Hitsounds
   ( Almost of them are my ideas , you can ignore them )
   
   1. 其實kiai time的clap不需要加再每個white tick 這樣明顯的overmap 我說真的 加clap在每個2,4white tick就ok了
      //我還挺訝異你居然說這下法overmapped，你聽聽看整曲節奏，每個白線上都有相同的voices，怎麼可能會是overmapped ?
      我只把這下法放在Kiai的理由跟l18一樣，而且原本Lunatic不是那樣下的，是他後來跟進的，表示我想法沒錯
   2. 01:30:406 (2) - 開頭加個finish 然後reduce 一些音量 讓她跟下個hitsound有漸層 聽起來感覺頗好 //...開頭嗎 ? 1/2的連兩個finish怎麼聽都違和啊 ...
   3. 03:49:238 (3) - 這finish聽起來很突兀... //我跟voice，按照鑼聲放的
   4. 03:51:428 (5) - 結尾的finish改成whistle 因為finish聲音仔細聽是在03:51:647 - //...你在03:51:647上放個note+finish就會聽到2個鑼聲分次出現

　
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forevehappy wrote:

Hi~


D.N.Angel's Hard
00:55:807 (4,5) - 距離過遠 //BPM低所以還OK，而且若是少量的overjump，是可接受的
02:49:457 (2) - 跟這02:45:515 (2)next距離一樣(x2.2左右)? //我想保持這個prat
02:59:092 (1) - prev距離x2.2左右? 這個03:02:596 (1)距離就比較遠一些了 //不懂改的理由在哪...lol
04:07:194 (5) - x:256 y:52 ? 感覺x1.2以上比較好 //k
04:12:669 (1,2,3,4,5) - 整體網上移 讓跳1的距離x2以上.. 5跳1從1.62->1.6 //呃，看不出不同點lol

1. 00:01:010 (1,2) - 間距太小了~~ 新手玩家會被誤導~
2. 00:43:982 (5) - 上移3格如何~~~??
3. 01:54:712 (2,3,1,2,3) - 轉個10度如何>~<?
4. 02:22:304 (1,2,3) - 這兩個slider形狀拉一樣吧~~ 好看些ww http://puu.sh/HC8d
5. 02:39:822 (1,2,3,4) - 節奏怪怪的>_>.. 這樣吧!! x3
   
6. 02:55:150 (3) - 疊回去 02:53:179 (4) - 的尾巴做個三角形吧~~
7. 04:09:165 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 感覺放正正的有些古板xD 轉個15度吧~~ 我覺得好些ww

1. 00:59:749 (1) - 彎的方向換一下如何? http://puu.sh/HCdO
2. 01:21:209 (2) - 覺得這太斜了>_> 這樣打起來好些ww?? http://puu.sh/HCfD
3. 01:58:654 (2) - 這slider放這感覺有些孤單:3 建議複製一樣的slider 然後Ctrl + H & Ctrl + J 我覺得這樣好些啦~~
4. 03:19:676 (4) - 頭尾對調?
5. 04:14:420 (1,2,3,4) - 2 & 4 都各自頭尾對調吧~~ 打起來很順ww

1. 00:42:012 (4) - 感覺好像疊到太多了有點醜醜的>~< 這樣如何?? http://puu.sh/HCmr
2. 01:33:252 (1,2,3) - 疊到了不太好看><... 看看能不能試著不要疊到~~
3. 01:57:559 (4,1) - 位置交換吧!! 打起來順些~~~
4. 02:00:844 (4,5) - slider換成圈?? 打起來比較有fu xD
5. 03:23:617 (1,2,3) - 這樣如何~~ @w@ http://puu.sh/HCrb (選 2 & 3 Ctrl + R 就行了~~)