1. Lizsig's Easy (1.44 stars, 244 notes)
2. Lunatic (4.01 stars, 997 notes)
3. Normal (1.77 stars, 136 notes)

Lizsig wrote:

Helloooooooooooooooooo

すべてていあんです。ぜんぶなおすひつようはまったくございませぬ

• [General]

1. 画像の比率が少しおかしいかもしれません(現在951x768) リサイズしたのがこちらに　http://puu.sh/xU8r
   画質は気をつけたつもりだけど少し下がってるかも！
   
   

fixed!

• [Normal]

1. Circle Size -1(スライダーが多めなので一番大きいサークルだと綺麗に置けずに見た目が悪くなると思います。) fixed
2. AR-1?(難易度調整　変えなくてもいいかも) fixed
   
3. 00:28:604 (3,1) - spacing(Prev:0,99x Next0,80x)余程距離が開いててDS無視しないと置けない場合じゃない限り気にしたほうがいいかも！
   心がけるようにします！
4. 00:30:659 (2,3,4) - こんな配置の方が綺麗だと思います。(Ctrl+Shift+Rでそのサークルの角度を変えれるので図形配置作るのに便利です)
   
   SPOILER

   
   大体似たような感じにしてみました
5. 00:36:824 (3) - ボーカルの声に合わせて00:36:618の所にスライダーの始点をもってきた方がいいと思います。fixed
6. 00:41:755 (3,1) - 00:41:755 (3)のスライダーと被って見難いので離したほうが良いかも fixed
7. 00:56:139 - ここの緑線から速度が遅くなるのは不自然です。00:53:673から速度を遅くするのが合ってます。 fixed
8. 00:55:522 - ここから1/2のスライダー1つ置いた方がいいかも。(00:54:289 (1,2)が後ろの音取ってるなら) fixed
9. 01:38:467 (2) - このノート消してスピナーをここまで伸ばしたほうが初心者にはやさしいかも fixed
10. 01:54:084 (1) - ボーカルに合わせて01:53:878から始めたほうがいいと思いますこのスライダー！ fixed
11. 03:02:303 (1,2,3,4) - 被らせずに配置したほうが綺麗に見えると思います！！ fixed
12. 03:37:029 - ここの速度変化はいらないと思います！！！曲調が変わってないのにいきなりの速度変化はプレイヤーにとって厳しいかも！fixed
    
    

• [Hard]

1. 00:33:947 (6) - New Combo fixed
2. 00:34:152 (1) - Remove new combo fixed
3. 00:53:673 (1,2,3,4) -このパートが whistleだけなのは良いアイデアなのですが、音量を10~20%上げないとヒットサウンドが聴こえないと思います。
4. 00:56:960 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^
   どちらも70%に変更しました！
5. 01:13:810 (2,3) - このリズムの方が良いと思います。配置は自由～
   
   SPOILER

   
   fixed
6. 01:26:344 (5,6) - ここの(5)のサークルと(6)のスライダーを入れ替えてスライダーの始点にFinish
   
   SPOILER

   
   fixed
7. 01:27:988 - add a note(ボーカルの声に合わせるため) fixed
8. 01:44:221 (1) ~01:54:495 (9) 　ここのヒットサウンドがまったく無いのが気になったので、whistleをいつものclapのリズムに合わせて入れた方がリズムが取りやすくなると思います。
   自分の直感でですけど入れてみました
9. 01:53:878 (1) - New combo　fixed
10. 02:27:988 (1,2,3) - ここ何となくジャンプしたい(願望) 上手くジャンプさせる自信がないのでとりあえずDSを広く取りました
11. 03:22:440 (1) - add a whistle fixed
12. 03:24:084 (2) - ^ fixed
13. 03:26:755 (7) - add a clap fixed
14. 03:32:303 (2,3,4,5) - それぞれのスライダーで緑線引いて音量上げた方が曲に合ってる気がします。
    そうですね！ありがとうー！
15. 04:08:262 - Kiai timeの終わりと始まりには必ずサークルが無いとKiai Times Not On Downbeatになるので、出来ればここにサークル欲しいです。
    fixed!!
16. 04:31:892 - add a note fixed
17. 04:32:303 - ^ fixed
18. 04:52:851 - ^ fixed
    

• [Insane]

1. 00:53:673 (1,2,3,4...) - Hardと同じです。 fixed
2. こうした方が見た目いいかも　
   
   SPOILER

   
   fixed!
3. 01:21:413 - add a note?(ぼーかるの声) fixed
4. 01:21:515 - add a note?(ぼーかるの声) fixed
   
5. 02:32:919 (1) - remove finish
6. 02:33:536 (4) - add a finish
7. 02:46:070 (1) - remove finish
8. 02:46:687 (4) - add a finish
   自分の感覚的には今のままのほうが好きなので保留ということにします！
9. 02:55:317 (9) - New combo fixed
10. 03:10:522 (3,4,5,6,1,2) - 後ろの音に合わせるならこんなリズムの方がいいかもしれません
    
    SPOILER

    
    fixed!
11. 03:15:865 (4,5) - 後ろで青線で音がなっているのでこのリズムの方がいいかもしれません。
    
    SPOILER

    
    fixed!
12. 03:16:892 (5) - New combo fixed
13. 03:09:289 - 03:22:440 ヒットサウンドが全く無いのが気になったので、whistleをclapのリズムで入れるとうるさくなくていいかもしれません。
    hardのときと同じく感覚でですけど入れてみました
    
14. 03:26:241 (4) - remove clap
15. 03:36:413 (7) - remove circle
16. 04:24:700 (1) - remove finish
17. 04:25:317 (4) - add a finish
    同じく保留
18. 04:26:961 (4) - add a finish(slider reverse) fixed
19. 04:51:618 - 確か休憩が短すぎるとそれはそれでUnrankedの可能性があるので、この短さならブレイク消しても大丈夫だと思います。
    わかりました！了解です！
    

ganbatte!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1

A maximum of three slider velocities should be used (including 1x). For example, you could have a single map using 0.6x, 0.8x, and 1x; or 0.75x, 1x, and 1.5x; etc. If more than three slider velocities are used, then they should make sense and be intuitive. If slider velocity changes are able to be merged (e.g. close values like 0.8x and 0.7x) while still flowing/working correctly, then they should be.

SPOILER

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Mio_chan wrote:

Hi~ here is my mod~ Most of them and suggestions

[General]
It is recommended to keep break time consistent throughout the map.
I find your map has strange anti-jump where there is change in slider velocity.
Also,

A maximum of three slider velocities should be used (including 1x). For example, you could have a single map using 0.6x, 0.8x, and 1x; or 0.75x, 1x, and 1.5x; etc. If more than three slider velocities are used, then they should make sense and be intuitive. If slider velocity changes are able to be merged (e.g. close values like 0.8x and 0.7x) while still flowing/working correctly, then they should be.

There is a 0.75x in hard and insane difficulties and I don't find it necessary to use a 0.75x

I fixed them. Thanks

Since total draining time exceeds 10 min, I will mod hard and insane only (I have taken a look of it though)
ok thanks.

[Normal]
Please remove all useless greenlines.
Velocity change in normal is not recommended as newbie maynot be able to read it.
Some part of the map can be a bit easier because your mapset do not have an easy.
AR + 1
fixed

[Hard]
00:37:234 - 00:38:467 - Fill something here
00:43:399 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I find these not fit in the music
00:47:714 - Add note?
00:50:180 - ^
00:58:193 (3) - Change this into a note, then a slider which starts at 00:58:399 and ends at 00:58:810 ?
01:36:207 (4) - End this at 01:36:618, stack a note at its end at 01:36:824?
01:49:769 (4) - New Combo?
01:49:769 - Why 0.75x speed here? use 0.5x or 1.0x
02:10:933 (1) - End this at 02:11:550, then add a note at 02:11:755?
02:12:166 (2) - change this into a repeating sliders of 1/2?
02:12:782 - Add a note?
02:14:221 (1) - End this at 02:14:837, then add a note at 02:15:043?
02:15:454 (2) - change this into a repeating sliders of 1/2?
02:16:687 - Add a note?
02:27:371 (7) - Move this to 02:27:166?
02:39:495 (4) - New combo?
02:42:782 (5) - New combo?
02:42:988 (6) - Delete this?
02:43:193 (1) - Remove new combo?
02:52:029 (6) - New combo?
03:12:577 (9) - New combo?
03:13:399 - Add a note?
03:14:015 - 03:15:659 - Add something here
03:15:865 (1) - End this at 03:16:481, then add a note at 03:16:687?
03:37:029 (5) - Strange anti-jump
03:41:344 - Add a note and new combo?
03:41:755 (1) - Remove new combo?
03:42:577 (3) - End this at 03:42:782?
03:48:741 (1) - Strange anti-jump
04:23:056 (1) - Remove new combo
04:36:207 (1) - Remove new combo
04:37:851 (1,2,3,4) - I find these unfit to the music
04:42:577 (4) - Strange anti-jump
04:47:097 (6) - New combo?
04:48:536 (8) - New combo?
04:51:207 - Add a spinner which ends at 04:52:440?

All fixed!!

[Insane]
00:33:536 (6) - New combo fixed
00:42:988 (1) - Remove finish in slider head? and I think the following pattern suits the song better fixed

SPOILER

fixed
00:49:769 (7) - New combo? fixed
00:50:180 (1) - Remove new combo? fixed

01:03:536 (3) - This slider looks bad... may be change it to a blanketing slider?

SPOILER

hmm... I'm not good... I tried fix

01:11:139 (1) - Remove new combo, since you have no new combo in 02:28:399 (3) fixed
01:17:097 (2) - the slider start at 01:17:303, stack a note at the slider's start point at 01:17:097 ? fixed
01:32:714 (4) - New combo? fixed
01:49:769 - Why 0.75x speed here? use 0.5x or 1.0x
change 1.0x
01:50:796 (6) - New combo? fixed
01:51:413 (1) - Remove new combo? fixed

01:58:604 (7,8) - I think they don't suit the music, something like this?

SPOILER

That's good! thank you

02:10:933 (1) - Sliders end at 02:11:344 , then add a note at 02:11:550 ? fixed
02:27:988 (1,2) - This jump is extra-ordinary large comparing with all other parts to the song... Maybe make this jump a bit smaller...?fixed

02:28:810 (1,2,3,4,5) - Why stream here?
sorry, I think suit it, so keep.

02:34:769 (6) - unstack this note, new combo? fixed
02:34:974 (1) - Remove new combo? fixed
02:42:885 (6,7) - This two notes sound strange to me. Delete it? fixed
02:51:104 (8,9) - ^ fixed
03:09:700 (2) - change this into a repeating sliders of 1/2? fixed
03:10:522 (3) - End this slider at 03:10:728? fixed

03:12:577 - 03:15:454 Make this section the pattern like 03:09:289 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7)?
ok, I took copy and little arrange.
03:15:659 - Add a note? fixed
03:15:762 - ^ fixed
03:22:440 (1) - Remove new combo? fixed
03:43:604 (7) - New combo? fixed
03:45:248 - Add a note? fixed
03:45:351 - ^ fixed
03:45:454 - ^ fixed
03:48:741 (1) - Strange anti-jump here fixed
04:45:454 (3) - Delete this? fixed
04:47:097 (7) - New combo? fixed

04:51:207 - Add a spinner?
04:52:440 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Why stream here?
^^ keep them. when other Modding point them ,I fixed..

Good luck with your map =] Nice mapping with chorus part =]

B2IN wrote:

Hi ~ frsk
from #modreq
Hi ~ B2IN thank you~

[Insane]
00:26:961 (1,2) - Changing the long slider fixed
00:38:262 - add note imo :d fixed
00:40:933 (7) - move up 2gird.00:40:728 (6) - this note touches it fixed
00:41:550 () - add note fixed

00:40:933 (7,9) - try this.

SPOILER

that's nice! fixed!

00:48:947 (1) - this overlap is not good.. consider moving
hmm... I considering...
00:57:577 (2) - same ^ fixed

01:01:892 (9,11) - It is ugly. try this

SPOILER

fixed

01:03:536 (3) - try this

SPOILER

I tried. But I'm not good... need practice...

01:57:577 (2) - add finish. end fixed

02:09:084 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - this pattern not good. try this

SPOILER

I tried it.

03:13:605 (3) - move to here 03:13:810 (add the note at 03:13:605)fixed
04:27:782 () - need the note. add fixed
04:46:481 (5) - add 1 repeat fixed

04:52:440 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - it is strange..
try this

fixed

good luck !

Athena Tennos wrote:

A-tan's mod.....
hi~

[General]
maybe u can let ur slider more beautiful....just a little random~xD
♪~♪~♪~~~
yes... I see I will try!


[Normal]
maybe u can reduce SV to 0.6 or 0.8....xD
ur slider is too length......not too clear~~~
this is extremely trouble work....xD...i think just put slider more beautiful~th
ok...thx.

01:46:687 - add note?fixed
02:22:851 - ^? fixed
03:03:947 (3,4) - distance is too close ... fixed
03:10:111 (2,3,4) - distance not uniform~maybe u can keep uniform.... fixed

03:15:865 (2) - this slider not too beautiful ~may be u can change to ↓

SPOILER

fixed!
03:17:508 (4) - ^ fixed

[Hard]
00:34:974 (4,5) - overlap~not too beautiful~ fixed
00:53:673 (1,2,3) - ovrlap~slider(head)overlap too much...u need to move this..fixed

00:56:139 (5,6) - ^~ithis already break rule~but i think is ok....idk this rule whats means....maybe u can ignore it...xD
fixed! thx~

SPOILER

Hitcircles must never be hidden under slidertracks. Whether a hitcircle is partially or completely under a slidertrack, it is confusing for the player to read. Insane difficulties are the only exception to this rule.

02:16:070 (4,5) - ^fixed

[Insane]
03:28:399 (1) - remove nc
03:29:015 (1) - nc
03:41:344 (9) - ^
03:41:755 (2) - remove nc
all fixed

this diff is better than hard and normal~~~xD
look is good!~
Thank you~! I'm happy

normal mapset~;D
u need more listen to the rhythm~
the vocal a little mess~
yeah... I challenge

Good Luck♪~

Hitcircles must never be hidden under slidertracks. Whether a hitcircle is partially or completely under a slidertrack, it is confusing for the player to read. Insane difficulties are the only exception to this rule.

Marcin wrote:

[Normal]
I found that really big amount of curves are not in grid ( they just look better if they are placed in grid)
00:45:043 (3) - make this the same look as (1) ? (otherwise, make (1) look the same as (3) )
00:54:495 (2) - not in grid curve?
00:58:604 (4) - ^
00:55:522 (3,1) - make them on the same height?
01:34:769 (1,2,3) - move them to place 2 in the centre?
01:44:221 (1) - add clap (from custom)?
02:52:851 (1) - it's under slider, move it
03:10:111 (2) - clap? (first and last)
03:10:933 (3) - ^ (second)
03:11:755 (4) - ^ (again first and last)
03:12:577 (5) - ^
03:30:145 (2) - 1 beat later? (on her saying T, and not so fast change of sliders)
03:37:645 (1) - make start and the end on the same height ?

All fixed!!

[Hard]

Hitcircles must never be hidden under slidertracks. Whether a hitcircle is partially or completely under a slidertrack, it is confusing for the player to read. Insane difficulties are the only exception to this rule.

01:32:508 (3) -
04:30:248 (5) -
I don't mention the sliders one, because they look really good for me, especially for this map. You should ask a BAT/MAT about this ones.
I asked. BAT's answer is NO
So I arranged...
01:32:508 (3)
http://puu.sh/z4hb
04:30:248 (5)
http://puu.sh/z4hN

03:38:878 (3,4) - why don't you make them normal? (i mean the curve point at the centre of start and end)
04:08:056 (4) - I'd suggest 0.8(6)
04:51:207 (1) - ~~suggestion - I'd cut this spinner to 2000 bonus
04:53:467 (1) - ~~suggestion - longer 2 beats? (1 or even 3)

All fixed! Good idea

[Insane]
03:29:837 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing?
These circles spacing are 1.0x 1.1x 1.2x 1.3x
Should I change? I want to keep them

04:34:358 (5) - 1,50x instead of 1,41? (closer to 1,49, the first spacing)
01:03:125 (1,2) - other spacing than 4,5,6?
01:14:837 (1,2,3,4) - 3,1 the same Y, and 4,2 the same X (~~suggesting)
fixed!!

btw, nice jump map
Star~

frsk wrote:

[Insane]
03:29:837 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing?
These circles spacing are 1.0x 1.1x 1.2x 1.3x
Should I change? I want to keep them

Marcin wrote:

frsk wrote:

[Insane]
03:29:837 (3,4,5,6) - Spacing?
These circles spacing are 1.0x 1.1x 1.2x 1.3x
Should I change? I want to keep them

So maybe make them 1.0, 1.1, 1.2, 1.4 ?(so i double speed everytime)?
I see, I forgot them
1.0x 1.2x 1.4x 1.6x are right?

Btw a little recheck of hard
[Hard]
02:04:358 (2,3,4) - (3) has different position than (4), make them the same (so the (3) is same hid as (4) )?
fixed!
Don't kudosu.

thank you recheck

1. 1本目の赤線 Offset ⇒ 14220
   赤線は前拍に合っていなければいけません。
2. Offset - 149838 ⇒ 赤線を追加
   2分30秒の手前で半拍ずれてます。

h-728 wrote:

こんにちわ、modreqからです。

[General]

1. 1本目の赤線 Offset ⇒ 14220
   赤線は前拍に合っていなければいけません。
2. Offset - 149838 ⇒ 赤線を追加
   2分30秒の手前で半拍ずれてます。

no kds

L_G_B_ wrote:

こんにちは

[Insane]
00:30:658-nc
00:33:535-までコンボ
00:33:946-nc
sorry.not fixed

00:40:521-^
個人的に入れるならボーカルの始まりである3のほうに入れるのですが･･･　保留ということで
00:46:685-^ fixed
02:52:646-^ fixed
03:34:769-(1,2,3,4,5,6,7、8)の配置は変えたほうがいいかも？保留
03:41:344-スペーシングに違和感があります　変えたほうがいいかも？fixed
04:47:098-ここまでコンボfixed

01:47:920-01:48:947-ここまでコンボ
01:49:769-nc
ボーカルと裏にあわせて見直してみると
01:49:459 ここにいれたほうがいい気がしたのでこちらにさせてもらいます

すべて直す必要はありませんが参考までに・・・・
がんばってください(・∀・)

1. リズムが同じところはもう少しスペースを整えたほうが綺麗に見えると思います。
2. 特にInsaneで感じたのですが、スライダーの上にほかのオブジェクトが重なっていて見づらいところがあるので
   配置の変更を検討してみてください。

1. AIbatより、スナップされていないオブジェクトや緑線がありました。
   
   SPOILER

   AIBat v2.0 wrote:

   Snapping
   00:35:180 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:39:495 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:44:632 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:45:043 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:46:276 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:46:687 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:54:495 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:56:139 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:04:358 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:05:180 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:06:824 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:10:728 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:11:550 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:15:043 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:15:865 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:16:687 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:19:358 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:20:180 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:21:002 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:21:824 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:25:317 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:34:358 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:34:769 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:44:632 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:45:865 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:46:687 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:54:495 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:04:358 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   02:05:591 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   02:06:413 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:06:824 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:15:454 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:21:824 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:24:495 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   02:26:139 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   02:29:632 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   
   Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
   00:56:139 (snap to 00:56:137)
   01:10:728 (snap to 01:10:726)
   01:11:550 (snap to 01:11:548)
   01:15:043 (snap to 01:15:041)
   01:16:276 (snap to 01:16:274)
   01:32:817 (snap to 01:32:815)
   01:34:769 (snap to 01:34:767)
   01:49:769 (snap to 01:49:767)
   02:25:728 (snap to 02:25:726)
   02:29:632 (snap to 02:29:630)

1. Normalに同じです。
   
   SPOILER

   AIBat v2.0 wrote:

   Snapping
   00:30:454 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:31:276 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:34:358 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:35:591 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:36:002 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:39:495 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:40:728 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:41:550 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:45:043 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:45:865 (10) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:46:687 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:50:180 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:50:385 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).
   00:54:906 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:56:139 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:04:358 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:05:180 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:06:824 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:09:906 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:10:728 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:11:139 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:11:550 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:14:324 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:16:687 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:19:769 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:21:002 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:25:317 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:29:632 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:31:276 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:34:050 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:34:358 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:34:769 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:36:824 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:44:632 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:45:865 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:49:769 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:50:180 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:50:591 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:51:002 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:51:824 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:54:495 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:56:858 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:59:632 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:04:358 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   02:05:591 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   02:06:413 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:06:824 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:09:495 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   02:09:906 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   02:10:317 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   02:15:043 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:15:454 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   02:16:687 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:25:728 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:26:139 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:29:630 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   04:24:288 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   
   Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
   00:56:139 (snap to 00:56:137)
   01:10:728 (snap to 01:10:726)
   01:11:550 (snap to 01:11:548)
   01:15:043 (snap to 01:15:041)
   01:16:276 (snap to 01:16:274)
   01:30:043 (snap to 01:30:041)
   01:34:769 (snap to 01:34:767)
   01:49:769 (snap to 01:49:767)
   02:09:495 (snap to 02:09:493)
   02:09:906 (snap to 02:09:904)
   02:10:317 (snap to 02:10:315)
   02:25:728 (snap to 02:25:726)
   02:29:632 (snap to 02:29:630)

1. Normalに同じです。
   
   SPOILER

   AIBat v2.0 wrote:

   Snapping
   00:28:502 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:30:865 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:31:276 (7) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:34:769 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:35:180 (7) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:36:002 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:36:413 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:36:824 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:39:495 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:40:728 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:41:550 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:42:680 (12) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:44:632 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:45:454 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:49:050 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:49:358 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:49:769 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:50:180 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:51:824 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:54:906 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:55:728 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:56:139 (8) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:00:043 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:01:687 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:04:358 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:05:591 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:06:002 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:07:543 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:09:495 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:09:906 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:10:728 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:11:139 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:11:550 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:12:680 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:15:043 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:15:454 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:15:865 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:16:276 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:18:228 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:19:358 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:20:180 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:20:591 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:20:694 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:20:797 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:21:002 (8) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:21:413 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:21:824 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:24:187 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:24:495 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:25:317 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:25:728 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:28:913 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:29:632 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:30:043 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:30:454 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:31:276 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:34:358 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:34:769 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:36:824 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:44:632 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:45:865 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:49:461 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:49:769 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:50:180 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:50:591 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:51:002 (9) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:51:413 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:51:824 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:56:858 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:56:961 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:59:632 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:00:043 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:03:228 (10) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:04:358 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   02:05:180 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:06:002 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:06:413 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:06:824 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:07:543 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).
   02:09:187 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:09:495 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:09:906 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:10:317 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:11:550 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:15:454 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:16:687 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:24:495 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:24:906 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:25:728 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:26:139 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   02:26:550 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   02:28:913 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:29:632 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   
   Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
   00:56:139 (snap to 00:56:137)
   01:10:728 (snap to 01:10:726)
   01:11:550 (snap to 01:11:548)
   01:15:043 (snap to 01:15:041)
   01:16:276 (snap to 01:16:274)
   01:30:043 (snap to 01:30:041)
   01:34:769 (snap to 01:34:767)
   01:49:769 (snap to 01:49:767)
   02:09:495 (snap to 02:09:493)
   02:09:906 (snap to 02:09:904)
   02:10:317 (snap to 02:10:315)
   02:25:728 (snap to 02:25:726)
   02:29:632 (snap to 02:29:630)

2. 00:38:467 (9,1) - 急に間隔が狭くなるので混乱しやすいです。
3. 01:30:659 (5,1) - もう少し広く間を取ったほうがいい気がします。
4. 01:54:493 ~ 01:55:932 - 何かnoteが欲しいです。
5. 02:13:193 (8,9) - ここだけ間隔が違います。
6. 03:10:317 (3,4) - リズムが違うので、等間隔で配置するのは好ましくないです。
7. 03:13:810 (4,5) - リズムが同じなので、等間隔で配置するのが好ましいです。
8. 03:52:851 (1) - 03:54:495 で終わる。
9. 04:53:467 (1) - 04:53:673 で始めて、04:56:139 で終わる。

h-728 wrote:

こんにちわ。再びお邪魔します。

[General]

1. リズムが同じところはもう少しスペースを整えたほうが綺麗に見えると思います。
2. 特にInsaneで感じたのですが、スライダーの上にほかのオブジェクトが重なっていて見づらいところがあるので
   配置の変更を検討してみてください。

指摘ありがとうございます！
意識してみますー

[Normal]

1. AIbatより、スナップされていないオブジェクトや緑線がありました。
   
   SPOILER

   AIBat v2.0 wrote:

   Snapping
   00:35:180 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:39:495 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:44:632 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:45:043 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:46:276 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:46:687 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:54:495 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:56:139 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:04:358 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:05:180 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:06:824 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:10:728 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:11:550 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:15:043 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:15:865 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:16:687 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:19:358 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:20:180 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:21:002 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:21:824 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:25:317 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:34:358 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:34:769 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:44:632 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:45:865 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:46:687 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:54:495 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:04:358 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   02:05:591 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   02:06:413 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:06:824 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:15:454 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:21:824 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:24:495 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   02:26:139 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   02:29:632 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   
   Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
   00:56:139 (snap to 00:56:137)
   01:10:728 (snap to 01:10:726)
   01:11:550 (snap to 01:11:548)
   01:15:043 (snap to 01:15:041)
   01:16:276 (snap to 01:16:274)
   01:32:817 (snap to 01:32:815)
   01:34:769 (snap to 01:34:767)
   01:49:769 (snap to 01:49:767)
   02:25:728 (snap to 02:25:726)
   02:29:632 (snap to 02:29:630)

fixed

[Hard]

1. Normalに同じです。
   
   SPOILER

   AIBat v2.0 wrote:

   Snapping
   00:30:454 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:31:276 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:34:358 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:35:591 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:36:002 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:39:495 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:40:728 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:41:550 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:45:043 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:45:865 (10) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:46:687 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:50:180 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:50:385 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (end).
   00:54:906 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:56:139 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:04:358 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:05:180 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:06:824 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:09:906 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:10:728 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:11:139 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:11:550 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:14:324 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:16:687 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:19:769 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:21:002 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:25:317 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:29:632 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:31:276 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:34:050 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:34:358 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:34:769 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:36:824 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:44:632 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:45:865 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:49:769 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:50:180 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:50:591 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:51:002 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:51:824 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:54:495 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:56:858 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:59:632 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:04:358 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   02:05:591 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   02:06:413 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:06:824 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:09:495 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   02:09:906 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   02:10:317 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   02:15:043 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:15:454 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   02:16:687 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:25:728 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:26:139 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:29:630 (1) - Unsnapped slider (end).
   04:24:288 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   
   Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
   00:56:139 (snap to 00:56:137)
   01:10:728 (snap to 01:10:726)
   01:11:550 (snap to 01:11:548)
   01:15:043 (snap to 01:15:041)
   01:16:276 (snap to 01:16:274)
   01:30:043 (snap to 01:30:041)
   01:34:769 (snap to 01:34:767)
   01:49:769 (snap to 01:49:767)
   02:09:495 (snap to 02:09:493)
   02:09:906 (snap to 02:09:904)
   02:10:317 (snap to 02:10:315)
   02:25:728 (snap to 02:25:726)
   02:29:632 (snap to 02:29:630)

fixed

[Insane]

1. Normalに同じです。
   
   SPOILER

   AIBat v2.0 wrote:

   Snapping
   00:28:502 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:30:865 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:31:276 (7) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:34:769 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:35:180 (7) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:36:002 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:36:413 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:36:824 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:39:495 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:40:728 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:41:550 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:42:680 (12) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:44:632 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:45:454 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:49:050 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:49:358 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:49:769 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:50:180 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:51:824 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:54:906 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   00:55:728 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   00:56:139 (8) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:00:043 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:01:687 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:04:358 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:05:591 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:06:002 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:07:543 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:09:495 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:09:906 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:10:728 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:11:139 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:11:550 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:12:680 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:15:043 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:15:454 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:15:865 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:16:276 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:18:228 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:19:358 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:20:180 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:20:591 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:20:694 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:20:797 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:21:002 (8) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:21:413 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:21:824 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:24:187 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:24:495 (6) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:25:317 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:25:728 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:28:913 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:29:632 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:30:043 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:30:454 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:31:276 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:34:358 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:34:769 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:36:824 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:44:632 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:45:865 (3) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:49:461 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:49:769 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:50:180 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:50:591 (7) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:51:002 (9) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:51:413 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   01:51:824 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:56:858 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:56:961 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   01:59:632 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:00:043 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:03:228 (10) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:04:358 (2) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   02:05:180 (5) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:06:002 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:06:413 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:06:824 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:07:543 (1) - Unsnapped spinner (start).
   02:09:187 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:09:495 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:09:906 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:10:317 (8) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:11:550 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:15:454 (3) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:16:687 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:24:495 (4) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:24:906 (6) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:25:728 (1) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:26:139 (4) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   02:26:550 (5) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   02:28:913 (2) - Unsnapped circle.
   02:29:632 (1) - Unsnapped slider (start).
   
   Unsnapped inherited (green) timing point(s) at:
   00:56:139 (snap to 00:56:137)
   01:10:728 (snap to 01:10:726)
   01:11:550 (snap to 01:11:548)
   01:15:043 (snap to 01:15:041)
   01:16:276 (snap to 01:16:274)
   01:30:043 (snap to 01:30:041)
   01:34:769 (snap to 01:34:767)
   01:49:769 (snap to 01:49:767)
   02:09:495 (snap to 02:09:493)
   02:09:906 (snap to 02:09:904)
   02:10:317 (snap to 02:10:315)
   02:25:728 (snap to 02:25:726)
   02:29:632 (snap to 02:29:630)

   fixed
   
2. 00:38:467 (9,1) - 急に間隔が狭くなるので混乱しやすいです。
3. 01:30:659 (5,1) - もう少し広く間を取ったほうがいい気がします。
4. 01:54:493 ~ 01:55:932 - 何かnoteが欲しいです。
5. 02:13:193 (8,9) - ここだけ間隔が違います。
6. 03:10:317 (3,4) - リズムが違うので、等間隔で配置するのは好ましくないです。
7. 03:13:810 (4,5) - リズムが同じなので、等間隔で配置するのが好ましいです。
8. 03:52:851 (1) - 03:54:495 で終わる。
9. 04:53:467 (1) - 04:53:673 で始めて、04:56:139 で終わる。

all fixed

snapに関しては修正してください。
他は提案ですので、無視して頂いても結構です。
頑張ってください

ありがとう がんばります！

DarkSkyKnight wrote:

[Normal]
00:31:481 (3) - arrange the combo so that it looks like this maybe?

fixed
00:33:535 - add a note here fixed
00:35:178 (2,3) - visually these two notes are too near no changed
00:46:276 (4) - put this here: 00:46:069 fixed
01:04:974 (1,2,3) - merge to repeat slider maybe fixed
01:06:618 (1,2,3) - ^ but maybe add a fourth beat as well. fixed
01:08:261 - add a note? fixed
01:11:550 (1,2,3,4) - this part doesn't fit the rhythm of the music...like this maybe:

fixed!!

01:15:043 (1) - move to here: 01:14:836 and maybe change the combo so it looks like this...:

hmm.. I feel good your rhythm. But I put just ugly... I considering now.

01:59:015 (3) - maybe change the rhythm to this:

fixed
02:09:700 (1,1,2,3) - the distance spacing here is a bit small compared to before the spinner, which makes it a bit confusing.
fixed
02:21:411 - Add a note here? fixed
02:23:878 (4,5,6,1) - A bit hard for a Normal difficulty. fixed
02:25:726 - Add a note here? fixed
03:03:947 (3) - Delete 3 and move Slider 4 here maybe. fixed
03:37:234 (4) - Move this here: 03:37:029 fixed
03:38:879 - Add note fixed
03:39:289 (2) - Delete 2 and move Slider 3 here fixed
03:39:906 - Add note fixed
03:43:604 (1,2) - Feels awkward, remove 2 maybe fixed
03:46:892 (2) - Change it to this:
?
fixed
04:39:700 (3) - Move this here: 04:39:495 fixed

[Hard]
00:38:673 (1,2,3) - Put 3 directly below 2. (x 256 y 144) sorry no change
01:15:659 (3,4) - Position them so that they match the shape of Slider 1 and 2. Use rotation...fixed
03:41:344 - Add a note fixed

It is a very nice map
Thank you

[Insane]
00:44:426 (3,4) - Is this position intentional, because a circle intersecting a slider like this seems awkward considering...

04:52:440 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Seems unnatural
fixed. But I don't feel good.. I considering now.

Insane was very well done as well, the jumps are really well done, it feels very natural.
But i think you should work on the overall look since the overlapping of circles and sliders seems unnatural to me.

Aldwych wrote:

Hello frsk
Hi~

[Normal]

00:33:535 NC and disable next? sorry no changed
01:25:110 Add circle? fixed

02:212:062 ^
This place is blue line. you mean the next line? I put this.

03:20:591 You can change the circle by a spinner and finish to the next circle sorry no changed
03:43:605 No need to NC imo. fixed

[Hard]

01:54:493 You can change by a slider with a slow SV to 01:55:521 for example sorry no changed
02:07:233 Spinner should be start at 02:07:439, no? that's nice
04:29:632 NC? fixed
04:42:577 NC? fixed

[Insane]

00:40:110 NC? fixed
03:33:536 NC? fixed

Hope it could help you!

ArtBox wrote:

Hello～　From#modrequest
Hi~ thank you~

suggestions

[General]
osbファイルは使用していなければ削除して下さい fixed

[Nomal]

SPOILER

この二つは合わせて提案↓
00:31:481 (3) - x:116 y:220
00:32:302 (4) - 一回削除した後、手前の3をコピーしてリピート追加
　　　　　　　　　　　その後、角度を+124℃曲げてx:312 y:92へ（イメージ↓）
　　　　　　　　　　　
fixed

00:33:946 (6,7) - この音取りはどうでしょうか？↓
　　　　　　　　　　　　
fixed

00:40:522 (2,3) - この音取りはどうでしょうか？↓
　　　　　　　　　　　　
fixed

00:43:399 (1,2,3) - こんな配置はどうでしょう？↓

fixed

00:46:069 (4,5,1,2) - こんな配置はどうですか？

fixed

00:47:096 (6,7,8,9,10) - この音取りはどうでしょう？↓
　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　9,10辺りにスライダーだと違和感を感じたので
　　　　　　　　　　　　 　　　　　サークルに置き換え、スピナーは00:50:384～00:52:028で
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　
fixed

01:03:535 (1) - こんな配置はどうでしょう？↓
　　　　　　　　　　　
fixed

01:09:288 (2) - ここで直線一本は目立つので曲線の方が良いかも↓
　　　　　　　　　　　
fixed

01:14:219 (6) - 4のスライダーで6の数字が隠れてるのでずらした方が良いかもしれません fixed

01:16:687 (4,5) - 音取りと合わせてこれはどうですか？↓（音取りは今のままでも大丈夫です）
　　　　　　　　　　　　先に01:16:687 (4) - を削除して01:16:480と01:16:891にadd note
　　　　　　　　　　　　(使えるスペースが狭いので、上に流れるのはあれかもしれません)
　　　　　　　　　　　　
fixed

01:18:125 (1) - この音取りはどうですか？↓
　　　　　　　　　　　
fixed

01:20:180 (1) - ～ 01:25:110 (2) - この間が全て赤線に乗っていて、音を取れているようには思えません fixed
01:47:714 (1,2,3,4) - この間のＤＳが0.80xでないのは意図的でしょうか？
　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　私はＤＳ0.80xで揃えるべきだと思います
01:49:974 (1,2,3,4) - ^
見落としてました 　修正しました

02:28:810 (4) - 許容範囲な気もしますが、少し難しいのでは？（Easyの難易度がないので、微妙ですが）
fixed

04:13:399 (1) - 一瞬だけのこの短いスライダーのリピートは難しいです
リピート削除しました

04:18:947 (2,3,4) - 三角形になるようにfixed

04:52:645 (1) - 中心に（ＤＳ外しても大丈夫だと思います）
or
04:52:645 (1) - 削除してスピナーをこの位置から引いて04:55:728でスピナーの終わりに
中心にもってきました

ごめんなさい、途中で力尽きました・・・orz
他の難易度は近いうちにＭＯＤして追記します(糞ＭＯＤですがorz)
いえいえ、ありがとう！
Normalは自信ないので助かります！

Sorry for the short MOD
Good luck!

Thank you Modding

KersiTyan wrote:

Hi~ from my queue~

[Insane]

00:44:630 - add clap
00:45:041 - remove clap
00:45:454 (7) - add clap
00:45:863 - remove
00:46:274 - clap
fixed

00:46:685 - remove
00:47:096 - clap
00:47:507 - remove
00:47:918 - clap
00:48:329 - remove
00:48:740 - clap
00:49:152 (3) - remove
sorry no change

00:49:563 (6) - clap
00:49:973 - remove
00:49:050 (2) - clap
00:50:795 - remove
00:51:206 - clap
00:51:617 - remove
00:51:824 (5) - maybe clap?
00:59:837 (1) - remove
01:00:247 - clap
01:00:658 - remove
01:01:069 - clap
01:03:535 - ^
01:04:973 - ^
01:05:178 - remove
01:05:796 (4) - remove whistle and add clap
01:06:002 (5) - remove clap and add whistle
01:06:617 - clap
01:06:822 - remove
01:07:645 (5) - ^
01:07:851 (6) - clap
01:09:288 - remove
fixed

01:16:070 (3) - remove finish
01:16:480 - ^
01:17:507 - ^
sorry no change

01:32:918 - ^
01:59:014 - clap
02:01:070 (4) - finish
02:07:028 - remove
02:07:439 - finish
02:10:932 - ^
02:13:399 (9) - remove finish
02:14:219 - finish
fixed

02:27:165 - remove
02:34:152 (3) - ^
sorry no change

03:40:728 - ^
03:45:454 (7) - finish
04:07:440 - remove
04:07:645 (4) - REMOVE
fixed

04:11:960 (2) - ^
change whistle

04:46:687 - ^
04:46:892 - ^
04:49:769 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - REMOVE THEM!
fixed

Sorry, that's all for me. PLEASE USE Distane Snap!
When you fix all mistakestoo many mistakes, i will mod it again. I'm sorry.. ._.
hmm.. I don't think mistakes. Intentional Distanse Snap.
When other Modder point them, I'll fix.

1. 02:29:838 (T) - why +2ms here? if you're trying to reset the signature, make sure there is no difference with the former one (as the bpm/offset doesn't change)
2. check the unsnapped notes with AIMod (ctrl shift a)

1. 01:38:056 (1,2,3) - just stack them or keep the normal spacing, don't see why sudden shortened, as the rhythm or pace didn't change at all.
2. 02:56:139 (2,3,4) - ^
3. 03:36:207 (6,7,8) - make the spacing more smooth
4. 04:51:002 (7,8) - how about just a 1/4 slider here?
5. 04:52:440 (1,2) - remove them?

1. 00:44:015 (3) - clap at the end
2. 01:01:070 (2) - clap
3. 01:02:714 (4) - ^
4. 01:04:358 (4,5) - ^
5. 01:15:248 (2) - clap at the end (c1)
6. 01:55:726 (T) - 1 more note here
7. 02:33:536 (2) - c1 clap
8. 02:46:481 (2) - c1 clap at the end
9. 03:44:221 (6) - replace this with 1/2 slider?
10. 03:47:714 (5) - shorten it to 03:48:125 and add a note at 03:48:331?
11. 04:51:618 (1) - end this at 04:52:646
12. 04:52:851 (1) - replace this with a slider and end at 04:53:262?

1. 04:52:851 (1) - end this at the same time as other diffs.
2. 00:56:960 (2) - end this at 00:57:576
3. 00:58:604 (4) - let this start at 00:58:398 and end at 00:59:014, add a note at 00:59:425. the current slider just stays nowhere
4. 03:02:303 (1,2,3) - spacing
5. 03:15:454 (1,2,3) - ^
6. 03:36:002 (3) - make this end at 03:36:618
7. 03:42:166 (3) - make this end at 03:42:802
8. 03:47:098 (2,3) - not fitting the vocal here, rhythm is like 3/4 3/4 4/4 1/4

Colin Hou wrote:

from #modreq

[General]

1. 02:29:838 (T) - why +2ms here? if you're trying to reset the signature, make sure there is no difference with the former one (as the bpm/offset doesn't change)
2. check the unsnapped notes with AIMod (ctrl shift a)

fixed +2ms
I didn't know AIMod.Thank you

[insane]

1. 01:38:056 (1,2,3) - just stack them or keep the normal spacing, don't see why sudden shortened, as the rhythm or pace didn't change at all.
2. 02:56:139 (2,3,4) - ^
3. 03:36:207 (6,7,8) - make the spacing more smooth
4. 04:51:002 (7,8) - how about just a 1/4 slider here?
5. 04:52:440 (1,2) - remove them?

All fixed

[Hard]

1. 00:44:015 (3) - clap at the end
2. 01:01:070 (2) - clap
3. 01:02:714 (4) - ^
4. 01:04:358 (4,5) - ^
5. 01:15:248 (2) - clap at the end (c1)
6. 01:55:726 (T) - 1 more note here
7. 02:33:536 (2) - c1 clap
8. 02:46:481 (2) - c1 clap at the end
9. 03:44:221 (6) - replace this with 1/2 slider?
10. 03:47:714 (5) - shorten it to 03:48:125 and add a note at 03:48:331?
11. 04:51:618 (1) - end this at 04:52:646
12. 04:52:851 (1) - replace this with a slider and end at 04:53:262?

All fixed

[Normal]

1. 04:52:851 (1) - end this at the same time as other diffs.
2. 00:56:960 (2) - end this at 00:57:576
3. 00:58:604 (4) - let this start at 00:58:398 and end at 00:59:014, add a note at 00:59:425. the current slider just stays nowhere
4. 03:02:303 (1,2,3) - spacing
5. 03:15:454 (1,2,3) - ^
6. 03:36:002 (3) - make this end at 03:36:618
7. 03:42:166 (3) - make this end at 03:42:802
8. 03:47:098 (2,3) - not fitting the vocal here, rhythm is like 3/4 3/4 4/4 1/4

All fixed

good luck

Thank you Modding!!

terametis wrote:

はろーはろー

[General]
Easyを作るか、Normalのスターレーティングを最低でも3.25以下にしてください。
最近modしてなかったのでルールが変わってるかもしれませんが、☆3以下のdiffが必須だったと思います。
いつのまにか超えてた・・・　
3.25以下になるようにしてみましたが、今後のModでどうしても超えてしまうようならEasyを作る方針でいきます

[Insane]
Resnap alll note.
緑線と赤線がずれてます。確認して修正してください!
fixed


赤線　　　=downbeat
青線　　　=backbeat

パターンを作って音をつける場合、基本的にはそのパターンに従って音を置いて、曲による変化だとか、自分の感覚でところどころ音を変えます。
良くあるパターンだと、ダウンビート(1,3拍目)はfinish系の音か、何も音をつけないことが多いです。
バックビート(2,4拍目)にはclap系の音を置くことが多いです。
Insaneを見てみると、00:40:521から00:42:987までは2,4拍目にclapを置くパターンになっています。
ところが、00:43:398から00:46:274からは1,3拍目にclapを置くパターン、00:46:685からは2,4拍目にclapを置くパターンに戻っています。
Hitsoundのつけ方はmapperの好みだと(僕は)思いますが、パターンを作る場合はダウンビートにどんなパターンを置くか、バックビートにどんなパターンを置くかを意識して作ったほうが良いと思います。
メモ帳にはっときます！

00:40:110 (1)　　　　remove clap　　音が無いほうがかっこいいきがする!
02:10:521 (9)　　　　中心に置いた方が良いと思います　modとは関係がないですが綺麗な図形配置の作り方を一応!

SPOILER

①　適当な位置にサークルを置く
②　Ctrl+C,Ctrl+V,Ctrl+Shift+R 6角形:60度　5角形:72度 etc
③　②を繰り返し

02:51:002 (7)　　　　Add New combo
02:52:029 (3)　　　　Remove New combo
03:16:892 (1)　　　　^
03:31:276 (8)　　　　リズムが分かりづらいので近づけたほうが良いと思います。
03:35:591 (4)　　　　Add New combo　こんな配置はどうですか!

SPOILER

　

03:36:618 (7)　　　　もうちょっと離した方が良いと思います。こんな配置はどうですか!

SPOILER

03:45:865 (1)~(4)　DS揃えたほうがいいと思います
04:48:536 (1)　　　　Remove New combo
04:49:769 (3)　　　　Add New combo
All fixed

[Hard]
Resnap alll note.
緑線と赤線がずれてます。確認して修正してください!
fixed

00:58:192 (x)　　　　Add note
01:09:083 (~)　　　　音取りに違和感を感じます。こんな感じの音取りどうでしょうか

SPOILER

01:16:480 (~)　　　　こんなかんじの音取りはどうでしょうか!

SPOILER

01:21:411 (x)　　　　Add note
01:27:987 (~)　　　　こんなかんじは!

SPOILER

03:14:016~03:15:865　　マッピングしたほうが良いと思います　　　　　
03:39:906 (4)　　　　スライダーの終わりを03:40:317に
03:42:577 (3)　　　　スライダーの終わりを03:42:783に
03:47:714 (5)　　　　もっと離したほうがいいとおもいます!
04:09:906 (~)　　　　こんな音取りはどうですか!

SPOILER

All fixed

[Normal]
Resnap alll note.
緑線と赤線がずれてます。確認して修正してください!
fixed

00:54:288 (~)　　　　こんな音取りどうですか!

SPOILER

00:56:959 (~)　　　　こんなかんじは

SPOILER

01:24:699 (~)　　　　こんな(r

SPOILER

01:52:028 (1)　　　　Remove New combo
02:06:411 (~)　　　　すこし分かりづらい気がします。　こんなかんじは!

SPOILER

02:37:646 (~)　　　　ここから始めるとわかりづらいです　こんなかんじは

SPOILER

03:47:098 (2)　　　　難しいと思います　ふつうに単発にしてみては！

SPOILER

All fixed

以上です！


ぐっどらっく！！

ありがとう！！！！
アドバイスはメモ帳にはりつけて永久保存します！

Thank you Modding

EvilElvis wrote:

Hello from E.E's modding queue!
Hard:
00:45:863 (10) - maybe something like this? Think this sound better.
01:27:370 (8) - ^
01:55:932 (2) - add circle after this
01:57:781 (1) - ^
03:47:305 (4) - ^
04:24:703 (1) - ^
04:28:607 (2) - ^
Insane:
01:11:959 (4) - ?
01:33:329 (3) - ?
01:38:466 (3) - delite , move spinner :
03:02:305 (1,2,3,4,5) - something like this?
All @suggestion@
P.S. If my mod help you , don't give me kd , mod this pls http://osu.ppy.sh/s/54225.

FreeSky wrote:

ALL fixed! Thank you!!
give a kd, and I will Modding

1. 01:37:234 - 同じタイミングに緑線が複数存在しておりUnrankableです
   必ずどちらか片方の緑線を削除してください
   
   

NewRulerNA wrote:

ちょっと拾ってUnrank要素を見つけたのでそれだけ

[General]

1. 01:37:234 - 同じタイミングに緑線が複数存在しておりUnrankableです
   必ずどちらか片方の緑線を削除してください
   
   

no kudosu

yuugeki1234 wrote:

Yo pick up from modreqs~
hi~

[General]
nothing


[Normal]

Change spinner point 04:52:442 from 04:52:853? Vocalのブレスに合わせているようならNo changeでも。
おっしゃるとおりブレスにあわせてるのでNo changeで！

[Hard]

00:30:658- move this slider at x432,y264. follow to 00:30:247(1,2,3) hits.
if u change ^ line up 00:31:274 sliders distance.
fixed!
01:14:836- ここからの音量を下げていくようなら、01:16:891と01:17:507のFinishが浮いているように聞こえます。音量を下げている為、強い音が違和感を生む場合があるからです。
打開策としては、Removeするか、Finishの音を弱くすると改善するかもしれません！
音を弱くしてみました　70%→45%
03:45:867- 単発じゃなく長めのスライダーでもいいかもしれません。
fixed!

[Insane]

move clap 01:20:076 and 01:20:692.
if u change ^ add clap at 01:20:178 and 01:20:795.
Sorry, No change
01:28:911 remove whis?　fixed!
04:13:196- remove finish? fixed!

some mod~ good map! good luckkkk~

KiyoshiX101 wrote:

[Mod Request]

Hello!!! :3

[Normal]
01:38:055 - Add Circle? <3 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377366
02:28:809 - Move it at 02:28:603 - +2 Repeat and snap the Inherited point at 02:28:603, fits better imo
02:28:603 - Fix their shape? o: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/377371

[Hard]
Perfect <3

[Insane]
Perfect <3

[Comments]
The maps are nice made, tho, no offense but I got bored listening to almost 6 mins slow song several times :C Good luck ranking it ^.^

R e d wrote:

[Normal]

01:06:822 (2) - kinda hard for "normal players" ;o in my opinion

01:51:206 - new combo?

[Hard]

01:26:405 - new combo?

03:45:867 - new combo?

[Insane]

turn "Insane" to "Lunatic" since this is touhou seems better



i loved the map, good luck

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256,328,31274,2,0,B|308:320|324:276|324:276|344:228|384:212,1,180

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zeroclover wrote:

かわい～　せいが
( ´⌒ω⌒`)
かわい～！(*'▽'*)♪


General

Lunatic

00:27:987 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - try symetric those notes, it will make more good

SPOILER

00:31:069 (6) - move this circle, and make 00:30:658 (3,4,5) - around (6) it will look like this

SPOILER

00:31:274 (7) - curve like this, because slider body not hiding (8) a lot after change

SPOILER

256,328,31274,2,0,B|308:320|324:276|324:276|344:228|384:212,1,180

00:33:535 (1) - New Combo colour should start at 00:33:946 (2) -
00:34:562 (3) - make some jump to (4) , because it was Lunatic difficult.. not must using same distance snap to all flow

SPOILER

00:38:261 (8) - same like above, make some jump to (9) , but make sure it was 2x distance snap jump
00:38:466 (9) - remove finish hitsound, too noise because (1) have finish hitsound, dont overuse it
00:42:370 (8,9,10,11,12) - set like this, more neat

SPOILER

00:44:630 (4) - make it blanket, because it fit and look more curve than 00:43:398 (1) -

SPOILER

388,152,44630,2,0,B|340:204|276:204|232:152,1,180,0|8

00:47:507 (2) - symetric with (1)?
it wil make look like this

SPOILER

00:50:178 (2) - use snap 1.0x ??
00:52:233 (1,2,3,6) - move, 00:52:233 (1,2,3) - at x168 y272 and 00:53:055 (6) - at x304y48
01:00:555 (5) - make this slider blanket to (4)

SPOILER

01:04:151 (4,5,6) - move like this

SPOILER

01:15:041 - suddenly , soft hitsound very low here
01:15:658 (1,2,3,4,1) - do like this

SPOILER

01:31:069 (1) - move to x256y348
01:48:329 (2) - try dont make this note stacked with (1)
02:00:658 (3) - ctrl+ r, more fun
02:10:726 - should have note here
02:14:836 (2) - dont stack
02:23:055 (5) - blanket it

SPOILER

02:26:959 (6) - ctrl +h / ctrl + j , make more fun
02:33:744 (1,2,3,4,5) - move 2 grid up
02:34:771 (1) - should at x292y72
02:35:593 (3) - move , follow y axis line
02:38:881 (5) - blanket 02:38:470 (2,3,4) -
02:39:908 (4) - more blanket
02:55:319 (1) - ctrl +h
03:29:223 (2) - more blanket

SPOILER

03:41:963 (3) - i like this have empty note , and this should start at 03:42:168 -
03:47:511 - add note
04:09:908 (1) - move to x480y180 , after that the rest is yours
04:24:908 - sound to low
04:41:757 (3) - move, dont get touch (2) slider body, after that 04:42:579 (5) - dont get this note hide because slider, hidden note because slider body look bad when playing
04:42:579 (5) - move, this note hidden bacve
04:51:107 - at inherit point and set volume 5% here
04:52:648 - dont forget to redo the volume hitsound

Hard

00:28:192 (5) - curve like this, more pretty

SPOILER

00:35:384 (5,6,7,8) - try dont do this, because (8) going to hit lifebar.png , ctrl + j and move it
00:47:096 (2,3,4) - symetric ??just give some idea

SPOILER

01:01:685 - add circle, because have drum hit here
01:07:439 (4,5) - make (4) more curve and blanket it for (5), look neat later

SPOILER

01:09:083 (4) - blanket (3)
01:12:165 (2,3,4,5,1) - order those notes like this, and the rest is yours

SPOILER

01:18:124 (1) - blanket (2)?
01:28:603 (2,3) - crtl + r
02:01:891 (3,4,5) - move and make symetric

SPOILER

02:04:973 (3,4) - try dont touch slider body, because it look bad when play view

SPOILER

02:15:452 (3) - i prefer make this

SPOILER

02:17:096 (7) - try make like this

02:34:566 (5) - move to x376y192
02:43:196 (2) - more curve, but dont get this slider hiding (1) and (2)
02:49:976 (3) - its too close to (2) slider body
03:17:100 (3) - move to x272 y104
03:31:689 (4,1) - move 1 grid to left for symetric
04:17:100 (6) - move far from slider body
04:22:031 (2) - move and make like this

SPOILER

04:23:059 (1,2,3) - change those notes like ^ (just copy paste)
04:35:182 (2,3) - move

SPOILER

04:36:209 (1,2,3) - just like before, copy 04:34:566 (1,2,3) -
04:40:113 - add circle
04:50:182 (1) - change this look

SPOILER

04:51:620 (1) - i dont think this spinner needed because Lunatic and normal have empty note here

Normal

00:46:069 (4) - move

01:55:932 (1) - move 1 grid to right
02:05:589 (4) - rotate about 15 - 30 degress, slider touch life bar
02:50:798 (2,3) - try symetric

SPOILER

04:40:113 (4) - move it to 04:39:908 - then extend it

a few mod for normal because already fine to play

realy?Thank you


oh.. sorry for long mod
i want to short it but lazy
star~

Yes, long and very good mod
i took a lot time to fix
But i got much from you <3
Thank you~!!

Leorda wrote:

Konnichiwa
Konniciha!!


[General]
* Your hitsound are messy, there are some random finishs, claps and whistles. Please listen to the song and put clap where snare are hit, and put whistle where bass are hit

OK, I'll try recheck sounds and to find fitting notes


[Normal]
* AR +1?

00:36:617 (4) - Remove whistle at sliderbody (keep the whistle at start and end slider)
02:09:699 (1) - The head slider is overlapped by hitbursts and spinner-osu, so beginners are hard to see (sometimes, begginers are slow to read)
02:29:630 (1) - Unsnapped tail slider
02:42:168 (3) - Remove whistle at sliderbody (keep the whistle at start and end slider)
03:20:593 (7) - New combo?
03:29:018 (1) - Remove whistle at sliderbody (keep the whistle at start and end slider)
03:30:250 (2) - ^
04:50:182 (2) - ^

All fixed

[Hard]
* There is a whistle at sliderbody, which is annoying. Remove whistle at sliderbody (keep the whistle at start and end slider)

00:38:672 (1) - This note is almost overlapped by hitbursts, I think it's better to move further away from it
02:29:630 (1) - Unsnapped tail slider

All fixed

[Lunatic]
00:56:137 (8) - New combo for 0,5x slider, it's confusing without NC it

fixed


I hate Seiga
oh...

Dusty wrote:

[Normal]
If the entire map had the spacing of the kiai section it would be so great because your notes wouldn't have the ugly overlap. (When non-stream notes overlap each other it's my pet peeve ._.)
00:36:822 (5) - Maybe make this a curved slider?
03:10:113 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - the spacing change confused me so much that I combobroke. don't think that's a good idea in a Normal...
04:14:634 (1,2) - spacing

All fixed
I should considere this map and some change

[Hard]
00:43:192 (8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - increase the spacing?
00:56:137 (5,1) - ^?
01:49:767 (1,2,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4) - ^?
02:01:069 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^?
02:23:055 (3,1) - I don't like this antijump

All fixed

[Lunatic]
parts of this feels overmapped :/ like you're still mapping to the lyrics but just adding 1/4 triples everywhere. IMO if you want to use 1/4 triples in this song you should map to the instruments instead
I see... thanks

03:36:620 (4,5) - don't like this antijump fixed

Overall, I like Hard a lot, but I think Lunatic feels overmapped (it feels like Hard with 1/4 triples, really and I wish it were more of its own thing) and the flow in Normal is kind of eh.

shojimeguro wrote:

as you say i only mod 2 diff so
let's started

Normal
00:28:603 - missing notes sorry no change
00:30:247 - this too
00:35:178 - and here

00:37:644 - 00:38:363 - fill it please fixed
00:41:754 - same sorry no change
00:43:398 - same fixed
00:45:041 - 00:46:682 - 00:48:329 - 00:51:719 - missing notes fixed

Hard
00:01:571 - start here
well the beats seems to be in place so i have no comment

That's all i can mod
i hope your beatmap will be ranked soon!!!

Thank you Modding