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Denkare - Elder Things (Short Ver.)

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Star Stream
2,034 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Star Stream
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012년 5월 11일 금요일 at 오후 9:35:43

Artist: Denkare
Title: Elder Things (Short Ver.)
Source: Cthulhu ~Otome no Fureru, Tenshi no Yubisaki~
Tags: Yousei Teikoku Fairy Yui Itsuki visual novel
BPM: 170
Filesize: 2182kb
Play Time: 01:21
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.29 stars, 65 notes)
  2. Hard (4.93 stars, 183 notes)
  3. Insane (4.87 stars, 387 notes)
  4. Normal (3.73 stars, 107 notes)
Download: Denkare - Elder Things (Short Ver.)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Denkare - Elder Things (Short Ver.)

Easy - Done
Normal - Done
Hard - Laurier
Insane - Done

go go~ :3
Mythol
1,420 posts
Joined March 2011
Mythol
Add Laurier to tags!
jossieP
1,875 posts
Joined May 2010
jossieP
timing check
bpm: ok
offset: 879 (-13 on current)
and annoying ar 9 insane /o/
Mythol
1,420 posts
Joined March 2011
Mythol
hi~

[General]
Why is there an epilepsy warning?
-5 offset (887)

[Hard]
00:56:656 (7) - Maybe NC here instead to make this rhythm easier.

[Insane]
00:14:303 (12) - NC?
00:17:127 (11) - ^
00:22:244 (11) - ^
00:46:774 (9) - ^
01:12:186 (9) - ^
01:14:303 (7) - ^
01:17:127 (5) - ^

lol useless mod :<
Mixagji
625 posts
Joined March 2011
Mixagji
[Insane]
00:14:303(12) - nc
00:16:774(8) - ^
00:19:950(6) - ^
00:21:715(7) - ^
00:23:656(1) - change to circle and 00:23:833 - put slider by 00:24:009 -
00:24:891(6) - nc
00:27:539(5) - ^
00:30:362(5) - ^
00:34:068(5) - ^
01:01:421(1.2.3.4) - maybe this rhythm is wrong. try this rhythm

01:03:715(5) - nc
01:05:656(5) - ^ and 01:06:539 too
01:08:480(8) - nc and 01:08:656 - remove nc
01:11:480(7) - nc
01:13:597(3) - nc cuz suddenly jumps
01:14:303 - ^ cuz changed jump paturn
01:15:009 - nc
01:17:303(6) - nc and follow DS. this jump doesn't suit music. i think you should change to (6.7.8.9)'s jump paturn.
01:20:039(2) - 01:20:391(6) - 01:20:568(9) - remove these notes

[Hard]
AR8の方が叩きやすい気がしました
00:24:891(4) - nc
00:45:009(2) - x256 y352
00:45:362(3) - (1)ctrl+h, add finish
00:45:715(4) - clap?
00:58:597(5) - nc 00:58:774 - remove nc

[Normal]
00:59:480(3) - whistle
01:02:303(2) - ^ sliders start
01:05:127(2) - ^

[Easy]
nothing to say~

ganbare~
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
kkk

Download: Denkare - Elder Things (Short Ver.) (Star Stream) [Hard].osu
Starry_old
Starry_old
[General]

No Video?

[Easy]

HP -1

00:58:068 (3) - Remove note.
01:10:068 (1,2,3) - Replace with the spinner.

[Normal]

00:20:656 (1) - Add the finish to start.
00:15:009 (1) - ^
00:59:480 (3) - Add a Whistle.

[Hard]

00:48:715 - Add a note here.
00:49:068 - ^
00:49:421 - ^

[Insane]

OD+1

00:20:656 (1) - Finish here.
00:34:068 (5) - New combo.

All I find :D
Miya
2,690 posts
Joined June 2011
Miya
Hi Star :3

General
  1. Nothing, i guess..
Easy
  1. Orz, i notice there are no spinner here, this will cause to player have the same score if they got same accuracy and mod. I strongly suggest to add spinner at the start like hard and your insane diff. So please add a spinner here 00:09:362- and end here 00:11:480- . Oh yes, add a finish on it's spinner since it will be good.
  2. 00:36:891 (3) - How about adding a finish in the slider end? Since it has the same rythim with 00:33:362 (5) - end, 00:39:009 (2) - end, etc.
  3. 00:53:127 (1) - Please add a finish in it start. Not consistant with 00:47:480 (3) - , 00:50:303 (1) - 00:55:950 (1) - . In other word, fill the gap >.<
  4. 01:01:597 (1) - ^
  5. 01:06:539 (2) - Sorry if it's nazi, but it would be better if the circle are centered and blanket to the slider like this > http://puu.sh/uf4Q ? If you follow this don't forget to allign this slider too 01:07:244 (1,2,3,4) -
Normal
  1. Same as easy, this diff doesn't have any spinner too. I would like to add the spinner at the start of the song like your hard and insane diff. So please add spinner at 00:09:362- to 00:10:774- . If you do this, i'm afraid you have to delete this circle for reducing the difficulty and for placing the spinner : 00:10:774 (1,2,4) - . Don't forget to add finish on the spinner.
  2. 00:29:480- You don't have any 2/1 gap before kiai but this one. I think it's awkward and not consistant with your rythim and can lead to breaking the flow. I strongly suggest that you add a note here to fill the gap. If you follow this, don't forget to add a clap and new combo on it.
  3. 00:37:597 (1) - Same as easy, how about a finish sound at the slider start?
  4. 00:43:244 (1) - ^
  5. 00:53:127 (1) - ^
  6. 01:00:186 (5) - ^ but at it's end.
  7. 01:04:421 (1) - ^
  8. 00:44:656 (1) - Hmm, i don't think a new combo should placed here, since the vocal is still continue until this spot 00:46:068 (5) - . So i will suggest to remove new combo from this circle and add a new combo here 00:46:068 (5) -
  9. 01:16:068- Hmm, this one has a 2/1 gap too. Not good, since you rarely use 2/1 gap. I would suggest you do the same thing like 00:29:480-
Hard
  1. 00:28:950 (8) - I would like to add a finish on it's end since it have a heavy beat at it's spot which support the finish sound, and make your finish sound more consistent.
  2. 00:42:715 (4,5,6) - Since you increase the spacing between 00:37:068 (4,5,6) - and 00:39:891 (4,5,6) from 1.0 to 1.2, then i think it's not good idea for 00:42:715 (4,5,6) to be stacked because people may think you will increase the spacing again in this rythim.
  3. 00:49:244 (6) - Ouch, an awkward finish sound that not in it's place. Remove it please since you don't have any finish rythim that support it.
Insane
  1. AR -1 please, since you already have a big gap between sv in insane and hard, i don't think it's a good idea to increase the gap again by making the AR set to 9.
  2. 01:03:009 (1,2,3,4) - Why not making this note jump? I see your other note is jump at this rythim, but not at this one. Very not consistant. It's break the flow very hard imo :( . So make this note jump too, think another pattern star.
  3. Maybe you want to add some finish rythim that i have mention in easy and normal in this diff too?
Maybe that's all from me. Nice map as usual start. So please accept my star :D
Good luck~
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
._.
>Starry
sorry no change
>Miya
all fixed

Download: Denkare - Elder Things (Short Ver.) (Star Stream) [Hard].osu
DerekMcD
1,484 posts
Joined February 2009
DerekMcD
[General]

Full-submit it again.
Use this, this is for the dots that can fit for the claps.
http://www.4shared.com/music/XeWO_D7k/n ... tick2.html (Account required to download...)

[Eazy]

00:14:656 (3) - Move this to x:276 y:104 or near.
00:17:833 (1) - Unsnapped.

That's all and I tried my best modding the other diffs tho.

Good luck.
Star Stream
2,034 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Star Stream
Starry
Koro McAlpine
didn't used, sorry
and updated
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
4,298 posts
Joined July 2011
[CSGA]Ar3sgice
from my queue

nice map, star~ ^^

General

  1. maybe purple color brighter ? can't see clearly sometimes ..
Easy

  1. 00:57:715 (2,3,4) - can remove 2 here
  2. 01:09:009 (2,3,4) - ^
Normal

  1. 00:10:774 (1,2,3,4) - http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot499.jpg put them in the middle?
Hard

  1. 00:39:891 (4) - stacking here makes the flow weird imo .. how about http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot498-0.jpg
  2. 00:52:597 (3,4) - move up a little ? because next is 1/2, can be misread as 1/1
  3. 01:00:715 - why no note here ..? imo 01:00:891 (1) - move here is better, also move it 1 grids off stacking 0.0
Insane

  1. 01:03:009 (1,2,3,4) - don't slow down here... it breaks the flow 0.0
  2. 00:57:715 (3,4) - like this http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot497.jpg ? I think it fits the song
that's all, good luck ~ :)
LKs
3,119 posts
Joined August 2009
LKs
From 【All requests posted here will be modded】 queue

[General]

  1. Inconsistency in EpilepsyWarning: remove it on Hard
  2. Warning: [Easy] 00:34:774 is this section needed?
    Warning: [Normal] 00:34:774
  3. Offest 886 sounds more precise to the song. Now it's a bit stagnanted
[Easy]

00:47:480 (3) - You didn't use clap on the first note 00:12:186 (1) - So I think not use here will be better

[Normal]

00:12:186 (1) - move to x164y336 for visial sense
00:13:244 (2) - move to x80y80

[Hard]

00:49:244 (6) - Forgot a clap here?
00:50:127 (1,2,3,4,5) - There is a rhythm issue, the vocal stops on 3 but you set note4 to made it a triplet. It feels weird, I suggest removing note4 and add a note at 00:54:009 (4) -
00:52:950 (1,2,3,4) -

[Insane]

00:25:686 (6) - move it's end point a frid right
00:46:774 (1) - I think a NC here will be cool, but I don't wanna this be too color mixed :<
01:01:421 (1) - confusing spacing, nonono

YE
Andrea
Beatmap Nominator
16,650 posts
Joined August 2008
Andrea
[General]

+10 to the offset, at least. Make sure to resnap all notes, green lines, etc. after that change!

[Easy]

Reduce HP Drain by 1 tick, it would be better imo.

[Normal]

01:21:001 (1) - This new combo seems useless to me.

[Hard]

00:45:707 (1) - Same as Normal, useless new combo.
01:21:001 (1) - ^

[Insane]

01:08:295 (7,8,9,1) - This is pretty confusing to read on first play.

Other than that, good job!
TTTTTTTTTTTT
1,116 posts
Joined August 2009
TTTTTTTTTTTT
It seems fine to me.

Star

Good luck!
Star Stream
2,034 posts
Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Star Stream
01:21:001 (1) i put NC here to emphasize the finish

thanks~
Laurier
1,785 posts
Joined February 2011
Laurier
^v-

Download: Denkare - Elder Things (Short Ver.) (Star Stream) [Hard].osu
popner
osu! Alumni
2,407 posts
Joined March 2011
popner
Hi ~ Mod request from My Queue.

Just suggestions:

[General]
Red timing sections is not same in all difficulty. Also fix green timing sections.

[Easy]
00:12:188 (1) - the silder is greatly curved, so you'd better: http://puu.sh/v1K3
00:15:011 (1) - 00:17:835 (1) - ^

[Normal]
01:21:011 (1) - remove NC

[Hard]
00:58:766 (1,2) - make symmetric?
01:17:648 (3,4) - stack them?

[Insane]
AR-1?
00:12:531 (2,3) - it will be better if you move them 1/2 tick earlier (to 00:12:442 (2,3)) (let the 3rd note in triple on white tick)
00:15:354 (2,3) - ^
00:24:178 (3,4) - ^ and many other
00:33:354 (1,2,3,4) - change a pattern? or there is no obvious change here to follow the vocal's change
01:20:648 (9) - NC 01:21:001 (1) - remove NC?

That's all I can find. GL~
BeatofIke
4,166 posts
Joined September 2011
BeatofIke
Request from modding queue. Couldn't find any suggestions so....

STAR~
Star Stream
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Joined June 2010
Topic Starter
Star Stream
popner - timing fixed but no changed with notes
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