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ClariS - Anata ni FIT (Short Ver.)

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Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2012년 5월 15일 화요일 at 오전 1:10:33

Artist: ClariS
Title: Anata ni FIT (Short Ver.)
Source: Nendoroid Generation
Tags: psp opening alice clara Ylinestra44 ikari_kyon
BPM: 132
Filesize: 11416kb
Play Time: 01:32
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1.47 stars, 86 notes)
  2. i_k's Taiko (4.83 stars, 491 notes)
  3. Insane (4.99 stars, 283 notes)
  4. Yli's Hard (4.56 stars, 179 notes)
  5. Yli's Normal (3.67 stars, 127 notes)
Download: ClariS - Anata ni FIT (Short Ver.)
Download: ClariS - Anata ni FIT (Short Ver.) (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy, Insane - Done
Normal, Hard - Done By Ylinestra44
i_k's Taiko - Done By ikari_kyon
Lovely song~<3

Thank you for providing awesome BG, video : ikari_kyon
Suimya
Akemi can i make a taiko >w<// for you again?
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura
Sure~ moe Sekai~ =3=
Ylinestra44
~4 hours of work and my Normal is done =)
There you go.

Download: ClariS - Anata ni FIT (Short Ver.) (Akemi_Homura) [Yli's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura
Thanks Yli~ :3
Poggo
<3
LunarSakuya
hi ^^

General
- Delete OSB file if you don't need it

Easy
00:21:560 (1) - Start this spinner at 00:22:242
00:44:514 (1) - Put this note here http://puu.sh/t5NZ and then try and make a diamond with the next 3 notes
00:48:151 (5) - NC
01:14:969 (3) - Try this? http://puu.sh/t5Qm
01:18:605 (3) - Center this http://puu.sh/t5Su, here's the code if you want:
304,308,78605,2,0,B|256:336|208:308,1,99.9999999999999,8|0

Yli's Normal
00:20:424 (3) - NC, and Delete NC on 00:21:560 (1)
00:30:424 (2,3,4) - Maybe be a bit complicated for Normal, consider redesigning
00:34:060 (2,3,4,5) - ^, also beginners may not get the stack on the first try, i like the pattern though
00:49:287 (3) - Like this? http://puu.sh/t5Zf
00:51:333 (1) - Needs a hitsound at the beginning, maybe a clap?
01:19:742 (1) - Delete NC
01:20:424 (3) - NC
01:21:560 (1) - Delete NC
01:25:424 (1) - Clap instead of Whistle
01:33:151 (5) - Add Finish

Beautiful symmetry!

Pie's Hard
00:09:742 (1,2,3) - Move this down more, gives better transition on both ends imo http://puu.sh/t63L
00:20:993 (2) - Delete, can't hear anything that follows
00:21:560 (1,2,3) - Make symmetric http://puu.sh/t64Y
00:37:924 - Add note
01:01:560 (1,2) - rhythm is a bit funny
01:15:424 (2,3) - Highlight these and Ctrl+ R, up to you
01:19:175 (2) - Delete
01:19:742 (1,2,3) - Symmetry
01:20:424 (1) - End spinner on 01:21:787
01:22:696 (1) - Begin this 2nd spinner 01:22:242
01:25:424 (1) - Add Clap at the end instead of a Finish
01:30:651 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Don't spam the Finish here lol

Insane
Maybe you could map the beginning, starting at 00:00:424 ;)

00:26:333 (3) - Add Clap
00:27:242 (8) - Add Clap instead of whistle
00:33:605 (3,8) - ^
00:50:878 (9) - Delete Finish at the beginning
00:51:333 (1) - Add Finish to the beginning
00:59:287 (2) - Make it stack perfectly under (1)
01:05:424 (7) - NC to indicate speed change

Nice map :D Good luck!!
Ylinestra44

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi ^^

Yli's Normal
00:20:424 (3) - NC, and Delete NC on 00:21:560 (1) Done
00:30:424 (2,3,4) - Maybe be a bit complicated for Normal, consider redesigning Left it for the moment. If more figure this out, I'll change
00:34:060 (2,3,4,5) - ^, also beginners may not get the stack on the first try, i like the pattern though ^
00:49:287 (3) - Like this? http://puu.sh/t5Zf Done, and made the same with (1), for keeping symmetry
00:51:333 (1) - Needs a hitsound at the beginning, maybe a clap? Done
01:19:742 (1) - Delete NC Done
01:20:424 (3) - NC Done
01:21:560 (1) - Delete NC Done
01:25:424 (1) - Clap instead of Whistle Done
01:33:151 (5) - Add Finish Done

Beautiful symmetry! Thanks *-*
Download: ClariS - Anata ni FIT (Short Ver.) (Akemi_Homura) [Yli's Normal].osu
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura

LunarSakuya wrote:

hi ^^

General
- Delete OSB file if you don't need it Fix

Easy
00:21:560 (1) - Start this spinner at 00:22:242 Fix
00:44:514 (1) - Put this note here http://puu.sh/t5NZ and then try and make a diamond with the next 3 notes okay~
00:48:151 (5) - NC Fix
01:14:969 (3) - Try this? http://puu.sh/t5Qm Fix
01:18:605 (3) - Center this http://puu.sh/t5Su, here's the code if you want:
304,308,78605,2,0,B|256:336|208:308,1,99.9999999999999,8|0
X

Insane
Maybe you could map the beginning, starting at 00:00:424 ;) hmm.. but 00:07:696 is fine I think

00:26:333 (3) - Add Clap Fix
00:27:242 (8) - Add Clap instead of whistle Fix
00:33:605 (3,8) - ^ Fix
00:50:878 (9) - Delete Finish at the beginning Fix
00:51:333 (1) - Add Finish to the beginning Fix
00:59:287 (2) - Make it stack perfectly under (1) Fix
01:05:424 (7) - NC to indicate speed change Fix

Nice map :D Good luck!!
Thank you~ :3
Poggo

LunarSakuya wrote:

Pie's Hard
00:09:742 (1,2,3) - Move this down more, gives better transition on both ends imo http://puu.sh/t63L no
00:20:993 (2) - Delete, can't hear anything that follows fixed
00:21:560 (1,2,3) - Make symmetric http://puu.sh/t64Y fixed
00:37:924 - Add notefixed
01:01:560 (1,2) - rhythm is a bit funny no
01:15:424 (2,3) - Highlight these and Ctrl+ R, up to you no
01:19:175 (2) - Deletefixed
01:19:742 (1,2,3) - Symmetryfixed
01:20:424 (1) - End spinner on 01:21:787fixed
01:22:696 (1) - Begin this 2nd spinner 01:22:242 no
01:25:424 (1) - Add Clap at the end instead of a Finish no
01:30:651 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Don't spam the Finish here lol fixed
Download: ClariS - Anata ni FIT (Short Ver.) (Akemi_Homura) [Pie's Hard].osu
Wafu
IRC Mod - Some style tips at Insane. Easy looks nice.

Here is mod for Yli's Normal:

00:56:560 (5) - Weird shape
00:14:969 (1) - CTRL+J

Uhm... looks good:D

Good luck^^
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura
Thank you~~ =3=
Sonico Makaron
MOD from PM in Game :o

[General]
looks fine

[Easy]
00:13:151 (3) - maybe make this rhythm? http://puu.sh/teGw i think its feel better
00:21:787 (x) - add note and clap
01:09:514 (1) - add NC
01:11:333 (3) - same as 00:13:151 (3)

[Yli's Normal]
00:21:560 (2,3) - maybe stack?
00:31:333 (4) - not good stack with 00:30:424 (2,3)
00:34:969 (4) - ^

[Pie's Hard]
00:21:106 (2) - перепутала места? поставь на начало слайдера хлопок а не в конце
00:22:014 (3) - удали ноту
00:27:696 (1) - убери новое комбо тут или добавь сюда новое комбо 00:31:333 (2) -
00:51:105 (3) - добавь хлопок 00:51:219 (4) - а тут убери хлопок
01:19:288 (2) - так же как и тут 00:21:106 (2)
01:20:196 (3) - удали ноту
01:21:901 (1) - этот спинер перетащи сюда 01:22:242 (1) - и закончи его тут 01:24:969 - имхо так лучше

[Insane]
00:30:878 (8) - add clap beginer slider
01:07:696 (1) - maybe make this rhythm? http://puu.sh/teVC
00:44:060 (1) - maybe symmetric with 00:43:151 (1) - and remove NC and 00:44:287 (1) - add NC
01:11:105 (8) - remove NC and 01:11:333 (9) - add NC?
01:19:742 (1) - remove clap this spiner

Good luck~
IchiGUN
Hi Akemi_Homura~
m4m for you ^^

Map looks a really good...so just suggestion :3

General
● OK

Easy

>Settings

● OK

>Mapping

● 00:12:696 (2) - distance 1.01 - 0.98, it's little but noticeable in the easy...you can move it on x:111 y:77...if you accept it

00:14:969 (1) - move too ^^
● 00:18:151 (4) - ^
● 00:29:969 (1) - down it on y:332, or up 00:29:060 (5) on y:324 - symmetry ^^
● 01:05:878 (1,2,3) - maybe move this slidet, like that http://puu.sh/tf0L
● 01:14:969 (3) - grid snap off and 1 grid up and left :3 http://puu.sh/tf0X ---> http://puu.sh/tf1J
● 01:29:969 (1) - down to y:52 - symmetry ^^

>Hitsounds

● OK
___________________
Good diff :3

===========================

Yli's Normal

>Settings

● OK

>Mapping

● 00:28:605 (6) - grid snap off and 1 grid down and left :3 http://puu.sh/tf6o ---> http://puu.sh/tf7e
● 00:31:333 (4) - ^ 1 grid down and right http://puu.sh/tf8q ---> http://puu.sh/tf9b
● 00:31:787 (5) - ^ mmm 00:30:424 (2,3) - maybe move too xDD
● 00:34:060 (2,3,4,5) - ^ as a 00:31:333 ^^' http://puu.sh/tfa8
● 01:28:606 (6) - as a 00:28:605 (6) http://puu.sh/tfc1 ---> http://puu.sh/tfbO

>Hitsounds

● OK
___________________
Nice normal =) and good sliders

===========================

Pie's Hard

>Settings

● OK

>Mapping

● 01:01:560 (1) - опусти на y:292 - симметрия
● 01:25:424 (1) - http://puu.sh/tqoE - думаю можно более симметрично и красиво сделать )

>Hitsounds

● OK
___________________
Не смог найти серьезных проблем, поэтому только мелочи :3

===========================

Insane

>Settings

● OK

>Mapping

● 00:33:605 (3) - grid snap off and 1 grid up and right :3 http://puu.sh/tqsk ---> http://puu.sh/tqsN

>Hitsounds

● OK
___________________
Awesome diff...i like it ^^

Goodluck \:D/
And Starrrrr :oops:
Poggo
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura

AcceleratorRUS wrote:

MOD from PM in Game :o

[General]
looks fine

[Easy]
00:13:151 (3) - maybe make this rhythm? http://puu.sh/teGw i think its feel better Fix~
00:21:787 (x) - add note and clap Fix~
01:09:514 (1) - add NC Fix~
01:11:333 (3) - same as 00:13:151 (3) Fix~

[Insane]
00:30:878 (8) - add clap beginer slider okay~
01:07:696 (1) - maybe make this rhythm? http://puu.sh/teVC no change~ :3
00:44:060 (1) - maybe symmetric with 00:43:151 (1) - and remove NC and 00:44:287 (1) - add NC Fix~
01:11:105 (8) - remove NC and 01:11:333 (9) - add NC? Fix~
01:19:742 (1) - remove clap this spiner Fix~

Good luck~

IchiGUN wrote:

Hi Akemi_Homura~
m4m for you ^^

Map looks a really good...so just suggestion :3

General
● OK

Easy

>Settings

● OK

>Mapping

● 00:12:696 (2) - distance 1.01 - 0.98, it's little but noticeable in the easy...you can move it on x:111 y:77...if you accept it Fix~

00:14:969 (1) - move too ^^ Fix~
● 00:18:151 (4) - ^ Fix~
● 00:29:969 (1) - down it on y:332, or up 00:29:060 (5) on y:324 - symmetry ^^ Fix~
● 01:05:878 (1,2,3) - maybe move this slidet, like that http://puu.sh/tf0L Fix~
● 01:14:969 (3) - grid snap off and 1 grid up and left :3 http://puu.sh/tf0X ---> http://puu.sh/tf1J Fix~
● 01:29:969 (1) - down to y:52 - symmetry ^^ Fix~

>Hitsounds

● OK
___________________
Good diff :3
Thank you~ =3=/
Chewin
Hai, from my queue ~

Easy
  1. 00:21:787 (5) - It's better if you don't overlap this circle with the previous one, because this is an easy and it's 1/2
  2. 00:36:787 (1) - I'd use a soft finish 70% volume here, it sounds really good
  3. 00:54:969 (5) - New combo
  4. 01:33:605 Add circle with whistle
Yli's Normal
  1. 00:51:333 (1) - Start it with a finish
  2. 01:33:605 Add circle with whistle
Pie's Hard
  1. 00:43:833 (9) - Add a clap at the end too?
  2. 00:51:333 (5) - If you follow above, add a clap
  3. 01:05:878 (1) to 01:19:969 (2)Why copy and past.. This is a tv size, so the song and map are short. Don't make the same thing, so I suggest you to edit this part..
Insane
  1. 01:33:605 Add circle with whistle
  2. Patterns are good but I think you need to improve the style of the map >w<
Good luck with it :3
Ylinestra44

dragonxcz wrote:

Here is mod for Yli's Normal:

00:56:560 (5) - Weird shape No changes
00:14:969 (1) - CTRL+J Uhm, no

AcceleratorRUS wrote:

[Yli's Normal]
00:21:560 (2,3) - maybe stack? Done
00:31:333 (4) - not good stack with 00:30:424 (2,3) Changed
00:34:969 (4) - ^ ^

IchiGUN wrote:

Yli's Normal

>Settings

● OK

>Mapping

● 00:28:605 (6) - grid snap off and 1 grid down and left :3 http://puu.sh/tf6o ---> http://puu.sh/tf7e Done
● 00:31:333 (4) - ^ 1 grid down and right http://puu.sh/tf8q ---> http://puu.sh/tf9b Changed the pattern as supposed by previous mod
● 00:31:787 (5) - ^ mmm 00:30:424 (2,3) - maybe move too xDD ^
● 00:34:060 (2,3,4,5) - ^ as a 00:31:333 ^^' http://puu.sh/tfa8 ^
● 01:28:606 (6) - as a 00:28:605 (6) http://puu.sh/tfc1 ---> http://puu.sh/tfbO Done

>Hitsounds

● OK
___________________
Nice normal =) and good sliders

Chewin wrote:

Hai, from my queue ~
Yli's Normal
  1. 00:51:333 (1) - Start it with a finish Changed
  2. 01:33:605 Add circle with whistle Done
Download: ClariS - Anata ni FIT (Short Ver.) (Akemi_Homura) [Yli's Normal].osu
YTYuyu
Alright let's see what I can find. Mod requested in-game.

Bold: Unrankable/must fix.
Red: You should fix it, but it's up to you.
Italic: Suggestion. Feel free to ignore this if you don't like it.
Blue: Comment. Just putting this for fun :P

[General]
CLEAR!

[Easy]
increase the OD by 1. you're making this diff "too" easy for beginners.
00:14:969 (1) - you shouldn't unstack notes on easy diffs because since the hitburst is covering this note, it'd be hard for beginners to know where the note is, or when to hit this note, so unstack it so that it'd be easier for beginners.
00:20:424 (3,4,5) - idk about this arrangement. since it ends at the red line and you have to hit at the red line, it'd be hard for beginners to time this right. i suggest doing something easier for beginners, and same as above about the stacking on (4,5).
00:49:514 (2,3) - the clap should be at the beginning of (3). adding it at the end of (2) ruins the consistency in claps.
00:50:878 (3) - replace this for a circle and a 1/1 slider, remove the NC for the circle because it follows instrumental. the 1/1 slider should be a NC because of new lyrics.
00:54:969 (5) - make this a NC. same reason as above.
01:04:287 (6) - i don't like where this note is. yes it's following vocals, but it doesn't fit with this part that well, so move this back to the white tick and end it till 01:05:424 as this flows a lot smoother and nicer to the next note.
01:13:151 (1) - same as 00:14:969.
01:14:969 (3) - this might confuse beginners as it's stacked on the same spot as (1). they might let go because of that.

[Yli's Normal]
00:07:696 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this blanket is bad because it's touching. if you space it out, it'd look a lot neater during gameplay.
00:29:514 (1) - replace the clap for a whistle. i don't like how the clap appears randomly.
00:33:151 (1) - ^
overall there are so many bad overlaps. find them yourself and fix them.

[Pie's Hard]
maybe OD6 to put a nice challenge players?
00:09:742 (1,2,3) - make these curved sliders symmetrical. it looks a bit ugly during gameplay.
00:19:287 (2) - same as above and Ctrl+H for an easier path for players.
00:25:424 (1) - i see a potential clap pattern, so add claps at the beginning and at the end. it starts slow and then the claps pick up as it progresses.
00:29:060 (1) - ^
00:32:696 (1) - ^
00:51:333 (5) - maybe add a finish to match the vocals?
01:17:469 (2) - same as 00:09:742.
01:19:288 (2) - ^
01:25:424 (1) - same as 00:25:424.
01:29:060 (1) - ^
my concern on this is the 1/2 sliders. it barely curves during gameplay and it doesn't flow that smooth and accurate.


[Insane]
00:46:105 (1,2,3,4,5) - make these notes into a star pattern. it'd look fun and challenging for players who paly the insane diff. as it stands, the shape this is forming looks ugly.
pretty nice diff overall.

I guess that's it. GL :D
Topic Starter
Akemi_Homura

Chewin wrote:

Hai, from my queue ~

Easy
  1. 00:21:787 (5) - It's better if you don't overlap this circle with the previous one, because this is an easy and it's 1/2 Fix
  2. 00:36:787 (1) - I'd use a soft finish 70% volume here, it sounds really good Fix
  3. 00:54:969 (5) - New combo Fix
  4. 01:33:605 Add circle with whistle Fix
Insane
  1. 01:33:605 Add circle with whistle okay~
  2. Patterns are good but I think you need to improve the style of the map >w<
Good luck with it :3

Byakugan249 wrote:

Alright let's see what I can find. Mod requested in-game.

[Easy]
increase the OD by 1. you're making this diff "too" easy for beginners. Fix
00:14:969 (1) - you shouldn't unstack notes on easy diffs because since the hitburst is covering this note, it'd be hard for beginners to know where the note is, or when to hit this note, so unstack it so that it'd be easier for beginners. Fix
00:20:424 (3,4,5) - idk about this arrangement. since it ends at the red line and you have to hit at the red line, it'd be hard for beginners to time this right. i suggest doing something easier for beginners, and same as above about the stacking on (4,5). Fix
00:49:514 (2,3) - the clap should be at the beginning of (3). adding it at the end of (2) ruins the consistency in claps. Fix
00:50:878 (3) - replace this for a circle and a 1/1 slider, remove the NC for the circle because it follows instrumental. the 1/1 slider should be a NC because of new lyrics. Just Fix NC ;w;
00:54:969 (5) - make this a NC. same reason as above. Fix
01:04:287 (6) - i don't like where this note is. yes it's following vocals, but it doesn't fit with this part that well, so move this back to the white tick and end it till 01:05:424 as this flows a lot smoother and nicer to the next note.Fix
01:13:151 (1) - same as 00:14:969. Fix
01:14:969 (3) - this might confuse beginners as it's stacked on the same spot as (1). they might let go because of that. I think it's okay~ =3=/

[Insane]
00:46:105 (1,2,3,4,5) - make these notes into a star pattern. it'd look fun and challenging for players who paly the insane diff. as it stands, the shape this is forming looks ugly. okay~ change~! :3
pretty nice diff overall.

I guess that's it. GL :D
Thanks~! Chewin, 249-san =3=~
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