TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

Pie's Hard

00:14:514 - I think it would be better to use a clap than finish no
00:21:787 - both clap and finish yeah
00:36:787 - Add new combo added
00:39:969 - move this slider's left waypoint to x:84 y:176 so let it inside of slider no
01:12:696 - Add clap and remove finish no
01:19:969 - both clap and finish ok
01:32:696~01:34:060 - Make the sound fade away ok

Byakugan249 wrote:

[Yli's Normal]
00:07:696 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - this blanket is bad because it's touching. if you space it out, it'd look a lot neater during gameplay. How shall I space that out without ignoring Distance Snap? Exactly - it's not possible
00:29:514 (1) - replace the clap for a whistle. i don't like how the clap appears randomly. Done
00:33:151 (1) - ^ ^
overall there are so many bad overlaps. find them yourself and fix them. Just as before

Philippines wrote:

NORMAL
00:21:560 (2,3) - These notes aren't stacked with 00:19:969, please stack them like what you did on the kiai part. What you mean? I don't understand
AR -1 too. This diff seems to be a bit hard for a normal diff. But that's just me. Disaggree

TTTTTTTTTTTT wrote:

Yli's Normal

00:20:651 - remove clap Disaggree
00:59:287 - end at 00:59:742 so as to follow the vocal It does end there
01:00:196 - end at 01:00:651 in order to follow the vocal ^
01:18:833 - remove clap Diaggree
01:33:151 - double green timings Deleted one

1. I can hear some of the slider slider sound at some part. And i think it's not good. Please use this silences sliderslide sound : Download: soft-sliderslide.zip

1. 00:22:242 (1) - The finish sound at the spinner should be on this spot : 00:25:878- because the heavy beat of the music is on that spot. It will be awkward if it lands there because you follow the vocal, and the vocal ends silently. So remove the finish from the spinner, and it will be more good if you can silence the end of the spinner.
2. 00:25:764- Like i told before, the finish sound should be on here. So add a note with finish sound here.
3. 00:54:514 (4,1) - The finish sound should be on 1 start. Not on the 4. So switch it please, it sounds awkward.
4. 01:21:560 (1) - Same as 00:22:242 (1) -, just remove the finish from the spinner and silent the end.
5. 01:25:878- Same as before too, if you want to keep the finish sound, this should be the place. Add a note with the finish sound.

1. 00:14:514 (4) - The finish sound should be on 00:14:969 (1) - start because the heavy beat from the music is on that spot. Just remove the finish sound from here and add a clap for the consistencies.
2. 00:21:560 (2,3) - You can make this to stack with 00:19:969 (2) - . It doesn't good if it just overlap partly like this.
3. 00:22:242 (1) - Same as easy diff, the finish sound is not fit here. Please remove it and silence the spinner end. The finish is should be on 00:25:878 (2) - start
4. 00:56:560 (5) - The finish at the end doesn't fit there and sounds awkward. Remove it please. It should be on 00:58:605 (1) - start.
5. 01:12:696 (4) - Same as above, this finish sound doesnt fit here and sounds awkward, please remove the finish sound and change it into clap to make it consistant. The finish sound is should be on 01:13:151 (1) - start

1. 00:09:060 (3,1) - Very surprising jump. Really, it surprised me when i encounter it for the first time. Please rethink the pattern because it break the game flow suprisingly.
2. 00:10:651 (3) - This finish sound at the end should be on 00:11:333 (1) - (How many times i have to repeat this? orz)
3. 00:14:514 (6) - This one too, the finish sounds here should be on 00:14:969 (1) - start
4. 00:17:924 (5) - This one too, change the finish into the clap and add the finish at 00:18:605 (1) - start.
5. 00:22:242 (1) - The finish sounds at the end is doesn't fit here. Please remove it and silence that spinner end.
6. 00:25:424 (1) - I don't think that finish is fit at the end. It's better to remove the finish and change it clap.
7. 00:29:060 (1) - ^
8. 00:32:696 (1) - ^
9. 00:38:605 (5) - This combo is too long, you can add a new combo here.
10. 00:39:287 (9) - Change the finish sound at the end to whistle please. The finish sound should be on 00:40:424 (1) - start.
11. 00:54:969 (3) - I think you can add a finish here because it has the same beat with 00:51:333 (5) -
12. 00:58:151 (8) - Orz, this finish sound is not fit here. Please change into clap for consistencies. The finish sounds should be really on 00:58:605 (1) - start.
13. 01:02:242 (3) - Same here, the finish at the end is not fit. Change it into whistle please for consistencies.
14. 01:08:378 (2) - Overused and awkward clap sound at the end. Please remove it.
15. 01:08:833 (3) - Same here, the finish should be clap.
16. 01:12:696 (6) - The finish sounds should be on 01:13:151 (1) - start. Please remove it and add a clap into end for consistencies.
17. 01:16:106 (5) - ^ change finish at the end into clap, and add finish at 01:16:787 (1) - start
18. 01:25:424 (1) - Same as before too. Change the finish at the end into clap.

1. AR 9 is not fit with the song that has 132 bpm. Please reduce the AR to 8. It will become nice to play and really more playable.
2. 00:22:242 (1) - Same as other diff, please remove the finish from this spinner. And if you want you can silence the end of this spinner.
3. 00:54:514 (1) - If you want to add a finish sounds here, it should be on 00:54:969 (2) - not here. So, just remove the finish sound from here.
4. 01:22:242 (1) - Same as before, i prefer to remove this finish from the spinner.
5. 01:26:333 (3,8) - Miss claps at this note? If so, please add them.

Miya wrote:

Hi there~
ClariS <3

General

1. I can hear some of the slider slider sound at some part. And i think it's not good. Please use this silences sliderslide sound : [attachment=0:d1e9a]soft-sliderslide.zip[/attachment:d1e9a]

Thanks~ <3

Easy

1. 00:22:242 (1) - The finish sound at the spinner should be on this spot : 00:25:878- because the heavy beat of the music is on that spot. It will be awkward if it lands there because you follow the vocal, and the vocal ends silently. So remove the finish from the spinner, and it will be more good if you can silence the end of the spinner. fix~
2. 00:25:764- Like i told before, the finish sound should be on here. So add a note with finish sound here. fix~
3. 00:54:514 (4,1) - The finish sound should be on 1 start. Not on the 4. So switch it please, it sounds awkward. fix~
4. 01:21:560 (1) - Same as 00:22:242 (1) -, just remove the finish from the spinner and silent the end. fix~
5. 01:25:878- Same as before too, if you want to keep the finish sound, this should be the place. Add a note with the finish sound. fix~

Insane

1. AR 9 is not fit with the song that has 132 bpm. Please reduce the AR to 8. It will become nice to play and really more playable. okay o.o
2. 00:22:242 (1) - Same as other diff, please remove the finish from this spinner. And if you want you can silence the end of this spinner. fix~
3. 00:54:514 (1) - If you want to add a finish sounds here, it should be on 00:54:969 (2) - not here. So, just remove the finish sound from here. fix~
4. 01:22:242 (1) - Same as before, i prefer to remove this finish from the spinner. fix~
5. 01:26:333 (3,8) - Miss claps at this note? If so, please add them. fix~

Oh, god that really hard work. Frankly, the hard diff need to have more work >.<
I'm sorry if i'm too picky, but that finish sound really sounds off-spot from the music. And it really disturb me.
Good luck~

Miya wrote:

Pie's Hard

1. 00:09:060 (3,1) - Very surprising jump. Really, it surprised me when i encounter it for the first time. Please rethink the pattern because it break the game flow suprisingly.
2. 00:10:651 (3) - This finish sound at the end should be on 00:11:333 (1) - (How many times i have to repeat this? orz)
3. 00:14:514 (6) - This one too, the finish sounds here should be on 00:14:969 (1) - start
4. 00:17:924 (5) - This one too, change the finish into the clap and add the finish at 00:18:605 (1) - start.
5. 00:22:242 (1) - The finish sounds at the end is doesn't fit here. Please remove it and silence that spinner end.
6. 00:25:424 (1) - I don't think that finish is fit at the end. It's better to remove the finish and change it clap.
7. 00:29:060 (1) - ^
8. 00:32:696 (1) - ^
9. 00:38:605 (5) - This combo is too long, you can add a new combo here.
10. 00:39:287 (9) - Change the finish sound at the end to whistle please. The finish sound should be on 00:40:424 (1) - start.
11. 00:54:969 (3) - I think you can add a finish here because it has the same beat with 00:51:333 (5) -
12. 00:58:151 (8) - Orz, this finish sound is not fit here. Please change into clap for consistencies. The finish sounds should be really on 00:58:605 (1) - start.
13. 01:02:242 (3) - Same here, the finish at the end is not fit. Change it into whistle please for consistencies.
14. 01:08:378 (2) - Overused and awkward clap sound at the end. Please remove it.
15. 01:08:833 (3) - Same here, the finish should be clap.
16. 01:12:696 (6) - The finish sounds should be on 01:13:151 (1) - start. Please remove it and add a clap into end for consistencies.
17. 01:16:106 (5) - ^ change finish at the end into clap, and add finish at 01:16:787 (1) - start
18. 01:25:424 (1) - Same as before too. Change the finish at the end into clap.

Miya wrote:

Yli's Normal

1. 00:14:514 (4) - The finish sound should be on 00:14:969 (1) - start because the heavy beat from the music is on that spot. Just remove the finish sound from here and add a clap for the consistencies. Changed
2. 00:21:560 (2,3) - You can make this to stack with 00:19:969 (2) - . It doesn't good if it just overlap partly like this. Done, but messed a bit the Distance Snap (1,06 instead of 1,00)
3. 00:22:242 (1) - Same as easy diff, the finish sound is not fit here. Please remove it and silence the spinner end. The finish is should be on 00:25:878 (2) - start Done
4. 00:56:560 (5) - The finish at the end doesn't fit there and sounds awkward. Remove it please. It should be on 00:58:605 (1) - start. Changed
5. 01:12:696 (4) - Same as above, this finish sound doesnt fit here and sounds awkward, please remove the finish sound and change it into clap to make it consistant. The finish sound is should be on 01:13:151 (1) - start Done

ykcarrot wrote:

Hi
Yeah, ClariS ;D


[Insane]
01:15:423 (3) - This spacing looks weird Fix~
01:19:742 (1) - It doesn't fit well IMO. Maybe two circles and one slider would be better. http://puu.sh/u00R Fix~
01:32:696 (5) - NC. Because there is big change of spacing after this slider. okay~ :3

[Easy]
01:04:060 (6) - Try to avoid overlapping. It's a bit ugly. For an example http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/313196 Fix~
01:19:742 (1,1) - Double spinners aren't so good idea in Easy diff. Fix~


Good luck!

Katty Pie wrote:

you are the false traitor! threw me! I hate such people as you

ykcarrot wrote:

[Yli's Hard]
Fine :3


[Yli's Normal]
00:20:424 (1,2,3) - How about this position? http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/313184 Good idea --> Changed
00:36:332 (1) - Remove NC. And place it under 00:35:878 (6). Like this 00:32:242 (6,7) Done
00:36:787 (2) - NC. And adjust their positions. For an example http://puu.sh/u0bp I flipped it horizontally, so now it is where 00:36:332 (1) was
01:32:696 (4) - NC Done

1. Tags are inconsistent across all diffs. Add "Katty Pie" to all diffs' tags.

1. 00:14:969 (1) - Change up this wave a bit so that it blankets 00:14:514 (4) - better
2. 00:49:969 - Change up one of your custom sliderticks so that you get this properly hitsounded.
3. 01:04:060 (6) - The bends are really obvious; you should make your arcs smoother.

1. 00:07:696 (1) - Nice copy and paste and rotate 120 degrees job you've got here! (Seriously, map this.)
2. Because you're using 1.00x distance spacing, 00:07:696 (1,2,3) - looks cramped.
3. 00:35:196 - Sorry, the music is evidently different here, you can't rely on copy and paste anymore ):
4. 00:44:287 (1) - From here to 00:47:242 (4) - is extremely boring.
5. 00:56:560 (5) - This slider is ridiculously lengthened without even an attempt to being mapped to anything. Change it up; at least you did something nice with 01:02:014 (1) - .
6. 01:05:878 (1) - Great, the copy paste comes back. Please don't.

1. If this diff has as much copy and p- Oh, it does, I'm skipping it.

1. Diff skipped this time cuz mapper doesn't respond to mods.

1. 00:38:605 (7,8) - I'd map this to the vocals, since you can't really do that much, out of the ordinary.
2. 00:42:242 (8,9) - Same with this.
3. 00:52:014 (3,4) - Spacing is awkward here. If anything, (4) should be a jump.
4. Considering how this dies down, I expected a smaller spacing at 01:29:060 (1) - .

356,104,80424,6,0,B|420:192|354:288,1,195

those wrote:

From .:Let those mod those maps:.

[General]

1. Tags are inconsistent across all diffs. Add "Katty Pie" to all diffs' tags. tags Fixed all diff.

[Easy]

1. 00:14:969 (1) - Change up this wave a bit so that it blankets 00:14:514 (4) - better Fix
2. 00:49:969 - Change up one of your custom sliderticks so that you get this properly hitsounded. Fix
3. 01:04:060 (6) - The bends are really obvious; you should make your arcs smoother. Fix~

[Insane]

1. 00:38:605 (7,8) - I'd map this to the vocals, since you can't really do that much, out of the ordinary. remained that now
2. 00:42:242 (8,9) - Same with this. ^
3. 00:52:014 (3,4) - Spacing is awkward here. If anything, (4) should be a jump. Fix
4. Considering how this dies down, I expected a smaller spacing at 01:29:060 (1) - . remained that now too :3

[/list]

Good luck :3

Mythol wrote:

Sorry for being so late

[Easy]
SliderMultiplier:0.799999999999999 Fix~ :3
01:33:605 (5) - Remove note? no~ ;_;

[Insane]
00:47:242 (6) - O_O? Are these slider points on purpose? yeah~ :3
01:33:605 (2) - Remove note? no~ ;_;

thats all~
GL :>

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Hi ~ Akemi_Homura ~

Mod time for my Queue ~

[General]

1. 01:33:605 (2) - I think Remove this much better with end. I think it's fine, but some people said remove that note. So remove that~ :3

[Easy]

1. 01:01:105 (4) - Add new combo,lyrics start to here. Fix~

That's all ~ Nice song and mapset ~

Call me back recheck ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Recheck ~ You are forgot Remove 01:33:605 (2) in Normal,Hard diff ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

Recheck ~ You are forgot Remove 01:33:605 (2) in Normal,Hard diff ~

Kawayi Rika wrote:

OK ~ everything fine now ~

Here we go :3