1. Easy (1,29 stars, 192 notes)
2. Hard (3,21 stars, 513 notes)
3. Insane (4,3 stars, 677 notes)
4. Normal (2,2 stars, 357 notes)

1. This mapset is unrankable imo. Normal diff should be the star rate ( x < 3.24 ). so i recommend you to make easy diff or reduce it.
2. i like this song

1. 00:02:531 (5) - put this note on here ------->http://puu.sh/9hq8B/a3662b0b35.jpg because it is bad overlap with (7) now
2. 00:22:485 (4) - add whistle on the head?
3. 00:23:601 (4) - ^
4. 00:54:996 (2) - just finish ._.?
5. 00:35:322 (2) - should be keep on DS is 1.0x with (3) you can move to x:52 y:256
6. 00:37:834 (5) - remove whistle of the head and add it on tail (your hit sound style
7. 00:59:322 (5) - move to x:420 y:204 can make a good blanket
8. 02:01:554 (7,1) - not good NC here ...see this NC 00:54:578 (1,2) - it is same rhythm
9. 02:03:787 (7,1) - ^
10. 02:04:903 (5,1) - ^

1. 00:57:229 (2) - add finish ----same insane diff
2. 00:58:345 (3) - ^
3. 01:01:834 (1) - ^

1. hit sound same hard,insane
2. 00:33:648 (3,4,5) - it is strange that rhythm here try feel good ------>http://puu.sh/9hDov/8f3706e44c.jpg

wmtokok wrote:

HI~M4M
General

1. This mapset is unrankable imo. Normal diff should be the star rate ( x < 3.24 ). so i recommend you to make easy diff or reduce it.
2. i like this song

Im not sure if thats true, so I will leave it as it is for now.


Insane

1. 00:02:531 (5) - put this note on here ------->http://puu.sh/9hq8B/a3662b0b35.jpg because it is bad overlap with (7) now Fixed
2. 00:22:485 (4) - add whistle on the head? Fixed
3. 00:54:996 (2) - just finish ._.? Fixed
4. 00:35:322 (2) - should be keep on DS is 1.0x with (3) you can move to x:52 y:256 Fixed
5. 00:37:834 (5) - remove whistle of the head and add it on tail (your hit sound style Fixed
6. 00:59:322 (5) - move to x:420 y:204 can make a good blanket Fixed
7. 02:01:554 (7,1) - not good NC here ...see this NC 00:54:578 (1,2) - it is same rhythm Fixed
8. 02:03:787 (7,1) - ^ Fixed
9. 02:04:903 (5,1) - ^

Fixed


Hard

1. 00:57:229 (2) - add finish ----same insane diff Fixed
2. 00:58:345 (3) - ^ Fixed
3. 01:01:834 (1) - ^

Fixed

Normal

1. hit sound same hard,insane Fixed
2. 00:33:648 (3,4,5) - it is strange that rhythm here try feel good ------>http://puu.sh/9hDov/8f3706e44c.jpg

[/list] I'd like it as it is

end~

sorry...i can't find more thing to mod it

CXu wrote:

Det stemmer at du må ha en Easy her, ettersom det må være god difficulty spread og også nybegynnere kan spillet mappet ditt.

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1. 02:28:903 - maybe note with "finish" hitsound?
   
   [Normal]
2. 01:03:927 (1) - maybe smth kike that? http://puu.sh/9lLPd/68ab7392cf.jpg
3. 01:09:368 (4,1) - maybe remove the jump?
4. 01:28:066 (6) - maybe blanket (5)?

NiceWolf4 wrote:

Hi!

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1. 02:28:903 - maybe note with "finish" hitsound? No thanks, because then I'd need one here 02:33:368 here 02:37:834 and here aswell 02:42:299
   
   [Normal]
2. 01:03:927 (1) - maybe smth kike that? http://puu.sh/9lLPd/68ab7392cf.jpg sorry, I like it as it is now.
3. 01:09:368 (4,1) - maybe remove the jump? No need
4. 01:28:066 (6) - maybe blanket (5)?

Fixed the blanket

So, your map is great! I've pleased SB, so cute~

Shurelia wrote:

おっす!やったよ!

[General]

The Artist's name should be "paraoka" not "Paraoka".

Fixed

[Normal]

1. 00:41:741 (1) - Add Clap on the reverse slider. Fixed
2. 01:01:834 (1,2,3) - These 3 sliders had a very long distance for normal diff. Consider to reducing it~ Fixed
3. Consider reducing the Hitsound volume. From 100% to 60%-80% would be good enough~. no need
4. 01:59:880 (1) - Add Finish on the Head~. Fixed
5. 02:01:973 (1) - ^^^ Fixed
6. 02:04:206 (7) - ^^^ Fixed
7. 02:04:903 (1,2) - ^^^

no and yes

[Hard]

1. Consider reducing the Hitsound volume. From 100% to 60%-80% would be good enough~. no need
2. 00:21:229 (1) - Remove NC and add it to 00:21:648 (3) ~ Fixed
3. 00:21:368 (2) - Remove this slider , and move 00:21:089 (1) - to 00:21:229 (1) - it'll fits the songs well~ no thanks
4. 01:17:182 (1) - Why this note has a different hitsound? Fixed
5. 01:31:275 (2) - Add Finish on the head~ No thanks
6. 01:59:880 (1) - ^^^ Fixed
7. 02:01:973 (2) - ^^^ no thanks
8. 02:04:206 (2) - ^^^ Fixed
9. 02:04:903 (1,2) - ^^^ No and yes
10. 02:28:903 (4) - Add Note here

huh?? no

[Insane]

1. 01:05:182 (5,6,7) - Add Finish no thanks
2. Consider reducing the Hitsound volume. From 100% to 60%-80% would be good enough~. no need
3. 01:59:880 (1) - Add Finish on the head. Fixed
4. 02:12:159 (5,6,7) - Add Finish no thanks
5. 02:28:903 (8) - Add note would be good~

huh?? no

That's all from me. Hope this help.
And truly sorry for the delay.

364,192,10485,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,268,10764,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,192,11043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,120,11322,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,192,11601,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,268,11880,1,8,0:0:0:0:

Don wrote:

General
I can barely hear the claps! There is something wrong, because they don't have any sound at all. I will try to fix this as soon as I can.

Easy
00:17:182 (5) - http://puu.sh/9prxm/bea4c2cb43.jpg Fixed
00:27:089 (1,2) - Make these into short sliders no thanks:)
00:38:950 (4) - http://puu.sh/9prDw/607de8cb32.jpg Fixed
01:14:113 (5,1) - Fix the flow huh?
01:31:694 (1) - Perhaps a long slider? no thanks:)
01:53:182 (1) - Curve Fixed
03:04:624 - Please up the sliderspeed a bit? no because it's an 'Easy' diff

Normal
Keep your entire normal DS'd! Feel like the short sliders are too hard. Not going to point these out. Fixed I hope
00:07:136 (3,4) - this flow feels weird supposed to be like that
01:03:787 - Add a note stacked under (1) huh? no
01:15:229 (1,2,3,4) - http://puu.sh/9pskM/6a1e39ca40.jpg I dunno, I'll let it stay as it is ;/
01:45:089 (4,5) - Flow is weird supposed to be like that, and you can atleast give an example of what I could do.
02:48:717 (1,2) - Weak>Strong sliders are bad. Try only to do sliders from weak>weak or strong>strong or strong>weak I know what you are talking about, but no thanks, in this case.
03:11:322 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - Don't change these jumps. These are cool. lol thanks xD

Hard
I really enjoy the velocity! thanks again
00:04:345 (3,4) - Multiple repeats feel weird for hard+ hmmm, I actually agree with you, but in this case, if feels pretty ok to have it, besides, if you NEVER use those more than one repeat sliders on higher than hard, that would not be good. I hope I don't have to say why..
00:10:485 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This pattern is weird, try two triangles perhaps? It's just my style

364,192,10485,5,4,0:0:0:0:
256,268,10764,1,8,0:0:0:0:
148,192,11043,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,120,11322,1,8,0:0:0:0:
364,192,11601,1,0,0:0:0:0:
256,268,11880,1,8,0:0:0:0:

00:14:950 (1,2,3,4) - This spacing is very confusing. Not going to mention this again, like in normal. Breaking DS is fine sometimes, but this is confusing sorry
01:28:206 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Red>White sliders aren't nice Not going to mention again. I agree 45% and disagree 55%... I'll leave it as it is.
02:07:275 (4,1) - Spacing between these notes is weird. 02:07:973 (1,2) - This jump, however, is fine. Fixed! I just used Ctrl+G to solve this case
03:00:089 - Up the sliderspeed a bit? they are fine

Insane
I'm not the best player, and this is a map I don't feel qualified to mod. I'm not too familiar with the style, but spacing looks fine, patterning looks fine... I'll let this one go with no comments

1. 00:07:136 (3,4,5) - confusing to read when playing for the first time because of the overlap. consider moving (5) somewhere other than the head of the slider.
2. 00:35:322 (2,3) - avoid overlapping if you can
3. 00:37:554 (3,5) - circle on slider body is usually bad. 00:36:857 (8,2) - is a little better because everything is closer
4. 00:40:903 (6,8) - ^
5. 00:43:694 (10,1) - shorten the slider and make sure you have a key press on the white tick just like the ones after this
6. 00:43:694 (10,1) - move each side one grid away so the middle circles don't overlap
7. 00:54:299 (7,1) - this overlap can be avoided
8. 01:33:648 (3,4,5,6) - also confusing to read
9. 01:50:671 (9,1) - same thing i said earlier
10. 01:54:857 (7,8,9,10,1) - looks ugly the way you stack the circles not exactly under the end of the slider in a way that doesn't agree with flow.
11. 02:18:857 (6,7,8,1) - the head of 02:19:834 (1) is not at the same location as the end of 02:18:857 (6) which means the blanket isn't right
12. if you're gonna put a break near the end of the song, you should have one around the middle/beginning too, usually after the first chorus.
13. 03:02:392 (1) - the one random slider speedup here doesn't make sense
14. In general, you shouldn't map something over the ghost of a object while it's still fading away in the editor. if you do, it should be exactly on the same spot.

1. 00:19:415 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - spacing pattern does not comply with distance snap
2. 00:28:345 (1,2,3) - avoid this overlap
3. 00:29:322 (1,2,3,4) - the distances among these are very similar and they're part of the same combo even though the first circle is 2 beats away
4. 00:35:601 (3,4,5) - overlap here too
5. 00:51:648 the music is very strong here so map something
6. 01:43:694 (7,1) - these can be blanketed
7. 02:13:275 (1,2) - don't need the red slider points
8. 02:27:787 (1,2,3) - can be spaced better
9. 03:07:973 put something here, strong beat with long white tick
10. HP drain can be a little higher in hard
11. same stuff I said about breaks and overlapping