1. Hard (4.06 stars, 363 notes)
2. Normal (2.75 stars, 253 notes)

My 1st submitted map. Dedicated to Miki-chan! (Kotaro Chii) \>w</
It's a relaxing song~ Good to play when you're about to sleep rofl
Ranked!~

Special Thanks to:

Jarby for the offset
Sakura Hana for helping me with the disappearing BG issue XD
HeatKai for some help with the slider thing
Zekira for some SB tips now I know how to do some SB >w<
AngelEyE for the lyrics! Really appreciated! ^w^
Aleks719 for the new offset and some SB help
wcx19911123 for the latest offset! :3
wmfchris for some tips for remap~
blissfulyoshi for ranking it XD

TsukiAnimeGirl wrote:

Hey, I found your map and decided to help a little.

Normal:
01:39:706 - Take the slider and put a circle. Sure thing. Fixed.
01:45:724 - Try making this slider start at 45:925 (ending at 47:023) I think no.
01:50:499 - Make the slider end at 01:51:047 and take the 2 inherited points there. Fixed.
03:57:633 - Add an finish to this part. Fixed.
03:59:096 - The same of above.Fixed.
04:00:570 - The same of above.Fixed.
04:02:023 - The same of above.Fixed.
04:03:486 - The same of above.Fixed.
04:06:413 - The same of above.Fixed.
04:08:242 - The same of above. I think no for this one.
04:09:340 - The same of above.Fixed.
04:12:267 - The same of above.Fixed.
04:15:194 - The same of above.Fixed.
04:16:657 - The same of above.Fixed.
04:18:120 - The same of above.Fixed.
04:19:584 - The same of above.Fixed.

When the hard be finished I will mod it.

Kokizi wrote:

Blue = suggestion
Orange = imo better off if you change it
Red = must change

Change to AR 8

starting off with slider suggestions.

00:27:999 - prolly better off with this since distance snapped

SPOILER

01:16:657 & 01:17:938

SPOILER

remap from 00:53:242 to 1:04:950, pattern is too confusing and there's too much clutter on one part of the map. try distributing the hitcircles and such
also, lots of unsnapped notes.

that is all atm
anyway, nice map. will star later.

[CSGA]Ar3sgice wrote:

Hi~ modding from #modreqs

[General]
the dark green colour is hard to see = = make it brighter oh sure lolXD

[Normal]
01:19:950 (1) - don't make notes under slider trail in non-insane diffs... I suggest this http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot048-19.jpg fixed^.^
01:50:499 (7) - ??????? lol fixedXD
02:18:120 (1) - make it longer... short spinners are hard for beginners fixed.
03:17:023 (1) - the same as 01:19:950 fixed.
04:24:341 (4) - this is so close to Miku's face I mistook it as a slider... = = I have no idea how to fix it though I don't think it's a big deal, no change since I don't know what to do with it. =.=

[Hard]
01:19:584 (2) - use this slider? http://up.ppy.sh/files/screenshot047-20.jpg sure. fixed.
01:23:242 (2) - ^ ctrl+h fixed.
01:44:828 (2) - reverse arrow is hidden, I'm not very sure if this is rankable... but shortening it by 1/4 and adding a circle at 01:45:560 (3) - looks better anyways I think that I've encountered cases such as this. I think there are maps that have these hidden reverse arrows. Anyway I fixed it.
02:32:755 (2) - x:120 y:280 -> x:64 y:192 -> x:120 y:88 fixed. :3

nice and relaxing song~! good luck~ Indeed it is relaxing. =w= I shall do my best~ ^w^d

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"whitebg.png",320,240
 F,0,117633,118364,0.2934399,0
 F,0,119096,119828,0.2115199,0
 F,0,120560,121291,0.1551999,0
 F,0,122023,122755,0.1843199,0
 F,0,123486,124218,0.1382399,0
 F,0,124950,125681,0.1296002,0
 F,0,126413,127145,0.20128,0
 F,0,127877,128608,0.1552,0
 F,0,129340,130072,0.16032,0
 F,0,130803,131535,0.14496,0
 F,0,132267,132999,0.17568,0
 F,0,133730,134462,0.18592,0
 F,0,135194,135925,0.2217599,0
 F,0,136657,137389,0.1603201,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

SPOILER

Saten-san wrote:

General
Tags on Normal & Hard differs from eachother~ oh sorry lolXD fixed.
03:56:901 - you have 2 timing sections overlapping each-other fixed :3

SB: Replace what you have on your current .osb

[Events]
//Background and Video events
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"whitebg.png",320,240
 F,0,117633,118364,0.2934399,0
 F,0,119096,119828,0.2115199,0
 F,0,120560,121291,0.1551999,0
 F,0,122023,122755,0.1843199,0
 F,0,123486,124218,0.1382399,0
 F,0,124950,125681,0.1296002,0
 F,0,126413,127145,0.20128,0
 F,0,127877,128608,0.1552,0
 F,0,129340,130072,0.16032,0
 F,0,130803,131535,0.14496,0
 F,0,132267,132999,0.17568,0
 F,0,133730,134462,0.18592,0
 F,0,135194,135925,0.2217599,0
 F,0,136657,137389,0.1603201,0
//Storyboard Sound Samples

I made the SB list shorter and removed some stuff that had no purpose. thanks>w< fixed.

Normal
03:57:633 - Start the Kiai here instead fixed.
00:36:413 (1) - 2nd point, 1 grid down fixed.
01:19:950 (1) - place it on a more visible area, like here fixed.

SPOILER

01:20:316 (2) - try to stack it with the previous slider end fixed.
02:20:316 (1) - finish at the end fixed.
02:26:169 (3) - ^ fixed.
02:32:023 (7) - ^ Beginning fixed.
02:32:755 (1) - ^ fixed.
02:38:242 (2) - ^ end fixed.
02:43:364 (3) - ^ fixed.
02:44:096 (4) - ^ fixed.
03:17:023 (1) - on a more visible area? fixed.
03:17:389 (2) - stack? like before fixed.
03:31:291 (5) - finish at the beginning fixed.
03:42:999 (4) - ^ fixed.
03:44:462 (1) - finish fixed.
03:45:925 (4) - ^ fixed.
03:47:389 (7) - ^ beginning fixed.
03:48:852 (1) - ^ fixed.
03:51:779 (6) - ^ fixed.
04:20:682 (4) - ^ end fixed.
04:21:780 (2) - ^ beginning fixed.

Hard
00:37:877 (4,6) - 2 grids down? oh sure fixed
00:47:389 (1) - finish fixed.
00:53:242 (1) - ^ fixed.
00:58:181 (3) - finish at the end fixed.
00:59:096 (1) - finish fixed.
01:04:950 (1) - ^ fixed.
01:22:877 (1,2) - stack with each-other oopsXD fixed.
01:51:779 (1) - finish fixed.
01:53:242 (4) - finish at the beginning fixed.
01:54:706 (5) - ^ fixed.
02:20:316 (1) - finish at the end fixed.
02:26:535 (7) - ^ fixed.
02:32:755 (2) - ^ beginning fixed.
03:31:291 (1) - ^ fixed.
03:42:267 (3) - ^ on repeat fixed.
03:44:462 (5) - ^ beginning & end fixed.
03:47:389 (3) - ^ beginning fixed.
03:51:047 (1) - ^ end fixed.
03:58:730 (1) - finish on the first repeat, and delete the finish on the 2nd repeat I'm not so sure about this one so no changes =w=



That's all \o/

CDFA wrote:

STORYBOARD:
If you're going to use white flashes, probably also use them during the chorus. Or other impactful sections. Sure. Fixed~

Overall:
04:26:901 - THOU SHALT FINISH THIS MAP. It's kind of a random place to stop. You know, in the middle of an impact and all. oh lol. fixed. XD

Hard:
00:27:999 (8) - No me gusta! I know it's a long note held out, but it just doesn't feel right. A long slider would be cool, though :3. Especially since you're all dream stream on the next part :3 I'm not so sure about what to do here but I made some changes
00:39:706 (2) - ^ fixed.
00:47:389 - Probably for this chorus part, use the regular hitnormal, and put it on softclap or something. Then use it for the snare drum beat, to make it all cool and stuff :3.hmm... okay fixed.
02:49:584 (4) - No me gusta! Maybe it's something I have against 0.5x sliders, but they don't seem to really fit. fixed.
03:09:157 (4) - Add symmetry! It's almost moe, but not quite!~ What's add symmetry fixed.

It's pretty cool stuff.