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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on quinta-feira, 21 de dezembro de 2017 at 15:02:56

Artist: Victoria Justice
Title: Make It Shine
Source: Victorious
Tags: Ariana Grande Leon Thomas III Matt Bennett Elizabeth Gillies Avan Jogia Daniella Monet ezek happyrocket88 gero nickelodeon nick tv show serie kids teen teenager dan schneider english pop sitcom Tori Vega Andre Harris Robbie Shapiro Jade West Cat Valentine Beck Oliver Trina Vega hollywood art arts music talent
BPM: 137
Filesize: 10609kb
Play Time: 00:59
Difficulties Available:

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easy is made by happyrocket88
normal is a collab with gero (he mapped the whole chorus)
hardest insane is made by ezek

bubbled by squirrelpascals
popped by chaoslitz
rebubb by chaoslitz
qualifed by squirrelpascals
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MkGuh wrote:
normal is a collab with gero (waiting a few more days more months (? for his parts to be mapped)


*runs*
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HappyRocket88 wrote:
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MkGuh wrote:
normal is a collab with gero (waiting a few more days more months (? for his parts to be mapped)


*runs*


I don't think we can wait more months lol. it is an easy mapset to rank it so ye let's move on! :3
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HappyRocket88 wrote:
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MkGuh wrote:
normal is a collab with gero (waiting a few more days more months more years for his parts to be mapped)


*runs*

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wtf mkguh when and how you got that sp!!!! XD
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m4m!

General

  • 'Ariana Grande' appears two times in the tags
  • I'm suggesting you to move your offset +21ms forward. It seems late, right now..

Rocket's Easy

    *Objects emplacement*
  • 00:10:409 (6) - This slider is not stacked with the end of 00:07:781 (3) - and we can totally see it while playing. I know the main reason is that you want to make a blanket using the previous slider with the circle before it and also by making a blanket with the end of the previous slider with 00:07:781 (3) -, but you just slipped that slider a little bit too far. In this case, I'm suggesting you to move 00:09:095 (4) - to x:192 y:32; 00:09:533 (5) - to x:94 y:17; 00:10:409 (6) - x:219 y:130 (No rotation needed)
  • 00:14:788 (1) - For a similar reason to the previous suggestion, I'm suggesting you to move this slider to x:283 y:207. (You can also try to stack the reverse arrow of 00:16:540 (3) - with the end of this slider. It will look neat.)

    *New combos*
  • 00:07:781 (3) - Starting at this point, we totally see there's a new measure starting, which is really similar to 00:00:774 (1) - . In this case, I'm suggesting you to add a new combo here. You will also see that you will have two lonely sliders in the same combos before this one, so you will need to delete the new combo to 00:06:029 (1) - and add a new combo to 00:04:277 (5) - . By doing this, you will have a nice and smooth consistency.
  • 00:18:292 (4) - To keep your consistency, you will have to add a new combo here and delete the new combo to 00:20:044 (1) - .
  • 00:21:576 (5) - Add a new combo here as well.

MkGero's Normal

  • Call me back when it's done

Hard

(I was using the suggested offset while modding!)
I believe you forgot to hitsound a part of the difficulty. (Starting at 00:16:540 (1) - , to be exact)
  • 00:14:371 (1) - I don't feel like this slider should be in 3/4 as there is technically nothing to emphasize at 00:14:371 (1) - , while there is something you can easily emphasize on 00:14:590 - . (I know you did something similar in the Insane difficulty as well, but I believe it shouldn't be in this difficulty..)
  • 00:23:568 (1) - I feel like a higher spacing would be better here to represent the different aspects of the vocals. I'm suggesting to that all of this combo and move it to x:488 y:100
    Example
    Image
  • 00:39:992 (2) - I believe you can make the end of the previous slider more centered with this slider. Maybe if you move this slider to x:20 y:304 it would be better.
  • 00:43:276 (2) - I like the idea of using a finish hitsound with a normal addition, however, you forgot to keep your hitsound consistency with normal samplesets. so instead of using a normal addition, I'm suggesting you to use a normal sampleset instead.
  • 00:56:853 - I'm suggesting you to add a circle here, it will follow the loud sound appearing here as it's the end. You can move your current spinner to 00:56:962 -

Insane

  • 00:36:029 - I feel like there is missing something here. I'm suggesting you to add a circle to follow the guitar sounds, it will also open the door to feedback. You can also add a circle to 00:50:044 - as well.

ezek's Brightness

  • 00:19:168 (3,4,5,1) - For this section over here, I'm suggesting you to follow more the vocals. In this case, you could go for something like this:
    Image
what a mapper you are.
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rocket
tu diff es la unica con colores personalizados :thonkang:
00:04:277 (5,1) - los nc aca deben ser cambiados
00:18:292 (4,1) - ^
00:28:365 (1) - elimina este circulo, hasta ahora la espera necesaria sigue siendo 4 beats
00:40:846 (3) - esto deberia terminar aqui 00:41:941 - y luego un circulo en 00:42:379 -


mkgero
skipping, still wip lol


hard
00:42:378 (5,6,7,8) - this should be a reverse slider cause there's already some insane for streams


insane
cool i guess


ezek
00:14:788 (1,2,3,4) - esta parte no es todavia intensa, asi que estos jumps no estan del todo justificados
00:21:795 (1,2,3,4) - ^
00:56:394 (1,2,3,4,5) - por que no simplemente hacer un stream con spacing normal?

gl~
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Gabe wrote:
m4m!

General

  • 'Ariana Grande' appears two times in the tags :O lemme fix it then
  • I'm suggesting you to move your offset +21ms forward. It seems late, right now.. Timing is tricky on this song, I made a proper timing for it but it needs more checking. :eyes:

Hard

(I was using the suggested offset while modding!)
I believe you forgot to hitsound a part of the difficulty. (Starting at 00:16:540 (1) - , to be exact)
  • 00:14:371 (1) - I don't feel like this slider should be in 3/4 as there is technically nothing to emphasize at 00:14:371 (1) - , while there is something you can easily emphasize on 00:14:590 - . (I know you did something similar in the Insane difficulty as well, but I believe it shouldn't be in this difficulty..) Sounds good for me, I am emphasizing the claps.
  • 00:39:992 (2) - I believe you can make the end of the previous slider more centered with this slider. Maybe if you move this slider to x:20 y:304 it would be better. Didn't get this suggestion.

Insane

  • 00:36:029 - I feel like there is missing something here. I'm suggesting you to add a circle to follow the guitar sounds, it will also open the door to feedback. You can also add a circle to 00:50:044 - as well. I know, I just like this little gap so I am going to keep it :D


Thanks cutie Not replied = fixed

Underforest wrote:
random mod nice


mkgero
skipping, still wip lol let's see how long it'll be wip :eyes:


hard
00:42:378 (5,6,7,8) - this should be a reverse slider cause there's already some insane for streams I don't think this is something a 3* player have never seen so it should be fine :3


insane
cool i guess nice i guess

gl~


thanks for modding guys <3
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Gabe wrote:
ezek's Brightness

  • 00:19:168 (3,4,5,1) - For this section over here, I'm suggesting you to follow more the vocals. In this case, you could go for something like this:
    Image I prefer my current way. I'm still following the vocals anyway and I even believe that my current pattern follows the vocals better than your suggestion. If I add a repeat to the slider like you showed me, then the slider's tail would be at 00:19:609 - which is part of another word, so having them separate in circles feels better for single word representation. Then in your suggestion you want me to remove the repeat of 00:20:047 (1) - which I use to soften the difficulty before the following jumps.
what a mapper you are. :3c


Underforest wrote:

ezek
00:14:788 (1,2,3,4) - esta parte no es todavia intensa, asi que estos jumps no estan del todo justificados
00:21:795 (1,2,3,4) - ^ En estas partes que mecionas la musica aun no llega a su maxima potencia, pero es seguro que hay un incrememnto en la intensidad, asi que con estos jumps grandes estoy enfatizando el momento de tal cambio, el cual es muy notable. En la segunda parte ya estaba esa intensidad, pero mejor lo hice por consistencia.
00:56:394 (1,2,3,4,5) - por que no simplemente hacer un stream con spacing normal? uh? use el ds que use en las demas notas con ds


Thanks for the mods, guys!
I changed a couple of slider shapes, so here's my update anyway~
aaand yeah, the map needs a timing check, still sounds off

OwO
Code:
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: Victorious Theme.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 28255
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.4
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 59679
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:Make It Shine
TitleUnicode:Make It Shine
Artist:Victoria Justice
ArtistUnicode:Victoria Justice
Creator:MkGuh
Version:ezek's Brightness
Source:Victorious
Tags:Ariana Grande Leon Thomas III Matt Bennett Elizabeth Gillies Ariana Grande Avan Jogia Daniella Monet ezek happyrocket88 gero nickelodeon nick tv show serie kids teen teenager dan schneider english pop sitcom Tori Vega Andre Harris Robbie Shapiro Jade West Cat Valentine Beck Oliver Trina Vega hollywood art arts music talent
BeatmapID:1404802
BeatmapSetID:663704

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4.5
OverallDifficulty:8.5
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:2.1
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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0,0,"MkTorious.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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Rocket's Easy


Normal


Hard

  • 00:18:733 Image tem um overlap ali em baixo guh no 4 com o 2
  • 00:35:156 stacka o 4 no 5 ?
  • 00:42:383 e essa stream em um hard de 3 stars ? será que você não poderia substituir por um quick slider reverse não bb ?
  • 00:51:142 põe esse 4 um pouco mais longe do 3 , vc já fez isso no mapa todo mesmo
  • 00:56:397 otra stream loca no hard :v

Insane

  • 00:50:047 esqueceu som
  • 00:48:733 melhora o slider <3 ?
  • Image o 5 ali tá fora de posição
  • 00:56:397 faz a stream um pouco mais perto descendo (por causa do vocal que é incostante)
  • vc podia trocar os CS , botar o seu 4,5 e o do ezek 5

Ezek's Insane

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You might want to change the HP drain stuff around and lower the OD for insane and brightness. HP because for some reason ezek has lower drain than your insane (basically the same as the hard) and OD because 7,7 and 8,5 are both really hard for the respective difficulties (7 and 7,5-8 would make the difficulty stats more linear and representative of the difficulty of the map overall)


From MA

Video offset:
Rocket's Easy: 1842
MkGero's Normal: 1842
Hard: 1842
Insane: 1843
ezek's Brightness: 1843

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HR

00:41:945 - Consider adding something here (1/1 slider?) since it feels kinda weird to have that big of a space when most of the time you have this quite intense type of easy mapping (1/1s mapped pretty much always unless it's under a sliderbody)

Mk&Gero

I don't understand what are you trying to follow with the first combo in the difficulty. Vocals i guess since i can see that from the next few comboes or well basically anything after 00:05:174 - . I feel like this 00:08:678 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - kind of mapping (1/1 sliders and 1/2 hitcircles) would fit the first combo much much better than what you have done right now. for ex.?

00:43:259 - Finish?

00:44:573 (1,2) - This is really something different from the patterning you used for the rest of the kiai as those patterns are clearly placed "geometrically" in a way nothing overlaps so i'm kinda confused why is this pattern an exception

00:48:732 (2) - According to aimod the end of this slider is not snapped

00:35:813 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2) - 00:49:828 (1,2,3) - Why are these so different. Both of the sections should be representing basically similar melody/vocals so i can't really understand why would they be so different. I'd highly recommend making the second section consistent with the first one as it would make it generally as intensive as the other difficulty and it would keep the similar parts.. similar. If you decide to keep the second section remove the claps from the reversepoints, they sound bad when they don't have coverage from the song

Hard

00:04:298 (1) - Why not keep this as just a 1/1 slider and map 00:05:174 - as a 1/2 slider or a hitcircle? The melody would imo support that bit better

00:28:806 (1,2,3,4,5) - Two things. Firstly i don't think the back and forth movement is really consistent with the other patterns, most of them are placed so they would have continuous movement or when the flow changes it changes so it does not feel like it would force back and forth movement. Secondly i feel like 00:28:806 (1) - or 00:29:244 (2) - would fit both vocals better if they were mapped as two hitcircles since melodically it would make more sense and the other similar parts, while not begin exactly similar but rather sharing next to similar stylish vocals, have more than one pair of hitcircles representing supposedly the vocals. Though mapping them both like that would make the map feel quite intense in that way so i'd recommend to map one of them as hitcircles

00:46:324 (1) - Though i don't think 1/1 sliders fit these at all. Considering some of the things regarding consistency that i talked about there ^ overall this 00:46:324 - would be better as a 1/2 slider and this 00:46:762 - as a hitcircle

00:50:704 (3,4) - Are you sure you want to keep them this close while you are using this 00:52:237 (4,5) - pretty much right next to one another. The difference in pattern choice is huge while the change in rhythm is basically not even there. Also 00:50:704 (3,4) - feels really tight no matter what


Insane

00:14:792 - Two lines with different settings. Just move the volume to the red line and remove the green one

00:23:551 (1,2,3) - & 00:24:427 (1,2,3) - Both of these would look better if the slider would be rotated by ~12 degrees CCW and that the curve would be bit less "curvy" as that would make both of the patterns look more like a pattern than just having the two hitcircles by themselves while a slider tries to replicate the movement and failing in that because of it's body

00:39:317 (1,2,3) - Imo the finish on the head of the 3 could get a bit more emphasis through spacing than that

00:42:821 (1,2,3) - Considering that the third slider could've used some emphasis on the pattern mentioned above, i think here the 3 needs the opposite. Having the similar spacing for 00:43:697 - and something strong like 00:43:259 - isn't really conventional

00:56:397 (1,2,3,4,5) - Do you really want to use this kind of movement after this 00:55:083 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - kind of circular movement is going to really kill people's comboes. Idk that's up to you if you want to be the evil mapper of 2017 but i'd personally use either CTRL G for the stream to create zigzag movement through all of these 00:55:740 (4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) - which is bit better or just rotating it so it would go on with the circular movement

ezek

00:11:743 (2,3) - CTRL G for spacing consistency on the white ticks

00:14:792 - Had to edit this: iirc two lines with different settings. Just move the volume to the red line and remove the green one

00:14:792 (1,2,3,4) - 00:21:799 (1,2,3,4) - Spacing wise neither of these really work out atleast when compared to the spacing you'd normally use and the fact that the song does not change that significantly

00:35:156 (3) - Maybe map this as two hitcircles? The sound on 00:35:375 - is pretty much stronger as it has a cymbal hit accompanied with a drum beat so mapping it as hitcircles would make more sense overall. Applies to 00:49:171 (3) -

00:43:259 (3) - Finish

00:55:740 (4,5) - CTRL G, please for the sake of playability




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Normal

  • 00:02:108 stack ? or do a slider , this 2 circles is too much intensive ! Seems fine for me, It is a low BPm normal so ye.
  • 00:17:638 ^ ^
  • 00:19:171 Image this way it's not better ? Nah, I don't need to blanket those.

Hard

  • 00:18:733 Image tem um overlap ali em baixo guh no 4 com o 2 quase n dá pra ver a overlap miga então tá ok
  • 00:35:156 stacka o 4 no 5 ? eu fiz assim de proposito pra dar um charme rs
  • 00:42:383 e essa stream em um hard de 3 stars ? será que você não poderia substituir por um quick slider reverse não bb ? ta bem pequeno o spacing então tã ok
  • 00:51:142 põe esse 4 um pouco mais longe do 3 , vc já fez isso no mapa todo mesmo botei
  • 00:56:397 otra stream loca no hard :v ai eu adoro

Insane

  • 00:50:047 esqueceu som tá assim de proposito amiga, amo essa gap
  • 00:48:733 melhora o slider <3 ? melhorei por vc
  • Image o 5 ali tá fora de posição
  • 00:56:397 faz a stream um pouco mais perto descendo (por causa do vocal que é incostante) ok
  • vc podia trocar os CS , botar o seu 4,5 e o do ezek 5 CS 5 é otimo adoro da mais pp


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@nowa: fixed everything except for the gap on insane cuz I like it that way, it fits fine for me (though everyone will complain about dat lol)
you found a lot of smart stuff!

cuties thanks for mod :3
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