1. Hard (4.9 stars, 386 notes)
2. Normal (3.06 stars, 247 notes)

1. 3.41 is a high star rating for the easiest diff. I would recommend making an easier one for better spread. It would also help the map be ranked quicker.
2. Tickrate 2 on all difficulties would be fantastic.

1. 00:02:005 - This section's hitsounds are much too quiet. I can hear the first two circles, but nothing after that. Try raising the volume to about 40% or 50%.
   The hitsounds in the later parts are rather quiet too. Try raising every 55% section to 75% and see how it sounds. I can hear the whistles with that
2. 00:06:226 (1) - This slider is touching the top right info. Move it down a little?
3. 00:06:226 (1,2,1) - Spacing is a little bad in between these objects. It goes from 2.0x to 2.2x.
4. 00:09:337 (1,2,3,4) - Same with these two. Goes from 2.4x to 2.0x at the 4
5. 01:16:671 (5,1) - Jump is pretty harsh for the easiest difficulty.
6. 01:55:560 (4,1) - Jump is EXTREMELY harsh for the easiest difficulty. This one you really should make smaller.
7. 02:02:671 (3) - Touches the top bar. If you want it to look better, move it down.
8. 02:24:448 - It would be nice if the kiai lasted longer. It would make the map more awesome feeling, if you catch my drift.

1. Unrankable - This difficulty has 3 unsnapped notes. Check AIMod for details.
   
2. 00:02:005 - This section's hitsounds are much too quiet. I can hear the first two circles, but nothing after that. Try raising the volume to about 40% or 50%.
   The hitsounds in the later parts are rather quiet too. Try raising every 55% section to 75% and see how it sounds. I can hear the whistles with that
3. The spacing in the beginning is very strange. For instance...
   1. 00:10:227 (2) - This slider's previous spacing is 2x, but the next spacing is 1x. This is not only strange, but forces the player to rely on the approach circle.
      Other examples of this strange spacing include
      1. 00:03:116 (4)
         
      2. 00:06:672 (2)
         
      3. 00:13:783 (2)
         
      4. 00:25:337 (3)
         
      5. 00:27:115 (1)
      I recommend fixing all of these. It's best to have the map be intuitive, rather than rely on the approach circle.
      
4. 00:57:448 (1) - This spinner is less than 2 beats long. It would be nice if it started on the white tick and the previous slider ended earlier. It would give the players some time to react.
5. 01:22:004 (5,1,2) - Whoa, these jumps are way harder than the rest of the map. Space them down a little please
6. 01:32:893 (1,2) - This is tricky to read as a stream. Perhaps move the 1 back more so it is obvious, like this? http://puu.sh/6kOT
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     Other examples of this in the map. It may look a little ugly, but it's worth it in the end.
   1. 01:33:782 (3,4)
      
   2. 01:42:226 (2,3)
      
   3. 01:43:115 (4,1)
      
   4. 02:05:337 (1,2)
      
   5. 02:16:448 (2,3)
      
   6. 02:28:893 (4,5)
      
   7. 02:30:671 (3,4)
      
   8. 02:32:004 (2,3)
      
   9. 02:34:226 (2,3)
      
   10. 02:37:337 (2,3)
7. 01:46:448 (3,4) - This jump is very large and is much harder than most of the map. Lower the spacing please!
8. 01:57:115 (5,6) - This is probably the hardest jump in the map because it's 4.39x spacing without a slider. It would really be a good idea to lower the spacing.
9. 02:24:448 - It would be nice if the kiai lasted longer. It would make the map more awesome feeling, if you catch my drift.
10. 02:52:004 (1,2) - Add whistles? Fits the singer going EE EE
    Great ending!

1. 02:24:448 - Add kiai time here, not only a kiai fountain.
2. As you don't have any break, disable the letterbox in both difficulties

1. Star rating is 3.14, I guess it's fine since novices can play it without difficulty, however, try to lower it if you can
2. 00:41:337 (1) - Jump in a normal ?
3. 00:40:893 (2,1) - This circle is not in the rhythm, You should continu to follow the red tick rhythm, Otherwise it feels odd, so move (2) 1/2 later ?
4. 00:44:671 - Add a note to follow the red tick rhythm.
5. 00:46:448 (1,2) - I don't like how this pattern sounds, the sliders seem like they end later than they should and it makes the pattern rather confusing, try making something like this instead :
   

KuraiPettan wrote:

Hello ~

General :

1. 02:24:448 - Add kiai time here, not only a kiai fountain. I don't really like kiai, it hurts my eyes
2. As you don't have any break, disable the letterbox in both difficulties

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Normal :

1. Star rating is 3.14, I guess it's fine since novices can play it without difficulty, however, try to lower it if you can I think it's easy enough :< I removed some notes already to make it easier.
2. 00:41:337 (1) - Jump in a normal ? Not really a jump, but ok, moved it a little
3. 00:40:893 (2,1) - This circle is not in the rhythm, You should continu to follow the red tick rhythm, Otherwise it feels odd, so move (2) 1/2 later ? Ok
4. 00:44:671 - Add a note to follow the red tick rhythm. Removed it, idk how to make it sound better
5. 00:46:448 (1,2) - I don't like how this pattern sounds, the sliders seem like they end later than they should and it makes the pattern rather confusing, try making something like this instead :
   

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I guess that's all, before asking me for a recheck, try to get more mods please (around 4 or 5).