your ncs after downbeat aa
[Insane]
care to explain the nc after downbeat thing because the don't seem to fit at all to me so an explanation as to your intention would really help me understand why you chose to do this, also please give some insight on the stuff at the end cuz i want to learn about what you're doing here (which is why i picked this map) and stuff yea
- 00:43:141 (1,2) - this flow is unusually awkward compared to the other times this phrase occurs, maybe adjust to be a bit more comfortable?
- 00:44:295 (4) - to me sounds better as two circles cuz both guitar and vocals are distinct on both ticks
- 00:51:217 (8) - ^ except only vocals here
- 00:53:717 (4) - ^ especially here since guitar is really distinct, maybe stack two circles? // 01:24:487 (4) - same with other instances
- 01:10:257 (4,5,6) - Spacing is kind of confusing imo, especially 4,5... stacking 4 with the tail of 01:09:487 (2) - might work?
- 01:28:525 (7,1) - wasn't this stacked in the previous kiai? 00:57:756 (7,1) -
- 02:15:834 (4) - gonna stop pointing out places you can put two circles but as a general opinion i don't like how you cover these distinct notes with sliders when you use sliders like 02:16:410 (6) - right after that have nothing on the tail, it just doesn't feel fitting imo
- 04:08:787 (5) - ... i don't know what you're doing with your ncs but pretty sure this might fit into your structure if you nc'd this and removed the one on 04:09:590 (1) -
one more general thing I kinda am wondering about 03:55:944 (1,2,3) - these types of sliders look fairly unique but you put them on different sounds pretty often.. like here they land on the "oh" sounds or whatever, but at 03:57:549 (9) - there isn't a circle slider, but at 03:58:887 (3) - there's one on an "aa" sound which doesn't fit the patterning you used for this before. then there's 01:16:987 (1) - ... idk i don't feel these sliders fit where you put them
also the rhythm is kinda weird to me, you use sliders to cover sometimes two distinct sounds after or before sliders that use filler rhythm. an example would be 01:23:333 (1,2,3,4) - the 4 in this (not filler rhythm but the guitar is being followed here i think) or 02:15:834 (4,6) - (definitely filler rhythm on the 6) and so on
that's all from me! good luck!