From my modding queue. Woah, 5 4:40 minute diffs made all by yourself and storyboard too! I can tell you put a lot of time and effort in to this so I will do the same with my mod!
Mostly looks and aesthetics mod!
Storyboard
03:20:605 - not sure if its intentional but the vertical lines are visually thinner than the horizontal lines on the Japanese text
Easy
00:10:716 (2,1,2) - try to position these so it makes an equilateral triangle, current triangle shape looks a little weird
00:16:650 (1) - i say maybe rotate this Clockwise a bit so u get this kinda feel to it:
http://puu.sh/wLY1v/3972ad179b.jpg00:20:606 (3,1) - a curve-curve placement with both curves in the same direction usually looks weird, i'd say try to design this differently so the curves are pointing in opposite directions
00:25:880 (3,3) - try to not overlap these by rotating the slider. i don't really see any other overlap patterns, so its good to avoid the overlap here and remain consistent
00:40:386 (1,2) - suggestion here, this is fine right now, but it would be pretty cool if u can utilize the curve on 00:40:386 (1) -
00:44:342 (3,1) - 1 degrees clockwise off from perfect parallel:
http://puu.sh/wLYdY/d97641d4cb.jpg01:05:441 (2) - maybe move to the left so it flows better with 01:04:122 (1) -
01:06:760 (1,2) - i think if u look it like this:
http://puu.sh/wMbJH/4760196d2d.jpg it would look better to move the slider down
01:21:265 (2,1) - suggestion here, maybe blanket into the sliders curve? i think it will look pretty cool:
http://puu.sh/wMbP0/82e327bad2.jpg its a waste of a pretty good curve in my opinion
01:47:639 (1,2) - this is more of a suggestion, maybe move up so its at the red line in here:
http://puu.sh/wMbTB/8ac5187029.jpg it looks more organized in my opinion
01:54:891 (1) - maybe rotate this a little down? the bump of the slider here looks a little displeasing with the way it flows with 01:54:067 (2) -
http://puu.sh/wMc21/f41f09f469.jpg02:33:792 (2,1) - try a way to make these 2 look better, the curve and straight looks kinda weird:
http://puu.sh/wMc8a/a89f212851.jpg03:37:748 (2,1) - blanket looks a little bit weird:
http://puu.sh/wMcfY/48ab0cb474.jpgi suggest holding Distance Snap and dragging it right, and curving the slider more
Normal
00:17:309 (2,4) - maybe put circle on the slider tail's position so its more consistent with positions
00:25:056 (2,3) - check this blanket, its visually more spaced at the top. fix pls
00:47:639 (4,5,1) - make in to equilateral triangle maybe? will looks a little more organized and pleasing to the eyes
01:51:924 (6) - move left a tiny bit:
http://puu.sh/wN3EO/b7e31f7f6f.jpg 01:54:562 (6,1) - try to match the curving with these 2, it will look better
02:28:847 (5,1) - suggestion, maybe make one a flip of the other instead of angling it by hand
02:50:935 (1,2) - angling here look a little random, maybe just make it parallel like u did here: 02:52:254 (3,4) -
02:56:210 (1,3) - try matching the curving with these 2 or maybe flip it on the y-axis? it looks a little weird right now
03:45:000 (1,2,3) - try to make equilateral triangle shape here? the current shape looks scalene, with no real angling
04:32:473 (5) - suggestion, maybe curve this so it matches 04:33:132 (1) -
Hard
00:24:891 (2) - move to the right a bit to match the overlapping with 00:12:529 (5,2) -
00:26:869 (1,4,1) - same as above but move 00:28:023 (4,1) - down
00:29:507 (4,5,1) - pls move 00:29:754 (5,1,2) - to the right, this looks really weird
00:31:485 (2,4) - stack completely
00:30:990 (1) - try to move to the left a little so the slider tail forms a equilateral triangle with 00:30:990 (1,2,3) -
00:32:474 (1,2,4) - stacking seems a little off
00:40:056 (5) - try to make 00:39:562 (3,5) - have 90 degree angle, looks better in my opinion
00:47:309 (3,4,5) - im pretty sure this is fine right now, but maybe it would be better just to stack under the slider tail? you did it well here 01:01:485 (1,2,3)
01:09:891 (2,3,1) - try to form equilateral triangle with slider tail, circle and slider head. current triangle is just a tiny bit off from an equilateral triangle
01:22:254 (4,1) - i know the space here might be small, but i think 01:22:584 (1) - will look better if its moved down a little
01:58:023 (4,5,1) - take this, hold distance snap and move to the right, this way 01:57:858 (3) - overlaps more in the center and more on the slider, follows the overlap design u did here: 01:15:661 (4,1) -
Ending was mapped very well
I'm not as good as modding higher star difficulties, so there may be not as much mods or some might not be valid. Ill try my best! Insane
00:25:716 (6,7,1) - Suggestion here, maybe move to the center of 00:24:891 (3,5) - and 00:25:056 (4) - ? it looks kinda cooler:
http://puu.sh/wN8OC/fdf31d67db.jpg00:26:210 (3) - if u take the suggestion above, you might wanna move this down a bit too
00:37:419 (5) - i say since that theres a stack here: 00:36:100 (5,2,3) - why not put this in the stack as well? will look niceer
00:39:067 (1,4) - try to find a way to avoid this overlap maybe?
01:26:869 (2) - if your trying to make this in the center of 01:27:199 (3,4) - , move it up just a tiny bit
01:58:683 (4,5,6,7,8) - check this triangle shape, try to make it look like an isosceles triangle or an equilateral. the current angling is weird
02:00:001 (3,1) - overlap here looks quite big compared to your other overlaps of similar design, i say try changing it a little so its overlapped less
02:07:913 (4,5,9) - suggestion again, maybe just stack since 02:07:913 (4,5) - are stacked
02:10:221 (1,4,1,2) - this i say just stack, the minor location offset is unnecessary
02:36:430 (1,3) - try to find a better way to incorporate these to sliders, it looks really weird and unfitting right now, you could blanket or move down and stack tail to head, its really up to you, but pls change the current design
03:52:171 (7,1) - check stacking
04:14:341 (3) - maybe move this down and to the left a little so it seems like it "flows with" the curve on 04:14:671 (1) -
Extra
00:18:957 (4,2) - maybe avoid this mini-overlap here
00:50:111 (3,5,9) - it would be cool to make these all same location since most of the stuff in this part of the song uses same location
01:16:979 (6,1) - try to blanket this better, hold Distance Snap and move 01:16:979 (6) - to the right works
01:49:946 (4) - try to place this in "center" of this slider 01:50:606 (3) - looks better since its at a specific place
02:07:584 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - this is just a compliment, i love how this is made and the design on it <3
02:47:968 (4,3) - stack the circle on the slider tail
03:08:738 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - not sure if intentional but his slider looks really handmade and wobbly
04:14:671 (1) - rotate this a little more so the slider tail is in the center of 04:15:165 (2,3) -
04:24:726 (6,1) - stack circle on to slider tail, maybe adjust slider for this so u keep this overlap: 04:24:066 (2,6) -
04:30:825 - suggestion from here, what you did during the piano solo is really good, but just a personal suggestion from me. i honestly think it would be REALLY cool if you used a very long stream to map the piano solo, I feel that its fitting and will make a great finale for the final and hardest part of the song.
I REALLY love your storyboard, and I must really commend you for doing 5 4:40 diffs all by yourself. Really really good luck on getting this ranked! Have a star! You deserve it!
If you want i can make you a banner for the beatmap?