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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017年6月9日 at 0:14:11

Artist: Ayane
Title: Azurite no Hitsugi
Source: 水葬銀貨のイストリア
Tags: eroge visual novel tv size suisouginka めと meto metomate uguisukagura ウグイスカグラ joker- little cloudsplash16
BPM: 173
Filesize: 21244kb
Play Time: 01:59
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"Sliders and mods go well together in this osu! mapping terminology"

What is *blanket mod*?

lmao
17:34 Xexxar: hi
17:35 gracefu: xar
17:35 gracefu: hi
17:35 Xexxar: i have maed new map!
17:35 gracefu: you have
17:35 Xexxar: yes!~
17:36 gracefu: indeed new map has been made
17:36 gracefu: by you
17:36 Xexxar: yes!
17:36 Xexxar: u should see!
17:36 *Xexxar is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1235037 Ayane - Azurite no Hitsugi [Fate]]
17:38 gracefu: im listening to tears of ruins by ujico*
17:38 gracefu: https://0101.bandcamp.com/album/-
17:38 gracefu: it sounds uhh
17:39 gracefu: interesting
17:39 gracefu: https://0101.bandcamp.com/track/tears-of-ruins
17:39 Xexxar: is hm
17:40 gracefu: ok done
17:40 gracefu: xexxar
17:40 gracefu: its time
17:40 gracefu: you know for what?
17:43 gracefu: oi
17:43 gracefu: you know for what
17:43 gracefu: time is for
17:43 Xexxar: what
17:43 Xexxar: IN DA BUTT
17:43 gracefu: BLANKET MOD
17:43 Xexxar: on what?
17:43 *gracefu is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1235037 Ayane - Azurite no Hitsugi [Fate]] -NoFail
17:43 Xexxar: lo
17:45 gracefu: i see youre expanding your horizons
17:45 gracefu: from pp jumps to pp streams
17:45 gracefu: nice
17:47 gracefu: 00:25:148 (1) - the stream doesnt blanket this wyd
17:47 gracefu: 00:26:188 (2) - fix blanket
17:47 gracefu: 00:26:708 (1,3) - fix blanket
17:47 gracefu: 00:28:963 (2) - too close to upper stream pls blanket
17:48 gracefu: 00:31:911 (3,2) - well done on blanket
17:48 gracefu: 00:32:691 (4,2) - blanket pls
17:48 Xexxar: pls psost in forum
17:48 Xexxar: im ko'd
17:49 gracefu: 00:33:298 (3) - needs small tweak, 1px tweak to fix blanket
17:49 gracefu: 00:33:818 (1) - ^ same
17:50 Xexxar: r u
17:50 Xexxar: srsly
17:50 Xexxar: pixel modding this hard
17:50 gracefu: 01:15:437 (1,3) - PLANKET
17:51 gracefu: 01:23:414 (5,1) - BLANK + ET = BLANKET
17:51 Xexxar: x:
17:51 Xexxar: fixed
17:52 gracefu: 01:24:454 (3,1) - like the slider end point needs to move up 1px
17:52 gracefu: 01:26:015 (5,1) - what is a slider, what is a circle? BLANKET
17:52 gracefu: 01:26:882 (2,4) - Why do sliders exist? BLANKET
17:53 gracefu: 01:27:229 (4,1) - double slider double blanket double whammy
17:53 gracefu: 01:30:697 (1,2) - y no blanket
17:53 Xexxar: they
17:53 Xexxar: litearlly
17:53 Xexxar: are
17:53 gracefu: 01:34:252 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,2) - no blanket wtf?
17:53 Xexxar: its just
17:54 Xexxar: pls kill urself
17:54 gracefu: 01:35:726 (3,1) - like slider end is 1px too low
17:54 gracefu: 01:41:448 (1) - what is this blanketing
17:55 gracefu: 01:43:182 (1,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not symmetrical lmao
17:55 gracefu: 01:47:171 (1,2) - what blanket
17:55 Xexxar: why the fuck
17:55 Xexxar: would they be symmetrical
17:55 gracefu: 01:46:651 (3,1) - where is the blanket
17:55 Xexxar: fixed that one
17:55 Xexxar: its fine u
17:55 Xexxar: stupid
17:55 Xexxar: BITCH
17:56 gracefu: 01:56:188 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - lol no blanket
17:56 gracefu: ok done
17:56 gracefu: btw whats the song name in japanese?
17:56 gracefu: nvm found it
17:56 *gracefu is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/28802 Darude - Sandstorm]


actual mod
2017-03-10 18:00 gracefu: p/5868664#p5868664 kds pls
2017-03-10 18:00 gracefu: ACTION stops memeing
2017-03-10 18:02 gracefu: lmao you updated
2017-03-10 18:02 gracefu: what did you update
2017-03-10 18:02 Xexxar: ur blankets
2017-03-10 18:02 gracefu: not really
2017-03-10 18:03 gracefu: you missed at least 80%
2017-03-10 18:03 gracefu: i checked ;3
2017-03-10 18:03 Xexxar: most
2017-03-10 18:03 Xexxar: werew
2017-03-10 18:03 Xexxar: wrong
2017-03-10 18:03 Xexxar: like
2017-03-10 18:03 gracefu: xD
2017-03-10 18:03 Xexxar: the pixel ones
2017-03-10 18:03 Xexxar: im not changing anyway
2017-03-10 18:03 gracefu: XDDD
2017-03-10 18:06 gracefu: 01:08:154 (3,4,5) - looks a bit ugly and actually i dont see this pattern again anywhere else
2017-03-10 18:06 gracefu: 00:49:772 (1,2,3,4) - same for this
2017-03-10 18:07 Xexxar: adsffads
2017-03-10 18:07 Xexxar: 01:08:154 (3,4,5) -
2017-03-10 18:07 Xexxar: i tried something different here
2017-03-10 18:07 Xexxar: jstu
2017-03-10 18:07 Xexxar: let
2017-03-10 18:07 Xexxar: me experiment
2017-03-10 18:07 Xexxar: for a bit on that one
2017-03-10 18:07 Xexxar: ur the 5th person
2017-03-10 18:07 Xexxar: to tell me this pattenr is bad
2017-03-10 18:07 Xexxar: 00:49:772 (1,2,3,4) -
2017-03-10 18:08 Xexxar: 2nd on this
2017-03-10 18:08 gracefu: 01:54:801 - probably this is missing
2017-03-10 18:08 gracefu: yeah if you try a bit you should do it consistently
2017-03-10 18:09 gracefu: 00:02:951 (6,1) - like here
2017-03-10 18:10 gracefu: 00:07:980 (5,6) - and here
2017-03-10 18:10 gracefu: 00:14:049 (6) - or here
2017-03-10 18:10 Xexxar: different rhytrhms
2017-03-10 18:10 Xexxar: i can change it
2017-03-10 18:10 Xexxar: but not for those reasons
2017-03-10 18:11 gracefu: yeah its still ugly either way
2017-03-10 18:12 gracefu: for the other one you have this 00:58:789 (1,2,3,4) - but yeah also a bit different
2017-03-10 18:12 gracefu: still ugly either way lol
2017-03-10 18:14 gracefu: 00:27:315 (6) - no note here actually, stream ends on 5
2017-03-10 18:15 gracefu: i can see you keeping it for simplification though
2017-03-10 18:15 gracefu: but maybe you can do something creative with the stream stop
2017-03-10 18:16 gracefu: 00:55:841 (4) - not sure you need this note
2017-03-10 18:18 gracefu: 01:13:009 (2,3,4,5) - spacing here can be smaller to contrast with buildup to 01:15:090 (6) - onwards
2017-03-10 18:18 gracefu: actually thats dumb, keep that spacing and make 01:15:437 (1,2,3,4,5) - slightly bigger
2017-03-10 18:19 Xexxar: done
2017-03-10 18:20 gracefu: 01:54:801 - did i say this already but missing note lol
2017-03-10 18:20 gracefu: k ima update post with actual mod lol
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literally the worst mod ever but a few things helped so heres ur useless credits
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it's early in the morning and we're both delusional from lack of sleep but here's an irc log about some stuff before we went to bed anyways because why not
06:45 Xexxar: hi doormat
06:45 Doormat: hey
06:45 Xexxar: wanna look at something real quick
06:45 Doormat: uhh sure
06:45 *Xexxar is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1235037 Ayane - Azurite no Hitsugi]
06:46 Doormat: i'm starting to get tired since i pulled another all nighter cause of zelda
06:46 Doormat: fuck i feel so bad
06:46 Doormat: i have two more to judge for mmc
06:46 Xexxar: dude
06:46 Doormat: but i keep getting distracted
06:46 Xexxar: im doing the same thing atm
06:46 Xexxar: cept
06:46 Xexxar: im pulling an all nighter
06:46 Xexxar: to sit in front of my map
06:46 Xexxar: and be proud
06:47 Xexxar: pls look at my map
06:47 Xexxar: so i can feed my attention addition
06:47 Doormat: you didn't link it
06:47 *Xexxar is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1235037 Ayane - Azurite no Hitsugi [Fate]]
06:48 Xexxar: i did actually tho
06:48 Xexxar: lo
06:48 Xexxar: scroll up
06:48 Doormat: fuck me
06:48 Doormat: probably time to sleep lmao
06:48 Xexxar: ya after my map
06:48 Xexxar: :^)
06:48 Doormat: 00:01:911 (3,4,5) - is it just me or does snap here feel a little off
06:49 Xexxar: ;_;
06:49 Doormat: hmm
06:49 Doormat: it might be okay
06:49 Doormat: just the vocals being derpy
06:49 Xexxar: ohh
06:49 Xexxar: ou meant
06:49 Xexxar: the like
06:50 Xexxar: audio snap
06:50 Xexxar: ya vocals are semi fucky
06:50 Xexxar: i think overall snap is slightly wrong tooo
06:50 Doormat: 00:09:888 (1,2,3) - spacing
06:50 Xexxar: huh?
06:50 Xexxar: thats my THING doooooooood
06:50 Doormat: 00:15:784 (3,4,1) - yeah same here
06:50 Doormat: i understand that it's a thing but like
06:50 Doormat: rip readability
06:50 Doormat: mapping 101 come on man
06:51 Xexxar: ya get FUCKED
06:51 Xexxar: it should be easy to read that tbh
06:51 Xexxar: its the easy section
06:51 Doormat: ok
06:51 Doormat: i actually wasn't expecting a stream LMAO
06:51 Xexxar: so i often do reading stuff l ike that
06:51 Doormat: IT'S 12 SECONDS LONG LOOOL
06:51 Xexxar: :^)
06:51 Xexxar: ya
06:51 Xexxar: 00:27:315 (6) -
06:51 Xexxar: this is overmap
06:51 Xexxar: thats about it
06:52 Doormat: OH
06:52 Doormat: my caps lock was on lmao
06:52 Doormat: uh
06:52 Doormat: just saying but like
06:52 Doormat: for the dream
06:52 Doormat: 00:22:720 (1,5,9) - you used drum sampleset for like these
06:52 Xexxar: i havent
06:52 Xexxar: officially hitsounded
06:52 Xexxar: so i wouldnt worry about it
06:52 Doormat: and then promptly ignored a few
06:52 Xexxar: tbh
06:52 Doormat: oh ok
06:52 Doormat: but yeah
06:52 Doormat: the drum sampleset every white tick is a good idea
06:52 Doormat: imo
06:53 Xexxar: ya something like that
06:53 Xexxar: i have a custom in mind
06:53 Doormat: 00:22:807 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17,18,19,20,21) - i'd also do something about this long combo chain
06:53 Doormat: feels out of place
06:53 Doormat: with all the other comboing
06:53 Xexxar: its long cause theres no dings
06:54 Xexxar: i couldnt figure out how to break it apart in a way that satisfied me
06:54 Xexxar: since its a super drum roll
06:54 Doormat: ya true
06:54 Xexxar: i though
06:54 Xexxar: "e fuck it leave it"
06:54 Doormat: but still
06:54 Xexxar: cause breaking it up doesnt rly reflect music
06:55 Doormat: btw 00:28:789 (1,2,3) - 00:29:483 (1,2,3) - 00:30:177 (1,2,3) - are inconsistent with every other ding
06:55 Doormat: cause the double dings you used two sliders
06:55 Doormat: and then these are like slider leading into stream again
06:55 Xexxar: ya i know
06:55 Doormat: if that makes sense
06:56 Doormat: :thinking:
06:56 Xexxar: i wanted to break up the two patterns
06:56 Xexxar: and idk
06:56 Xexxar: it still packs intensity
06:56 Doormat: hmm if you say so
06:56 Xexxar: the first 1/4 sliders
06:56 Xexxar: bakc track
06:56 Doormat: 00:35:899 (4,5) - could've gone with some 1/3 sliders
06:56 Xexxar: on the first one
06:56 Xexxar: the second set
06:56 Xexxar: i'll save the 1/3rd sliders for the actual 1/3rd at the end :P
06:57 Doormat: the violins are 1/3 though
06:57 Xexxar: i like the flow
06:57 Doormat: but yeah that's fair
06:57 Doormat: 1/2 also works
06:57 Xexxar: mhm
06:57 Xexxar: they're pretty minor
06:57 Doormat: 00:38:847 - rip drum
06:57 Xexxar: ya suks for that drum
06:58 Doormat: 00:43:182 (1,2) - yo this is intentionally unstacked or no?
06:58 Xexxar: ya
06:58 Doormat: i'm guessing yes because manual stack
06:59 Doormat: 00:44:223 (1,2,3,4) - i don't get why 3->4 has more emphasis in spacing when these are literally all same intensity
06:59 Xexxar: guitar dingaling
06:59 Doormat: hmm
06:59 Xexxar: 00:55:841 (4) -
06:59 Doormat: oh i hear it now lol
06:59 Xexxar: this one has no emphasis
06:59 Xexxar: cause its overmapped xddd
07:00 Doormat: 00:42:662 - 00:48:211 - those skipped string plucks my heart why
07:00 Doormat: is it because dominant sound is on 3
07:00 Xexxar: oh shit
07:00 Xexxar: i didnt notice
07:01 Doormat: 00:53:760 - here too
07:01 Xexxar: hmm
07:01 Doormat: ya
07:01 Doormat: i only asked cause 00:58:789 (1,2,3,4) - is the only one that didn't ignore it
07:01 Xexxar: 00:43:009 -
07:01 Xexxar: this is what
07:02 Xexxar: i was confused
07:02 Xexxar: by
07:02 Doormat: o
07:02 Doormat: hmm
07:02 Xexxar: that one has a guitar strum
07:02 Doormat: hmm
07:02 Xexxar: at the end
07:02 Doormat: yeah
07:02 Xexxar: 00:59:310 (4) -
07:02 Xexxar: thats why its there
07:02 Doormat: was the guitarist drunk or something wtf
07:03 Xexxar: 00:43:009 - im more annoyed
07:03 Xexxar: by this noise
07:03 Xexxar: than anything
07:03 Xexxar: its getting ignored
07:03 Xexxar: for consistency
07:03 Xexxar: but wtf
07:04 Doormat: 01:19:945 (4,5,6) - idk how i feel about this linear pattern during the middle of the build up
07:04 Doormat: it just feels out of place
07:04 Doormat: like
07:04 Doormat: at the very least you could've done something like 01:18:732 (2,3,4) -
07:04 Xexxar: 01:16:997 (2,3,4) -
07:04 Xexxar: 01:11:448 (1,2,3) -
07:05 Xexxar: the theme of this map is kinda that linear motion thing
07:05 Doormat: hmm
07:05 Xexxar: ya its a bit out of place flow wise
07:05 Xexxar: but
07:05 Doormat: interesting
07:05 Xexxar: hm
07:05 Xexxar: i think it works
07:05 Doormat: hope you can defend it lol
07:05 Xexxar: you'll notice that
07:05 Xexxar: i use a shit ton of 00:38:327 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
07:05 Xexxar: stuff like this
07:05 Xexxar: 00:00:524 (1,2,3) -
07:05 Doormat: i'd argue that the change in emphasis due to the buildup is justifiable that using the same gimmick here doesn't work
07:05 Xexxar: 01:50:813 (1,2,3,4) -
07:06 Doormat: 01:27:749 (1) - did you really just ignore the violin in the middle of this slider lol
07:07 Xexxar: wat?
07:07 Xexxar: i dont hear anything
07:07 Doormat: the strings trill
07:07 Xexxar: :\
07:07 Doormat: hmm
07:07 Doormat: maybe i'm just hearing things
07:07 Doormat: but i'm pretty sure
07:07 Doormat: there's a string on that blue tick
07:08 Doormat: 01:25:841 (4,5) - i'd also argue that this spacing might be a bit extreme given the pattern leading up to this
07:08 Xexxar: i dont hear it
07:08 Doormat: and i'd also argue that the roll at 01:33:471 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - isn't audible enough to justify a stream like this
07:08 Doormat: like it's there, but barely
07:08 Xexxar: not rly
07:09 Doormat: idk
07:09 Xexxar: white ticks are getting around that space
07:09 Doormat: maybe it's because it's 7 in the morning and i haven't gotten a lick of sleep
07:09 Xexxar: ya that strema
07:09 Xexxar: might be over
07:10 Doormat: yeah definitely not audible enough roll to justify the stream
07:10 Xexxar: yolo
07:10 Doormat: 01:36:593 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - nice zigzag
07:10 Xexxar: ya idk
07:10 Xexxar: that flow is kinda awk but idk
07:10 Xexxar: i think it fits
07:11 Doormat: i wasn't talking shit on it
07:11 Doormat: i was just like "oh lol cool i guess"
07:11 Xexxar: l o l
07:11 Xexxar: ya idk i wasnt sure about it
07:11 Doormat: 01:45:263 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - snap feels wrong
07:11 Xexxar: thats why i mentioned that
07:11 Doormat: idk how to explain it
07:11 Doormat: but the twinkle sound thing doesn't sound 1/4
07:11 Doormat: might be better to not map this actually
07:11 Doormat: stream seems overboard
07:12 Xexxar: idk
07:12 Doormat: sorry not twinkle, harp*
07:12 Xexxar: 01:56:188 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) -
07:12 Xexxar: it fits well here
07:12 Xexxar: 00:22:026 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
07:12 Xexxar: and im pretty sure
07:12 Xexxar: its the same noise here
07:12 Doormat: hmm
07:12 Xexxar: 01:45:263 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
07:12 Xexxar: and that
07:12 Doormat: it might be the harp that's throwing it off
07:12 Xexxar: u can hear a harp in the left
07:12 Xexxar: lef era
07:12 Xexxar: left ear
07:13 Doormat: hmm
07:13 Doormat: yeah
07:13 Doormat: idk
07:13 Doormat: maybe try toning down the volume of the hitsounds then?
07:13 Xexxar: like i said
07:13 Doormat: at least for 01:45:263 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
07:13 Xexxar: havent hitsounded yet
07:14 Doormat: it looks like you set the volumes for everything
07:14 Doormat: i was just saying like
07:14 Doormat: maybe lower the volume for that
07:14 Doormat: idk
07:14 Xexxar: ya ya
07:14 Xexxar: i agre
07:14 Xexxar: 01:54:628 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
07:14 Xexxar: i needa nerf this
07:14 Xexxar: lo
07:14 Doormat: yeah
07:14 Doormat: i get that it's like the ending of the song
07:15 Doormat: but like
07:15 Doormat: no justification in this spike
07:15 Doormat: considering everything else
07:15 Doormat: around it
07:15 Xexxar: fixed
07:16 Xexxar: i do this
07:16 Xexxar: http://puu.sh/uCByO/7b979f9438.jpg
07:16 Doormat: yeah that's a bit better
07:16 Doormat: the 1->2->3 flow might be a little out of place imo
07:16 Xexxar: true
07:16 Xexxar: it should be PARRALEL
07:17 Xexxar: http://puu.sh/uCBD3/d3547e9360.jpg
07:17 Xexxar: theme is now complete
07:17 Xexxar: fixed
07:19 Doormat: lmao
07:19 Doormat: well
07:19 Doormat: it fits the theme ya
07:20 Doormat: guess that's fine then
07:20 Xexxar: and is playable
07:20 Doormat: well it fits your theme in linear motion
07:20 Xexxar: ya
07:20 Doormat: k that's about it can i go sleep now
07:20 Xexxar: ya same
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why is half of this a stream
it doesn't need a long stream

why is it 5.28sr wtf pp
why is this only 5.28 wtf underrated
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tfw I got no kds FeelsBadMan
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azerite no hitsugi
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Shiirn - Today at 7:45 AM
00:30:870 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2) -
>double 1/8 sliders on chime doubles
okay good i can dig it
00:26:708 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5) -
>double 1/8 sliders on chime doubles
00:24:454 (21,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,1) -
wtf are these 1/8 sliders following????
er
1/4
on imoutosan's they're 1/8

Shiirn - Today at 7:49 AM
00:47:344 (4) - you're missing the little wooden-stick-slapping-sound emphasis you were enjoying well


and more random discussion that's more abstract i guess
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finish pls
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borborygmos wrote:
delet this
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why not ar9
01:36:419 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this is the only pattern i want to complain about, the flow isn't so comfortable to play for me and 01:35:726 (3,4) - the overlap looks kinda ugly and lacks some aesthetics that you're used to use
00:38:847 - it's pretty subjective but i would follow the drum but it's up to you
01:38:847 (7,1) - this is too harsh because there is no pattern like this in other parts

I
01:55:495 (1) - remove nc
looks like you didn't put much efforts on this diff xd, at least not as much as you put on the top diff

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00:43:529 (4,5) - change to 1/1 slider? there is nothing on 00:43:703 - the slider head

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you should make this diff harder since the hard is pretty hard
00:34:512 - circle here? 1/1 gap is easier to read
00:37:287 - ^

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01:34:859 (1,2) - ds
00:40:755 - remove the green lines in the break time they are very :idea: :idea: :idea: :shock: :shock:

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00:43:529 (4,5) - change to 1/1 slider? there is nothing on 00:43:703 - the slider head There is that light hi-hat sound there, so I'll keep it.

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