kanor wrote:

[Bass]
AR2 the god><
thre are some DS warnings in the Aimod.
00:09:437 (3) - im a little confused why you dont stop the slider at00:09:978 - drum is better to follow (???) fix it
00:26:194 (2,3) - overlap ok
00:38:356 (1,2) - blanket can still be better ^
00:47:816 (2) - is there any credible reason to make such a slider? just for fun (you

actually i dont recommend to make an easy diff for such a song...for new players the ryhthm may be too hard to master than tuba(Normal), and in my opinion the visual effect of DS is confusing,too.
How about NHI? so you mean I can delete this diff? there will be wonderf(ry considering the "Quartet" and the characters (their instruments), the 4 diffs is perfect!
[Tuba]
nothing special, good ryhthm and patterm thank you

[Trumpet]
00:49:708 (6) - i dont know whch beat does this slider followed....standing at the whole part I deeply recommend to delay it at 00:49:798 - yes.. the slider didnt follow anything, but the slider is easier to play
01:02:320 (2,3) - follow the white line by the tail of sider may be hard for play and read... How about change them into 2 circles? umm.. let me think about it
01:20:248 (4,5) - if you want to blanket, we cao make it better ok fixed

[Euphonium]
00:27:185 (6,1) - if you dont metion to stack them, i advice to make pattern like these seems similiar. For example 00:38:537 (2,3) - ;00:39:618 (6,7) - 00:42:861 (2,3) - 00:45:023 (2,3,4,5) - 00:47:726 (4,1) - and so on I keep this 00:45:023 (2,3,4,5) and others are fixed!
nice diff><

GL><

-himei wrote:

m4m:
double bass:
00:16:464 - this should be mapped i assume, 00:15:924 (5) - cuz this slider is out of place
00:19:167 - i'd suggest to map this beat the music is quiet, only the vocal be in here, and i follow the drum so I didnt add a note
00:32:681 - ^
00:33:762 - new vocal interval on the slider body? what... this diff is follow the drum most, so the vocal is not important
00:38:356 (1,2) - they distance should be wider i guess
00:38:356 (1,2) - inconsistent distance
00:46:735 (1) - ugly slider tsame reason in tuba
00:47:816 (2) - ^
01:02:951 (4,1) - ^
please make sliders simple in easy diff. its highly recommended to use simple curves
01:19:167 - unmapped beat? it isn't?
01:26:735 (3) - this shouldnt be slider, 01:26:735 (3) - this should be a note or slider w/e ??

tuba:
00:21:600 (3) - ugly slider ok XD fix it
01:04:843 (3) - ^ I like this XDDD so keep it
actually its pretty good
i would suggest to change AR to 6

trumpet:
00:22:951 (1,2) - they are not parallel fix
00:25:924 (3,4) - they are not copy paste of each other with horizonal flip, plz fix http://puu.sh/rJGcR/02061e2c42.jpg
00:36:735 (3,4) - same thing http://puu.sh/rJGed/8c886b1fc3.jpg
00:41:870 (4,1) - same thing http://puu.sh/rJGgL/fbb6261c34.jpg
00:50:519 (1,2) - ^ http://puu.sh/rJGiL/8263326b9d.jpg ok I fix all of them
01:04:573 (2,3,4) - different distance inbetween them yes, because their flow is different
01:12:140 (6,2) - they shud be similar maybe? nice one, fixed it
01:14:302 (4,1,2) - different distance inbetween ^
01:17:275 (2,3,4,1) - http://puu.sh/rJGsM/7778a744c5.jpg bad placement, 01:17:546 (3) - shud be at 334/248

Euphonium
00:21:329 (2,3) - maybe just cope 2 to 3?
00:52:320 (4) - shud be at 127/149 maybe? no. it's 1/6 song, so I want to keep the triple as a unit
00:58:807 (1) - 192/152 ^
00:58:897 (2) - 168/184 ^
01:03:221 (2,4) - not parallel http://puu.sh/rJGGk/a94704a17f.jpg fixed it

thats it! gl

m4m:
https://osu.ppy.sh/s/496609

Nuolong wrote:

M4M From queue~

[Euphonium]
00:03:333 (1) - I think this would be better placed like this so it has better flow~ right now it seems a little awkward to play :3 (Check image) you're right, fixed
00:04:573 (3) - I don't think it should have a little wiggle in the middle, because in this part of the music everything is smooth this slider is very ugly... I make a new one, i think it's be better now - -;
00:28:356 (4,5) - These two sliders I think would be better as circles, it fits the music more here :3 here I follow the trumpet's sound and the slider is easier to read, so keep it
00:29:798 (2) - Add some kind of hitsound here, because nothing makes it sound weird, shift+R whole thing makes it sound better imo, also make the tail of this 00:29:437 (1) - into drum HS too~ all of the note and slider have sound here acturally 0v0..?
00:30:519 (4,5) - Same here~ 00:31:600 (1,2) - , 00:33:762 (1,2) - , 00:34:843 (4,5) - , 00:35:924 (1,2) -
01:02:951 (1,2,3) - This part sounds nice with whistles, maybe you can add this to other parts? like on the head of these it would be cool~ 00:48:086 (2,3,4) - (and make head of 00:48:356 (3) - into shift+w) this's a good point, I add the whistle in the other sides, nice!!

[Trumpet]
00:04:573 (3) - I don't think there is a good reason to put this sharp anchor, like in Euphonium~ the sound sounds smooth yesss, fixed it XD
00:29:708 (2) - Something similar to in Euphonium~ make this into shift+r same to 00:30:789 (5) - , etc.? And you can put shift+w on 00:30:248 (3,4) - , 00:31:329 (6,1) - , etc.I dont know what you mean, but it's same as Euphonium here
00:29:437 (1) - Missing finish? yes, added

[Tuba]
00:03:333 (1,2) - This part is seems weird.. I tried to fix it by deleting the second red timing line, and moving 00:03:492 (2) - to the yellow tick on 1/8 divisor, but then it screwed up all of the other notes snapping >w< Check picture: umm.. I didnt delete the red line because I dont know that does the red line can be different in the same mapset?
00:21:600 (3) - On the red anchor I don't hear anything that says the music needs~ and it looks a little weird hehe >w< I would suggest changing it, maybe something like in the picture (I'm bad at making these types of sliders so I hope you know what I mean)yes,I know so I fixed but not as "~" this shape
00:48:627 (5) - I suggest you change this because it is really awkward that it ends on a big white tick and starts on a red tick. Instead you can change this slider into a circle for the head and start a new slider on the tail of this one (starting on the big white tick) oh, I didnt mention on this, it's an important point, fixed it
01:04:843 (3) - It looks nice, but there is no reason for a red anchor, music is smooth
01:10:519 (1) - same^ umm.. you're right but considering that the rhythm of easy diff is simple, so at least in the arrangement can be more interesting
01:27:275 (3) - I think this should just be made into a circle~ the vocal ended on 1/6 acturally, so the slider will better to read and play

[Double Bass]
00:09:437 (3) - This part is awkward because it misses important notes~ maybe starting here 00:09:167 (2) - , you should make it into something like this: It sounds a lot better imo~ ok, fixed it
00:19:708 (2) - Spacing is weird, unless it is okay to do this then I would stack 00:19:708 (2) - on top of 00:18:627 (1) - wow , it's a good method to fix this problem! thank you!
00:46:735 (1) - Same as other diffs, I don't hear anything that would make this need red anchor~
00:47:816 (2) - This slider doesn't look that nice, I would remove the red anchor ;w;
01:01:870 (3) - You can move the red anchor to one of the ticks in the music that has the drums, right now the red anchor is on a smooth part of the music
01:02:951 (4) - This red anchor, for example, is really good!!oh.. ok now I knew what you mean
01:04:032 (1) - Same, it is on smooth music I like this shape recently QQ
01:26:735 (3) - Same, maybe you can move anchor to be on this part of the music 01:27:185 (3) - to follow vocal change.



(edit bc I forgot to add a header for a difficulty)
I hope I helped in this mod!! Good luck :3

Net0 wrote:

Hi :3

[Double Bass]

1. DS here 00:06:735 (4,1) - went from the usual 1,8x to 1,37x. You might want to fix it.
2. ^ 00:11:329 (2,1) -
3. Move this 00:24:843 (5) - to x:106 y:102 to improve distance
4. This is really creative 00:28:356 (4) - . I mean it seems playable at most cases, but doing this in easiest difficulty... Good luck with it, I'm ok, even tho it's my job as modder to mention that this is mostly never accepted by most ppl. I know that.. but let me keep it now
5. Move this 00:35:924 (1) - to x:55 y:175
6. This flow is really hard 00:37:005 (2,3,1) - . You could rework this into a more linear motion.I think is not a bid deal so keep it

[Tuba]

1. Move 00:05:383 (4) - to x:431 y:134 to improve distance . Remember to fix stack if you apply this 00:07:005 (3) - .
2. Move 00:11:059 (2) - in +1 in the "y" axis
3. Move to 00:25:924 (2) - x:500 y:82
4. Are you sure about leaving this gap here 00:12:140 (1,2,3,4) - ?
5. I highly recommend you don't map 1/4 sliders in a 1* difficulty map. Mostly because new players don't know this rhythm quite yet. 00:28:356 (3,4) - . IMO it works perfectly, but the star rating here will give you a hard time in order to accept this rhythm choice. you're right but I want to know how other modder says

other points are fixed!

[Trumpet]

1. Rotate this 00:05:654 (1) - "-1º" to improve blanket fix
2. Rotate this 00:48:356 (4) - "+1º" to improve the symmetric pattern 00:47:816 (3,4) - ^
3. 01:20:248 (4,5) - Blanket improve^

[Euphonium]

1. Blanket is off 00:05:654 (1,2) - it's blanket now xD
2. 00:29:437 (1,2) - What is this kickslider doing here? I mean if you're vocal mapping I don't get what this 1/6 slider is doing here. There's indeed a triple sound here 00:29:708 - ~ 00:29:888 - but this kick slider sounds really bad in terms of what could have been done here to map this triple instead. Try this instead http://puu.sh/rJU5R.jpg . Making one reverse slider to map the triple should work great. in the other diffs, here is following the vocal, but this's the most difficult diff, and the drum of here is a special point in this song, so I'll keep it
3. 00:30:519 (4,5) - ^
4. Blanket 00:37:275 (5,6) -
5. Move 00:46:735 (1) - to x: 336 y:276 to improve the distance of this pattern 00:46:194 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - . Remember to move 00:47:005 (2) - to x:417 to avoid overlapping if case you apply this. ok
6. Move 00:55:924 (3) - to x:49 y:198 ^
7. Move 00:57:546 (3) - to x:359 y:38 ^
   Both to avoid overlaps
8. Rotate this 01:03:672 (4) - "+1º"ok

I really enjoyed the map. I like when TV-sizes go creative with how they're mapped a lot, and hopefully you will rank this
Good luck o/ thank you! I hope it can be rank soon T_T

MugiwaraSekai wrote:

M4M

euphonium
00:25:113 (1) - I guess it's better to not skip the loud sound at 00:25:113 (1) - and vocal finish at the same time I didn't skip that sound, what's your meaning 0.0 ?
00:37:455 (6) - It deserves being more emphasize imo, this spacing feels a bit awkward since the player expects a huge spacing oh, it's a good point. fixed.
01:07:005 (5) - I think 01:07:275 - should be clickable ^

trumpet
00:05:654 (1,2) - feels a bit weird since there is nothing at 00:06:555 -
00:45:023 (2) - I think there is not really the same sound than 00:45:293 (3,4) - yes, but it's easy to read the next one

tuba
00:48:897 (6) - NC ? consistency with 01:06:194 (1) - ok
01:09:978 (3,4) - what about unstack? you didn't stack notes before and I think it's the good way no, because the drum is clear~
really good

double bass
00:20:789 (1,2,3,4,1,1,2,3) - you could use a lot of 1/1 sliders, I know that's an easy diff but it deserves having more variety there are sliders.. 0_0
00:34:573 (5) - ^
00:44:032 (3) - it feels a bit weird since you seems follow the drums and finally you finish your slider when the vocal end there's a drum with drum-finish
01:01:870 (3,4) - I think it's better to make this differently because it's one of parts in the kiai parts who deserves being emphasize i changed it to two slider, hope it will be better
this diff needs more variety i guess
Good luck!

JeZag wrote:

m4m req

double bass

00:22:951 (3,4) - Consider this rhythm instead: more clicking, but more intuitive imo

00:28:897 (5) - I would make this a slider just like 00:28:356 (4), or make 00:28:356 (4) a hitcircle just like 00:28:897 (5). To me, it sounds like the same dum-dum rhythm, so i think they should be mapped same rhythm.
If you're worried about spacing between 00:28:897 (5,1) , then what about the current spacing between 00:28:356 (4,5)?
ok, i fixed it
00:29:708 (2,3) - Make good blanket ok
00:37:005 (2,3,1) - This flow is a bit weird :/
00:44:032 (3) - I don't think this fits, because the tail at 00:44:843 no longer corresponds to a sound in the song. An alternative:

Although that one slider is very long, it prevents "misreading" and complex rhythms in easy.
00:46:735 (1) - Hm what's the point of this weird shape in an easy? If you're going for aesthetics, then take a step back because 00:46:735 (1,2,3) doesn't look thaaat good to begin with. Just make 00:46:735 (1) more plain.
00:53:221 (3) - Flows better from before and after if it curves the other way.

00:57:005 (1) - This is awk cause the head isn't on a rather important beat and the body is. Thus, the player clicks at a weak beat and drags across the strong beat at 00:57:546. it's symmetry vocal
01:04:032 (1) - Again, sliders like this don't belong in an easy imo. Alternative:

01:18:086 (2,3) - flow the flow it's no problem
01:21:329 (1) - You know what i'm going to sayok
01:24:032 (1) - Extra points if you can make this blanket 01:23:221 (4). ok
01:26:735 (3) -

Tuba

00:10:519 (1,3) - For aesthetics, why isn't this mirror image of each other? EZ symmetry
00:15:924 (4) - I really don't like this slider because the click for head is weak and both 00:16:194 AND 00:16:464 are more important beats, and are both on slider tails... I know what you mean. But I think it's not so important in the easy diff
01:04:843 (3,4) - No way... was this recycled to the easy? cause looks like that one part in easy i didn't like. it's acceptable here though.
Nothing else catches my eye as wrong.

Trumpet

00:05:654 (1) - Wrong rhythm. Correct rhythm uses 1/4 not 1/6: yes, this's my mistake

00:15:924 (5) - Same issue as from Tuba.
01:16:194 (4,5,6,7) - Not well mapped, because a player wants to click ALL the important beats, namely 01:16:464 yes,i put the not to last, but i'm afraid that is hard to play..
01:16:735 and 01:17:005. In fact, ctrl+g this whole section will make it "right".
01:25:293 (5,6,7) - Same here. click important beats.

Euphonium

00:05:654 (1,2) - Better blanket? ok
00:43:942 Would love if you had something here. no... there's not any sounds in the music
idk not much else to say.

Good luck ranking!

wasinkingspeedq wrote:

m4m from your queue

General
fine~

Double Bass
00:06:735 (4) - Try adding clap hs at the beginning ? ,the sound feels similar with hs. ok,+whistle
00:16:464 (6,1) - New Combo at the circle(6) ? ok
00:19:708 (2,3) - I think this part the pattern should be like this!
00:34:573 (5,1) - It's not a big deal, but the blanket seem closer between a slider(5) and (1) if it possible adjust the blanket a bitok
for example
00:48:897 (3) - How about ctrl+J at this slider

Tuba
00:06:735 (2) - The same reason as Double Bass diff.
00:42:410 (1,2,3) - I think this part the pattern should be nice
like this!
00:48:897 (6) - How about NC at this slider? ok
looks clean~

Trumpet
00:05:654 (1) - The rhythm of this slider look weird if you listen carefully, this slider should end at the red tick yes, it's my mistake 1/2 is rightbefore, so I suggest you to do this.(Beat Snap Divisor from 1/6 to 1/8)
01:05:654 (4) - How a bout ctrl+G this slider, just in my opinion no,I did that in purpose XD
01:15:383 (2) - ^^ ^
nothing much to fix this diff.

Euphonium
00:08:356 (5) - add Finish hs at the tail of this slider.ok
00:54:573 (2) - NC at this slider instead the slider(1) before ? nice
I don't have experience much to mod the hardest diff, sorry for that. it's ok~~

vitamin mapset and GL~~~