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Artist: Idol College
Title: Be My Zombie
Source: 激次元タッグ ブラン+ネプテューヌVSゾンビ軍団
Tags: opening Idea Factory Compile Heart Tamsoft ps vita MegaTagmension Blanc + Neptune vs Zombies Army Geki Jigen Tag Blanc + Neptune VS Zombie Gundan OP
BPM: 185
Filesize: 24103kb
Play Time: 01:31
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Mapset: Rivals_7 | Hitsound: Rivals_7 | Video: Shad0w1and | Background: Feerum


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A Journey to Save Gamacademi From the Zombies!!


Try my remixed by DJ TOTTO - The 4th KAC DJ TOTTO's SELECTION. if you dont like typical japanese OP
Metadata things: Eng | Jpn

Another #StandaloneMapper Project yey


"HitsounD" is not for Mod! Unless you want to mod the hitsounding, Not the pattern!

4K


EZ 5/4
NM 10/7
HD 10/8
MX 11/10

5K


EZ 7/4
NM 6/4
HD 8/6
MX 9/8


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NICE!

I really really like this song.
But .. Rivals.. your BG give my eye's cancer.

Uhm, i have a Map where i also use a BG from this game, if you want you can use it.
Get it here
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oh waw Thx Feerum xD
Yea I got that BG from screenshoting the video cuz I cant get better resolution on google
kinda sad its not full pic like my current one :u its like..........Zoom-ed lel

Did their thighs kinda nsfw or wat lol
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Song: Idol College - Be My Zombie (Rivals_7)
Number of difficulties modded in my map: 8 - 4K/7K Normal, Hard, Insane, Maximum Genestella


Note:
• First of all, I would want to apologize if I ever say something that will hurt your feelings as a mapper. Remember that I only want to give advices, suggestions, recommendations and sideas for some improvement in your map. Please do understand and thank you.

• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I am not perfect and I am not always right. But I do give my best to mod with sense. Also, I do not bite rawr.

• If I suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, dont forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.




General
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• No problem!

Code:
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4K - |1|2|3|4|




4K EZ 'Rom'
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00:13:997 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qNMXr/1d0f3c2ab3.jpg
• 1st LN gives more emphasis to the vocal, plus for that sound effect.
• 2nd LN for the 2nd phase of the sound effect plus fits along with the tom drum roll.

00:24:051 - add note? kick sound can be heard here similar to 00:18:862 (18862|3) -

00:51:618 - add note? strong clap-like sound like 00:53:240 (53240|1,53240|0) -

01:29:240 (89240|2,89402|0) - same on my 1st suggestion.



4K NM 'Ram'
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00:13:997 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qNu3K/db3aafe15f.jpg
• first LN for vocal emphasis
• last LN for the sound effect heard in the background as well get along with the drum roll.
• In this way, the feeling will not be that awkward.

00:18:375 - add note for the kick

00:23:564 - ^

00:34:916 (34916|3,34997|0) - suggesting to remove as they are only kick sound and not snares. It is the same as 00:33:456 (33456|1,33781|3,33943|0) - where kicks are singles.

00:45:456 - add note, fits to be double since strong sound cymbals.

00:51:294 - add note to 4, strong sound as well similar to 00:52:105 (52105|3,52105|2) -

00:55:997 - the trumphet can be heard clearly and kinda feels empty without note on it. Add note to 1

01:06:375 - ^ to 4

01:25:348 (85348|0) - move to 2, since not same snare sound as 01:25:024 (85024|0) - just like you did at 01:26:970 (86970|2) -

01:29:240 - same as my first suggestion in this difficulty. Vocal long sound and sound effect.

01:30:862 (90862|2) - move to 4, seems fit for both middle fingers.



4K HD 'Neptune'
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00:08:970 (8970|2) - should end at 00:09:294 - since the trumphet and vocal ended there. Check your MX since it has the extended one. Also same as you did at 01:24:213 (84213|0) -

01:31:510 (91510|1) - move to 4, seem better with both hands ending the song.

Really neat and fun difficulty~!





4K MX 'Blanc'
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00:34:267 - add note for that sound similar to 00:34:754 (34754|0) - and it fits since it is along with the vocals.

00:34:429 - ^

00:34:591 - ^

01:09:456 - add note to 2 for trumphet emphasis like you did at 00:59:078 (59078|0,59078|2,59078|1) -

Awesome difficulty as well, good job!


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5K EZ 'Nepgear'
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00:13:997 (13997|0,14159|4) - same suggestion on 4K EZ's

00:16:591 (16591|3,16754|2) - swap column so it can be the counter part of 00:15:943 (15943|0,16105|2,16267|1) - and much neat.

00:24:051 - add note for the kick sound.

00:45:294 - add note for the kick sound as well along with that melodic sound which has consistent sound.

01:29:240 (89240|1,89402|3) - same suggestion on 1st's

01:30:537 (90537|1,90862|2) - swap column, which will be fit on 01:29:889 (89889|0,90051|2) - and the last note will be pressed on both index hands.

01:31:510 (91510|1) - move to 4? seems better if pressed by both hands as well.



5K NM 'Uni'
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00:01:673 (1673|1) - move to 1 to be fit with 00:01:835 (1835|2,1997|4) -

00:03:132 - http://puu.sh/qNNIN/b8e09be753.jpg for alternative pattern for drum, much better to execute.

00:07:672 (7672|2) - move to 4 so it won't be repeated after 00:07:024 (7024|4,7186|2) - with different sounds.

00:13:997 (13997|0,14159|2) - Same suggestion as 4K/5K EZ's LN about this part.

00:17:159 (17159|1,17240|0) - move to 1 and 5 respetively, fits for triplets. Or you can even do a stair like you did at 00:22:267 (22267|4,22348|3,22429|2) -

00:19:672 (19672|3) - move to 3, better pressed by thumb and to avoid the awkward feeling on right hand while holding the LN.

00:34:916 (34916|0,34916|4,34997|2,34997|1) - reduce to singles as they are only kick sounds alone similar to 00:32:808 (32808|1,33132|3,33456|2) -

00:45:456 - add note? since cymbals.

01:14:645 (74645|3) - move one column to right for variation. Also 01:14:645 - is not the same pitch as 01:15:456 - to be the same pattern. The 01:17:240 (77240|3,77240|1,77564|2,77564|0) - has 1 gap column with each other similar to this sound.

01:29:240 (89240|0,89402|4) - same suggestions as EZ's

01:30:537 (90537|0,90862|2) - ctrl J, fits more plus end note is both hands.




5K HD 'Noire'
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00:02:808 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qNOgb/2eaf9af6c4.png as variation for the upcoming snares. Also the stack at column 3 fits since they are both kick sounds

00:14:645 - the pattern is here kinda awkward, suggesting http://puu.sh/qNOqX/945d279c4f.png which is comfortable and similar to 4K's

00:20:483 (20483|1) - move to 4 for comfortability of left hand.

00:45:618 (45618|4) - remove, no kick sound here occured and LN alone is fine. 4K HD doesn't have a note here.

00:51:618 (51618|1) - move to 4 since it has similar impact as 00:51:132 (51132|3,51132|4) -

00:52:429 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qNOEV/f63e14226c.png which is neat in terms of vision and simple to execute

01:29:240 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qNOOQ/6d0a591b85.jpg which is clearer to execute and avoid complications.




5K MX 'Vert'
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00:01:673 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qNOUZ/192d32a46f.png which the goal is to have varation on 00:02:808 - and 00:02:970 - so it won't be similar to upcoming snare sounds.

00:13:997 (13997|0) - move to 3 to avoid 00:13:997 (13997|0,14159|0,14321|0) -

00:16:267 - The pattern here are quite compressed without using the 3rd column and its quite awkward. I recommend http://puu.sh/qNP50/e6e08147df.png for better sight and comfortable execution for that hihat-like sound. Do the same on other similar sounds like 00:18:862 -

00:34:267 - add note for that sound similar to 00:34:754 (34754|0) - and it fits since it is along with the vocals.

00:34:429 - ^

00:34:591 - ^

00:45:456 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qNPdh/03ecbc592d.png for proper LN and clearer sight for the 00:45:781 -

00:51:943 (51943|0,52105|3) - ctrl J fits more imo.

00:59:727 (59727|1) - remove, no trumphet-like sound occured here and the same snare sound as 01:00:375 (60375|1,60375|0) - which is only double

01:09:456 - add note here to make triple for trumphet.

01:10:105 (70105|4) - remove, no donald trumph.

01:11:402 (71402|0) - ^

01:13:510 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qNPjZ/8da4084c5b.png for better execution for the upcoming drum roll.

01:18:700 - add note to 3 since cymbals?



Overall
Hyppeeee-rdimensional map, even zombie will awake from their sleep haha~
Thank you so much for the contract, Good luck and until next time~
Please vote here as feedback for my M4M modding performance: t/372334

~ END OF CONTRACT ~
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"Arcwinolivirus' M4M-only contract"

A contract to be fulfilled as exchange of mod.


Song: Idol College - Be My Zombie (Rivals_7)
Number of difficulties modded in my map: 8 - 4K/7K Normal, Hard, Insane, Maximum Genestella


Note:
• First of all, I would want to apologize if I ever say something that will hurt your feelings as a mapper. Remember that I only want to give advices, suggestions, recommendations and sideas for some improvement in your map. Please do understand and thank you.

• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I am not perfect and I am not always right. But I do give my best to mod with sense. Also, I do not bite rawr.

• If I suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, dont forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.




General
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• No problem!

Code:
Column:
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4K - |1|2|3|4|




4K EZ 'Rom'
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00:13:997 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qNMXr/1d0f3c2ab3.jpg
• 1st LN gives more emphasis to the vocal, plus for that sound effect.
• 2nd LN for the 2nd phase of the sound effect plus fits along with the tom drum roll.
I think i will consider this. The vocal shouldnt be hard to catch imo. even for EZ

00:24:051 - add note? kick sound can be heard here similar to 00:18:862 (18862|3) -

00:51:618 - add note? strong clap-like sound like 00:53:240 (53240|1,53240|0) -

01:29:240 (89240|2,89402|0) - same on my 1st suggestion. well... same :>



4K NM 'Ram'
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00:13:997 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qNu3K/db3aafe15f.jpg
• first LN for vocal emphasis
• last LN for the sound effect heard in the background as well get along with the drum roll.
• In this way, the feeling will not be that awkward.
same as before. I dont think it'll be kinda awkward since the distance between those notes are constant

00:18:375 - add note for the kick

00:23:564 - ^ ^ These two are intended. for more easier approach towards denser notes above it

00:34:916 (34916|3,34997|0) - suggesting to remove as they are only kick sound and not snares. It is the same as 00:33:456 (33456|1,33781|3,33943|0) - where kicks are singles.

00:45:456 - add note, fits to be double since strong sound cymbals.

00:51:294 - add note to 4, strong sound as well similar to 00:52:105 (52105|3,52105|2) -

00:55:997 - the trumphet can be heard clearly and kinda feels empty without note on it. Add note to 1

01:06:375 - ^ to 4 ^ These two are also intended. This is kinda special case where i want to emphasize the vocal.

01:25:348 (85348|0) - move to 2, since not same snare sound as 01:25:024 (85024|0) - just like you did at 01:26:970 (86970|2) -

01:29:240 - same as my first suggestion in this difficulty. Vocal long sound and sound effect. same :u

01:30:862 (90862|2) - move to 4, seems fit for both middle fingers. Fair point tho. fix xD



4K HD 'Neptune'
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00:08:970 (8970|2) - should end at 00:09:294 - since the trumphet and vocal ended there. Check your MX since it has the extended one. Also same as you did at 01:24:213 (84213|0) -

01:31:510 (91510|1) - move to 4, seem better with both hands ending the song.

Really neat and fun difficulty~! Accept all. Thx! :D





4K MX 'Blanc'
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00:34:267 - add note for that sound similar to 00:34:754 (34754|0) - and it fits since it is along with the vocals.

00:34:429 - ^

00:34:591 - ^

01:09:456 - add note to 2 for trumphet emphasis like you did at 00:59:078 (59078|0,59078|2,59078|1) -

Awesome difficulty as well, good job! Hue thx :3


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5K EZ 'Nepgear'
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00:13:997 (13997|0,14159|4) - same suggestion on 4K EZ's ^

00:16:591 (16591|3,16754|2) - swap column so it can be the counter part of 00:15:943 (15943|0,16105|2,16267|1) - and much neat.

00:24:051 - add note for the kick sound.

00:45:294 - add note for the kick sound as well along with that melodic sound which has consistent sound. Emm nope, i guess. not for EZ since i tend to highlight the vocal in this diff, mostly

01:29:240 (89240|1,89402|3) - same suggestion on 1st's ^

01:30:537 (90537|1,90862|2) - swap column, which will be fit on 01:29:889 (89889|0,90051|2) - and the last note will be pressed on both index hands.

01:31:510 (91510|1) - move to 4? seems better if pressed by both hands as well.



5K NM 'Uni'
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00:01:673 (1673|1) - move to 1 to be fit with 00:01:835 (1835|2,1997|4) -

00:03:132 - http://puu.sh/qNNIN/b8e09be753.jpg for alternative pattern for drum, much better to execute.

00:07:672 (7672|2) - move to 4 so it won't be repeated after 00:07:024 (7024|4,7186|2) - with different sounds.

00:13:997 (13997|0,14159|2) - Same suggestion as 4K/5K EZ's LN about this part. ^

00:17:159 (17159|1,17240|0) - move to 1 and 5 respetively, fits for triplets. Or you can even do a stair like you did at 00:22:267 (22267|4,22348|3,22429|2) - Do the stair instead. Thx :3

00:19:672 (19672|3) - move to 3, better pressed by thumb and to avoid the awkward feeling on right hand while holding the LN.

00:34:916 (34916|0,34916|4,34997|2,34997|1) - reduce to singles as they are only kick sounds alone similar to 00:32:808 (32808|1,33132|3,33456|2) -

00:45:456 - add note? since cymbals.

01:14:645 (74645|3) - move one column to right for variation. Also 01:14:645 - is not the same pitch as 01:15:456 - to be the same pattern. The 01:17:240 (77240|3,77240|1,77564|2,77564|0) - has 1 gap column with each other similar to this sound. O yea nice one!

01:29:240 (89240|0,89402|4) - same suggestions as EZ's ^

01:30:537 (90537|0,90862|2) - ctrl J, fits more plus end note is both hands.




5K HD 'Noire'
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00:02:808 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qNOgb/2eaf9af6c4.png as variation for the upcoming snares. Also the stack at column 3 fits since they are both kick sounds Fix + some different change

00:14:645 - the pattern is here kinda awkward, suggesting http://puu.sh/qNOqX/945d279c4f.png which is comfortable and similar to 4K's Could work. Applied exatcly as yours

00:20:483 (20483|1) - move to 4 for comfortability of left hand.

00:45:618 (45618|4) - remove, no kick sound here occured and LN alone is fine. 4K HD doesn't have a note here. ups xD

00:51:618 (51618|1) - move to 4 since it has similar impact as 00:51:132 (51132|3,51132|4) -

00:52:429 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qNOEV/f63e14226c.png which is neat in terms of vision and simple to execute

01:29:240 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qNOOQ/6d0a591b85.jpg which is clearer to execute and avoid complications.




5K MX 'Vert'
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00:01:673 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qNOUZ/192d32a46f.png which the goal is to have varation on 00:02:808 - and 00:02:970 - so it won't be similar to upcoming snare sounds.

00:13:997 (13997|0) - move to 3 to avoid 00:13:997 (13997|0,14159|0,14321|0) -

00:16:267 - The pattern here are quite compressed without using the 3rd column and its quite awkward. I recommend http://puu.sh/qNP50/e6e08147df.png for better sight and comfortable execution for that hihat-like sound. Do the same on other similar sounds like 00:18:862 -

00:34:267 - add note for that sound similar to 00:34:754 (34754|0) - and it fits since it is along with the vocals.

00:34:429 - ^

00:34:591 - ^

00:45:456 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qNPdh/03ecbc592d.png for proper LN and clearer sight for the 00:45:781 -

00:51:943 (51943|0,52105|3) - ctrl J fits more imo.

00:59:727 (59727|1) - remove, no trumphet-like sound occured here and the same snare sound as 01:00:375 (60375|1,60375|0) - which is only double

01:09:456 - add note here to make triple for trumphet.

01:10:105 (70105|4) - remove, no donald trumph. dios mio that was close xD. Thx :D

01:11:402 (71402|0) - ^

01:13:510 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qNPjZ/8da4084c5b.png for better execution for the upcoming drum roll.

01:18:700 - add note to 3 since cymbals? its kinda faint here, so i guess no change on this



Overall
Hyppeeee-rdimensional map, even zombie will awake from their sleep haha~
Thank you so much for the contract, Good luck and until next time~
Please vote here as feedback for my M4M modding performance: t/372334

~ END OF CONTRACT ~


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Oh, sweet, 5K

Column 1->5

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  • I feel like the OD of the EZ diffs could be increased just a little bit due to the lower amount of LNs in each. Maybe ~6.8 to ~7?


5K EZ00:03:456 (3456|2,3700|3) - I think it'd be easier to end this LN and note at 00:03:781 since it's on the red tick and would be easier for the player to predict the end.
00:19:835 - I'd consider either adding another note here for the crash and trumpet, or turning 00:19:835 (19835|2) into an LN and ending at 00:20:159 for the trumpet.
00:33:781 (33781|3,33943|0) - This is more personal preference, but I think this pause would have a bit more finality to it if you flipped the first and second note (control H) so it'd feel like doing a large jump since you'd go from left to right really suddenly.
00:44:970 (44970|4) - It'd make more sense to move this note up to 00:45:294 for the kick rather than the vocal since the drums is what most players are going to be focusing on.
00:59:078 (59078|3) - Consider making this note a 1/1 LN for the trumpet? Or you could make it a double since it stands out.
01:29:402 (89402|3) - The build up sound I assume this LN is for begins at 01:28:916 . Or, if you're following the vocal, similar to the beginning, you should extend it to start at 01:29:240
01:31:510 (91510|0) - Since this is the last last note of the song, I think it'd fit better to be in column 3 because it'd be symmetric then.
01:31:510 (91510|3) - if the above suggestion is denied, then I'd consider moving this to 5 so that it would feel like this final chord is encompassing all the notes in this song. The pitch relevancy is fine as is though, so whatever works better for you.


5K NM00:03:943 (3943|0,4024|1,4105|2,4186|3,4267|4) - I feel like you've used way too much 1/4 in this measure for this to be a NM difficulty. It's justified for the snare, but these toms blend in with the build up whoosh sound starting at 00:03:943 so it would be difficult for a beginner to pick up which sound these are mapped to right off the bat. I'd suggest replacing these notes with an LN instead for the build up.
00:09:294 (9294|1,9375|4,9456|0) - A straight right -> left roll might be easier to read than going from left hand to right hand, then back to left hand in the span of only 1/2 beat. Maybe try something like this instead starting at 00:08:970 Image
00:12:213 (12213|3) - This is visual preference, but this shield looks very out of place since you haven't used a shield anywhere else in the music yet. Maybe move it to 2?
00:13:186 (13186|0) - Same reason as above, to me, I think it'd look nicer in 2.
00:34:916 (34916|3) - Why not just make this a roll? So move to 1 cause then it'd be easy to read since it would go from left -> right, rather than making a 1/2 ministack with 00:34:916 (34916|3,35078|3)
00:44:645 (44645|2) - This note was a bit confusing to me since I expected the first note to come at 00:44:808 with the drums, rather than the vocals. I'd consider removing the note in 3 then because players would expect the drums to come in first before vocals.
01:16:429 (76429|1,76591|2,76754|3) - Not sure if this suggestion is appropriate for a NM diff, but why not jack all these notes together in 3 since they're all the same pitch?
01:31:510 (91510|1,91510|3) - Might consider ending one of these LNs at 01:35:078 since the guitar kind of dies out there, but it's fine either way.


5K HD00:03:781 - Why not finish the burst here and add a single note in 3 for the snare? It seems strange to only map the snares and ignore the tom which is on a more predictable 1/2 snap.
00:05:727 (5727|4,5889|4) - If you're following pitch relevancy here for the trumpets, move these 2 notes to 4 since they're the same pitch as 00:05:402 (5402|3)
00:16:105 (16105|4) - Maybe turn this note into a 1/2 LN like at 00:16:429 (16429|4) since they're the same pitch.
00:34:916 - For the minijumptrill here, try something like this in order to stick to the adjacent note doubles you have here, like this Image
00:39:943 (39943|1,40105|1) - The background piano isn't the same pitch with these two notes, nor is the vocal, so there's no actual reason to jack them, cause they stand out in this measure kind of badly imo. Maybe try moving 00:40:105 (40105|1) to 4.


5K MX00:16:308 (16308|0,16348|1,16389|4,16429|3,16470|1,16510|0,16551|3) - it looks cool what you did here, but it's pretty difficult to hit, at least for me. I think it's mainly because of this 00:16:470 (16470|1,16510|0,16551|3,16591|4) since that pattern tends to be the most difficult to hit. I'd really suggest just using something like a splitroll Image
01:09:456 (69456|0,69618|0) - This jack seems kind of random, maybe swap columns with 01:09:618 (69618|0,69781|1) instead?
Hope this helped, gl with rank!~
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Hi Rivals!~

will just mod 4k since the mod above is not applied yet
oke let's start

Column = |1|2|3|4|


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4K MX 'Blanc'
- 00:05:078 (5078|3,5240|2) - switch columns, for more feels in the sounds betwwen 00:05:240 (5240|1,5240|2,5402|2,5402|3) while playing

- in this part 00:16:267 - i feel like the center is generating too much pressure because after playing the 1/8 there is a 00:16:672 (16672|1,16754|2,16835|1,16916|0,16956|1) ,how about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5966053 umm.. it doesnt change a lot but it got remove the pressure here 00:16:835 (16835|1,16916|0,16956|1) or rearrange

- 00:52:429 (52429|0,52591|2,52754|1,52916|3) - make these the LN instead of 00:52:429 (52429|1,52591|3,52754|0,52916|2) make them singles, for pitch

- 01:02:321 - add note? same sound with 01:01:672

- 00:56:483 - maybe you can add a note here for the drum sound? since you add here 01:06:862 i guess it is fine

- 01:07:510 - here too like my mod above ^ you can move 01:07:348 (67348|0) to 2 to maintain its balance

- 01:08:808 - add note too

- 01:11:727 (71727|2,71889|1) - mirror, more comfortable to play

- 01:31:510 - you can only make 3 LNs here so you can still add here 01:34:916 for the guitar slide

- 00:11:564 (11564|2) - i think the LN ends here 00:11:889 it is technically the same with 00:06:375 (6375|3)

- same with this 01:26:808 (86808|2)



4K HD 'Neptune'
- this part here 00:02:321 (2321|0,2321|1,2483|3,2483|0,2645|3,2645|2) kinda doesnt fit much in the song while playing, maybe try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5965832 or rearrange

- 00:06:213 - the flow here is too repetitive, i mean is that [34][2][34][2][34], you might want to reduce it even a little, how about switch columns in here 00:06:862 (6862|2,7024|0)

- 00:19:835 - the other streams have a complex flow while this one seems like only have a one direction flow going to the right, i think it is better to make something more flowy, how about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5965938

- 00:24:537 - add note for the strong sound

- 00:48:862 - maybe try to do some mirror of 00:46:267 and move to left these two doubles for pattern

- 00:51:294 (51294|2) - move to 4 for pitch, and also if this 00:51:294 (51294|1,51294|2,51618|2,51618|1) are in the same columns, its difference in pitch doesnt distance it that far, some kind of monotonous

- 01:07:672 (67672|0,67997|3) - would be better to mirror these, jack to represent the vocals like you always do in your pattern here in kiai

- 01:20:645 (80645|2,80808|3) - switch columns? to differ the flow betwwen 01:20:159 (80159|0,80159|1,80321|2) and 01:20:483 (80483|0,80483|1,80645|2) based on each sounds

- 01:24:537 (84537|1) - you actually make this double on the intro

- 00:11:564 (11564|1) - same with my mod on the other diff should be 1/1 long

- 01:21:618 (81618|3) - ^

- 01:26:808 (86808|3) - ^


Nice map Rivals :D
Goodluck~
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Oh, sweet, 5K

Column 1->5

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  • I feel like the OD of the EZ diffs could be increased just a little bit due to the lower amount of LNs in each. Maybe ~6.8 to ~7?


5K EZ00:03:456 (3456|2,3700|3) - I think it'd be easier to end this LN and note at 00:03:781 since it's on the red tick and would be easier for the player to predict the end. But I cant ignore the fact that the drum roll is ended at that point. The red line is just an echo
00:19:835 - I'd consider either adding another note here for the crash and trumpet, or turning 00:19:835 (19835|2) into an LN and ending at 00:20:159 for the trumpet. add note then
00:33:781 (33781|3,33943|0) - This is more personal preference, but I think this pause would have a bit more finality to it if you flipped the first and second note (control H) so it'd feel like doing a large jump since you'd go from left to right really suddenly. I think that's also works if its vice versa-ed like from right to left like the current one. also, its already hand balanced
00:44:970 (44970|4) - It'd make more sense to move this note up to 00:45:294 for the kick rather than the vocal since the drums is what most players are going to be focusing on. nope. i dont want my diff to be quite bland, even tho its EZ. so sometimes special condition like this are present
00:59:078 (59078|3) - Consider making this note a 1/1 LN for the trumpet? Or you could make it a double since it stands out. Emm... i'll consider this
01:29:402 (89402|3) - The build up sound I assume this LN is for begins at 01:28:916 . Or, if you're following the vocal, similar to the beginning, you should extend it to start at 01:29:240 eh actually its a drum roll. if you compare with the other diff, its start there
01:31:510 (91510|0) - Since this is the last last note of the song, I think it'd fit better to be in column 3 because it'd be symmetric then. well, this is EZ. i dont want people who are still new in this keymode handle more than 2 notes at once :/
01:31:510 (91510|3) - if the above suggestion is denied, then I'd consider moving this to 5 so that it would feel like this final chord is encompassing all the notes in this song. The pitch relevancy is fine as is though, so whatever works better for you. ^


5K NM00:03:943 (3943|0,4024|1,4105|2,4186|3,4267|4) - I feel like you've used way too much 1/4 in this measure for this to be a NM difficulty. It's justified for the snare, but these toms blend in with the build up whoosh sound starting at 00:03:943 so it would be difficult for a beginner to pick up which sound these are mapped to right off the bat. I'd suggest replacing these notes with an LN instead for the build up. Make it 2 LN to cover both buildup and drumroll
00:09:294 (9294|1,9375|4,9456|0) - A straight right -> left roll might be easier to read than going from left hand to right hand, then back to left hand in the span of only 1/2 beat. Maybe try something like this instead starting at 00:08:970 Image alrite. but doing it differently
00:12:213 (12213|3) - This is visual preference, but this shield looks very out of place since you haven't used a shield anywhere else in the music yet. Maybe move it to 2? move to 5 instead for hand balance
00:13:186 (13186|0) - Same reason as above, to me, I think it'd look nicer in 2.
00:34:916 (34916|3) - Why not just make this a roll? So move to 1 cause then it'd be easy to read since it would go from left -> right, rather than making a 1/2 ministack with 00:34:916 (34916|3,35078|3)
00:44:645 (44645|2) - This note was a bit confusing to me since I expected the first note to come at 00:44:808 with the drums, rather than the vocals. I'd consider removing the note in 3 then because players would expect the drums to come in first before vocals.
01:16:429 (76429|1,76591|2,76754|3) - Not sure if this suggestion is appropriate for a NM diff, but why not jack all these notes together in 3 since they're all the same pitch? nah, i dont think so. :>
01:31:510 (91510|1,91510|3) - Might consider ending one of these LNs at 01:35:078 since the guitar kind of dies out there, but it's fine either way.


5K HD00:03:781 - Why not finish the burst here and add a single note in 3 for the snare? It seems strange to only map the snares and ignore the tom which is on a more predictable 1/2 snap. uhhh the tom is kinda not noticeable at full playback so i dont think its kinda worth to map
00:05:727 (5727|4,5889|4) - If you're following pitch relevancy here for the trumpets, move these 2 notes to 4 since they're the same pitch as 00:05:402 (5402|3)
00:16:105 (16105|4) - Maybe turn this note into a 1/2 LN like at 00:16:429 (16429|4) since they're the same pitch. The LN you pointed is for hithat roll. its not the same
00:34:916 - For the minijumptrill here, try something like this in order to stick to the adjacent note doubles you have here, like this Image hmm i think i'll stick with current one. since the last double - 00:35:078 (35078|0,35078|4) - is more fit with the noise if its place at 1|5
00:39:943 (39943|1,40105|1) - The background piano isn't the same pitch with these two notes, nor is the vocal, so there's no actual reason to jack them, cause they stand out in this measure kind of badly imo. Maybe try moving 00:40:105 (40105|1) to 4.


5K MX00:16:308 (16308|0,16348|1,16389|4,16429|3,16470|1,16510|0,16551|3) - it looks cool what you did here, but it's pretty difficult to hit, at least for me. I think it's mainly because of this 00:16:470 (16470|1,16510|0,16551|3,16591|4) since that pattern tends to be the most difficult to hit. I'd really suggest just using something like a splitroll Image
01:09:456 (69456|0,69618|0) - This jack seems kind of random, maybe swap columns with 01:09:618 (69618|0,69781|1) instead?
Hope this helped, gl with rank!~


edit: wups didn't see sora there xD. gotta applied too

-SoraGami- wrote:
Hi Rivals!~

will just mod 4k since the mod above is not applied yet
oke let's start

Column = |1|2|3|4|


~~~ open me ~~~

4K MX 'Blanc'
- 00:05:078 (5078|3,5240|2) - switch columns, for more feels in the sounds betwwen 00:05:240 (5240|1,5240|2,5402|2,5402|3) while playing

- in this part 00:16:267 - i feel like the center is generating too much pressure because after playing the 1/8 there is a 00:16:672 (16672|1,16754|2,16835|1,16916|0,16956|1) ,how about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5966053 umm.. it doesnt change a lot but it got remove the pressure here 00:16:835 (16835|1,16916|0,16956|1) or rearrange did a lil bit rearrange on mine

- 00:52:429 (52429|0,52591|2,52754|1,52916|3) - make these the LN instead of 00:52:429 (52429|1,52591|3,52754|0,52916|2) make them singles, for pitch I guess thats already fit with the song pace so, no change :<

- 01:02:321 - add note? same sound with 01:01:672

- 00:56:483 - maybe you can add a note here for the drum sound? since you add here 01:06:862 i guess it is fine

- 01:07:510 - here too like my mod above ^ you can move 01:07:348 (67348|0) to 2 to maintain its balance

- 01:08:808 - add note too

- 01:11:727 (71727|2,71889|1) - mirror, more comfortable to play

- 01:31:510 - you can only make 3 LNs here so you can still add here 01:34:916 for the guitar slide

- 00:11:564 (11564|2) - i think the LN ends here 00:11:889 it is technically the same with 00:06:375 (6375|3)

- same with this 01:26:808 (86808|2)



4K HD 'Neptune'
- this part here 00:02:321 (2321|0,2321|1,2483|3,2483|0,2645|3,2645|2) kinda doesnt fit much in the song while playing, maybe try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5965832 or rearrange

- 00:06:213 - the flow here is too repetitive, i mean is that [34][2][34][2][34], you might want to reduce it even a little, how about switch columns in here 00:06:862 (6862|2,7024|0)

- 00:19:835 - the other streams have a complex flow while this one seems like only have a one direction flow going to the right, i think it is better to make something more flowy, how about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5965938

- 00:24:537 - add note for the strong sound

- 00:48:862 - maybe try to do some mirror of 00:46:267 and move to left these two doubles for pattern

- 00:51:294 (51294|2) - move to 4 for pitch, and also if this 00:51:294 (51294|1,51294|2,51618|2,51618|1) are in the same columns, its difference in pitch doesnt distance it that far, some kind of monotonous

- 01:07:672 (67672|0,67997|3) - would be better to mirror these, jack to represent the vocals like you always do in your pattern here in kiai those vocal is different imo

- 01:20:645 (80645|2,80808|3) - switch columns? to differ the flow betwwen 01:20:159 (80159|0,80159|1,80321|2) and 01:20:483 (80483|0,80483|1,80645|2) based on each sounds hmm nope. to avoid shielding

- 01:24:537 (84537|1) - you actually make this double on the intro

- 00:11:564 (11564|1) - same with my mod on the other diff should be 1/1 long

- 01:21:618 (81618|3) - ^

- 01:26:808 (86808|3) - ^


Nice map Rivals :D
Goodluck~


Thx for mod :D sora and protastic
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Hi rivals :3
From my queue!

but i actually cant give useful suggests on 4K..
I'll shoot one star instead.
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ah okey xD
thx for the star, apple :D
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hi rivals NM req from Lyo and Sya Mod queue
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4k MX
00:05:889 (5889|3,5889|2,6051|2,6051|1) - i suggest ctrl g cuz different sound
00:08:159 - add note cuz u use double here 00:08:483 -
00:10:916 (10916|1,10916|3,11078|3,11078|1) - same ^ maybe 00:11:078 (11078|1) - move to col 3
00:13:186 - add note for cymbal ?
00:42:537 (42537|0,42537|1,42700|0,42862|3,42862|2,42862|1,43024|0) - unbalance


4K HD
00:09:132 (9132|2) - move to 2
00:15:213 - add note
00:15:943 (15943|1,15943|2) - maybe remove a note cuz no loud sound
00:24:537 - why not use LN like 00:24:862 (24862|1) -
00:45:456 (45456|2,45618|3) - u use LN here but 00:25:024 - no LN ? maybe remove 00:45:456 (45456|2,45618|3) - or make 1 LN
01:07:672 - idk the loud sound here maybe add note
01:34:916 - different with mx


4K NM
00:01:673 (1673|0) - double plz
00:01:997 - ^
00:02:321 - ^
00:02:645 - ^
00:55:997 - missing note ?
00:56:970 - ^
01:06:375 - ^
01:07:672 - loud sound maybe double
01:25:024 - double

Nice Map Good Luck >w<
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hi rivals NM req from Lyo and Sya Mod queue
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4k MX
00:05:889 (5889|3,5889|2,6051|2,6051|1) - i suggest ctrl g cuz different sound Intended because - 00:05:727 (5727|2,5727|3,5889|2,5889|3) - are the same trumpet
00:08:159 - add note cuz u use double here 00:08:483 -
00:10:916 (10916|1,10916|3,11078|3,11078|1) - same ^ maybe 00:11:078 (11078|1) - move to col 3 similar ^
00:13:186 - add note for cymbal ?
00:42:537 (42537|0,42537|1,42700|0,42862|3,42862|2,42862|1,43024|0) - unbalance not.... really


4K HD
00:09:132 (9132|2) - move to 2 ehh nope, i guess
00:15:213 - add note
00:15:943 (15943|1,15943|2) - maybe remove a note cuz no loud sound Kick
00:24:537 - why not use LN like 00:24:862 (24862|1) - different noise
00:45:456 (45456|2,45618|3) - u use LN here but 00:25:024 - no LN ? maybe remove 00:45:456 (45456|2,45618|3) - or make 1 LN Different songs pace, different density
01:07:672 - idk the loud sound here maybe add note I'm not highlighting the trumpet tho :<
01:34:916 - different with mx ayy


4K NM
00:01:673 (1673|0) - double plz
00:01:997 - ^
00:02:321 - ^
00:02:645 - ^ ^^^^ I dont want to add any more density :c
00:55:997 - missing note ? Intended to focus on vocal on this part only
00:56:970 - ^ ^
01:06:375 - ^ ^
01:07:672 - loud sound maybe double Not highlighting trumpet (again) xD
01:25:024 - double Uhh nope, sorry :'

Nice Map Good Luck >w<


Thx for mod :D
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4K MX 'Blanc'


Good, nice-looking map, but the LNs seems inconsistent. Otherwise, it's good
Feel free to reject~

btw i like that streams owo)b
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not in-depth since i got too many homeworks ;w; sorry

4K MX 'Blanc'


Good, nice-looking map, but the LNs seems inconsistent. Otherwise, it's good
Feel free to reject~

btw i like that streams owo)b


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4K EZ





Uhhh, sorry for that short mod ;w;
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