1. 4K EZ 'Rom' - 4Key (1,28 stars, 302 notes)
2. 4K HD 'Neptune' - 4Key (3,29 stars, 864 notes)
3. 4K MX 'Blanc' - 4Key (4,16 stars, 1016 notes)
4. 4K NM 'Ram' - 4Key (2,02 stars, 559 notes)
5. 5K EZ 'Nepgear' - 5Key (1,27 stars, 302 notes)
6. 5K HD 'Noire' - 5Key (3,12 stars, 862 notes)
7. 5K MX 'Vert' - 5Key (4,05 stars, 1014 notes)
8. 5K NM 'Uni' - 5Key (1,96 stars, 559 notes)

Maxus | Protastic101

1. arcwinolivirus
2. Protastic101
3. -SoraGami-
4. Syadow-
5. Ortlinde-
6. Mage
7. Aste-
8. Kruzon
9. Another lie
10. Draftnell
11. Etsu
12. Gravey-
13. Stan-
14. SpectorDG
15. Minseo2000
16. Feerum
17. tuandi
18. Verniy_Chan
19. 1st Gcorp
20. Maxus

Column:
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4K - |1|2|3|4|

Column:
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5K - |1|2|3|4|5|

arcwinolivirus wrote:

"Arcwinolivirus' M4M-only contract"

A contract to be fulfilled as exchange of mod.

Song: Idol College - Be My Zombie (Rivals_7)
Number of difficulties modded in my map: 8 - 4K/7K Normal, Hard, Insane, Maximum Genestella

Note:
• First of all, I would want to apologize if I ever say something that will hurt your feelings as a mapper. Remember that I only want to give advices, suggestions, recommendations and sideas for some improvement in your map. Please do understand and thank you.

• do not be afraid to reject some parts of my mod. I am not perfect and I am not always right. But I do give my best to mod with sense. Also, I do not bite rawr.

• If I suggest to "remove or ctrl function moves" on certain note/s, dont forget and be sure to move the hitsound on the other note beside the suggested note.

[General]
Audio: OK!
BG: OK!
BPM: OK!
Offset: OK!
Preview Time: OK!

AiMod:
• No problem!

Column:
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4K - |1|2|3|4|

[4K EZ 'Rom']

SPOILER

00:13:997 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qNMXr/1d0f3c2ab3.jpg
• 1st LN gives more emphasis to the vocal, plus for that sound effect.
• 2nd LN for the 2nd phase of the sound effect plus fits along with the tom drum roll.
I think i will consider this. The vocal shouldnt be hard to catch imo. even for EZ

00:24:051 - add note? kick sound can be heard here similar to 00:18:862 (18862|3) -

00:51:618 - add note? strong clap-like sound like 00:53:240 (53240|1,53240|0) -

01:29:240 (89240|2,89402|0) - same on my 1st suggestion. well... same :>

[4K NM 'Ram']

SPOILER

00:13:997 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qNu3K/db3aafe15f.jpg
• first LN for vocal emphasis
• last LN for the sound effect heard in the background as well get along with the drum roll.
• In this way, the feeling will not be that awkward.
same as before. I dont think it'll be kinda awkward since the distance between those notes are constant

00:18:375 - add note for the kick

00:23:564 - ^ ^ These two are intended. for more easier approach towards denser notes above it

00:34:916 (34916|3,34997|0) - suggesting to remove as they are only kick sound and not snares. It is the same as 00:33:456 (33456|1,33781|3,33943|0) - where kicks are singles.

00:45:456 - add note, fits to be double since strong sound cymbals.

00:51:294 - add note to 4, strong sound as well similar to 00:52:105 (52105|3,52105|2) -

00:55:997 - the trumphet can be heard clearly and kinda feels empty without note on it. Add note to 1

01:06:375 - ^ to 4 ^ These two are also intended. This is kinda special case where i want to emphasize the vocal.

01:25:348 (85348|0) - move to 2, since not same snare sound as 01:25:024 (85024|0) - just like you did at 01:26:970 (86970|2) -

01:29:240 - same as my first suggestion in this difficulty. Vocal long sound and sound effect. same :u

01:30:862 (90862|2) - move to 4, seems fit for both middle fingers. Fair point tho. fix xD

[4K HD 'Neptune']

SPOILER

00:08:970 (8970|2) - should end at 00:09:294 - since the trumphet and vocal ended there. Check your MX since it has the extended one. Also same as you did at 01:24:213 (84213|0) -

01:31:510 (91510|1) - move to 4, seem better with both hands ending the song.

Really neat and fun difficulty~! Accept all. Thx!

[4K MX 'Blanc']

SPOILER

00:34:267 - add note for that sound similar to 00:34:754 (34754|0) - and it fits since it is along with the vocals.

00:34:429 - ^

00:34:591 - ^

01:09:456 - add note to 2 for trumphet emphasis like you did at 00:59:078 (59078|0,59078|2,59078|1) -

Awesome difficulty as well, good job! Hue thx :3

Column:
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5K - |1|2|3|4|5|

[5K EZ 'Nepgear']

SPOILER

00:13:997 (13997|0,14159|4) - same suggestion on 4K EZ's ^

00:16:591 (16591|3,16754|2) - swap column so it can be the counter part of 00:15:943 (15943|0,16105|2,16267|1) - and much neat.

00:24:051 - add note for the kick sound.

00:45:294 - add note for the kick sound as well along with that melodic sound which has consistent sound. Emm nope, i guess. not for EZ since i tend to highlight the vocal in this diff, mostly

01:29:240 (89240|1,89402|3) - same suggestion on 1st's ^

01:30:537 (90537|1,90862|2) - swap column, which will be fit on 01:29:889 (89889|0,90051|2) - and the last note will be pressed on both index hands.

01:31:510 (91510|1) - move to 4? seems better if pressed by both hands as well.

[5K NM 'Uni']

SPOILER

00:01:673 (1673|1) - move to 1 to be fit with 00:01:835 (1835|2,1997|4) -

00:03:132 - http://puu.sh/qNNIN/b8e09be753.jpg for alternative pattern for drum, much better to execute.

00:07:672 (7672|2) - move to 4 so it won't be repeated after 00:07:024 (7024|4,7186|2) - with different sounds.

00:13:997 (13997|0,14159|2) - Same suggestion as 4K/5K EZ's LN about this part. ^

00:17:159 (17159|1,17240|0) - move to 1 and 5 respetively, fits for triplets. Or you can even do a stair like you did at 00:22:267 (22267|4,22348|3,22429|2) - Do the stair instead. Thx :3

00:19:672 (19672|3) - move to 3, better pressed by thumb and to avoid the awkward feeling on right hand while holding the LN.

00:34:916 (34916|0,34916|4,34997|2,34997|1) - reduce to singles as they are only kick sounds alone similar to 00:32:808 (32808|1,33132|3,33456|2) -

00:45:456 - add note? since cymbals.

01:14:645 (74645|3) - move one column to right for variation. Also 01:14:645 - is not the same pitch as 01:15:456 - to be the same pattern. The 01:17:240 (77240|3,77240|1,77564|2,77564|0) - has 1 gap column with each other similar to this sound. O yea nice one!

01:29:240 (89240|0,89402|4) - same suggestions as EZ's ^

01:30:537 (90537|0,90862|2) - ctrl J, fits more plus end note is both hands.

[5K HD 'Noire']

SPOILER

00:02:808 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qNOgb/2eaf9af6c4.png as variation for the upcoming snares. Also the stack at column 3 fits since they are both kick sounds Fix + some different change

00:14:645 - the pattern is here kinda awkward, suggesting http://puu.sh/qNOqX/945d279c4f.png which is comfortable and similar to 4K's Could work. Applied exatcly as yours

00:20:483 (20483|1) - move to 4 for comfortability of left hand.

00:45:618 (45618|4) - remove, no kick sound here occured and LN alone is fine. 4K HD doesn't have a note here. ups xD

00:51:618 (51618|1) - move to 4 since it has similar impact as 00:51:132 (51132|3,51132|4) -

00:52:429 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qNOEV/f63e14226c.png which is neat in terms of vision and simple to execute

01:29:240 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qNOOQ/6d0a591b85.jpg which is clearer to execute and avoid complications.

[5K MX 'Vert']

SPOILER

00:01:673 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qNOUZ/192d32a46f.png which the goal is to have varation on 00:02:808 - and 00:02:970 - so it won't be similar to upcoming snare sounds.

00:13:997 (13997|0) - move to 3 to avoid 00:13:997 (13997|0,14159|0,14321|0) -

00:16:267 - The pattern here are quite compressed without using the 3rd column and its quite awkward. I recommend http://puu.sh/qNP50/e6e08147df.png for better sight and comfortable execution for that hihat-like sound. Do the same on other similar sounds like 00:18:862 -

00:34:267 - add note for that sound similar to 00:34:754 (34754|0) - and it fits since it is along with the vocals.

00:34:429 - ^

00:34:591 - ^

00:45:456 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qNPdh/03ecbc592d.png for proper LN and clearer sight for the 00:45:781 -

00:51:943 (51943|0,52105|3) - ctrl J fits more imo.

00:59:727 (59727|1) - remove, no trumphet-like sound occured here and the same snare sound as 01:00:375 (60375|1,60375|0) - which is only double

01:09:456 - add note here to make triple for trumphet.

01:10:105 (70105|4) - remove, no donald trumph. dios mio that was close xD. Thx

01:11:402 (71402|0) - ^

01:13:510 - suggesting http://puu.sh/qNPjZ/8da4084c5b.png for better execution for the upcoming drum roll.

01:18:700 - add note to 3 since cymbals? its kinda faint here, so i guess no change on this

[Overall]
Hyppeeee-rdimensional map, even zombie will awake from their sleep haha~
Thank you so much for the contract, Good luck and until next time~
Please vote here as feedback for my M4M modding performance: t/372334

~ END OF CONTRACT ~

Protastic101 wrote:

Oh, sweet, 5K

Column 1->5

weee

[General]

1. I feel like the OD of the EZ diffs could be increased just a little bit due to the lower amount of LNs in each. Maybe ~6.8 to ~7?

[5K EZ]00:03:456 (3456|2,3700|3) - I think it'd be easier to end this LN and note at 00:03:781 since it's on the red tick and would be easier for the player to predict the end. But I cant ignore the fact that the drum roll is ended at that point. The red line is just an echo
00:19:835 - I'd consider either adding another note here for the crash and trumpet, or turning 00:19:835 (19835|2) into an LN and ending at 00:20:159 for the trumpet. add note then
00:33:781 (33781|3,33943|0) - This is more personal preference, but I think this pause would have a bit more finality to it if you flipped the first and second note (control H) so it'd feel like doing a large jump since you'd go from left to right really suddenly. I think that's also works if its vice versa-ed like from right to left like the current one. also, its already hand balanced
00:44:970 (44970|4) - It'd make more sense to move this note up to 00:45:294 for the kick rather than the vocal since the drums is what most players are going to be focusing on. nope. i dont want my diff to be quite bland, even tho its EZ. so sometimes special condition like this are present
00:59:078 (59078|3) - Consider making this note a 1/1 LN for the trumpet? Or you could make it a double since it stands out. Emm... i'll consider this
01:29:402 (89402|3) - The build up sound I assume this LN is for begins at 01:28:916 . Or, if you're following the vocal, similar to the beginning, you should extend it to start at 01:29:240 eh actually its a drum roll. if you compare with the other diff, its start there
01:31:510 (91510|0) - Since this is the last last note of the song, I think it'd fit better to be in column 3 because it'd be symmetric then. well, this is EZ. i dont want people who are still new in this keymode handle more than 2 notes at once :/
01:31:510 (91510|3) - if the above suggestion is denied, then I'd consider moving this to 5 so that it would feel like this final chord is encompassing all the notes in this song. The pitch relevancy is fine as is though, so whatever works better for you. ^

[5K NM]00:03:943 (3943|0,4024|1,4105|2,4186|3,4267|4) - I feel like you've used way too much 1/4 in this measure for this to be a NM difficulty. It's justified for the snare, but these toms blend in with the build up whoosh sound starting at 00:03:943 so it would be difficult for a beginner to pick up which sound these are mapped to right off the bat. I'd suggest replacing these notes with an LN instead for the build up. Make it 2 LN to cover both buildup and drumroll
00:09:294 (9294|1,9375|4,9456|0) - A straight right -> left roll might be easier to read than going from left hand to right hand, then back to left hand in the span of only 1/2 beat. Maybe try something like this instead starting at 00:08:970 alrite. but doing it differently
00:12:213 (12213|3) - This is visual preference, but this shield looks very out of place since you haven't used a shield anywhere else in the music yet. Maybe move it to 2? move to 5 instead for hand balance
00:13:186 (13186|0) - Same reason as above, to me, I think it'd look nicer in 2.
00:34:916 (34916|3) - Why not just make this a roll? So move to 1 cause then it'd be easy to read since it would go from left -> right, rather than making a 1/2 ministack with 00:34:916 (34916|3,35078|3)
00:44:645 (44645|2) - This note was a bit confusing to me since I expected the first note to come at 00:44:808 with the drums, rather than the vocals. I'd consider removing the note in 3 then because players would expect the drums to come in first before vocals.
01:16:429 (76429|1,76591|2,76754|3) - Not sure if this suggestion is appropriate for a NM diff, but why not jack all these notes together in 3 since they're all the same pitch? nah, i dont think so. :>
01:31:510 (91510|1,91510|3) - Might consider ending one of these LNs at 01:35:078 since the guitar kind of dies out there, but it's fine either way.

[5K HD]00:03:781 - Why not finish the burst here and add a single note in 3 for the snare? It seems strange to only map the snares and ignore the tom which is on a more predictable 1/2 snap. uhhh the tom is kinda not noticeable at full playback so i dont think its kinda worth to map
00:05:727 (5727|4,5889|4) - If you're following pitch relevancy here for the trumpets, move these 2 notes to 4 since they're the same pitch as 00:05:402 (5402|3)
00:16:105 (16105|4) - Maybe turn this note into a 1/2 LN like at 00:16:429 (16429|4) since they're the same pitch. The LN you pointed is for hithat roll. its not the same
00:34:916 - For the minijumptrill here, try something like this in order to stick to the adjacent note doubles you have here, like this hmm i think i'll stick with current one. since the last double - 00:35:078 (35078|0,35078|4) - is more fit with the noise if its place at 1|5
00:39:943 (39943|1,40105|1) - The background piano isn't the same pitch with these two notes, nor is the vocal, so there's no actual reason to jack them, cause they stand out in this measure kind of badly imo. Maybe try moving 00:40:105 (40105|1) to 4.

[5K MX]00:16:308 (16308|0,16348|1,16389|4,16429|3,16470|1,16510|0,16551|3) - it looks cool what you did here, but it's pretty difficult to hit, at least for me. I think it's mainly because of this 00:16:470 (16470|1,16510|0,16551|3,16591|4) since that pattern tends to be the most difficult to hit. I'd really suggest just using something like a splitroll
01:09:456 (69456|0,69618|0) - This jack seems kind of random, maybe swap columns with 01:09:618 (69618|0,69781|1) instead?

Hope this helped, gl with rank!~

-SoraGami- wrote:

Hi Rivals!~

will just mod 4k since the mod above is not applied yet
oke let's start

Column = |1|2|3|4|

~~~ open me ~~~

[4K MX 'Blanc']

- 00:05:078 (5078|3,5240|2) - switch columns, for more feels in the sounds betwwen 00:05:240 (5240|1,5240|2,5402|2,5402|3) while playing

- in this part 00:16:267 - i feel like the center is generating too much pressure because after playing the 1/8 there is a 00:16:672 (16672|1,16754|2,16835|1,16916|0,16956|1) ,how about this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5966053 umm.. it doesnt change a lot but it got remove the pressure here 00:16:835 (16835|1,16916|0,16956|1) or rearrange did a lil bit rearrange on mine

- 00:52:429 (52429|0,52591|2,52754|1,52916|3) - make these the LN instead of 00:52:429 (52429|1,52591|3,52754|0,52916|2) make them singles, for pitch I guess thats already fit with the song pace so, no change :<

- 01:02:321 - add note? same sound with 01:01:672

- 00:56:483 - maybe you can add a note here for the drum sound? since you add here 01:06:862 i guess it is fine

- 01:07:510 - here too like my mod above ^ you can move 01:07:348 (67348|0) to 2 to maintain its balance

- 01:08:808 - add note too

- 01:11:727 (71727|2,71889|1) - mirror, more comfortable to play

- 01:31:510 - you can only make 3 LNs here so you can still add here 01:34:916 for the guitar slide

- 00:11:564 (11564|2) - i think the LN ends here 00:11:889 it is technically the same with 00:06:375 (6375|3)

- same with this 01:26:808 (86808|2)

[4K HD 'Neptune']

- this part here 00:02:321 (2321|0,2321|1,2483|3,2483|0,2645|3,2645|2) kinda doesnt fit much in the song while playing, maybe try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5965832 or rearrange

- 00:06:213 - the flow here is too repetitive, i mean is that [34][2][34][2][34], you might want to reduce it even a little, how about switch columns in here 00:06:862 (6862|2,7024|0)

- 00:19:835 - the other streams have a complex flow while this one seems like only have a one direction flow going to the right, i think it is better to make something more flowy, how about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/5965938

- 00:24:537 - add note for the strong sound

- 00:48:862 - maybe try to do some mirror of 00:46:267 and move to left these two doubles for pattern

- 00:51:294 (51294|2) - move to 4 for pitch, and also if this 00:51:294 (51294|1,51294|2,51618|2,51618|1) are in the same columns, its difference in pitch doesnt distance it that far, some kind of monotonous

- 01:07:672 (67672|0,67997|3) - would be better to mirror these, jack to represent the vocals like you always do in your pattern here in kiai those vocal is different imo

- 01:20:645 (80645|2,80808|3) - switch columns? to differ the flow betwwen 01:20:159 (80159|0,80159|1,80321|2) and 01:20:483 (80483|0,80483|1,80645|2) based on each sounds hmm nope. to avoid shielding

- 01:24:537 (84537|1) - you actually make this double on the intro

- 00:11:564 (11564|1) - same with my mod on the other diff should be 1/1 long

- 01:21:618 (81618|3) - ^

- 01:26:808 (86808|3) - ^

Nice map Rivals
Goodluck~

Syadow- wrote:

hi rivals NM req from Lyo and Sya Mod queue
Feel Free to Reject

[4k MX]

00:05:889 (5889|3,5889|2,6051|2,6051|1) - i suggest ctrl g cuz different sound Intended because - 00:05:727 (5727|2,5727|3,5889|2,5889|3) - are the same trumpet
00:08:159 - add note cuz u use double here 00:08:483 -
00:10:916 (10916|1,10916|3,11078|3,11078|1) - same ^ maybe 00:11:078 (11078|1) - move to col 3 similar ^
00:13:186 - add note for cymbal ?
00:42:537 (42537|0,42537|1,42700|0,42862|3,42862|2,42862|1,43024|0) - unbalance not.... really

[4K HD]

00:09:132 (9132|2) - move to 2 ehh nope, i guess
00:15:213 - add note
00:15:943 (15943|1,15943|2) - maybe remove a note cuz no loud sound Kick
00:24:537 - why not use LN like 00:24:862 (24862|1) - different noise
00:45:456 (45456|2,45618|3) - u use LN here but 00:25:024 - no LN ? maybe remove 00:45:456 (45456|2,45618|3) - or make 1 LN Different songs pace, different density
01:07:672 - idk the loud sound here maybe add note I'm not highlighting the trumpet tho :<
01:34:916 - different with mx ayy

[4K NM]

00:01:673 (1673|0) - double plz
00:01:997 - ^
00:02:321 - ^
00:02:645 - ^ ^^^^ I dont want to add any more density :c
00:55:997 - missing note ? Intended to focus on vocal on this part only
00:56:970 - ^ ^
01:06:375 - ^ ^
01:07:672 - loud sound maybe double Not highlighting trumpet (again) xD
01:25:024 - double Uhh nope, sorry :'

Nice Map Good Luck >w<

Ortlinde wrote:

not in-depth since i got too many homeworks ;w; sorry

4K MX 'Blanc'

1. 00:14:645 - Add/change 1 note to LN as an emphasis maybe? ehh no I guess. already fit this way tho
2. 00:19:835 - ^ ^
3. 00:35:402 - maybe you can re-arrange it like the other part (the jacks) rearranged
4. 00:52:105 - Another LN? The rhythm feeling became unintuitive soo..... nope :<
5. 01:26:159 (86159|2,86483|3) - the synth is loud enough it's worth 2-noter (maybe)
6. 01:34:997 (94997|2) - LN starts at 01:34:956 - (1/8 snap)

Good, nice-looking map, but the LNs seems inconsistent. Otherwise, it's good
Feel free to reject~

btw i like that streams owo)b

Mage wrote:

4K EZ

00:53:240 - LN

00:53:564 - double

Uhh nope to both :<. it was intendedly to keep the rhythm easily noticed for beginner

4K NM

00:45:618 (45618|1) - remove Foreground melody

5K EZ

00:44:970 (44970|4) - remove

00:45:294 - add

ehh nope again sorry :< But i noticed there's something missing here lel

5K HD

01:20:645 - LN?

01:26:159 - 01:26:483 - ^ ok to both

4K MX

00:04:267 - triple No crash noise

00:45:781 - 00:47:078 - 00:48:375 - 00:49:672 - doubles They are paired with LNs so thats count as doubles / 2 note press. So its basically already doubled

01:14:159 - double Intended since the song pace is kind of lowering

01:14:240 - single same loudness as the other double

Uhhh, sorry for that short mod ;w; No problemo

Aste- wrote:

Mod Here

-general

no serious problem found

-MOD

1/2/3/4/5

[Nepugia - Chan]

no serious problem found

[Romu - chan]

No serious Problem found

[Ramu - chan]

Pretty Balanced, but please re-consider with the Kiai part. that improvement with Drum - Vocal - Kick&Snare only, it fit and Nice, but it might be confusing yea was intended to not be so dense on the kiai since this is NM. i'll try to ask some newbie testplayers then

[Uni - Chan]

this one's pretty well made.. i don't find anything serious here

[Noire - San]

00:01:997 (1997|2,2321|2,2645|2) - for left thumb player. this one's pretty easy to execute but might be a rage point for Right Thumb player, how about move those to 4 and then 00:02:159 (2159|3,2483|3,2808|3) - to 2? But i'm right thumb player and still think this is easy-to-execute-pattern :^) . Moved tho

01:06:537 (66537|2,66700|2) - move this to 4. it's a bit un-fair for left thumb since it's a bit too hard to execute I found this one quite subjective. Pretty sure the majority of osumania people are right-handed, so both pattern could works well

[Vert - Onee sama]

00:30:862 - not missing 1 note for Kick sound? oops

00:56:159 (56159|2,56159|1,56321|4,56483|3,56483|0,56645|2,56808|1,56808|3,56970|0) - this part's note amount for drum aren't consistence with the earlier part nor later part. intended?

if no better give it more note here 00:56:483 - on 2 Added

00:59:727 - not adding 1 more? snare here (based on your note amount for Snare) There's already an LN there, dont want to be too dense here ( if you referencing the 3 noter - 00:59:078 (59078|2,59078|0,59078|3) - then its for higlighting both snare and trumpet. not just snare

01:00:375 - this too ^

01:03:456 - I hear Drum Roll... use stream or LN on 4 to map this. or is it intended? better not. since you map the drum roll here 00:03:943 (3943|4,4024|3,4105|2,4186|1,4267|4,4267|0) - and here 01:13:835 (73835|1,73835|0,73916|4,73916|3,73997|1,73997|0,74078|2,74159|3,74240|0,74240|4) - The drumroll only last for 3 lines. The rest of it seems going to be like a ghost. unlike the other you've highlighted which is the drumm can be hearded obviously. Also, highlighting the foreground trumpet sometimes sounds more cool than covering the drumroll all the time

[Blanc - san]

00:16:551 (16551|1,16591|2) - Swap this note... i know it's easy to handle for you but it's a bit hard to read and execute rearranged differently

00:55:348 (55348|3) - Move this to 2. the current place a bit un-fit with the music and un-fit with the current flow of this part
Already put too much this kind of SN on 2 :v - 00:53:727 (53727|1,54051|1,54375|1) - I'll consider next time
[Nepuuuuuuuuu~]

00:59:240 (59240|1) - i dont see any 1/2 on the earlier part and later part. mind if you move it to 1? Moved

Done

Damn.. i guess i'm starting to get old now, my skill got rusted lol

Another Lie wrote:

Mungkin ini lebih ke "saran" daripada "kritik"

4K HD

00:04:267 (4267|0,4429|1) - knp ga dibuat LN? lebih enak deh kyknya soalnya hi hat lain itu LN ehh gk deh. sengaja mau lebih fokus ke trompetnya (yg nadanya lebih pjg itu) *
00:06:375 (6375|3) - diperpendek ke red line Trompetnya sampe garis putih kok =3= **
00:07:997 (7997|3,8321|0,8645|3) - LN? emang udh LN kan o.o ***
00:08:970 (8970|2) - LN sampai red line ^ *
00:09:456 (9456|0,9618|1) - LN? ^ *
00:10:591 (10591|1,10916|0,11240|1) - LN? ^ *
00:11:564 (11564|2) - diperpendek ke red line ^ **
00:12:051 (12051|3,12213|1) - LN? ^ ***
00:13:186 (13186|2,13510|0,13835|1) - mungkin jadiin LN lebih enak ^ ***
00:13:672 (13672|2,13997|3) - mereka tambahin LN biar balance sama vocal nya ^ ***
00:55:997 - missing note?
00:56:970 - ^
01:06:375 - ^
01:07:348 - ^
01:08:970 - ^
01:31:510 (91510|2) - dipindah ke kolom 1 (balancing)

Mungkin karena efek mau tengah malam jadinya gagal paham. Kalo besok nemu sesuatu, pasti post mod lagi kok.
Good luck

Another Lie wrote:

Re-mod

Blanc

00:14:402 (14402|3) - ini drum-hitnormal 50%? knp ga dijadiin sama? lah terus apa bedanya sama ini 00:14:321 (14321|0,14321|1,14483|1,14483|0) -
01:16:916 (76916|2) - coba imbangin ini hitsound, kok 50% sendiri? Saran yak: buat triple note itu 25%, satunya LN hitsound drum-hitnormal 25% Gak kalo ini emang sengaja sih. toh disemua triple juga begini. Kalo drum hitnormalnya cuma 25% nanti kalah sama hitclap yg 25% x 2
01:30:375 (90375|3,90375|2,90862|1,90862|2) - drum-hitnormal 25% x 2? apa bedanya sama drum-hitnormal 50%? 01:30:537 (90537|1) - Kan biar imbang volume HS nya :> (25 x 2) + (50 x 1) = 100%

Vert

mau tanya dong, ini kok 01:30:375 (90375|3,90375|2,90862|1,90862|2) - 17% drum-hitclap? kalo bentuk desimal ga bisa ya? misalnya 16.7%? Gk bisa kayaknya. walaupun udh ke 16,7 nanti dibuletin lagi ke 17. sama aja
01:18:051 (78051|3) - coba hitsound ini dipindah ke space, terus ini 01:18:051 (78051|2) - hitsound pindah di note ke 4? well its actually doesnt change anything :/ sama aja mau dimanapun posisi hitsoundnya mah
01:19:186 (79186|2) - coba hitsound ini dibagi jadi 2, tambah note 1 buat hitsound 25% nya gk nyaman kalo quad notes tho
01:29:564 (89564|2,89645|3,89727|4) - gimana kalo ini dipindah kolom? 5 , 4 , 3 oh bisa deh xD
01:31:510 (91510|3,91510|0,91510|4) - ini kan awalnya 3, masa end nya 2? 01:34:956 (94956|2) - ini panjangin sampai white line lagi sebenernya gk ada masalah sih, tinggal masalah releasenya aja bisa atau gak xD

kalo rejected lagi... mungkin harus lebih keras lagi moddingnya

Kruzon wrote:

hiii

1 - 4 lets go

4k normal

00:04:024 (4024|1) - delete, is not part of the drum spam I think...... it is
00:19:510 (19510|0) - not a legit ln definitely, delete
uh.. just follow this http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6164179

00:45:618 (45618|1) - delete Foreground melody
00:45:781 (45781|3,45781|2) - ctrl + h SInce I didnt change above, so nope for this too :<
00:58:267 (58267|2) - delete for consistency with this part 00:56:808 (56808|2,57132|3) -

01:03:943 (63943|1,63943|0,64105|2,64267|3,64267|0,64429|1,64591|2,64754|3,64916|0,64916|1,65078|2,65240|1,65402|2,65564|0,65564|3,65727|1,65889|2,66051|3,66213|2,66213|1) - this machine gun so long lol, this climax is kind of over-mapped imo. so delete these notes for crucial break 01:05:078 (65078|2) - 01:05:727 (65727|1) - Actually it was intended. Once focus on drum, once focus to vocal. It may look hard but its actually easier. I'm also dont want to go full 1/4 at this since it'll break the N icon i was meant for this diff

01:07:997 (67997|2,68159|3,68159|0,68321|1,68483|2,68645|3) - same cases as above, but this time you'll have to add 1 note to 01:08:483 (68483|2) - and delete 01:08:645 (68645|3) - The same thing goes here

01:17:240 (77240|1,77240|2,77564|0,77564|1) - rearrange for consistency, refer 01:14:321 (74321|0,74321|1,74645|2,74645|3,74970|0,74970|1) - might as well mirror them with ctrl + h ah.... think i'll not change this. out of consistencey are purely intended to avoid boring pattern. or something xD

that's it, good luck with your map c:

1. All is fine.

1. 00:01:673 to 00:02:970 - imo make notes 1/1 is similar in normal (It is somewhat difficult for this diff and is better for NM)
2. 00:09:294 - reemplace this LN in a note? feel better in note imo
3. 00:15:294 (15294|2) - delete?
4. 00:16:267 (16267|1,16591|0) - ^ It is to follow this sound 1/2 00:16:105 (16105|2,16429|3,16754|2) - is better to this diff
5. 00:18:862 (18862|3,19186|2,19510|3) - ^?
6. 00:19:835 (19835|0) - make LN to trumpet?
7. 00:35:727 - add a note for double?
8. 00:36:375 - ^
9. 00:37:024 - ^ ... and similar parts is better for the strong rhythm imo
10. 00:44:645 (44645|1) - delete? considering with normal
11. 01:16:754 (76754|0,76916|1) - control + g?
12. 01:24:213 - add a note? maybe to follow the voice (is empty imo)

1. 00:04:024 (4024|1) - delete and 00:03:943 (3943|0) - move column 1? It is too much for this diff... also is similar in diff hd
2. 00:34:916 (34916|2,34997|1) - control + ←?
3. 01:02:159 - add a note for the voice?
4. 01:04:105 (64105|2) - delete?
5. 01:28:916 (88916|2,89078|1) - control + h? it was something easy and is better for this diff imo
6. 01:31:510 - add note for the strong cymbal? in the original song I hear a loud sound

1. 00:06:862 (6862|3,6862|1,7024|2,7186|1,7186|3,7348|2,7510|1,7510|3) - I think you should consider this structure are similar (no sound similar) imo
2. 00:13:510 - missing note?
3. 01:03:456 - feel that should add note 1/4 for the drums here imo
4. 01:07:672 - add LN for the trumpet?
5. 01:07:997 (67997|3) - ^
6. 01:08:159 - ^
7. 01:31:510 - add note?

1. 00:24:537 - add note to double for drums?
2. 00:25:024 - to 00:33:943 - it is better to make notes for piano... LN these should be in 00:35:402 - to 00:44:321 - combined with the effects imo
3. 00:44:970 - missing note?
4. 00:53:889 - make LN for the trumpet?
5. 00:59:078 - ^
6. 01:03:456 - add note 1/4 for the drums?
7. 01:31:510 - add note?

Etsu wrote:

Hello!

Mania 4k mod4mod (check here.)

Columns: 0|1|2|3

[General]

1. All is fine.

[4K EZ 'Rom']

1. 00:01:673 to 00:02:970 - imo make notes 1/1 is similar in normal (It is somewhat difficult for this diff and is better for NM)
2. 00:09:294 - reemplace this LN in a note? feel better in note imo uhh no its for drumroll
3. 00:15:294 (15294|2) - delete? Nope. for impact
4. 00:16:267 (16267|1,16591|0) - ^ It is to follow this sound 1/2 00:16:105 (16105|2,16429|3,16754|2) - is better to this diff
5. 00:18:862 (18862|3,19186|2,19510|3) - ^?
6. 00:19:835 (19835|0) - make LN to trumpet? nah i dont think so
7. 00:35:727 - add a note for double? I only use doubles when the song are changing phase
8. 00:36:375 - ^
9. 00:37:024 - ^ ... and similar parts is better for the strong rhythm imo ^ well, that would be too much for EZ :/
10. 00:44:645 (44645|1) - delete? considering with normal intended to highlight vocal
11. 01:16:754 (76754|0,76916|1) - control + g? Nope, this way the handling is better
12. 01:24:213 - add a note? maybe to follow the voice (is empty imo) emm nope for this i guess

[4K NM 'Ram']

1. 00:04:024 (4024|1) - delete and 00:03:943 (3943|0) - move column 1? It is too much for this diff... also is similar in diff hd seems fine on my end tho, i might ask for a testplayers later
2. 00:34:916 (34916|2,34997|1) - control + ←? nah, this can represent the drum better (Wew what is this shortcut key? xD)
3. 01:02:159 - add a note for the voice? i dont think so, for better handling
4. 01:04:105 (64105|2) - delete? Uhh no to keep flow
5. 01:28:916 (88916|2,89078|1) - control + h? it was something easy and is better for this diff imo that would work but i'd like to follow the pitch
6. 01:31:510 - add note for the strong cymbal? in the original song I hear a loud sound 2 LNs are enough imo

[4K HD 'Neptune']

1. 00:06:862 (6862|3,6862|1,7024|2,7186|1,7186|3,7348|2,7510|1,7510|3) - I think you should consider this structure are similar (no sound similar) imo It was out of purpose but i think rearrange this will only bring into a nonsense jack
2. 00:13:510 - missing note? Trumpet only
3. 01:03:456 - feel that should add note 1/4 for the drums here imo want to highlight th main lead sound
4. 01:07:672 - add LN for the trumpet? Want to minimalize the trumpet since its already full for drum and snare
5. 01:07:997 (67997|3) - ^ ^
6. 01:08:159 - ^ ^
7. 01:31:510 - add note?

[4K MX 'Blanc']

1. 00:24:537 - add note to double for drums? i would like to but it sounds unbalanced after i add it
2. 00:25:024 - to 00:33:943 - it is better to make notes for piano... LN these should be in 00:35:402 - to 00:44:321 - combined with the effects imo this - 00:25:024 - to 00:33:943 - the piano are more obvious. this is why i mapped it LN
3. 00:44:970 - missing note? I'm not highlighting vocal here
4. 00:53:889 - make LN for the trumpet? No change on this. too dense
5. 00:59:078 - ^ ^
6. 01:03:456 - add note 1/4 for the drums? too dense
7. 01:31:510 - add note?

Good map and sorry if not help much... Good luck!

Rivals_7 wrote:

Etsu wrote:

Hello!

Mania 4k mod4mod (check here.)

Columns: 0|1|2|3

[4K NM 'Ram']

• 
  4. 00:34:916 (34916|2,34997|1) - control + ←? nah, this can represent the drum better (Wew what is this shortcut key? xD) /*they are directional keys better shortcut xD

Good map and sorry if not help much... Good luck!

thx for mod
No reply = fix

Gravey- wrote:

☑ Background
☑ Timing
☑ Song Setup
☑ Metadata
☑ Misc. . .
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[4K EZ 'Rom']

Nothing to suggest nor fix on this diff~

[4K NM 'Ram']
01:31:510 (91510|3,91510|2) - I would suggest one of these LNs should end here as what i conceive is that these LNs follows the Guitar and Piano pitch in which the Piano pitch is a bit longer rather than the guitar pitch on it's end. And so i suggest one of these LNs end at 01:36:537 as the piano pitch ended here.

Nothing more to suggest nor fix on this diff~

[4K HD 'Neptune']
00:05:240 (5240|2,5402|0,5564|2,5564|3,5727|0) - On this part i suggest this for consistency and better note placements as it will give a bit of impact and better transition. http://puu.sh/sc1Fi.jpg. (When applied) Notice these 00:05:240 (5240|0,5240|1,5564|1,5564|0) - then while playing along then these 00:06:213 (6213|2,6213|3,6537|2,6537|3) - Just next to it on the next LN you will see the transition. I see but i would like to keep. There's an intended stacked notes to follow the trumpet at - 00:05:727 (5727|0,5889|0) - so it'll be consistent with the other that are similar

Nothing more to suggest nor fix on this diff~

[4K MX 'Blanc']
01:31:510 (91510|0) - Same suggestion from 4K NM 'Ram'. Suggesting to end one LN to 01:36:537 because of piano pitch.

Nice map! Good luck! >w<)b
Lmao GRAVEYarded pls do update/revive then call me back for the bonus~ Ow<)/

_Stan wrote:

Hey~ rivals m4m

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4K EZ 'Rom'

1. 00:19:835 - I think add a note here will better

4K NM 'Ram'

1. 00:34:916 (34916|2,34997|1) - I think move these two to col [2] [1], will better, meanwhile avoid double-hit here Figure out something better myself xD

4K HD 'Neptune'

1. 00:33:943 - I think not necessary double here cuz drum here is same with 00:33:781 -well I treated them the same way so yea xD not gonna change this one i guess

so great map I can't find anything wrong !!
Great!!

here's my map

11:18 SpectorDG: hey
11:20 Rivals_7: oh hi
11:20 SpectorDG: can we do irc n ow?
11:20 *SpectorDG is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1062484 Idol College - Be My * Zombie]
11:21 Rivals_7: uh i think i could. (if there's no teacher coming in next an hour lol. I'm on school currently)
11:22 SpectorDG: hh school
11:22 SpectorDG: notice me
11:22 *Rivals_7 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1062484 Idol College - Be My * Zombie [4K MX 'Blanc']]
11:22 Rivals_7: so which diff first?
11:22 SpectorDG: which diff you want first?
11:22 SpectorDG: i mean which diff is have a problem?
11:23 Rivals_7: well. could you modding 5K? it still have less mods
11:23 Rivals_7: if so 5K mx then :>
11:24 SpectorDG: sure
11:25 SpectorDG: seems all patterns same as 4k
11:25 SpectorDG: 00:03:943 - you mapped ? 5-1 why
11:25 SpectorDG: 4k mx mapper 12 43
11:25 SpectorDG: but you mapped 5-4-3-2-1
11:26 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/sjL1Y/cabdcda57a.jpg
11:26 SpectorDG: better than this
11:28 SpectorDG: are you here?
11:28 Rivals_7: emm okey lel at first i tought the pitch is all the way down. so i thought making a roll stair 5-1 could work too. fixed a lil bit different
11:29 Rivals_7: took time to write those :v
11:29 SpectorDG: 00:13:510 (13510|0,13672|4,13835|1,13997|4) - bit smilliar vocals here
11:29 SpectorDG: but you again mapped 1 5 2 5
11:29 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/sjLeA/f7df15e71d.jpg
11:30 SpectorDG: 4k and 5k players can't same  feel that
11:30 SpectorDG: if you won't big rearrange that patterns, just swap this 00:13:997 (13997|4,13997|3) - 
11:32 Rivals_7: ok i think the vocal pitch are going high-low-high-low so i though of making the ln at 5-1-4-2
11:32 Rivals_7: wait puush not respond aaaaaaaaa
11:32 SpectorDG: nah it's okay
11:32 SpectorDG: 00:14:402 - only 1 note? are you sure?
11:34 Rivals_7: that's for transition. making it a full 12-45 jumpthrill is not really fit in 5K
11:34 Rivals_7: exception on 4k tho
11:34 SpectorDG: i see but if you there are no slot
11:34 SpectorDG: you can rearrangea after 12 45 patterns
11:35 SpectorDG: like a [http://puu.sh/sjLwW/007dca3fc6.jpg this]
11:35 SpectorDG: for the balance
11:35 SpectorDG: not for rankable
11:37 Rivals_7: i think [puu.sh/sjLDv/4c5b486a35.jpg this] could work too
11:37 Rivals_7: ups
11:38 Rivals_7: puu.sh/sjLDv/4c5b486a35.jpg
11:38 Rivals_7: wat the
11:38 Rivals_7: http://puu.sh/sjLDv/4c5b486a35.jpg
11:38 SpectorDG: hmm 
11:38 SpectorDG: seems good
11:38 Rivals_7: better play on my side at least
11:38 SpectorDG: 00:16:105 (16105|3,16105|4,16186|0,16267|3,16267|4) - really awkard . . seems too ugly 1/8's before
11:39 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/sjLIk/5ef7aaf3a5.jpg you think it's really kawaii?
11:40 Rivals_7: o yea i think those jacks in col 1 and 5 is really tricky xD
11:41 SpectorDG: ya  where is the yellow notes ;^)
11:41 Rivals_7: lel
11:41 Rivals_7: well. any suggestion then?
11:41 SpectorDG: lemme rearrange first
11:41 SpectorDG: just im noticed that hhh
11:42 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/sjLV4/99f0cca732.jpg
11:43 SpectorDG: 00:19:186 (19186|0,19348|0,19510|0,19672|0,19835|0) - never ending 1/2 ass
11:43 SpectorDG: i mean jacks :3
11:44 Rivals_7: lol
11:44 Rivals_7: lemme testplay first
11:44 SpectorDG: 00:19:186 (19186|0,19348|0,19348|1,19510|0,19551|1,19672|0,19672|1,19835|0,19835|1) - seems all patterns focusing left hand
11:46 Rivals_7: oh rite just noticed that
11:46 SpectorDG: and 
11:46 SpectorDG: 00:21:943 - and where is the yellow ? http://puu.sh/sjM5q/e563def48a.jpg [http://puu.sh/sjM7c/02df524d54.jpg suggestion here]
11:49 Rivals_7: http://puu.sh/sjMfm/58fd84dae8.jpg i think this one could works too
11:49 SpectorDG: seems better
11:50 SpectorDG: it's MX diffs but 00:17:889 - they strong sound + some vocals and there are only 2 noted . . same as 00:20:483 - 00:23:078 -
11:50 SpectorDG: 00:24:375 - but you mapped here 3 
11:51 SpectorDG: 00:52:754 (52754|0,52754|1) - swap this
11:51 SpectorDG: really awkard too read and catch with yellow
11:51 Rivals_7: it was two notes because there's a stream. so the people could at least not really stumbled
11:52 SpectorDG: ok 
11:52 Rivals_7: ow okey for that
11:53 SpectorDG: 00:56:808 (56808|3) - really needs this LN?
11:54 Rivals_7: well its vocals. like the other 4 Ln there
11:54 Rivals_7: vocal "chi"
11:54 Rivals_7: oh needs to be extended
11:54 SpectorDG: i hear the vocals end for blue line
11:55 SpectorDG: Chi" i
11:55 SpectorDG: but you can mapped 1/2 is ok
11:56 Rivals_7: feels really awkward if its end there xD ok then :>
11:56 SpectorDG: 01:07:997 (67997|2) - just change this LN for simple note
11:56 SpectorDG: so why i said "you really need that LN"
11:56 SpectorDG: ohh im lie
11:56 SpectorDG: i said "really needs this LN?"
11:57 SpectorDG: 01:07:997 (67997|2) - what rhythm it's following?
11:57 SpectorDG: no vocals
11:57 SpectorDG: no ups noise
11:57 SpectorDG: really empty but you mapped LN
11:58 Rivals_7: i thought its properly follow "unmei" vocal. seems i was wrong xD
11:58 Rivals_7: changed tho
11:59 SpectorDG: 01:12:862 - i hear little bit high drum sound
11:59 Rivals_7: I think i have 15 mins before the teacher come in
11:59 SpectorDG: so can we contuine after?
12:00 SpectorDG: 01:14:159 - ur sexy because there are only 1 note sex bob omb
12:00 Rivals_7: seems not really noticeable.
12:00 Rivals_7: wat lol
12:00 SpectorDG: 01:14:159 (74159|3) - i mean only 1 note? :4
12:01 Rivals_7: o yea added note there
12:01 Rivals_7: sounds loud
12:01 SpectorDG: anime songs really sucks D:
12:01 SpectorDG: ahhh keep that hahah
12:01 Rivals_7: http://puu.sh/sjMQV/b293be19f1.jpg
12:01 Rivals_7: but this is video game :c
12:02 SpectorDG: just vocal nini no na wanana bla2 japanese
12:02 Rivals_7: no i heard that again sounds quite louder
12:02 Rivals_7: the drum tho
12:02 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/sjMUr/444e77a35a.jpg you mapped this?
12:03 SpectorDG: quad jacks?
12:03 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/sjMWz/0eee5f2684.jpg better than this
12:03 SpectorDG: or this http://puu.sh/sjMYk/62ddd85187.jpg
12:04 SpectorDG: if you rearrange last, it's very kawaii too after vocal
12:05 Rivals_7: ah ok i made it like the first pic but i made the LN on yellow http://puu.sh/sjN1D/18781b7554.jpg
12:06 SpectorDG: 01:14:321 (74321|2,74970|2) - spams
12:06 SpectorDG: 01:14:645 (74645|1,75456|1) - there too
12:06 SpectorDG: anyway what is this video game name?
12:06 SpectorDG: it's always singing?
12:07 Rivals_7: well i think its still playable tho
12:07 Rivals_7: uh its JRPG
12:07 SpectorDG: [http://puu.sh/sjN7Q/e594a3d72a.png but spam is spam hhh]
12:08 Rivals_7: lol the distance is quite far, i dont think thats "spammable" :v
12:08 SpectorDG: okay
12:09 SpectorDG: 01:29:645 - http://puu.sh/sjNeu/d71d5ccad6.jpg
12:09 SpectorDG: 01:29:889 (89889|2,90051|2) -  or just move to 5
12:10 SpectorDG: it's makes balance
12:10 SpectorDG: 01:30:375 - balance with this
12:10 Rivals_7: oh i see. fix that
12:10 SpectorDG: thats all GG WP
12:10 SpectorDG: now im hungry hh
12:10 Rivals_7: yey
12:10 Rivals_7: lol get a lunch xD

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Column : |1|2|3|4|

1. 00:16:916 - I'm noticed that before, 5K MX is mapped 5-4-3-2 but 4K MX is mapped [1][2]-[4][3] so you need to rearrange this. And it's really spam pattern in before 1/8 https://puu.sh/skjYJ/26b74efb82.png ??
2. 00:19:186 (19186|3,19348|3,19510|3,19672|3,19835|3,19997|3) - Too many 1/2 jacks in here. I think you need more kawaii pattern for here because it's really tiresome to catch.
3. 00:18:700 (18700|0,18781|1) - Ctrl+G this. For the playable.
4. 00:23:889 (23889|0,24213|0,24537|0,24862|0) - Why this LN's only you mapped only [1] ?
5. 00:40:591 (40591|1,40754|2,40916|1,40916|3,41078|2,41240|3,41240|1,41402|3) - This patterns focusing right hand? 00:41:402 (41402|3,41564|1) - Ctrl+G?
6. 00:56:808 (56808|3) - This LN untill for here 00:57:132
7. 01:09:456 - It's special? you mapped 3 notes on here . . Others mapped only 2 notes 01:10:105 - 01:10:754
8. 00:59:078 - Same reason as before.
9. 01:31:510 (91510|2) - Delete this. Same as 5K MX.

1. 00:03:700 - Delete one, because Ultimate diff mapped here only 1 note. https://puu.sh/skkQ8/6459bfbed2.png
2. 00:05:727 (5727|3,5889|3) - Just question, why it's jack ? same as 00:10:916 (10916|0,11078|0) -
3. 00:07:186 (7186|1) - Move to [1] for the playable. Because 00:06:862 (6862|1,7186|1,7510|1) - there are mapped only [2]
4. 00:08:970 (8970|1,9375|1) - Be gentle. Nothing to say more :p
5. 00:16:429 (16429|4) - Why this LN ending for here? Maybe you followed vocal. But you can't keep that 1/8 with this LN because this LN is too short. 00:16:916 - This LN replacement on this 1/8, but before LN is not replacement 1/8. So this 00:16:429 (16429|4) - LN start from here? 00:16:267
6. 00:24:537 (24537|4,24700|0) - Ctrl+H this. It's much better to catch and read. And this https://puu.sh/sklqw/479ccd13bb.png
7. 00:44:808 (44808|1) - Move to [5] for the balance.
8. 00:52:429 - This patterns really much fun than MX hhhh
9. 01:13:510 (73510|4,73672|3) - Just Ctrl+G. For the balance and after 1/4 steam.
10. 01:14:321 (74321|4) - Why it's ended for here? 01:14:645 ?
11. 01:21:618 (81618|3) - ^ it's should end for here 01:21:943

1. 00:19:348 (19348|2) - Move to [1] ? for the playable again.
2. 00:56:483 - Hey you missed one more note.
3. 01:06:862 - ^

1. 01:19:835 (79835|1) - Feels bored. Move to [1] ?

SpectorDG wrote:

M4M IRC ! 5K MX

11:18 SpectorDG: hey
11:20 Rivals_7: oh hi
11:20 SpectorDG: can we do irc n ow?
11:20 *SpectorDG is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1062484 Idol College - Be My * Zombie]
11:21 Rivals_7: uh i think i could. (if there's no teacher coming in next an hour lol. I'm on school currently)
11:22 SpectorDG: hh school
11:22 SpectorDG: notice me
11:22 *Rivals_7 is editing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1062484 Idol College - Be My * Zombie [4K MX 'Blanc']]
11:22 Rivals_7: so which diff first?
11:22 SpectorDG: which diff you want first?
11:22 SpectorDG: i mean which diff is have a problem?
11:23 Rivals_7: well. could you modding 5K? it still have less mods
11:23 Rivals_7: if so 5K mx then :>
11:24 SpectorDG: sure
11:25 SpectorDG: seems all patterns same as 4k
11:25 SpectorDG: 00:03:943 - you mapped ? 5-1 why
11:25 SpectorDG: 4k mx mapper 12 43
11:25 SpectorDG: but you mapped 5-4-3-2-1
11:26 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/sjL1Y/cabdcda57a.jpg
11:26 SpectorDG: better than this
11:28 SpectorDG: are you here?
11:28 Rivals_7: emm okey lel at first i tought the pitch is all the way down. so i thought making a roll stair 5-1 could work too. fixed a lil bit different
11:29 Rivals_7: took time to write those :v
11:29 SpectorDG: 00:13:510 (13510|0,13672|4,13835|1,13997|4) - bit smilliar vocals here
11:29 SpectorDG: but you again mapped 1 5 2 5
11:29 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/sjLeA/f7df15e71d.jpg
11:30 SpectorDG: 4k and 5k players can't same  feel that
11:30 SpectorDG: if you won't big rearrange that patterns, just swap this 00:13:997 (13997|4,13997|3) - 
11:32 Rivals_7: ok i think the vocal pitch are going high-low-high-low so i though of making the ln at 5-1-4-2
11:32 Rivals_7: wait puush not respond aaaaaaaaa
11:32 SpectorDG: nah it's okay
11:32 SpectorDG: 00:14:402 - only 1 note? are you sure?
11:34 Rivals_7: that's for transition. making it a full 12-45 jumpthrill is not really fit in 5K
11:34 Rivals_7: exception on 4k tho
11:34 SpectorDG: i see but if you there are no slot
11:34 SpectorDG: you can rearrangea after 12 45 patterns
11:35 SpectorDG: like a [http://puu.sh/sjLwW/007dca3fc6.jpg this]
11:35 SpectorDG: for the balance
11:35 SpectorDG: not for rankable
11:37 Rivals_7: i think [puu.sh/sjLDv/4c5b486a35.jpg this] could work too
11:37 Rivals_7: ups
11:38 Rivals_7: puu.sh/sjLDv/4c5b486a35.jpg
11:38 Rivals_7: wat the
11:38 Rivals_7: http://puu.sh/sjLDv/4c5b486a35.jpg
11:38 SpectorDG: hmm 
11:38 SpectorDG: seems good
11:38 Rivals_7: better play on my side at least
11:38 SpectorDG: 00:16:105 (16105|3,16105|4,16186|0,16267|3,16267|4) - really awkard . . seems too ugly 1/8's before
11:39 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/sjLIk/5ef7aaf3a5.jpg you think it's really kawaii?
11:40 Rivals_7: o yea i think those jacks in col 1 and 5 is really tricky xD
11:41 SpectorDG: ya  where is the yellow notes ;^)
11:41 Rivals_7: lel
11:41 Rivals_7: well. any suggestion then?
11:41 SpectorDG: lemme rearrange first
11:41 SpectorDG: just im noticed that hhh
11:42 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/sjLV4/99f0cca732.jpg
11:43 SpectorDG: 00:19:186 (19186|0,19348|0,19510|0,19672|0,19835|0) - never ending 1/2 ass
11:43 SpectorDG: i mean jacks :3
11:44 Rivals_7: lol
11:44 Rivals_7: lemme testplay first
11:44 SpectorDG: 00:19:186 (19186|0,19348|0,19348|1,19510|0,19551|1,19672|0,19672|1,19835|0,19835|1) - seems all patterns focusing left hand
11:46 Rivals_7: oh rite just noticed that
11:46 SpectorDG: and 
11:46 SpectorDG: 00:21:943 - and where is the yellow ? http://puu.sh/sjM5q/e563def48a.jpg [http://puu.sh/sjM7c/02df524d54.jpg suggestion here]
11:49 Rivals_7: http://puu.sh/sjMfm/58fd84dae8.jpg i think this one could works too
11:49 SpectorDG: seems better
11:50 SpectorDG: it's MX diffs but 00:17:889 - they strong sound + some vocals and there are only 2 noted . . same as 00:20:483 - 00:23:078 -
11:50 SpectorDG: 00:24:375 - but you mapped here 3 
11:51 SpectorDG: 00:52:754 (52754|0,52754|1) - swap this
11:51 SpectorDG: really awkard too read and catch with yellow
11:51 Rivals_7: it was two notes because there's a stream. so the people could at least not really stumbled
11:52 SpectorDG: ok 
11:52 Rivals_7: ow okey for that
11:53 SpectorDG: 00:56:808 (56808|3) - really needs this LN?
11:54 Rivals_7: well its vocals. like the other 4 Ln there
11:54 Rivals_7: vocal "chi"
11:54 Rivals_7: oh needs to be extended
11:54 SpectorDG: i hear the vocals end for blue line
11:55 SpectorDG: Chi" i
11:55 SpectorDG: but you can mapped 1/2 is ok
11:56 Rivals_7: feels really awkward if its end there xD ok then :>
11:56 SpectorDG: 01:07:997 (67997|2) - just change this LN for simple note
11:56 SpectorDG: so why i said "you really need that LN"
11:56 SpectorDG: ohh im lie
11:56 SpectorDG: i said "really needs this LN?"
11:57 SpectorDG: 01:07:997 (67997|2) - what rhythm it's following?
11:57 SpectorDG: no vocals
11:57 SpectorDG: no ups noise
11:57 SpectorDG: really empty but you mapped LN
11:58 Rivals_7: i thought its properly follow "unmei" vocal. seems i was wrong xD
11:58 Rivals_7: changed tho
11:59 SpectorDG: 01:12:862 - i hear little bit high drum sound
11:59 Rivals_7: I think i have 15 mins before the teacher come in
11:59 SpectorDG: so can we contuine after?
12:00 SpectorDG: 01:14:159 - ur sexy because there are only 1 note sex bob omb
12:00 Rivals_7: seems not really noticeable.
12:00 Rivals_7: wat lol
12:00 SpectorDG: 01:14:159 (74159|3) - i mean only 1 note? :4
12:01 Rivals_7: o yea added note there
12:01 Rivals_7: sounds loud
12:01 SpectorDG: anime songs really sucks D:
12:01 SpectorDG: ahhh keep that hahah
12:01 Rivals_7: http://puu.sh/sjMQV/b293be19f1.jpg
12:01 Rivals_7: but this is video game :c
12:02 SpectorDG: just vocal nini no na wanana bla2 japanese
12:02 Rivals_7: no i heard that again sounds quite louder
12:02 Rivals_7: the drum tho
12:02 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/sjMUr/444e77a35a.jpg you mapped this?
12:03 SpectorDG: quad jacks?
12:03 SpectorDG: http://puu.sh/sjMWz/0eee5f2684.jpg better than this
12:03 SpectorDG: or this http://puu.sh/sjMYk/62ddd85187.jpg
12:04 SpectorDG: if you rearrange last, it's very kawaii too after vocal
12:05 Rivals_7: ah ok i made it like the first pic but i made the LN on yellow http://puu.sh/sjN1D/18781b7554.jpg
12:06 SpectorDG: 01:14:321 (74321|2,74970|2) - spams
12:06 SpectorDG: 01:14:645 (74645|1,75456|1) - there too
12:06 SpectorDG: anyway what is this video game name?
12:06 SpectorDG: it's always singing?
12:07 Rivals_7: well i think its still playable tho
12:07 Rivals_7: uh its JRPG
12:07 SpectorDG: [http://puu.sh/sjN7Q/e594a3d72a.png but spam is spam hhh]
12:08 Rivals_7: lol the distance is quite far, i dont think thats "spammable" :v
12:08 SpectorDG: okay
12:09 SpectorDG: 01:29:645 - http://puu.sh/sjNeu/d71d5ccad6.jpg
12:09 SpectorDG: 01:29:889 (89889|2,90051|2) -  or just move to 5
12:10 SpectorDG: it's makes balance
12:10 SpectorDG: 01:30:375 - balance with this
12:10 Rivals_7: oh i see. fix that
12:10 SpectorDG: thats all GG WP
12:10 SpectorDG: now im hungry hh
12:10 Rivals_7: yey
12:10 Rivals_7: lol get a lunch xD

to be continue mod others diffs

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M4M

Column : |1|2|3|4|5|

Column : |1|2|3|4|

[4K MX 'Blanc']

1. 00:16:916 - I'm noticed that before, 5K MX is mapped 5-4-3-2 but 4K MX is mapped [1][2]-[4][3] so you need to rearrange this. And it's really spam pattern in before 1/8 https://puu.sh/skjYJ/26b74efb82.png ?? somehow managed to rearrange
2. 00:19:186 (19186|3,19348|3,19510|3,19672|3,19835|3,19997|3) - Too many 1/2 jacks in here. I think you need more kawaii pattern for here because it's really tiresome to catch.
3. 00:18:700 (18700|0,18781|1) - Ctrl+G this. For the playable.
4. 00:23:889 (23889|0,24213|0,24537|0,24862|0) - Why this LN's only you mapped only [1] ? same pitch
5. 00:40:591 (40591|1,40754|2,40916|1,40916|3,41078|2,41240|3,41240|1,41402|3) - This patterns focusing right hand? 00:41:402 (41402|3,41564|1) - Ctrl+G? arent those common? if i ctrl+g it'll be left handed :>
6. 00:56:808 (56808|3) - This LN untill for here 00:57:132
7. 01:09:456 - It's special? you mapped 3 notes on here . . Others mapped only 2 notes 01:10:105 - 01:10:754 Emphasize trumpet
8. 00:59:078 - Same reason as before. same
9. 01:31:510 (91510|2) - Delete this. Same as 5K MX.

[5K HD 'Noire']

1. 00:03:700 - Delete one, because Ultimate diff mapped here only 1 note. https://puu.sh/skkQ8/6459bfbed2.png
2. 00:05:727 (5727|3,5889|3) - Just question, why it's jack ? same as 00:10:916 (10916|0,11078|0) - same trumpet pitch
3. 00:07:186 (7186|1) - Move to [1] for the playable. Because 00:06:862 (6862|1,7186|1,7510|1) - there are mapped only [2]
4. 00:08:970 (8970|1,9375|1) - Be gentle. Nothing to say more :p nah. shield is ok i guess xD
5. 00:16:429 (16429|4) - Why this LN ending for here? Maybe you followed vocal. But you can't keep that 1/8 with this LN because this LN is too short. 00:16:916 - This LN replacement on this 1/8, but before LN is not replacement 1/8. So this 00:16:429 (16429|4) - LN start from here? 00:16:267uh its for a burst noise (compare with MX)
6. 00:24:537 (24537|4,24700|0) - Ctrl+H this. It's much better to catch and read. And this https://puu.sh/sklqw/479ccd13bb.png
7. 00:44:808 (44808|1) - Move to [5] for the balance.
8. 00:52:429 - This patterns really much fun than MX hhhh lel xd
9. 01:13:510 (73510|4,73672|3) - Just Ctrl+G. For the balance and after 1/4 steam.
10. 01:14:321 (74321|4) - Why it's ended for here? 01:14:645 ?
11. 01:21:618 (81618|3) - ^ it's should end for here 01:21:943

[5K NM 'Uni']

1. 00:19:348 (19348|2) - Move to [1] ? for the playable again. I think that's doesnt affect gameplay much but ok
2. 00:56:483 - Hey you missed one more note.
3. 01:06:862 - ^ uh no. was intended to focus to vocal

[5K EZ 'Nepgear']

1. 01:19:835 (79835|1) - Feels bored. Move to [1] ?

Goodluck for rank!

Minseo2000 wrote:

short M4M from discord

1|2|3|4|5

5K MX

00:01:673 - Wouldn't it be better if you kept the jacks/stacks/whateveryoucall1/2spacing consistent by putting them before every snare like this?

00:06:375 (6375|1,6537|2) - I feel that swapping the columns of these notes will make it more comfortable to hit as the current pattern is somewhat like a roll interrupted by an LN 00:06:213 (6213|0,6375|1,6537|2,6700|4) -.

00:07:835 - Something like this might be better for PR and playability. uh nope for this i guess. I feel somehow this - 00:08:645 (8645|4) - note has a higher PR than the previous LN. also its already pretty much comfy for me

00:09:618 (9618|2) - Maybe you can try moving this note to 2 if you've applied the previous suggestion to reduce the strain on the spacebar. dont think that would be a problem since the distance ebetween them are pretty far each other/color]

00:15:294 (15294|4,15943|3,16024|2,16105|4,16105|3) - This plays somewhat awkwardly. Perhaps you can try this?

00:18:862 - 00:20:483 - I find this section a bit too monodirectional. Maybe you can try switching directions one or two times in the middle?

00:45:132 - Try this for PR maybe? alrite, rearrange it on my own.

00:59:727 - I suggest that you either move 00:59:727 (59727|2) - or 00:59:727 (59727|4) - to 2 to reduce the strain on the right hand.

01:10:754 - Similar stuff.

01:03:294 - 01:03:618 - I think you missed a drum roll here. its quite faint imo so i decided to follow the main trumpet instead xd

Seems okay considering that this was my sightread run

Feerum wrote:

Mod 4 Mod


Column: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 |
======================================================
Red means Unrankable stuff
Big means Important stuff
Normal are Suggestions
// means comments
======================================================

Hello Rivals_7!
Sorry for the delay. Too much Diablo 3 these days, last friday a new season started and i had to play a lot xD xD noprob
However, here's my mod for you! I will focus on the 5K difficulties

General

Artist: Unsure // I am not sure if they should be in Japanse. Have you a source for it? Siglecover shows it in Japanese, video in romanised. Looking at the 2 official website http://ideafintl.com/blanc-zombies/sound/ and http://www.compileheart.com/blanc/sound/ | It seems fine to use whether japanese or not but in personal i prefer japanese since..... the game is technically from japanese :v
Title: Wrong // Please remove the space left and right of the star in the romanised Title. There is no space in the Japanese one so there should also be no space in the romanised one. I'm kinda not sure. Japanese writing technically doesnt use spacing in all of their sentences in general. may also harden the search since they will naturally type "be my zombie" instead (without " *" and a spacing) will ask someone for this
Source: Right
Tags: Add into Tags: Idea Factory Compile Heart Tamsoft ps vita // all companies which are part of this game
AiMod: Right
Background: Right
BPM/Offset: Right
mp3/Hitsounds: Right
Other: -

5K EZ 'Nepgear'

I'm not fine with the fact that Nepgear is just the Easy diff here. How dare you!!! Pls Go easy on nepugia (tbh i chose the naming kinda randomly haha xD

01:01:672 - For some variation and not follow just 1/1 all the time you could map here the 1/2 vocals. They are pretty loud and very emphasized. My suggestion would be either like this:

Screen

Or without the note on 3 for the drum to give the vocal even more emphasis. But i really recommend, when accepted, to keep the 2 columns space between the vocal notes. More emphasis! actually i just want to keep everything as simple as it is. newbies cant actually keep their rythm if there's a change suddenly

01:31:510 (91510|3) - (Optional) Move to 5. Give's in my eyes more emphasis to the ending. yea could work xD moved

Yeah that's all. Not much to say. Pretty cool Easy diff. Happy to see some people still map Easy diffs and don't try just to keep the lowest diff under 2* xd people who map without an EZ diff is just a lazy ass :^)

5K NM 'Uni'

Uni can be actually pretty cute too Top Tsundere CPU candidate

00:01:673 - A little suggestion for the opening. Doesn't have to be exactly like this but it plays actually pretty fun when you keep notes for the kick on same column and the snare notes on an other same column:

Screen

eh i'll do something different instead
00:08:321 (8321|4) - Moving this to 3 and 00:08:645 (8645|2) - to 4. Together with a CTRL + G for 00:08:483 (8483|1,8808|0) - make this here actually pretty comfortable and fun pattern. those on 3 i move it to 4 to actually correlate with the trumpet pitch

00:16:105 (16105|2,16267|3) - CTRL+G and 00:16:591 (16591|2) - on 4 makes it also a bit more comfortable. Not really something what must be changed but i just mention it. did some changes but i actually didnt move the note you was highlighted xD

00:34:916 (34916|1,34997|2,35078|3) - Lot of 1/4 stairs already. I suggest to make it 2-5 [14] do that and ctrL+h-ed

00:45:618 (45618|2) - I would suggest you to delete this note. Yes, i know, there is a sound. but then you could make 00:45:781 (45781|3,45781|4) - [24] what gives a really great emphasis for the ending of this part.
^If accepted 00:46:267 (46267|1) - to 1 I Dont think that gives much emphasize enough since its just another kick that exist in here. wont delete that since for melody flow :u

00:51:294 - Feels like this should be a double too. If possible add here a note and make it [25] to have awesome pattern with the previous notes.

00:52:429 - Little suggestion to keep the vocals in PR:

Screen

Isn't hard to hit and makes it more fun c:

00:57:456 (57456|2,57781|2) - Not a fan of 1/1 spacebar key. Maybe it's me but its a bit weird to hit

That's all for the Normal. Nice diff!

else applied xd

5K HD 'Noire'

Noire in tsun mode is kawaii Top Tsun CPU uwu

00:01:673 - Cool beginning but i think it could be a bit better. I don't like how the pattern change already 00:01:997 -
Would suggest it like this:

Screen

The 1/2 jack at the end is probably not to avoid but it looks better and feels better i did something different hue

00:05:889 (5889|3,6213|4) - CTRL+G please. The jack doesn't fit. The vocals are different
00:10:916 (10916|0,11078|0) - same like here. Doesn't have even a vocal or other sound that would suit to a jack. Those actually follow the trumpet :u

00:17:078 (17078|3,17078|4,17159|2,17159|1) - I don't think these should be a double. It's basically same like 00:14:483 (14483|4,14564|3) -
00:22:267 (22267|1,22267|2,22348|4,22348|3) - Same goes for here. Oh the 14:483 was supposed to be double tho

00:22:105 (22105|0) - somehow this LN doesn't fit. It's probably for the 1/8 hihat? But idk.. it feels out of place because 00:21:618 (21618|2) - has additionally to the 1/8 hihat a sound which fit actually to an LN.
Same goes then for the other LNs like 00:16:916 (16916|0) - well yea those actually 1/8 hihats so idk if i should change or anything since its musically not wrong

01:13:754 (73754|1) - Ghost Note The 1/4 drum begins at 01:13:835 - .
01:14:240 (74240|2) - Ghost Note Same like above. The drum ends already 1/4 earlier.

That's actually all. Nothing more to say without to start being totally nazi.

5K MX 'Vert'

Alright, i say it now. I'm not really a fan of Vert! There you go. lul

00:16:308 (16308|4,16389|0) - Ghost Notes The 1/8 hihat begins at 00:16:591 - ow fuk diz nuts. how am i suppose to remap the stream later aaaaaaaaaaaa nvm

00:18:862 - to 00:19:186 - Is it me or does this sound like 1/6? O.o screw it aaaaa

00:25:024 - I'm honestly not a fan of these LN's. It's basically all the time two 1/1 LNs with a 1/2 LN. One 1/1 LN and two 1/2 LNs would suit waaay better to the Piano and you would have more possibilities to arrange them more to PR. its my intention and intended to ignore PR apparently. for more interesting stuff i think?

00:35:402 - to 00:44:321 - . This part could also be a bite more exciting mapped with some LNs for certain vocals which are more emphasized like other. An example would be 00:37:997 - 1/2 LN, 00:38:645 - 1/2 LN and from 00:39:781 (39781|3) - 4x 1/2 LNs and at 00:39:943 - an 1/1 LN.
Just an example how you could add a bit more variation. i'm being too simple-minded man apparently so i just added 3 LNs for those secondary guitar in that section xd

How about 00:57:781 - and 00:58:105 - each one 1/1 LN. The vocals get pretty emphasized here. uh i dont think so for this :<

01:12:862 - Oh cmon, make here a 1/2 LN :p lel i'll do it on 4K too i think

01:13:754 (73754|2) - Like before in HD mentioned. This is a Ghost Note
01:14:240 - Same for this one. Ghost Note

There 5 drum sounds. You could make them all as double

01:29:402 - Suggestion to get rid of the boring stair pattern :p

Screen

plays pretty cool in my eyes.

01:31:510 - Add a note on 2. Emphasize the last finish more!

Thaaat's all. Hope it helps you. osu!mania needs more Nep! moar nep