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Galneryus - ANGEL OF SALVATION [Osu|OsuMania]

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Bewww
53 posts
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Bewww
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 26 июля 2018 г. at 18:46:49

Artist: Galneryus
Title: ANGEL OF SALVATION
Tags: LIV MOON
BPM: 117
Filesize: 13405kb
Play Time: 07:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. ANGEL DIMENSION (5,57 stars, 2394 notes)
  2. God of salvatioin - 4Key (4,44 stars, 1172 notes)
Download: Galneryus - ANGEL OF SALVATION
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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all song mapped. now prepare for another step.
If someone help me with tags and hitsounds, it will be great.

BACK TO MY WORK AGAIN! x2
Last edited by Bewww , edited 48 times in total.
ItashaS13
678 posts
Joined January 2014
ItashaS13
Hi from Mod Req :D

ANGEL DIMENSION

edit> ADD TAGS AND ADD KIAI TIMES
Tags could be .. the name of the album, the singer, the genre of the song, Im reading in wikipedia "The song is also the first to feature a guest vocalist in a studio album by Galneryus in Akane Liv from the band LIV MOON." so. add LIV MOON to the tags
the first circles are off the beat

I suggest moving the first red point at 11331 so you can add a new green point here 00:11:843 - with velocity x1,27 and add sliders at 00:13:510 - 00:14:279 - 00:14:792 - and 00:15:561 -
and do something similar here 00:20:486 -
00:48:021 - move this down to prevent the overslap
00:58:178 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - check the curve of this stream
01:06:649 - ^
01:08:413 (8) - move this to x:312 y:340 ?
01:07:355 (5) - NC here instead of 01:07:002 (1) -
01:08:590 (9) - why not a triplet here?
01:12:825 (1,2) - maybe convert this into a slider?
01:39:472 (4) - move this up (same distance as 01:38:766 (2,3) - )
01:52:884 (3) - NC should be here imo
hmm 02:01:355 (3,4,5,3,4,5) - this both triplets should be placed between 02:01:531 (5,1,5,1) -
02:02:943 (3) - convert this into a mini slider ?
02:08:413 (1) - move this to x:340 y:184?
02:11:237 (1) - remove NC
02:11:237 (1,2,1) - fix the distance between these, use same distance
02:50:061 (7) - move this a bit to the right
02:51:825 (4) - move the first anchor a bit to the left, to make it the same inclination as the last slider
02:55:002 (1,2) - why not a triplet here?
03:07:178 (5) - this slider should be placed at 03:07:355 - (white tick) and this circle 03:07:708 (1) - at 03:07:178 -
03:17:413 (4) - this circle.. hmm delete it xd?
03:41:590 (4) - move this circle further? like the same distance as 03:40:884 (1,2) - ?
03:46:002 (5,1) - the triplet should be placed here
03:50:414 (6) - start the stream here, not in the blue tick
04:03:649 (8) - this slider should be placed at the large white tick
04:16:355 (2,3) - move this to prevent that overlap
04:17:943 (1) - remove NC and add it 04:18:649 (3) -
04:26:855 - there is a sound here, the stream should start there
05:05:237 (5) - this slider... hmm maybe remove that slider and add a circle there and start the stream here 05:05:413 - ?
05:11:061 (3) - make this into a mini slider?
05:19:002 (1) - move this a bit down
05:33:472 (3,4,5,6) - make them further?
05:47:766 (1) - start the stream here to fit with the vocals or start it in the white tick.. not in the blue
06:10:091 (5) - ^
06:02:413 - the slider should start in the large white tick
06:04:178 (5) - move a bit to the right
06:05:237 - ignoring a strong beat, should change the slider
06:23:590 - the slider .. the white tick ><
06:29:855 (8,9,10,11) - fix this spacing
06:35:943 (1,2,3) - use same distance in these
The offset of the last red point (166BPM) is 410897
07:01:123 - with this space here? your mapping the vocals but should add something here because after this pause, your not only mapping only the vocals, so.. map this part too or just map the vocals

I hope this helps, GL, nice song btw, really liked it
Bewww
53 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Bewww

Itasha_S13 wrote:

Hi from Mod Req :D

ANGEL DIMENSION

edit> ADD TAGS AND ADD KIAI TIMES
Tags could be .. the name of the album, the singer, the genre of the song, Im reading in wikipedia "The song is also the first to feature a guest vocalist in a studio album by Galneryus in Akane Liv from the band LIV MOON." so. add LIV MOON to the tags
the first circles are off the beatBig thx fo this.

I suggest moving the first red point at 11331 Done, but still weired.
so you can add a new green point here 00:11:843 - with velocity x1,27 and add sliders at 00:13:510 - 00:14:279 - 00:14:792 - and 00:15:561 -
and do something similar here 00:20:486 - NO! this sounds weired, and your timing links on blue line, it cant be right.
00:48:021 - move this down to prevent the overslapYes.
00:58:178 (5,6,7,8,1,2,3) - check the curve of this streamFixed.(i think)
01:06:649 - ^Same.
01:08:413 (8) - move this to x:312 y:340 ?Yes.
01:07:355 (5) - NC here instead of 01:07:002 (1) - Yes.
01:08:590 (9) - why not a triplet here? Nice, sounds much better!
01:12:825 (1,2) - maybe convert this into a slider? I try it. but it dont fit. in my opinion.
01:39:472 (4) - move this up (same distance as 01:38:766 (2,3) - ) I do it like 1 line of sliders with same space around. thx!
01:52:884 (3) - NC should be here imoYes.
hmm 02:01:355 (3,4,5,3,4,5) - this both triplets should be placed between 02:01:531 (5,1,5,1) - Yes.
02:02:943 (3) - convert this into a mini slider ?Try it, but mb back to just 1 note
02:08:413 (1) - move this to x:340 y:184? Yes.
02:11:237 (1) - remove NC Yes.
02:11:237 (1,2,1) - fix the distance between these, use same distanceFixed
02:50:061 (7) - move this a bit to the right I move 6 to center, instead of move slider. so it seems symetrical.
02:51:825 (4) - move the first anchor a bit to the left, to make it the same inclination as the last sliderYes.
02:55:002 (1,2) - why not a triplet here? Do a stream of 4 notes to slider, sounds better.
03:07:178 (5) - this slider should be placed at 03:07:355 - (white tick) and this circle 03:07:708 (1) - at 03:07:178 - Fixed.
03:17:413 (4) - this circle.. hmm delete it xd? Yes.
03:41:590 (4) - move this circle further? like the same distance as 03:40:884 (1,2) - ?
03:46:002 (5,1) - the triplet should be placed here I hope fixed right.
03:50:414 (6) - start the stream here, not in the blue tick Fixed.
04:03:649 (8) - this slider should be placed at the large white tick Fixed
04:16:355 (2,3) - move this to prevent that overlap Fixed
04:17:943 (1) - remove NC and add it 04:18:649 (3) - Fixed
04:26:855 - there is a sound here, the stream should start there Add note at this point
05:05:237 (5) - this slider... hmm maybe remove that slider and add a circle there and start the stream here 05:05:413 - ?YES!
05:11:061 (3) - make this into a mini slider? Sry, but i dont want do it here.
05:19:002 (1) - move this a bit down Fixed
05:33:472 (3,4,5,6) - make them further? Fixed
05:47:766 (1) - start the stream here to fit with the vocals or start it in the white tick.. not in the blue Fixed
06:10:091 (5) - ^ Same.
06:02:413 - the slider should start in the large white tickFixed
06:04:178 (5) - move a bit to the rightReplaced!
06:05:237 - ignoring a strong beat, should change the slider Fixed.
06:23:590 - the slider .. the white tick ><Fixed.
06:29:855 (8,9,10,11) - fix this spacingFixed. + Replaced
06:35:943 (1,2,3) - use same distance in these Fixed.
The offset of the last red point (166BPM) is 410897 Fixed.
07:01:123 - with this space here? your mapping the vocals but should add something here because after this pause, your not only mapping only the vocals, so.. map this part too or just map the vocals If you can, imaged how it should be

I hope this helps, GL, nice song btw, really liked it
Thanks! :)
tatemae
836 posts
Joined November 2014
tatemae
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[url]2016-06-22 18:12 SherryCherry: ну я начу
2016-06-22 18:12 SherryCherry: пожалуй
2016-06-22 18:12 SherryCherry: 00:19:316 (4) -
2016-06-22 18:12 SherryCherry: вот этот звук
2016-06-22 18:12 SherryCherry: дольше остольных
2016-06-22 18:13 SherryCherry: как насчет продлить до даунбита
2016-06-22 18:14 SherryCherry: 00:27:909 (4) -
2016-06-22 18:14 SherryCherry: и этот тоже продлить
2016-06-22 18:14 SherryCherry: ты если не согласен
2016-06-22 18:14 SherryCherry: можешь сюда отвечать
2016-06-22 18:15 Bewww: я просто тут пока из головы не вылетело быстро исправляю критические моменты в этом
2016-06-22 18:15 Bewww: ACTION is editing Masahiro Ikariko - Sewers Surfin [Insane]
2016-06-22 18:15 Bewww: Буквально 1 минуту и начну сразу чекать
2016-06-22 18:16 SherryCherry: 00:43:183 (3) -
2016-06-22 18:16 SherryCherry: до белого хотя бы
2016-06-22 18:17 SherryCherry: 00:48:505 (5,6) -
2016-06-22 18:17 SherryCherry: не обязательно оверлапать было
2016-06-22 18:18 SherryCherry: 00:53:943 (11) -
2016-06-22 18:18 SherryCherry: тоже
2016-06-22 18:18 SherryCherry: он прямо на сриме лежит
2016-06-22 18:18 SherryCherry: и флоу хреновый
2016-06-22 18:19 SherryCherry: 00:58:884 (5,6) -
2016-06-22 18:19 SherryCherry: покрасивее можно
2016-06-22 18:19 SherryCherry: бланкетом к примеру
2016-06-22 18:20 SherryCherry: 01:02:590 (3,4,5) -
2016-06-22 18:21 SherryCherry: вот тут ты поменял флоу
2016-06-22 18:21 SherryCherry: а можно было продолжить треугольник
2016-06-22 18:21 SherryCherry: и стрим вывести поудобнее
2016-06-22 18:21 SherryCherry: а еще
2016-06-22 18:22 SherryCherry: можно было сделать треугольники с разным спейсом
2016-06-22 18:22 SherryCherry: по нарастающей
2016-06-22 18:22 SherryCherry: 01:05:237 (1) -
2016-06-22 18:22 SherryCherry: ctrl+g
2016-06-22 18:23 Bewww: так момент
2016-06-22 18:23 Bewww: стой
2016-06-22 18:23 Bewww: вопрос
2016-06-22 18:23 SherryCherry: 01:05:590 (3) - ctrl+h
2016-06-22 18:23 SherryCherry: м
2016-06-22 18:23 Bewww: 00:48:021 (1,2,3,4,5) -
2016-06-22 18:23 Bewww: ее просто ниже опустить надо правильно?
2016-06-22 18:24 SherryCherry: ее?
2016-06-22 18:24 Bewww: оверлап перекрытие же?
2016-06-22 18:24 SherryCherry: да вроде некритично
2016-06-22 18:24 Bewww: ну стрим со слайдером
2016-06-22 18:25 SherryCherry: 00:48:505 (5,6) -
2016-06-22 18:25 SherryCherry: ааа
2016-06-22 18:25 SherryCherry: ты про вот это?
2016-06-22 18:25 SherryCherry: ну да
2016-06-22 18:25 SherryCherry: 6 ниже бы
2016-06-22 18:25 SherryCherry: 01:05:502 (2,3) -
2016-06-22 18:25 SherryCherry: тоже не очень понятно
2016-06-22 18:26 SherryCherry: зачем
2016-06-22 18:26 SherryCherry: 01:05:943 (4,5,6,7) -
2016-06-22 18:26 SherryCherry: сделай его ровным
2016-06-22 18:26 SherryCherry: вверху вкладки
2016-06-22 18:26 SherryCherry: жмакаешь на вкладку редактор
2016-06-22 18:26 SherryCherry: и создать многоугольник
2016-06-22 18:27 SherryCherry: 01:10:708 (1,2,3) -
2016-06-22 18:27 SherryCherry: тоже подвинь от стрима
2016-06-22 18:27 SherryCherry: 01:17:061 (5) -
2016-06-22 18:27 SherryCherry: тоже аккруатнее можно
2016-06-22 18:28 SherryCherry: 01:30:825 (5) -
2016-06-22 18:28 SherryCherry: тоже
2016-06-22 18:29 SherryCherry: 01:34:178 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
2016-06-22 18:29 SherryCherry: вот этот стрим можно получше сделать
2016-06-22 18:29 SherryCherry: чтобы не налегал на на себя самого
2016-06-22 18:30 SherryCherry: 01:43:884 (9) -
2016-06-22 18:30 SherryCherry: не очень полнял, зачем пропустил тут
2016-06-22 18:30 SherryCherry: 01:45:472 (1,2,3,1) -
2016-06-22 18:30 SherryCherry: у тебя куча места
2016-06-22 18:30 SherryCherry: кс 4.2
2016-06-22 18:30 SherryCherry: лепить так
2016-06-22 18:30 SherryCherry: не вариант
2016-06-22 18:31 SherryCherry: 01:49:002 (2,3) - стакнуть можно
2016-06-22 18:31 SherryCherry: 01:49:531 (8,9) -
2016-06-22 18:31 SherryCherry: и их
2016-06-22 18:32 SherryCherry: 01:51:825 (7,8,9,10) -
2016-06-22 18:32 SherryCherry: тут тоже подвинь все
2016-06-22 18:33 SherryCherry: 01:58:178 (2) -
2016-06-22 18:33 SherryCherry: куча места
2016-06-22 18:33 SherryCherry: куда его можно засунуть
2016-06-22 18:33 SherryCherry: но ни как не на предыдущие 3 слайдера :D
2016-06-22 18:34 SherryCherry: 02:01:002 (1) - x 340 y 320
2016-06-22 18:34 SherryCherry: 02:03:825 (6) - я бы тут закончил стрим
2016-06-22 18:34 SherryCherry: просто слайдер бы поставил
2016-06-22 18:35 SherryCherry: черт
2016-06-22 18:35 SherryCherry: какой же классный сонг
2016-06-22 18:36 SherryCherry: 02:09:119 (3) - вниз его что ли
2016-06-22 18:36 SherryCherry: 02:11:237 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - не очень удачная идея напропускать здесь столько
2016-06-22 18:37 Bewww: Момент
2016-06-22 18:37 Bewww: я вот незнаю как 1 момент исправить
2016-06-22 18:37 Bewww: и
2016-06-22 18:37 SherryCherry: просто пропусти
2016-06-22 18:37 Bewww: А у меня уже от 12 часовых посидений глаза путаются >_<
2016-06-22 18:37 Bewww: ofc
2016-06-22 18:37 Bewww: ок
2016-06-22 18:37 SherryCherry: можешь еще хуже сделать))
2016-06-22 18:38 SherryCherry: 02:14:678 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - некрасиво он так
2016-06-22 18:38 SherryCherry: завернул
2016-06-22 18:38 SherryCherry: ну совсем
2016-06-22 18:39 SherryCherry: вот ты лоханулся
2016-06-22 18:39 SherryCherry: 1.00 св
2016-06-22 18:39 SherryCherry: ахах
2016-06-22 18:39 SherryCherry: я то думаю
2016-06-22 18:39 SherryCherry: чего так медленно
2016-06-22 18:39 SherryCherry: чекнул секцию
2016-06-22 18:39 SherryCherry: 1.74
2016-06-22 18:39 SherryCherry: 75
2016-06-22 18:39 Bewww: Так , ну ятогда лучше лога дождусь, и потом все осторожненько по полочкам разложу сделаю.
2016-06-22 18:39 Bewww: БЛЯ
2016-06-22 18:39 Bewww: у меня СВ 1
2016-06-22 18:39 Bewww: >_<
2016-06-22 18:39 Bewww: kjdf,jsldfkjs
2016-06-22 18:39 SherryCherry: )))))
2016-06-22 18:40 SherryCherry: ладненько
2016-06-22 18:40 Bewww: Так ладно я лога подожду
2016-06-22 18:40 SherryCherry: я думаю тут можно закончить
2016-06-22 18:40 SherryCherry: дальше ошибки повторяются
2016-06-22 18:40 Bewww: сейчас лучше реально не лезть
2016-06-22 18:40 SherryCherry: просто пересмотри все на свежую голову
2016-06-22 18:40 SherryCherry: да
2016-06-22 18:40 SherryCherry: я лог скину
2016-06-22 18:40 Bewww: кк
2016-06-22 18:40 SherryCherry: и да
2016-06-22 18:40 SherryCherry: спейс попровь в тех моментах
2016-06-22 18:40 SherryCherry: где будешь фиксить
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удачки тебе o/
Bewww
53 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Bewww

SherryCherry wrote:

mod irc ღ
[url]2016-06-22 18:12 SherryCherry: ну я начу
2016-06-22 18:12 SherryCherry: пожалуй
2016-06-22 18:12 SherryCherry: 00:19:316 (4) -
2016-06-22 18:12 SherryCherry: вот этот звук
2016-06-22 18:12 SherryCherry: дольше остольных
2016-06-22 18:13 SherryCherry: как насчет продлить до даунбита
2016-06-22 18:14 SherryCherry: 00:27:909 (4) -
2016-06-22 18:14 SherryCherry: и этот тоже продлить
2016-06-22 18:14 SherryCherry: ты если не согласен
2016-06-22 18:14 SherryCherry: можешь сюда отвечать
2016-06-22 18:15 Bewww: я просто тут пока из головы не вылетело быстро исправляю критические моменты в этом
2016-06-22 18:15 Bewww: ACTION is editing Masahiro Ikariko - Sewers Surfin [Insane]
2016-06-22 18:15 Bewww: Буквально 1 минуту и начну сразу чекать
2016-06-22 18:16 SherryCherry: 00:43:183 (3) -
2016-06-22 18:16 SherryCherry: до белого хотя бы
2016-06-22 18:17 SherryCherry: 00:48:505 (5,6) -
2016-06-22 18:17 SherryCherry: не обязательно оверлапать было
2016-06-22 18:18 SherryCherry: 00:53:943 (11) -
2016-06-22 18:18 SherryCherry: тоже
2016-06-22 18:18 SherryCherry: он прямо на сриме лежит
2016-06-22 18:18 SherryCherry: и флоу хреновый
2016-06-22 18:19 SherryCherry: 00:58:884 (5,6) -
2016-06-22 18:19 SherryCherry: покрасивее можно
2016-06-22 18:19 SherryCherry: бланкетом к примеру
2016-06-22 18:20 SherryCherry: 01:02:590 (3,4,5) -
2016-06-22 18:21 SherryCherry: вот тут ты поменял флоу
2016-06-22 18:21 SherryCherry: а можно было продолжить треугольник
2016-06-22 18:21 SherryCherry: и стрим вывести поудобнее
2016-06-22 18:21 SherryCherry: а еще
2016-06-22 18:22 SherryCherry: можно было сделать треугольники с разным спейсом
2016-06-22 18:22 SherryCherry: по нарастающей
2016-06-22 18:22 SherryCherry: 01:05:237 (1) -
2016-06-22 18:22 SherryCherry: ctrl+g
2016-06-22 18:23 Bewww: так момент
2016-06-22 18:23 Bewww: стой
2016-06-22 18:23 Bewww: вопрос
2016-06-22 18:23 SherryCherry: 01:05:590 (3) - ctrl+h
2016-06-22 18:23 SherryCherry: м
2016-06-22 18:23 Bewww: 00:48:021 (1,2,3,4,5) -
2016-06-22 18:23 Bewww: ее просто ниже опустить надо правильно?
2016-06-22 18:24 SherryCherry: ее?
2016-06-22 18:24 Bewww: оверлап перекрытие же?
2016-06-22 18:24 SherryCherry: да вроде некритично
2016-06-22 18:24 Bewww: ну стрим со слайдером
2016-06-22 18:25 SherryCherry: 00:48:505 (5,6) -
2016-06-22 18:25 SherryCherry: ааа
2016-06-22 18:25 SherryCherry: ты про вот это?
2016-06-22 18:25 SherryCherry: ну да
2016-06-22 18:25 SherryCherry: 6 ниже бы
2016-06-22 18:25 SherryCherry: 01:05:502 (2,3) -
2016-06-22 18:25 SherryCherry: тоже не очень понятно
2016-06-22 18:26 SherryCherry: зачем
2016-06-22 18:26 SherryCherry: 01:05:943 (4,5,6,7) -
2016-06-22 18:26 SherryCherry: сделай его ровным
2016-06-22 18:26 SherryCherry: вверху вкладки
2016-06-22 18:26 SherryCherry: жмакаешь на вкладку редактор
2016-06-22 18:26 SherryCherry: и создать многоугольник
2016-06-22 18:27 SherryCherry: 01:10:708 (1,2,3) -
2016-06-22 18:27 SherryCherry: тоже подвинь от стрима
2016-06-22 18:27 SherryCherry: 01:17:061 (5) -
2016-06-22 18:27 SherryCherry: тоже аккруатнее можно
2016-06-22 18:28 SherryCherry: 01:30:825 (5) -
2016-06-22 18:28 SherryCherry: тоже
2016-06-22 18:29 SherryCherry: 01:34:178 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) -
2016-06-22 18:29 SherryCherry: вот этот стрим можно получше сделать
2016-06-22 18:29 SherryCherry: чтобы не налегал на на себя самого
2016-06-22 18:30 SherryCherry: 01:43:884 (9) -
2016-06-22 18:30 SherryCherry: не очень полнял, зачем пропустил тут
2016-06-22 18:30 SherryCherry: 01:45:472 (1,2,3,1) -
2016-06-22 18:30 SherryCherry: у тебя куча места
2016-06-22 18:30 SherryCherry: кс 4.2
2016-06-22 18:30 SherryCherry: лепить так
2016-06-22 18:30 SherryCherry: не вариант
2016-06-22 18:31 SherryCherry: 01:49:002 (2,3) - стакнуть можно
2016-06-22 18:31 SherryCherry: 01:49:531 (8,9) -
2016-06-22 18:31 SherryCherry: и их
2016-06-22 18:32 SherryCherry: 01:51:825 (7,8,9,10) -
2016-06-22 18:32 SherryCherry: тут тоже подвинь все
2016-06-22 18:33 SherryCherry: 01:58:178 (2) -
2016-06-22 18:33 SherryCherry: куча места
2016-06-22 18:33 SherryCherry: куда его можно засунуть
2016-06-22 18:33 SherryCherry: но ни как не на предыдущие 3 слайдера :D
2016-06-22 18:34 SherryCherry: 02:01:002 (1) - x 340 y 320
2016-06-22 18:34 SherryCherry: 02:03:825 (6) - я бы тут закончил стрим
2016-06-22 18:34 SherryCherry: просто слайдер бы поставил
2016-06-22 18:35 SherryCherry: черт
2016-06-22 18:35 SherryCherry: какой же классный сонг
2016-06-22 18:36 SherryCherry: 02:09:119 (3) - вниз его что ли
2016-06-22 18:36 SherryCherry: 02:11:237 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5) - не очень удачная идея напропускать здесь столько
2016-06-22 18:37 Bewww: Момент
2016-06-22 18:37 Bewww: я вот незнаю как 1 момент исправить
2016-06-22 18:37 Bewww: и
2016-06-22 18:37 SherryCherry: просто пропусти
2016-06-22 18:37 Bewww: А у меня уже от 12 часовых посидений глаза путаются >_<
2016-06-22 18:37 Bewww: ofc
2016-06-22 18:37 Bewww: ок
2016-06-22 18:37 SherryCherry: можешь еще хуже сделать))
2016-06-22 18:38 SherryCherry: 02:14:678 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - некрасиво он так
2016-06-22 18:38 SherryCherry: завернул
2016-06-22 18:38 SherryCherry: ну совсем
2016-06-22 18:39 SherryCherry: вот ты лоханулся
2016-06-22 18:39 SherryCherry: 1.00 св
2016-06-22 18:39 SherryCherry: ахах
2016-06-22 18:39 SherryCherry: я то думаю
2016-06-22 18:39 SherryCherry: чего так медленно
2016-06-22 18:39 SherryCherry: чекнул секцию
2016-06-22 18:39 SherryCherry: 1.74
2016-06-22 18:39 SherryCherry: 75
2016-06-22 18:39 Bewww: Так , ну ятогда лучше лога дождусь, и потом все осторожненько по полочкам разложу сделаю.
2016-06-22 18:39 Bewww: БЛЯ
2016-06-22 18:39 Bewww: у меня СВ 1
2016-06-22 18:39 Bewww: >_<
2016-06-22 18:39 Bewww: kjdf,jsldfkjs
2016-06-22 18:39 SherryCherry: )))))
2016-06-22 18:40 SherryCherry: ладненько
2016-06-22 18:40 Bewww: Так ладно я лога подожду
2016-06-22 18:40 SherryCherry: я думаю тут можно закончить
2016-06-22 18:40 SherryCherry: дальше ошибки повторяются
2016-06-22 18:40 Bewww: сейчас лучше реально не лезть
2016-06-22 18:40 SherryCherry: просто пересмотри все на свежую голову
2016-06-22 18:40 SherryCherry: да
2016-06-22 18:40 SherryCherry: я лог скину
2016-06-22 18:40 Bewww: кк
2016-06-22 18:40 SherryCherry: и да
2016-06-22 18:40 SherryCherry: спейс попровь в тех моментах
2016-06-22 18:40 SherryCherry: где будешь фиксить
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удачки тебе o/
Большую част исправил, где то пермаппал. С местом где мало замаппано, не знаю что делать. Не идут у меня идеи, прям хочется оставить просто эти нотки на Бэкграунд "Скрипку" если не ошибаюсь.
SnowNiNo_
Elite Mapper: Aspirant
2,106 posts
Joined April 2013
SnowNiNo_
M4M
  • [ANGEL DIMENSION]
  1. 00:11:750 (1) - make it nicer to symmetry with the y pixel, current slider isnt good
  2. 00:15:340 (4) - yea you could NC here
  3. 00:20:452 (1) - same this one
  4. 00:25:067 (7) - NC for SV change
  5. 00:28:804 - is the hs here necessary lol?
  6. 00:45:118 (9) - same here, NC for SV change
  7. 00:53:237 (9) - NC
  8. 01:04:531 (9) - NC here instead of 01:05:237 (1) - is better
  9. 01:15:119 (9) - NC
  10. 01:31:178 (1,2) - NC on 2 would be nicer
  11. well ill stop mentioning on NC, just make the NC on the long white tick except some for emphasizing ( stuff like this 01:46:708 (1,1,1) - )
  12. 02:11:237 - i would prefer stream here either, the 1/1 jumps isnt fit at this part(kiai) at all
  13. 02:19:355 (9) - well i dont prefer sth like this in kiai part, cuz kiai part is intense, and the slider like this dont really fit at here
  14. 02:20:237 (1) - and make the blanket nicer lol
  15. 02:49:708 (6) - ^
  16. 03:55:708 - same thing at this part either
  17. 05:10:531 (5,1,2,3) - spacing here is inconsistent with other streams, consider to make the spacing equal
  18. 05:12:913 (4,5,6) - same here
  19. 05:21:825 (2,5) - stack better
  20. 05:23:237 (1,2) - stream more fot at here, like wat you did at 05:22:531 (5,6,7,8,9) -
  21. 05:56:237 (11) - yap same thing here
  22. 05:59:413 (5,6) - not sure if you want to stack or not, but it's ugly
  23. 06:11:944 (12,13) - you could do a blanket here
  24. 06:22:531 (5,1) - stack better
  25. 06:50:897 (1) - make this more curve to have a nicer blanket
  26. 07:03:547 (3,4) - blanket can be improved
  27. 07:20:535 - try to slowly decreased the volume from here, the sound 07:25:595 - is way to loud
overall try to avoid linear flow in the map, cuz almost no player likes it =w=, and this map need a bit polish like blanket and especially NCs
GL on your map
Bewww
53 posts
Joined October 2012
Topic Starter
Bewww

SnowNiNo_ wrote:

M4M
  • [ANGEL DIMENSION]
  1. 00:11:750 (1) - make it nicer to symmetry with the y pixel, current slider isnt good
  2. 00:15:340 (4) - yea you could NC here
  3. 00:20:452 (1) - same this one
  4. 00:25:067 (7) - NC for SV change
  5. 00:28:804 - is the hs here necessary lol?
  6. 00:45:118 (9) - same here, NC for SV change
  7. 00:53:237 (9) - NC
  8. 01:04:531 (9) - NC here instead of 01:05:237 (1) - is better
  9. 01:15:119 (9) - NC
  10. 01:31:178 (1,2) - NC on 2 would be nicer
  11. well ill stop mentioning on NC, just make the NC on the long white tick except some for emphasizing ( stuff like this 01:46:708 (1,1,1) - )
  12. 02:11:237 - i would prefer stream here either, the 1/1 jumps isnt fit at this part(kiai) at all
  13. 02:19:355 (9) - well i dont prefer sth like this in kiai part, cuz kiai part is intense, and the slider like this dont really fit at here
  14. 02:20:237 (1) - and make the blanket nicer lol
  15. 02:49:708 (6) - ^
  16. 03:55:708 - same thing at this part either
  17. 05:10:531 (5,1,2,3) - spacing here is inconsistent with other streams, consider to make the spacing equal
  18. 05:12:913 (4,5,6) - same here
  19. 05:21:825 (2,5) - stack better
  20. 05:23:237 (1,2) - stream more fot at here, like wat you did at 05:22:531 (5,6,7,8,9) -
  21. 05:56:237 (11) - yap same thing here
  22. 05:59:413 (5,6) - not sure if you want to stack or not, but it's ugly
  23. 06:11:944 (12,13) - you could do a blanket here
  24. 06:22:531 (5,1) - stack better
  25. 06:50:897 (1) - make this more curve to have a nicer blanket
  26. 07:03:547 (3,4) - blanket can be improved
  27. 07:20:535 - try to slowly decreased the volume from here, the sound 07:25:595 - is way to loud
overall try to avoid linear flow in the map, cuz almost no player likes it =w=, and this map need a bit polish like blanket and especially NCs
GL on your map
so lazy... so i fix alot from this. and after so big time i think some parts should be remaped + i still fix flow and NC.
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