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Conagusuri - Hypno Apple!!

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Leorda
4,416 posts
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Topic Starter
Leorda
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 16 Juli 2011 at 17:01:32

Artist: Conagusuri
Title: Hypno Apple!!
Source: Touhou
Tags: lotus land story gensokyo elly stage 3 bad apple irus tokika zlodeuka
BPM: 137
Filesize: 8214kb
Play Time: 03:58
Difficulties Available:
  1. Hard (4,99 stars, 553 notes)
  2. Normal (3,14 stars, 231 notes)
Download: Conagusuri - Hypno Apple!!
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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This song is from Conagusuri. The original from Bad Apple!! from Touhou Gensokyo ~ Lotus Land Story. Me and ZLOdeuka are making a collab. Enjoy this song~

P.S. ZUN must revive Elly in Windows Touhou Game after Touhou 13 ~ Ten Desires

Progress
Normal : 100%
Hard : 100%
SB : 100%

Special Thanks
1) Dvorak (for give me a lyrics)
2) Senaya
3) Nivalis
4) NatsumeRin (Fuck yeahhhh)
5) Nante
6) Beuchi-chan (Mommy :3)
7) Sallad4ever
8) IceBeam
9) TTTTTTTTTTTT
10) Keccoh
11) Colin Hou (Futanari)
12) Andrea (ochuplayer111)
13) Gens
14) Zekira
Last edited by Leorda , edited 16 times in total.
dvorak_old
294 posts
Joined February 2010
dvorak_old
no time to play song now.

Download: hypno-apple-lyrics.zip
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda

dvorak wrote:

no time to play song now.
thx
ZLOdeuka-
1,442 posts
Joined June 2009
ZLOdeuka-
nice ~
I hope you enjoy it! Hard - in the process

Download: Conagusuri - Hypno Apple!! (Leorda) [ZLO-Normal].osu
ZLOdeuka-
1,442 posts
Joined June 2009
ZLOdeuka-
Tell me do you like my diffs when you'll look over them.

Download: Conagusuri - Hypno Apple!! (Leorda) [ZLO-hard].osu
senaya
osu! Alumni
5,798 posts
Joined March 2010
senaya
Oh, this voice~ I'm in love :)
Only suggestions this time.

[Normal]
00:46:723 (4) - would be nice if the slider tick sound here was also changed to clap to match the music flow.
01:03:146 (4) - move this to 01:02:927 and add a circle at 01:03:365 ? This might kill your pattern through..
01:15:847 (1) - end it at 01:16:723 and add a slider from 01:16:942 to 01:17:161 ?
03:23:292 (4) - same idea as before. move it to 03:23:073 and add a circle at 03:23:511 ?
03:45:409 (3) - again, slider ticks would be nice to change.
03:48:037 (1) - ^

[Hard]
Sweet stuff. I like it.

There were also some not-very-symmetrical sliders in [Norma]l but I thought it would be too nazi to point them out and ask to fix them. They are clearly visible so you can fix them when/if you want.
h3k1ru
osu! Alumni
1,910 posts
Joined March 2010
h3k1ru
so moe :oops:

but map a bit hard readable, coz of such notes: 01:53:183 (3) - , 01:53:402 (4) - 01:58:219 (5) - 01:58:438 (6) - ... and more, its have no any sense to music, looks like overmapping and forcing a rhytm for me

anyway, triple star from me, coz i like the song and sb too much :)
Kyonko Hizara
2,855 posts
Joined August 2010
Kyonko Hizara
:)
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda

h3k1ru wrote:

but map a bit hard readable, coz of such notes: 01:53:183 (3) - , 01:53:402 (4) - 01:58:219 (5) - 01:58:438 (6) - ... and more, its have no any sense to music, looks like overmapping and forcing a rhytm for me
no
ZLOdeuka-
1,442 posts
Joined June 2009
ZLOdeuka-
You should add me to tag? D:
_llkey_18
199 posts
Joined September 2009
_llkey_18
Awesome map ^.^
_llkey_18
199 posts
Joined September 2009
_llkey_18

ZLOdeuka wrote:

You should add me to tag? D:

yes, she should
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda

ZLOdeuka wrote:

You should add me to tag? D:
opss, i'll fix that

@_llkey_18 : I am not girl, I am boy, also, don't double post. Use edit next time~
Niva
Global Moderator
3,187 posts
Joined November 2009
Niva
Mod request via in-game chat

[General]
-> Add "Apple" to the tags? (current tags is Apple!!, I don't know whether the search engine can find this map if you typed the keyword "apple" or not)

[Normal]
00:28:329 (1) - Add finish at start?
00:43:876 (5) - Make this perfectly below (4), OR move two grids left
00:46:723 (4) - Maybe add some bezier curve?
SPOILER
01:02:927 (4) - Add clap?
01:20:883 (5,6,7) - Unstack? (ketindih (4) sebelumnya jadi agak aneh xD)
01:53:730 (3,4) - Not perfectly stacked (and this is easy to notice)
02:29:862 (4) - Remove whistle at the slider, and add clap at start + whistle at repeat?

[Hard]
00:39:716 (5) - Looks... weird in play mode. If you still want to keep this stacked, at least reduce the stack leniency.
01:10:154 (11) - Maybe remove clap?
01:52:635 (1) - Move whistle to (2)'s start?
02:29:205 (3) - Change this to slider wave instead? The current curve feels weird...
02:59:862 (3) - Add finish at start?
03:01:613 (3) - ^
03:37:197 (5,1) - Somehow I feel this don't fit the vocal...

Mostly suggestions
Star!
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda

Nivalis wrote:

Mod request via in-game chat

[General]
-> Add "Apple" to the tags? (current tags is Apple!!, I don't know whether the search engine can find this map if you typed the keyword "apple" or not)

[Normal]
00:28:329 (1) - Add finish at start?
00:43:876 (5) - Make this perfectly below (4), OR move two grids left
00:46:723 (4) - Maybe add some bezier curve?
SPOILER
[attachment=0:6a032]ahyes.png[/attachment:6a032]
01:02:927 (4) - Add clap?
01:20:883 (5,6,7) - Unstack? (ketindih (4) sebelumnya jadi agak aneh xD)
01:53:730 (3,4) - Not perfectly stacked (and this is easy to notice)
02:29:862 (4) - Remove whistle at the slider, and add clap at start + whistle at repeat?

[Hard]
00:39:716 (5) - Looks... weird in play mode. If you still want to keep this stacked, at least reduce the stack leniency.
01:10:154 (11) - Maybe remove clap?
01:52:635 (1) - Move whistle to (2)'s start?
02:29:205 (3) - Change this to slider wave instead? The current curve feels weird...
02:59:862 (3) - Add finish at start?
03:01:613 (3) - ^
03:37:197 (5,1) - Somehow I feel this don't fit the vocal...

Mostly suggestions
Star!
some few are fixed, thx
NatsumeRin
osu! Alumni
4,032 posts
Joined August 2009
NatsumeRin
Red: You must fix this.
Blue: You'd better do sth with this imo.
Green: Just suggestions.

[General]
offset:+8
better to add a diff between Normal and Hard. Normal has <2M score, but Hard has >12M. the difficulty has a gap too.

[Normal]
00:40:154 (1) - silence the first slidertick.
00:56:796 (1) - move this 1/2 earlier, then add a note at 00:57:672
00:57:891 (2) - remove clap at the beginning
01:50:227 (1,2) - i'm not a supporter for using jump in Normal = =|||, especially when it's the easiest diff.
01:52:854 (2,3) - ^
01:55:044 (1,2) - ^, also remove clap at the beginning
02:06:431 (1,2) - not perfect stacked.
02:11:905 (1,2) - ...jump
02:21:102 (3,4) - ^
02:23:949 (4,5) - ^
02:25:920 (1,2) - ^
03:51:978 (2,3) - ^

[Hard]
00:30:956 (1,2,3,4) - i'll suggest you this, not simply stack them. since the rhythm is not in a "repeat" feeling. you could do this at similar notes too.

01:02:927 - add a note?
01:13:876 (1) - touches HP bar..
02:07:745 (5) - move 1/4 earlier.
02:48:475 (1) - this part is boring, fuck yeah.
03:27:672 (1) - add a circle then start this spinner.
03:43:657 (3) - end this 1/4 earlier then add circles at 03:44:095 & 03:44:314
03:52:416 (4) - i guess you need a new combo
Leorda
4,416 posts
Joined June 2009
Topic Starter
Leorda
thx NatsumeRin for mod, fuck yeah
Reiji-RJ
1,402 posts
Joined April 2010
Reiji-RJ
Oh my...
I definetely love this.
Her voice is awesome >w<
nante
248 posts
Joined December 2009
nante
[General]
Timing sections aren't on thicks(1 or 2ms).

[Normal]
00:40:162 (1) - nazi: not simetrical. Move 3rd point 1 or even 2 grids down
02:11:913 (1) - distance(reverse selection and move a little to the right)
03:44:541 (1,2,3) - doesn't look nice


[Hard]
01:44:541 (4) - Im not sure if it's intentional, but it isn't a perfect line with 2 and 3


nice, star
Beuchi
osu! Alumni
2,288 posts
Joined February 2009
Beuchi
Hello~

Storyboard mod :3

Thoughts and Suggestions
- Add a new bg strobe at 01:24:395?
- I suggest you to start animating wave 01 from a place where the borders can't be seen. If you look to the bottom right corner when the image starts moving, you can see its border :c

Issues and Adjustments
- Remove the unnecesary transparency on black-cover.
- SAKURA BIG exceeds the max size for storyboard elements. Please resize it to, at least, 800x600px.
- Hmm is it just me or Lyrics 30 appears 1/2 later than it should?

Little normal mod :3

~Normal~
- I think this diff, even being nice for a Normal, needs some improvement to be nice as the easiest diff. There are lots of 1/2 streams and the spacing changes don't help at all, it makes it even more confusing.

Leorda
01:06:877 (1,2,3,4) - This will be probably better if you change it for a slider.
01:20:891 (5,6,7) - Same as above.

ZLOdeuka
01:50:235 (1,2) - Please... NO jumps on easier diffs!! ;_;
01:52:862 (2,3) - ^
01:55:052 (1,2) - ^
02:11:913 (1,2) - ^
02:21:110 (3,4) - ^

~Hard~

Leorda
03:17:826 (6) - This pause feels awkward >:
03:19:578 (6) - ^

ZLOdeuka
Not a real problem, but there are a lot of /random/ 1/4 notes stacked on sliders that don't really follow anything on the song...

02:12:461 (2) - Move 1/4 later?

Good luck with this :3
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