1. 4K Aria - 4Key (3.49 stars, 1069 notes)
2. 4K Easy - 4Key (1.33 stars, 325 notes)
3. 4K Hard - 4Key (2.66 stars, 818 notes)
4. 4K Normal - 4Key (1.8 stars, 530 notes)
5. 7K Goodbye - 7Key (4 stars, 1363 notes)
6. 7K Hard - 7Key (2.77 stars, 915 notes)
7. 7K Normal - 7Key (1.85 stars, 572 notes)
8. dissected hitsound, frankenstined keysound - 7Key (4.29 stars, 1448 notes)
9. Etlie and Usagi's 7K Easy - 7Key (1.29 stars, 318 notes)

FelipeLink wrote:

Hey usagi, m4m right? =p

Good Bye

I asked for tesplays in your map, and well, everyone says its really good and dont even know what they would change, even me i dont see why i would change any pattern, its really good!
The only thing that i just noticed is that you missed some sounds? (1/4 stream, piano)
Les go:
01:12:110 - add note
01:12:298 - add note
01:12:485 - add note
01:12:673 - add note
01:12:860 - add note
01:13:610 - add note // keep along this beat
01:13:798 - add note // ^
01:13:985 - add note // ^
01:14:173 - add note

Thats it.
This is probably intentional? but well, its your opnion i'm just suggesting ^^


i dont see any issues of consistency too, so go on =0
Sorry for the tiny mod ): its becuz your map is already too good )::[/box]

Good Luck ranking this ^^
i would shoot a star, but osu! website dont let me D::

Surono wrote:

lagu mainsetrum. dasar mengeropa :U


hmmmm~

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

bye bye, my doleful aria...

O-oooooooooo AAAAE-A-A-I-A-U-
JO-oooooooooooo AAE-O-A-A-U-U-A-
E-eee-ee-eee AAAAE-A-E-I-E-A-
JO-ooo-oo-oo-oo EEEEO-A-AAA-AAAA

O-oooooooooo AAAAE-A-A-I-A-U-
JO-oooooooooooo AAE-O-A-A-U-U-A-
E-eee-ee-eee AAAAE-A-E-I-E-A-
JO-ooo-oo-oo-oo EEEEO-A-AAA-AAAA

O-oooooooooo AAAAE-A-A-I-A-U-
JO-oooooooooooo AAE-O-A-A-U-U-A-
E-eee-ee-eee AAAAE-A-E-I-E-A-
JO-ooo-oo-oo-oo EEEEO-A-AAA-AAAA-

O--------------------


https://soundcloud.com/rechan-okurohana ... rainosotis

Kuo Kyoka wrote:

https://soundcloud.com/rechan-okurohana ... rainosotis

Draftnell wrote:

M4M = https://osu.ppy.sh/s/407186 ( req mod SB )

oke heree ~

[boxMOD][Nalie's 7k Easy]
nyaw :v
00:24:767 - umm is better >>> http://puu.sh/oC2QK/d1de15dcfd.jpg
00:54:392 (54392|5) - move to col 1 and then 00:54:767 (54767|1) - 00:54:767 (54767|1) - move to col 5
00:55:142 (55142|1) - move 4
00:59:267 (59267|5) - move 3 ?
01:36:017 (96017|2,96298|1,96579|0) - ctrl + J :v

GL Nalie's ><

[4k Easy]
01:00:767 (60767|3) - move 3 ?
01:50:642 (110642|2) - move 2 ? // keep
01:52:892 (112892|0) - ^ // this one too

[4k Normal]
01:48:392 (108392|2) - move 2 lel :v[/box]

ok itu aja deh dlu >< waktu gak cukup x.x ntar di lanjutin lagi

ZeroCalamity wrote:

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[box7k Good bye]00:03:017 (3017|2,3017|0,3767|6) - Flip horizontally, or change like this, or leave as it is, because pitch relevancy is ok for the piano notes, which is what it looks like you mapped. // good idea

00:11:985 (11985|3) - For left space players this will feel either very nice, if they have control, or they'll just do it as a chord, and get 300's anyway, simple change would be to just put it on the right hand and let more people experience it as not-a-chord (however the current one will be nicer for those who actually play it as it's mapped). // the grace is still on the left, but its should be easier now

00:16:329 - I'm pretty sure there should be a note here, if you put it, I recommend column 3 because you'll still have the separation from the next part that starts with 00:16:517 (16517|0). // i'll keep because its too faint

00:21:579 - Current is ok, but I think you could do more here by adding an SV here: 00:21:579 - 2,5x, then 00:21:673 - 0,4x, and back to 1 on 00:21:767. Another way to make it more interesting would be with either 00:21:579 - note in 2 and 00:21:673 - note in 3 or 1/8 stairs that start in 1 like so. // i got your idea, but in this case i would only use sv in wub part... xD

00:29:829 (29829|3) - I would move this note to 5, reason being, on stronger notes in songs/maps, I like to hit the keys harder, and I usually lift my fingers high up right before the strong notes, just like the chord on 00:30:017, so having a note on thumb makes it not comfortable to do, it kills the mood, so to say. I wouldn't bring this up, but this song is a song I'd really like to let my fingers "jam". // exactly, i'll move some notes with same idea

01:27:392 (87392|3,87392|1,87579|1,87579|3,87673|3,87673|1) - This is much harder than anything else in the map to read and is also quite uncomfortable, changing it to this would make it much more enjoyable (having the note in 3 go to 4 on my screenshot would be just as nice). // it just a prank brooooo, i unjack them

01:30:860 (90860|3,90860|6,90954|3,90954|6) - Even when memorised, these are very hard to hit, I suggest you move them to (this)this, or, if you want to keep the difficulty, a more comfortable pattern would be this. I also suggest, even though it would be the odd one out, changing the SV on 01:30:579 - to 1,4x, however, if you only change the pattern, it'll just have to be memorised, which is fine. The current one is really hard to not miss on, even when you know it's there. If you don't change the SV, I'd rather you picked the first pattern suggestion. // i'll keep the jack which its kinda nice to have mini jack in 160 bpm... i'll change the sv instead..

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[boxGeneral]I checked some of the other diffs and you seem to be missing some inherited sections, but you probably are already aware of this. However, I can't know if you'll add SVs on all of the diffs, or only the hardest 4k/7k. I would've liked to see easier SVs that scale up to the hardest ones, but okay. // im so lazy to set up timing section _(:3」∠)_

Patterns were good on the diffs I tested, bonus points in my book for using reverse LNs on 4k Aria.

If you add the SV on the short LNs on 00:21:579, add them on 4k as well. // i forgot hah

Good luck with ranking![/box]

Draftnell wrote:

M4M = https://osu.ppy.sh/s/407186 ( req mod SB )

oke heree ~

MOD

[Nalie's 7k Easy]
nyaw :v yawn v: Nelly ma twin wassup
00:24:767 - umm is better >>> http://puu.sh/oC2QK/d1de15dcfd.jpg changed
00:54:392 (54392|5) - move to col 1 and then 00:54:767 (54767|1) - 00:54:767 (54767|1) - move to col 5 Re-arranged but I keep my Jack pattern
00:55:142 (55142|1) - move 4
00:59:267 (59267|5) - move 3 ? Trying to keep hand balance here so not moving
01:36:017 (96017|2,96298|1,96579|0) - ctrl + J :v OKaysu

GL Nalie's ><

ok itu aja deh dlu >< waktu gak cukup x.x ntar di lanjutin lagi

ByeForNow wrote:

Hello M4M~

Please note these are only suggestions, always feel free to reject them!
If there's anything you don't understand, poke me when I'm around or message me, I'll try my best to explain
Mod is mostly pattern and pitch check
Otherwise, let's begin

Column 4K = |1|2|3|4|
Column 7K = |1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

Mod

Etile's 7K Easy

1. 00:04:142 (4142|6,4517|3) - Move to 1,2 accordingly? Gameplay feels better when it's chart to pitch of piano
2. 00:05:642 (5642|5) - move to 4? Having the same distance between each notes as 00:06:017 (6017|2,6392|4,6767|6) - Makes it go better with the flow
3. 00:07:517 (7517|5,8642|1) - Move to 1,6 accordingly? Correcting pitch
   If accepted, 00:07:142 (7142|0) - Move to 4? For spreading of notes
4. 01:15:017 (75017|6) - Maybe shift this LN to 5 and 01:15:767 - add an LN at this point? Maybe at 7? Just to keep it more interesting than just one LN
   01:18:017 - 01:42:017 - Is good in my opinion, no suggestion
5. 02:09:017 (129017|4) - Maybe start this LN at 02:08:267 - Instead? I think you placed there because it's for the very soft sound at 02:09:017 -
   But I think it's better to have it start at a more noticeable sound for new players

7K Normal

1. 00:03:767 (3767|3) - Move to 5? To have a more clearer emphasing on pitch for the piano sound
   If accepted, 00:04:517 (4517|4) - Move to 4 for better spread
2. 00:07:517 (7517|0,7517|1,7892|6,8267|4,8642|2,9017|0,9017|6,9767|0,10142|2,10517|6,10517|4,11267|3,11642|5,12017|4,12017|0,12767|5,12767|1,13517|6,13517|2) - Ctrl+H
   After changing, 00:07:517 (7517|5) - move to 5 for spread, 00:11:267 (11267|3,11642|1) - Ctrl+H and 00:12:017 (12017|2,12767|1,13517|0) - move one column to the right
   Correcting the pitch here to the bass piano and piano sound // badass.. applied
3. 00:15:392 (15392|2) - Move to 2? as the sound at that part is different from 00:15:017 (15017|2) -
4. 00:34:517 (34517|0,34892|2,35079|1,35267|0) - Move to 3,4,5,6 accordingly? Correcting pitch for the piano sounds
5. 00:36:579 - Add note for the 'click' sound probably at 2? Following 00:35:454 (35454|2,35829|1,36204|0) -
6. 01:09:767 (69767|5,69954|2,70142|5,70329|2) - Ctrl+H then Ctrl+G? A little more interesting than having same pattern as 01:09:017 (69017|5,69204|2,69392|5,69579|2) -
7. 01:12:017 - Add note for the cymbal? Suggestion:6, Because you used three notes for the similar sound
   at 01:15:017 (75017|2,75017|5,75017|0) - the third note probably for cymbal? // it was intentional to make it double, i only use triplets in the last downbeat
8. 01:13:517 - Add note for the cymbal? Suggestion:5, Same reason as above // keep
9. 01:15:767 (75767|6,76048|4) - Move one column to the left, after changing have 01:15:767 (75767|5) - as LN end at 01:15:767 (75767|5) - for the choir? // keep, check the time marker you put again
   If accepted, 01:15:017 (75017|5) - Move to 5 to prevent having same column as 01:15:767 (75767|5) - for spread

01:18:017 - 01:42:017 - Is good in my opinion, no suggestion
The rest are ok // alriht

4K Easy

Not quite much suggestion here cause it's pretty okay in my opinion

1. 00:04:142 (4142|3) - Move to 2? Going with the flow of 00:03:017 (3017|2,3392|1,3767|0) -
2. 00:07:517 (7517|2,7892|1) - Move to 1,3 accordingly? correcting piano pitch, creating a reversed pattern of 00:06:767 (6767|3,7142|1) - too for better spread
3. 01:15:767 - Add another LN here? Keeping it interesting rather than having one LN

4K Normal

1. 00:06:392 (6392|1,6767|2,7142|3) - Ctrl+G? Correcting pitch of piano
2. 00:08:267 (8267|2,8642|1) - Ctrl+G? Correcting pitch too
3. 00:09:767 (9767|0) - Move to 4? Correcting pitch, again
   I came to realise you're mapping to the bass piano sound which works too but I would map it to the treble piano sounds // lel
4. 00:37:517 (37517|1) - Move to 3? Better spread
5. 00:39:767 (39767|0) - Move to 4 and 00:40:142 (40142|1,40329|0) - Ctrl+G? Correcting pitch
6. 00:45:017 (45017|0) - Move to 4? Creating similar pattern of 00:45:392 (45392|2,45579|0) -
7. 01:02:829 (62829|0) - Move to 2? Creating similar pattern of 01:03:204 (63204|0,63392|1) - // keep this one
8. 01:09:767 (69767|3,69954|1,70142|3,70329|1) - Move one column to the left? A little more interesting than having same pattern as 01:09:017 (69017|3,69204|1,69392|3,69579|1) -
9. 01:11:642 - Add note here? Suggestion:4 Having a more powerful starting of 01:12:017 -

01:18:017 - 01:42:017 - Is good in my opinion, no suggestion too

1. 01:50:079 (110079|0) - Move to 3? Same sound as 01:50:267 - // TRILL HNGGG... ok
2. 01:53:079 (113079|2,113173|1,113267|0) - Arrange 2,1,2 accordingly? 01:53:079 - Sounds the same as 01:53:267 -

4K Hard

1. 00:08:267 (8267|1,8642|2) - Move to 1,4 accordingly? To have different pattern from 00:07:517 (7517|1,7892|2) -
2. 00:09:392 - Add note? Suggestion:2 Missing piano sound
3. 00:33:392 - 00:34:517 - Try this? Correcting piano pitch // i'll keep this to differentiate with normal & insane
4. 00:37:142 (37142|0,37329|1,37517|2) - Move to 3,1,2 accordingly? Better spread
5. 00:40:329 (40329|2) - Move to 4? Might be odd because it creates a mini jack but I think it should be fine because at 00:40:517 - it's like a sudden loud noise so maybe to have a sudden jack too to fit with mood?

01:10:517 - 01:11:642 - Really well done

1. 01:18:017 - 01:18:767 - Try this? I prefer 01:18:017 - and 01:18:392 - to have LNs instead of normal notes for that uh... wave sound? LN plays them out better in my opinion // hmm.. alright, using different pattern but i got your idea
2. 01:52:892 - 01:53:267 - Try this? Can't really tell the use of jump for 01:53:267 - // silly me
   referred to 01:50:079 (110079|0,110079|2,110173|1,110267|2) -

4K Aria

1. 00:15:017 (15017|0,15204|1,15392|2) - Ctrl+G? Going with the flow of 00:15:579 (15579|3,15767|2,15954|1,16142|0) -
2. 00:16:329 - Add note? Suggestion:2 Missing piano sound // i make all diffs empty in this spot.. keep C:
3. 00:29:829 (29829|0) - Move to 3? Don't really like the idea of trill 00:29:548 (29548|1,29642|0,29735|1,29829|0,29923|1) - // exactly
   since you didn't use trill at 00:28:704 (28704|3,28798|2,28892|1,28985|2,29079|1,29173|0) -
4. 00:40:892 (40892|2) - Move to 2 and 00:41:267 (41267|3) - Move to 3? Correcting pitch of piano // keep the 2nd
5. 00:44:829 - Intentional missing 'click' sound? More of this :
   00:45:767 - 00:46:892 - 00:47:642 - 00:51:954 - 00:52:329 - 00:53:454 -
   00:53:829 - 00:54:204 - 00:56:454 - 00:57:954 - 00:58:329 - 00:58:892 - 00:59:642 -
   01:03:954 - 01:04:329 - 01:05:454 - 01:05:829 - // most of them are intentionally empty, i added some
6. 02:06:392 (126392|2) - Move to 1? The trill don't really go well in my opinion because that part didn't really make sense to have trill

Good luck~! Take my starrrrrrr

[-Star_Lenz-] wrote:

Hi Senpai ajee -w-

Req mod from chat

Col : 1|2|3|4|5|6|7|8|9|

4K Easy
00:10:517 (10517|0) - move col 4 // 1 is good enough to emphasize low vocal
00:11:642 - Why NOT given note ? add note // my bad lol
00:12:767 - add note col 1 , 1 - 4
00:29:267 (29267|3) - Just make LN, stop LN 00:30:017 - // ok
00:36:017 (36017|1,36392|0) - ctrl+g 00:37:142 (37142|2,37329|1,37517|0) - the opposite of this xD lel /// o3o i won't use reversed pr, keep
01:04:517 (64517|1) - move note col 3&4
01:15:017 (75017|0) - move col 2 // added something instead
01:30:767 (90767|3,90767|0,91517|0) - ctrl+h
01:51:579 (111579|1,111767|0) - ctrl+g
02:03:017 (123017|1) - move col 4 balanced left hand =w=

4K Normal
00:13:517 - add note
00:18:204 (18204|1,18392|2) - ctrl+g and 00:18:767 (18767|2,19142|1) - ctrl+g //meep, keep
00:21:767 - add note
00:51:392 (51392|3) - move to 00:51:017 - // ts for vocal, keep
01:05:642 (65642|2) - move col 4 balanced left hand // keep

01:14:267 (74267|2,74642|1,75017|1) - ctrl+g
01:24:767 - add note // keep
01:36:767 - ^ // keep

4K Hard
00:12:017 - add note same as 00:10:517 - & 00:13:517 (13517|0,13517|1) -
00:28:517 (28517|1) - move col 4 // nope, keep
00:46:329 - add note, same as 00:44:829 -
00:48:954 (48954|3,49048|2,49142|1) - ctrl+g // keep
01:18:767 - add note // keep
01:35:829 - add note same as 01:35:829 - // lol nice catch, added

Sorry if mod less detail :'3