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Kano - Stella-rium

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vick
260 posts
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Topic Starter
vick
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on martes, 02 de febrero de 2016 at 07:53:01 p.m.

Artist: Kano
Title: Stella-rium
Source: Houkago no Pleiades
BPM: 177
Filesize: 2838kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (1,92 stars, 109 notes)
  2. Hard (3,26 stars, 231 notes)
  3. Insane (4,28 stars, 294 notes)
  4. Normal (2,04 stars, 156 notes)
  5. Shiawase (5,04 stars, 335 notes)
Download: Kano - Stella-rium
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Last edited by vick , edited 67 times in total.
P A N
2,346 posts
Joined December 2011
P A N
IRC

SPOILER
08:55 TotoiZn: P A N, can i ask you for a testplay please ? :)
08:55 P A N: yup
08:55 *TotoiZn is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/777062 Kano - Stella-rium]
08:57 P A N: wait
08:57 TotoiZn: yeah, no problem !
09:02 TotoiZn: wow
09:02 P A N: hmm
09:02 P A N: quiet good
09:04 TotoiZn: thank you !
09:05 P A N: 00:30:107 (3,4) - 
09:05 P A N: too hard to read
09:05 P A N: should unstack
09:05 P A N: don't stack perfectly
09:05 TotoiZn: hmm
09:05 TotoiZn: okay
09:05 TotoiZn: i'll change it
09:06 P A N: and your kick slider pattern
09:06 P A N: kinda random to me
09:06 P A N: like 00:51:124 (1,2,3,4) - 
09:07 TotoiZn: how can i change it ?
09:07 TotoiZn: i mean
09:07 TotoiZn: just change the pattern ?
09:07 P A N: maybe http://puu.sh/k0hgf/2687e5f373.jpg
09:08 P A N: or http://puu.sh/k0hiC/db432983be.jpg
09:08 P A N: anything
09:08 TotoiZn: 01:12:819 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -
09:08 TotoiZn: and this ?
09:08 TotoiZn: its okay ?
09:08 P A N: noo
09:08 P A N: looks random
09:08 P A N: I almost miss that
09:08 P A N: change those too
09:09 TotoiZn: okay !
09:09 P A N: 01:20:107 (3,5,7) - can be faster faster and faster
09:09 P A N: on each slider
09:09 TotoiZn: thank you for everything
09:09 P A N: to emphasis the song better
09:09 P A N: and add new combo too
09:09 TotoiZn: maybe
09:09 TotoiZn: 1.20sv ?
09:09 TotoiZn: i dont want it to be much faster
09:11 P A N: then
09:11 P A N: 01:20:785 (5) - 1.1
09:11 P A N: 01:21:463 (7) - 1.2
09:12 P A N: but 1.2 and 1.4 are emphasis better tho
09:12 P A N: but if you don't want them to be much faster then just 1.1 1.2
09:12 TotoiZn: thanks for that, i will change the other pattern and submit again
09:13 P A N: yepp..
09:14 TotoiZn: done
09:14 TotoiZn: can u try one more time please ?
09:17 TotoiZn: hm
09:17 P A N: mhmm
09:17 TotoiZn: hmmmmm
09:17 TotoiZn: no joke
09:18 TotoiZn: haha
09:18 P A N: 01:12:819 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - 
09:18 TotoiZn: 01:12:819 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
09:18 P A N: need to be clear
09:18 TotoiZn: im still not sure about that
09:18 TotoiZn: yeah
09:18 P A N: and 01:14:175 (1) - is too close
09:18 P A N: 01:20:615 (1,2) - swap NC
09:18 P A N: nc on slider instead
09:18 P A N: 01:21:293 (1,2) - same
09:20 TotoiZn: http://puu.sh/k0hSV/7d90fbed15.jpg
09:20 TotoiZn: like this ?
09:21 TotoiZn: and then
09:21 TotoiZn: http://puu.sh/k0hVB/e8ad6749c7.jpg
09:21 TotoiZn: i submit again, i think its better now
09:23 TotoiZn: hm.. i dont know
09:24 TotoiZn: so hard to map PAN, teach mee T.T
09:25 P A N: mhmm
09:25 P A N: tbh
09:26 P A N: [http://puu.sh/k0ibP/135080f36a.jpg this] rhythm is better
09:26 P A N: and make jump for those four circles
09:27 P A N: kick slider doesn't fit there
09:27 TotoiZn: yeah, you're right lol
09:27 TotoiZn: how i didnt notice
09:27 P A N: wew
09:28 TotoiZn: thank you !
09:28 P A N: 01:24:514 (5,6) - bigger spacing please
09:28 TotoiZn: just 01:24:514 (5,6) -
09:28 P A N: yep
09:28 TotoiZn: or 01:24:175 (4,5,6) -
09:28 P A N: 01:24:514 (5,6) - 
09:29 P A N: those small spacing annoying me
09:29 TotoiZn: okay
09:29 TotoiZn: haha okay !
09:29 TotoiZn: fixed
09:31 TotoiZn: i think its ok now
09:31 TotoiZn: i change this
09:31 TotoiZn: 00:12:480 (3,4) -
09:31 TotoiZn: it was to close
09:32 P A N: nah up to you
09:32 P A N: that part already fine to me
09:33 TotoiZn: its almost the same
09:33 TotoiZn: i move it a little
Yuii-
2,503 posts
Joined July 2013
Yuii-
Esto se ve interesante, ahora.
vick
260 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
vick
Esto va a ser ranked, te lo aseguro
Starset
652 posts
Joined April 2015
Starset
IRC mod:

SPOILER
19:37 *HB24 is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/776297 Kano - Stella-rium]
19:37 HB24: u have a gap between normal and hard
19:38 HB24: should lower the sv of the hard
19:41 HB24: 00:49:768 (1,1,2,3,4) -
19:41 HB24: this overlap here...
19:41 HB24: u should make that part more readable
19:42 HB24: 00:55:022 (6,1) -
19:42 HB24: these 2 are close to each other
19:42 HB24: 00:57:734 (7,1) -
19:42 HB24: when here its not the same situation
19:43 HB24: 01:07:226 (1) - i feel like it breaks the flow
19:45 HB24: moving to the hard
19:45 HB24: 00:05:022 - missing note here?
19:46 HB24: 00:26:548 - same here
19:47 HB24: 00:35:361 (2,3) - dont begin sliders on red lines when there is no reason to it
19:48 HB24: 01:06:887 (5) - same here
19:49 HB24: 01:07:226 (6) - make it like this http://puu.sh/ki5GE/7c80ead39d.jpg i think its better
19:51 HB24: moving to the normal
19:51 HB24: i think SV is pretty high for a normal
19:51 HB24: and
19:51 HB24: SV changing in normal and easy diffs are unrankable
19:53 HB24: u have also one DS error check it in ai mod
19:54 HB24: same thing for the easy u changed the SV
19:55 HB24: NEW PLAYERS get confused easily so put urself in their situation
19:55 HB24: thats all i have to say gud luck with ur map
vick
260 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
vick
Thanks HB24 :D
-Atri-
3,047 posts
Joined March 2013
-Atri-
#modreqs, i love this song so i come here

General

  1. I just ran though the metadata, so i fix somewhat (And somehow all diffs but Pleiades diff have no sources, please fix them all)
    *
    Unicode artist: 鹿乃
    Romanized artist: Kano
    Source: 放課後のプレアデス
    Move "Houkago no Pleiades" to tags
  2. Lack of hitsounds on all diffs, try to put claps on every 2 white ticks starting on 00:06:717 - to 00:16:548 - , 00:28:412 - to 00:37:904 - and 00:44:683 - to outro
  3. I found you don't use custom colors, so i desired to get some colors based on character's color:
    code
    Combo1 : 36,26,132
    Combo2 : 11,181,244
    Combo3 : 252,109,227
    Combo4 : 232,191,253
    Combo5 : 250,238,129
    Please change those on all difficulties , Just in case you don't know how to change the color code on notepad: File > open osu. in notepad, then goes to "colours" and replace with the code above

Hard

  1. According to autoMod: there's a duplicated timing point at 00:28:073 - remove the unnecessary timing points

Pleiades

  1. I don't found it's necessary to use slider tick rate as "2" , "1" is enough
  2. According to autoMod: there's a duplicated timing point at 00:06:378 - remove the unnecessary timing points
  3. There so much hitsounds need to be added, I won't fix other diffs because i am so lazy
    SPOILER
    1. Please add finish on the followings, i can heard crush here, some of them are for strong notes:
      00:00:955 (1,2) - (All)
      00:03:666 (1,2) - (All)
      00:05:192 (1,2) -
      00:06:378 (1) - (Start of slider, or "Head")
      00:11:802 (1) - (Head)
      00:17:226 (1) - (Head)
      00:26:887 (1,2) - (Both head)
      00:38:921 (1) - (Head)
      00:44:344 (1) - (Head)
      00:47:056 (1) - (Head)
      00:49:768 (5) - (Turn this into a circle, i think the slider tick are too much there)
      00:52:480 (1) - (Head)
      01:01:971 (5) - (End of slider, or "Tail")
      01:03:327 (1) - (Head, addition "soft")
      01:07:226 (1) - (Head)
      01:11:463 (1) -
      01:14:175 (1) - (Head)
      01:19:599 (11) -
      01:20:107 (3) - (Head)
      01:20:785 (1) - (Head)
      01:21:463 (1) - (Head)
      01:24:853 (6) -
    2. Add whistle to following notes, i don't know where should i put them so please don't blame me:
      00:05:870 (3) -
      00:38:582 (7) - (Tail)
    3. Change to "drum" sampleset of the followings? It just my opinion.
      00:38:073 (3,4,5,6,7) -
      00:43:836 (6,7,8) -
      00:51:124 (1,2,3,4,5) -
      01:02:649 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - (Head on slider)
      01:12:819 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -
      01:18:921 (3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11) -
    4. Change to "Normal" sampleset
      00:19:938 (1) -
      00:22:649 (1) -
      00:25:361 (1) -
      01:06:887 (6) - (Head)
    5. Add clap to following:
      00:19:938 (1) - (Head)
      00:22:649 (1) - (Head)
      00:25:361 (1) - (Head)
      00:26:717 (3) -
      00:27:565 (3,4,5) -
      01:23:666 (1,2,3,4,5) - (Head on all sliders) ?
      Please refer to "General"
  4. 00:19:429 (5,7) - Remove? I don't think that supposed to be there if you're following the vocals
  5. 00:21:802 (4,5,6,7,8) - I don't know are you following vocals, maybe start to follow the guitar sounds instead of adding random notes (Circles)?
  6. 00:49:768 (5) - I mentioned this at Hitsound suggestions, those slider ticks are too overhelming at there, turn into circles

Since you're a new mapper, i have to underline some text to make you easier to understand, if you still don't understand above, try to find more modders to explain, i can't mod that much.

Good luck~
vick
260 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
vick
Thanks KuranteMelodii, here is my reply

KuranteMelodii
#modreqs, i love this song so i come here

General

I just ran though the metadata, so i fix somewhat (And somehow all diffs but Pleiades diff have no sources, please fix them all) Fixed!
*
Lack of hitsounds on all diffs, try to put claps on every 2 white ticks starting on 00:06:717 - to 00:16:548 - , 00:28:412 - to 00:37:904 - and 00:44:683 - to outro I'm gonna change this, i'll need some help from Yuii- so, when he can, I will fix this :D
I found you don't use custom colors, so i desired to get some colors based on character's color:

code

Please change those on all difficulties , Just in case you don't know how to change the color code on notepad: File > open osu. in notepad, then goes to "colours" and replace with the code above Fixed!(And thank you)


Hard

According to autoMod: there's a duplicated timing point at 00:28:073 - remove the unnecessary timing points Fixed!


Pleiades

I don't found it's necessary to use slider tick rate as "2" , "1" is enough Fixed!
According to autoMod: there's a duplicated timing point at 00:06:378 - remove the unnecessary timing points Fixed!
There so much hitsounds need to be added, I won't fix other diffs because i am so lazy
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00:19:429 (5,7) - Remove? I don't think that supposed to be there if you're following the vocals Fixed!
00:21:802 (4,5,6,7,8) - I don't know are you following vocals, maybe start to follow the guitar sounds instead of adding random notes (Circles)? I like how that fits with the song
00:49:768 (5) - I mentioned this at Hitsound suggestions, those slider ticks are too overhelming at there, turn into circles Changed the pattern


Since you're a new mapper, i have to underline some text to make you easier to understand, if you still don't understand above, try to find more modders to explain, i can't mod that much.

Good luck~ Thank you so much ! ♥
chucentry
401 posts
Joined April 2013
chucentry
Hi totoIZN

Insane
2015-10-10 15:09 TotoiZn: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/775819 Kano - Stella-rium]
2015-10-10 15:09 TotoiZn: lo podes probar ?
2015-10-10 15:09 chucentry: ok
2015-10-10 15:11 TotoiZn: le cambie un par de cosas, creo que quedo mejor
2015-10-10 15:24 chucentry: 00:10:785 (2,3,4) -
2015-10-10 15:24 chucentry: tal vez al reves
2015-10-10 15:24 chucentry: osea q seal slider y triple
2015-10-10 15:26 chucentry: 00:16:717 (6,7,8,1) - nose si aca la distancia es la misma pero si no lo es hace q sea la misma en la q hace el caminito
2015-10-10 15:26 TotoiZn: si puede ser, suena bastante mejor
2015-10-10 15:27 chucentry: 00:24:683 (4,5,6,7) - tal vez dos sliders
2015-10-10 15:27 chucentry: nsoe es como mucho ruido para larte esa lentita
2015-10-10 15:28 TotoiZn: puse un slider
2015-10-10 15:28 TotoiZn: y 2 circulos
2015-10-10 15:28 chucentry: ok
2015-10-10 15:28 chucentry: 00:43:836 (6,7,8,1) - te juro q para mi esto es un stream
2015-10-10 15:28 chucentry: pero no esta mal lo q hciiste
2015-10-10 15:29 TotoiZn: vos decis ?
2015-10-10 15:29 TotoiZn: a ver, voy a intentar para ver como queda
2015-10-10 15:29 chucentry: 00:46:548 (5,6) - esto para misuena mejor si fuese nota slider q slider nota
2015-10-10 15:29 chucentry: fijate sino deja
2015-10-10 15:30 chucentry: 00:49:090 (3) - mepa q overmapped
2015-10-10 15:30 chucentry: 00:51:124 (1,2,3,4,5) - esto esta bien pero fijate si te gusta esto solo fijate
2015-10-10 15:31 chucentry: http://puu.sh/kFnRP/f61b27f7e4.jpg]
2015-10-10 15:32 TotoiZn: banca
2015-10-10 15:32 TotoiZn: no se que le pasa al osu
2015-10-10 15:32 TotoiZn: no puedo abrir links
2015-10-10 15:32 TotoiZn: dame un seg que reinicio
2015-10-10 15:34 TotoiZn: estoy
2015-10-10 15:34 TotoiZn: pasame el puush otra vez
2015-10-10 15:35 chucentry: http://puu.sh/kFnRP/f61b27f7e4.jpg
2015-10-10 15:35 chucentry: 00:56:378 (6,1,2,3,4,5) -
2015-10-10 15:35 chucentry: esto mmm
2015-10-10 15:35 chucentry: 00:56:378 (6,1) - talvez q sea triple
2015-10-10 15:35 chucentry: 00:56:887 (2,3,4) - este triple esta mal q empieze aca ysea triple 00:57:056 (4,5) -
2015-10-10 15:36 chucentry: 00:59:938 (3) - stak en 4 en vez de dos
2015-10-10 15:36 chucentry: lo de arriba nsoe es medio subjetivo muy subjetivo ↑
2015-10-10 15:37 chucentry: 01:04:683 (1,2) - holy shit its overmapped
2015-10-10 15:37 TotoiZn: banca banca
2015-10-10 15:37 TotoiZn: te van a mutear
2015-10-10 15:37 TotoiZn: 01:04:683 (1,2,3) -
2015-10-10 15:37 TotoiZn: ahi sinceramente hice eso porque no se me ocurria nada
2015-10-10 15:38 chucentry: eso es cuando es MUUUUY RAPIDO MUUCHAS COSAS COMO SE SESES de ayer
2015-10-10 15:38 chucentry: vos tambien me re emocionaste gato
2015-10-10 15:38 chucentry: 01:05:192 (3) - empeize en 01:05:022 -
2015-10-10 15:40 chucentry: 01:08:073 (4,5) - q sea slider nota
2015-10-10 15:41 chucentry: 00:08:073 (2,3) - aca tamb ☻4
vick
260 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
vick
Thanks chucenTRY ♥♥♥
Gear
148 posts
Joined November 2012
Gear
Hi, from #modreq cause I have homework to do but I rather procrastinate and mod a map.

[General]

Try and make the background 1366x768, it's 1322x768 right now. I did it right here for you: http://puu.sh/kHeFZ/91ee17318e.jpg
Check your normal mode difficulty, it's full of unsnapped objects, etc. (Ctrl+Shift+A)
No hitsounds? *^*

[Easy]

to be honest, i think the easy mode needs to be remapped, or at least made cleaner ^^" like, lots of patterns are messy and could probably confuse beginner players.
parts such as:
00:05:192 (2,3,4)
01:14:175 (1,2,1)
also 01:22:310 (1,1,1,1) - shouldn't be all NC

I think you can fix this by using a higher distance snap probably? everything feels so cluttered :o

[Normal]
I think the AR should be raised, since Hard has AR8 and Normal has AR3, it's a HUGE jump. the spread currently goes from 2 > 3 > 8 > 9, maybe make Normal 5 or 4.5

00:05:531 (2,3) - I know (3) slows down, but I think you should have some space between them both cause it could be confusing
00:26:717 (2,3,4,5,6) - ahh, this will be too hard for normal, and the jump from 00:25:361 (1) to (2) is too big.
00:40:277 (1,2,1,2) - these could be made neater
00:58:582 (2,4) - i'd avoid the overlap (2 over 4)
01:07:734 (4,5) - having the (5) touching the repeat arrow might be confusing as well


[Hard]

00:06:378 (2) - I'd NC this, since the slider velocity changes
00:24:005 (4,5) - make (5) farther from (4) like 00:20:446 (2,3)

also i don't get why 00:28:073 - 00:33:497 uses 0.8x slider velocity, it doesn't feel like the music is slower or quieter unlike 00:38:921
plus Insane doesn't use 0.8x there as well

00:58:582 (1) - remove NC
01:01:293 (1) - ^


[Insane]

00:43:497 (5) - i would make this into two circles and have NC start on 00:43:666 cus drum
00:49:768 (5) - i'd make this farther away from the previous slider like http://puu.sh/kHfIQ/2d0474fde1.jpg to emphasize the strong beat

Also, the triplets in the first half of the chorus 00:52:819 (2,3,4) / 00:55:022 (6) / 00:57:056 (3,4,5) feel random to me since the second half of the chorus doesn't use any

01:19:599 (11) - NC dis, remove NC on this 01:19:768 (1) maybe
01:24:175 (4) - i would NC this as since the previous pattern were 1/4 sliders and 01:24:175 (4,5,6) is just a 1/1 tap pattern

zzz sorry for short mod, I don't have much time. I just think in general patterns could be made neater.
Gl with the set~
vick
260 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
vick
Thanks for the mod Gear, I will answer everything when I get home :D
vick
260 posts
Joined August 2014
Topic Starter
vick
Thanks for the mod Gear here is my reply

Gear
Hi, from #modreq cause I have homework to do but I rather procrastinate and mod a map.Hi !

[General]

Try and make the background 1366x768, it's 1322x768 right now. I did it right here for you: http://puu.sh/kHeFZ/91ee17318e.jpg Thank you :D
Check your normal mode difficulty, it's full of unsnapped objects, etc. (Ctrl+Shift+A) I dont know what happened here but... fixed
No hitsounds? *^*

[Easy]

to be honest, i think the easy mode needs to be remapped, or at least made cleaner ^^" like, lots of patterns are messy and could probably confuse beginner players.
parts such as:
00:05:192 (2,3,4)
01:14:175 (1,2,1)
also 01:22:310 (1,1,1,1) - shouldn't be all NC I'm going to think on a remap... im not sure EDIT: Remaped some parts

I think you can fix this by using a higher distance snap probably? everything feels so cluttered :o

[Normal]
I think the AR should be raised, since Hard has AR8 and Normal has AR3, it's a HUGE jump. the spread currently goes from 2 > 3 > 8 > 9, maybe make Normal 5 or 4.5 Fixed to 4.5

00:05:531 (2,3) - I know (3) slows down, but I think you should have some space between them both cause it could be confusing Fixed
00:26:717 (2,3,4,5,6) - ahh, this will be too hard for normal, and the jump from 00:25:361 (1) to (2) is too big.Fixed (Changed the pattern)
00:40:277 (1,2,1,2) - these could be made neater Fixed
00:58:582 (2,4) - i'd avoid the overlap (2 over 4) I think its okay
01:07:734 (4,5) - having the (5) touching the repeat arrow might be confusing as well Fixed


[Hard]

00:06:378 (2) - I'd NC this, since the slider velocity changes
00:24:005 (4,5) - make (5) farther from (4) like 00:20:446 (2,3)

also i don't get why 00:28:073 - 00:33:497 uses 0.8x slider velocity, it doesn't feel like the music is slower or quieter unlike 00:38:921
plus Insane doesn't use 0.8x there as well

00:58:582 (1) - remove NC
01:01:293 (1) - ^ Fixed everything !


[Insane]

00:43:497 (5) - i would make this into two circles and have NC start on 00:43:666 cus drum Fixed
00:49:768 (5) - i'd make this farther away from the previous slider like http://puu.sh/kHfIQ/2d0474fde1.jpg to emphasize the strong beat Fixed

Also, the triplets in the first half of the chorus 00:52:819 (2,3,4) / 00:55:022 (6) / 00:57:056 (3,4,5) feel random to me since the second half of the chorus doesn't use any I think they are ok

01:19:599 (11) - NC dis, remove NC on this 01:19:768 (1) maybe Hmm... i think its ok now
01:24:175 (4) - i would NC this as since the previous pattern were 1/4 sliders and 01:24:175 (4,5,6) is just a 1/1 tap pattern Fixed

zzz sorry for short mod, I don't have much time. I just think in general patterns could be made neater.
Gl with the set~ Thank you so much !
sval001
34 posts
Joined June 2014
sval001
La frec. de tick cambiala a 1 en la sección timing.

[ Easy]

Debes quitar todos los cambios de velocidad que has hecho con las líneas verdes a los sliders, en Easy creo que no es rankeable si lo dejas así (me refiero a los multiplicadores de velocidad). Eso no quita que los puedas utilizar para cambiar el volumen/samples por ejemplo.

00:05:022 (2,3) - Creo que sería más fácil el ritmo así: Imagen
00:06:717 (1,3) - (1) tapa a (3) antes de desaparecer. Intenta que no se solapen nunca en Easy y normal de esta forma.
00:25:361 (1) - Mmmm, ese retroceso en el tick azul no me gusta nada... como había dicho antes, creo que sería mejor asi, incluyendo lo que viene después también: Imagen

Y en general creo que debes mejorar la estética de los sliders, casi todo son líneas rectas o un solo punto de ancla. Supongo que te habrá resultado difícil debido al poco slider velocity (me refiero a que esto por ejemplo queda un poco mal Ejemplo), pero nose, hacer cosas como estas por ejemplo 00:59:260 (1,2,3) - Imagen sí que se pueden hacer. Podrías aún así aumentar el SV a 0,9 para hacer esto más fácilmente.

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00:56:548 (3) - Creo que este ritmo es mucho mejor Imagen
01:04:683 (3) - ^
01:18:243 (3) - ^
01:19:599 (2,3,4) - Ponlos en el tick blanco que es donde más sentido tiene.
01:06:039 (1,2,3,4,5) - Imagen
vick
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vick
Thanks for the mod sval001, here is my reply (Spanish)

sval001
La frec. de tick cambiala a 1 en la sección timing. Arreglado

[ Easy]

Debes quitar todos los cambios de velocidad que has hecho con las líneas verdes a los sliders, en Easy creo que no es rankeable si lo dejas así (me refiero a los multiplicadores de velocidad). Eso no quita que los puedas utilizar para cambiar el volumen/samples por ejemplo. Arreglado

00:05:022 (2,3) - Creo que sería más fácil el ritmo así: ImagenCreo que esta bien ahora
00:06:717 (1,3) - (1) tapa a (3) antes de desaparecer. Intenta que no se solapen nunca en Easy y normal de esta forma. Lo cambie, pero no exactamente a como me mostraste vos, creo que quedo mejor ahora :)
00:25:361 (1) - Mmmm, ese retroceso en el tick azul no me gusta nada... como había dicho antes, creo que sería mejor asi, incluyendo lo que viene después también: Imagen Arreglado

Y en general creo que debes mejorar la estética de los sliders, casi todo son líneas rectas o un solo punto de ancla. Supongo que te habrá resultado difícil debido al poco slider velocity (me refiero a que esto por ejemplo queda un poco mal Ejemplo), pero nose, hacer cosas como estas por ejemplo 00:59:260 (1,2,3) - Imagen sí que se pueden hacer. Podrías aún así aumentar el SV a 0,9 para hacer esto más fácilmente. La estetica de los sliders es lo mas dificil para mi, en general creo que puedo mejorarlos, voy a ver que puedo hacer

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00:56:548 (3) - Creo que este ritmo es mucho mejor Imagen Creo que aunque es verdad que suena mejor, seria un pattern demasiado dificil para un Normal
01:04:683 (3) - ^ ^
01:18:243 (3) - ^ ^
01:19:599 (2,3,4) - Ponlos en el tick blanco que es donde más sentido tiene.
01:06:039 (1,2,3,4,5) - Imagen Arreglado


Gracias por el mod !
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posting cuz 2kudos hype

mod sooooooooooon
vick
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vick
Okaaaaaaaaaaayyyyyyyyyy ~
Narcissu
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Narcissu
[General for Shiawase]
  1. need more hitsound , some sample → http://puu.sh/mj8H8/013c577111.osu . 24clap is the most common …… and i suggest use custom Hitsound …… default Hitsound is certainly not the best, i suggest copy Fycho's map → https://osu.ppy.sh/b/703657
  2. Rhythm and flow good , it's have fun . but for mapper , logic is necessary …… it's mean
    1. emphatic downbeat and delightfulness points . jump, symmetry or balabala like ↓↓↓
      00:00:955 (1,2,3) - it's finish , so it's should be hard than 00:01:632 (4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/mj9nP/7ea6d83d5c.jpg
    2. don't use high jump when music slow ↓↓↓

      00:10:785 (2,3,4,5,6,7) -
    3. add click follow music , use slider skip where that no sound

      00:16:717 (5) - use 3 note and jump better than slider , because have drum here

      00:23:836 (3,4,5) - https://puu.sh/mj9DS/2cc9860766.jpg
[Shiawase]
  1. 00:03:666 (1,2,3) - should hard than 00:02:649 (2,3,4) -
  2. 00:22:141 (6) - no sound here …… why overmap ?
  3. 00:51:124 (1,2,3,4,5) - a bit noise imo …… why use 85% volume lol
  4. 00:18:412 (3) - 00:21:124 (3) - 3/2 slider a bit long …… i suggest use 1/1 slider+ note
  5. 01:11:802 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - good jooooob
  6. 01:14:005 (11,1) - separate too ?
[Easy]

  1. ar2 too slow …… in fact everyone can see ar5 , ar < 5 is slow for anyone …… i suggest ar 3~4 for 1.7 star
  2. 00:03:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - e …… a little long …… combo
  3. 01:20:785 (3,4) - unsnap
  4. 01:22:310 (1,2) - don't use reversearrow.slider over once , e …… it's very hard for newplayer , they don't what is rererereversearrow

    [Normal]
  5. 0.6~1.0SV change is unrankable in normal for the song
  6. e …… about easy and normal diff , it's more dependent on experience because we can't play it （too slow for we）…… i suggest you find gd 【
more copy fycho's map !!

my english bad …… if you can't understand , PM me feel free …… and try find other people's mod
vick
260 posts
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Topic Starter
vick
Thanks for the mod Narcissu :D

Narcissu
[General for Shiawase]
  1. need more hitsound , some sample → http://puu.sh/mj8H8/013c577111.osu . 24clap is the most common …… and i suggest use custom Hitsound …… default Hitsound is certainly not the best, i suggest copy Fycho's map → https://osu.ppy.sh/b/703657
  2. Rhythm and flow good , it's have fun . but for mapper , logic is necessary …… it's mean
    1. emphatic downbeat and delightfulness points . jump, symmetry or balabala like ↓↓↓
      00:00:955 (1,2,3) - it's finish , so it's should be hard than 00:01:632 (4,5,6) - http://puu.sh/mj9nP/7ea6d83d5c.jpg
    2. don't use high jump when music slow ↓↓↓

      00:10:785 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - hmm... maybe i will change
    3. add click follow music , use slider skip where that no sound

      00:16:717 (5) - use 3 note and jump better than slider , because have drum here Fixed !

      00:23:836 (3,4,5) - https://puu.sh/mj9DS/2cc9860766.jpg
Fixed !

[Shiawase]
  1. 00:03:666 (1,2,3) - should hard than 00:02:649 (2,3,4) - Fixed !
  2. 00:22:141 (6) - no sound here …… why overmap ? I dont like how it sounds if i delete that note
  3. 00:51:124 (1,2,3,4,5) - a bit noise imo …… why use 85% volume lol Fixed !
  4. 00:18:412 (3) - 00:21:124 (3) - 3/2 slider a bit long …… i suggest use 1/1 slider+ note Fixed !
  5. 01:11:802 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - good jooooob Thank you :D
  6. 01:14:005 (11,1) - separate too ?
Fixed !

[Easy]

  1. ar2 too slow …… in fact everyone can see ar5 , ar < 5 is slow for anyone …… i suggest ar 3~4 for 1.7 star Fixed to AR3
  2. 00:03:666 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - e …… a little long …… combo Fixed !
  3. 01:20:785 (3,4) - unsnap Fixed !
  4. 01:22:310 (1,2) - don't use reversearrow.slider over once , e …… it's very hard for newplayer , they don't what is rererereversearrow Fixed !

    [Normal]
  5. 0.6~1.0SV change is unrankable in normal for the song Hmm... there is any note there anyway
  6. e …… about easy and normal diff , it's more dependent on experience because we can't play it （too slow for we）…… i suggest you find gd 【
more copy fycho's map !!

my english bad …… if you can't understand , PM me feel free …… and try find other people's mod
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