Zetera wrote:

Hi, I came to mod your set as requested. Hello there

|02:01:541 (3,4,5,6) - This doesn't quite follow anything in the music. This would rhythmically be more adequate. Also: 05:07:456 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - I checked this multiple times but I can still find beats wherever the circles are
|02:28:027 (1,2,1,1,2) - I need to question this rhythm choise as well. First, it skips an important beat at 02:28:713 - , second, it is hard to understand when playing. Can also be found at 02:39:513 (1) - . 02:32:998 (1,1,1,2,3,1) - This was much better. I changed the first one since I could see why it was a problem. Although the second one skips a somewhat important beat, I still find it okay because it follows the wubs very well.
|04:29:056 - Might not exactly be a problem, but I think the spacing from this point on is slightly too harsh. I've put this into consideration, but currently I think that the slight increase in spacing is fitting
|05:32:827 (1) - Might also be me, but imo, this slider is too slow in relation to the others and it might be overshot by players. It isn't o3o
|06:28:370 (1) - I assume that this is a redundant hitfinish. oops


And that's pretty much it! Good Luck!Thanks

Lumael wrote:

Hello!~ Hello there!

[Excursion]

-Your bookmarks are unsnapped oh
-Your Preview Time is unsnapped wow
-Cosider adding a normal-hitwistle because the whistles sounds very random unsing default skin I'll do that right away after I finish checking this
-By looking the start of the song, I noticed that you didn't map some beats because you were following the other rhythm. This makes the gameplay a bit annoying because sometimes we think that the next circle is going to this beat but in fact it isn't. Examples: 00:22:198 - 00:23:570 - 00:05:741 - 00:07:113 - 00:08:484 - 00:12:598 - 00:13:970 - Well I do get what you mean but I wanted to map it like this. Makes it feel really calm and smooth.
00:23:570 - I think you must add a circle to be consistente with 00:20:827 (1) - I really like the rhythm as it is.
00:31:456 (1) - Make this 1/4 to follow the rhythm you was following previewsly? I mean: Fixed

00:34:541 - Yeah it's very annoying to have such Strong beat unmapped, may not be a problem though This is something that I've been considering for a while, maybe I'll add a circle here at some point
00:42:427 (5) - Same mentioned above, I'd make it 1/4 to follow the beat you lose at 00:42:513 - Changed
00:46:370 (4,1) - you can make this blanket better like this: Fixed

01:10:027 (6,2) - I'd blanket it to make prettier :3. Also will tinely improve the flow to the next circle Fixed
02:19:284 (2,1) - This slider blanket is tinely off, it should look like that: Fixed :p


Ik the difference is minimal but yeah :3
02:20:827 (1) - I'd move this to 148|24 because 02:20:998 (2) - is very near 02:20:484 (3) - and to be consistente, I think 02:20:827 (1) - should be as well Sure why not
02:28:541 (1) - blanket can be improved by moving this to 72|96 Gotta love my blankets
02:32:998 (1) - I'd try this rhythm instead: The current one follows the wubs like the entire part so I'll keep it like that

Fits better imo
02:46:198 (1,1) - Dunno but if it's a blanket it can be improved ^^ Adjusted a bit
02:54:427 (1,1) - blanket here , maybe it's blanketing finely but the stack is making me blind? o.o It's finely blanketed, you should go to the options and disable stacks in editor so that you can see this easily
04:12:427 (7,2) - blanket is a bit off, tried to fix by just moving 2 around but you'll need to fix the slider
04:13:627 (5,4) - Semi-stack intentional? you stacked almost everything in this beatmap so I'm not sure if this one is intentional whoops
04:29:570 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - Isn't the DS here too big for this calm stream?
04:32:313 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - ^
04:35:141 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3) - ^ and on. May not be a problem too.. I think that the DS is just fine. It plays well so I don't see a reason to change it
05:00:598 (9) - NC? pls
05:08:827 (1,3,1) - Kinda weird they overlapping each other but everyone has your likes and deslikes :3 05:08:998 (2,2) - too Yeah I ran out of space so I had to compromise LOL But the high ar makes it so that it isn't visible
05:12:598 (2,3) - You could work a bit more on this blanket Let me work on
05:23:741 (1,2) - ^ those blankets
05:24:770 - You lost a beat here Where ?
05:24:941 (5,1) - This slider blanket can definetly be improved All
05:29:570 (4,2) - blanket can be improved Hail
05:34:798 (4,1) - ^ The
05:35:913 (5,1) - ^ tail is a bit off Blankets!


GL!~ This beatmap is awesome!Thank you ^^

22:01 ProfessionalBox: Täältäkö saa ilmaisia modeja
22:02 riktoi: ehkä
22:02 ProfessionalBox: Ei hirveen montaa suomalaista modaajaa kyllä löydy. Sinänsä hienoa nähdä yksi
22:03 riktoi: :-)
22:03 ProfessionalBox: Tiedän 2 muuta itseni ja sun lisäks
22:03 ProfessionalBox: mutta joo
22:03 ProfessionalBox: Jos kiinnostaa modaa ni mappi ois tämä
22:03 *ProfessionalBox is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/754143 Akira Complex - Odyssey (Au5 remix)]
22:04 riktoi: katson
22:21 riktoi: ei mulla ole varmaan mitään huomautettavaa tästä mapista
22:22 ProfessionalBox: :D
22:22 riktoi: 01:12:427 (6,7) - 
22:22 riktoi: tämä varmaan ainoa kohta missä tekisin jotain
22:22 riktoi: kokeile kahta slideriä
22:24 ProfessionalBox: hmm.. Ymmärrän mitä haet, pitää miettii että saako tota muutettuu niin ettei flow kärsi
22:24 riktoi: siinä ei ole kauheesti tilaa
22:24 ProfessionalBox: mmjep
22:26 ProfessionalBox: Mutta joo, kiitos ajastas :D Jos haluut kudosuu ni postaa irc logi (niin pieni kun tää onki) ni threadii ja laitan yhen tulemaa