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Junichi Shimizu - When We Wish a Upon a Star

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lit120
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lit120
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Monday, September 28, 2015 at 2:18:43 PM

Artist: Junichi Shimizu
Title: When We Wish a Upon a Star
Source: クドわふたー
Tags: key sound label eroge visual novel kud wafter original soundtrack lit120 mako sakata kudryavka noumi 能美 クドリャフカ VisualArt's one's future
BPM: 88
Filesize: 3632kb
Play Time: 02:04
Difficulties Available:
  1. Easy (0.99 stars, 87 notes)
  2. makosakata's Normal (1.59 stars, 138 notes)
  3. Wish (2.24 stars, 198 notes)
Download: Junichi Shimizu - When We Wish a Upon a Star
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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5th map for rank + 1st time making skins for this map. Enjoy :D



SKINS
All skins are made by me. I didn't take any skins, just made them by my own

DIFFICULTIES
Easy by me (complete)
makosakata's Normal by by Mako Sakata (complete)
Wish by me (complete)
Last edited by lit120 , edited 49 times in total.
Shiranai
2,186 posts
Joined August 2012
Shiranai
Nama diffnya kaya gitu aja yah ga usah diganti hihi :)
makosakata's Normal
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 08.When We Wish a Upon a Star.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 79273
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:When We Wish a Upon a Star
TitleUnicode:When We Wish a Upon a Star
Artist:Junichi Shimizu
ArtistUnicode:清水準一
Creator:-Hakurei-
Version:makosakata's Normal
Source:クドわふたー
Tags:key sound label eroge visual novel kud wafter original soundtrack lit120 Mako Sakata
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:334449

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"moe.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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[Colours]
Combo1 : 175,176,162
Combo2 : 245,122,233
Combo3 : 255,133,134

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Additional mod,

[General]
  1. Menurut aku untuk timing kayanya perlu satu lagi deh timing line di sini 00:00:525 - sebagai ketukan pertama, terus baru metronomenya direset di bagian ini 00:02:229 -, lagipula suara musik di 00:00:525 - lumayan mapable, kasian kalo kosong ga dimap
  2. Reminder, berhubung map ini ada skinnya jangan lupa sama beberapa element skin set yang lain sesuain sama https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Skinning
  3. Pendapat aja sih, warna combo yang grey kayanya kurang cocok deh menurut aku agak gloomy gimana gitu, kenapa ga coklat aja sesuain sama warna rambutnya
  4. Mungkin tambah AudioLeadIn: 1500~2000?
[Easy]
  1. Mungkin OD -1 deh, lagunya lumayan calm jadi mungkin pengaturan diff rendahnya bisa dibuat agak mudah
  2. 01:13:478 (2) - Kalo ctrl+g bgmn? flownya lebih natural daripada kursornya bergerak zigzag
  3. 02:03:591 (1) - Spinner itu kayanya kependekan deh menurut aku, mungkin ritmenya bisa disusun kaya gini http://puu.sh/j1vp5/df0d1e8e95.png, soalnya kalo ngikutin suara petikan harpanya berasa lebih enak kalo spinnernya mulai dari sini 02:02:228 - terus volume spinnernya di akhir bisa direndahin, kayanya masih terlalu keras deh suaranya

    Sedikit pendapat aja buat Easy kayanya terlalu pelan deh sv nya coba 1.00 mungkin lebih bagus
[Wish]
  1. 00:30:184 (2) - 00:38:365 (2) - Beberapa slider bisa di ctrl+g biar flownya lebih bagus, mirip kaya Easy kasusnya. Ga aku sebutin semuanya, coba deh dicari lagi yang lain siapa tau flownya ada yang bisa diperbagus lagi
  2. 00:48:593 (1,2,3) - 00:43:138 (1,2,3) - Beberapa placing yang kaya gitu kesannya agak maksa deh menurut aku, coba deh sedikit dirapihin lagi, semacam kaya gini mungkin bagus http://puu.sh/j1vZK/ba93a6155e.jpg
  3. 01:16:035 (1,1) - Spinner spam di sana kayanya ga perlu deh, coba dimap aja kan suara piano sama lulabinya masih kedengeran jelas
  4. 01:58:137 (8) - Terlalu plain deh menurut aku kalo di sana cuma diisi satu slider 2/1, kan kalo didengerin baik-baik ada suara piano di sana, coba aja diisi stream circle atau biar mudah sedikit bisa pake slider 1/4, mungkin ritme kaya gini http://puu.sh/j1wrU/5f02d64701.jpg dengan placing kaya gini bagus http://puu.sh/j1wpC/54aaba4797.jpg bisa lebih bagus
  5. 02:03:762 (1) - Volume spinner di akhir bisa direndahin mirip kaya Easy

    Flownya masih banyak yang bisa ditingkatin lagi lit
[]
Tapi overall udah bagus kok, good luck on ranking~
lit120
3,251 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
lit120

Mako Sakata wrote:

Nama diffnya kaya gitu aja yah ga usah diganti hihi :) yiihaa!!! added. dan ganti namany jadi Mako Sakata's Normal aja biar agak rapi nama ny hehehe
makosakata's Normal
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 08.When We Wish a Upon a Star.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 79273
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:When We Wish a Upon a Star
TitleUnicode:When We Wish a Upon a Star
Artist:Junichi Shimizu
ArtistUnicode:清水準一
Creator:-Hakurei-
Version:makosakata's Normal
Source:クドわふたー
Tags:key sound label eroge visual novel kud wafter original soundtrack lit120 Mako Sakata
BeatmapID:0
BeatmapSetID:334449

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"moe.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

[TimingPoints]
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123591,-100,4,2,1,30,0,0
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[Colours]
Combo1 : 175,176,162
Combo2 : 245,122,233
Combo3 : 255,133,134

[HitObjects]
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Additional mod,

[General]
  1. Menurut aku untuk timing kayanya perlu satu lagi deh timing line di sini 00:00:525 - sebagai ketukan pertama, terus baru metronomenya direset di bagian ini 00:02:229 -, lagipula suara musik di 00:00:525 - lumayan mapable, kasian kalo kosong ga dimap kek ny ini g perlu lah untuk 2 diff aku
  2. Reminder, berhubung map ini ada skinnya jangan lupa sama beberapa element skin set yang lain sesuain sama https://osu.ppy.sh/wiki/Skinning ahh gapapa Mako. w akan buat beberapa skin element saja, cuma agak malas buat complete set =w=
  3. Pendapat aja sih, warna combo yang grey kayanya kurang cocok deh menurut aku agak gloomy gimana gitu, kenapa ga coklat aja sesuain sama warna rambutnya ok deh klo begitu. Changed the color for all diffs
  4. Mungkin tambah AudioLeadIn: 1500~2000? 1500 aja deh untuk smua diff
[Easy]
  1. Mungkin OD -1 deh, lagunya lumayan calm jadi mungkin pengaturan diff rendahnya bisa dibuat agak mudah boleh
  2. 01:13:478 (2) - Kalo ctrl+g bgmn? flownya lebih natural daripada kursornya bergerak zigzag ganti posisi (2) dan (3)
  3. 02:03:591 (1) - Spinner itu kayanya kependekan deh menurut aku, mungkin ritmenya bisa disusun kaya gini http://puu.sh/j1vp5/df0d1e8e95.png, soalnya kalo ngikutin suara petikan harpanya berasa lebih enak kalo spinnernya mulai dari sini 02:02:228 - terus volume spinnernya di akhir bisa direndahin, kayanya masih terlalu keras deh suaranya dari Niva, ya katanya agak mengkhawatirkan length nya itu, jadi ku ganti aja sperti kata kamu. dan volume ny w ngikut kek punya kamu deh :v

    Sedikit pendapat aja buat Easy kayanya terlalu pelan deh sv nya coba 1.00 mungkin lebih bagus prefer ny 0.9 aja SV ny hehe
[Wish]
  1. 00:30:184 (2) - 00:38:365 (2) - Beberapa slider bisa di ctrl+g biar flownya lebih bagus, mirip kaya Easy kasusnya. Ga aku sebutin semuanya, coba deh dicari lagi yang lain siapa tau flownya ada yang bisa diperbagus lagi boleh lah
  2. 00:48:593 (1,2,3) - 00:43:138 (1,2,3) - Beberapa placing yang kaya gitu kesannya agak maksa deh menurut aku, coba deh sedikit dirapihin lagi, semacam kaya gini mungkin bagus http://puu.sh/j1vZK/ba93a6155e.jpg fixed
  3. 01:16:035 (1,1) - Spinner spam di sana kayanya ga perlu deh, coba dimap aja kan suara piano sama lulabinya masih kedengeran jelas remapped
  4. 01:58:137 (8) - Terlalu plain deh menurut aku kalo di sana cuma diisi satu slider 2/1, kan kalo didengerin baik-baik ada suara piano di sana, coba aja diisi stream circle atau biar mudah sedikit bisa pake slider 1/4, mungkin ritme kaya gini http://puu.sh/j1wrU/5f02d64701.jpg dengan placing kaya gini bagus http://puu.sh/j1wpC/54aaba4797.jpg bisa lebih bagus ohhhhhh kek ny ini boleh juga deh
  5. 02:03:762 (1) - Volume spinner di akhir bisa direndahin mirip kaya Easy ngikut timing + volume kamu aja deh :v (cuma spinner aja)

    Flownya masih banyak yang bisa ditingkatin lagi lit
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Tapi overall udah bagus kok, good luck on ranking~
sip, makasi untk mod ny :D

and i fixed the title + added mako_sakata as a tag + added some skin elements + hitsounds
F D Flourite
811 posts
Joined March 2013
F D Flourite
[General]
  1. I didn't remember if such a thing is allowed that the reverse arrow scales beyond the circle but I think you should fix it because it can be disturbing. Pic:
[Easy]

  • General
  1. The Audio Lead-in of this diff is 15000ms, while others are all 1500ms. Pls fix it.

    Rhythm
  2. 00:42:456 - Personally, I think removing this note will be better. Besides, the sound here is soft.
  3. 01:32:228 - to 01:41:773 - This part is the most intense part in this diff, or even in Kiai. Personally, I would use some 2/1 rhythm, just as you did later.

    Placement
  4. I don't know whether you really care about blanket, because I found most blankets in this diff are incomplete. If you don't care, just ignore the blanket advice below.
    Blanket Advice
    1. 00:02:229 (1,2,3) - Blanket. Such long sliders should be more curved to get a nice blanket. For example:
    2. 00:09:729 (2,3) - ^
    3. 00:17:229 (1,3) - ^ (Minor. Moving 00:17:229 (1) - a bit upward works too)
    4. 00:29:502 (3,4) - ^
    5. 00:44:502 (2,1) - ^
    6. 00:47:229 (2,1) - ^ (Not about degree of curve, but the direction of curve)
    7. 01:01:206 (1,2) - ^
    8. 01:26:091 (4,1) - ^
    9. 01:54:046 (1,2) - ^
    10. 01:33:591 (2,3) - ^

    Hitsound
  5. 00:41:775 - I'd like to use finish because piano here is louder. (Not higher, but louder)
  6. 00:55:411 - Finish instead of whistle.
[Mako Sakata's Normal]

  • General
  1. Disable Widescreen Support. No SB or video used.

    Rhythm
  2. Nothing to say.

    Placement
  3. 00:30:525 (5,1) - Not a good blanket.
  4. Nice! Very fluent and beautiful.

    Hitsound
  5. Nice. Even tho I wish you would use more finish to emphasize some heavy noise or beginning/ending places (00:36:320 - for example), you did a good job.
[Wish]

  • General
  1. Disable Widescreen Support. No SB or video used.

    Rhythm
  2. 00:11:434 (2,3) - Noise at 00:11:434 - is obviously louder than the one at 00:11:775 -. So I tend to remove 00:11:775 (3) - since this note is unnoticable. OR, you can swap the whistle so that 00:11:434 (2) - is emphasized and 00:11:775 (3) - is not.

    Placement
  3. Blanket advice
    1. 00:18:593 (1,2) - The same as Easy
    2. 00:30:184 (2,3) - ^
    3. 00:38:365 (2,3) - ^
    4. 00:56:775 (1,2) - ^
    5. 00:58:820 (4,5) - ^
    6. 01:19:955 (2,3) - ^
  4. 01:40:410 (5) - NC?
  5. 01:54:046 - From this on, NCs are messy. For example: NC at 02:00:864 (1) - can be removed; 01:56:432 (1) - can have a NC...

    Hitsound
  6. 00:41:093 (2) - Remove the whistle at tail. This noise is comparatively soft and need no emphasis.
  7. 00:41:775 - Add a finish.
  8. 00:55:411 - The noise here is comparatively heavier and louder than ones around it. I would like to add a whistle.
  9. 01:56:773 - Set a finish here?
If you have any questions about my mod, you can always catch me ingame. ;)
lit120
3,251 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
lit120

F D Flourite wrote:

[General]
  1. I didn't remember if such a thing is allowed that the reverse arrow scales beyond the circle but I think you should fix it because it can be disturbing. Pic: done
[Easy]

  • General
  1. The Audio Lead-in of this diff is 15000ms, while others are all 1500ms. Pls fix it. done

    Rhythm
  2. 00:42:456 - Personally, I think removing this note will be better. Besides, the sound here is soft. nope
  3. 01:32:228 - to 01:41:773 - This part is the most intense part in this diff, or even in Kiai. Personally, I would use some 2/1 rhythm, just as you did later. yep, i'd prefer that

    Placement
  4. I don't know whether you really care about blanket, because I found most blankets in this diff are incomplete. If you don't care, just ignore the blanket advice below. well god damn it grid. i fixed the blanket, but looks like i will ignore this for sure
    Blanket Advice
    1. 00:02:229 (1,2,3) - Blanket. Such long sliders should be more curved to get a nice blanket. For example:
    2. 00:09:729 (2,3) - ^
    3. 00:17:229 (1,3) - ^ (Minor. Moving 00:17:229 (1) - a bit upward works too)
    4. 00:29:502 (3,4) - ^
    5. 00:44:502 (2,1) - ^
    6. 00:47:229 (2,1) - ^ (Not about degree of curve, but the direction of curve)
    7. 01:01:206 (1,2) - ^
    8. 01:26:091 (4,1) - ^
    9. 01:54:046 (1,2) - ^
    10. 01:33:591 (2,3) - ^

    Hitsound
  5. 00:41:775 - I'd like to use finish because piano here is louder. (Not higher, but louder) no
  6. 00:55:411 - Finish instead of whistle. ^
[Wish]

  • General
  1. Disable Widescreen Support. No SB or video used. done

    Rhythm
  2. 00:11:434 (2,3) - Noise at 00:11:434 - is obviously louder than the one at 00:11:775 -. So I tend to remove 00:11:775 (3) - since this note is unnoticable. OR, you can swap the whistle so that 00:11:434 (2) - is emphasized and 00:11:775 (3) - is not. hey, why not? looks like i need to remove whistle on (3)

    Placement looks like i have to ignore this
  3. Blanket advice
    1. 00:18:593 (1,2) - The same as Easy
    2. 00:30:184 (2,3) - ^
    3. 00:38:365 (2,3) - ^
    4. 00:56:775 (1,2) - ^
    5. 00:58:820 (4,5) - ^
    6. 01:19:955 (2,3) - ^
  4. 01:40:410 (5) - NC? no
  5. 01:54:046 - From this on, NCs are messy. For example: NC at 02:00:864 (1) - can be removed; 01:56:432 (1) - can have a NC... did something different for NC

    Hitsound
  6. 00:41:093 (2) - Remove the whistle at tail. This noise is comparatively soft and need no emphasis. ok
  7. 00:41:775 - Add a finish. no
  8. 00:55:411 - The noise here is comparatively heavier and louder than ones around it. I would like to add a whistle. oops
  9. 01:56:773 - Set a finish here? no
If you have any questions about my mod, you can always catch me ingame. ;)
thx for mod :D. looks like i have to think whether i can set the skin as ready or not
Last edited by lit120 , edited 1 time in total.
Shiranai
2,186 posts
Joined August 2012
Shiranai

F D Flourite wrote:

[Mako Sakata's Normal]

  • General
  1. Disable Widescreen Support. No SB or video used.

    Rhythm
  2. Nothing to say.

    Placement
  3. 00:30:525 (5,1) - Not a good blanket.
  4. Nice! Very fluent and beautiful.

    Hitsound
  5. Nice. Even tho I wish you would use more finish to emphasize some heavy noise or beginning/ending places (00:36:320 - for example), you did a good job.
Fixed all, and add some finish sound, thanks for mod :)
SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 08.When We Wish a Upon a Star.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 79273
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:When We Wish Upon a Star
TitleUnicode:When We Wish Upon a Star
Artist:Junichi Shimizu
ArtistUnicode:清水準一
Creator:-Hakurei-
Version:makosakata's Normal
Source:クドわふたー
Tags:key sound label eroge visual novel kud wafter original soundtrack lit120 mako_sakata
BeatmapID:742587
BeatmapSetID:334449

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"moe.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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//Storyboard Sound Samples

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F D Flourite
811 posts
Joined March 2013
F D Flourite
kd pls XD
lit120
3,251 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
lit120

F D Flourite wrote:

kd pls XD
Woops, total forgot about that. Thx for reminding me XD
Ciyus Miapah
3,011 posts
Joined June 2013
Ciyus Miapah
lol forget to give kd to modder, you're such a grand father /runs


[General]
  1. hell 88bpm, this isnt drumstep at all ._.
  2. put piano , chill, and relaxing song on tags. Yeah because this song makes me want to sleep
  3. add new combo color please yeah this isnt necessary but i recommend you to do this because this song has 4/4 metronome, so for consistency stuff you need 4 combo colors
  4. im not sure of 3 timing points on middle of song, its just not necessary on here, since this song quiet slow and boring maybe you can delete them, its fine with it i think
  5. okay looks clear

[wish]

  • i wish this beatmap ranked
  1. AR7 and OD7 seems hard with CS5 RIP, just put OD6 please
  2. 00:21:320 (1,2) - why you put jump at this super slow part? it looks didnt consistant with other pattern there
  3. 01:04:615 (3) - nice slider, fix shape a bit, make it more symetrical please
  4. 01:18:593 (1) - nazi blanket
  5. 00:55:411 (5,6) - ^
  6. 00:58:479 (3,5) - ^
  7. ah its not okay if im doing blanket mod here
  8. looks fine i think

okay that's it i can tell to you, everything except above it's fine for me.
goodluck with your map! and this map will probably ranked faster because it has good quality

see ya :)
lit120
3,251 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
lit120

Fort wrote:

lol forget to give kd to modder, you're such a grand father /runs wtf?


[General]
  1. hell 88bpm, this isnt drumstep at all ._. what? it's a slow, relaxing song. not a dubstep ._.
  2. put piano , chill, and relaxing song on tags. Yeah because this song makes me want to sleep i'm not pretty sure about this
  3. add new combo color please yeah this isnt necessary but i recommend you to do this because this song has 4/4 metronome, so for consistency stuff you need 4 combo colors nope
  4. im not sure of 3 timing points on middle of song, its just not necessary on here, since this song quiet slow and boring maybe you can delete them, its fine with it i think it is necessary. try to listen to it first on that part
  5. okay looks clear yey

[wish]

  • i wish this beatmap ranked same thing
  1. AR7 and OD7 seems hard with CS5 RIP, just put OD6 please ok
  2. 00:21:320 (1,2) - why you put jump at this super slow part? it looks didnt consistant with other pattern there well, i want that one
  3. 01:04:615 (3) - nice slider, fix shape a bit, make it more symetrical please i'll keep this one
  4. 01:18:593 (1) - nazi blanket it's fine for me
  5. 00:55:411 (5,6) - ^ ^
  6. 00:58:479 (3,5) - ^ ^
  7. ah its not okay if im doing blanket mod here
  8. looks fine i think

okay that's it i can tell to you, everything except above it's fine for me.
goodluck with your map! and this map will probably ranked faster because it has good quality

see ya :)
thx for mod! and here's what i changed by my own:
Wish
  1. 01:15:864 (4) - NC
  2. 01:18:591 (1) - removed NC
  3. 01:19:955 (4) - ctrl + G

added skins
  1. scorebar-bg
  2. scorebar-colour
and the skins are all ready!
Ciyus Miapah
3,011 posts
Joined June 2013
Ciyus Miapah

-Hakurei- wrote:

[wish]

  • i wish this beatmap ranked same thing
  1. AR7 and OD7 seems hard with CS5 RIP, just put OD6 please ok
  2. 00:21:320 (1,2) - why you put jump at this super slow part? it looks didnt consistant with other pattern there well, i want that one well i dont think this will be consistant with other pattern like this, when you want add jump dont put on there, just put on kiai time or something. but its okay, Up to you. im just saying that because why not
lit120
3,251 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
lit120

Fort wrote:

-Hakurei- wrote:

[wish]

  • i wish this beatmap ranked same thing
  1. AR7 and OD7 seems hard with CS5 RIP, just put OD6 please ok
  2. 00:21:320 (1,2) - why you put jump at this super slow part? it looks didnt consistant with other pattern there well, i want that one well i dont think this will be consistant with other pattern like this, when you want add jump dont put on there, just put on kiai time or something. but its okay, Up to you. im just saying that because why not
i get your point now. fixed by moving 00:21:320 (1) - only

Additional Change on Wish Diff
  1. 00:32:229 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3) - i better play scale on this (need to check whether it is fit for using DS or not)
  2. 01:35:637 (3) - stack wtih 01:33:250 (4) -
Shurelia
Global Moderator
2,771 posts
Joined December 2013
Shurelia
おっす!やったよ!



~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~


[General]
- You might want to add "Little Buster!" and "リトルバスターズ！" on the tags but that's just my personal preference of me. (since she's part of the club lol)
- Also add "Kudryavka Noumi" and "能美 クドリャフカ" on the tags because you use her as BG. (another personal preference)
- Add "VisualArt's" to the tags. because it's the name of the publisher of the game (KEY is the game developer.)

[Easy]

  • Using Slider Tick Rate : 2 , would be better because it'll follow the songs well for me. (if you going to apply this, then you should apply to all diffs)
  1. 00:29:502 (3,4) - Blanket would be preferred at here.
  2. 00:44:502 (2,1) - ^^
  3. 00:53:365 (4,1) - This blanket could be improved
  4. 01:18:250 - adding a note at here is good to try. It'll give a good play for the players too.
  5. 01:26:091 (4,1) - nazi blanket.
  6. 01:54:046 (1,2) - Should be blanket imo
  7. 02:01:887 - Just a personal opinion. I would add an object at here because it fit more with the song than the current one also able to give a good ending to the player.

[makosakata's Normal]
  1. Good enough~

[Wish]

  • Try HP : 5.5 ? the current one is a bit too hard to be passed. if you put HR on this diff
  1. 00:02:911 (2,3) - Mmh? a jump at here but not a here 00:07:343 (5,1) - ? it has a same sound tho.
  2. 00:11:775 (3) - Finish at here.
  3. 00:16:547 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved. http://puu.sh/j55d7.jpg
  4. 00:28:138 (4) - Would add a finish on the head.
  5. 00:30:865 (3) - ^^^ and other similiar parts
  6. 00:40:411 (1,2) - Blanket~ . http://puu.sh/j55nY.jpg
  7. 00:49:275 (2,3) - little improvement for blanket could applied at here
  8. 01:18:591 (3) - NC should be here
  9. 01:20:637 (5,1) - How about use this rhythm ? http://puu.sh/j55Gi.jpg . It can follow the bell sounds on the background also it still enjoyable to play. (it use 1/6)
  10. 01:53:023 (3,4) - Why you stacking these but not these 01:54:387 (2,3) - ? i would suggest you to unstack 3,4.

That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!
lit120
3,251 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
lit120

Shurelia wrote:

おっす!やったよ!



~ From Lovely Modding Quest! ~


[General]
- You might want to add "Little Buster!" and "リトルバスターズ！" on the tags but that's just my personal preference of me. (since she's part of the club lol) well i know that, but that's not related with this eroge for me
- Also add "Kudryavka Noumi" and "能美 クドリャフカ" on the tags because you use her as BG. (another personal preference) added for all diffs
- Add "VisualArt's" to the tags. because it's the name of the publisher of the game (KEY is the game developer.) added for all diffs

[Easy]

  • Using Slider Tick Rate : 2 , would be better because it'll follow the songs well for me. (if you going to apply this, then you should apply to all diffs) not pretty sure about this
  1. 00:29:502 (3,4) - Blanket would be preferred at here. done
  2. 00:44:502 (2,1) - ^^ but i stacked it on (1)
  3. 00:53:365 (4,1) - This blanket could be improved fixed
  4. 01:18:250 - adding a note at here is good to try. It'll give a good play for the players too. added note on 01:17:228 - only
  5. 01:26:091 (4,1) - nazi blanket. fixed
  6. 01:54:046 (1,2) - Should be blanket imo done
  7. 02:01:887 - Just a personal opinion. I would add an object at here because it fit more with the song than the current one also able to give a good ending to the player. nope

[Wish]

  • Try HP : 5.5 ? the current one is a bit too hard to be passed. if you put HR on this diff done
  1. 00:02:911 (2,3) - Mmh? a jump at here but not a here 00:07:343 (5,1) - ? it has a same sound tho. that's my preference, so no
  2. 00:11:775 (3) - Finish at here. no
  3. 00:16:547 (2,3) - Blanket can be improved. http://puu.sh/j55d7.jpg fixed
  4. 00:28:138 (4) - Would add a finish on the head. no
  5. 00:30:865 (3) - ^^^ and other similiar parts no
  6. 00:40:411 (1,2) - Blanket~ . http://puu.sh/j55nY.jpg done
  7. 00:49:275 (2,3) - little improvement for blanket could applied at here done
  8. 01:18:591 (3) - NC should be here done
  9. 01:20:637 (5,1) - How about use this rhythm ? http://puu.sh/j55Gi.jpg . It can follow the bell sounds on the background also it still enjoyable to play. (it use 1/6) i will think about this, since this is a good idea for me
  10. 01:53:023 (3,4) - Why you stacking these but not these 01:54:387 (2,3) - ? i would suggest you to unstack 3,4. because on 01:53:023 (3,4) - has a same note, so i have to stack it

That's all for me, Hope this help. And good luck!
thx for mod :D
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
No_Gu
M4M from my queue

maybe add "one's future" to tags? I heard the rhythm

[Easy]
00:02:229 (1,2,3) - usually I don't want to mention a blanket stuff,but I think I need to have a mention here
00:10:411 (3) - why not copy 00:07:684 (1) - and make a symmetry?
00:17:229 (1) - delete it,the sound here is like an end of last long-sound,which sounds bad with a circle
00:17:911 (2) - in fact we need 4/1 for recovering time in easy,but since it's a slow song...well,whatever,let BAT judge
00:21:320 (1,2) - try sth like this?... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3412927 looks better
01:32:228 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - feel a liitle bad about this part..

[Normal]
00:10:070 (3,4) - a 1/1 slider with a 1/2 note sounds better
00:17:229 (1) - same as I said in easy
01:31:887 (8,1) - better not to let 1/4 appear in normal diff
01:53:705 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ and this part especially make the diff hard
good use of slider blanket,nice work

[Hard]
00:17:229 (3) - head sounds odd
01:40:410 (5) - NC
01:58:137 (8,9,10,11) - should be 1/6 here.you can just change them shorter then add a repeat
02:00:864 (1) - remove NC
02:03:762 (1) - spinner is short,better to just put a note in the end
totally ok
lit120
3,251 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
lit120

No_Gu wrote:

M4M from my queue

maybe add "one's future" to tags? I heard the rhythm not pretty sure, but whatever. added for all diffs

[Easy]
00:02:229 (1,2,3) - usually I don't want to mention a blanket stuff,but I think I need to have a mention here done
00:10:411 (3) - why not copy 00:07:684 (1) - and make a symmetry? copied that
00:17:229 (1) - delete it,the sound here is like an end of last long-sound,which sounds bad with a circle done
00:17:911 (2) - in fact we need 4/1 for recovering time in easy,but since it's a slow song...well,whatever,let BAT judge need help here
00:21:320 (1,2) - try sth like this?... https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3412927 looks better i'll take that, but in a different position
01:32:228 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - feel a liitle bad about this part.. hmmm... ok then. looks like that i have to remap this

[Hard]
00:17:229 (3) - head sounds odd not for me
01:40:410 (5) - NC ughh, ok
01:58:137 (8,9,10,11) - should be 1/6 here.you can just change them shorter then add a repeat gonna go for slider
02:00:864 (1) - remove NC ok
02:03:762 (1) - spinner is short,better to just put a note in the end need more opinion
totally ok
thx for mod man :D
Shiranai
2,186 posts
Joined August 2012
Shiranai

No_Gu wrote:

M4M from my queue

[Normal]
00:10:070 (3,4) - a 1/1 slider with a 1/2 note sounds better Fixed
00:17:229 (1) - same as I said in easy Hmm I know it's like an extended sound from the previous big tick, but think about how we should have enough time after the spinner I intended to insert that one there instead, because if I put a note farther than that the break time after that spinner is kinda too long and doesn't seems right to me, so I keep it as is now
01:31:887 (8,1) - better not to let 1/4 appear in normal diff I guess it's probably fine, because the song is on low bpm and most 1/4 note is still easy to read imo and following that piano sound is quite a hint that note is on 1/4, furthermore I use a 1/4 slider not two circles on 1/4 so It'll make the rhythm easier and more readable, so I keep it as is now
01:53:705 (8,1,2,3,4,5) - ^ and this part especially make the diff hard Will be considered, but tbh I want to keep it as is now, like the given reason above
good use of slider blanket,nice work Thank you soo much <3
Thanks for mod No_Gu~
Update
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 08.When We Wish a Upon a Star.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 79273
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:When We Wish a Upon Star
TitleUnicode:When We Wish a Upon Star
Artist:Junichi Shimizu
ArtistUnicode:清水準一
Creator:-Hakurei-
Version:makosakata's Normal
Source:クドわふたー
Tags:key sound label eroge visual novel kud wafter original soundtrack lit120 mako_sakata kudryavka noumi 能美 クドリャフカ VisualArt's one's future
BeatmapID:742587
BeatmapSetID:334449

[Difficulty]
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CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

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lit120
3,251 posts
Joined August 2013
Topic Starter
lit120
updated Mako's normal diff
wcx19911123
3,862 posts
Joined June 2010
wcx19911123
m4m here

[General]
skin missing approachcircle
hitnormal sounds a bit too loud imo, try use custom ones instead? with lower volume

[makosakata's Normal]
01:31:887 (8) - this slider is pretty hard for such an easy diff, I strongly suggest to change it into a single note(same to 01:55:069 (2,4) - )
01:53:705 (8) - ^, due to the stack stuffs, this one is more harder to read/play. changing the rhythm is up to you but hope you can remap the part without overlapping at least

[Wish]
00:11:775 (3) - this note sounds too loud imo, try to remove the whistle?
00:16:206 (1) - this note is too far away from the spinner imo
00:58:479 (3,4,5) - try to use little jumps like 01:03:934 (1,2,3) - ?

no much issues, but the quality can be much better
you can try to make blanket better in Easy and Wish diff
good luck
Shiranai
2,186 posts
Joined August 2012
Shiranai

wcx19911123 wrote:

m4m here

[General]
skin missing approachcircle
hitnormal sounds a bit too loud imo, try use custom ones instead? with lower volume

[makosakata's Normal]
01:31:887 (8) - this slider is pretty hard for such an easy diff, I strongly suggest to change it into a single note(same to 01:55:069 (2,4) - ) Fixed
01:53:705 (8) - ^, due to the stack stuffs, this one is more harder to read/play. changing the rhythm is up to you but hope you can remap the part without overlapping at least Fixed

no much issues, but the quality can be much better
you can try to make blanket better in Easy and Wish diff
good luck
Tbh I want to keep those two for being represent of the piano ;( but well those kind of rhythm been fixed for now. Thanks for mod wcx~
Updated!
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: 08.When We Wish a Upon a Star.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 1500
PreviewTime: 79273
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1

[Metadata]
Title:When We Wish a Upon Star
TitleUnicode:When We Wish a Upon Star
Artist:Junichi Shimizu
ArtistUnicode:清水準一
Creator:-Hakurei-
Version:makosakata's Normal
Source:クドわふたー
Tags:key sound label eroge visual novel kud wafter original soundtrack lit120 mako_sakata kudryavka noumi 能美 クドリャフカ VisualArt's one's future
BeatmapID:742587
BeatmapSetID:334449

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:4
CircleSize:3.5
OverallDifficulty:4
ApproachRate:5
SliderMultiplier:1.3
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
//Background and Video events
0,0,"moe.jpg",0,0
//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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272,100,112000,1,2,0:0:0:0:
200,144,112341,2,0,P|144:164|84:132,1,130,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
148,76,113364,1,2,0:0:0:0:
221,33,113705,1,2,0:0:0:0:
272,100,114046,6,0,P|336:112|400:100,1,130,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
472,144,115069,1,2,0:0:0:0:
444,224,115410,2,0,B|432:272|432:272|452:308|432:352,1,130,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
356,312,116432,1,2,0:0:0:0:
284,268,116773,2,0,B|239:258|211:282|211:282|192:260|162:260,1,130,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
100,316,117796,2,0,P|80:260|108:196,1,130,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
160,132,118819,1,2,0:0:0:0:
240,160,119160,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,132,119500,6,0,P|376:116|376:256,1,260,6|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
240,160,121546,2,0,P|236:124|244:96,1,65,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,122228,12,6,124955,0:0:0:0:
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