1. Easy - 4Key (1,48 stars, 594 notes)
2. Hard - 4Key (2,96 stars, 1499 notes)
3. Insane - 4Key (3,95 stars, 2023 notes)
4. Normal - 4Key (2,24 stars, 954 notes)

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XeoStyle wrote:

Hey Tidek !

You can add a preview point at 00:46:635.

Maybe add kiai at :
- 00:47:341 to 01:11:341
- 01:45:223 to 02:09:223
- 02:43:105 to 03:08:164

Check the AiMod (Letterbox ^^ )

Let's diff mod now :

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Easy

00:33:576 (33576|0) - Maybe change the pattern to add a LN from this to 00:34:635 (Drum roll) nope, i keep LNs mainly for flute
00:43:458 (43458|1,43811|2) - Change the first to 2 and the second to 1 nah, i want to keep difference with previous patterns (its 0213, do not want to repeat)
00:46:635 (46635|0) - No LN ? yup, want to keep that part empty (difference between Normal)
00:58:635 (58635|2,58635|0) - change to 2 3 ok
01:09:752 (69752|1) - Note after LN is a little bit hard to play for beginner imo removed LN
01:16:105 (76105|2,76282|3) - Maybe change to 3 then 2 : It's the middle of the long pattern so maybe it's better like this. nope, want to keep consistency with other patterns
01:41:341 (101341|2,101694|1) - Change the first to 1 and the second to 2 (Like the previous one) same reason as in previous one
02:12:752 (132752|0,133458|0) - Change column (it's not the same sound than the previous) actually i think its the same sound Oo

(I skip the second/third Kiai since it's the same thing (~ for the 3rd) : You can applie what you have applied for the 1st kiai) 3rd kiai is different than 1st and 2nd

Normal

00:56:517 (56517|3) - Change to 0 (because of the sound) ok
01:07:811 (67811|3) - ^ ok
01:25:105 (85105|3) - Change to 0 or 2 ? nah, want to keep consistency
add a note at 02:11:164 ok
02:39:223 (159223|2,159576|1,159929|0) - Better like this imo (so maybe try do the same at 01:41:341 (101341|1,101341|3,101694|2,101694|0,102046|1) - ) ok

The overall of the last kiai is a little bit to hard for NM player imo, try to change some pattern ? It was tested by NM player and did pretty well those patterns : )

Hard

00:27:046 (27046|2,27223|2) - Change the first or the second to 1 or 3 ? consistency
00:56:870 (56870|0) - add a note at 3 ? its not insane difficulty, too hard
01:24:929 (84929|1,85105|1) - Change the first or the second to 1 or 3 ? same as 1st suggestion

Insane

00:29:252 (29252|0) - not a big fan of this it flows very well
00:30:576 (30576|2) - Move to 3 ? fixd in own way
^ Same on the second part of the song

02:11:076 (131076|0) - Change to 1 maybe ? hmm, that mini jacks fits well there, will see in future if some1 else will point that out

I'm more a EZ/NM modder, sorry if the 2 others diff mod are bad :/
I love your mapping style so much, keep the good work like this Tidek ! <:

EDIT : You can skip all the first part of the mod, I didn't see you updated the map, my bad.

Eternalie wrote:

Hi there nyan~
hope it will help :3

How I do mod

My mods are meant to Help simply , all of it is Simples suggestion and advice mostly based on every mapper styles and way to places notes
feel free to reject anything you find wrong , I'm back to my initial intention about modding , I just wish to help simply . ;3
#SpreadHappyness

Nyaho~

Collumn 4K = 1/2/3/4
[Insane]
00:28:105 (28105|3) - could be two notes (but might cause playability issue so mah just sayin) I dont really see jump will fit there in terms of music and playability
00:38:605 (38605|3) - maybe add a note here nice catch, added
01:18:399 (78399|1) - should be two notes (legit imo) true, added (also i noticed i used 2 notes in hard, lol)
[Hard]
03:07:811 (187811|3) - I think you can add a note to 4 (just the yolo imagination thingy top nep) added
[Normal]
00:51:046 (51046|1) - At first , I would have suggest to move to 4 to make hand balance , but since you did this for alot of part and it's kinda consistent desu~ yeah, no change here : P
LN <333 lel
[Easy]
01:09:929 (69929|0) - add note to 1 ? added
01:20:341 (80341|0,80517|3) - Ctrl+J could do aswell imo fixd
01:32:517 (92517|0) - add another note
I don't know , I just find LN alone really weird to press xD , probably just me lol nah, u are right, there is crash i didnt noticed, added
02:29:517 (149517|3,149694|0) - Ctrl+J could do ( or maybe not , but I feel like mayybe it could so well up to you :3) fixd

Good Luck Tidek~ , have a nice day ^^/
;w; sorry short mod~

- Bad Apple - wrote:

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- Apples Mania Queue (⌒∇⌒。) -

Columns: | 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 |

"Length: 3:08 (2:54 drain time) - so its under 3minutes" - why wasn't I suprised reading something like that from you? xD
Hey there Tidek!
Since you mentioned, that you try a different style than usual, I wanted to give a quick feedback on it!
I really like the new style, mania doesn't have alot of good 4k maps with proper LN usage!
I think it's a good combination of the single-note style from Daisy, Renatus etc. and LNs!
Anyways, let's get started;

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- Easy -

- 00:15:929 - if you want to map the percussion too, i would add a note here
- 00:18:752 - (happens multiple times, you know what i mean)
- 00:27:046 (27046|1) - suggesting moving this to 4, one-hand-mini-trills are a bit hard for Easy IMO hmm, In my opinion one hand trills are overall easier to read for beginner and they are pretty slow, so no change
- 00:43:458 (43458|1) - move this to 4 and this 00:44:164 (44164|3) - to 2 for pitch?
- 00:57:929 (57929|1) - move to 4?
- 01:24:929 - same as before, suggesting moving this to 1, easier for newer players same
- 02:07:458 (127458|1) - move 1
- 02:07:635 (127635|2) - move 4
- 02:11:341 - you could add on here on 3 since the snare is really loud

- Normal -

- 00:27:046 - move to 4?
- 01:24:929 (84929|3) - move to 1? they're the only jacks in the song, they fit the music, but idk, it feels strange to have so few jacks in the song
- 01:46:194 - you could add one here its 1/6 rhythm, so 1/4 is simply wrong snapped
- 01:49:017 - ^ ^
- 01:54:664 - ^ happens a few more times, you know what i mean ^
- 02:22:811 - add one for the kick
- 02:28:458 - same here
- 02:34:105 - you could add notes there, 02:34:282 - here and 02:34:458 - here for the piano, i think it plays nicely! will stay with solo flute
- 02:36:752 - same here, you know what i mean again :3 ^
- 03:08:164 - add one, you've used 3 notes here 03:06:752 - aswell :3

- Hard -

- 00:23:429 (23429|1,23605|1,23870|2,24046|1,24223|2) - CTRL+H? i think it plays better, but thats just my opinion it flows same good like in insane, so no change
- 01:32:164 - add one on 1 or 4 for the cymbal+kick
- 01:32:605 (92605|2,92782|2) - move 2? same like in previous suggestion
- 02:21:929 - I would add a 3rd note to all of these, it's harder, yes, but since it only has 2,98 stars, that shouldnt be an issue will stay with 2 chords
- 02:23:341 - same here, and so on..~ ^
- 02:34:105 - same as in "normal", I'd map the piano, too. I think it plays nicely same like in normal, will stay with flute, but maybe i will consider it

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Not much to say about Hard, it's kinda flawless in my opinion, same with Insane.
I really like the mapset, best of luck with ranked!
Greetings, :3/
Apple

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_underjoy wrote:

1|2|3|4

Easy

00:27:046 (27046|1) - chyba trochę za dużo na EZ, zwłaszcza że nie ma aż tak wyrażnego dźwięku w melodii. 00:29:870 - zwłaszcza że tu nic nie ma
00:32:694 (32694|2) - też bym deletnął nah, w obu przypadkach używałem tego dźwięku praktycznie wszędzie, zostawiam
01:14:164 - dodaj 2 albo 4 (bardziej 2), tak jak wcześniej
01:16:988 - tu 4
01:19:811 (79811|3,79988|0,80341|3,80517|0) - proponuję zachować wcześniejszy rytm? idk nah, perkusja się znacząco zmienia
01:24:929 (84929|2) - 00:27:046 (27046|1) itd ^
01:30:576 (90576|1) - 00:32:694 (32694|2) ^
02:15:576 - dodać 2? te akcenty mogą powinny być spoko
02:16:988 - 02:18:399 - te też
02:28:988 (148988|0,149164|3,149517|0,149694|3) - to co wcześniej ^

Normal

00:15:929 - 00:18:752 - 00:21:576 - brakuje notek, spójrz na Easy
01:04:988 - nie jestem tego pewien ale na Easy w wielu miejscach jest jump, w Normalu pojedyncze LN. Zaakcentowanie tego może utrudnić, ale np w tym miejscu chyba można to zrobić. nah, tutaj jestem głównie na LNy nastawiony, one same bardzo wszystko utrudniają w acc
01:10:635 (70635|0,70811|3,70988|0,71164|3) - dość trudne jak na NM, na pewno? usunięcie zaznaczonych też działa. nope, bo 12 34 jest najłatwiejsze do readingu
01:32:164 - dodaj tu coś?
Drugi chorus to samo co w 01:04:988, swoją drogą niezły copypaste + H ^
01:55:811 - 01:56:164 - tu możesz zaakcentować, na 4?
02:31:458 (151458|2,151635|1) - proponuję pierwszą do 1, drugą do 3, a resztę usunąć (za mocno IMO)

Hard

może jestem głuchy, ale zwróć uwagę na te ghosty
00:24:046 - dodaj 1
00:26:517 - 00:26:870 - 00:27:223 - tutaj wszędzie możesz coś dodać, w całym tym fragmecie. O ile pierwsze dwa opcjonalne, bo lekkość melodii, ale na trzeci powinieneś dać jumpa.
00:33:399 (33399|1,33488|3) - te usuń, bo praktycznie są to ghost note. Dodaj 4 00:33:576 - tutaj i powinno być git. stream zaczyna się właśnie od tego miejsca
00:57:929 - nasty >:) jednoręczne trille, w sumie to są ok ale nie spodziewałem się na Hardzie są ok
01:24:399 - 00:26:517 - 00:26:870 - 00:27:223 to co tu
01:31:988 (91988|1) - ghost note? dźwięk jest na 1/6, fixd
01:32:605 (92605|2) - tego nie słyszę, a jest
01:33:046 (93046|2) - to jest prawdopodobnie na 1/8 jest ok
02:08:958 - 02:09:135 - tu możesz dodać w sumie zostawiam bez, dziwnie by to z insane wtedy wyglądało
02:13:811 (133811|0,133988|1,134164|3,134341|2,134517|1,134694|2) - proponuję przerobić na doubletapy fajnie to brzmi
02:31:458 - tu można dodać 1, tylko wcześniejszą notkę przesunąć do... 4? zostaje przy obecnym

Insane

00:16:105 (16105|3) - proponuję na 2
00:18:752 (18752|1) - 3
00:21:576 (21576|1) - 3 cała trójka denied, jakby były to takie same dźwięki to ok, ale nie są : P
00:28:105 (28105|3) - uhh cichy dźwięk, więc niech będzie
00:33:399 (33399|2,33488|0) - to co w Hardzie pacz hard
00:49:546 - tu można dodać, dźwięk wyraźny
01:00:841 - 01:47:429 - 01:58:723 - 02:45:311 - 02:56:605 - tu też
01:32:605 (92605|2,93046|2) - to co w Hardzie pacz hard

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