1. Easy (1.3 stars, 116 notes)
2. Extreme (5.78 stars, 777 notes)
3. Hard (3.25 stars, 322 notes)
4. Insane (4.88 stars, 723 notes)
5. Normal (2 stars, 192 notes)

HapiiKat wrote:

For the osu (Xtra diff)

00:14:355 (1) - Deleting the beat after this slider and making this slider longer (to where the 2 was) would make it sound a bit better, it sounded a bit awkward here.

00:18:815 (3,4) - It sounds kind of awkward here too, maybe make the slider shorter (to the red tick) and move the 4 over some for spacing.

00:27:431 (1,2,3,4,5) - It might sound better here if you put a triplet here, and make the tjird beat a slider that goes over 3 tick marks (red->blue->white)

00:27:892 (4) - and then you can add 2 beats in the remaining open red and blue ticks (can be two circles or a slider)

00:30:277 (2,3,4,5) - delete these then add a 3 tick long slider and maybe just ad a circle afterwards on the red tick mark after it

00:31:123 (4,5) - maybe make the the 4 slider shorter and add a circle on the blue tick between 4 and 5

01:03:738 (6) - make this slider shorter (to the red tick)

01:56:200 (1,2) - This isnt really bad sounding but it might sound nice by adding a circle in between these two beats (make sure to put them closer together) this one is just a suggestion though, the map will still sound fine without it

02:10:815 (2) - Adding the drum sound here might sound good
(all Fixed)

-u- heheh i hope i helped for this diff, the other diffs looked fine to me so sorry for not modding anything on them haha hope i helped somehow.. XDD

xChangJo wrote:

Hi from my modding Queue :3

Mod

General:

- You need a background with 1366x768.
- 00:03:430 to 00:32:969, why you only map this part for only 2 difficulties, I think you need to map this in easy, normal
and hard, I think this part is very important in the song :c

Easy:

- Some part have a diferent distance snap like this part 00:50:200 (1,2,1) - try to use the same distance snap in easy.
- 00:37:892 (1,2) - This part is a little weird to play, maybe you can try another pattern. Like this, add a circle here
00:37:892, add a slider here 00:38:507 and finish in 00:38:815 add another slider in 00:39:123 and end it in 00:39:738,
another in 00:40:354 and end in 00:40:969
- 01:05:584 (2) - Move to X: 288 and Y: 300
- 01:12:354 (1) - New Combo
- 01:13:584 (5) - Blanket with 01:12:354 (4)
- 01:13:584 (5,6,7,8,9) - use the same distance snap and maybe, try to create a star with this five notes (?)
- 01:24:661 (1) - New Combo
- 01:33:277 (2) - Move this note to X: 144 and Y: 104 and stack this 01:34:507 (3) - with 01:32:046 (1) - and maybe you can
move this 01:35:738 (4) - to X: 449 and Y: 200.
- 01:36:661 (5) - Eliminated this note, I think is not necessary but sound good, is your choice
- 01:55:431 (3) - Maybe you can move this note to other part or make her form diferent for not overlap with 01:51:738 (1)ç
- 02:03:431 (3) - Make this note parallel with the slider
- 02:04:046 (1) - Maybe blanket with 02:03:431 (3)
- 02:08:354 (2) - Move this note to X: 268 and Y: 328 (Try to avoid overlap with this notes)
- 02:10:815 (2) - Make the blanket better with 02:08:969 (1)
- 02:18:507 (3) - Why hide the principal tick in 02:18:815
- 02:23:431 Add a circle here
- 02:23:738 (1) - New Combo
- 02:33:584 (3) - New Combo
- 02:36:046 (1) - Maybe blanket with 02:34:815 (4)
- 02:38:507 (1) - New Combo
- 02:44:046 (2,1) - Why this notes are to close (In the easy difficulty you have a lot of notes with diferent distance snap,
try to use the same for all)
- 02:48:354 (1) - New Combo

Normal:

- 00:35:123 (5,1) - use the same distance snap and then try to stack this note 00:36:969 (2) with 00:35:123 (5) and 00:37:277 (3)
with 00:34:815 (4) for a symetrical pattern.
- 00:45:892 (6) - End the slider in 00:46:507
- 00:51:738 (2,3,4,5) - If you try to create a symetrical figure, try to use the same distance snap
- 01:03:738 (3,4,5,1) - Distance snap
- 01:06:507 (2) - Make the blanket with 01:07:431 (1) a little better
- 01:22:200 (1) - move to X: 92 and Y: 96, Ctrl + C, Ctrl + V in 01:22:815, Ctrl + H and then Ctrl + G
- 01:27:123 (1,2) - Make this symetrical
- 01:29:584 (1) - New Combo
- 01:56:661 (1) - Eliminated the reverse arrow, add circle here 01:57:584 and a slider here 01:57:892 who end in 01:58:200
remember to eliminated this 01:58:200 (2) too
- 01:59:123 (1) - New Combo
- 02:00:354 (3) - Blanker with 02:00:661 (4)
- 02:18:885 (4) - New Combo
- 02:23:738 (1) - New Combo
- 02:31:123 (1,2,3,4) - Use the same distance snap

Hard:

- 00:35:277 (7) - Why you hide the principal beat
- 00:40:200 (1,3) - This rhythm sound good but if you don't hide the principal beat this pattern sound a little better, when
you play the song, you heard a little sound after the slider start, try to don't hide the principal beat
- 00:42:815 (1) - Stack with 00:42:507 (4)
- 00:45:277 (1) - Make a blanket with 00:44:354 (5)
- 01:02:507 (1,3) - Avoid this overlap, try to move 01:04:046 (3) or make another form to this slider
- 01:05:738 (4) - Why this slider is too far from 01:05:584 (3)
- 01:11:738 (8) - Blanket with 01:11:584 (7)
- 01:28:969 (3) - Make this blanket a little better
- 01:57:277 (3) - Blanket with 01:57:738 (4)
- 02:02:507 (3) - Add circle
- 02:05:123 (4) - Make the blanket a little better
- 02:05:738 (6) - don't hide this note and use the same distance snap for this 02:05:584 (5,6,1)
- 02:36:507 (2,3) - Off-Beat slider sound a little weird, try to use on-beat slider or maybe add a circle here 02:36:507 (2)
and a slider in 02:36:661 (3) and end it in 02:36:969
- 02:46:354 (2) - Add circle
- 02:46:815 (4,5) - Eliminated and this end this slider 02:46:507 (3) - in 02:46:815
- 02:51:584 (2) - this slider sound weird because is a off-beat slider without a reason, change this for another pattern
- 03:05:046 (3) - Move to 03:04:969

Insane:

- OD: 7
- 00:09:432 (5) - Make the blanket with 00:10:047 (7) a little better
- 00:10:432 (9) - Move to X: 136 and Y: 184
- 00:15:662 (6) - Eliminated this circle sound a little weird
- 00:30:508 (1,2,3) - The flow with this notes is strange and you hide the circle under the slider, this reason makes the
pattern more weird to play
- 00:32:046 (1,1,2) - The same the flow is a little strange
- 00:36:354 (4) - Stack with 00:35:431 (1)
- 00:57:277 (5) - Stack with 00:57:584 (1)

- 01:12:277 (5) - Move to X: 256 and Y: 336, if you try this pattern and try to avoid is to confused when a person play >.<
- 01:19:738 (1,2,1,2,1) - this is intentional (?) I prefer all stacked in the end but is your choice
- 01:48:354 (2) - Stack with 01:47:738 (4)
- 02:01:277 (1) - Don't hide this note is too hard to read
- 02:05:431 (1) - Eliminated and put a slider 02:05:277 who end in 02:05:584 and put a circle here 02:05:738
- 02:07:584 (5) - Blanket with 02:07:123 (3) and avoid the overlap
- 02:30:815 (1) - New Combo for warning the player to the velocity change on slider
- 02:31:123 to 02:50:661 - Why no sound, when I play I lose the combo for this reason :c
- 02:56:815 (1,2) - This flow is too strange for me
- 03:00:354 (1,2) - this is too hard and unexpected maybe close a little

Osu!:

- OD: 7.5 and AR: 9.2
- 00:18:046 (2,1,2,3) - This flow is too weird
- 00:26:200 (3) - End this slider in 00:26:354
- 01:54:354 (2,3,4) - this off-beat slider sound rare with the song maybe try to use on-beat slider (?)
- 02:26:200 (1) - this spiner is too weird for this difficulty (?) maybe map something here
- 02:43:738 (2,3,4,1,2) - Use the same distance snap to this pattern
- 02:49:892 (2) - Make this parallel with 02:49:584 (1)
- 02:52:354 (4,5) - this pattern seems to forced
- 03:00:661 (1,2) - Avoid the overlap separated a little

This difficult is too insane for me

▼decide your mod

:D

- You need a background with 1366x768. -
- 00:03:430 to 00:32:969, why you only map this part for only 2 difficulties, I think you need to map this in easy, normal
and hard, I think this part is very important in the song :c - seems to be better placed.

Easy:

- Some part have a diferent distance snap like this part 00:50:200 (1,2,1) - try to use the same distance snap in easy.
- 00:37:892 (1,2) - This part is a little weird to play, maybe you can try another pattern. Like this, add a circle here
00:37:892, add a slider here 00:38:507 and finish in 00:38:815 add another slider in 00:39:123 and end it in 00:39:738,
another in 00:40:354 and end in 00:40:969 - Fixed my mined
- 01:05:584 (2) - Move to X: 288 and Y: 300 - k
- 01:12:354 (1) - New Combo - k
- 01:13:584 (5) - Blanket with 01:12:354 (4)
- 01:13:584 (5,6,7,8,9) - use the same distance snap and maybe, try to create a star with this five notes (?) - k use distance snap and fixed
- 01:24:661 (1) - New Combo - k
- 01:33:277 (2) - Move this note to X: 144 and Y: 104 and stack this 01:34:507 (3) - with 01:32:046 (1) - and maybe you can
move this 01:35:738 (4) - to X: 449 and Y: 200. - Fixed
- 01:36:661 (5) - Eliminated this note, I think is not necessary but sound good, is your choice - i cant delete this
- 01:55:431 (3) - Maybe you can move this note to other part or make her form diferent for not overlap with 01:51:738 (1)c - little move it
- 02:03:431 (3) - Make this note parallel with the slider - done
- 02:04:046 (1) - Maybe blanket with 02:03:431 (3) - fixed
- 02:08:354 (2) - Move this note to X: 268 and Y: 328 (Try to avoid overlap with this notes) - fixed
- 02:10:815 (2) - Make the blanket better with 02:08:969 (1)
- 02:18:507 (3) - Why hide the principal tick in 02:18:815 - i thinks is correct
- 02:23:431 Add a circle here - add
- 02:23:738 (1) - New Combo - k
- 02:33:584 (3) - New Combo - k
- 02:36:046 (1) - Maybe blanket with 02:34:815 (4)
- 02:38:507 (1) - New Combo - k
- 02:44:046 (2,1) - Why this notes are to close (In the easy difficulty you have a lot of notes with diferent distance snap,
try to use the same for all) - use distance snap and change note
- 02:48:354 (1) - New Combo - k

=====================

Normal:

- 00:35:123 (5,1) - use the same distance snap and then try to stack this note 00:36:969 (2) with 00:35:123 (5) and 00:37:277 (3)
with 00:34:815 (4) for a symetrical pattern.
- 00:45:892 (6) - End the slider in 00:46:507 - done
- 00:51:738 (2,3,4,5) - If you try to create a symetrical figure, try to use the same distance snap - resnap
- 01:03:738 (3,4,5,1) - Distance snap - snap
- 01:06:507 (2) - Make the blanket with 01:07:431 (1) a little better - Ҭ
- 01:22:200 (1) - move to X: 92 and Y: 96, Ctrl + C, Ctrl + V in 01:22:815, Ctrl + H and then Ctrl + G - done
- 01:27:123 (1,2) - Make this symetrical -
- 01:29:584 (1) - New Combo - 0K
- 01:56:661 (1) - Eliminated the reverse arrow, add circle here 01:57:584 and a slider here 01:57:892 who end in 01:58:200
remember to eliminated this 01:58:200 (2) too - note on note
- 01:59:123 (1) - New Combo - 0K
- 02:00:354 (3) - Blanker with 02:00:661 (4)- done
- 02:18:885 (4) - New Combo - 0K
- 02:23:738 (1) - New Combo - 0K
- 02:31:123 (1,2,3,4) - Use the same distance snap - 0K

===========

Hard:

- 00:35:277 (7) - Why you hide the principal beat - is isnt hide
- 00:40:200 (1,3) - This rhythm sound good but if you don't hide the principal beat this pattern sound a little better, when
you play the song, you heard a little sound after the slider start, try to don't hide the principal beat - Fixed
- 00:42:815 (1) - Stack with 00:42:507 (4) - ok
- 00:45:277 (1) - Make a blanket with 00:44:354 (5) - Fixed
- 01:02:507 (1,3) - Avoid this overlap, try to move 01:04:046 (3) or make another form to this slider -
- 01:05:738 (4) - Why this slider is too far from 01:05:584 (3) - i move it
- 01:11:738 (8) - Blanket with 01:11:584 (7) - done
- 01:28:969 (3) - Make this blanket a little better - done
- 01:57:277 (3) - Blanket with 01:57:738 (4) - Ҭ
- 02:02:507 (3) - Add circle - is not good
- 02:05:123 (4) - Make the blanket a little better - Ҭ
- 02:05:738 (6) - don't hide this note and use the same distance snap for this 02:05:584 (5,6,1) (fixed )
- 02:36:507 (2,3) - Off-Beat slider sound a little weird, try to use on-beat slider or maybe add a circle here 02:36:507 (2)
and a slider in 02:36:661 (3) and end it in 02:36:969 - wow fiexd (is good )
- 02:46:354 (2) - Add circle- add
- 02:46:815 (4,5) - Eliminated and this end this slider 02:46:507 (3) - in 02:46:815 - Fixed my feel
- 02:51:584 (2) - this slider sound weird because is a off-beat slider without a reason, change this for another pattern - i thinks is good
- 03:05:046 (3) - Move to 03:04:969 - move
=======================

Insane:

- OD: 7
- 00:09:432 (5) - Make the blanket with 00:10:047 (7) a little better - Fixed
- 00:10:432 (9) - Move to X: 136 and Y: 184 - Fixed
- 00:15:662 (6) - Eliminated this circle sound a little weird - (nodelete) and fixed the slider
- 00:30:508 (1,2,3) - The flow with this notes is strange and you hide the circle under the slider, this reason makes the
pattern more weird to play - i move it
- 00:32:046 (1,1,2) - The same the flow is a little strange -
- 00:36:354 (4) - Stack with 00:35:431 (1) -
- 00:57:277 (5) - Stack with 00:57:584 (1) -

- 01:12:277 (5) - Move to X: 256 and Y: 336, if you try this pattern and try to avoid is to confused when a person play >.< - Fixed
- 01:19:738 (1,2,1,2,1) - this is intentional (?) I prefer all stacked in the end but is your choice -
- 01:48:354 (2) - Stack with 01:47:738 (4) -
- 02:01:277 (1) - Don't hide this note is too hard to read - FIXED
- 02:05:431 (1) - Eliminated and put a slider 02:05:277 who end in 02:05:584 and put a circle here 02:05:738 - OK
- 02:07:584 (5) - Blanket with 02:07:123 (3) and avoid the overlap -
- 02:30:815 (1) - New Combo for warning the player to the velocity change on slider
- 02:31:123 to 02:50:661 - Why no sound, when I play I lose the combo for this reason :c - Volume up to 60
- 02:56:815 (1,2) - This flow is too strange for me - Move note
- 03:00:354 (1,2) - this is too hard and unexpected maybe close a little - Fixed

=================

Osu!:

- OD: 7.5 and AR: 9.2
- 00:18:046 (2,1,2,3) - This flow is too weird - 2,3 Fixed // this part i think is good
- 00:26:200 (3) - End this slider in 00:26:354 - Fixed
- 01:54:354 (2,3,4) - this off-beat slider sound rare with the song maybe try to use on-beat slider (?) - litte fixed
- 02:26:200 (1) - this spiner is too weird for this difficulty (?) maybe map something here - I think is not weird
- 02:43:738 (2,3,4,1,2) - Use the same distance snap to this pattern - Fixed
- 02:49:892 (2) - Make this parallel with 02:49:584 (1) - Fixed
- 02:52:354 (4,5) - this pattern seems to forced - Fixed
- 03:00:661 (1,2) - Avoid the overlap separated a little - Fixed

Good Luck With Your Beatmap :3

UndeadCapulet wrote:

Hihi! M4M~

SPOILER

[General]

Combo color 1's approach circle is really hard to see, and 1, 2, and 3 are kinda hard to distinguish with the skin you're using.

You're hitsounds are really loud ;_; Typically hitsounds should be around 50%. 80% is pretty much the highest it should ever go, and that would only be for particularly powerful kiai.

Normals and Easys HAVE to have only one distance snap to be rankable. Yours are all over the place. .8x - 1x is typically what's used for Normals, and lower for Easy. I'll come back and mod them again once you've fixed them.
[osu!]

OD+.5?

This isn't that good of a diff name since it has nothing to do with the song and doesn't really express what difficulty the map is.

00:15:584 (4,5,6) This would look nicer if you curved the circles with the slider curve.
00:30:584 (3,4) Line them up with 2's curve.
01:13:123 (2,3) Ctrl+G so the horizontal momentum of the slider is projected into the next circle.
01:16:661 (1,2,3,4) Going from a short stream to a large jump to 2 smaller jumps is really strange. Bring 2 a little closer to 1.
01:17:277 I'd really like if you mapped this part. At the very least, put end the spinner at 01:20:969 and have a slider for 01:21:584's scream.
01:27:123 (1,2) Could use a better blanket.
01:41:200 is where the spinner should end to match the vocals.
01:56:200 (4,5,6) I hope you realize how mean this is
02:32:200 (1,2) Why the 1/4 gap o.O
02:36:046 Move it up a little to line it up better.
02:40:507 (1) I want this slider to end at 02:40:584 to match the vocals.

[Insane]

HP+1 so the gap between Insane and osu! isn't so large.

00:54:200 (2,3) Ctrl+G since the slider's pointing at 3 anyway.
00:55:046 Nudge to the right to make it look a little cleaner.
01:54:200 (1,2) I think this can be blanketed better?
02:15:892 Since things get a little cramped on the next 1,2 nudge this to the left to make it look and play better.

Not much to say about this one, nice work!

[Hard]

HP-.5

01:31:431 (3,4) Blanket, as it is now the next slider is really cramped.
01:41:200 End the spinner here.
02:33:431 (1,2,3) Overlap looks pretty awkward, move 2 and 3 to the left.
02:50:661 (3,4,1) Space the circles evenly with the slider.
03:01:738 (1,2) Blanket.
03:09:892 Why not just have this a straight line? (If you keep the curve, pls blanket better ;_;)

▼decide your mod

:D

General

Combo color 1's approach circle is really hard to see, and 1, 2, and 3 are kinda hard to distinguish with the skin you're using. - change


You're hitsounds are really loud ;_; Typically hitsounds should be around 50%. 80% is pretty much the highest it should ever go, and that would only be for particularly powerful kiai.-

Normals and Easys HAVE to have only one distance snap to be rankable. Yours are all over the place. .8x - 1x is typically what's used for Normals, and lower for Easy. I'll come back and mod them again once you've fixed them. - later i change it ,



osu!

OD+.5? -

This isn't that good of a diff name since it has nothing to do with the song and doesn't really express what difficulty the map is. - change diff name osu! -> Extreme

00:15:584 (4,5,6) This would look nicer if you curved the circles with the slider curve.- 4,5 is fixed but i cant 6
00:30:584 (3,4) Line them up with 2's curve. - little Fixed
01:13:123 (2,3) Ctrl+G so the horizontal momentum of the slider is projected into the next circle. - Fixed
01:16:661 (1,2,3,4) Going from a short stream to a large jump to 2 smaller jumps is really strange. Bring 2 a little closer to 1. - Intervals reducing
01:17:277 I'd really like if you mapped this part. At the very least, put end the spinner at 01:20:969 and have a slider for 01:21:584's scream. - Add 2 slider
01:27:123 (1,2) Could use a better blanket. -
01:41:200 is where the spinner should end to match the vocals. -
01:56:200 (4,5,6) I hope you realize how mean this is - !
02:32:200 (1,2) Why the 1/4 gap o.O - O.o Fixed
02:36:046 Move it up a little to line it up better. - Fixed
02:40:507 (1) I want this slider to end at 02:40:584 to match the vocals. - fixed


Insane

HP+1 so the gap between Insane and osu! isn't so large. - HP↑

00:54:200 (2,3) Ctrl+G since the slider's pointing at 3 anyway. - ok
00:55:046 Nudge to the right to make it look a little cleaner. -_- ok
01:54:200 (1,2) I think this can be blanketed better? - ehhh...o..k..
02:15:892 Since things get a little cramped on the next 1,2 nudge this to the left to make it look and play better. - Fixed

Not much to say about this one, nice work!


Hard

HP-.5 -> 5.5

01:31:431 (3,4) Blanket, as it is now the next slider is really cramped. - slider take ctrl+> 1 Time and little move and Cramped
01:41:200 End the spinner here. -
02:33:431 (1,2,3) Overlap looks pretty awkward, move 2 and 3 to the left. - Move it
02:50:661 (3,4,1) Space the circles evenly with the slider. - Fixed
03:01:738 (1,2) Blanket. - Ok
03:09:892 Why not just have this a straight line? (If you keep the curve, pls blanket better ;_;) - straight slider is View a bad

Good luck on getting ranked! I love Akiakane's version of this song~!

1. I'm not 100% sure, but I think all difficulties need to start at the same time for the mapset to be rankable, your two highest difficulties start earlier :c
2. Some of the slider velocities are pretty unbalanced, Normal diff to hard is 1.2 to 1.6
3. Also the diff spread from hard to insane is pretty high, insane is 1.7 stars higher owo

1. 00:35:431 (7) - Fix the blanket with 00:36:200 (9)
2. 00:40:200 (7) - Fix blanket with 00:40:354 (1)
3. 00:44:354 (5,1) - Spacing is too close here
4. 00:50:200 (1,2) - Could blanket these
5. 01:54:969 (3,4) - ^
6. 02:53:892 (3,4) - Weird spacing

• 
  OD 8 on this song should be perfectly fine

1. 00:54:200 (2,3,4) - Spacing is weird here
2. 01:06:200 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - There isn't anything in the music to increase the spacing between each pair here, it's really just forced to make the map harder, keep it fairly consistent like you did in 02:15:123 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2)
3. 01:15:584 (5) - Jump is wayyy too far here, bring it closer to 01:15:738 (6), compared to 01:15:123 (2,3,4) there isn't quite enough emphasis on 01:15:584 (5,6) to make it that long
4. 01:28:969 (3,4,5) - Spacing here is also too long, you seem to be following the instruments in this part and there's nothing special about the notes played here
   
   Try this

   
5. 02:07:431 (4,5) - Fix blanket
6. 02:09:431 (2) - ^
7. 02:42:969 (4) -
   Imperfect Blanket ._.

   
8. 02:47:584 (2) - Bump this up a bit so it forms a perfect triangle with the heads of 02:47:738 (3,4)
9. 03:10:046 (2) - Why not put it right in the center of the pattern?

Ringating wrote:

from my queue:

although you requested just a bg fix, I did a bit more :p Your mp3 was pretty low quality so I got you a new one (from here).
Here is the new mp3.

Also, since this is from a music video pv thing, it makes sense for the video to be put on the beatmap, so I got that for you as well (from here).
Here is the .avi.

and finally, here's the bg

cropped to 16:9 and resized to 768p from this

sukiNathan wrote:

Hi from modding queue~

[General]

1. I'm not 100% sure, but I think all difficulties need to start at the same time for the mapset to be rankable, your two highest difficulties start earlier :c
2. Some of the slider velocities are pretty unbalanced, Normal diff to hard is 1.2 to 1.6 -
3. Also the diff spread from hard to insane is pretty high, insane is 1.7 stars higher owo

[Hard]

1. 00:35:431 (7) - Fix the blanket with 00:36:200 (9) - Fixed
2. 00:40:200 (7) - Fix blanket with 00:40:354 (1) - Fixed
3. 00:44:354 (5,1) - Spacing is too close here - ah.. Fixed
4. 00:50:200 (1,2) - Could blanket these -
5. 01:54:969 (3,4) - ^ - Fixed
6. 02:53:892 (3,4) - Weird spacing - Fixed

[Insane]

• 
  OD 8 on this song should be perfectly fine - ok

1. 00:54:200 (2,3,4) - Spacing is weird here - Fixed
2. 01:06:200 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - There isn't anything in the music to increase the spacing between each pair here, it's really just forced to make the map harder, keep it fairly consistent like you did in 02:15:123 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Fixed
3. 01:15:584 (5) - Jump is wayyy too far here, bring it closer to 01:15:738 (6), compared to 01:15:123 (2,3,4) there isn't quite enough emphasis on 01:15:584 (5,6) to make it that long - http://puu.sh/fjNDB/965acec5df.jpg
4. 01:28:969 (3,4,5) - Spacing here is also too long, you seem to be following the instruments in this part and there's nothing special about the notes played here - Fixed
   
   Try this

   
5. 02:07:431 (4,5) - Fix blanket -
6. 02:09:431 (2) - ^ - Fixed
7. 02:42:969 (4) - Fixed
   
   Imperfect Blanket ._.

   
8. 02:47:584 (2) - Bump this up a bit so it forms a perfect triangle with the heads of 02:47:738 (3,4) - Fixed
9. 03:10:046 (2) - Why not put it right in the center of the pattern?

- Done

Might just be me, but I think the map could use some improvement visually, there are a lot of random overlaps and imperfect blankets

Find give thanks that I have not blanket properly ! , Thanks alot !!!

Z e r s s wrote:

Hi!

In your easy diff., in 02:03:070, there's this:


I think it's better to seperate these three objects a bit and make them looks like that:


And, in the skin, you have forgotten to replace the hit300k.png

I haven't time to continue, I'll make another post if I see something ^^

I'm sorry, I don't speak English very well :/

pishifat wrote:

19:43 - pishizor.: also mention
19:43 - pishizor.: extreme shoudl have higher od than insane -.-

Ringating wrote:

I strongly suggest you use the mp3 from my post, it sounds noticeably better (easy to tell @ 1:03 when the vocals kick in, the drums over the vocals start to sound kinda gross)

if your audio setup is less than ideal you may not hear the difference, but the new mp3 is definitely an improvement. (offset 3355)

pishifat wrote:

19:43 - pishizor.: also mention
19:43 - pishizor.: extreme shoudl have higher od than insane -.-

still no kds

1. AWESOME SONGGGGG

1. 00:08:586 (1,1) - Try to allign these a little bit better
2. 00:09:202 (3) - Unsure about this note...kinda caught me off guard a few times.
3. 00:15:201 (1,2,3) - The spacing between these isn't the same as: 00:15:508 (4,5,1) - ... maybe fix?
4. 00:18:739 (3,4,5) - Change the spacing between 4 and 5 because they're too far apart for how fast they come. (make them closer)
5. 00:20:585 (1) - Move a little bit to the right, seems a bit too far away from the previous note.
6. 00:26:124 (3,4) - Way too close, I suggest spreading these out.
7. 00:27:970 (6) - Too close to the previous note (look around for anymore of these if you see any and fix)
8. 00:31:047 (4) - Move closer to (5)
9. 00:46:739 (1) - Move a bit farther from the previous note
10. 00:47:662 (3,4) - Unsure about these
11. 01:52:893 (4,5,1,2,3) - These are weird to play and look at, suggest change.
12. 01:53:816 (5) - Try not to overlap like this
13. 02:02:893 (3) - Another overlap
14. 02:13:201 (1) - Too close to (7)
15. 02:16:508 (2) - This is a really weird pattern, rhythm, and note placement. Consider rethinking this note.
16. 02:32:124 (1,2) - Idk about these notes either...
17. 02:59:047 (7) - Overlaps the second (1) combo afterwards
18. 02:59:970 (1) - I think this velocity is really fast
19. 03:09:816 (1) - I don't like this ending slider velocity either ^^

1. 00:04:894 (6) - Overlaps, fix.
2. 00:05:356 (8,9,10,11,12,1) - Inconsistent spacing. The first triplet is spaced differently than the second...idk if this should happen.
3. 00:07:971 (8) - Place directly on top of the (2) afterwards
4. 00:11:509 (2) - Try to not overlap sliders like this
5. 00:15:970 (2) - ^
6. 00:24:585 (2) - ^
7. 00:41:355 (1) - This overlap is obvious lol
8. 00:54:432 (4,5,6,7) - Place the (4) separately from the (5,6,7)...because your rhythm suggests other than this.
9. 01:04:893 (1) - More overlaps
10. 01:16:893 (4) - More overlaps...I won't say it anymore just find more of them that you think don't belong and fix
11. 01:35:970 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is weird
12. 01:41:201 (1,2) - These last notes are weird with spacing and such.
13. 01:54:585 (2) - Move farther from previous note
14. 02:11:201 (5) - Move farther from the note after it (maybe a little to the right?)
15. 02:15:662 (1,2,1,2) - This part throws the player off from the rest of this pattern. Select the last (1,2) and CTRL+G it, that would make more sense.
16. 02:22:124 (4) - Move farther from the note after

1. You don't really have to increase the CS in hard. I normally like when mappers keep it the same as insane+ (when it's a reasonable CS). It's your map though, do what you will
2. 00:39:355 (6,7,1) - This was all placed strangely
3. 00:48:585 (3,4) - This rhythm feels off
4. 01:02:431 (1) - Overlaps (3)
5. 01:03:970 (3,1,2) - These notes are way too close for this rhythm, consider spreading them out.
6. 01:28:585 (2) - Overlaps (3)
7. 01:53:662 (2,3) - More weird spacings ^^
8. 01:54:893 (3) - Overlaps (4)
9. 02:09:508 (3) - This is WAY too close to the previous note for that rhythm
10. 03:09:816 (1) - Maybe change this to two notes instead of a slider?

1. 00:49:508 (4) - I do not suggest this to be directly under the note previously
2. 01:22:124 (1,1) - For this you can do something like: http://prntscr.com/6157gu
3. 02:22:431 (3) - This note is all crooked and stuff xD

reyder wrote:

M4M~

hah

[General]

1. AWESOME SONGGGGG

[Extreme]

1. 00:08:586 (1,1) - Try to allign these a little bit better
2. 00:09:202 (3) - Unsure about this note...kinda caught me off guard a few times.
3. 00:15:201 (1,2,3) - The spacing between these isn't the same as: 00:15:508 (4,5,1) - ... maybe fix?
4. 00:18:739 (3,4,5) - Change the spacing between 4 and 5 because they're too far apart for how fast they come. (make them closer)
5. 00:20:585 (1) - Move a little bit to the right, seems a bit too far away from the previous note.
6. 00:26:124 (3,4) - Way too close, I suggest spreading these out.
7. 00:27:970 (6) - Too close to the previous note (look around for anymore of these if you see any and fix)
8. 00:31:047 (4) - Move closer to (5)
9. 00:46:739 (1) - Move a bit farther from the previous note
10. 00:47:662 (3,4) - Unsure about these
11. 01:52:893 (4,5,1,2,3) - These are weird to play and look at, suggest change.
12. 01:53:816 (5) - Try not to overlap like this
13. 02:02:893 (3) - Another overlap
14. 02:13:201 (1) - Too close to (7)
15. 02:16:508 (2) - This is a really weird pattern, rhythm, and note placement. Consider rethinking this note.
16. 02:32:124 (1,2) - Idk about these notes either...
17. 02:59:047 (7) - Overlaps the second (1) combo afterwards
18. 02:59:970 (1) - I think this velocity is really fast
19. 03:09:816 (1) - I don't like this ending slider velocity either ^^

Overall really nice and interesting difficulty. The difficulty of the map increases as it goes and eventually gets really difficult which is always fun and I like it! Keep mapping

[Insane]

1. 00:04:894 (6) - Overlaps, fix.
2. 00:05:356 (8,9,10,11,12,1) - Inconsistent spacing. The first triplet is spaced differently than the second...idk if this should happen.
3. 00:07:971 (8) - Place directly on top of the (2) afterwards
4. 00:11:509 (2) - Try to not overlap sliders like this
5. 00:15:970 (2) - ^
6. 00:24:585 (2) - ^
7. 00:41:355 (1) - This overlap is obvious lol
8. 00:54:432 (4,5,6,7) - Place the (4) separately from the (5,6,7)...because your rhythm suggests other than this.
9. 01:04:893 (1) - More overlaps
10. 01:16:893 (4) - More overlaps...I won't say it anymore just find more of them that you think don't belong and fix
11. 01:35:970 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is weird
12. 01:41:201 (1,2) - These last notes are weird with spacing and such.
13. 01:54:585 (2) - Move farther from previous note
14. 02:11:201 (5) - Move farther from the note after it (maybe a little to the right?)
15. 02:15:662 (1,2,1,2) - This part throws the player off from the rest of this pattern. Select the last (1,2) and CTRL+G it, that would make more sense.
16. 02:22:124 (4) - Move farther from the note after

Another really cool difficulty. It actually builds up to the difficulty after (extreme)...great map and potential for a ranking.

[Hard]

One thing I noticed, a lot of inconsistency between notes and rhythm!

1. You don't really have to increase the CS in hard. I normally like when mappers keep it the same as insane+ (when it's a reasonable CS). It's your map though, do what you will
2. 00:39:355 (6,7,1) - This was all placed strangely
3. 00:48:585 (3,4) - This rhythm feels off
4. 01:02:431 (1) - Overlaps (3)
5. 01:03:970 (3,1,2) - These notes are way too close for this rhythm, consider spreading them out.
6. 01:28:585 (2) - Overlaps (3)
7. 01:53:662 (2,3) - More weird spacings ^^
8. 01:54:893 (3) - Overlaps (4)
9. 02:09:508 (3) - This is WAY too close to the previous note for that rhythm
10. 03:09:816 (1) - Maybe change this to two notes instead of a slider?

Fairly decent difficulty but the consistency with the rhythm was weird.

[Normal]

1. 00:49:508 (4) - I do not suggest this to be directly under the note previously
2. 01:22:124 (1,1) - For this you can do something like: http://prntscr.com/6157gu
3. 02:22:431 (3) - This note is all crooked and stuff xD

Not much to look at from here on out...it's a pretty polished difficulty. Maybe a bit of errors you can work out that I didn't see but for the most part it's looking pretty good.

[Easy]

I'm really bad with easy so I saw nothing that you could fix up but that's just me

GOOD LUCK WITH THE MAP!!!! And thanks for your mod on my m4m queue.

decide your mod

[General]

1. AWESOME SONGGGGG - Thanks !!

[Extreme]

1. 00:08:586 (1,1) - Try to allign these a little bit better -
2. 00:09:202 (3) - Unsure about this note...kinda caught me off guard a few times.-
3. 00:15:201 (1,2,3) - The spacing between these isn't the same as: 00:15:508 (4,5,1) - ... maybe fix? - Fixed it
4. 00:18:739 (3,4,5) - Change the spacing between 4 and 5 because they're too far apart for how fast they come. (make them closer) - Fixed (X0.98)
5. 00:20:585 (1) - Move a little bit to the right, seems a bit too far away from the previous note. - Fixed
6. 00:26:124 (3,4) - Way too close, I suggest spreading these out. - Fixed
7. 00:27:970 (6) - Too close to the previous note (look around for anymore of these if you see any and fix) -Fixed
8. 00:31:047 (4) - Move closer to (5) -
9. 00:46:739 (1) - Move a bit farther from the previous note - move it
10. 00:47:662 (3,4) - Unsure about these - Fixed it
11. 01:52:893 (4,5,1,2,3) - These are weird to play and look at, suggest change. - hold it
12. 01:53:816 (5) - Try not to overlap like this - Fixed
13. 02:02:893 (3) - Another overlap - http://puu.sh/fxssT/cf45e7291c.jpg
14. 02:13:201 (1) - Too close to (7) - Fixed
15. 02:16:508 (2) - This is a really weird pattern, rhythm, and note placement. Consider rethinking this note. - Fixed
16. 02:32:124 (1,2) - Idk about these notes either... - Fixed !!!
17. 02:59:047 (7) - Overlaps the second (1) combo afterwards -
18. 02:59:970 (1) - I think this velocity is really fast -
19. 03:09:816 (1) - I don't like this ending slider velocity either ^^ -

Overall really nice and interesting difficulty. The difficulty of the map increases as it goes and eventually gets really difficult which is always fun and I like it! Keep mapping


[Insane]

1. 00:04:894 (6) - Overlaps, fix. - Fixed
2. 00:05:356 (8,9,10,11,12,1) - Inconsistent spacing. The first triplet is spaced differently than the second...idk if this should happen. - > http://puu.sh/fxgLD/90de15fb6d.jpg
3. 00:07:971 (8) - Place directly on top of the (2) afterwards - Fixed
4. 00:11:509 (2) - Try to not overlap sliders like this -
5. 00:15:970 (2) - ^ - Fixed
6. 00:24:585 (2) - ^ -
7. 00:41:355 (1) - This overlap is obvious lol -
8. 00:54:432 (4,5,6,7) - Place the (4) separately from the (5,6,7)...because your rhythm suggests other than this. - http://puu.sh/fxj2r/8cc932f4e5.jpg
9. 01:04:893 (1) - More overlaps -
10. 01:16:893 (4) - More overlaps...I won't say it anymore just find more of them that you think don't belong and fix - >
11. 01:35:970 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is weird - http://puu.sh/fxeD3/9a819fce9d.jpg
12. 01:41:201 (1,2) - These last notes are weird with spacing and such.-
13. 01:54:585 (2) - Move farther from previous note - Move note
14. 02:11:201 (5) - Move farther from the note after it (maybe a little to the right?) - Move note
15. 02:15:662 (1,2,1,2) - This part throws the player off from the rest of this pattern. Select the last (1,2) and CTRL+G it, that would make more sense. - fixed
16. 02:22:124 (4) - Move farther from the note after -> http://puu.sh/fxcXd/bdc34a6c06.jpg

Another really cool difficulty. It actually builds up to the difficulty after (extreme)...great map and potential for a ranking.


[Hard]

One thing I noticed, a lot of inconsistency between notes and rhythm!

1. You don't really have to increase the CS in hard. I normally like when mappers keep it the same as insane+ (when it's a reasonable CS). It's your map though, do what you will
2. 00:39:355 (6,7,1) - This was all placed strangely - ah... is good
3. 00:48:585 (3,4) - This rhythm feels off - i
4. 01:02:431 (1) - Overlaps (3) =
5. 01:03:970 (3,1,2) - These notes are way too close for this rhythm, consider spreading them out. -
6. 01:28:585 (2) - Overlaps (3) - Fixed
7. 01:53:662 (2,3) - More weird spacings ^^ - F..i..xed ?
8. 01:54:893 (3) - Overlaps (4) - Fixed
9. 02:09:508 (3) - This is WAY too close to the previous note for that rhythm - ....
10. 03:09:816 (1) - Maybe change this to two notes instead of a slider? - slider is good

Fairly decent difficulty but the consistency with the rhythm was weird.


[Normal]

1. 00:49:508 (4) - I do not suggest this to be directly under the note previously -
2. 01:22:124 (1,1) - For this you can do something like: http://prntscr.com/6157gu - Fixed
3. 02:22:431 (3) - This note is all crooked and stuff xD - Fixed to Straight slider

Not much to look at from here on out...it's a pretty polished difficulty. Maybe a bit of errors you can work out that I didn't see but for the most part it's looking pretty good.


[Easy]

I'm really bad with easy so I saw nothing that you could fix up but that's just me


GOOD LUCK WITH THE MAP!!!! And thanks for your mod on my m4m queue.

kamikin wrote:

Hi hi! From my queue!

General

You could make the slider border black, if you want it to be black I can tell you how (I dont wanna watse space if you dont )
- - how can mack it ? please tell me !!

Easy

00:42:739 (1) - For a better looking pattern use a copied version of 00:41:508 (5) - which is flipped -
00:46:431 (5) - This sounds strange with a repeat, make it a long slider -
01:06:124 (3) - ^ -
01:17:201 (1,2) - Imo I think 1 should blanket 2 (use 2's approach circle) to make it look better and flow better http://puu.sh/fBS9x/62fbff1a70.jpg - fixed
01:19:662 (1) - In an Easy you should have 4 white ticks for 'recovery time' otherwise the player will combo break, end the spinner at 01:20:893
01:22:124 (1,1) - NC kind of fits the the music but having no new combos fits it even better - Remove new comebo note (2)
01:36:893 (1) - Same thing with recovery time, end it at 01:40:431 or the big white tick after -
01:51:662 (1,3) - Unnecessary overlap -
02:01:508 (1,2,3) - Overlaps and weird pattern, try http://puu.sh/fBTAP/dd834fb64b.jpg - thanks but..
02:03:970 (1) - No NC - k
02:11:355 (5) - NC - k
02:26:124 (1) - Recovery time, end at 02:29:816 - k
02:33:508 (1) - No NC - k
02:44:585 (1,2) - Swap NC - k
02:45:816 (2) - No repeat, longer slider -
02:54:431 (2,2) - Overlap -

Normal

00:37:201 (3) - Make 3 blanket 1 - done
00:37:201 (3,2) - Weird overlap -
00:39:047 (3,1) - Overlap -
00:51:662 (2,3,4,5) - Not a perfect square - Fixed square
01:22:124 (1) - No NC - k
01:30:739 (3,1) - Overlap -
02:02:585 (2,4) - Overlap - Fixed
02:06:431 (1,1) - ^ -
02:26:124 (1) - A normal needs 2 white ticks of 'recovery time' , end this at 02:30:431 - thanks
02:31:047 (1) - use this to blanket 2 -
02:33:508 (1,3) - Overlap -
02:40:278 (4) - Repeat sounds weird, imo it should be a longer slider without a repeat - no log slider_ short slider+whistel sound - no repeat - thanks !
02:54:431 (1) - No NC - k

Hard

00:35:355 (7,9) - Overlaps - fixed
00:38:431 (3,6) - ^ -
00:40:124 (7) - Move this into 6's path (where the cursor is moving naturally after the slider) for better flow - move it ..
01:02:431 (1,3) - Overlap - done
01:09:201 (1,2) - Swap NC - k
01:25:662 (1) - No NC - k
01:30:585 (1) - No NC - k
01:52:893 (1) - No NC - k
02:00:124 (5,7) - Overlap -
02:09:508 (3) - Why anti-jump? - little move up note(3) and fixed the slider Curve
02:37:047 (4) - ^ -
02:41:201 (2,1) - Overlap - done
03:05:508 (1,2,1,1,1,1,2,1) - the NCs here are really crazy and weird - fixed

I hope I was helpful!

1. 00:32:893 (1) - 시작부분 피니쉬?
2. 00:37:816 (1) - 끝부분 클랩은 필요없을것 같아요. 별로 어울리지도 않고..
3. 00:47:355 (6,1) - 이지나 노멀은 반드시 디스턴스를 지켜주셔야 합니다. 이건 디스턴스가 어긋났네요. 고쳐주세요
4. 00:49:431 (2,3) - 이건 대체 어떤 리듬에 맞추신 건지 모르겠네요. 리듬 정확히 맞춰주세요
5. 01:19:662 (1) - 이 스피너 너무 짧고 뒤에 노트도 보여서 좀 불안하네요. 그냥 박자 짜맞추시는거 추천드립니다.

HabiHolic wrote:

your request

[General]

[Easy]

1. 00:32:893 (1) - 시작부분 피니쉬?
2. 00:37:816 (1) - 끝부분 클랩은 필요없을것 같아요. 별로 어울리지도 않고..
3. 00:47:355 (6,1) - 이지나 노멀은 반드시 디스턴스를 지켜주셔야 합니다. 이건 디스턴스가 어긋났네요. 고쳐주세요
4. 00:49:431 (2,3) - 이건 대체 어떤 리듬에 맞추신 건지 모르겠네요. 리듬 정확히 맞춰주세요
5. 01:19:662 (1) - 이 스피너 너무 짧고 뒤에 노트도 보여서 좀 불안하네요. 그냥 박자 짜맞추시는거 추천드립니다.
6. 모두 수정했어요.

나중에 마저할게요

[ B l u e ] wrote:

Her voice scares me
it's so good but it's so powerful

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ _ Hatsune Miku ( 모딩모딩!! 저는 초보 한국인은 잘 가리지 않는편이라 :3 )

General

1. MP3 파일의 음질이 190kbps 입니다.
   문제 될지 안될지는 모르지만.. 128kbps 또는 192kpps 가 대부분의 적당한 기준으로 알고있어요. - > Mp3 파일 한번 교체했는데...
2. 노말부터의 태그에 게스트 난이도가 아닌사람들을 넣으셧는데 태그는 모든난이도 다 동일하게 맟춰주셔야되고 게스트난이도처럼 난이도에 들어가지 않는사람들은 지워주세요. ( 예 ) : 모딩했던사람이라던지 특별한 이유가 없다면 지워주시고 이지처럼 태그해서 맟춰주세요. - > 삭제
3. 소스에 Nico Nico Douga 추가해주세요. - > 추가

Easy

• 브레이크타임 30초 이상되면 안되는걸로 알고있어요.

1. 00:13:201 (1) - 여기서부터라도 시작해주세요. - > 앞부분은 안넣고싶어요..
2. 02:11:355 (1) - 흐름이 너무 안좋아요. 곡선같은걸로 바꿔주세요. - > 수정!

그리고 맵의 대부분에 쓸대없는 클렙이 너무 많은듯 싶네요.
( 쿵짝쿵짝인데 짝짝짝짝 같은느낌 .. ) 약간의 팁을 드리자면 ...
00:33:201 - 여기가 클렙박자에요. 00:33:816 - 00:34:431 - 00:35:047 - 잘 들어보시면 짝 짝 짝 짝 소리가 들려요.

한가지 .. 조언을 해드리자면 .. 지금 이지난이도의 맵에 00:32:893 (1) - 여기에서부터 끝까지 드래그 하신뒤에 z키 누르셔서 00:32:893 (1) - 여기로 오신다음 00:33:201 (2) - 여기까지 드래그하셔서 옴기시면 딱 클렙박자가 맞아요. 그리고 나머지는 직접 안맞는곳이나 어울리지 않는곳은 수정하셔야겠지만요.
아마 바로 위에 말했던말이 해결방법인것 같네요. (으.......)

Normal

1. 00:35:047 (5) - 클렙 추가해주세요. 박자는 클렙박자인데 빠져있어요. - > ok
2. 00:37:201 (3) - 슬라이더 앞에 클렙제거해주세요. 그리고 뒤에 클렙추가해주세요. 그게 맞는박자에요. - > ok
3. 00:40:278 (1,2) - 1번 슬라이더의 뒤에있는 클렙을 제거해주시고 00:41:201 (2) - 여기에 클렙추가해주세요. - > ok
4. 00:42:124 (4) - 앞에 클랩제거해주세요. - > ok
5. 00:42:739 (1) - 중간에 클랩제거해주세요. 중간의 왼쪽이 맞는박자에요. - > 제가 보기엔 맞는것 같아요.
6. 00:44:585 (3) - 앞에 클랩제거 - > ok
7. 00:45:816 (6) - 마찬가지. - > ok
8. 00:48:739 (3) - 갑짜기 보컬따라가는거 안좋은버릇이에요. 00:49:201 - 여기로 서클 옴겨주시고 00:49:508 (4) - 4번 슬라이더의 앞과 뒤 , 클렙 스왑해주세요. 앞에있는 클렙을 뒤로 변경 + 00:49:201 (1) - 뉴 콤보 추가까지 해주세요. 뉴콤보를 해 주 는 이유는 00:47:662 (2,1) - 노트가 떨어져있어서그래요. 간격차이는 얼마없는데. 그럴떄 해주시면되요. -
9. 00:50:124 (1,3) - 1번 슬라이더의 중간에 클렙제거. 3번 서클에 클렙제거. - > ok
10. 01:06:431 (2) - 중간에 클렙 제거해주세요. - > ok
11. 01:11:662 (4) - 앞에 클렙제거. - > ok
12. 01:26:431 (4) - 위와 이유 같아요. - > ok
13. 01:52:893 (3,4) - 클렙 3번 끝이아니고 4번 시작이에요. - > (3) 앞부분을 들어보니까 안맞아서 슬라이더(3) 중간에 클렙 (4) 번 시작부분에 클렙 추가했습니다.
14. 02:00:585 (4) - 중간에 클렙제거. - > ok
15. 02:02:585 (2) - 앞에 클렙 제거해주세요. - > ok
16. 02:07:970 (3) - 서클추가해주세요. 클랩도 추가해주세요. ( 박자 들어가야되는 박자에요. ) - > ok
17. 02:10:739 (4) - 앞에 클렙제거. - > ok
18. 02:12:585 (3,4) - 여기도 3번 끝이 아니고 4번 시작에 클렙들어가야되요. - > ok
19. 02:15:662 (7) - 앞에 클랩제거해주세요. - > ok
20. 02:25:508 (3) - 앞에 클랩제거해주세요. - > ok

다른 난이도들도 히트사운드 들리는곳만 넣어주시면 맵이 더 좋아질것 같아요. :3
굿럭~ - 넵

Euny wrote:

your request! came from my queue
글남겨주셨었는데 그 전에 온사람 먼저 받고 큐 클로스해버려서
근데 몇분차이로 늦으신걸 또 지나치기 너무 죄송스러워서 왔습니다 전체적으로 너무 맵이 괜찮습니다.
고쳤으면 하는부분만 집어볼게요. p.s 제너럴만 영어로 쓸게요! ㅎ 영어모딩이 랭먹일때 도움된다 하더라구요
카운트다운관련인데, 일부러두신거면 그냥 무시하세요~

• General

1. intentional? if or not, disable countdown

• Easy

1. 00:35:970 (2,1) - 1번슬라 끝 2번에 스택할 수 있을거같은데, .. 음 .. 일부러 두신거라면 무시해주세요 ㅎ
2. 00:42:739 (1) - 머리에 피니시 추가해주세요 -
3. 02:11:355 (1) - 뒤에 심벌소리 들리는걸로 보아, 이 슬라의 머리엔 클랩보단 피니시가 어울리는거 같네요 - added

• Normal

1. 00:42:739 (1) - 이지랑 같은부분이네요 머리부분에 피니시 추가해주세요 - added
2. 02:11:355 (1) - ^ - added

• Hard

1. 02:09:508 (3) - 제가 플레이할때, 전의 노트와 타이밍이 1박자가 떨어져있는데도 너무 가까운느낌에 리딩이 불편해지는걸 느꼈어요
   노트 하나정도의 거리만 띄워, 60도만 돌려서 x236y208로 옮겨두니 플로우는 살리면서 적절히 '다음노트가 좀 떨어져있구나'라는 느낌을 살리는게 오히려 도움이 될거같네요! - Done
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 02:15:970 (1) - 이 슬라이더 전의 패턴과 비슷한느낌인데 노트간의 간격이 조금 먼 느낌이 없지 않아 있네요! x232y106으로 옮겨 02:14:893 (4,5) - 와의 연관성을 살려보는것도 좋을거같아요 - Done
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 02:26:124 (7) - 뉴콤! - ok

• Insane

1. 언스냅부분만 좀 리체크해주셔요~
   
   Done

엑스트라 모딩을 아직 잘 못해 생략해 죄송합니다.
인세인이 진짜 맘에드네요 너무 시원시원하게 잘 짜신거같습니다! - That's okay

1. Sweet holy mother of epilipsy warning

1. 00:32:893 (1) - Angle this so that it leads into the next slider better
   
   
2. 00:44:585 (3,4) - Careful with this much contrary motion in a normal
   
   
3. 00:45:816 (6,1) - These shouldn't touch
   
   
4. 01:07:355 (1,3) - Put 3 where the 1 slider ends
   
   
5. 01:09:201 (5) - Make this the same angle as 1/2
   
   
6. 01:23:355 (3) - Random curved slider in a pattern of all straight/straight turns? Change
   
   
7. 01:29:508 (1,2) - I didn't count, but I think the angles are off
   
   
8. 01:33:816 (4) - Curve
   
   
9. 01:52:893 (3) - Random straight slider in a group of all curveds? Change
   
   
10. 02:04:585 (5) - ^
    
    
11. 02:19:355 (1) - ^
    
    
12. 02:35:970 (1) - Straight turn
    
    
13. 02:43:970 (2) - Curve
    
    
14. 02:57:508 (4) - Straight
    
    
15. 03:01:201 (2,4) - Either curve 2 or straight turn 4

1. 00:39:047 (5) - Straight up into a curve?
   
   
2. 00:46:278 (3) - Curve
   
   
3. 01:04:278 (3,1,2) - Same spacing as last combo, but different timing? I'd change this one over the former, but change one.
   
   
4. 02:09:970 (6) - NC
   
   
5. 02:32:124 (5) - Curve
   
   
6. 02:57:201 (2,3) - Curve
   
   
7. 00:00:000 (0) - Just wanted to say, this feels more like an Insane then a hard :/

1. 01:00:893 (1,1) - Remove one of these NC
   
   
2. 01:47:662 (4,5) - No need to curl this so hard
   
   
3. 01:50:124 (1,1) - Remove one of these NC

Fort wrote:

From artic pole
wow star map! =w=b
nice skin :3

Extreme:
00:04:279 (2,3) - its clearly have triplet sound, why didnt map triplet? ex: 00:09:202 (3) -
00:18:432 (2) - move this slider to left a bit (make slider didnt overlap with 00:18:739 (3) - Fixed
00:29:816 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - this pattern kinda confusing + overmapping, like 00:30:431 - you should add circle or anyone else to support strong beat more - Remove slider And add Red tick circle
01:21:431 - add notes here? to improve patterning -
01:36:893 (1) - im suggesting you to extend spinner end to 01:41:355 - (you map spinner start at vocal sound, so its very nice thing if you put spinner end at vocal end too) - Fixed
01:54:585 (3,5) - you have purpose for this overlap? - Fixed
02:33:739 (2,3) - distance to high and uncommon in your map i guess, and the overlap makes this pattern is quite hard to read (but it's okay) - Fixed
02:40:278 (1,1) - im sure you can make this pattern better in gameplay if you make 1/2 slider instead of 3/4 slider (and i didnt see any reason why you map 3/4 slider lol) -
02:59:201 (1) - this one >.< (why this slow down very sudden in kiai), but i see if you put fast slider in here you need to fix patterning in there (not necessary job i guess, so you can keep it, but dont make slider speed slow too sudden) use 1.2x or 1.3SV is enough for this oneFixed
03:04:893 (5,6,7,8) - airman jump - i love Jump
yeah your map creepy, i cant even FC it ;_;

Insane:
my god i love this map. in patterning, stacking, even overlaps looks good, but i see something here
02:45:816 (1) - maybe you can make curve and blanket it for 02:46:432 (3) -
02:50:739 (8,1) - pattern error, you should move (1) to 02:50:739 - (there is no finish hitsound in blue ticks) so the slider end will be in 02:51:047 - and it fits the music - Fixed

good luck!

1. 카운트다운 필요 없는것 같네요, 꺼보시는건 어떤가요?

1. 01:36:893 (1,1) - 스피너 돌리는 와중에 노트가 보이면 언랭요소입니다

1. 00:37:201 (3,1) - 간격이 일정하지 않네요, 노말에서는 언랭요소라고 생각합니다
2. 01:17:201 (1,1) - 이지에서도 말했듯이 언랭요소라고 생각합니다, 스피너를 01:20:893 여기서 끝내보시길
3. 03:09:970 - 이런 식의 키아이 사용은 언랭요소가 될 수도 있다고 생각합니다

1. 00:34:124 (5,6,7) - 이 셋은 간격 일정하게 맞추는게 좋다고 생각해요
2. 00:40:124 (7) - 앞뒤 노트랑 간격이 너무 좁네요
3. 01:02:431 (1,3) - 스택 하실거면 제대로 해주세요
4. 01:04:739 - 노트 추가해주세요
5. 01:10:431 (3,4) - 4를 지우고 3을 01:10:585 여기로 옮기는게 박자에 맞다고 생각해요
6. 01:41:765 , 01:41:867 - 쓸모없는 초록선 다 지워주세요
7. 01:57:047 (2,4) - 간격을 일부러 좁게 두신것 같은데 그냥 넓게 두시는게 더 어울리네요
8. 02:02:431 - 노트 추가
9. 02:09:355 (3) - 2에 제대로 스택하던지 아얘 간격 맞춰서 재배치하시던지 해주는게 좋겠네요
10. 02:36:585 (3,4) - 간격 맞춰주세요
11. 02:40:278 (6) - 반복 한번 넣어주는걸 추천합니다
12. 02:41:508 (3) - x:448 y:48 로 이동하는걸 추천
13. 03:10:021 - 역시나 이런 키아이 남용은 언랭요소로 이어질수 있다고 생각합니다, 그냥 끄시길

1. 00:03:354 ~ 00:12:739 - 너무 스택에 의존해서 화면 위쪽에서만 노네요, 적당히 끊고 아래쪽도 노트 채워보시는게 어떤가요?
2. 00:16:585 (4) - 이런거 보기 안좋습니다, x:336 y:336 이런 곳에 배치해보시는게?
3. 00:22:739 (4,5,6,7,1) - 너무 멀리서 연타가 시작한다고 생각해요, 차라리 5번 노트부터 시작해서 간격을 조금 좁게 해보시는게 좋을듯 http://puu.sh/hGENO/3c61b353d0.jpg
4. 00:31:547 (1,1,1,1,2) - 간격이 너무 좁다고 생각해요
5. 00:35:047 (4,1,4) - 스택 제대로 해주세요~
6. 00:40:893 (3,1) - 역시나 너무 간격이 좁다고 생각해요
7. 00:47:047 (3,4,1) - 흐름이 조금 엉성하다고 생각되요, 이런식으로 바꿔보시는게 어떤가요? http://puu.sh/hGFa7/61bd7eb82e.jpg
8. 00:52:585 - 익스트림도 여기 쉬는시간인데 인세인은 아니네요? 익스트림도 쉬는시간을 없애거나 인세인에 쉬는시간을 넣어보시길
9. 00:54:278 (3,4) - Ctrl G 해주고 3을 x:352 y:192 부근에 두는건 어떤가요?
10. 01:04:278 (3,4) - 따로따로 Ctrl G 해주고 4번을 x:333 y:241로 옮기는게 좋은거같아요
11. 01:51:201 (1,2,3) - 슬라이더 끝부분의 소리를 줄이던가 서클로 처리하는게 좋을거라고 생각해요, 시끄러움
12. 02:00:585 (1,1,1,2) - 이것 역시 너무 좁다고 생각해요
13. 02:11:047 (4) - 여기 샘플셋 오토로 바꾸고 클랩 넣어주세요, 갑자기 끊기는건 듣기 안좋네요
14. 02:15:970 (1,2) - 클랩이 2번이 아니라 1번에 있어야 해요
15. 02:40:585 (2,3) - 1/8 말고 1/4 슬라이더로 해주는게 더 어울리네요, 그리고 간격 좀 넓게 넣어보시길
16. 02:50:431 (4,5,6,7,8) - 연타 동선을 이쁘게 일직선으로 만들어주시거나 2를 옮긴 뒤 이렇게 넣어보시길 http://puu.sh/hGFPP/80ece53887.jpg
17. 02:50:739 (8,1) - 8번 자리에서 1번 슬라가 시작되는게 맞는 박자라고 생각해요
18. 03:05:970 - 여기 서클을 넣는게 맞는 박자라고 생각해요, 뒤에 빈곳도 전부요. 코드 드려볼테니 메모장 열고 185508 부분부터 전부 지우고 복붙해보시길
    
    ^^

    256,120,185508,6,2,B|232:72|232:72|320:104|416:40,1,237.5,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    144,192,186124,2,2,B|96:216|96:216|128:128|64:32,1,237.5,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,264,186739,2,2,B|280:312|280:312|192:280|96:344,1,237.5,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    368,176,187355,2,2,B|416:152|416:152|384:240|448:336,1,237.5,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    248,128,187970,6,0,B|232:96|232:96|288:104|344:64,1,118.75,2|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    160,192,188278,2,0,B|128:208|128:208|136:152|96:96,1,118.75,10|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    248,264,188585,2,0,B|264:296|264:296|208:288|152:328,1,118.75,2|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    336,192,188893,2,0,B|368:176|368:176|360:232|400:288,1,118.75,10|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,120,189201,54,0,B|248:104|248:104|272:112|312:88,1,59.375,10|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    184,192,189355,2,0,B|168:200|168:200|176:176|152:136,1,59.375,10|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,264,189508,2,0,B|264:280|264:280|240:272|200:296,1,59.375,10|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    328,192,189662,2,0,B|344:184|344:184|336:208|360:248,1,59.375,10|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,264,189816,37,14,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,189970,1,14,0:0:0:0:

1. HP가 너무하다고 생각합니다, 5성 이상의 연타가 많은 곡이니 7~7.5 사이로 변경 부탁드려요
2. 00:13:201 - 이런 식의 키아이 사용은 언랭요소가 될 수 있다고 생각합니다
3. 제가 아직 익스트림을 모딩할 실력이 안되네요, 죄송합니다

UnLock- wrote:

Hello~ come from my task!

[General]

1. 카운트다운 필요 없는것 같네요, 꺼보시는건 어떤가요?
2. 그냥 냅두는 것이 좋을것 같아서 안 끄겠습니다.

[Easy]

1. 01:36:893 (1,1) - 스피너 돌리는 와중에 노트가 보이면 언랭요소입니다
2. 다시한번 생각해볼게요

[Normal]

1. 00:37:201 (3,1) - 간격이 일정하지 않네요, 노말에서는 언랭요소라고 생각합니다
2. 01:17:201 (1,1) - 이지에서도 말했듯이 언랭요소라고 생각합니다, 스피너를 01:20:893 여기서 끝내보시길
3. 03:09:970 - 이런 식의 키아이 사용은 언랭요소가 될 수도 있다고 생각합니다
4. 모두 수정

[Hard]

1. 00:34:124 (5,6,7) - 이 셋은 간격 일정하게 맞추는게 좋다고 생각해요 - > 이상태가 좋은것 같습니다.
2. 00:40:124 (7) - 앞뒤 노트랑 간격이 너무 좁네요 - >다시한번 생각해 볼게요
3. 01:02:431 (1,3) - 스택 하실거면 제대로 해주세요 - > 그냥 냅두겠습니다.
4. 01:04:739 - 노트 추가해주세요 - >추가
5. 01:10:431 (3,4) - 4를 지우고 3을 01:10:585 여기로 옮기는게 박자에 맞다고 생각해요 - > 수정
6. 01:41:765 , 01:41:867 - 쓸모없는 초록선 다 지워주세요 - > 수정
7. 01:57:047 (2,4) - 간격을 일부러 좁게 두신것 같은데 그냥 넓게 두시는게 더 어울리네요 - > 그냥 냅두겠습니다./ 노드를 띄우면 노트클릭미스가 나기 쉽다고 해서 냅두겠습니다.
8. 02:02:431 - 노트 추가 - > 추가
9. 02:09:355 (3) - 2에 제대로 스택하던지 아얘 간격 맞춰서 재배치하시던지 해주는게 좋겠네요 - > 슬라이더 2 끝에 스택하는것보다 노드 5에 스택이 좋을것같아 5에 스택했습니다.
10. 02:36:585 (3,4) - 간격 맞춰주세요 - > 다시한번 보고 수정할게요
11. 02:40:278 (6) - 반복 한번 넣어주는걸 추천합니다 - > 추가
12. 02:41:508 (3) - x:448 y:48 로 이동하는걸 추천 - >수정
13. 03:10:021 - 역시나 이런 키아이 남용은 언랭요소로 이어질수 있다고 생각합니다, 그냥 끄시길 - > 수정

[Insane]

1. 00:03:354 ~ 00:12:739 - 너무 스택에 의존해서 화면 위쪽에서만 노네요, 적당히 끊고 아래쪽도 노트 채워보시는게 어떤가요? - >냅두는게 좋은 것 같습니다.
2. 00:16:585 (4) - 이런거 보기 안좋습니다, x:336 y:336 이런 곳에 배치해보시는게? - > 수정
3. 00:22:739 (4,5,6,7,1) - 너무 멀리서 연타가 시작한다고 생각해요, 차라리 5번 노트부터 시작해서 간격을 조금 좁게 해보시는게 좋을듯 http://puu.sh/hGENO/3c61b353d0.jpg - > 수정[/color
4. 00:31:547 (1,1,1,1,2) - 간격이 너무 좁다고 생각해요 - > >
5. 00:35:047 (4,1,4) - 스택 제대로 해주세요~ - > 수정
6. 00:40:893 (3,1) - 역시나 너무 간격이 좁다고 생각해요 > 슬라이더3을 약간 내렸습니다.,
7. 00:47:047 (3,4,1) - 흐름이 조금 엉성하다고 생각되요, 이런식으로 바꿔보시는게 어떤가요? http://puu.sh/hGFa7/61bd7eb82e.jpg - >수정
8. 00:52:585 - 익스트림도 여기 쉬는시간인데 인세인은 아니네요? 익스트림도 쉬는시간을 없애거나 인세인에 쉬는시간을 넣어보시길 - >
9. 00:54:278 (3,4) - Ctrl G 해주고 3을 x:352 y:192 부근에 두는건 어떤가요? - > - > 수정
10. 01:04:278 (3,4) - 따로따로 Ctrl G 해주고 4번을 x:333 y:241로 옮기는게 좋은거같아요 - > 수정
11. 01:51:201 (1,2,3) - 슬라이더 끝부분의 소리를 줄이던가 서클로 처리하는게 좋을거라고 생각해요, 시끄러움
12. 02:00:585 (1,1,1,2) - 이것 역시 너무 좁다고 생각해요 - > - >냅두는게 좋은 것 같습니다. 슬라이더를 멀리 띄우면 클릭이 혼란스러워짐니다.
    
13. 02:11:047 (4) - 여기 샘플셋 오토로 바꾸고 클랩 넣어주세요, 갑자기 끊기는건 듣기 안좋네요 - > 수정
14. 02:15:970 (1,2) - 클랩이 2번이 아니라 1번에 있어야 해요 - > 수정
15. 02:40:585 (2,3) - 1/8 말고 1/4 슬라이더로 해주는게 더 어울리네요, 그리고 간격 좀 넓게 넣어보시길- > 그냥 냅두겠습니다.
16. 02:50:431 (4,5,6,7,8) - 연타 동선을 이쁘게 일직선으로 만들어주시거나 2를 옮긴 뒤 이렇게 넣어보시길 http://puu.sh/hGFPP/80ece53887.jpg - > 수정
17. 02:50:739 (8,1) - 8번 자리에서 1번 슬라가 시작되는게 맞는 박자라고 생각해요 - > 그냥 냅두겠습니다.
18. 03:05:970 - 여기 서클을 넣는게 맞는 박자라고 생각해요, 뒤에 빈곳도 전부요. 코드 드려볼테니 메모장 열고 185508 부분부터 전부 지우고 복붙해보시길 - > 무언가 안 맞는거 같은데...
    
    ^^

    256,120,185508,6,2,B|232:72|232:72|320:104|416:40,1,237.5,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    144,192,186124,2,2,B|96:216|96:216|128:128|64:32,1,237.5,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,264,186739,2,2,B|280:312|280:312|192:280|96:344,1,237.5,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    368,176,187355,2,2,B|416:152|416:152|384:240|448:336,1,237.5,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    248,128,187970,6,0,B|232:96|232:96|288:104|344:64,1,118.75,2|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    160,192,188278,2,0,B|128:208|128:208|136:152|96:96,1,118.75,10|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    248,264,188585,2,0,B|264:296|264:296|208:288|152:328,1,118.75,2|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    336,192,188893,2,0,B|368:176|368:176|360:232|400:288,1,118.75,10|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,120,189201,54,0,B|248:104|248:104|272:112|312:88,1,59.375,10|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    184,192,189355,2,0,B|168:200|168:200|176:176|152:136,1,59.375,10|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,264,189508,2,0,B|264:280|264:280|240:272|200:296,1,59.375,10|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    328,192,189662,2,0,B|344:184|344:184|336:208|360:248,1,59.375,10|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,264,189816,37,14,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,189970,1,14,0:0:0:0:

[Extreme]

1. HP가 너무하다고 생각합니다, 5성 이상의 연타가 많은 곡이니 7~7.5 사이로 변경 부탁드려요 - >HP9.2 -> 8 ( down )
2. 00:13:201 - 이런 식의 키아이 사용은 언랭요소가 될 수 있다고 생각합니다 - >Fixed
3. 제가 아직 익스트림을 모딩할 실력이 안되네요, 죄송합니다

GL

1. 00:32:585(1,2) - These don't flow into 00:32:893 well.
2. 00:35:201(1,2) - The spacing:timing ratio makes the spacing between these two sliders feel really awful.
3. 01:25:508(5,6) - The flow from 5 to 6 feels really weird.
4. 01:31:355 - This a weird, sudden velocity change.
5. 02:33:355(1,2,3) - 2 and 3 shouldn't be spaced so far away from the slider end. You haven't done much of that "style" (mapping silderend-circle-circle triplets with large spacing) at all until now. It's only been normally spaced prior to this. It's just too sudden in my opinion.
6. 02:40:278 - GOTTA GO FAST? Also, don't extend it to the blue tick. Shorten the length to the red tick.
7. 02:49:816 - Ugly overlap
8. Overall, I think this map needs work. Mainly, it needs a lot of tidying up. There are lot of sloppy looking sliders and a lot of parts with awkward flow.

1. 00:13:201(1,3) - Ugly overlap. This, however, is not crucial to change.
2. 00:14:278(1,3) - ^
3. 00:24:585 - This overlap should be changed. It doesn't look nice with such a tiny overlap.
4. 00:32:585 - Ctrl + G
5. 00:32:739 - ^
6. 00:32:893 - ^ (and then, look~! your map flows just fine without moving anything )
7. 02:03:662(4,1) - Ugly overlap. Whywhywhywhy tiny overlaps :C
8. 02:06:124(8,1) - Whywhywhywhywhywhy you should make 8 blanket with 1 insteaaad. don't overlap them like that, it looks blehhh
9. 02:07:970(6,8) - >:C stahp it. you should blanket these too.
10. 02:50:431(4,5,6,7,8) - nonono too hard too hard. make this a bit skinnier maybe? maybe. I guarantee you at least 90% of people will combo break here. you monster. >:C meanie.
11. 02:53:508(2,3) - GAHHHH OVERLAPPING BY A HAIR?!?!?! pls fix :3
12. 02:53:816(3,1) - ^
13. 02:54:278(1,2) - Blanket 2 with 1 better.
14. 03:00:431 - Ohmygod pls. the hairline overlaps are everywhere.

See this? Click the small check box. For me it doesn't say anything, but it should say something along the lines of checking for spacing

Tsuchimikado wrote:

yahello~ from my modding -it's been so long ><-

[Extreme]

1. 00:32:585(1,2) - These don't flow into 00:32:893 well. - > is not bad :/
2. 00:35:201(1,2) - The spacing:timing ratio makes the spacing between these two sliders feel really awful. :(
3. 01:25:508(5,6) - The flow from 5 to 6 feels really weird. - > http://puu.sh/hU06j/8ca5e3e7d0.jpg
4. 01:31:355 - This a weird, sudden velocity change. - > im not weird !
5. 02:33:355(1,2,3) - 2 and 3 shouldn't be spaced so far away from the slider end. You haven't done much of that "style" (mapping silderend-circle-circle triplets with large spacing) at all until now. It's only been normally spaced prior to this. It's just too sudden in my opinion. - > ok.. hold on
6. 02:40:278 - GOTTA GO FAST? Also, don't extend it to the blue tick. Shorten the length to the red tick. - > Fixed
7. 02:49:816 - Ugly overlap - > flow after slider
8. Overall, I think this map needs work. Mainly, it needs a lot of tidying up. There are lot of sloppy looking sliders and a lot of parts with awkward flow.

[Insane]

1. 00:13:201(1,3) - Ugly overlap. This, however, is not crucial to change. - > is look like good
2. 00:14:278(1,3) - ^ - > Fixed ( move node (3)
3. 00:24:585 - This overlap should be changed. It doesn't look nice with such a tiny overlap. - > hold on
4. 00:32:585 - Ctrl + G ->flow is not good
5. 00:32:739 - ^ - > Fixed
6. 00:32:893 - ^ (and then, look~! your map flows just fine without moving anything ) - > Fixed
7. 02:03:662(4,1) - Ugly overlap. Whywhywhywhy tiny overlaps :C - > http://puu.sh/hTZhp/9cc8215b30.jpg
8. 02:06:124(8,1) - Whywhywhywhywhywhy you should make 8 blanket with 1 insteaaad. don't overlap them like that, it looks blehhh - > hold on
9. 02:07:970(6,8) - >:C stahp it. you should blanket these too. - > http://puu.sh/hTZyo/38a209392a.jpg
10. 02:50:431(4,5,6,7,8) - nonono too hard too hard. make this a bit skinnier maybe? maybe. I guarantee you at least 90% of people will combo break here. you monster. >:C meanie. - > heh Fixed
11. 02:53:508(2,3) - GAHHHH OVERLAPPING BY A HAIR?!?!?! pls fix :3 - > heh Fixed
12. 02:53:816(3,1) - ^ - > hold on
13. 02:54:278(1,2) - Blanket 2 with 1 better. - > hold on
14. 03:00:431 - Ohmygod pls. the hairline overlaps are everywhere. - > hold on

[Hard] -> Fix only the required part.
This difficulty needs serious reworking. The spacing problems are rampant. Everywhere.

See this? Click the small check box. For me it doesn't say anything, but it should say something along the lines of checking for spacing

Normal and Easy seem solid enough. I wouldn't be the best judge of how difficult Normals and Easys should be. They seem fine. Good luck~!

Thanks alot to mod for me !!

Ninja Bunny wrote:

안녕하세요! 이노래 나노버젼도 좋음 ㅋㅋ
모딩 늦어서 죄송합니다;;

[general]

1. 플로우 이해를 잘하고있는것같아요. 그리고 슬라이더 모양도 좋네요 ㅋㅋ
2. 하드랑 인센이랑 난이도 갭이 큽니다. 하드에 노트 더 넣고, 리듬 정리하고, 패턴 만든다면 이 문제가 나아질듯.
3. 카운트다운 필요없을것같아요. Song setup>design들어가서 “enable countdown”끄는게 어떨까요? - > Eh.. sorry i dont want to off them..
4. 맵 더 깔끔하게 하기위해 stacking도 잊지 마세요! - > ok
5. 03:09:816 –각 난이도 스피너 여기 끝내는게 더 좋을듯
   

[Hard]

1. 리듬이 일정하지않아요. 이부분은 플레이하면서 이상하다고 생각되는 부분 리매핑하다보면 나아질거예요. 아니면 카피 페이스트 해도 되구요. 설명보다는 보는게 나을것같아서 시작에서 북마크 (파란선)까지 한번 수정해 봤습니다. http://puu.sh/hXhS8.osu 00:51:816 (4,5,6) –여기 노트 더 넣은 이유가 브레이크 바로전에 강조하면 좋을듯해서 그랬습니다. 님이 전에 사용한 리듬도 좋아요. - > 제가 만든대로 사용할게요
2. 01:02:431 –이맵 첫마디에 비하면 여기부터 스페이싱이 줄어들었는데, 무슨 이유가 있나요? 그리고나서 다시01:14:585 –부터 스페이싱이 원상태가 됬어요. - > 난이도 특성상 노드들 거리를 더 둘수가 없어서 줄어든검니다..
3. 01:28:124 (1,2) -01:28:893 (3,1) -01:29:355 (1,2) -01:31:355 (3,4) -01:56:278 (1,2,3,4,5) -02:36:585 (3,4) -여기도 좁은 스페이싱 문제 - > 01:28:893 (3,1) - 02:36:585 (3,4) - 빼고 X 1.05 내외로 수정했습니다
4. 01:02:431 (1) –리듬 더 좋게 수정할수있을듯. 지우고 노트 더 많이 넣으세요. - > 이대로가 좋은거 같아요..
5. 01:51:201 -01:51:355 -01:51:508 –개인적인 생각. 여기도 노트 넣으면 좋을듯. - > add it
6. 01:53:662 (2) –전에는 이부분 매핑 안한이상 delete? - > No
7. 03:07:355 (2) - http://puu.sh/hY3nd.jpg 이렇게 바꾸면 플로우가 더 나아집니다. - > 약간 이상해진거같음..

[Insane]

1. OD 7? - > hold on
2. 00:09:971 (7) –플레이할때 잘 안보였어요. Move to 280, 80? - >수정
3. 00:22:739 (4,5,6,7,1) –DS가 일정하지 않아요. 다시 깔끔하게 만드세요. 슬라이더 만든다음에 ctrl+F하면 됩니다. - > X0.86 으로 통일
4. 01:40:585 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) –개인적으로 스트리밍 스페이싱때문에 난해하다고 생각했던 부분. - > 다른분들이 언급을 안해서 냅두겠습니다.
5. 01:51:201 (1,2,3) –이리듬 맞지않다고 생각됩니다. 그냥 노트로 바꾸는게 좋을것같아요. - > 제가 보기엔 맞는거 같아요..
6. 02:01:508 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) –오버매핑은 비추천 - > 냅둘게요
7. 02:50:739 –여기부터도 휘슬힛사가 듣기 안좋아요. 하드 모딩 참고하시길 바랍니다. - > 수정
8. 02:50:739 (8,1) –보컬이 (8)에 시작하는 이상 (8) 지우고 (1)을 8 있던 자리에 놓는게 나을듯. - > 수정
9. 03:00:585 –휘슬힛사 패턴이 듣기 안좋아요. 03:01:508 - 03:02:278 – 03:02:585 - 03:03:508 - 03:02:893 (1) - 03:04:124 (1) -여기 휘슬 지우고
   03:02:124 – 03:02:431 - 03:03:355 - 03:03:662 - 03:04:585 -여기 휘슬 넣는게 어떨까요? - > 수정

[Extreme]

1. change AR to 9.5? - > up to 9.4 -> 9.5
2. 01:41:201 –여기 스피너 끝내는게 이맵 스피너들이랑 일정할듯.->Eh...
3. 03:06:278 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,1) –좋음 - > 익스트림 난이도에선 좋을것같은데...
   

[Normal]

1. 01:28:124 (2) –여기로01:28:124 – 옮기고 꼬리를01:28:893 –로 두세요 - > 슬라이더 틱소리하고 노래가 안 맞아요..
2. 01:33:201 (3) –는01:32:585 (2) –카피해서 ctrl+G해서 쓰는게 더 깨끗해 보일듯.
3. 02:12:585 (3,4) –blanket
4. 02:44:585 (3) - http://puu.sh/hY3oa.jpg
5. 02:46:739 -02:47:970 -02:49:201 –add notes
6. 02:56:739 (3,1) –03:01:816 (3) -보컬따라가는이상 (3)을02:56:739 –로 옮기고 꼬리를02:57:201 –로 두세요. 다른슬라이더도 같은 리듬으로.
7. 03:03:047 (1) –여기도 리듬이 좋아질수 있을듯. 지우고 그림에있는 (5) 슬라이더를03:03:047 (1) – 에 두세요. 그리고03:03:355 – 에 (6) 슬라이더 넣고 http://puu.sh/hY3ou.jpg 03:04:278 (1) –도 마찬가지. - > 02:56:739 (3) - 만 수정했습니다.
   

[Easy]

1. 01:13:355 (2) - 01:13:355 – 로 옮기고 꼬리를01:14:124 – 에.
2. 01:23:355 (2) - 01:24:431 (1) - 01:28:278 (2) - 01:33:201 (2) - 01:34:431 (3) - 01:35:662 (4) - 02:22:431 (2) - 02:32:278 (2) -02:34:739 (4) - 02:37:201 (2) - 02:42:124 (2) - 02:43:355 (1) - ^
3. 02:02:585 (2,3,4) –리듬 좋음
4. 이지는 수정할 필요가 없다고 생각합니다.
   

dististik wrote:

Hey~ I'm from my modding queue that died forever ago, sorry that it took so long to get this mod out, but I hope I can still help!

Easy

1. 01:14:739 (3) - I feel like an NC would fit well here. -> NC
2. 01:41:816 (1) - This might be too soon after the spinner for an Easy map. There's a good chance I'm wrong, though, so don't worry about it unless other people point out the same problem.-> BN is admit that

Normal

1. 00:47:662 (2,3,4) - The way this is placed on the grid feels a little awkward. I suggest moving (4) so that it and (3) don't stack.

Hard

1. 00:35:047 (6,7,8,9) - This section feels awkward while playing. I replayed the map several times and even when knowing when the notes are supposed to be hit the map felt off in that area.
2. 01:10:585 (3) - The delay between (2) and (3) makes this slider awkward and it breaks the flow of the map. I suggest putting something in between them so that the flow stays consistent.
3. 02:14:585 (3,4) - The DS between these notes makes playing them awkward. -
4. 02:22:278 (4) - Leaves rankable mapping area.->Up
5. 02:46:431 (2,3) - There needs to be a note in between these two. The flow shatters into a billion pieces when this section arrives.

Insane

1. Ahem
2. 00:27:047 (2,3,4,5,6) - While this is an Insane map and you're free to make jumps like that, remember that this is an Insane under 5 stars. These jumps threw me off because I wasn't expecting them to be in this kind of difficulty.
3. 01:00:432 (2,3,4,5) - Make this a more recognisable pattern.
4. 01:06:893 (2,1,2) - The jumps before this were fine, but this section was something that broke the flow horribly.
5. 01:15:047 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make this a star. The pattern you currently have is frustrating to read. - > done
6. 01:50:739 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Remap.
7. 02:40:585 (2,3) - Delete these and replace it with a stream leading off of the previous slider.
8. 02:50:431 (4,5,6,7) - Remap this to be a stream, where you have them now makes no sense. - > 5,7 littel pull right
9. 03:09:201 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Remap, so that everything is readable. The overlapping at this ending is god awful and quite frankly how its mapped now is unrankable. - > 03:09:816 (1) - move under 03:09:662 (4) - here

I can't do Expert difficulties because I'm too noob for that. Sorry if anything I said was rude, I didn't mean to discourage you in any way. Good luck with getting approved!