HabiHolic wrote:

your request

[General]

[Easy]

1. 00:32:893 (1) - 시작부분 피니쉬?
2. 00:37:816 (1) - 끝부분 클랩은 필요없을것 같아요. 별로 어울리지도 않고..
3. 00:47:355 (6,1) - 이지나 노멀은 반드시 디스턴스를 지켜주셔야 합니다. 이건 디스턴스가 어긋났네요. 고쳐주세요
4. 00:49:431 (2,3) - 이건 대체 어떤 리듬에 맞추신 건지 모르겠네요. 리듬 정확히 맞춰주세요
5. 01:19:662 (1) - 이 스피너 너무 짧고 뒤에 노트도 보여서 좀 불안하네요. 그냥 박자 짜맞추시는거 추천드립니다.
6. 모두 수정했어요.

나중에 마저할게요

[ B l u e ] wrote:

Her voice scares me
it's so good but it's so powerful

[ Zzz ] wrote:

Hi~ _ Hatsune Miku ( 모딩모딩!! 저는 초보 한국인은 잘 가리지 않는편이라 :3 )

General

1. MP3 파일의 음질이 190kbps 입니다.
   문제 될지 안될지는 모르지만.. 128kbps 또는 192kpps 가 대부분의 적당한 기준으로 알고있어요. - > Mp3 파일 한번 교체했는데...
2. 노말부터의 태그에 게스트 난이도가 아닌사람들을 넣으셧는데 태그는 모든난이도 다 동일하게 맟춰주셔야되고 게스트난이도처럼 난이도에 들어가지 않는사람들은 지워주세요. ( 예 ) : 모딩했던사람이라던지 특별한 이유가 없다면 지워주시고 이지처럼 태그해서 맟춰주세요. - > 삭제
3. 소스에 Nico Nico Douga 추가해주세요. - > 추가

Easy

• 브레이크타임 30초 이상되면 안되는걸로 알고있어요.

1. 00:13:201 (1) - 여기서부터라도 시작해주세요. - > 앞부분은 안넣고싶어요..
2. 02:11:355 (1) - 흐름이 너무 안좋아요. 곡선같은걸로 바꿔주세요. - > 수정!

그리고 맵의 대부분에 쓸대없는 클렙이 너무 많은듯 싶네요.
( 쿵짝쿵짝인데 짝짝짝짝 같은느낌 .. ) 약간의 팁을 드리자면 ...
00:33:201 - 여기가 클렙박자에요. 00:33:816 - 00:34:431 - 00:35:047 - 잘 들어보시면 짝 짝 짝 짝 소리가 들려요.

한가지 .. 조언을 해드리자면 .. 지금 이지난이도의 맵에 00:32:893 (1) - 여기에서부터 끝까지 드래그 하신뒤에 z키 누르셔서 00:32:893 (1) - 여기로 오신다음 00:33:201 (2) - 여기까지 드래그하셔서 옴기시면 딱 클렙박자가 맞아요. 그리고 나머지는 직접 안맞는곳이나 어울리지 않는곳은 수정하셔야겠지만요.
아마 바로 위에 말했던말이 해결방법인것 같네요. (으.......)

Normal

1. 00:35:047 (5) - 클렙 추가해주세요. 박자는 클렙박자인데 빠져있어요. - > ok
2. 00:37:201 (3) - 슬라이더 앞에 클렙제거해주세요. 그리고 뒤에 클렙추가해주세요. 그게 맞는박자에요. - > ok
3. 00:40:278 (1,2) - 1번 슬라이더의 뒤에있는 클렙을 제거해주시고 00:41:201 (2) - 여기에 클렙추가해주세요. - > ok
4. 00:42:124 (4) - 앞에 클랩제거해주세요. - > ok
5. 00:42:739 (1) - 중간에 클랩제거해주세요. 중간의 왼쪽이 맞는박자에요. - > 제가 보기엔 맞는것 같아요.
6. 00:44:585 (3) - 앞에 클랩제거 - > ok
7. 00:45:816 (6) - 마찬가지. - > ok
8. 00:48:739 (3) - 갑짜기 보컬따라가는거 안좋은버릇이에요. 00:49:201 - 여기로 서클 옴겨주시고 00:49:508 (4) - 4번 슬라이더의 앞과 뒤 , 클렙 스왑해주세요. 앞에있는 클렙을 뒤로 변경 + 00:49:201 (1) - 뉴 콤보 추가까지 해주세요. 뉴콤보를 해 주 는 이유는 00:47:662 (2,1) - 노트가 떨어져있어서그래요. 간격차이는 얼마없는데. 그럴떄 해주시면되요. -
9. 00:50:124 (1,3) - 1번 슬라이더의 중간에 클렙제거. 3번 서클에 클렙제거. - > ok
10. 01:06:431 (2) - 중간에 클렙 제거해주세요. - > ok
11. 01:11:662 (4) - 앞에 클렙제거. - > ok
12. 01:26:431 (4) - 위와 이유 같아요. - > ok
13. 01:52:893 (3,4) - 클렙 3번 끝이아니고 4번 시작이에요. - > (3) 앞부분을 들어보니까 안맞아서 슬라이더(3) 중간에 클렙 (4) 번 시작부분에 클렙 추가했습니다.
14. 02:00:585 (4) - 중간에 클렙제거. - > ok
15. 02:02:585 (2) - 앞에 클렙 제거해주세요. - > ok
16. 02:07:970 (3) - 서클추가해주세요. 클랩도 추가해주세요. ( 박자 들어가야되는 박자에요. ) - > ok
17. 02:10:739 (4) - 앞에 클렙제거. - > ok
18. 02:12:585 (3,4) - 여기도 3번 끝이 아니고 4번 시작에 클렙들어가야되요. - > ok
19. 02:15:662 (7) - 앞에 클랩제거해주세요. - > ok
20. 02:25:508 (3) - 앞에 클랩제거해주세요. - > ok

다른 난이도들도 히트사운드 들리는곳만 넣어주시면 맵이 더 좋아질것 같아요. :3
굿럭~ - 넵

Euny wrote:

your request! came from my queue
글남겨주셨었는데 그 전에 온사람 먼저 받고 큐 클로스해버려서
근데 몇분차이로 늦으신걸 또 지나치기 너무 죄송스러워서 왔습니다 전체적으로 너무 맵이 괜찮습니다.
고쳤으면 하는부분만 집어볼게요. p.s 제너럴만 영어로 쓸게요! ㅎ 영어모딩이 랭먹일때 도움된다 하더라구요
카운트다운관련인데, 일부러두신거면 그냥 무시하세요~

• General

1. intentional? if or not, disable countdown

• Easy

1. 00:35:970 (2,1) - 1번슬라 끝 2번에 스택할 수 있을거같은데, .. 음 .. 일부러 두신거라면 무시해주세요 ㅎ
2. 00:42:739 (1) - 머리에 피니시 추가해주세요 -
3. 02:11:355 (1) - 뒤에 심벌소리 들리는걸로 보아, 이 슬라의 머리엔 클랩보단 피니시가 어울리는거 같네요 - added

• Normal

1. 00:42:739 (1) - 이지랑 같은부분이네요 머리부분에 피니시 추가해주세요 - added
2. 02:11:355 (1) - ^ - added

• Hard

1. 02:09:508 (3) - 제가 플레이할때, 전의 노트와 타이밍이 1박자가 떨어져있는데도 너무 가까운느낌에 리딩이 불편해지는걸 느꼈어요
   노트 하나정도의 거리만 띄워, 60도만 돌려서 x236y208로 옮겨두니 플로우는 살리면서 적절히 '다음노트가 좀 떨어져있구나'라는 느낌을 살리는게 오히려 도움이 될거같네요! - Done
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 02:15:970 (1) - 이 슬라이더 전의 패턴과 비슷한느낌인데 노트간의 간격이 조금 먼 느낌이 없지 않아 있네요! x232y106으로 옮겨 02:14:893 (4,5) - 와의 연관성을 살려보는것도 좋을거같아요 - Done
   
   SPOILER

   
3. 02:26:124 (7) - 뉴콤! - ok

• Insane

1. 언스냅부분만 좀 리체크해주셔요~
   
   Done

엑스트라 모딩을 아직 잘 못해 생략해 죄송합니다.
인세인이 진짜 맘에드네요 너무 시원시원하게 잘 짜신거같습니다! - That's okay

1. Sweet holy mother of epilipsy warning

1. 00:32:893 (1) - Angle this so that it leads into the next slider better
   
   
2. 00:44:585 (3,4) - Careful with this much contrary motion in a normal
   
   
3. 00:45:816 (6,1) - These shouldn't touch
   
   
4. 01:07:355 (1,3) - Put 3 where the 1 slider ends
   
   
5. 01:09:201 (5) - Make this the same angle as 1/2
   
   
6. 01:23:355 (3) - Random curved slider in a pattern of all straight/straight turns? Change
   
   
7. 01:29:508 (1,2) - I didn't count, but I think the angles are off
   
   
8. 01:33:816 (4) - Curve
   
   
9. 01:52:893 (3) - Random straight slider in a group of all curveds? Change
   
   
10. 02:04:585 (5) - ^
    
    
11. 02:19:355 (1) - ^
    
    
12. 02:35:970 (1) - Straight turn
    
    
13. 02:43:970 (2) - Curve
    
    
14. 02:57:508 (4) - Straight
    
    
15. 03:01:201 (2,4) - Either curve 2 or straight turn 4

1. 00:39:047 (5) - Straight up into a curve?
   
   
2. 00:46:278 (3) - Curve
   
   
3. 01:04:278 (3,1,2) - Same spacing as last combo, but different timing? I'd change this one over the former, but change one.
   
   
4. 02:09:970 (6) - NC
   
   
5. 02:32:124 (5) - Curve
   
   
6. 02:57:201 (2,3) - Curve
   
   
7. 00:00:000 (0) - Just wanted to say, this feels more like an Insane then a hard :/

1. 01:00:893 (1,1) - Remove one of these NC
   
   
2. 01:47:662 (4,5) - No need to curl this so hard
   
   
3. 01:50:124 (1,1) - Remove one of these NC

Fort wrote:

From artic pole
wow star map! =w=b
nice skin :3

Extreme:
00:04:279 (2,3) - its clearly have triplet sound, why didnt map triplet? ex: 00:09:202 (3) -
00:18:432 (2) - move this slider to left a bit (make slider didnt overlap with 00:18:739 (3) - Fixed
00:29:816 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - this pattern kinda confusing + overmapping, like 00:30:431 - you should add circle or anyone else to support strong beat more - Remove slider And add Red tick circle
01:21:431 - add notes here? to improve patterning -
01:36:893 (1) - im suggesting you to extend spinner end to 01:41:355 - (you map spinner start at vocal sound, so its very nice thing if you put spinner end at vocal end too) - Fixed
01:54:585 (3,5) - you have purpose for this overlap? - Fixed
02:33:739 (2,3) - distance to high and uncommon in your map i guess, and the overlap makes this pattern is quite hard to read (but it's okay) - Fixed
02:40:278 (1,1) - im sure you can make this pattern better in gameplay if you make 1/2 slider instead of 3/4 slider (and i didnt see any reason why you map 3/4 slider lol) -
02:59:201 (1) - this one >.< (why this slow down very sudden in kiai), but i see if you put fast slider in here you need to fix patterning in there (not necessary job i guess, so you can keep it, but dont make slider speed slow too sudden) use 1.2x or 1.3SV is enough for this oneFixed
03:04:893 (5,6,7,8) - airman jump - i love Jump
yeah your map creepy, i cant even FC it ;_;

Insane:
my god i love this map. in patterning, stacking, even overlaps looks good, but i see something here
02:45:816 (1) - maybe you can make curve and blanket it for 02:46:432 (3) -
02:50:739 (8,1) - pattern error, you should move (1) to 02:50:739 - (there is no finish hitsound in blue ticks) so the slider end will be in 02:51:047 - and it fits the music - Fixed

good luck!

1. 카운트다운 필요 없는것 같네요, 꺼보시는건 어떤가요?

1. 01:36:893 (1,1) - 스피너 돌리는 와중에 노트가 보이면 언랭요소입니다

1. 00:37:201 (3,1) - 간격이 일정하지 않네요, 노말에서는 언랭요소라고 생각합니다
2. 01:17:201 (1,1) - 이지에서도 말했듯이 언랭요소라고 생각합니다, 스피너를 01:20:893 여기서 끝내보시길
3. 03:09:970 - 이런 식의 키아이 사용은 언랭요소가 될 수도 있다고 생각합니다

1. 00:34:124 (5,6,7) - 이 셋은 간격 일정하게 맞추는게 좋다고 생각해요
2. 00:40:124 (7) - 앞뒤 노트랑 간격이 너무 좁네요
3. 01:02:431 (1,3) - 스택 하실거면 제대로 해주세요
4. 01:04:739 - 노트 추가해주세요
5. 01:10:431 (3,4) - 4를 지우고 3을 01:10:585 여기로 옮기는게 박자에 맞다고 생각해요
6. 01:41:765 , 01:41:867 - 쓸모없는 초록선 다 지워주세요
7. 01:57:047 (2,4) - 간격을 일부러 좁게 두신것 같은데 그냥 넓게 두시는게 더 어울리네요
8. 02:02:431 - 노트 추가
9. 02:09:355 (3) - 2에 제대로 스택하던지 아얘 간격 맞춰서 재배치하시던지 해주는게 좋겠네요
10. 02:36:585 (3,4) - 간격 맞춰주세요
11. 02:40:278 (6) - 반복 한번 넣어주는걸 추천합니다
12. 02:41:508 (3) - x:448 y:48 로 이동하는걸 추천
13. 03:10:021 - 역시나 이런 키아이 남용은 언랭요소로 이어질수 있다고 생각합니다, 그냥 끄시길

1. 00:03:354 ~ 00:12:739 - 너무 스택에 의존해서 화면 위쪽에서만 노네요, 적당히 끊고 아래쪽도 노트 채워보시는게 어떤가요?
2. 00:16:585 (4) - 이런거 보기 안좋습니다, x:336 y:336 이런 곳에 배치해보시는게?
3. 00:22:739 (4,5,6,7,1) - 너무 멀리서 연타가 시작한다고 생각해요, 차라리 5번 노트부터 시작해서 간격을 조금 좁게 해보시는게 좋을듯 http://puu.sh/hGENO/3c61b353d0.jpg
4. 00:31:547 (1,1,1,1,2) - 간격이 너무 좁다고 생각해요
5. 00:35:047 (4,1,4) - 스택 제대로 해주세요~
6. 00:40:893 (3,1) - 역시나 너무 간격이 좁다고 생각해요
7. 00:47:047 (3,4,1) - 흐름이 조금 엉성하다고 생각되요, 이런식으로 바꿔보시는게 어떤가요? http://puu.sh/hGFa7/61bd7eb82e.jpg
8. 00:52:585 - 익스트림도 여기 쉬는시간인데 인세인은 아니네요? 익스트림도 쉬는시간을 없애거나 인세인에 쉬는시간을 넣어보시길
9. 00:54:278 (3,4) - Ctrl G 해주고 3을 x:352 y:192 부근에 두는건 어떤가요?
10. 01:04:278 (3,4) - 따로따로 Ctrl G 해주고 4번을 x:333 y:241로 옮기는게 좋은거같아요
11. 01:51:201 (1,2,3) - 슬라이더 끝부분의 소리를 줄이던가 서클로 처리하는게 좋을거라고 생각해요, 시끄러움
12. 02:00:585 (1,1,1,2) - 이것 역시 너무 좁다고 생각해요
13. 02:11:047 (4) - 여기 샘플셋 오토로 바꾸고 클랩 넣어주세요, 갑자기 끊기는건 듣기 안좋네요
14. 02:15:970 (1,2) - 클랩이 2번이 아니라 1번에 있어야 해요
15. 02:40:585 (2,3) - 1/8 말고 1/4 슬라이더로 해주는게 더 어울리네요, 그리고 간격 좀 넓게 넣어보시길
16. 02:50:431 (4,5,6,7,8) - 연타 동선을 이쁘게 일직선으로 만들어주시거나 2를 옮긴 뒤 이렇게 넣어보시길 http://puu.sh/hGFPP/80ece53887.jpg
17. 02:50:739 (8,1) - 8번 자리에서 1번 슬라가 시작되는게 맞는 박자라고 생각해요
18. 03:05:970 - 여기 서클을 넣는게 맞는 박자라고 생각해요, 뒤에 빈곳도 전부요. 코드 드려볼테니 메모장 열고 185508 부분부터 전부 지우고 복붙해보시길
    
    ^^

    256,120,185508,6,2,B|232:72|232:72|320:104|416:40,1,237.5,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    144,192,186124,2,2,B|96:216|96:216|128:128|64:32,1,237.5,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,264,186739,2,2,B|280:312|280:312|192:280|96:344,1,237.5,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    368,176,187355,2,2,B|416:152|416:152|384:240|448:336,1,237.5,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    248,128,187970,6,0,B|232:96|232:96|288:104|344:64,1,118.75,2|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    160,192,188278,2,0,B|128:208|128:208|136:152|96:96,1,118.75,10|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    248,264,188585,2,0,B|264:296|264:296|208:288|152:328,1,118.75,2|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    336,192,188893,2,0,B|368:176|368:176|360:232|400:288,1,118.75,10|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,120,189201,54,0,B|248:104|248:104|272:112|312:88,1,59.375,10|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    184,192,189355,2,0,B|168:200|168:200|176:176|152:136,1,59.375,10|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,264,189508,2,0,B|264:280|264:280|240:272|200:296,1,59.375,10|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    328,192,189662,2,0,B|344:184|344:184|336:208|360:248,1,59.375,10|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,264,189816,37,14,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,189970,1,14,0:0:0:0:

1. HP가 너무하다고 생각합니다, 5성 이상의 연타가 많은 곡이니 7~7.5 사이로 변경 부탁드려요
2. 00:13:201 - 이런 식의 키아이 사용은 언랭요소가 될 수 있다고 생각합니다
3. 제가 아직 익스트림을 모딩할 실력이 안되네요, 죄송합니다

UnLock- wrote:

Hello~ come from my task!

[General]

1. 카운트다운 필요 없는것 같네요, 꺼보시는건 어떤가요?
2. 그냥 냅두는 것이 좋을것 같아서 안 끄겠습니다.

[Easy]

1. 01:36:893 (1,1) - 스피너 돌리는 와중에 노트가 보이면 언랭요소입니다
2. 다시한번 생각해볼게요

[Normal]

1. 00:37:201 (3,1) - 간격이 일정하지 않네요, 노말에서는 언랭요소라고 생각합니다
2. 01:17:201 (1,1) - 이지에서도 말했듯이 언랭요소라고 생각합니다, 스피너를 01:20:893 여기서 끝내보시길
3. 03:09:970 - 이런 식의 키아이 사용은 언랭요소가 될 수도 있다고 생각합니다
4. 모두 수정

[Hard]

1. 00:34:124 (5,6,7) - 이 셋은 간격 일정하게 맞추는게 좋다고 생각해요 - > 이상태가 좋은것 같습니다.
2. 00:40:124 (7) - 앞뒤 노트랑 간격이 너무 좁네요 - >다시한번 생각해 볼게요
3. 01:02:431 (1,3) - 스택 하실거면 제대로 해주세요 - > 그냥 냅두겠습니다.
4. 01:04:739 - 노트 추가해주세요 - >추가
5. 01:10:431 (3,4) - 4를 지우고 3을 01:10:585 여기로 옮기는게 박자에 맞다고 생각해요 - > 수정
6. 01:41:765 , 01:41:867 - 쓸모없는 초록선 다 지워주세요 - > 수정
7. 01:57:047 (2,4) - 간격을 일부러 좁게 두신것 같은데 그냥 넓게 두시는게 더 어울리네요 - > 그냥 냅두겠습니다./ 노드를 띄우면 노트클릭미스가 나기 쉽다고 해서 냅두겠습니다.
8. 02:02:431 - 노트 추가 - > 추가
9. 02:09:355 (3) - 2에 제대로 스택하던지 아얘 간격 맞춰서 재배치하시던지 해주는게 좋겠네요 - > 슬라이더 2 끝에 스택하는것보다 노드 5에 스택이 좋을것같아 5에 스택했습니다.
10. 02:36:585 (3,4) - 간격 맞춰주세요 - > 다시한번 보고 수정할게요
11. 02:40:278 (6) - 반복 한번 넣어주는걸 추천합니다 - > 추가
12. 02:41:508 (3) - x:448 y:48 로 이동하는걸 추천 - >수정
13. 03:10:021 - 역시나 이런 키아이 남용은 언랭요소로 이어질수 있다고 생각합니다, 그냥 끄시길 - > 수정

[Insane]

1. 00:03:354 ~ 00:12:739 - 너무 스택에 의존해서 화면 위쪽에서만 노네요, 적당히 끊고 아래쪽도 노트 채워보시는게 어떤가요? - >냅두는게 좋은 것 같습니다.
2. 00:16:585 (4) - 이런거 보기 안좋습니다, x:336 y:336 이런 곳에 배치해보시는게? - > 수정
3. 00:22:739 (4,5,6,7,1) - 너무 멀리서 연타가 시작한다고 생각해요, 차라리 5번 노트부터 시작해서 간격을 조금 좁게 해보시는게 좋을듯 http://puu.sh/hGENO/3c61b353d0.jpg - > 수정[/color
4. 00:31:547 (1,1,1,1,2) - 간격이 너무 좁다고 생각해요 - > >
5. 00:35:047 (4,1,4) - 스택 제대로 해주세요~ - > 수정
6. 00:40:893 (3,1) - 역시나 너무 간격이 좁다고 생각해요 > 슬라이더3을 약간 내렸습니다.,
7. 00:47:047 (3,4,1) - 흐름이 조금 엉성하다고 생각되요, 이런식으로 바꿔보시는게 어떤가요? http://puu.sh/hGFa7/61bd7eb82e.jpg - >수정
8. 00:52:585 - 익스트림도 여기 쉬는시간인데 인세인은 아니네요? 익스트림도 쉬는시간을 없애거나 인세인에 쉬는시간을 넣어보시길 - >
9. 00:54:278 (3,4) - Ctrl G 해주고 3을 x:352 y:192 부근에 두는건 어떤가요? - > - > 수정
10. 01:04:278 (3,4) - 따로따로 Ctrl G 해주고 4번을 x:333 y:241로 옮기는게 좋은거같아요 - > 수정
11. 01:51:201 (1,2,3) - 슬라이더 끝부분의 소리를 줄이던가 서클로 처리하는게 좋을거라고 생각해요, 시끄러움
12. 02:00:585 (1,1,1,2) - 이것 역시 너무 좁다고 생각해요 - > - >냅두는게 좋은 것 같습니다. 슬라이더를 멀리 띄우면 클릭이 혼란스러워짐니다.
    
13. 02:11:047 (4) - 여기 샘플셋 오토로 바꾸고 클랩 넣어주세요, 갑자기 끊기는건 듣기 안좋네요 - > 수정
14. 02:15:970 (1,2) - 클랩이 2번이 아니라 1번에 있어야 해요 - > 수정
15. 02:40:585 (2,3) - 1/8 말고 1/4 슬라이더로 해주는게 더 어울리네요, 그리고 간격 좀 넓게 넣어보시길- > 그냥 냅두겠습니다.
16. 02:50:431 (4,5,6,7,8) - 연타 동선을 이쁘게 일직선으로 만들어주시거나 2를 옮긴 뒤 이렇게 넣어보시길 http://puu.sh/hGFPP/80ece53887.jpg - > 수정
17. 02:50:739 (8,1) - 8번 자리에서 1번 슬라가 시작되는게 맞는 박자라고 생각해요 - > 그냥 냅두겠습니다.
18. 03:05:970 - 여기 서클을 넣는게 맞는 박자라고 생각해요, 뒤에 빈곳도 전부요. 코드 드려볼테니 메모장 열고 185508 부분부터 전부 지우고 복붙해보시길 - > 무언가 안 맞는거 같은데...
    
    ^^

    256,120,185508,6,2,B|232:72|232:72|320:104|416:40,1,237.5,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    144,192,186124,2,2,B|96:216|96:216|128:128|64:32,1,237.5,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,264,186739,2,2,B|280:312|280:312|192:280|96:344,1,237.5,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    368,176,187355,2,2,B|416:152|416:152|384:240|448:336,1,237.5,2|10,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    248,128,187970,6,0,B|232:96|232:96|288:104|344:64,1,118.75,2|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    160,192,188278,2,0,B|128:208|128:208|136:152|96:96,1,118.75,10|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    248,264,188585,2,0,B|264:296|264:296|208:288|152:328,1,118.75,2|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    336,192,188893,2,0,B|368:176|368:176|360:232|400:288,1,118.75,10|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,120,189201,54,0,B|248:104|248:104|272:112|312:88,1,59.375,10|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    184,192,189355,2,0,B|168:200|168:200|176:176|152:136,1,59.375,10|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,264,189508,2,0,B|264:280|264:280|240:272|200:296,1,59.375,10|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    328,192,189662,2,0,B|344:184|344:184|336:208|360:248,1,59.375,10|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
    256,264,189816,37,14,0:0:0:0:
    256,192,189970,1,14,0:0:0:0:

[Extreme]

1. HP가 너무하다고 생각합니다, 5성 이상의 연타가 많은 곡이니 7~7.5 사이로 변경 부탁드려요 - >HP9.2 -> 8 ( down )
2. 00:13:201 - 이런 식의 키아이 사용은 언랭요소가 될 수 있다고 생각합니다 - >Fixed
3. 제가 아직 익스트림을 모딩할 실력이 안되네요, 죄송합니다

GL

1. 00:32:585(1,2) - These don't flow into 00:32:893 well.
2. 00:35:201(1,2) - The spacing:timing ratio makes the spacing between these two sliders feel really awful.
3. 01:25:508(5,6) - The flow from 5 to 6 feels really weird.
4. 01:31:355 - This a weird, sudden velocity change.
5. 02:33:355(1,2,3) - 2 and 3 shouldn't be spaced so far away from the slider end. You haven't done much of that "style" (mapping silderend-circle-circle triplets with large spacing) at all until now. It's only been normally spaced prior to this. It's just too sudden in my opinion.
6. 02:40:278 - GOTTA GO FAST? Also, don't extend it to the blue tick. Shorten the length to the red tick.
7. 02:49:816 - Ugly overlap
8. Overall, I think this map needs work. Mainly, it needs a lot of tidying up. There are lot of sloppy looking sliders and a lot of parts with awkward flow.

1. 00:13:201(1,3) - Ugly overlap. This, however, is not crucial to change.
2. 00:14:278(1,3) - ^
3. 00:24:585 - This overlap should be changed. It doesn't look nice with such a tiny overlap.
4. 00:32:585 - Ctrl + G
5. 00:32:739 - ^
6. 00:32:893 - ^ (and then, look~! your map flows just fine without moving anything )
7. 02:03:662(4,1) - Ugly overlap. Whywhywhywhy tiny overlaps :C
8. 02:06:124(8,1) - Whywhywhywhywhywhy you should make 8 blanket with 1 insteaaad. don't overlap them like that, it looks blehhh
9. 02:07:970(6,8) - >:C stahp it. you should blanket these too.
10. 02:50:431(4,5,6,7,8) - nonono too hard too hard. make this a bit skinnier maybe? maybe. I guarantee you at least 90% of people will combo break here. you monster. >:C meanie.
11. 02:53:508(2,3) - GAHHHH OVERLAPPING BY A HAIR?!?!?! pls fix :3
12. 02:53:816(3,1) - ^
13. 02:54:278(1,2) - Blanket 2 with 1 better.
14. 03:00:431 - Ohmygod pls. the hairline overlaps are everywhere.

See this? Click the small check box. For me it doesn't say anything, but it should say something along the lines of checking for spacing

Tsuchimikado wrote:

yahello~ from my modding -it's been so long ><-

[Extreme]

1. 00:32:585(1,2) - These don't flow into 00:32:893 well. - > is not bad :/
2. 00:35:201(1,2) - The spacing:timing ratio makes the spacing between these two sliders feel really awful. :(
3. 01:25:508(5,6) - The flow from 5 to 6 feels really weird. - > http://puu.sh/hU06j/8ca5e3e7d0.jpg
4. 01:31:355 - This a weird, sudden velocity change. - > im not weird !
5. 02:33:355(1,2,3) - 2 and 3 shouldn't be spaced so far away from the slider end. You haven't done much of that "style" (mapping silderend-circle-circle triplets with large spacing) at all until now. It's only been normally spaced prior to this. It's just too sudden in my opinion. - > ok.. hold on
6. 02:40:278 - GOTTA GO FAST? Also, don't extend it to the blue tick. Shorten the length to the red tick. - > Fixed
7. 02:49:816 - Ugly overlap - > flow after slider
8. Overall, I think this map needs work. Mainly, it needs a lot of tidying up. There are lot of sloppy looking sliders and a lot of parts with awkward flow.

[Insane]

1. 00:13:201(1,3) - Ugly overlap. This, however, is not crucial to change. - > is look like good
2. 00:14:278(1,3) - ^ - > Fixed ( move node (3)
3. 00:24:585 - This overlap should be changed. It doesn't look nice with such a tiny overlap. - > hold on
4. 00:32:585 - Ctrl + G ->flow is not good
5. 00:32:739 - ^ - > Fixed
6. 00:32:893 - ^ (and then, look~! your map flows just fine without moving anything ) - > Fixed
7. 02:03:662(4,1) - Ugly overlap. Whywhywhywhy tiny overlaps :C - > http://puu.sh/hTZhp/9cc8215b30.jpg
8. 02:06:124(8,1) - Whywhywhywhywhywhy you should make 8 blanket with 1 insteaaad. don't overlap them like that, it looks blehhh - > hold on
9. 02:07:970(6,8) - >:C stahp it. you should blanket these too. - > http://puu.sh/hTZyo/38a209392a.jpg
10. 02:50:431(4,5,6,7,8) - nonono too hard too hard. make this a bit skinnier maybe? maybe. I guarantee you at least 90% of people will combo break here. you monster. >:C meanie. - > heh Fixed
11. 02:53:508(2,3) - GAHHHH OVERLAPPING BY A HAIR?!?!?! pls fix :3 - > heh Fixed
12. 02:53:816(3,1) - ^ - > hold on
13. 02:54:278(1,2) - Blanket 2 with 1 better. - > hold on
14. 03:00:431 - Ohmygod pls. the hairline overlaps are everywhere. - > hold on

[Hard] -> Fix only the required part.
This difficulty needs serious reworking. The spacing problems are rampant. Everywhere.

See this? Click the small check box. For me it doesn't say anything, but it should say something along the lines of checking for spacing

Normal and Easy seem solid enough. I wouldn't be the best judge of how difficult Normals and Easys should be. They seem fine. Good luck~!

Thanks alot to mod for me !!

Ninja Bunny wrote:

안녕하세요! 이노래 나노버젼도 좋음 ㅋㅋ
모딩 늦어서 죄송합니다;;

[general]

1. 플로우 이해를 잘하고있는것같아요. 그리고 슬라이더 모양도 좋네요 ㅋㅋ
2. 하드랑 인센이랑 난이도 갭이 큽니다. 하드에 노트 더 넣고, 리듬 정리하고, 패턴 만든다면 이 문제가 나아질듯.
3. 카운트다운 필요없을것같아요. Song setup>design들어가서 “enable countdown”끄는게 어떨까요? - > Eh.. sorry i dont want to off them..
4. 맵 더 깔끔하게 하기위해 stacking도 잊지 마세요! - > ok
5. 03:09:816 –각 난이도 스피너 여기 끝내는게 더 좋을듯
   

[Hard]

1. 리듬이 일정하지않아요. 이부분은 플레이하면서 이상하다고 생각되는 부분 리매핑하다보면 나아질거예요. 아니면 카피 페이스트 해도 되구요. 설명보다는 보는게 나을것같아서 시작에서 북마크 (파란선)까지 한번 수정해 봤습니다. http://puu.sh/hXhS8.osu 00:51:816 (4,5,6) –여기 노트 더 넣은 이유가 브레이크 바로전에 강조하면 좋을듯해서 그랬습니다. 님이 전에 사용한 리듬도 좋아요. - > 제가 만든대로 사용할게요
2. 01:02:431 –이맵 첫마디에 비하면 여기부터 스페이싱이 줄어들었는데, 무슨 이유가 있나요? 그리고나서 다시01:14:585 –부터 스페이싱이 원상태가 됬어요. - > 난이도 특성상 노드들 거리를 더 둘수가 없어서 줄어든검니다..
3. 01:28:124 (1,2) -01:28:893 (3,1) -01:29:355 (1,2) -01:31:355 (3,4) -01:56:278 (1,2,3,4,5) -02:36:585 (3,4) -여기도 좁은 스페이싱 문제 - > 01:28:893 (3,1) - 02:36:585 (3,4) - 빼고 X 1.05 내외로 수정했습니다
4. 01:02:431 (1) –리듬 더 좋게 수정할수있을듯. 지우고 노트 더 많이 넣으세요. - > 이대로가 좋은거 같아요..
5. 01:51:201 -01:51:355 -01:51:508 –개인적인 생각. 여기도 노트 넣으면 좋을듯. - > add it
6. 01:53:662 (2) –전에는 이부분 매핑 안한이상 delete? - > No
7. 03:07:355 (2) - http://puu.sh/hY3nd.jpg 이렇게 바꾸면 플로우가 더 나아집니다. - > 약간 이상해진거같음..

[Insane]

1. OD 7? - > hold on
2. 00:09:971 (7) –플레이할때 잘 안보였어요. Move to 280, 80? - >수정
3. 00:22:739 (4,5,6,7,1) –DS가 일정하지 않아요. 다시 깔끔하게 만드세요. 슬라이더 만든다음에 ctrl+F하면 됩니다. - > X0.86 으로 통일
4. 01:40:585 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) –개인적으로 스트리밍 스페이싱때문에 난해하다고 생각했던 부분. - > 다른분들이 언급을 안해서 냅두겠습니다.
5. 01:51:201 (1,2,3) –이리듬 맞지않다고 생각됩니다. 그냥 노트로 바꾸는게 좋을것같아요. - > 제가 보기엔 맞는거 같아요..
6. 02:01:508 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) –오버매핑은 비추천 - > 냅둘게요
7. 02:50:739 –여기부터도 휘슬힛사가 듣기 안좋아요. 하드 모딩 참고하시길 바랍니다. - > 수정
8. 02:50:739 (8,1) –보컬이 (8)에 시작하는 이상 (8) 지우고 (1)을 8 있던 자리에 놓는게 나을듯. - > 수정
9. 03:00:585 –휘슬힛사 패턴이 듣기 안좋아요. 03:01:508 - 03:02:278 – 03:02:585 - 03:03:508 - 03:02:893 (1) - 03:04:124 (1) -여기 휘슬 지우고
   03:02:124 – 03:02:431 - 03:03:355 - 03:03:662 - 03:04:585 -여기 휘슬 넣는게 어떨까요? - > 수정

[Extreme]

1. change AR to 9.5? - > up to 9.4 -> 9.5
2. 01:41:201 –여기 스피너 끝내는게 이맵 스피너들이랑 일정할듯.->Eh...
3. 03:06:278 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,1,2,1) –좋음 - > 익스트림 난이도에선 좋을것같은데...
   

[Normal]

1. 01:28:124 (2) –여기로01:28:124 – 옮기고 꼬리를01:28:893 –로 두세요 - > 슬라이더 틱소리하고 노래가 안 맞아요..
2. 01:33:201 (3) –는01:32:585 (2) –카피해서 ctrl+G해서 쓰는게 더 깨끗해 보일듯.
3. 02:12:585 (3,4) –blanket
4. 02:44:585 (3) - http://puu.sh/hY3oa.jpg
5. 02:46:739 -02:47:970 -02:49:201 –add notes
6. 02:56:739 (3,1) –03:01:816 (3) -보컬따라가는이상 (3)을02:56:739 –로 옮기고 꼬리를02:57:201 –로 두세요. 다른슬라이더도 같은 리듬으로.
7. 03:03:047 (1) –여기도 리듬이 좋아질수 있을듯. 지우고 그림에있는 (5) 슬라이더를03:03:047 (1) – 에 두세요. 그리고03:03:355 – 에 (6) 슬라이더 넣고 http://puu.sh/hY3ou.jpg 03:04:278 (1) –도 마찬가지. - > 02:56:739 (3) - 만 수정했습니다.
   

[Easy]

1. 01:13:355 (2) - 01:13:355 – 로 옮기고 꼬리를01:14:124 – 에.
2. 01:23:355 (2) - 01:24:431 (1) - 01:28:278 (2) - 01:33:201 (2) - 01:34:431 (3) - 01:35:662 (4) - 02:22:431 (2) - 02:32:278 (2) -02:34:739 (4) - 02:37:201 (2) - 02:42:124 (2) - 02:43:355 (1) - ^
3. 02:02:585 (2,3,4) –리듬 좋음
4. 이지는 수정할 필요가 없다고 생각합니다.
   

dististik wrote:

Hey~ I'm from my modding queue that died forever ago, sorry that it took so long to get this mod out, but I hope I can still help!

Easy

1. 01:14:739 (3) - I feel like an NC would fit well here. -> NC
2. 01:41:816 (1) - This might be too soon after the spinner for an Easy map. There's a good chance I'm wrong, though, so don't worry about it unless other people point out the same problem.-> BN is admit that

Normal

1. 00:47:662 (2,3,4) - The way this is placed on the grid feels a little awkward. I suggest moving (4) so that it and (3) don't stack.

Hard

1. 00:35:047 (6,7,8,9) - This section feels awkward while playing. I replayed the map several times and even when knowing when the notes are supposed to be hit the map felt off in that area.
2. 01:10:585 (3) - The delay between (2) and (3) makes this slider awkward and it breaks the flow of the map. I suggest putting something in between them so that the flow stays consistent.
3. 02:14:585 (3,4) - The DS between these notes makes playing them awkward. -
4. 02:22:278 (4) - Leaves rankable mapping area.->Up
5. 02:46:431 (2,3) - There needs to be a note in between these two. The flow shatters into a billion pieces when this section arrives.

Insane

1. Ahem
2. 00:27:047 (2,3,4,5,6) - While this is an Insane map and you're free to make jumps like that, remember that this is an Insane under 5 stars. These jumps threw me off because I wasn't expecting them to be in this kind of difficulty.
3. 01:00:432 (2,3,4,5) - Make this a more recognisable pattern.
4. 01:06:893 (2,1,2) - The jumps before this were fine, but this section was something that broke the flow horribly.
5. 01:15:047 (2,3,4,5,6) - Make this a star. The pattern you currently have is frustrating to read. - > done
6. 01:50:739 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Remap.
7. 02:40:585 (2,3) - Delete these and replace it with a stream leading off of the previous slider.
8. 02:50:431 (4,5,6,7) - Remap this to be a stream, where you have them now makes no sense. - > 5,7 littel pull right
9. 03:09:201 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - Remap, so that everything is readable. The overlapping at this ending is god awful and quite frankly how its mapped now is unrankable. - > 03:09:816 (1) - move under 03:09:662 (4) - here

I can't do Expert difficulties because I'm too noob for that. Sorry if anything I said was rude, I didn't mean to discourage you in any way. Good luck with getting approved!

Rohit6 wrote:

Another reply because the previous post was too long!

Ill list some shortcuts to make some remapping easier.
Ctrl+ H - flips object horizontally
Ctrl+ J - flips objecct vertically
Ctrl+ G - switches the sliderstart and sliderend

Really fun to play
Just needs some twerks here and there to make it look more visually appealing

SPOILER

[Insane]
00:14:279 (1,2) - Fix blanket
00:15:586 (6) - Put it at the end of the previous slider so it feels more snappy
00:17:201 (2,3) - Fix blanket
00:23:508 (2) - X:128 Y:260 - > done
00:24:585 (2) - Fix Distance snap
00:24:893 (3,4,5,6,7,1) - This plays waaay betterhttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3295913
00:28:893 (4) - X:156 Y:240 - > Done
00:30:432 (1,2) - Rotate slider to make to vertical and blanket the circle to the right of the slider
00:34:124 (1) - X:472 Y:204 - >Done
00:34:585 (2,3,4,1) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3295934
00:59:508 (4,5,6) - Really awkward to play . I suggest making it parallel to the next stack.
01:14:585 (1,2) - Fix blanket -> move littel
01:26:739 (5,1) - Overlap is looking ugly here - > move littel
01:28:124 (1,2) - Very high Distance snap
01:43:355 (2) - X:20 Y:160
01:50:739 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - osu.ppy.sh/ss/3296044
01:53:355 (2) - X:96 Y:280 - >Done
01:55:047 (4,1) - Fix blanket
02:06:124 (8,1) - Blanket the sliders
02:08:893 (1,2,3,4) - osu.ppy.sh/ss/3296044
02:10:432 (2,5) - Possible blanket
02:19:816 (1) - X:368 Y:280 - >Done
02:22:278 (1) - Crumple this slider a bit at the start
02:28:585 (1,2,3,4) - You should really use shortcuts to copy and paste sliders since its looking ugly
02:29:816 (1,2,3,4) - ^
02:40:893 (1) - Make this a wave slider - >Done
02:48:278 (1) - Blanket the slider with the previous one and turn it into a wave slider as well
02:53:047 (1,2) - Blanket the two sliders
02:54:278 (1,3) - ^
03:00:585 (1) - Kiai turned off for no reason - > off
03:00:585 (1) - X:80 Y: 224 - >Done
03:09:816 (1,2) - Place the first circle between first and second sliderstart and the second circle between third and fourth sliderstart

-------
Hello!

SPOILER

[Hard]
00:46:278 (3,4,5) - I suggest doing this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3295689
00:49:508 (6,7) - This flows better imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3295697 - > Fixed
01:03:970 (3,1) - Increase Distance snap here since it seems like its half a beat away
01:04:893 (3) - End the slider on the white tick and put a circle on the red tick
01:07:047 (9) - Shift to X:248 Y:242 - > Done
01:09:201 (4) - Increase Distance snap
01:15:355 (3) - Convert to half slider and add circle on the white tick
01:17:047 (9) - Add a circle here to finish the pattern
01:17:201 (1) - This slider is too long and tiring . Consider starting from 01:19:662
01:22:893 (2) - Circle on red tick
01:28:585 (2,3,1) - This looks ugly and hard to read in a Hard diff
01:29:355 (1,2) - Fix the blanket
01:31:970 (1) - Add circles on the white and red tick to finish the pattern - >add white tick
01:33:508 (5) - Shift to X:200 Y:236 - >Done
01:36:893 (1) - Spinner is too long and doesn't fit to the song imo
01:51:201 (1,2,3) - Higher Distance snap to emphasize the notes ->Done
01:57:816 (5) - Curve it a bit and move to X:230 Y:311 - > done
02:01:508 (1,2) - Make it a 2 beat slider to fit the song
02:03:047 (5) - Distance snap too high
02:07:970 (6) - NC here
02:11:970 (3) - Curve it in the opposite direction
02:15:970 (1,2) - Fix the blanket
02:18:431 (1) - 2 beat slider to match the song
02:19:355 (2,3) - Remove the circle and shift the slider to the red tick - >Done
02:22:739 (5,6) - This looks ugly
02:26:431 (1) - Spinner too long and tiring . Consider starting from 02:29:816
02:31:662 (3,5) - Overlap looks really ugly here
02:36:585 (3,4) - Fix Distance Snap between these sliders
02:42:431 (2) - Curve this slider
02:44:431 (1,2,3) - Fix the blankets here
02:49:508 (1) - No need for NC here
02:50:585 (3,4) - Stack the circles
03:01:662 (1,2) - Fix the blanket here
03:03:355 (2) - Curve this for better flow
03:07:970 (1) - Put this in the center
Overall I liked the flow of the diff but you need to fix the blankets and the bad overlaps.
Hitsounds seem fine to me.

K i R a wrote:

Hi, some modding for a miku song ~

[Easy]
Combos are perfect, spacing is perfect and nothing confusing, also the hitsounds are right, nothing to change here ~

[Normal]
01:08:585 (3) - Snap the circle.
02:13:508 (4) - New combo -> NC
02:40:278 (4) - You didnt use the whistle in the whole map, this feels weird, remove the whistle - > I put to emphasize the vocal

[Hard]
00:40:124 (7) - Stack it with the previous slider end, seems more natural with your "jumps".
01:04:585 (1,2,3) - This is confusing, stack them or make a jump like you did with the other circles.
02:05:508 (5,6) - if you start these circles on the end of this slider: 02:05:047 (4) - seems to be more fluid - > i move here http://puu.sh/iGNkI/42312da872.jpg
02:09:508 (4) - New combo
02:40:278 (6) - Same as in normal, sounds weird because you didnt use whistle on the whole song. - > Same

[Insane]
00:05:202 (7) - Add a whistle to avoid confusion
The first part seems to have a lack of hitsounds, maybe you should put more whistles- > Done
00:31:970 (1,1) - Remove those new combo, doesnt make sense at all ->Remove
00:48:893 (1) - Remove new combo -00:49:508 (3) - Start new combo here ->Done
01:01:508 (1,1) - Same as before, doesnt make sense those new combo->Remove
01:15:508 (5,1) - No stack?
01:31:047 (1,1) - Same as before, maybe you wanted to do something? :/ Just to explain it, there are a lot of new combos in a row, just one slider and then another slider, remember new combos starts at musical phrases and they are played by a different player in TAG mode.->Eh...Remove..
01:41:355 (2,1) - Stack -> Done
01:51:201 (1,2,3) - Just my opinion but I think this would be easier to read if they were streams of two.
02:00:585 (1,1) - You know, combos ->ok.. done
02:39:970 (1,1) - ^ ^
02:50:739 (1) - This is not an error, look in the other difficulties the only use you did with whistle and now this, you started using whistle in this end-kiai and it works pretty well, you should do the same in the other difficulties.
02:59:662 (1,1) - Combos ->done
03:09:816 (1,2) - This is confusing, change places or dont stack them. ->Done

[Extreme]
00:03:663 (1) - Remove new combo
00:04:279 (2,3) - This is confusing, there is a stream in the song isnt it? Most people know this song so they may fail at this.
00:11:048 (1) - Remove new combo
00:30:124 (1) - If you follow the vocals, remove this new combo - > Done
00:30:431 (3) - And start it here
00:36:816 (1) - Remove new combo
00:49:816 (2,3,1) - Wait, this is really confusing, i dont see any flow here, even if they are jumping streams they are not natural, you can switch to 1/2 instead of the stream.
00:51:970 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - Feels weird, too much stack suddenly. - > stack (6) to 00:51:047 (4)
01:06:432 (1) - Remove new combo
01:06:893 (1) - Remove new combo
01:08:585 (1) - ^
01:16:585 (1) - ^
01:52:432 (1) - ^
01:52:893 (4) - New combo
01:53:355 (1) - Remove new combo
02:10:278 (1) - ^
02:10:893 (1) - ^
02:15:355 (1) - ^
02:16:893 (4) - New combo - > Done
02:17:201 (1) - Remove new combo > Done
02:19:662 (3) - New combo > Done
02:20:278 (1) - Remove new combo > Done
02:20:585 (1) - ^ ^
02:31:508 (5,6) - Unpredictable :/
02:32:893 (1) - Remove new combo > Done
02:44:124 (1) - ^ ^
02:59:662 (1,1) - Remove those new combo > Done

Thats all I think, too much difficulties xD, fix those little things and you are a steap closer to rank it

Good luck!

-BlueSun- wrote:

M4M ^^
I'm not the best at this but i hope its somewhat useful ;-;

[Easy]
-Very good, barely found any problems
01:18:431 (2,3) - doesn't look great
02:03:970 (4,5,1) - Bad overlap
02:43:355 (1) - Make it a straight slider

[Normal]
00:35:355 (1,2,3) - I dont like the way this looks for some reason.
00:47:047 (1) - Make it like this http://puu.sh/iRegv/f667e723e2.jpg - > Done
00:49:508 (4,1) - Blanket properly.
01:08:585 (3) - isn't placed correctly on slider (2)'s end.
01:33:816 (4) - Make it a straight slider?
02:19:970 (3) - Move to x:452 y:200
02:21:816 (2) - Make it a straight slider?
02:31:047 (1,2,3) - I dont like this, i dont know how you should change it though
02:40:278 (4) - Awkward pause, maybe add another note at the next white tick
02:47:047 (2) - move to x:304 y:24

[Hard]
00:43:662 (3,4) - Blanket?
01:10:431 - Add a note here.
01:28:893 (3,1) - Why so close?
02:54:739 (2,3,1) - In my opinion this doesnt flow well.
03:07:970 (1) - Move to x:412 y:144 - >Done

[Insane]
-umm is this too hard for an insane?
00:05:202 (7) - I dont think this note is necessary
00:12:894 (8,9,10,11) - rip small sliders D:
00:32:585 (2) - ctrl G? - > Fixed
01:27:047 (1) - Move to x:512 y:224 - > Fixed
01:28:124 (1,2) - Way too far apart.
01:35:970 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Confusing
01:50:739 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ouch ;(
02:15:047 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - It's a bit repetitive
02:29:816 (1,2,3,4,5) - Ouch again ;(
02:36:585 (3,4,1,2) - you did this twice in a row?

Good luck

1. I think your skin's hitx.png files are a bit too big, mostly for the Extreme diff, where the CS is smaller
2. Your hitcircle from the skin is too dark, which makes all combo colors look alike, try to make it whiter

1. 00:10:509 (4) - I don't mind the stream, but there's no audible sound on this note, which makes it overmapping
2. 00:30:124 (5,6,7,8,1) - the spacing is a bit confusing to play, maybe increase it a little bit
3. 00:31:355 (6) - move to around ~x:72 y:292 to improve flow, and adjust 00:31:662 (7) - if you change it
4. 00:35:201 (1,2) - you should increase the spacing here
5. 00:51:970 (6) - start new combo here instead of 00:52:278 (1) -
6. 01:03:662 (6,7) - increase spacing
7. 01:21:201 (1,2) - this is too close, I thought I had to click earlier then I should due to the spacing
8. 01:27:047 (1,2) - improve blanket
9. 01:34:585 (2) - start new combo here instead of 01:34:278 (1) -
10. 01:41:816 (1) - why do you have 3 timing points near this note? are they all necessary?
11. 02:25:508 (3,4,5) - not sure about this flow, maybe try to change 4 and 5 positions?
12. 02:32:124 (1,2) - blanket can be improved
13. 02:52:278 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - this is almost impossible to play x.x I think you should change the first slider

1. 00:17:201 (2,3) - try to blanket 3 with 2
2. 00:37:816 (1,2) - you can blanket this ^^
3. 00:57:201 (5,1) - imo these should be perfectly stacked
4. 01:51:355 (2,3) - these should be further away from the previous pattern, the overlap makes it hard to read
5. 02:01:355 (2,1) - give a bit more space, try to make it the same spacing as between 02:01:201 (1) - slider end and 02:01:355 (2) - slider start
6. 02:02:432 (10) - NC here?
7. 02:07:355 (4,5) - why not blanket this?
8. 03:02:893 (1,2) - almost overlapping, could be avoided
9. I like this diff, it's pretty solid!

- Milhofo - wrote:

Hi, from my queue ^^

[General]

1. I think your skin's hitx.png files are a bit too big, mostly for the Extreme diff, where the CS is smaller
2. Your hitcircle from the skin is too dark, which makes all combo colors look alike, try to make it whiter

[Extreme]

1. 00:10:509 (4) - I don't mind the stream, but there's no audible sound on this note, which makes it overmapping - > Remove (4)
2. 00:30:124 (5,6,7,8,1) - the spacing is a bit confusing to play, maybe increase it a little bit
3. 00:31:355 (6) - move to around ~x:72 y:292 to improve flow, and adjust 00:31:662 (7) - if you change it - > Done
4. 00:35:201 (1,2) - you should increase the spacing here - >Done
5. 00:51:970 (6) - start new combo here instead of 00:52:278 (1) -
6. 01:03:662 (6,7) - increase spacing
7. 01:21:201 (1,2) - this is too close, I thought I had to click earlier then I should due to the spacing - > Done
8. 01:27:047 (1,2) - improve blanket - >Done
9. 01:34:585 (2) - start new combo here instead of 01:34:278 (1) -
10. 01:41:816 (1) - why do you have 3 timing points near this note? are they all necessary? - >remove 2 greenline
11. 02:25:508 (3,4,5) - not sure about this flow, maybe try to change 4 and 5 positions? - > change
12. 02:32:124 (1,2) - blanket can be improved
13. 02:52:278 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - this is almost impossible to play x.x I think you should change the first sliderchange

[Insane]

1. 00:17:201 (2,3) - try to blanket 3 with 2
2. 00:37:816 (1,2) - you can blanket this ^^
3. 00:57:201 (5,1) - imo these should be perfectly stacked
4. 01:51:355 (2,3) - these should be further away from the previous pattern, the overlap makes it hard to read-> i move slider little pull side
5. 02:01:355 (2,1) - give a bit more space, try to make it the same spacing as between 02:01:201 (1) - slider end and 02:01:355 (2) - slider start -> X1.50 -> X1.97
6. 02:02:432 (10) - NC here? - > NC
7. 02:07:355 (4,5) - why not blanket this? ->eh.. done
8. 03:02:893 (1,2) - almost overlapping, could be avoided
9. I like this diff, it's pretty solid!

I thought I'd have more time to mod but I need to go and don't have time to mod the hard diff I'm sorry! Anyway, the map is pretty good and polished, good luck

Thx for mod ~~

Crimmi wrote:

Thank you for applying at the #modreqsea. Feel free to ignore or reject any parts of your map that you deem unfit and vice versa.

Sorry for the lateness. . .I will do my best.

General (Metadata/Timing, etc.)

1. Put "е54иапяпапAkiakane" & "Nico Nico Douga" into the tags since NND is kind of like Youtube in a sense, shouldn't be a source.

Easy

1. (Sliderend) 00:42:739 (1) - Remove the finish, it didn't fit there imo.
2. 01:07:355 (1) - Maybe stack this under 01:05:508 (2).
3. 02:03:355 (3) - I suggest you replace this with a note, this pattern feels more Normal-ish than it felt like an Easy.
4. 02:51:355 (2) - Maybe delete this note and extend (1) towards this point.
5. I Don't want to tuch Easy

Normal

1. 00:42:739 (1) - (Slider repeat) - Again, I don't see this finish fitting. - > REmove
2. 00:49:201 (x) - Maybe place a note here?
3. 00:49:508 (4) - Maybe remove the clap from the slider start and place it into the slider end. ->Done
4. 00:49:508 (4,1) - Suggestion ->Done.
5. 01:25:508 (2) - Suggestion.
6. 01:28:278 (2) - Move this down to x:156|y:120. ->Done
7. 02:13:508 (1) - Suggestion for a blanket.

Hard

1. 00:50:124 (2) - Maybe curve this around (2) for a blanket. - > blanket
2. 01:04:431 (1,2) - Maybe bring these back a bit shown here, try and i'll bet it'll sound better.
3. 01:10:431 (x) - Maybe add a note here, to be consistent with 01:11:508 (6,7).
4. 02:19:355 (x) - Maybe add a note here?
5. 03:09:816 (1) - This is a bit off, it should be a 1/4, not a 1/8, bring that back to the red tick.

Insane

1. Clear.

Extreme

1. Clear.

익스트림

eoehd1ek wrote:

초보티 엄청나는 모딩이니까
보고 맘에 안들면 넘어가셈

익스트림

00:05:817 (3) - 다음꺼랑 팔로우 포인트 이어지지도 않고 다음 노트도 뉴콤인데 왜 여기에 뉴콤넣음ㅋㅋㅋ 풀으셈 - > playback rate 를 25%로 마춰 놓고 들으면 뉴콤보 해야 되는
00:07:356 (1) - 컨트롤 G 눌러서 방향만 바꾸셈 흐름이 이게 더 나음http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509144 - > change
00:08:586 (2) - 뉴폼 풀어주는게 나는 보기 더 좋은데... - > playback rate 를 25%로 마춰 놓고 들으면 뉴콤보 해야 되는
00:10:585 (1,2,3) - 00:10:279 (1,2,3) - 이거 복사해서 디스턴스 1.3으로 이쯤에 넣어보셈 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509151
원래 힛사로 바꾸는거 잊지말고~ -> 원래 상태가 좋은거 같음
00:18:124 (1) - 컨트롤G 눌러서 방향만 바꿔주면 다음 노트랑 흐름 비슷해서 좋을듯- > change
00:19:355 (6) - 이걸 3연타로 바꿔서 00:18:739 (3,4,5) - 여기에 3개 맞춘다음 컨트롤 H 눌러서 좌우 방향 바꿔보셈~~
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509186 여기서 컨트롤 H 해서 이렇게 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509196
00:20:124 (1,2,3) - 앞쪽에는 다 3연타인데 여기는 1/4 슬라이더 이상함 3연타로 바꾸셈 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509219 ->change
00:24:124 (8) - 곡선으로 만들어주셈~~ http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509234 ->change
00:26:124 (3) - 이거 복사해서 00:26:431 (4) - 여기에 붙어넣어 이정도쯤으로 거리 만들어주셈 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509255
00:27:355 (1,2,3) - 5연타에서 2번4번 노트 지우고 이전 점프처럼 흐름 이어지게 놓아두셈 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509270
00:27:662 (3) - 슬라이더는 이전 노트에 겹치고 1번 노트방향으로 놓아주셈 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509281
00:27:970 (4) - 이거 뉴콤보로 바꾸셈 ->change
00:28:970 (7) - 이 노트 지우셈
지우고 나서 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509293 이렇게끔 놓아주셈 (사각점프처럼)
00:29:355 (1,2,3) - 이걸 삼각점프로 만드셈 추천 디스턴트는 1.7 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509299
00:30:508 (8) - 이거 지우셈
00:30:585 (1) - 이걸 디스턴드스0.8로 삼각점프로 만드셈 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509304
00:30:585 (1,2,3) - 이 노트들도 디스턴스 0.8로 흘러가는것처럼 해주셈 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509314
00:31:047 (4) - 이것도 디스턴스 0.8로 3각점프로 만드셈 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509322
00:31:662 (7) - 이걸 복사해서 00:31:355 (6) - 여기 부분에 붙여넣고 컨트롤 H 컨트롤J 컨트롤G 해서 디스턴스 0.8로 이어주셈 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509328이렇게끔??
00:31:355 (6) - 이거 복사해서 00:31:662 (7) - 여기부분에 붙여넣고 컨트롤 H 컨트롤 J 하고 디스턴스 1.5로 놓으셈 http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509345
00:35:816 (3) - 좀더 대칭되도록 놓아주셈 00:35:047 (2) - 여기랑 겹치면 될듯
00:36:124 (4) - 디스턴스 1로 아무데나놓으셈
00:38:124 (2) - 스냅되게 그냥 겹치셈 - Done
00:43:047 (2) - 컨트롤 G 하고 디스턴스 1.3으로 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/3509374이렇게끔 만드셈


나중에 더 해드림 밤11시반이라 너무 피곤해서...

UnLock- wrote:

Simple Modding (No kds)
하드와 인센 차이가 너무 큽니다, 사이에 하나 채우던지 간격을 좁히던지 해주세요
쿠도스 ㄴㄴ

Eh.. i make new diff?