1. Easy (1.3 stars, 116 notes)
2. Extreme (5.78 stars, 777 notes)
3. Hard (3.25 stars, 322 notes)
4. Insane (4.88 stars, 723 notes)
5. Normal (2 stars, 192 notes)

HapiiKat wrote:

For the osu (Xtra diff)

00:14:355 (1) - Deleting the beat after this slider and making this slider longer (to where the 2 was) would make it sound a bit better, it sounded a bit awkward here.

00:18:815 (3,4) - It sounds kind of awkward here too, maybe make the slider shorter (to the red tick) and move the 4 over some for spacing.

00:27:431 (1,2,3,4,5) - It might sound better here if you put a triplet here, and make the tjird beat a slider that goes over 3 tick marks (red->blue->white)

00:27:892 (4) - and then you can add 2 beats in the remaining open red and blue ticks (can be two circles or a slider)

00:30:277 (2,3,4,5) - delete these then add a 3 tick long slider and maybe just ad a circle afterwards on the red tick mark after it

00:31:123 (4,5) - maybe make the the 4 slider shorter and add a circle on the blue tick between 4 and 5

01:03:738 (6) - make this slider shorter (to the red tick)

01:56:200 (1,2) - This isnt really bad sounding but it might sound nice by adding a circle in between these two beats (make sure to put them closer together) this one is just a suggestion though, the map will still sound fine without it

02:10:815 (2) - Adding the drum sound here might sound good
(all Fixed)

-u- heheh i hope i helped for this diff, the other diffs looked fine to me so sorry for not modding anything on them haha hope i helped somehow.. XDD

xChangJo wrote:

Hi from my modding Queue :3

Mod

General:

- You need a background with 1366x768.
- 00:03:430 to 00:32:969, why you only map this part for only 2 difficulties, I think you need to map this in easy, normal
and hard, I think this part is very important in the song :c

Easy:

- Some part have a diferent distance snap like this part 00:50:200 (1,2,1) - try to use the same distance snap in easy.
- 00:37:892 (1,2) - This part is a little weird to play, maybe you can try another pattern. Like this, add a circle here
00:37:892, add a slider here 00:38:507 and finish in 00:38:815 add another slider in 00:39:123 and end it in 00:39:738,
another in 00:40:354 and end in 00:40:969
- 01:05:584 (2) - Move to X: 288 and Y: 300
- 01:12:354 (1) - New Combo
- 01:13:584 (5) - Blanket with 01:12:354 (4)
- 01:13:584 (5,6,7,8,9) - use the same distance snap and maybe, try to create a star with this five notes (?)
- 01:24:661 (1) - New Combo
- 01:33:277 (2) - Move this note to X: 144 and Y: 104 and stack this 01:34:507 (3) - with 01:32:046 (1) - and maybe you can
move this 01:35:738 (4) - to X: 449 and Y: 200.
- 01:36:661 (5) - Eliminated this note, I think is not necessary but sound good, is your choice
- 01:55:431 (3) - Maybe you can move this note to other part or make her form diferent for not overlap with 01:51:738 (1)ç
- 02:03:431 (3) - Make this note parallel with the slider
- 02:04:046 (1) - Maybe blanket with 02:03:431 (3)
- 02:08:354 (2) - Move this note to X: 268 and Y: 328 (Try to avoid overlap with this notes)
- 02:10:815 (2) - Make the blanket better with 02:08:969 (1)
- 02:18:507 (3) - Why hide the principal tick in 02:18:815
- 02:23:431 Add a circle here
- 02:23:738 (1) - New Combo
- 02:33:584 (3) - New Combo
- 02:36:046 (1) - Maybe blanket with 02:34:815 (4)
- 02:38:507 (1) - New Combo
- 02:44:046 (2,1) - Why this notes are to close (In the easy difficulty you have a lot of notes with diferent distance snap,
try to use the same for all)
- 02:48:354 (1) - New Combo

Normal:

- 00:35:123 (5,1) - use the same distance snap and then try to stack this note 00:36:969 (2) with 00:35:123 (5) and 00:37:277 (3)
with 00:34:815 (4) for a symetrical pattern.
- 00:45:892 (6) - End the slider in 00:46:507
- 00:51:738 (2,3,4,5) - If you try to create a symetrical figure, try to use the same distance snap
- 01:03:738 (3,4,5,1) - Distance snap
- 01:06:507 (2) - Make the blanket with 01:07:431 (1) a little better
- 01:22:200 (1) - move to X: 92 and Y: 96, Ctrl + C, Ctrl + V in 01:22:815, Ctrl + H and then Ctrl + G
- 01:27:123 (1,2) - Make this symetrical
- 01:29:584 (1) - New Combo
- 01:56:661 (1) - Eliminated the reverse arrow, add circle here 01:57:584 and a slider here 01:57:892 who end in 01:58:200
remember to eliminated this 01:58:200 (2) too
- 01:59:123 (1) - New Combo
- 02:00:354 (3) - Blanker with 02:00:661 (4)
- 02:18:885 (4) - New Combo
- 02:23:738 (1) - New Combo
- 02:31:123 (1,2,3,4) - Use the same distance snap

Hard:

- 00:35:277 (7) - Why you hide the principal beat
- 00:40:200 (1,3) - This rhythm sound good but if you don't hide the principal beat this pattern sound a little better, when
you play the song, you heard a little sound after the slider start, try to don't hide the principal beat
- 00:42:815 (1) - Stack with 00:42:507 (4)
- 00:45:277 (1) - Make a blanket with 00:44:354 (5)
- 01:02:507 (1,3) - Avoid this overlap, try to move 01:04:046 (3) or make another form to this slider
- 01:05:738 (4) - Why this slider is too far from 01:05:584 (3)
- 01:11:738 (8) - Blanket with 01:11:584 (7)
- 01:28:969 (3) - Make this blanket a little better
- 01:57:277 (3) - Blanket with 01:57:738 (4)
- 02:02:507 (3) - Add circle
- 02:05:123 (4) - Make the blanket a little better
- 02:05:738 (6) - don't hide this note and use the same distance snap for this 02:05:584 (5,6,1)
- 02:36:507 (2,3) - Off-Beat slider sound a little weird, try to use on-beat slider or maybe add a circle here 02:36:507 (2)
and a slider in 02:36:661 (3) and end it in 02:36:969
- 02:46:354 (2) - Add circle
- 02:46:815 (4,5) - Eliminated and this end this slider 02:46:507 (3) - in 02:46:815
- 02:51:584 (2) - this slider sound weird because is a off-beat slider without a reason, change this for another pattern
- 03:05:046 (3) - Move to 03:04:969

Insane:

- OD: 7
- 00:09:432 (5) - Make the blanket with 00:10:047 (7) a little better
- 00:10:432 (9) - Move to X: 136 and Y: 184
- 00:15:662 (6) - Eliminated this circle sound a little weird
- 00:30:508 (1,2,3) - The flow with this notes is strange and you hide the circle under the slider, this reason makes the
pattern more weird to play
- 00:32:046 (1,1,2) - The same the flow is a little strange
- 00:36:354 (4) - Stack with 00:35:431 (1)
- 00:57:277 (5) - Stack with 00:57:584 (1)

- 01:12:277 (5) - Move to X: 256 and Y: 336, if you try this pattern and try to avoid is to confused when a person play >.<
- 01:19:738 (1,2,1,2,1) - this is intentional (?) I prefer all stacked in the end but is your choice
- 01:48:354 (2) - Stack with 01:47:738 (4)
- 02:01:277 (1) - Don't hide this note is too hard to read
- 02:05:431 (1) - Eliminated and put a slider 02:05:277 who end in 02:05:584 and put a circle here 02:05:738
- 02:07:584 (5) - Blanket with 02:07:123 (3) and avoid the overlap
- 02:30:815 (1) - New Combo for warning the player to the velocity change on slider
- 02:31:123 to 02:50:661 - Why no sound, when I play I lose the combo for this reason :c
- 02:56:815 (1,2) - This flow is too strange for me
- 03:00:354 (1,2) - this is too hard and unexpected maybe close a little

Osu!:

- OD: 7.5 and AR: 9.2
- 00:18:046 (2,1,2,3) - This flow is too weird
- 00:26:200 (3) - End this slider in 00:26:354
- 01:54:354 (2,3,4) - this off-beat slider sound rare with the song maybe try to use on-beat slider (?)
- 02:26:200 (1) - this spiner is too weird for this difficulty (?) maybe map something here
- 02:43:738 (2,3,4,1,2) - Use the same distance snap to this pattern
- 02:49:892 (2) - Make this parallel with 02:49:584 (1)
- 02:52:354 (4,5) - this pattern seems to forced
- 03:00:661 (1,2) - Avoid the overlap separated a little

This difficult is too insane for me

▼decide your mod

:D

- You need a background with 1366x768. -
- 00:03:430 to 00:32:969, why you only map this part for only 2 difficulties, I think you need to map this in easy, normal
and hard, I think this part is very important in the song :c - seems to be better placed.

Easy:

- Some part have a diferent distance snap like this part 00:50:200 (1,2,1) - try to use the same distance snap in easy.
- 00:37:892 (1,2) - This part is a little weird to play, maybe you can try another pattern. Like this, add a circle here
00:37:892, add a slider here 00:38:507 and finish in 00:38:815 add another slider in 00:39:123 and end it in 00:39:738,
another in 00:40:354 and end in 00:40:969 - Fixed my mined
- 01:05:584 (2) - Move to X: 288 and Y: 300 - k
- 01:12:354 (1) - New Combo - k
- 01:13:584 (5) - Blanket with 01:12:354 (4)
- 01:13:584 (5,6,7,8,9) - use the same distance snap and maybe, try to create a star with this five notes (?) - k use distance snap and fixed
- 01:24:661 (1) - New Combo - k
- 01:33:277 (2) - Move this note to X: 144 and Y: 104 and stack this 01:34:507 (3) - with 01:32:046 (1) - and maybe you can
move this 01:35:738 (4) - to X: 449 and Y: 200. - Fixed
- 01:36:661 (5) - Eliminated this note, I think is not necessary but sound good, is your choice - i cant delete this
- 01:55:431 (3) - Maybe you can move this note to other part or make her form diferent for not overlap with 01:51:738 (1)c - little move it
- 02:03:431 (3) - Make this note parallel with the slider - done
- 02:04:046 (1) - Maybe blanket with 02:03:431 (3) - fixed
- 02:08:354 (2) - Move this note to X: 268 and Y: 328 (Try to avoid overlap with this notes) - fixed
- 02:10:815 (2) - Make the blanket better with 02:08:969 (1)
- 02:18:507 (3) - Why hide the principal tick in 02:18:815 - i thinks is correct
- 02:23:431 Add a circle here - add
- 02:23:738 (1) - New Combo - k
- 02:33:584 (3) - New Combo - k
- 02:36:046 (1) - Maybe blanket with 02:34:815 (4)
- 02:38:507 (1) - New Combo - k
- 02:44:046 (2,1) - Why this notes are to close (In the easy difficulty you have a lot of notes with diferent distance snap,
try to use the same for all) - use distance snap and change note
- 02:48:354 (1) - New Combo - k

=====================

Normal:

- 00:35:123 (5,1) - use the same distance snap and then try to stack this note 00:36:969 (2) with 00:35:123 (5) and 00:37:277 (3)
with 00:34:815 (4) for a symetrical pattern.
- 00:45:892 (6) - End the slider in 00:46:507 - done
- 00:51:738 (2,3,4,5) - If you try to create a symetrical figure, try to use the same distance snap - resnap
- 01:03:738 (3,4,5,1) - Distance snap - snap
- 01:06:507 (2) - Make the blanket with 01:07:431 (1) a little better - Ҭ
- 01:22:200 (1) - move to X: 92 and Y: 96, Ctrl + C, Ctrl + V in 01:22:815, Ctrl + H and then Ctrl + G - done
- 01:27:123 (1,2) - Make this symetrical -
- 01:29:584 (1) - New Combo - 0K
- 01:56:661 (1) - Eliminated the reverse arrow, add circle here 01:57:584 and a slider here 01:57:892 who end in 01:58:200
remember to eliminated this 01:58:200 (2) too - note on note
- 01:59:123 (1) - New Combo - 0K
- 02:00:354 (3) - Blanker with 02:00:661 (4)- done
- 02:18:885 (4) - New Combo - 0K
- 02:23:738 (1) - New Combo - 0K
- 02:31:123 (1,2,3,4) - Use the same distance snap - 0K

===========

Hard:

- 00:35:277 (7) - Why you hide the principal beat - is isnt hide
- 00:40:200 (1,3) - This rhythm sound good but if you don't hide the principal beat this pattern sound a little better, when
you play the song, you heard a little sound after the slider start, try to don't hide the principal beat - Fixed
- 00:42:815 (1) - Stack with 00:42:507 (4) - ok
- 00:45:277 (1) - Make a blanket with 00:44:354 (5) - Fixed
- 01:02:507 (1,3) - Avoid this overlap, try to move 01:04:046 (3) or make another form to this slider -
- 01:05:738 (4) - Why this slider is too far from 01:05:584 (3) - i move it
- 01:11:738 (8) - Blanket with 01:11:584 (7) - done
- 01:28:969 (3) - Make this blanket a little better - done
- 01:57:277 (3) - Blanket with 01:57:738 (4) - Ҭ
- 02:02:507 (3) - Add circle - is not good
- 02:05:123 (4) - Make the blanket a little better - Ҭ
- 02:05:738 (6) - don't hide this note and use the same distance snap for this 02:05:584 (5,6,1) (fixed )
- 02:36:507 (2,3) - Off-Beat slider sound a little weird, try to use on-beat slider or maybe add a circle here 02:36:507 (2)
and a slider in 02:36:661 (3) and end it in 02:36:969 - wow fiexd (is good )
- 02:46:354 (2) - Add circle- add
- 02:46:815 (4,5) - Eliminated and this end this slider 02:46:507 (3) - in 02:46:815 - Fixed my feel
- 02:51:584 (2) - this slider sound weird because is a off-beat slider without a reason, change this for another pattern - i thinks is good
- 03:05:046 (3) - Move to 03:04:969 - move
=======================

Insane:

- OD: 7
- 00:09:432 (5) - Make the blanket with 00:10:047 (7) a little better - Fixed
- 00:10:432 (9) - Move to X: 136 and Y: 184 - Fixed
- 00:15:662 (6) - Eliminated this circle sound a little weird - (nodelete) and fixed the slider
- 00:30:508 (1,2,3) - The flow with this notes is strange and you hide the circle under the slider, this reason makes the
pattern more weird to play - i move it
- 00:32:046 (1,1,2) - The same the flow is a little strange -
- 00:36:354 (4) - Stack with 00:35:431 (1) -
- 00:57:277 (5) - Stack with 00:57:584 (1) -

- 01:12:277 (5) - Move to X: 256 and Y: 336, if you try this pattern and try to avoid is to confused when a person play >.< - Fixed
- 01:19:738 (1,2,1,2,1) - this is intentional (?) I prefer all stacked in the end but is your choice -
- 01:48:354 (2) - Stack with 01:47:738 (4) -
- 02:01:277 (1) - Don't hide this note is too hard to read - FIXED
- 02:05:431 (1) - Eliminated and put a slider 02:05:277 who end in 02:05:584 and put a circle here 02:05:738 - OK
- 02:07:584 (5) - Blanket with 02:07:123 (3) and avoid the overlap -
- 02:30:815 (1) - New Combo for warning the player to the velocity change on slider
- 02:31:123 to 02:50:661 - Why no sound, when I play I lose the combo for this reason :c - Volume up to 60
- 02:56:815 (1,2) - This flow is too strange for me - Move note
- 03:00:354 (1,2) - this is too hard and unexpected maybe close a little - Fixed

=================

Osu!:

- OD: 7.5 and AR: 9.2
- 00:18:046 (2,1,2,3) - This flow is too weird - 2,3 Fixed // this part i think is good
- 00:26:200 (3) - End this slider in 00:26:354 - Fixed
- 01:54:354 (2,3,4) - this off-beat slider sound rare with the song maybe try to use on-beat slider (?) - litte fixed
- 02:26:200 (1) - this spiner is too weird for this difficulty (?) maybe map something here - I think is not weird
- 02:43:738 (2,3,4,1,2) - Use the same distance snap to this pattern - Fixed
- 02:49:892 (2) - Make this parallel with 02:49:584 (1) - Fixed
- 02:52:354 (4,5) - this pattern seems to forced - Fixed
- 03:00:661 (1,2) - Avoid the overlap separated a little - Fixed

Good Luck With Your Beatmap :3

UndeadCapulet wrote:

Hihi! M4M~

SPOILER

[General]

Combo color 1's approach circle is really hard to see, and 1, 2, and 3 are kinda hard to distinguish with the skin you're using.

You're hitsounds are really loud ;_; Typically hitsounds should be around 50%. 80% is pretty much the highest it should ever go, and that would only be for particularly powerful kiai.

Normals and Easys HAVE to have only one distance snap to be rankable. Yours are all over the place. .8x - 1x is typically what's used for Normals, and lower for Easy. I'll come back and mod them again once you've fixed them.
[osu!]

OD+.5?

This isn't that good of a diff name since it has nothing to do with the song and doesn't really express what difficulty the map is.

00:15:584 (4,5,6) This would look nicer if you curved the circles with the slider curve.
00:30:584 (3,4) Line them up with 2's curve.
01:13:123 (2,3) Ctrl+G so the horizontal momentum of the slider is projected into the next circle.
01:16:661 (1,2,3,4) Going from a short stream to a large jump to 2 smaller jumps is really strange. Bring 2 a little closer to 1.
01:17:277 I'd really like if you mapped this part. At the very least, put end the spinner at 01:20:969 and have a slider for 01:21:584's scream.
01:27:123 (1,2) Could use a better blanket.
01:41:200 is where the spinner should end to match the vocals.
01:56:200 (4,5,6) I hope you realize how mean this is
02:32:200 (1,2) Why the 1/4 gap o.O
02:36:046 Move it up a little to line it up better.
02:40:507 (1) I want this slider to end at 02:40:584 to match the vocals.

[Insane]

HP+1 so the gap between Insane and osu! isn't so large.

00:54:200 (2,3) Ctrl+G since the slider's pointing at 3 anyway.
00:55:046 Nudge to the right to make it look a little cleaner.
01:54:200 (1,2) I think this can be blanketed better?
02:15:892 Since things get a little cramped on the next 1,2 nudge this to the left to make it look and play better.

Not much to say about this one, nice work!

[Hard]

HP-.5

01:31:431 (3,4) Blanket, as it is now the next slider is really cramped.
01:41:200 End the spinner here.
02:33:431 (1,2,3) Overlap looks pretty awkward, move 2 and 3 to the left.
02:50:661 (3,4,1) Space the circles evenly with the slider.
03:01:738 (1,2) Blanket.
03:09:892 Why not just have this a straight line? (If you keep the curve, pls blanket better ;_;)

▼decide your mod

:D

General

Combo color 1's approach circle is really hard to see, and 1, 2, and 3 are kinda hard to distinguish with the skin you're using. - change


You're hitsounds are really loud ;_; Typically hitsounds should be around 50%. 80% is pretty much the highest it should ever go, and that would only be for particularly powerful kiai.-

Normals and Easys HAVE to have only one distance snap to be rankable. Yours are all over the place. .8x - 1x is typically what's used for Normals, and lower for Easy. I'll come back and mod them again once you've fixed them. - later i change it ,



osu!

OD+.5? -

This isn't that good of a diff name since it has nothing to do with the song and doesn't really express what difficulty the map is. - change diff name osu! -> Extreme

00:15:584 (4,5,6) This would look nicer if you curved the circles with the slider curve.- 4,5 is fixed but i cant 6
00:30:584 (3,4) Line them up with 2's curve. - little Fixed
01:13:123 (2,3) Ctrl+G so the horizontal momentum of the slider is projected into the next circle. - Fixed
01:16:661 (1,2,3,4) Going from a short stream to a large jump to 2 smaller jumps is really strange. Bring 2 a little closer to 1. - Intervals reducing
01:17:277 I'd really like if you mapped this part. At the very least, put end the spinner at 01:20:969 and have a slider for 01:21:584's scream. - Add 2 slider
01:27:123 (1,2) Could use a better blanket. -
01:41:200 is where the spinner should end to match the vocals. -
01:56:200 (4,5,6) I hope you realize how mean this is - !
02:32:200 (1,2) Why the 1/4 gap o.O - O.o Fixed
02:36:046 Move it up a little to line it up better. - Fixed
02:40:507 (1) I want this slider to end at 02:40:584 to match the vocals. - fixed


Insane

HP+1 so the gap between Insane and osu! isn't so large. - HP↑

00:54:200 (2,3) Ctrl+G since the slider's pointing at 3 anyway. - ok
00:55:046 Nudge to the right to make it look a little cleaner. -_- ok
01:54:200 (1,2) I think this can be blanketed better? - ehhh...o..k..
02:15:892 Since things get a little cramped on the next 1,2 nudge this to the left to make it look and play better. - Fixed

Not much to say about this one, nice work!


Hard

HP-.5 -> 5.5

01:31:431 (3,4) Blanket, as it is now the next slider is really cramped. - slider take ctrl+> 1 Time and little move and Cramped
01:41:200 End the spinner here. -
02:33:431 (1,2,3) Overlap looks pretty awkward, move 2 and 3 to the left. - Move it
02:50:661 (3,4,1) Space the circles evenly with the slider. - Fixed
03:01:738 (1,2) Blanket. - Ok
03:09:892 Why not just have this a straight line? (If you keep the curve, pls blanket better ;_;) - straight slider is View a bad

Good luck on getting ranked! I love Akiakane's version of this song~!

1. I'm not 100% sure, but I think all difficulties need to start at the same time for the mapset to be rankable, your two highest difficulties start earlier :c
2. Some of the slider velocities are pretty unbalanced, Normal diff to hard is 1.2 to 1.6
3. Also the diff spread from hard to insane is pretty high, insane is 1.7 stars higher owo

1. 00:35:431 (7) - Fix the blanket with 00:36:200 (9)
2. 00:40:200 (7) - Fix blanket with 00:40:354 (1)
3. 00:44:354 (5,1) - Spacing is too close here
4. 00:50:200 (1,2) - Could blanket these
5. 01:54:969 (3,4) - ^
6. 02:53:892 (3,4) - Weird spacing

• 
  OD 8 on this song should be perfectly fine

1. 00:54:200 (2,3,4) - Spacing is weird here
2. 01:06:200 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - There isn't anything in the music to increase the spacing between each pair here, it's really just forced to make the map harder, keep it fairly consistent like you did in 02:15:123 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2)
3. 01:15:584 (5) - Jump is wayyy too far here, bring it closer to 01:15:738 (6), compared to 01:15:123 (2,3,4) there isn't quite enough emphasis on 01:15:584 (5,6) to make it that long
4. 01:28:969 (3,4,5) - Spacing here is also too long, you seem to be following the instruments in this part and there's nothing special about the notes played here
   
   Try this

   
5. 02:07:431 (4,5) - Fix blanket
6. 02:09:431 (2) - ^
7. 02:42:969 (4) -
   Imperfect Blanket ._.

   
8. 02:47:584 (2) - Bump this up a bit so it forms a perfect triangle with the heads of 02:47:738 (3,4)
9. 03:10:046 (2) - Why not put it right in the center of the pattern?

Ringating wrote:

from my queue:

although you requested just a bg fix, I did a bit more :p Your mp3 was pretty low quality so I got you a new one (from here).
Here is the new mp3.

Also, since this is from a music video pv thing, it makes sense for the video to be put on the beatmap, so I got that for you as well (from here).
Here is the .avi.

and finally, here's the bg

cropped to 16:9 and resized to 768p from this

sukiNathan wrote:

Hi from modding queue~

[General]

1. I'm not 100% sure, but I think all difficulties need to start at the same time for the mapset to be rankable, your two highest difficulties start earlier :c
2. Some of the slider velocities are pretty unbalanced, Normal diff to hard is 1.2 to 1.6 -
3. Also the diff spread from hard to insane is pretty high, insane is 1.7 stars higher owo

[Hard]

1. 00:35:431 (7) - Fix the blanket with 00:36:200 (9) - Fixed
2. 00:40:200 (7) - Fix blanket with 00:40:354 (1) - Fixed
3. 00:44:354 (5,1) - Spacing is too close here - ah.. Fixed
4. 00:50:200 (1,2) - Could blanket these -
5. 01:54:969 (3,4) - ^ - Fixed
6. 02:53:892 (3,4) - Weird spacing - Fixed

[Insane]

• 
  OD 8 on this song should be perfectly fine - ok

1. 00:54:200 (2,3,4) - Spacing is weird here - Fixed
2. 01:06:200 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - There isn't anything in the music to increase the spacing between each pair here, it's really just forced to make the map harder, keep it fairly consistent like you did in 02:15:123 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - Fixed
3. 01:15:584 (5) - Jump is wayyy too far here, bring it closer to 01:15:738 (6), compared to 01:15:123 (2,3,4) there isn't quite enough emphasis on 01:15:584 (5,6) to make it that long - http://puu.sh/fjNDB/965acec5df.jpg
4. 01:28:969 (3,4,5) - Spacing here is also too long, you seem to be following the instruments in this part and there's nothing special about the notes played here - Fixed
   
   Try this

   
5. 02:07:431 (4,5) - Fix blanket -
6. 02:09:431 (2) - ^ - Fixed
7. 02:42:969 (4) - Fixed
   
   Imperfect Blanket ._.

   
8. 02:47:584 (2) - Bump this up a bit so it forms a perfect triangle with the heads of 02:47:738 (3,4) - Fixed
9. 03:10:046 (2) - Why not put it right in the center of the pattern?

- Done

Might just be me, but I think the map could use some improvement visually, there are a lot of random overlaps and imperfect blankets

Find give thanks that I have not blanket properly ! , Thanks alot !!!

Z e r s s wrote:

Hi!

In your easy diff., in 02:03:070, there's this:


I think it's better to seperate these three objects a bit and make them looks like that:


And, in the skin, you have forgotten to replace the hit300k.png

I haven't time to continue, I'll make another post if I see something ^^

I'm sorry, I don't speak English very well :/

pishifat wrote:

19:43 - pishizor.: also mention
19:43 - pishizor.: extreme shoudl have higher od than insane -.-

Ringating wrote:

I strongly suggest you use the mp3 from my post, it sounds noticeably better (easy to tell @ 1:03 when the vocals kick in, the drums over the vocals start to sound kinda gross)

if your audio setup is less than ideal you may not hear the difference, but the new mp3 is definitely an improvement. (offset 3355)

pishifat wrote:

19:43 - pishizor.: also mention
19:43 - pishizor.: extreme shoudl have higher od than insane -.-

still no kds

1. AWESOME SONGGGGG

1. 00:08:586 (1,1) - Try to allign these a little bit better
2. 00:09:202 (3) - Unsure about this note...kinda caught me off guard a few times.
3. 00:15:201 (1,2,3) - The spacing between these isn't the same as: 00:15:508 (4,5,1) - ... maybe fix?
4. 00:18:739 (3,4,5) - Change the spacing between 4 and 5 because they're too far apart for how fast they come. (make them closer)
5. 00:20:585 (1) - Move a little bit to the right, seems a bit too far away from the previous note.
6. 00:26:124 (3,4) - Way too close, I suggest spreading these out.
7. 00:27:970 (6) - Too close to the previous note (look around for anymore of these if you see any and fix)
8. 00:31:047 (4) - Move closer to (5)
9. 00:46:739 (1) - Move a bit farther from the previous note
10. 00:47:662 (3,4) - Unsure about these
11. 01:52:893 (4,5,1,2,3) - These are weird to play and look at, suggest change.
12. 01:53:816 (5) - Try not to overlap like this
13. 02:02:893 (3) - Another overlap
14. 02:13:201 (1) - Too close to (7)
15. 02:16:508 (2) - This is a really weird pattern, rhythm, and note placement. Consider rethinking this note.
16. 02:32:124 (1,2) - Idk about these notes either...
17. 02:59:047 (7) - Overlaps the second (1) combo afterwards
18. 02:59:970 (1) - I think this velocity is really fast
19. 03:09:816 (1) - I don't like this ending slider velocity either ^^

1. 00:04:894 (6) - Overlaps, fix.
2. 00:05:356 (8,9,10,11,12,1) - Inconsistent spacing. The first triplet is spaced differently than the second...idk if this should happen.
3. 00:07:971 (8) - Place directly on top of the (2) afterwards
4. 00:11:509 (2) - Try to not overlap sliders like this
5. 00:15:970 (2) - ^
6. 00:24:585 (2) - ^
7. 00:41:355 (1) - This overlap is obvious lol
8. 00:54:432 (4,5,6,7) - Place the (4) separately from the (5,6,7)...because your rhythm suggests other than this.
9. 01:04:893 (1) - More overlaps
10. 01:16:893 (4) - More overlaps...I won't say it anymore just find more of them that you think don't belong and fix
11. 01:35:970 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is weird
12. 01:41:201 (1,2) - These last notes are weird with spacing and such.
13. 01:54:585 (2) - Move farther from previous note
14. 02:11:201 (5) - Move farther from the note after it (maybe a little to the right?)
15. 02:15:662 (1,2,1,2) - This part throws the player off from the rest of this pattern. Select the last (1,2) and CTRL+G it, that would make more sense.
16. 02:22:124 (4) - Move farther from the note after

1. You don't really have to increase the CS in hard. I normally like when mappers keep it the same as insane+ (when it's a reasonable CS). It's your map though, do what you will
2. 00:39:355 (6,7,1) - This was all placed strangely
3. 00:48:585 (3,4) - This rhythm feels off
4. 01:02:431 (1) - Overlaps (3)
5. 01:03:970 (3,1,2) - These notes are way too close for this rhythm, consider spreading them out.
6. 01:28:585 (2) - Overlaps (3)
7. 01:53:662 (2,3) - More weird spacings ^^
8. 01:54:893 (3) - Overlaps (4)
9. 02:09:508 (3) - This is WAY too close to the previous note for that rhythm
10. 03:09:816 (1) - Maybe change this to two notes instead of a slider?

1. 00:49:508 (4) - I do not suggest this to be directly under the note previously
2. 01:22:124 (1,1) - For this you can do something like: http://prntscr.com/6157gu
3. 02:22:431 (3) - This note is all crooked and stuff xD

reyder wrote:

M4M~

hah

[General]

1. AWESOME SONGGGGG

[Extreme]

1. 00:08:586 (1,1) - Try to allign these a little bit better
2. 00:09:202 (3) - Unsure about this note...kinda caught me off guard a few times.
3. 00:15:201 (1,2,3) - The spacing between these isn't the same as: 00:15:508 (4,5,1) - ... maybe fix?
4. 00:18:739 (3,4,5) - Change the spacing between 4 and 5 because they're too far apart for how fast they come. (make them closer)
5. 00:20:585 (1) - Move a little bit to the right, seems a bit too far away from the previous note.
6. 00:26:124 (3,4) - Way too close, I suggest spreading these out.
7. 00:27:970 (6) - Too close to the previous note (look around for anymore of these if you see any and fix)
8. 00:31:047 (4) - Move closer to (5)
9. 00:46:739 (1) - Move a bit farther from the previous note
10. 00:47:662 (3,4) - Unsure about these
11. 01:52:893 (4,5,1,2,3) - These are weird to play and look at, suggest change.
12. 01:53:816 (5) - Try not to overlap like this
13. 02:02:893 (3) - Another overlap
14. 02:13:201 (1) - Too close to (7)
15. 02:16:508 (2) - This is a really weird pattern, rhythm, and note placement. Consider rethinking this note.
16. 02:32:124 (1,2) - Idk about these notes either...
17. 02:59:047 (7) - Overlaps the second (1) combo afterwards
18. 02:59:970 (1) - I think this velocity is really fast
19. 03:09:816 (1) - I don't like this ending slider velocity either ^^

Overall really nice and interesting difficulty. The difficulty of the map increases as it goes and eventually gets really difficult which is always fun and I like it! Keep mapping

[Insane]

1. 00:04:894 (6) - Overlaps, fix.
2. 00:05:356 (8,9,10,11,12,1) - Inconsistent spacing. The first triplet is spaced differently than the second...idk if this should happen.
3. 00:07:971 (8) - Place directly on top of the (2) afterwards
4. 00:11:509 (2) - Try to not overlap sliders like this
5. 00:15:970 (2) - ^
6. 00:24:585 (2) - ^
7. 00:41:355 (1) - This overlap is obvious lol
8. 00:54:432 (4,5,6,7) - Place the (4) separately from the (5,6,7)...because your rhythm suggests other than this.
9. 01:04:893 (1) - More overlaps
10. 01:16:893 (4) - More overlaps...I won't say it anymore just find more of them that you think don't belong and fix
11. 01:35:970 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is weird
12. 01:41:201 (1,2) - These last notes are weird with spacing and such.
13. 01:54:585 (2) - Move farther from previous note
14. 02:11:201 (5) - Move farther from the note after it (maybe a little to the right?)
15. 02:15:662 (1,2,1,2) - This part throws the player off from the rest of this pattern. Select the last (1,2) and CTRL+G it, that would make more sense.
16. 02:22:124 (4) - Move farther from the note after

Another really cool difficulty. It actually builds up to the difficulty after (extreme)...great map and potential for a ranking.

[Hard]

One thing I noticed, a lot of inconsistency between notes and rhythm!

1. You don't really have to increase the CS in hard. I normally like when mappers keep it the same as insane+ (when it's a reasonable CS). It's your map though, do what you will
2. 00:39:355 (6,7,1) - This was all placed strangely
3. 00:48:585 (3,4) - This rhythm feels off
4. 01:02:431 (1) - Overlaps (3)
5. 01:03:970 (3,1,2) - These notes are way too close for this rhythm, consider spreading them out.
6. 01:28:585 (2) - Overlaps (3)
7. 01:53:662 (2,3) - More weird spacings ^^
8. 01:54:893 (3) - Overlaps (4)
9. 02:09:508 (3) - This is WAY too close to the previous note for that rhythm
10. 03:09:816 (1) - Maybe change this to two notes instead of a slider?

Fairly decent difficulty but the consistency with the rhythm was weird.

[Normal]

1. 00:49:508 (4) - I do not suggest this to be directly under the note previously
2. 01:22:124 (1,1) - For this you can do something like: http://prntscr.com/6157gu
3. 02:22:431 (3) - This note is all crooked and stuff xD

Not much to look at from here on out...it's a pretty polished difficulty. Maybe a bit of errors you can work out that I didn't see but for the most part it's looking pretty good.

[Easy]

I'm really bad with easy so I saw nothing that you could fix up but that's just me

GOOD LUCK WITH THE MAP!!!! And thanks for your mod on my m4m queue.

decide your mod

[General]

1. AWESOME SONGGGGG - Thanks !!

[Extreme]

1. 00:08:586 (1,1) - Try to allign these a little bit better -
2. 00:09:202 (3) - Unsure about this note...kinda caught me off guard a few times.-
3. 00:15:201 (1,2,3) - The spacing between these isn't the same as: 00:15:508 (4,5,1) - ... maybe fix? - Fixed it
4. 00:18:739 (3,4,5) - Change the spacing between 4 and 5 because they're too far apart for how fast they come. (make them closer) - Fixed (X0.98)
5. 00:20:585 (1) - Move a little bit to the right, seems a bit too far away from the previous note. - Fixed
6. 00:26:124 (3,4) - Way too close, I suggest spreading these out. - Fixed
7. 00:27:970 (6) - Too close to the previous note (look around for anymore of these if you see any and fix) -Fixed
8. 00:31:047 (4) - Move closer to (5) -
9. 00:46:739 (1) - Move a bit farther from the previous note - move it
10. 00:47:662 (3,4) - Unsure about these - Fixed it
11. 01:52:893 (4,5,1,2,3) - These are weird to play and look at, suggest change. - hold it
12. 01:53:816 (5) - Try not to overlap like this - Fixed
13. 02:02:893 (3) - Another overlap - http://puu.sh/fxssT/cf45e7291c.jpg
14. 02:13:201 (1) - Too close to (7) - Fixed
15. 02:16:508 (2) - This is a really weird pattern, rhythm, and note placement. Consider rethinking this note. - Fixed
16. 02:32:124 (1,2) - Idk about these notes either... - Fixed !!!
17. 02:59:047 (7) - Overlaps the second (1) combo afterwards -
18. 02:59:970 (1) - I think this velocity is really fast -
19. 03:09:816 (1) - I don't like this ending slider velocity either ^^ -

Overall really nice and interesting difficulty. The difficulty of the map increases as it goes and eventually gets really difficult which is always fun and I like it! Keep mapping


[Insane]

1. 00:04:894 (6) - Overlaps, fix. - Fixed
2. 00:05:356 (8,9,10,11,12,1) - Inconsistent spacing. The first triplet is spaced differently than the second...idk if this should happen. - > http://puu.sh/fxgLD/90de15fb6d.jpg
3. 00:07:971 (8) - Place directly on top of the (2) afterwards - Fixed
4. 00:11:509 (2) - Try to not overlap sliders like this -
5. 00:15:970 (2) - ^ - Fixed
6. 00:24:585 (2) - ^ -
7. 00:41:355 (1) - This overlap is obvious lol -
8. 00:54:432 (4,5,6,7) - Place the (4) separately from the (5,6,7)...because your rhythm suggests other than this. - http://puu.sh/fxj2r/8cc932f4e5.jpg
9. 01:04:893 (1) - More overlaps -
10. 01:16:893 (4) - More overlaps...I won't say it anymore just find more of them that you think don't belong and fix - >
11. 01:35:970 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - This pattern is weird - http://puu.sh/fxeD3/9a819fce9d.jpg
12. 01:41:201 (1,2) - These last notes are weird with spacing and such.-
13. 01:54:585 (2) - Move farther from previous note - Move note
14. 02:11:201 (5) - Move farther from the note after it (maybe a little to the right?) - Move note
15. 02:15:662 (1,2,1,2) - This part throws the player off from the rest of this pattern. Select the last (1,2) and CTRL+G it, that would make more sense. - fixed
16. 02:22:124 (4) - Move farther from the note after -> http://puu.sh/fxcXd/bdc34a6c06.jpg

Another really cool difficulty. It actually builds up to the difficulty after (extreme)...great map and potential for a ranking.


[Hard]

One thing I noticed, a lot of inconsistency between notes and rhythm!

1. You don't really have to increase the CS in hard. I normally like when mappers keep it the same as insane+ (when it's a reasonable CS). It's your map though, do what you will
2. 00:39:355 (6,7,1) - This was all placed strangely - ah... is good
3. 00:48:585 (3,4) - This rhythm feels off - i
4. 01:02:431 (1) - Overlaps (3) =
5. 01:03:970 (3,1,2) - These notes are way too close for this rhythm, consider spreading them out. -
6. 01:28:585 (2) - Overlaps (3) - Fixed
7. 01:53:662 (2,3) - More weird spacings ^^ - F..i..xed ?
8. 01:54:893 (3) - Overlaps (4) - Fixed
9. 02:09:508 (3) - This is WAY too close to the previous note for that rhythm - ....
10. 03:09:816 (1) - Maybe change this to two notes instead of a slider? - slider is good

Fairly decent difficulty but the consistency with the rhythm was weird.


[Normal]

1. 00:49:508 (4) - I do not suggest this to be directly under the note previously -
2. 01:22:124 (1,1) - For this you can do something like: http://prntscr.com/6157gu - Fixed
3. 02:22:431 (3) - This note is all crooked and stuff xD - Fixed to Straight slider

Not much to look at from here on out...it's a pretty polished difficulty. Maybe a bit of errors you can work out that I didn't see but for the most part it's looking pretty good.


[Easy]

I'm really bad with easy so I saw nothing that you could fix up but that's just me


GOOD LUCK WITH THE MAP!!!! And thanks for your mod on my m4m queue.

kamikin wrote:

Hi hi! From my queue!

General

You could make the slider border black, if you want it to be black I can tell you how (I dont wanna watse space if you dont )
- - how can mack it ? please tell me !!

Easy

00:42:739 (1) - For a better looking pattern use a copied version of 00:41:508 (5) - which is flipped -
00:46:431 (5) - This sounds strange with a repeat, make it a long slider -
01:06:124 (3) - ^ -
01:17:201 (1,2) - Imo I think 1 should blanket 2 (use 2's approach circle) to make it look better and flow better http://puu.sh/fBS9x/62fbff1a70.jpg - fixed
01:19:662 (1) - In an Easy you should have 4 white ticks for 'recovery time' otherwise the player will combo break, end the spinner at 01:20:893
01:22:124 (1,1) - NC kind of fits the the music but having no new combos fits it even better - Remove new comebo note (2)
01:36:893 (1) - Same thing with recovery time, end it at 01:40:431 or the big white tick after -
01:51:662 (1,3) - Unnecessary overlap -
02:01:508 (1,2,3) - Overlaps and weird pattern, try http://puu.sh/fBTAP/dd834fb64b.jpg - thanks but..
02:03:970 (1) - No NC - k
02:11:355 (5) - NC - k
02:26:124 (1) - Recovery time, end at 02:29:816 - k
02:33:508 (1) - No NC - k
02:44:585 (1,2) - Swap NC - k
02:45:816 (2) - No repeat, longer slider -
02:54:431 (2,2) - Overlap -

Normal

00:37:201 (3) - Make 3 blanket 1 - done
00:37:201 (3,2) - Weird overlap -
00:39:047 (3,1) - Overlap -
00:51:662 (2,3,4,5) - Not a perfect square - Fixed square
01:22:124 (1) - No NC - k
01:30:739 (3,1) - Overlap -
02:02:585 (2,4) - Overlap - Fixed
02:06:431 (1,1) - ^ -
02:26:124 (1) - A normal needs 2 white ticks of 'recovery time' , end this at 02:30:431 - thanks
02:31:047 (1) - use this to blanket 2 -
02:33:508 (1,3) - Overlap -
02:40:278 (4) - Repeat sounds weird, imo it should be a longer slider without a repeat - no log slider_ short slider+whistel sound - no repeat - thanks !
02:54:431 (1) - No NC - k

Hard

00:35:355 (7,9) - Overlaps - fixed
00:38:431 (3,6) - ^ -
00:40:124 (7) - Move this into 6's path (where the cursor is moving naturally after the slider) for better flow - move it ..
01:02:431 (1,3) - Overlap - done
01:09:201 (1,2) - Swap NC - k
01:25:662 (1) - No NC - k
01:30:585 (1) - No NC - k
01:52:893 (1) - No NC - k
02:00:124 (5,7) - Overlap -
02:09:508 (3) - Why anti-jump? - little move up note(3) and fixed the slider Curve
02:37:047 (4) - ^ -
02:41:201 (2,1) - Overlap - done
03:05:508 (1,2,1,1,1,1,2,1) - the NCs here are really crazy and weird - fixed

I hope I was helpful!

1. 00:32:893 (1) - 시작부분 피니쉬?
2. 00:37:816 (1) - 끝부분 클랩은 필요없을것 같아요. 별로 어울리지도 않고..
3. 00:47:355 (6,1) - 이지나 노멀은 반드시 디스턴스를 지켜주셔야 합니다. 이건 디스턴스가 어긋났네요. 고쳐주세요
4. 00:49:431 (2,3) - 이건 대체 어떤 리듬에 맞추신 건지 모르겠네요. 리듬 정확히 맞춰주세요
5. 01:19:662 (1) - 이 스피너 너무 짧고 뒤에 노트도 보여서 좀 불안하네요. 그냥 박자 짜맞추시는거 추천드립니다.

HabiHolic wrote:

your request

[General]

[Easy]

1. 00:32:893 (1) - 시작부분 피니쉬?
2. 00:37:816 (1) - 끝부분 클랩은 필요없을것 같아요. 별로 어울리지도 않고..
3. 00:47:355 (6,1) - 이지나 노멀은 반드시 디스턴스를 지켜주셔야 합니다. 이건 디스턴스가 어긋났네요. 고쳐주세요
4. 00:49:431 (2,3) - 이건 대체 어떤 리듬에 맞추신 건지 모르겠네요. 리듬 정확히 맞춰주세요
5. 01:19:662 (1) - 이 스피너 너무 짧고 뒤에 노트도 보여서 좀 불안하네요. 그냥 박자 짜맞추시는거 추천드립니다.
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