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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on sábado, 31 de enero de 2015 at 04:54:32 a.m.

Artist: Noam
Title: A WORLD WITHOUT DANGER
Source: CODE LYOKO
Tags: Cartoon Network Subdigitals Debra Reynolds Franck Keller Moonscope Antefilms Opening (Main Title) Hebrew נועם קניאל Kaniel Un Monde Sans Danger Julien Lamassonne French Codigo Mundo Sin Peligro Spanish Aelita Schaeffer Jeremie Belpois Odd Della Robbia Yumi Ishiyama 石山 ゆみ Ulrich Stern William Dunbar William-XANA XANA TV Size
BPM: 126.94
Filesize: 21155kb
Play Time: 00:57
Difficulties Available:
  • Digital (2.72 stars, 148 notes)
  • Easy (1.32 stars, 42 notes)
  • Hard (2.26 stars, 97 notes)
  • Normal (1.94 stars, 78 notes)

Download: Noam - A WORLD WITHOUT DANGER
Download: Noam - A WORLD WITHOUT DANGER (no video)
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Happy New Year!


Special thanks to BeatofIke for giving me the timing and to Vicho for making a new mp3 with a better quality.





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Last edited by Gero on , edited 15 times in total.
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First and star \o3o/
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Hey Gero, Mod requested from pm in-game owo/ First mod ftw, Gero stop being so lazy ww


General:
  • you should totally remove the widescreen support, since you didn't really use it on your map o3o/
  • the stack leniency kinda low on all diffs, i think you should fix that
  • How about adding some audio lead in, i think 1200, would be good enough :3


Easy:
  • 00:07:979 (1) - I think finish would fit much better then a whistle here, since i can hear a strong sound in the music. So i think it might fit here (if you did that don't forget to lower the volume for it too)
  • 00:13:651 (1) - ^
  • 00:17:432 (3) - you should move this slider few grids down, it's kinda too close to score points. So it's kinda far away right now ></
  • 00:19:323 (1) - I think finish would fit great here, since there is a strong sound in the music (and again lower the volume for it too o3o/)
  • 00:24:995 (2) - the blanket between this slider and this slider 00:23:104 (1) - kinda looking weird, how about doing something like this instead :3
    Image
  • 00:26:886 (1) - the whistle on slider's body kinda sounds weird with the music imo, how about removing it ></
  • 00:34:436 (1) - I think this note will flow more naturally if you moved this note up not done, like this i mean o.o
    Image
  • 00:38:217 (1) - how about replacing this whistle with a finish instead? since i can hear it clearly imo
  • 00:51:452 (4) - same as i said about this on here 00:17:432 (3) -



Normal:
  • 00:07:979 (1) - how about adding a finish here on slider's start, there is a strong beat in the music. so i think it'll fit (and ofc if you did that don't forget to lower the volume for it)
  • 00:09:633 (4) - I can't really hear anything in music on this note, i think you should move this note to here instead 00:09:161 - . Since i can hear the sound there not where you placed it imo
  • 00:11:288 (3) - ^
    00:12:706 (2,3) - these two sliders kinda gives weird flow and looks weird too, how about doing something like this instead to fix it up :3
    Image
  • 00:14:596 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - too much copy and paste here, how about making something like note+1/2 slider, like you did on the other part of the music. I think it'll look more natural, this this c/p =3=/
  • 00:37:035 (2) - I think the blanket between this slider and this one 00:36:326 (1) - , would look much better if you move the final slider's point of this slider 00:37:035 (2) - to x:8 y:92, the blanket would look much nicer then :3




Hard:
The bpm of the song kinda low and i don't think it fit with ar8, so how about lowering it down to 7.5. It'll play much better then o.o
  • 00:11:524 (4) - I think if you moved this note to x:160 y:120, it'll make a better blanket with this slider 00:11:760 (1) -
  • 00:13:651 (1) - the whistle on the slider's body kinda sounds weird here, so how about removing it o.o
  • 00:16:960 (1) - this is the only jump you did on the whole map, I really suggest you to do the spacing like you did on the whole diff, since it's looking kinda weird right. Since it's the only jump you did on the whole diff, that's why i highly suggest you to fix this one =3=
  • 00:27:831 (3) - I think you missed a whistle on slider's head, i think you should add it
  • 00:39:281 (5) - I don't really hear anything on this note, i really think it's just overmapped, how about removing it ></
  • 00:44:598 (4) - I think this slider would make better blanket with this slider 00:43:889 (3) - , if you moved this last slider's point 00:44:598 (4) - few grids down, it'll much nicer then :3



That's all i found from this short song =w=/ good map as always Gero <3

Good luck getting it ranked baka ww
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as requested~


General

  • Since map starting kinda fast I'd suggest you add some audio lead-in via .osu files to give players a bit more time to prepare for playing.
  • You may delete OP from tags, as website search wouldn't work with less than 2 characters anyway, and it wouldn't work nicely in-game. You can also remove brackets as they doesn't affect anything anyway
  • Tag un is doubled, remove one please
  • If you'll look at your hitsounds carefully you may notice that soft-hitnormal.wav and soft-hitfinish.wav have weird peak of volume, which makes them sounds kinda strange while playing. I'd suggest you replace them - don't worry, there's fixed version here, just download & replace!
  • Your custom slidertick sound have more than 5ms delay, and it's almost inaudible compare to the very loud BGM volume... I can fix it for you if you want, but I'm not sure if you really wants to use it - imo, default slidertick sound works here quite nice already.


Hard

*As Sekai mentiored at her post, AR8 feels quite fast and doesn't works well with your choosen patterns. AR around 7-7.5 should work quite nicely here, try it!

I don't really see anything wrong with it - onliest my suggestion here would be add more finishes during kiai (every big white tick for example), as for now only clap + whistle sounds kinda boring. Note that same can be applied in all diffs.

Great & clean diff!


Normal

*Same concerns about AR - AR 5 feels kinda fast and doesn't work nice with your patterns here. Try AR4 - it should work much better here!
*Your DS choice at the beginning feels quite clamped, and it looks even more strange considering that your DS goes higher near the end of map while music stays same at this point. Any reasons for this? Personally, I'd prefer to see x1.10 DS at the whole diff as it looks way more clean with your symmetrial patterns.

  • 00:19:323 (1,2) - After triple of 1/2 notes and 1/1 slider these two 3/2 repeat sliders sounds very strange - they doesn't really works nice with vocals, and they breaks your clap-pattern here. I'd suggest you sinple continue using 1/1 sliders same as you did before:

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  • 00:31:127 (2,3,1) - I can't say that it goes very well with music, maybe try something like this instead? Note that same goes for 00:39:162 (3,4,5,1) - as well

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Easy

  • 00:04:198 (1) - you may remove whistle from tail here to made a better accent at the incoming note
  • 00:21:214 (2,3) - Considering your previous rhythm, 3/2 repeat-slider would sounds here a lot better rather than two 1/1 sliders
  • 00:26:886 (1) - Remove whistle from sliderbody? It doesn't sounds quite nice hare
  • 00:45:780 (1) - finish instead of whistle on head

Well, short & nice map. Good luck more Gero! >w</
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General



  • Metadata - Seems good owo
  • Audio Lead-In - add some audio lead in to the diffs since they start at 417 add like 1583 to make the lead in 2000
  • Video - All good~
  • Background - Good its the proper size owo

  • Hitsound files - Look at Kodora's post lol xD
  • Lyrics - Lyrics are good no 18+ content obviously xD owo
  • Tags - Maybe add Cartoon Network into the tags this was aired on there remove OP from tags search doesn't search anything with less than 3 characters Remove XANA from tags since you already have it in it will already be searched


Easy


  • 00:11:760 (3) - There should be a NC here keep your consistency of every 2/1 Remove the NC here 00:13:651 (1) - 1 NCs are just confusing
  • 00:23:104 (1,2) - Wanna adjust this a teeny weeny bit so that it doesn't make that little overlap it doesn't look so nice ;w;
  • 00:26:886 (1) - Remove the whistle from the body it sounds kinda weird

    That's it for easy
    my childhood I love you ;w;



Normal


    I agree with Kodora about the DS
  • 00:00:417 (1,2,3) - This patterns flow is a bit choppy since you made the sliders end flow away from the next notes placement causing a bit of rough gameplay I think this pattern works a lot better since the flow is much more smooth
    Image
  • 00:09:397 (3,4) - Its kinda a suggestion to not stack too many ontop of notes in the easier diffs since they confuse the noobs
  • 00:11:288 (3) - Gero this looks like a failed blanket xD pls fix that overlap ;w;
    ;n;
    Image
  • 00:12:706 (2) - Tecnically this is on the wrong snap it should be here 00:12:785 - in 1/6 divisor if you go into 25% you will hear that it is actually hitting the 1/6 note but you can get away with this because there is a noise here 00:12:706 - but at the end here 00:12:942 - there is nothing the noise at the end is right here 00:13:021 - again 1/6 and since it is 1/6 it shouldn't be used in normal that consists of many 1/2 and 1/1 here this rhythm hits notes and is still nooby friendly
    Image
  • 00:14:596 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Im not entirely sure if you should use this much 1/2 notes relentlessly its a bit tough for a nooby to hit
  • 00:26:649 (2,1,2) - I know you can reposition this pattern a bit to make it clumped together
  • 00:39:162 (3,4,5) - Its kinda a suggestion to not stack too many ontop of notes in the easier diffs since they confuse the noobs
  • 00:42:471 (3) - You forgot an NC here

    That's all owo

Hard


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Hey Gero, Mod requested from pm in-game owo/ First mod ftw, Gero stop being so lazy ww


General:
  • you should totally remove the widescreen support, since you didn't really use it on your map o3o/ Fixed
  • the stack leniency kinda low on all diffs, i think you should fix that Fixed
  • How about adding some audio lead in, i think 1200, would be good enough :3 Fixed


Easy:
  • 00:07:979 (1) - I think finish would fit much better then a whistle here, since i can hear a strong sound in the music. So i think it might fit here (if you did that don't forget to lower the volume for it too) Fixed
  • 00:13:651 (1) - ^ Fixed
  • 00:17:432 (3) - you should move this slider few grids down, it's kinda too close to score points. So it's kinda far away right now ></ I don't think so
  • 00:19:323 (1) - I think finish would fit great here, since there is a strong sound in the music (and again lower the volume for it too o3o/) Fixed
  • 00:24:995 (2) - the blanket between this slider and this slider 00:23:104 (1) - kinda looking weird, how about doing something like this instead :3
  • 00:26:886 (1) - the whistle on slider's body kinda sounds weird with the music imo, how about removing it ></ Fixed
  • 00:34:436 (1) - I think this note will flow more naturally if you moved this note up not done, like this i mean o.o Fixed
  • 00:38:217 (1) - how about replacing this whistle with a finish instead? since i can hear it clearly imo Fixed
  • 00:51:452 (4) - same as i said about this on here 00:17:432 (3) - Isn't touching the hp/numbers at all



Normal:
  • 00:07:979 (1) - how about adding a finish here on slider's start, there is a strong beat in the music. so i think it'll fit (and ofc if you did that don't forget to lower the volume for it) Fixed
  • 00:09:633 (4) - I can't really hear anything in music on this note, i think you should move this note to here instead 00:09:161 - . Since i can hear the sound there not where you placed it imo If you should listen carefully
  • 00:11:288 (3) - ^ ^
    00:12:706 (2,3) - these two sliders kinda gives weird flow and looks weird too, how about doing something like this instead to fix it up :3 I've made something different instead
  • 00:14:596 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - too much copy and paste here, how about making something like note+1/2 slider, like you did on the other part of the music. I think it'll look more natural, this this c/p =3=/ Fixed
  • 00:37:035 (2) - I think the blanket between this slider and this one 00:36:326 (1) - , would look much better if you move the final slider's point of this slider 00:37:035 (2) - to x:8 y:92, the blanket would look much nicer then :3 Fixed




Hard:
The bpm of the song kinda low and i don't think it fit with ar8, so how about lowering it down to 7.5. It'll play much better then o.o Fixed
  • 00:11:524 (4) - I think if you moved this note to x:160 y:120, it'll make a better blanket with this slider 00:11:760 (1) - Nah.. I think is fine as it is
  • 00:13:651 (1) - the whistle on the slider's body kinda sounds weird here, so how about removing it o.o It fits with the instrumental imo
  • 00:16:960 (1) - this is the only jump you did on the whole map, I really suggest you to do the spacing like you did on the whole diff, since it's looking kinda weird right. Since it's the only jump you did on the whole diff, that's why i highly suggest you to fix this one =3= It's fine for me
  • 00:27:831 (3) - I think you missed a whistle on slider's head, i think you should add it Fixed
  • 00:39:281 (5) - I don't really hear anything on this note, i really think it's just overmapped, how about removing it ></ Same thing that I've mentioned on the normal difficulty
  • 00:44:598 (4) - I think this slider would make better blanket with this slider 00:43:889 (3) - , if you moved this last slider's point 00:44:598 (4) - few grids down, it'll much nicer then :3 Fixed



That's all i found from this short song =w=/ good map as always Gero <3

Good luck getting it ranked baka ww


Kodora
as requested~


General

  • Since map starting kinda fast I'd suggest you add some audio lead-in via .osu files to give players a bit more time to prepare for playing. Fixed
  • You may delete OP from tags, as website search wouldn't work with less than 2 characters anyway, and it wouldn't work nicely in-game. You can also remove brackets as they doesn't affect anything anyway Fixed
  • Tag un is doubled, remove one please Fixed
  • If you'll look at your hitsounds carefully you may notice that soft-hitnormal.wav and soft-hitfinish.wav have weird peak of volume, which makes them sounds kinda strange while playing. I'd suggest you replace them - don't worry, there's fixed version here, just download & replace! Fixed
  • Your custom slidertick sound have more than 5ms delay, and it's almost inaudible compare to the very loud BGM volume... I can fix it for you if you want, but I'm not sure if you really wants to use it - imo, default slidertick sound works here quite nice already. Fixed


Hard

*As Sekai mentiored at her post, AR8 feels quite fast and doesn't works well with your choosen patterns. AR around 7-7.5 should work quite nicely here, try it! Fixed

I don't really see anything wrong with it - onliest my suggestion here would be add more finishes during kiai (every big white tick for example), as for now only clap + whistle sounds kinda boring. Note that same can be applied in all diffs. Fixed

Great & clean diff!


Normal

*Same concerns about AR - AR 5 feels kinda fast and doesn't work nice with your patterns here. Try AR4 - it should work much better here!
*Your DS choice at the beginning feels quite clamped, and it looks even more strange considering that your DS goes higher near the end of map while music stays same at this point. Any reasons for this? Personally, I'd prefer to see x1.10 DS at the whole diff as it looks way more clean with your symmetrial patterns. Fixed

  • 00:19:323 (1,2) - After triple of 1/2 notes and 1/1 slider these two 3/2 repeat sliders sounds very strange - they doesn't really works nice with vocals, and they breaks your clap-pattern here. I'd suggest you sinple continue using 1/1 sliders same as you did before: Sorry but I'd really prefer to follow the vocals here

    collapsed text
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  • 00:31:127 (2,3,1) - I can't say that it goes very well with music, maybe try something like this instead? Note that same goes for 00:39:162 (3,4,5,1) - as well Same as above

    collapsed text
    Image


Easy

  • 00:04:198 (1) - you may remove whistle from tail here to made a better accent at the incoming note I don't think so, sorry
  • 00:21:214 (2,3) - Considering your previous rhythm, 3/2 repeat-slider would sounds here a lot better rather than two 1/1 sliders ^
  • 00:26:886 (1) - Remove whistle from sliderbody? It doesn't sounds quite nice hare Fixed
  • 00:45:780 (1) - finish instead of whistle on head Fixed

Well, short & nice map. Good luck more Gero! >w</


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General



  • Metadata - Seems good owo
  • Audio Lead-In - add some audio lead in to the diffs since they start at 417 add like 1583 to make the lead in 2000 Fixed
  • Video - All good~
  • Background - Good its the proper size owo

  • Hitsound files - Look at Kodora's post lol xD Fixed
  • Lyrics - Lyrics are good no 18+ content obviously xD owo
  • Tags - Maybe add Cartoon Network into the tags this was aired on there remove OP from tags search doesn't search anything with less than 3 characters Remove XANA from tags since you already have it in it will already be searched Fixed


Easy


  • 00:11:760 (3) - There should be a NC here keep your consistency of every 2/1 Remove the NC here 00:13:651 (1) - 1 NCs are just confusing Fixed
  • 00:23:104 (1,2) - Wanna adjust this a teeny weeny bit so that it doesn't make that little overlap it doesn't look so nice ;w; Fixed
  • 00:26:886 (1) - Remove the whistle from the body it sounds kinda weird Fixed

    That's it for easy
    my childhood I love you ;w;



Normal


    I agree with Kodora about the DS
  • 00:00:417 (1,2,3) - This patterns flow is a bit choppy since you made the sliders end flow away from the next notes placement causing a bit of rough gameplay I think this pattern works a lot better since the flow is much more smooth Fixed
  • 00:09:397 (3,4) - Its kinda a suggestion to not stack too many ontop of notes in the easier diffs since they confuse the noobs
  • 00:11:288 (3) - Gero this looks like a failed blanket xD pls fix that overlap ;w; Fixed
  • 00:12:706 (2) - Tecnically this is on the wrong snap it should be here 00:12:785 - in 1/6 divisor if you go into 25% you will hear that it is actually hitting the 1/6 note but you can get away with this because there is a noise here 00:12:706 - but at the end here 00:12:942 - there is nothing the noise at the end is right here 00:13:021 - again 1/6 and since it is 1/6 it shouldn't be used in normal that consists of many 1/2 and 1/1 here this rhythm hits notes and is still nooby friendly Fixed
  • 00:14:596 (2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Im not entirely sure if you should use this much 1/2 notes relentlessly its a bit tough for a nooby to hit Fixed
  • 00:26:649 (2,1,2) - I know you can reposition this pattern a bit to make it clumped together Fixed
  • 00:39:162 (3,4,5) - Its kinda a suggestion to not stack too many ontop of notes in the easier diffs since they confuse the noobs I'd prefer to keep them
  • 00:42:471 (3) - You forgot an NC here Fixed

    That's all owo

Hard


    AR 7 fits much better with the low bpm of this song I agree with Sekai~ Fixed
  • 00:12:706 (3) - Same as Normal I think it sounds better at 1/2
  • 00:14:833 (1) - - Remove the NC here so that this 00:13:651 (1) - doesn't confuse players Fixed
  • 00:24:522 (7) - Why is there no NC here all the other times like this you put an NC here like 00:20:741 (1,2,3,4) - 00:18:850 (1,2,3) - 00:16:960 (1,2,3) -
    Well either way I agree with not adding a nc here since most of the time its just a comma stop and not the actual end of the sentence. but whatever you chose to go with make it consistent throughout Fixed
  • 00:26:413 (4,5,6) - Like the Above Fixed
  • 00:30:194 (4,5,6) - Above Fixed
  • 00:53:106 (1) - Why is there an NC here ? xD Fixed

    I love your hard diffs not much wrong the only thing that needs works is the NC needs to be more consistent ;w;



Thanks for the helpful mods.

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15:20 Gero: dunno if you can mod it, it's ready now
15:20 Gero: o3o
15:20 Priti: in a moment
15:20 Priti: finishing a part
15:20 Gero: alrighty
15:21 Gero: thanks
15:24 Priti: np
15:24 *Gero is listening to [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/577885 Noam Kaniel - A World Without Danger]
15:24 Gero: o3o
15:24 Priti: so ye I trust you that vid is ok because i'm too lazy to dl with it
15:24 Gero: yeah it's ok
15:25 Gero: it has a good quality and blahblahblah
15:25 Priti: and it's on all diffs?
15:25 Gero: yeah
15:25 Priti: 00:08:924 (3) - should be liek dis http://puu.sh/feqFb.png
15:26 Priti: or whatever variation of this rhythm
15:26 Gero: post mod pls
15:26 Priti: no
15:26 Priti: I irc mod
15:26 Priti: u shit
15:26 Gero: why not? xD
15:26 Gero: okay then
15:26 Gero: where?
15:26 Priti: 00:08:924 (3) - should be liek dis http://puu.sh/feqFb.png
15:26 *Priti is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/577885 Noam Kaniel - A World Without Danger [Hard]]
15:27 Priti: also same applies for the rest of the section
15:27 Priti: the blue tick is important
15:27 Priti: 00:17:432 (4,5) - this part of the blanket is really really ew lrn2blanket babe http://puu.sh/feqQj.png
15:27 Priti: 00:20:741 (1,2,3,4,5) - visual flow is off
15:28 Priti: also, bout kiai time, imo only second half should stay as kiai
15:28 Priti: first half should only have a burst
15:29 Gero: Fixed I guess
15:29 Priti: 00:19:323 (4) - why the fuck does this have a finish but this doesn't 00:23:104 (4) -
15:29 Priti: 00:34:436 (1,2) - switch nc locations pls
15:29 Priti: 00:38:217 (1,2) - ^
15:29 Gero: nice
15:30 Gero: fixed
15:30 Priti: 00:41:998 (1,2) - ^
15:30 Priti: 00:43:889 (3,4) - could be better but meh whatever
15:31 Gero: fox example how?
15:31 Priti: the blanket
15:31 Priti: isn't 100%
15:31 Priti: but if you wanna fix it
15:31 Priti: it'll take ages
15:31 Gero: so what to do here?
15:31 Priti: leave it as it is
15:31 Priti: it's not worth the effort x3
15:31 Gero: okay then
15:31 *Priti is editing [http://osu.ppy.sh/b/590427 Noam Kaniel - A World Without Danger [Normal]]
15:31 Priti: 00:04:198 (1,2) - this isn't even on beat
15:32 Priti: 00:11:288 (3) - yea i know you're gero and stuff but this lil' wiggle feels unnatural
15:32 Gero: symmetry pls
15:32 Priti: yea but
15:32 Gero: I'd really prefer to keep it as it is
15:32 Priti: you can do something symmetrical
15:33 Priti: that FOLLOWS THE RHTHM
15:33 Priti: RHYTHM*
15:33 Gero: for example
15:33 Priti: 00:00:417 (1,2,3) -
15:33 Gero: okay then
15:34 Priti: http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2645141
15:34 Priti: dis
15:34 Priti: oh
15:34 Priti: preview time is unsnapped
15:34 Priti: NCs on first half of the kiai makes no sense.
15:34 Gero: nope
15:35 Gero: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2645147
15:35 Priti: ew it's on yellowtick
15:35 Gero: yeah
15:36 Priti: 00:38:217 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - essentially http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/2645155
15:36 Priti: ugly
15:37 Priti: oh
15:37 Priti: both Normal and Easy: 00:19:323 (1) - finish is ew
15:37 Priti: same as Hard I guess
15:38 Gero: already added
15:38 Priti: gud
15:38 Priti: Easy is fine
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Thanks @Priti.

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Would you like to mod your map or to make a IRC together Gero ? :3
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Would you like to mod your map or to make a IRC together Gero ? :3


As you wish :3
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  • 00:28:540 (2,3,4) - I think some thing like [img=http://puu.sh/feFIH/85ae522a05.jpg]this[/img] is more flow, or you can make other shape :3
  • 00:39:281 (7) - what about remove this note? it's overmapped imo and it's weird when stich with another triple.


Normal


Easy

OMG this is completely nazi meh, i hope this will help you even a bit. the map just too great XD
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I just randomly decided to check a few maps from #modreqs and this map is pretty nice.

Call me back when you get +12


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I was gonna comment on the timing, since I have no issues with a straight 127 bpm, but it's BeatofIke and I trust it XD

I was trying to look up for metadata info for this song. No official sites, nothing, so we'll have to make do with what we got. I like how this song is just called code lyoko (main theme) or whatever for the first couple seasons.

This is what the metadata would be if you went from the videos and didn't want to have a chance of getting DQ'd over it. Of course the album itself probably contains different metadata. This is all I can provide for official though, unless you have something else that works. I'd rather save you a DQ later on if at all possible..
Artist: Noam http://puu.sh/feMtJ.jpg
Title: A WORLD WITHOUT DANGER http://puu.sh/feMF7.jpg
Source: CODE LYOKO | the d is sometimes lowercased, but the Logo on any official art is all capitals.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Subdigitals (this is the album the song was released on)
Add: subdigitals Debra Reynolds Franck Keller Moonscope Antefilms | album name, writer and might be important? that Franck guy seems important as well, maybe add him?, and Moonscope / Antefilms is the company that published the show)
I have no idea what all those other names are in the tags. I'm assuming they're characters from the show or something.

That's about it. I spent way too much time trying to look up metadata rather then modding the map, only to find nothing I can use for accurate metadata.
The only 'official' things I can give is from the video using the title in all capitals. and Noam Kaniel only using Noam as the artist from the first opening.
I wish I could find some scans for the album. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Subdigitals ;_;


00:46:252 - Lower the volume here please on all diffs. These whistles are way too loud for this outro. | Also a lot of whistle spam. why not follow the instruments with them?


Easy
  • 00:26:886 (1) - I highly suggest having a gap in the middle. It's almost confusing on how the slider moves because of the big clump. I really don't think this is going to pass ranking criteria as it is. Try something like this: http://puu.sh/feIPf.jpg
  • 00:45:780 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I really don't like the rhythm choice here. Stuff like 00:47:198 (2) - barely even hit anything audible in the song. It would have been so much better if you decided to follow the other instruments. http://puu.sh/feA8p.jpg is an example of what the rhythm could be like when following it.


Normal
  • 00:11:288 (3) - Please don't do this. This is a normal difficulty and this sort of slider can be very confusing. I highly recommend you simplify it.. It doesn't even really fit the song anyways since it's not some crazy held note or anything.


Hard
  • 00:01:834 (5) - you have two of these sliders in the song. I really don't care for them as there isn't anything in the music that emphasizes on a wiggle like this.
  • 00:40:580 (4) - x329 (x+1)
  • One more thing. Way too many 1/4 triplets. Try removing a good handful of them. Stuff like 00:17:314 (3) - is pretty much useless. I'd like to see a few of these removed throughout the song. 42 / 78 / 148 note gap is quite a difference from Normal->Hard

I don't really have much else to say. I like the map. I'll toss you a star to help get this closer to +12 anyways, and call me back whenever you feel it's ready and has +12
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Easy
  • 00:51:452 (4) - That slider is touching the HP bar. As far as I know this is an UNRANKABLE ISSUE, so just move it a bit down because it's not a problem (the very last note in the difficulty so it's easy to avoid it).

Hard
  • Maybe HP/OD7.5 so it's more sexy with AR7.5? Also more challenging since this hard is not so hard and it shouldn't harm the spread.
  • 00:02:543 (2,4) - Um... and If I well remember this one is an unrankable stuff too, since the reversing arrow can't be 100% covered so the arrow is invisible and hidden. Maybe you could rotate the slider and move it abit down so it is more like *THIS*, but ofc you could blanket it more or make something more good-looking.

That's all from me X'D Good luck and have a ranked soon! o3o

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As you wish :3

Maybe I choose modding :3 Is a short map and you're a experienced mapper :D Is official . I will make a irc with you :3
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  • 00:28:540 (2,3,4) - I think some thing like this is more flow, or you can make other shape :3 I see no reason to change it, the flow is okay at the least for me
  • 00:39:281 (7) - what about remove this note? it's overmapped imo and it's weird when stich with another triple. Isn't overmapped at all, you should listen it by 25 % of speed


Normal


Easy

OMG this is completely nazi meh, i hope this will help you even a bit. the map just too great XD
GL


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I just randomly decided to check a few maps from #modreqs and this map is pretty nice. Yay

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General
I was gonna comment on the timing, since I have no issues with a straight 127 bpm, but it's BeatofIke and I trust it XD BeatofIke is pro at timing, you know xD

I was trying to look up for metadata info for this song. No official sites, nothing, so we'll have to make do with what we got. I like how this song is just called code lyoko (main theme) or whatever for the first couple seasons. Yeah, I've found those things before but I really didn't know which of all is the correct that's why I didn't used nothing from the videos

This is what the metadata would be if you went from the videos and didn't want to have a chance of getting DQ'd over it. Of course the album itself probably contains different metadata. This is all I can provide for official though, unless you have something else that works. I'd rather save you a DQ later on if at all possible..
Artist: Noam http://puu.sh/feMtJ.jpg
Title: A WORLD WITHOUT DANGER http://puu.sh/feMF7.jpg
Source: CODE LYOKO | the d is sometimes lowercased, but the Logo on any official art is all capitals.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Subdigitals (this is the album the song was released on)
Add: subdigitals Debra Reynolds Franck Keller Moonscope Antefilms | album name, writer and might be important? that Franck guy seems important as well, maybe add him?, and Moonscope / Antefilms is the company that published the show)
I have no idea what all those other names are in the tags. I'm assuming they're characters from the show or something.

That's about it. I spent way too much time trying to look up metadata rather then modding the map, only to find nothing I can use for accurate metadata.
The only 'official' things I can give is from the video using the title in all capitals. and Noam Kaniel only using Noam as the artist from the first opening.
I wish I could find some scans for the album. http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Subdigitals ;_;

Applied them all ^


00:46:252 - Lower the volume here please on all diffs. These whistles are way too loud for this outro. | Also a lot of whistle spam. why not follow the instruments with them? Fixed


Easy
  • 00:26:886 (1) - I highly suggest having a gap in the middle. It's almost confusing on how the slider moves because of the big clump. I really don't think this is going to pass ranking criteria as it is. Try something like this: http://puu.sh/feIPf.jpg Fixed
  • 00:45:780 (1,2,3,1,2,3,4) - I really don't like the rhythm choice here. Stuff like 00:47:198 (2) - barely even hit anything audible in the song. It would have been so much better if you decided to follow the other instruments. http://puu.sh/feA8p.jpg is an example of what the rhythm could be like when following it. Yeah it's better but I think something simple works better at this part so I'd really prefer to leave it as is


Normal
  • 00:11:288 (3) - Please don't do this. This is a normal difficulty and this sort of slider can be very confusing. I highly recommend you simplify it.. It doesn't even really fit the song anyways since it's not some crazy held note or anything. Fixed


Hard
  • 00:01:834 (5) - you have two of these sliders in the song. I really don't care for them as there isn't anything in the music that emphasizes on a wiggle like this. Fixed
  • 00:40:580 (4) - x329 (x+1) Fixed
  • One more thing. Way too many 1/4 triplets. Try removing a good handful of them. Stuff like 00:17:314 (3) - is pretty much useless. I'd like to see a few of these removed throughout the song. 42 / 78 / 148 note gap is quite a difference from Normal->Hard I've asked for some BATs/QATs and they said that I could add an easier hard to avoid the huge gap between Normal-Hard so I guess it's fixed somehow

I don't really have much else to say. I like the map. I'll toss you a star to help get this closer to +12 anyways, and call me back whenever you feel it's ready and has +12


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J.Lo Gero-chan! :3

Easy
  • 00:51:452 (4) - That slider is touching the HP bar. As far as I know this is an UNRANKABLE ISSUE, so just move it a bit down because it's not a problem (the very last note in the difficulty so it's easy to avoid it). Isn't touching the hp part as you can see here so no changes

Hard
  • Maybe HP/OD7.5 so it's more sexy with AR7.5? Also more challenging since this hard is not so hard and it shouldn't harm the spread. Fixed
  • 00:02:543 (2,4) - Um... and If I well remember this one is an unrankable stuff too, since the reversing arrow can't be 100% covered so the arrow is invisible and hidden. Maybe you could rotate the slider and move it abit down so it is more like *THIS*, but ofc you could blanket it more or make something more good-looking. Yeah but this one isn't cover by the comboburst as you can see here that it's just noticeable in game so I prefer to leave it without changes

That's all from me X'D Good luck and have a ranked soon! o3o

LVU Krfawy (>*3*)>


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