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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on September 13, 2017 at 12:04:38 PM

Artist: Iori Nomizu
Title: Ma.Ka.Se.Te Tonight ~TV SIZE EDIT
Source: これはゾンビですか?
Tags: ashemu makasete 伊織 Koreha Zombie Desuka? Kore wa desu ka of the Dead opening op
BPM: 181
Filesize: 21050kb
Play Time: 01:28
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today is such a happy day~


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Hello


Easy
The whole map is mapped pretty well, just need some fixing on the fluency



Normal

00:02:119 (6) - 00:02:948 (1) - feel s a bit weird here, Can maybe this to a slider without repeat and add beats.
00:05:103 (6) - this could be changed to a note or can curve it and change position.

00:06:263 (3) - doesn't fit the pause i get at here 00:05:434 (1) This would help so much if the slider was moved, feel nicer.
00:17:700 (4,5) - change this to a over lapping slider blanketing 00:17:202 (3) - Like this? http://puu.sh/dHt6W/abddb62b17.png
can change this as well, to better fit the music 00:23:003 (5,6) - something like this http://puu.sh/dHt87/4453cb7d5f.png
Try replacing 00:24:827 (2) - with a clicker on the same time, feels better to me 8-)
semi lapping slider instead of these 00:26:484 (6,1) - two clickers would be nicer with the flow with the rest
I'm going to leave things like this to you 00:29:136 (6) - as i'm not the best with those kind of clickers xD

can make this curvy, 00:39:910 (1) - definitely do that or try and see if that feels better to you? :)
00:45:048 (7) - these kind of things feel weird to me but that might not be the case, leave it up to you^^
Same with these^ 00:54:661 (4,5,6) -
can blanket this better 01:12:063 (4) - arc this a bit more, clockwise.

Overall good beatmap :)
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Hello


Easy
The whole map is mapped pretty well, just need some fixing on the fluency



Normal

00:02:119 (6) - 00:02:948 (1) - feel s a bit weird here, Can maybe this to a slider without repeat and add beats. repeat emphasizes it more for me
00:05:103 (6) - this could be changed to a note or can curve it and change position. kills my pattern, sorry

00:06:263 (3) - doesn't fit the pause i get at here 00:05:434 (1) This would help so much if the slider was moved, feel nicer. i don't see the problem :<
00:17:700 (4,5) - change this to a over lapping slider blanketing 00:17:202 (3) - Like this? http://puu.sh/dHt6W/abddb62b17.png there's no blanket or the need to change to the slider really, i think circle suits better here
can change this as well, to better fit the music 00:23:003 (5,6) - something like this http://puu.sh/dHt87/4453cb7d5f.png ^
Try replacing 00:24:827 (2) - with a clicker on the same time, feels better to me 8-) i dont really know what the problem is :u
semi lapping slider instead of these 00:26:484 (6,1) - two clickers would be nicer with the flow with the rest ^ and wtf is a clicker lol
I'm going to leave things like this to you 00:29:136 (6) - as i'm not the best with those kind of clickers xD i do this all the time, it's just a 1/2 stack, it's fine

can make this curvy, 00:39:910 (1) - definitely do that or try and see if that feels better to you? :) oh maybe but it kills my pattern uhh
00:45:048 (7) - these kind of things feel weird to me but that might not be the case, leave it up to you^^
Same with these^ 00:54:661 (4,5,6) - uhh looks fine
can blanket this better 01:12:063 (4) - arc this a bit more, clockwise. this isn't a blanket..

Overall good beatmap :)


ah sorry for no changes (for now) but still thanks for trying owo
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Hi M4M from #modreqs :3


General
标题後面的 ~TV SIZE EDIT不太確定是否能這樣寫,因為一般都是(TV Size)或者(TV EDIT)/(TV Edit)


Easy
節奏有點複雜,作為Easy難度偏大,1/2滑條偏多,maxcomboo快到300啦。
建議多用長滑條將star降到1.5左右。
其他問題不大,於是主要說說哪些節奏改動一下比較好。

01:11:068 (1,2) - 這裡跟vocal建議改成這樣
Image
01:13:555 (1,2,3) - ^
Image
01:19:024 (1,2,3) - ^
Image
01:20:184 (4,5) - 改為滑條后就在紅線結束


Normal
AR6會不會偏高,AR5吧。同樣是節奏問題,最好多跟vocal
00:05:103 (6,1,2) - 節奏
Image這樣3在紅線起,和后面比較一致
00:16:042 (1,2) - 1不要折返,2移到00:16:705 -
00:23:998 (1,2) - 同上,2移到00:24:661 - 可以考慮在2加個折返
00:25:987 (5) - 這裡NC而不是00:26:650 (1) -
00:28:639 (5) - 同上
00:37:258 (1,2,3) - 這裡最好和00:31:954 (1,2,3) - 統一,包括hitsound
00:44:716 (6,7,1) - 7去掉,6折返一次,1改為單note,同樣為了和00:42:230 (6,1,2) - 統一
01:12:063 (4) - 去掉4,在01:12:229 - 加note
01:22:173 (2,3) - 改為結束在紅線的滑條
01:24:825 (2,3) - ^


Hard
做的十分棒,找不到什麼明顯問題
00:04:108 (4) - 這裡沒有聲音,不確定是否overmap
00:41:898 (9) - NC
00:44:550 (5) - ^
01:02:451 (7) - ^
01:07:753 (7,1) - 可以再包好看一點


Insane
打起來也很爽,排版十分值得我學習。存在一些小問題
00:11:235 (3,5) - 這裡是要頭尾重合嗎?如果是的話稍微移動一下
00:31:374 (6) - 去掉6,然後排列可以試著改一下
00:44:550 (8) - NC
00:49:026 (1) - ctrl+G?
01:02:451 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - 不好看,試試用ctrl+shift+F?
而且個人感覺這個stream有點長,建議在頭或者尾添加一兩個折返滑條,比如01:02:451 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 換成兩個折返兩次的滑條?
01:06:262 (3,4) - 這兩個滑條的彎曲程度統一一下比較美觀
01:21:013 (4,5) - ^(為何4要刻意做成那樣呢0.0


Chris
我pass不了orz 滑條外形和方向感覺比較單一,尤其是左右向的滑條感覺有點多,弄點其他形狀的滑條試試?當然滑條並不影響什麼
00:38:252 (5) - 稍微往上移動一下,不要重合比較好
00:47:202 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 這裡間距可以再大點,不然有點容易讀錯
01:15:213 (2) - 最好和1再近點,重疊一部分
01:23:169 (2) - ^


高難度的圖做地很棒,可低難度有點偏難
總體來說排版和音效很不錯,學習啦!
最後祝聖誕節快樂,希望以後還有機會再M4M :)
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Hi M4M from #modreqs :3


General
标题後面的 ~TV SIZE EDIT不太確定是否能這樣寫,因為一般都是(TV Size)或者(TV EDIT)/(TV Edit) 這是對的喔

ImageImage
source: http://vgmdb.net/album/22780


Easy
節奏有點複雜,作為Easy難度偏大,1/2滑條偏多,maxcomboo快到300啦。
建議多用長滑條將star降到1.5左右。沒辦法, 畢竟是 181bpm 嘛
其他問題不大,於是主要說說哪些節奏改動一下比較好。

01:11:068 (1,2) - 這裡跟vocal建議改成這樣 應為是easy我不想要用1/2節奏, 1/2滑條比較容易所以我很常用
Image
01:13:555 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
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01:19:024 (1,2,3) - ^ ^
Image
01:20:184 (4,5) - 改為滑條后就在紅線結束 不都一樣嗎?


Normal
AR6會不會偏高,AR5吧。同樣是節奏問題,最好多跟vocal 5.5好了
00:05:103 (6,1,2) - 節奏 我不喜歡節奏有3/2空檔, 有點難打
Image這樣3在紅線起,和后面比較一致
00:16:042 (1,2) - 1不要折返,2移到00:16:705 - 節奏我感覺還好, 但排列改了一下
00:23:998 (1,2) - 同上,2移到00:24:661 - 可以考慮在2加個折返 還可以吧
00:25:987 (5) - 這裡NC而不是00:26:650 (1) - 看hard
00:28:639 (5) - 同上 ^
00:37:258 (1,2,3) - 這裡最好和00:31:954 (1,2,3) - 統一,包括hitsound 一直用一樣的節奏有點單調 s:
00:44:716 (6,7,1) - 7去掉,6折返一次,1改為單note,同樣為了和00:42:230 (6,1,2) - 統一 ^
01:12:063 (4) - 去掉4,在01:12:229 - 加note 還可以
01:22:173 (2,3) - 改為結束在紅線的滑條 但都是一樣的東西 o_o
01:24:825 (2,3) - ^ ^

節奏故意很密期因為normal->hard的難度差蠻大的, 為了spread而放一堆1/2的, 希望可以聊解

Hard
做的十分棒,找不到什麼明顯問題 >w<
00:04:108 (4) - 這裡沒有聲音,不確定是否overmap 有阿, 在聽聽
00:41:898 (9) - NC 個人覺得每兩節一個NC比較有consistency
00:44:550 (5) - ^ ^
01:02:451 (7) - ^ ^
01:07:753 (7,1) - 可以再包好看一點


Insane
打起來也很爽,排版十分值得我學習。存在一些小問題
00:11:235 (3,5) - 這裡是要頭尾重合嗎?如果是的話稍微移動一下 恩知道但我是故意的
00:31:374 (6) - 去掉6,然後排列可以試著改一下 為什麼? 這是個stream阿
00:44:550 (8) - NC 跟hard一樣
00:49:026 (1) - ctrl+G? 喜歡這樣><
01:02:451 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,1) - 不好看,試試用ctrl+shift+F? 恩是我懶惰 orz
而且個人感覺這個stream有點長,建議在頭或者尾添加一兩個折返滑條,比如01:02:451 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 換成兩個折返兩次的滑條?我覺得stream好玩阿阿阿阿!!
01:06:262 (3,4) - 這兩個滑條的彎曲程度統一一下比較美觀 還好吧
01:21:013 (4,5) - ^(為何4要刻意做成那樣呢0.0 爽! :3 有小改一下


Chris
我pass不了orz 有那麼難嗎? orz 滑條外形和方向感覺比較單一,尤其是左右向的滑條感覺有點多,弄點其他形狀的滑條試試?當然滑條並不影響什麼 我的style就喜歡這樣吧 aaa
00:38:252 (5) - 稍微往上移動一下,不要重合比較好 mmmm 故意的 >~<
00:47:202 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 這裡間距可以再大點,不然有點容易讀錯 這裡是1/3 但之前是1/4 所以應該要有不同spacing
01:15:213 (2) - 最好和1再近點,重疊一部分 畢竟是extra嘛, 還好
01:23:169 (2) - ^ ^


高難度的圖做地很棒,可低難度有點偏難 181 bpm orz
總體來說排版和音效很不錯,學習啦!:3
最後祝聖誕節快樂,希望以後還有機會再M4M :)


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當然也祝你瞜~
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Hihi, Gaia~ From my queue!

.....weird anime.....

> General <
  • - The Second offset between the first four diffs(65,765) and Chris diff(65,766) is inconsistent by one o_o
  • - Pretty fine!


> Easy <
  • - OD -1 because it looks like an Easy+.
  • 00:01:954 (5,6,1) - You can possibly make a smoother pattern here, here's my preference > http://puu.sh/dQICX/8da163adf7.png
  • 00:14:716 (3,4) - I think you should put a head-on from slider (3) to (4). It kinda feel awkward closer and under the healthbar.
  • 00:44:219 (3,4,1,2) - You could've completed this 'diamond' formation here.
  • 01:02:119 (4,1) - Since it's an Easy diff, why would you make the spinner appear so early while beginners can't get a chance to prepare for it?
  • 01:17:532 (4,5) - Curve more for blanket lol
  • 01:24:825 (2,1) - ^
  • - IMO, the diff looks great! Afaik is that you've used too much 1/2 sliders because the song was too fast and you had no choice but to follow the vocals. Am i wrong?


> Normal <


> Hard <
  • 00:01:125 (4,5) - I don't think this rhythm fits here because the new track here is quite strong. So try one of these rhythm i preferred > One / Two
  • 00:09:744 (5) - Ctrl + G? better playstyle :3
  • 00:23:666 (8) - ^
  • 00:41:816 (8) - I don't hear anything in this part, just the streaming drum for Insanes. So remove this and try following the main beats and vocals instead of background music.
  • 00:48:445 (3) - ^, but nothing can be heard here, so this is an overmapped 1/4 circle.
  • 00:53:749 (3) - ^
  • 00:56:484 (3,4,5) - The overlap between slider (3) and (4) is fine, but it got worse on slider (5). Make a different pattern than this one, i prefer this > http://puu.sh/dQTfX/f852698694.png
  • 01:16:289 (10) - Same as 00:48:445 (3) -
  • 01:28:306 (1) - I think you should move this circle somewhere to be visible, some players might think circle (6) is the end, but they'll get a miss with this. So move to x:348|y:52, or x:364|y:32, or x:356|y:80.
  • - Well, nice little jumps and pattern, but some senseless triplet needs to be reconsidered. But well, i kinda like this diff ^w^/


> Insane <
  • - Very good! most mods below are some nazi suggestions.
  • 00:11:235 (3,5) - Stack slider tail perfectly.
  • 00:16:042 (1,1) - Try to make a nice parallel here.
  • 00:17:202 (1,2) - Since there's a downbeat, swap NC.
  • 00:26:981 (1) - Remove this NC, because adding it make the circle on 00:26:650 (1) - useless. Also, they're both in the same track, so try to use one NC.
  • 00:33:943 (4,5) - Try an S formation by making the slider (5) the same position as slider (4) but flipped. The overlap on circle (3) won't matter.
  • 00:50:020 (5,6) - How about extend the spacing here? it'd look nicer with greater playstyle, or do as you did on 00:28:639 (3,4,5,6) - .
  • - Impressive mapping! Just some minor issues to be fixed. Well done!


Don't have the mood to mod the Chris diff. Too insane for me, but i've seen really awesome patterns with jumps you've made! I can't even say a word when i'm checking it 8Q_____
I guess i'm done here, Good Gaia Luck :3333333333333333
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.....weird anime..... .... yeah lol

> General <
  • - The Second offset between the first four diffs(65,765) and Chris diff(65,766) is inconsistent by one o_o oooops lol XD
  • - Pretty fine! >w<


> Easy <
  • - OD -1 because it looks like an Easy+. sure
  • 00:01:954 (5,6,1) - You can possibly make a smoother pattern here, here's my preference > http://puu.sh/dQICX/8da163adf7.png okey
  • 00:14:716 (3,4) - I think you should put a head-on from slider (3) to (4). It kinda feel awkward closer and under the healthbar. i shifted it down a bit
  • 00:44:219 (3,4,1,2) - You could've completed this 'diamond' formation here. shapesssssss i dont like shapes orz
  • 01:02:119 (4,1) - Since it's an Easy diff, why would you make the spinner appear so early while beginners can't get a chance to prepare for it? uh i put my spinners 1/2 after the note in easys and there are ranked maps like this so it's alright
  • 01:17:532 (4,5) - Curve more for blanket lol lol okey
  • 01:24:825 (2,1) - ^
  • - IMO, the diff looks great! Afaik is that you've used too much 1/2 sliders because the song was too fast and you had no choice but to follow the vocals. Am i wrong? lol yeah you're right ;w; hope this isnt an issueee


> Normal <
  • 00:22:009 (3,4) - A bit overlap, you should bring slider (3)'s position in the other direction to make slider (4)'s head a bit clear and readable, it's not a problem. I tilted 3 a bit it should be better
  • 00:25:987 (5) - Be careful with this, touching the healthbar is unrankable > http://puu.sh/dQO3T/2acd57f7d8.png oops nice catch fixed
  • 00:39:910 (1,2) - Same as 00:22:009 (3,4) - this one isn't as bad imo, the reverse isn't overlapping but i tilted it a bit more too
  • 01:01:125 (7) - Add NC? oh yes
  • 01:01:788 (8,1) - Same reason as the previous diff, but not really much because it's a Normal diff. But it's recommended for Normal players.
  • 01:12:394 (5,1) - Sounds really nazi, but... change slider (1)'s position to not be overlapped with slider (5). okie
  • 01:26:317 (7,1) - Same as 00:22:009 (3,4) - hmm i think this wouldnt have a problem with reading tho :> is this just me?
  • - Not really much to find, great improvement you have since the last i've seen your other maps. lol rip that one i remapped it (>x<)


> Hard <
  • 00:01:125 (4,5) - I don't think this rhythm fits here because the new track here is quite strong. So try one of these rhythm i preferred > One / Two uhh i kept the reverse cuz i think it fits the repeating guitar sounds, but i changed things around
  • 00:09:744 (5) - Ctrl + G? better playstyle :3 ahh yeah i agree it'll probably be more fun but it'll kill my current pattern :x keep for now
  • 00:23:666 (8) - ^ ahh i like this pattern the way it is right now ><
  • 00:41:816 (8) - I don't hear anything in this part, just the streaming drum for Insanes. So remove this and try following the main beats and vocals instead of background music. hm actually i think mapping this out is better for the spread cuz a hard without these sounds -> an insane with all the streams mapped out is a pretty big jump, same for the next few points
  • 00:48:445 (3) - ^, but nothing can be heard here, so this is an overmapped 1/4 circle.
  • 00:53:749 (3) - ^
  • 00:56:484 (3,4,5) - The overlap between slider (3) and (4) is fine, but it got worse on slider (5). Make a different pattern than this one, i prefer this > http://puu.sh/dQTfX/f852698694.png on purpose but maybe.... idk might consider
  • 01:16:289 (10) - Same as 00:48:445 (3) -
  • 01:28:306 (1) - I think you should move this circle somewhere to be visible, some players might think circle (6) is the end, but they'll get a miss with this. So move to x:348|y:52, or x:364|y:32, or x:356|y:80. okie
  • - Well, nice little jumps and pattern, but some senseless triplet needs to be reconsidered. But well, i kinda like this diff ^w^/ hehe :3


> Insane <
  • - Very good! most mods below are some nazi suggestions.
  • 00:11:235 (3,5) - Stack slider tail perfectly. i guess it looks bad, okie
  • 00:16:042 (1,1) - Try to make a nice parallel here. sure
  • 00:17:202 (1,2) - Since there's a downbeat, swap NC. umm i think the NC emphasizes the vocal nicely ;w;
  • 00:26:981 (1) - Remove this NC, because adding it make the circle on 00:26:650 (1) - useless. Also, they're both in the same track, so try to use one NC. also for emphasis, i think it fits
  • 00:33:943 (4,5) - Try an S formation by making the slider (5) the same position as slider (4) but flipped. The overlap on circle (3) won't matter. hmm i like to use different sliders for this kind of ctrl+> patterns lol (blame my weird style)
  • 00:50:020 (5,6) - How about extend the spacing here? it'd look nicer with greater playstyle, or do as you did on 00:28:639 (3,4,5,6) - . sure
  • - Impressive mapping! Just some minor issues to be fixed. Well done! c:


Don't have the mood to mod the Chris diff. Too insane for me, but i've seen really awesome patterns with jumps you've made! I can't even say a word when i'm checking it 8Q_____ XD it's nbd, but thaaanks
I guess i'm done here, Good Gaia Luck :3333333333333333 :33



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Hey baka Gaia o3o/


General:
  • The BG is kinda of nsfw, how about changing it to something more stable for all ages o3o/
  • Remove the widescreen support, since you didn't really use it on your map



Easy:
  • 00:05:103 (6) - I think this will fit much better with drum finish instead of a whistle, i highly suggest you to add it
  • 00:10:956 - I think this will fit much better if you switched the whistle on slider's start with a finish instead, it'll follow the song much better imo o.o
  • 00:13:390 (1) - ^
  • 00:21:346 (1) - ^
  • 00:26:981 (2) - I highly suggest you to fix the blanket on this slider and the next note, it is looking pretty weird right now
  • 00:37:258 (1,2) - switch the finish from the (2) to the (1) it'll fit much better imo
  • 00:42:893 (2) - move the last slider's point to x:376 y:320, it'll fix the blanket with the next slider
  • 01:01:125 (1,2,3,4) - how about making these notes into 2 sliders, it'll make the diff more easier to play, since it is an easy diff so it'll make a bit more since to make more sliders instead of notes imo
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  • 01:21:677 (1) - I think this will fit with a finish, since it'll follow the music and the vocal



Normal:
  • 00:05:103 (6) - how about adding a finish drum instead of a soft whistle, it'll fit much better imo
  • 00:07:755 (8) - how about adding a finish to slider's tail, it'll fit with music o.o
  • 00:10:407 (7) - ^
  • 00:13:390 (1) - ^ but this one on slider's head
  • 00:12:561 (5,6) - I think this will totally follow the song much better if the note started first then after it a slider, since it sounded kinda off right now. so i highly suggest you to change it
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  • 00:17:202 (3) - how about giving this slider more curve, it'll play much better and it'll look much prettier too
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  • 00:21:346 (1) - maybe add a finish to this note, it'll follow the song
  • 00:29:302 (1) - ^ but on slider's start, it'll follow great since you already add it here 00:26:650 (1) - , they both has the same beats. So yeah o3o
  • 00:37:258 (1) - finish here would follow great with the song imo
  • 00:37:589 (2) - ^ if you did the above don't forget to remove the finish on this slider's start
  • 00:45:213 (1) - ^ it'll totally follow the song great, and i mean hear at slider's head ofc =w=
  • 00:57:810 (6) - fix the blanket a bit i honestly think it's a bit off right now..so yeah, move the 2nd slider's point few grids



Hard:
  • 00:03:611 (3) - how about making ctrl+h for this slider, it'll make more prettier shape imo o3o/
  • 00:05:103 (8) - just like i said about this on easy and normal
  • 00:19:854 (6) - how about adding nc to this slider, to follow the vocal o.o
  • 00:23:666 (8) - I think it'll play much better if you made this slider with ctrl+g, since atm it kinda starts pretty weird, and it'll play much better and fun if you did that imo
  • 00:25:987 (1) - how about adding a nc here, for the sudden jump pattern, i think it'll fit perfectly :3
  • 00:36:097 (5) - ^ it'll fit with music imo
  • 00:40:572 (4) - how about ctrl+g for this slider, it'll follow the song much better imo
  • 00:41:070 (6) - how about nc here, to follow the vocal :3
  • 00:46:539 (3) - this slider kinda looking weird blinding with this slider 00:46:042 (2) - I highly suggest you changing the patterns here, I honestly don't know how to fix this, but i know you might have some other ideas for it
  • 00:50:517 (1) - I think if you move the 2nd slider point few grids up, it'll make the blinding sliders much prettier shape like this
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  • 00:55:158 (8) - I this slider will flow much better if you made it with ctrl+g imo, and it'll make much fun pattern imo
  • 00:56:484 (3) - I don't think the slider's end follows anything in the music, how about ending it on white tick instead, it'll have much better effect with the music
  • 00:59:799 (5) - how about nc here, cus the changing of the vocals and beats o.o
  • 01:02:451 (7) - ^ but this one fits for the sudden jumps in the music imo
  • 01:03:611 (1) - I think this would fit much better with finish instead of whistle, the stopping in the music was a little strong so yeah.. o3o
  • 01:07:754 (7) - I think ctrl+g would fit much better with the lyrics, since the lyrics kinda changed here, so i think it'll fit here
  • 01:09:578 (4) - I think this slider having kinda of weird blinding, I think it can be fixed like this
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Insane:
  • 00:02:782 (1) - how about sticking this slider perfect under this 00:01:622 (2) - o.o
  • 00:05:103 (5) - like i said about this on easy and normal
  • 00:18:031 (5) - how about moving this slider few grids down so it won't be too close from this slider 00:18:363 (6) -
  • 00:18:363 (6) - this slider shape kinda looking weird from all your patterns on this diff, how about moving the 2nd slider point few grids to the right to fix it :3
  • 00:31:954 (1) - I think ctrl+g would fit much better here, and it'll play well with the music too
  • 00:52:009 (2) - ^
  • 01:16:870 (3) - I'd move this slider few grids down to avoid to be too close to this slider 01:17:202 (4) - , since right now it's kinda close to it o.o/
  • 01:16:373 (1,4) - and this blinding kinda looking bad, how about moving the (4) a bit up to avoid touching each other



Chris:



Good Job as always Gaia, I honestly taking liking to this map <3

Good luck getting it ranked :3
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Hey baka Gaia o3o/ owo moe sekai o//


General:
  • The BG is kinda of nsfw, how about changing it to something more stable for all ages o3o/ =w= u never saw anything
  • Remove the widescreen support, since you didn't really use it on your map oops fixed :3



Easy:
  • 00:05:103 (6) - I think this will fit much better with drum finish instead of a whistle, i highly suggest you to add it nicee
  • 00:10:956 - I think this will fit much better if you switched the whistle on slider's start with a finish instead, it'll follow the song much better imo o.o
  • 00:13:390 (1) - ^
  • 00:21:346 (1) - ^
  • 00:26:981 (2) - I highly suggest you to fix the blanket on this slider and the next note, it is looking pretty weird right now yeah haha fixed
  • 00:37:258 (1,2) - switch the finish from the (2) to the (1) it'll fit much better imo
  • 00:42:893 (2) - move the last slider's point to x:376 y:320, it'll fix the blanket with the next slider okie
  • 01:01:125 (1,2,3,4) - how about making these notes into 2 sliders, it'll make the diff more easier to play, since it is an easy diff so it'll make a bit more since to make more sliders instead of notes imo hmmm too many sliders imo, but might reconsider
    Image
  • 01:21:677 (1) - I think this will fit with a finish, since it'll follow the music and the vocal



Normal:
  • 00:05:103 (6) - how about adding a finish drum instead of a soft whistle, it'll fit much better imo yup
  • 00:07:755 (8) - how about adding a finish to slider's tail, it'll fit with music o.o
  • 00:10:407 (7) - ^
  • 00:13:390 (1) - ^ but this one on slider's head
  • 00:12:561 (5,6) - I think this will totally follow the song much better if the note started first then after it a slider, since it sounded kinda off right now. so i highly suggest you to change it agree!
    Image
  • 00:17:202 (3) - how about giving this slider more curve, it'll play much better and it'll look much prettier too okie
    Image
  • 00:21:346 (1) - maybe add a finish to this note, it'll follow the song
  • 00:29:302 (1) - ^ but on slider's start, it'll follow great since you already add it here 00:26:650 (1) - , they both has the same beats. So yeah o3o
  • 00:37:258 (1) - finish here would follow great with the song imo
  • 00:37:589 (2) - ^ if you did the above don't forget to remove the finish on this slider's start
  • 00:45:213 (1) - ^ it'll totally follow the song great, and i mean hear at slider's head ofc =w=
  • 00:57:810 (6) - fix the blanket a bit i honestly think it's a bit off right now..so yeah, move the 2nd slider's point few grids loool yup fixed =3=



Hard:
  • 00:03:611 (3) - how about making ctrl+h for this slider, it'll make more prettier shape imo o3o/ was going for a parallel here s:
  • 00:05:103 (8) - just like i said about this on easy and normal yuup
  • 00:19:854 (6) - how about adding nc to this slider, to follow the vocal o.o
  • 00:23:666 (8) - I think it'll play much better if you made this slider with ctrl+g, since atm it kinda starts pretty weird, and it'll play much better and fun if you did that imo hmm I really like this current pattern >< keep for now
  • 00:25:987 (1) - how about adding a nc here, for the sudden jump pattern, i think it'll fit perfectly :3
  • 00:36:097 (5) - ^ it'll fit with music imo
  • 00:40:572 (4) - how about ctrl+g for this slider, it'll follow the song much better imo i like this :3
  • 00:41:070 (6) - how about nc here, to follow the vocal :3
  • 00:46:539 (3) - this slider kinda looking weird blinding with this slider 00:46:042 (2) - I highly suggest you changing the patterns here, I honestly don't know how to fix this, but i know you might have some other ideas for it yeah i trieeed XD this pattern was bugging me a bit too actually haha
  • 00:50:517 (1) - I think if you move the 2nd slider point few grids up, it'll make the blinding sliders much prettier shape like this this was supposed to be a straight slider lol but i changed it a litttle bit
    Image
  • 00:55:158 (8) - I this slider will flow much better if you made it with ctrl+g imo, and it'll make much fun pattern imo jump gets big imo s:
  • 00:56:484 (3) - I don't think the slider's end follows anything in the music, how about ending it on white tick instead, it'll have much better effect with the music it does end on the white tick though o3o
  • 00:59:799 (5) - how about nc here, cus the changing of the vocals and beats o.o
  • 01:02:451 (7) - ^ but this one fits for the sudden jumps in the music imo
  • 01:03:611 (1) - I think this would fit much better with finish instead of whistle, the stopping in the music was a little strong so yeah.. o3o lol um drum finish o3o?
  • 01:07:754 (7) - I think ctrl+g would fit much better with the lyrics, since the lyrics kinda changed here, so i think it'll fit here hmm maybe.. i'll try this out XD
  • 01:09:578 (4) - I think this slider having kinda of weird blinding, I think it can be fixed like this i guess since its kiai it can have more jumps, sure :p
    Image


    about NC's, I NC every 2 measures so if I NC in ur places it breaks my consistency >< If I change my pattern to every measure then I'll apply ur NC mods /o/



Insane:
  • 00:02:782 (1) - how about sticking this slider perfect under this 00:01:622 (2) - o.o wow sekai's eyes so sharp >.> fixed lol
  • 00:05:103 (5) - like i said about this on easy and normal yup
  • 00:18:031 (5) - how about moving this slider few grids down so it won't be too close from this slider 00:18:363 (6) - umm lol fixed i think owo
  • 00:18:363 (6) - this slider shape kinda looking weird from all your patterns on this diff, how about moving the 2nd slider point few grids to the right to fix it :3 okay XD
  • 00:31:954 (1) - I think ctrl+g would fit much better here, and it'll play well with the music too i like my current one ><
  • 00:52:009 (2) - ^ same, on purpose s:
  • 01:16:870 (3) - I'd move this slider few grids down to avoid to be too close to this slider 01:17:202 (4) - , since right now it's kinda close to it o.o/ sure o3o/
  • 01:16:373 (1,4) - and this blinding kinda looking bad, how about moving the (4) a bit up to avoid touching each other wow didn't even notice =w= fixed~



Chris:
  • 00:05:103 (1) - same as i said about this on easy/normal mhm
  • 00:33:445 (2) - how about moving this slider few grids left to avoid being too close this slider 00:33:114 (1) - oo nice catch
  • 00:33:943 (4) - ^ but move this slider down a bit fixed from above
  • 00:35:766 (1) - reduce this slider to end on white tick, since i honestly don't think it follows anything on blue tick so i highly suggest you doing that
    extended slider o.o I might fix it if someone else points it out again lol
  • 00:39:578 (5) - you should move this slider few grids down, atm it's too close to this slider 00:39:247 (4) - okey
  • 01:02:119 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,1) - I see what you did there www =3=/
  • 01:25:489 (1) - how about moving this slider to x:128 y:308, just to fix the weird blinding between these three sliders i guess i'll blanket this cuz i did so in hard XD
  • 01:25:821 (2) - how about sticking this note under this 01:24:495 (2) - it's kinda looking weird..so yeah =w= yeah this was bothering me a bit too haha fixed :3



Good Job as always Gaia, I honestly taking liking to this map <3 <3

Good luck getting it ranked :3


about finishes, they're not in the music so I kept all my current finishes where they are and didnt add any >< I blame the music !!!!

Thanks so much sekai! <3
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