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Mika Kobayashi - BRE@TH//LESS

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igatih
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2015年3月1日 at 22:41:05

Artist: Mika Kobayashi
Title: BRE@TH//LESS
Source: ALDNOAH.ZERO(アルドノア・ゼロ)
Tags: anime Soundtrack aldnoah zero
BPM: 120
Filesize: 10644kb
Play Time: 04:00
Difficulties Available:
  1. ALDNOAH (3.65 stars, 716 notes)
  2. Hard(Speed UP) (3.23 stars, 529 notes)
  3. Hard (3.24 stars, 546 notes)
  4. Insane (3.91 stars, 735 notes)
  5. Normal (2.13 stars, 326 notes)
Download: Mika Kobayashi - BRE@TH//LESS
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Normal 100%
Hard 100%
Hard(S) 100%
Insane 100%
ALDNOAH 100%

at least...

Please advice(´;ω;`)

一応全部出来た・・・つもりです。
アドバイスを貰ったら修正を入れてる感じです(´◉◞౪◟◉)
ぎぶみーあどぶぁ~いすヽ(°▽、°)ノ
Topic Starter
igatih
Be missing something in order to become a Ranked, please tell me if such a place of rhythm funny m(_ _)m
chiddy

igatih wrote:

Be missing something in order to become a Ranked, please tell me if such a place of rhythm funny m(_ _)m
You will need an easy for it to be ranked, it needs Easy and a normal at minimum.

Normal -
00:51:000 (7) - Try moving this and the 2 notes after above the slider that it's leading to.
01:18:250 (1) - Maybe make this spinner longer for the newer players.
01:34:250 (1) - ^
02:54:250 (1) - ^
02:54:250 (1) - ^
03:06:000 (6) - Maybe repeat this slider one more time IMO it sounds better
03:10:250 (1) - Maybe make this spinner longer for the newer players.
03:42:250 (1) - ^

Sped up hard -
01:05:500 (5) - Please never do this, speed up the song and put a x1.7 slider speed, especially here, it feels so sudden and will catch players off guard.

Hard-
04:00:000 (2) - change the length of the slider 1 bar shorter so it fits properly

Insane Sped up -
Before I start, why did you use 1/16?
01:04:999 (4) - Please never do this, speed up the song and put a x1.7 slider speed, especially with the original slider speed 2.20...

Inane -
Before I start, 1/12...
01:28:000 (7) - to 01:28:750 (3) - I learnt from experience, never do this.
Topic Starter
igatih
Thank you very detailed advice!
English will try to fix it while translating Good luck because it is weak m (_ _) m
Topic Starter
igatih
Was the correct listen to advice.

Is there a place better to fix the other is good?
zerfuth
Heyoo o/, random mod here

Omg yes this song :3. Please get this ranked ^_^

General

You should have Kiai mode starting at these moments (you can figure out the end interval, your preference):

From 01:03:750 to ???
From 01:20:500 to ???
From 02:40:500 to ???
From 02:56:500 to ???
From 03:27:750 to ???


[Normal]

00:26:000 (6,7,8,9,1) - Not sure if pattern is adequate here because of how you need to pass from 7 to 8 but it's up to you. You could look into other patterns.

00:39:750 (5) - I'd put that slider a bit further from the previous circle to avoid confusion in the beat (push it to the right a bit)

00:54:750 (6,7,8,9) - You could make those circles a bit closer to the previous slider

02:01:000 (9) - Circle doesn't seems at equal distance of both sliders

02:13:500 (2,3,4) - Could try an arc pattern with the three circles instead of having the first two far from the third

04:00:000 (8) - I think this slider is too long, try making it shorter (like end it at 04:00:500)

[Hard (Speed Up)]

00:19:750 (9) - I think you could remove this note

01:13:500 (9) - You can position this slider differently so it looks better relative to the previous slider (move it to the right a bit maybe and/or rotate it slightly)

01:24:125 (3) - Make that circle closer to the previous slider or move the following slider further because the spacing doesn't really follow the beat pattern

01:26:125 (8) - ^same (for this one, you can simply move the following slider further)

02:42:250 (7) - ^same

02:54:250 (10) - You could make a new combo here

02:58:000 (5,6) - Those sliders aren't parallel, it's bugging me lol. Make them parallel! :P

03:29:375 (1) - Circle isn't at equal distance of both sliders

03:49:375 (6) - same problem as 01:24:125 (3)

03:51:375 (1) - ^same

[Hard]

00:46:125 (8) - Hmm... not sure if I'd place that circle here. Not intuative for reading the beat pattern

02:07:000 (1,2,3) - The triplet is a bit hidden by the previous circles, why not place it somewhere else?

02:19:750 (7,8) - Those two circles are too close if you compare that distance with the previous circles of the same combo

03:02:125 (7) - Wouldn't stack that circle on that slider, would put it closer to previous slider

03:46:250 (2) - Wouldn't stack this circle over the next circle, counter-intuative for reading beat pattern, would make it closer to previous slider

04:00:000 (2) - Same as in [Normal], feel like the slider is too long
Topic Starter
igatih
It was a very easy-to-understand advice thank you :)

Where you got the fixes and pointed out it tried fix!

It is a clumsy English of using the translation, but please forgive me

Please let me know if somewhere there is a mistake :?
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