Hey, your mod as requested.
EASYMiscellaneous - I recommend increasing the AR to 3, not only would it clean up the timing with the super short sliders but it'd make an even stat set as well.
00:46:702 - (1) I feel like this slider is a little bit high, I'd suggest shifting it down to match the height of the combo 2 slider.
NORMALMiscellaneous - Decrease OD to 5, I feel like an OD higher than the AR is quite harsh for lower difficulties
00:00:000 - (1-4) I feel like this combo is slightly off, Try moving the combo 2 circle upwards and moving both sliders 3 and 4 to the left.
00:05:035 - (4) Don't like seeing these hidden notes on easy/normal diffs. Seriously consider changing it.
General - Used alot of perfectly straight sliders, it's alright in itself but personally I think it makes for a boring map, consider changing them up.
HARD00:01:035 - (2) This circle is off at an awkward angle, try making some space so that the circle can fit better into the pattern.
00:06:035 - (2,3) This back and forth just feels and looks odd, and not very comfortable to play. I'd recommend increasing the spacing between 2 and 3 here.
00:13:702 - (2) Would likely look nicer if it were parallel with the combo 1 slider, Try it out.
00:14:702 - (1) I'd shift this slightly down and to the right.
00:32:869 - (5) Add an additional NC on this circle to help the maps readability.
00:38:369 - (4) Likely shouldn't be straight, I'd curve it to the left.
00:42:369 - (1-6) This pattern is particularly random, I'd shift the combo 4 note substantially right and slightly up to make the pattern easier to read and easier to play.
00:43:535 - (7) Add NC
00:50:869 - (4-7) This back and forth is weird, Consider remapping this pattern.
01:07:535 - (7) Add NC
ASPHYXIA'S EXPERT00:53:619 - (2-5) I think you should remove the 2 and 4 combo circles, honestly they just make the pattern a little more painful to hit.
MASTERMiscellaneous - Idk I felt like the HP is a tad high for a map like this, I'd suggest lowering it to 6.5
00:25:369 - (1) This slider should be moved a tad higher up.
00:52:035 - (1-8) This segment of the stream seems like it's a little sharp, maybe start it on a diagonal so it can flow more smoothly?
Well that's everything, I like all the diffs except for the Hard presently, So you've done a good job, Hope this helps and GL getting this ranked.